User talk:Mzoch08/Lorrainne Sade Baskerville

Crgrober's Edits

@Crgrober I read your edits, which look good. I agree with Ella about the confusing pronouns in the third sentence of the Early Life section, and that there could be more info on the Cross-Dressing Law. Also, I think you could boost the notability of this area: "was involved in multiple panels and conferences." Put conferences first, as panels are part of conferences usually. Jbox19 (talk) 18:41, 9 November 2024 (UTC)

Mzoch08's Edits

@Mzoch08: I can't see your edits through the Dashboard. Did you make any changes? From the mainspace history page, it looks like you deleted a bunch of things on 11/7 when we were in class. Make sure you are logged in to both Dashboard and Wikipedia when you make changes so that I can easily see them. Jbox19 (talk) 23:54, 9 November 2024 (UTC)

Hi Professor Bokser, I added to the info box, a chunk of the early life section, all of the education section, and I'm working on adding a photo. I believe Callie might have added the early life and education sections to the article, but I have my separate draft that shows that part was my work if that's part of the issue. Mzoch08 (talk) 01:17, 12 November 2024 (UTC)