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* Add a [[WP:DATECOMMA]] after "April 13, 1961". |
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* "William Fisher, a banker, and mother, Jan Howell" – reword |
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* Remove the comma after "in California". |
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* "As of April 2003, FBI had" {{right arrow}} "By April 2003, the FBI had" |
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* "as as firefighter" {{right arrow}} "as a firefighter" |
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* Archive sources (you can use [https://iabot.toolforge.org/index.php?page=runbotsingle this]). |
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* References #12 and #13 should be properly cited. |
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* That's it. Ping when done. [[User:Some Dude From North Carolina|Some Dude From North Carolina]] ([[User talk:Some Dude From North Carolina|talk]]) 13:24, 23 July 2021 (UTC) |
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::Hello {{U|Some Dude From North Carolina}}. I've finished with most of this. I have added the tool to archive sources from my account, but I don't know how to use it. Is there a need for sources to be archived? I don't think it's required. Everything else is done. [[User:Display name 99|Display name 99]] ([[User talk:Display name 99|talk]]) 14:42, 23 July 2021 (UTC) |
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:50, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
- Add a WP:DATECOMMA after "April 13, 1961".
- "William Fisher, a banker, and mother, Jan Howell" – reword
- Remove the comma after "in California".
- "As of April 2003, FBI had" → "By April 2003, the FBI had"
- "as as firefighter" → "as a firefighter"
- Archive sources (you can use this).
- References #12 and #13 should be properly cited.
- That's it. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:24, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
- Hello Some Dude From North Carolina. I've finished with most of this. I have added the tool to archive sources from my account, but I don't know how to use it. Is there a need for sources to be archived? I don't think it's required. Everything else is done. Display name 99 (talk) 14:42, 23 July 2021 (UTC)