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'''Team 6 to do list'''

This is our to do list.
1.Index.

*History
*Programs
*2013 Programs
:Opening/Closing Program
:Overseas Invitational
:National Invitational
*Sponsor
*Place
*References

2.Purpose of article.

In Korea, there are many festivals. Among them, we chose festivial that is held in Ansan where our campus exists. And it was selected to representative festival of Gyeonggi-do. So we wanted to inform that what Ansan street arts festival is and because many foreigner participates in this festival, we wanted to explain festival in detail.

3. How it will be structured?

We will reference news that content about Ansan street arts festival. Also, searching in internet and make content in our own words.

4. Role sharing

*Choi Hyun Hee has responsible for '''intro part & 4.Place'''
*Ryu Jin su has responsible for '''1.History'''
*BohyunLee has responsible for '''2.Programs & 3. Sponsor'''



:The overall plan looks reasonable, but you need to provide a list of references you will use. The current article has many references, but they seem to be more external links then actual references. History has no references at all. Lot of references seem of poor reliability (blogs, business promotional pages, and such). --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]&#124;[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 04:01, 19 April 2013 (UTC)

WOW! l love your article! It contained lots of information already. 
By the way, I thinks every single year this festival have held in Ansan. Am i right, each festival has different programs followed participate team.
so there are need to re-range 'program section' according to year. It must be a hard work i think, but when you use the table which is in edit page.
it will help and improve your article more than now!  way to go!!  <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Byung do jung|Byung do jung]] ([[User talk:Byung do jung|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Byung do jung|contribs]]) 14:41, 20 April 2013 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

I impressed about this article. This article have many information. And also this article have some image. Uploading image is very feel fresh. Above all, This article`s contents are very various. And table of contents is looks good. And have many reference is making article trustworthy. But if some festivals have not explain. So that your group supplement this part, It will be more useful. [[User:HaeYoon|HaeYoon]] ([[User talk:HaeYoon|talk]]) 10:15, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

This page mostly contains 2013 ansan street arts festivals. doesn't it? so i expected every information in past(2012,2011.....). Because i have happy memory of 2012 festival and 2009 festival. ^o^ so i just wanted remind that memory. i suggest your team add '2013'word on page's title. This is minor suggestion.--[[User:Minzi Yuk|Minzi Yuk]] ([[User talk:Minzi Yuk|talk]]) 13:19, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

Since it has lots of references, I felt this article is reliable. I think you all are doing well on this article.
By the way, it would be much better if you uploaded higher quality of picture ;)  <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:GaHee Park|GaHee Park]] ([[User talk:GaHee Park|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/GaHee Park|contribs]]) 14:20, 21 April 2013 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

Ansan street arts festival will be held from 3 May to 5 May. In my opinion, it is good idea that you examine the festival situation at first hand.
[[User:Hyegyeong Yun|Hyegyeong Yun]] ([[User talk:Hyegyeong Yun|talk]])Hyegyeong Yun 15:27, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

I've just looked your group article for the first time! It really contains a lot of information so far! What if I want to know more about the festival by questioning and asking. It will be but the article doesn't have a contact number linked to the festivals.It will be more attractive for people with an contact number. Sang Kuk Son 17:36, 21 April 2013 (UTC)  <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Luvepoli|Luvepoli]] ([[User talk:Luvepoli|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Luvepoli|contribs]]) </span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

wow i impressed about your group article. In my opinion, your group project give us very useful information. But i have suggestion. i want to your group must upload many images about Ansan street arts festival. If your group done, your group's project is more powerful than before. 
Good luck :)

== Infobox ==

Very nice work so far.  Might I recommend an infobox with the name in Hangul, Hanja, and romanizations? Please tell me if you have any questions. <span style="font-weight:bold; text-shadow:gray 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em; class=texhtml">[[User:Rickinasia|₪Rick]]<small>n</small>[[User talk:Rickinasia|Asia₪]]</span> 16:50, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

