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:''The following is an archived discussion of a [[Wikipedia:Featured article review|featured article review]]. <span style="color:red">'''Please do not modify it.'''</span> Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at [[Wikipedia talk:Featured article review]]). No further edits should be made to this page.'' |
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*The out-of-universe importance of the term 'spoo' is not convincingly demonstrated. Again, forum posts and the like are used. Comes close to [[WP:NEO|neologism]] usage tracking with stuff like 'first recorded use on Usenet' and 'mentioned in Frank Zappa's biography'. |
*The out-of-universe importance of the term 'spoo' is not convincingly demonstrated. Again, forum posts and the like are used. Comes close to [[WP:NEO|neologism]] usage tracking with stuff like 'first recorded use on Usenet' and 'mentioned in Frank Zappa's biography'. |
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See also [[Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Spoo]] and [[Wikipedia:Featured article removal candidates/Spoo]] |
See also [[Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Spoo/archive1]] and [[Wikipedia:Featured article removal candidates/Spoo]] |
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--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 12:00, 25 July 2007 (UTC) |
--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 12:00, 25 July 2007 (UTC) |
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:::::::Isn't this [[special pleading]]? If JK Rowling revealed a whimsical backstory about [[Butterbeer]] on some fan forum, would it admissable as a source for a featured article? I very much doubt it.--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 18:10, 26 July 2007 (UTC) |
:::::::Isn't this [[special pleading]]? If JK Rowling revealed a whimsical backstory about [[Butterbeer]] on some fan forum, would it admissable as a source for a featured article? I very much doubt it.--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 18:10, 26 July 2007 (UTC) |
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::::::::If you were certain that it really was JK Rowling, why not? I do not understand why you are arguing so hard against this article's FA status. You are talking in circles. The USENET references are legit. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] <sup>[[User talk:Fang Aili|< |
::::::::If you were certain that it really was JK Rowling, why not? I do not understand why you are arguing so hard against this article's FA status. You are talking in circles. The USENET references are legit. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] <sup>[[User talk:Fang Aili|<span style="color:green;">talk</span>]]</sup> 18:16, 26 July 2007 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Because (despite the claims above) forums posts clearly made in jest are not an authoritative source of a canonical 'information'. Are we going to start taking every gag cracked by a creator of fiction and turn it into the backbone of a featured article?--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 20:21, 26 July 2007 (UTC) |
:::::::::Because (despite the claims above) forums posts clearly made in jest are not an authoritative source of a canonical 'information'. Are we going to start taking every gag cracked by a creator of fiction and turn it into the backbone of a featured article?--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 20:21, 26 July 2007 (UTC) |
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How do we know it was the subject of much talk online? There aren't any sources, just usage tracking.--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 16:54, 25 July 2007 (UTC) |
How do we know it was the subject of much talk online? There aren't any sources, just usage tracking.--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 16:54, 25 July 2007 (UTC) |
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*<s>'''Keep featured'''</s>'''Comment'''. I do not see a basis for the nominator's assertions. I have a few suggestions for improvement, however: I'd like to see a few inline citations in the intro, and I'd like to know more about why "Stock and bond day traders have begun to use spoo in reference to S&P 500 futures." There's just that one line about it, as well as the mention in the intro, but nothing else. Overall, I love this article and I get a little thrill every time I remember it's featured and was a featured article of the day. Thanks for all your hard work on it, Jeffrey O. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] <sup>[[User talk:Fang Aili|< |
*<s>'''Keep featured'''</s>'''Comment'''. I do not see a basis for the nominator's assertions. I have a few suggestions for improvement, however: I'd like to see a few inline citations in the intro, and I'd like to know more about why "Stock and bond day traders have begun to use spoo in reference to S&P 500 futures." There's just that one line about it, as well as the mention in the intro, but nothing else. Overall, I love this article and I get a little thrill every time I remember it's featured and was a featured article of the day. Thanks for all your hard work on it, Jeffrey O. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] <sup>[[User talk:Fang Aili|<span style="color:green;">talk</span>]]</sup> 18:00, 25 July 2007 (UTC) |
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{{color|red|Keep or Remove are not declared during article review;}} please see the instructions at [[WP:FAR]]. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy< |
{{color|red|Keep or Remove are not declared during article review;}} please see the instructions at [[WP:FAR]]. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<span style="color:green;">Georgia</span>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 13:18, 27 July 2007 (UTC) |
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:What instructions? I don't see anything about "how to comment" on that page. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] <sup>[[User talk:Fang Aili|< |
:What instructions? I don't see anything about "how to comment" on that page. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] <sup>[[User talk:Fang Aili|<span style="color:green;">talk</span>]]</sup> 13:28, 27 July 2007 (UTC) |
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::Oh nevermind, it's irrelevent. My views are clear. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] <sup>[[User talk:Fang Aili|< |
::Oh nevermind, it's irrelevent. My views are clear. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] <sup>[[User talk:Fang Aili|<span style="color:green;">talk</span>]]</sup> 13:31, 27 July 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''Comment''' The fair use rationales for the non-free images are terrible. They don't actually explain ''why'' the images can be used, they just claim that the images are being used appropriately. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 23:15, 29 July 2007 (UTC) |
