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4 December 2021

  • curprev 08:5808:58, 4 December 2021 Vega93x talk contribs 3,477 bytes +3,477 ←Created page with 'Hi AleAlejandroAleAlejandro! Here's my peer review for you: === Lead === * <u>Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?</u> - Yes, you included a clear and concise lead, and it describes the article's topic well. To make the wording even clearer, you might change "the effects of them on..." to "their effects on." === Content === * <u>Is the content added relevant to the topic?</u> - Yes, yo...' Tag: Visual edit
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