== Review ==

I felt proud of myself creating new article in wikipedia. I wanted to inform that in Ansan, where my school exists, there is fantastic festival. And also wanted to explain it to other foreigners in english. Because many foreigners have enjoyed Ansan street arts festival everyear since 2005. 
For informing to other people, We explained definition, history, programs, sponsors and place of Ansan street arts festival. It has been held since 2005 in Ansan Cultural Plaza. Not only artists but also citizen can participate in this festival as performers. Time goes by, It flourished for Gyeonggi-do festival, and increased visiters and artists who participate in festival. So now, there are many sponsors who help festival develop and in 3 May 2013. 
I can understand why many wikipedian couldn't leave wikipedia because it made me achieved. Comparing with other group, range of our group subject is narrow. Because other group created about Korea, but we wrote Ansan in Korea. But it would be concrete and can give many information to people who don't know Ansan in Korea. I want to create other great article in wikipedia next time.  <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Choi Hyun Hee|Choi Hyun Hee]] ([[User talk:Choi Hyun Hee|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Choi Hyun Hee|contribs]]) 08:20, 23 April 2013 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Summary about this article and Review ==

*'''Ansan street arts festival''' is international festival that many artist of various nation  participate. '''Ansan Street Arts Festival''', on every May since 2005 , is street festival that domestic and foreign best artists perform. This festival aims at ‘New cultural discovery at street’, changes daily space into artistic space and mix with the crowd. This festival show variety of genres such as circus, puppet show, fireworks and many artists interact with a lot of people, 

*I want to let people know that this festival is very interesting and fantastic. Other articles offer reliable reference or useful contexts.Also, theirs have a good idea which has Korean life. Thus, we strive to add images which show clearly festival and dependable reference, correct text, and deal with talk page's comment. For these effort, we think this article might show '''Ansan street arts festival''' is wonderful festival.--[[User:Bohyunlee|Bohyunlee]] ([[User talk:Bohyunlee|talk]]) 08:54, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

== Summary about this article and Review ==

I created an article in Wikipedia for the first time. It was interesting experience. Before taking this class for Wiki, I didn't know that I'm also able to make articles freely even if wrong works are deleted. But now, I feel proud that the article generated by me is going to help some people to get any information. 'Ansan street arts festival', the article made this time will provide useful information for foreigner and local residents who want to go to the festival. Many people join this festival as a performer or visitor. In there, variety shows of variety countries spread. Fundamentally the article has contents about brief description, history of this festival, yearly programs, sponsor and site. It was hard to write and research for Ansan street arts festival and I worried it is right or not. I think we have to try to add more information, references and refine to our work.--[[User:JinsuRyu|JinsuRyu]] ([[User talk:JinsuRyu|talk]]) 12:21, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

== Instructor review ==

The article suffers from minor grammar issues, which you'll need to address. There are also style issues; for example lead has out of place bullet points (Introduction to Video, reference) which are plain confusing.

The article has a good amount of content, with a number references, but no [[WP:BTW|interwikilinks]]. You will need to add those.

Majority of images were plagiarized/copyright violations and have been removed. You should try to obtain free images for use.

Intro and History section looks like good starts, but the quality of next sections deteriorates rapidly. Programs section is unreferenced. Most of the 2013 is unreferenced, and is probably irrelevant. Wikipedia is not a place to repeat a program of the event. It should describe its reception in reliable, third-party sources. Sponsor section is just a list; it probably should be rewritten as a sentence and incorporated later into the article. Site section is unreferenced.

References 1-4. 7, 8 and 10 look good. 5 is Youtube and as such not acceptable (vidoes are not good references). 6 needs translation. 6 and 10 need links. 11 to 18 are just links to organizational websites, not confirming anything, and as such,  not really acceptable.

A really nice start, but you need to make major improvements. Keep it up! --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]&#124;[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 05:40, 24 April 2013 (UTC)
:You haven't finished starting the peer review. You still need to chose category (arts), and fill in the request. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]&#124;[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 05:17, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
::I have not seen any significant editing here since early May. This article needs all the issues raised above addressed! --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]&#124;[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 06:42, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

== Going on right now ==

I hope you guys know that the festival is going on right now, and you are planning to take pictures (or have already done so). --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]&#124;[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 11:35, 3 May 2013 (UTC)

== Attendance ==

Article lists 70,000 attendees in 2005 in the opening paragraph and then the number changes to 10 million for 2005 and 15 million during 2006 without any citation. [[User:Ryanunderdown|Ryan Underdown]]  <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|undated]] comment added 17:54, 4 February 2014 (UTC)</span><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->