User talk:Acastillo55555/sandbox
Hi!
This is a very interesting topic and I like how the information chronologically flows. What didn't quite flow was the citation at the end of almost each sentence "(Kemper XXX)". You cited correctly in other places with the numbers super scripted. Also maybe you can include a sentence about why gentrification is bad or what the African American's lost when there neighborhoods were taken away from them right before their eyes. Lastly, what visual representation do you plan to use?
Zakiya Collier
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