*'''Comment''' The fair use rationales for the non-free images are terrible. They don't actually explain ''why'' the images can be used, they just claim that the images are being used appropriately. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 23:15, 29 July 2007 (UTC) |
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*<s>'''Keep'''</s>'''Comment''' - This one has been reviewed and not much has changed since then or the nomination. [[User:Dalf|Dalf]] | [[User talk:Dalf|Talk]] 11:52, 31 July 2007 (UTC) |
*<s>'''Keep'''</s>'''Comment''' - This one has been reviewed and not much has changed since then or the nomination. [[User:Dalf|Dalf]] | [[User talk:Dalf|Talk]] 11:52, 31 July 2007 (UTC) |
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{{color|red|Keep or Remove are not declared during article review;}} please see the instructions at [[WP:FAR]]. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy< |
{{color|red|Keep or Remove are not declared during article review;}} please see the instructions at [[WP:FAR]]. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<span style="color:green;">Georgia</span>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 14:06, 2 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*Note: Although he was in support of the article, Qp10qp did have concerns with the use of raw URLs in the somewhat untidy reference formatting. I have fixed that issue, and the references look much better. Thanks for the suggestion! --[[User talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] 12:36, 31 July 2007 (UTC) |
*Note: Although he was in support of the article, Qp10qp did have concerns with the use of raw URLs in the somewhat untidy reference formatting. I have fixed that issue, and the references look much better. Thanks for the suggestion! --[[User talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] 12:36, 31 July 2007 (UTC) |
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I think people are happy with this. Moving it down to get straight kp or rm comments. [[User:Marskell|Marskell]] 08:38, 11 August 2007 (UTC) |
I think people are happy with this. Moving it down to get straight kp or rm comments. [[User:Marskell|Marskell]] 08:38, 11 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*<s>Cleanup needed. There are external jumps in the text; there's a strange section called "Additional references" which is not a standard appendix (see [[WP:LAYOUT]]) and appears to be a listy part of the article that should be incorporated as prose,</s> and the citations aren't formatted (see [[WP:CITE/ES]]). <s>Some of the section headings might benefit from [[WP:MSH]] tweaking to avoid repeat words. There's also a 425px image in the lead (infoboxes are capped, I think, at 300px; see [[WP:MOS#Images]] on image size). There is incorrect use of [[WP:DASH|dashes]] and [[WP:HYPHEN|hyphens]] throughout. Common words (like [[cookbook]]) should be delinked per [[WP:MOSLINK]], [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Quotes are incorrectly italicized, see [[WP:ITALICS]].</s> [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy< |
*<s>Cleanup needed. There are external jumps in the text; there's a strange section called "Additional references" which is not a standard appendix (see [[WP:LAYOUT]]) and appears to be a listy part of the article that should be incorporated as prose,</s> and the citations aren't formatted (see [[WP:CITE/ES]]). <s>Some of the section headings might benefit from [[WP:MSH]] tweaking to avoid repeat words. There's also a 425px image in the lead (infoboxes are capped, I think, at 300px; see [[WP:MOS#Images]] on image size). There is incorrect use of [[WP:DASH|dashes]] and [[WP:HYPHEN|hyphens]] throughout. Common words (like [[cookbook]]) should be delinked per [[WP:MOSLINK]], [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Quotes are incorrectly italicized, see [[WP:ITALICS]].</s> [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<span style="color:green;">Georgia</span>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 17:04, 11 August 2007 (UTC) |
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:I've prose-ified the horribly named "Additional References" section, reduced the lead image size to 300px, de-italicized the JMS quote, de-linked common words, and cut down one of the headers. [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Spoo&diff=150636365&oldid=148347588 Diff]. As far as dash/hyphen issue, I haven't fixed that only because WP:DASH confuses the hell out of me, and I'd appreciate some assistance from someone familiar with proper hyphenation. --[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] - ''[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson/Shazaam|Shazaam!]]'' - [[User_Talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|<*>]] 20:11, 11 August 2007 (UTC) |
:I've prose-ified the horribly named "Additional References" section, reduced the lead image size to 300px, de-italicized the JMS quote, de-linked common words, and cut down one of the headers. [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Spoo&diff=150636365&oldid=148347588 Diff]. As far as dash/hyphen issue, I haven't fixed that only because WP:DASH confuses the hell out of me, and I'd appreciate some assistance from someone familiar with proper hyphenation. --[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] - ''[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson/Shazaam|Shazaam!]]'' - [[User_Talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|<*>]] 20:11, 11 August 2007 (UTC) |
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::I'll do some dash and ref cleanup to help get you started. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy< |
::I'll do some dash and ref cleanup to help get you started. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<span style="color:green;">Georgia</span>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 02:54, 12 August 2007 (UTC) |
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:::I removed the external jump; it was a dead link, so that text may need to be modified. I left an inline query. I left several other inline queries where dates and other info didn't seem to match the source. I fixed the dashes. I left sample edits of the kind of info missing on citations. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy< |
:::I removed the external jump; it was a dead link, so that text may need to be modified. I left an inline query. I left several other inline queries where dates and other info didn't seem to match the source. I fixed the dashes. I left sample edits of the kind of info missing on citations. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<span style="color:green;">Georgia</span>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 03:18, 12 August 2007 (UTC) |
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::::Thanks for your help. I applied the fixes noted, verified the remaining external links, and hid the note on computer programming (as the company appears to no longer produce the software). [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Spoo&diff=150704467&oldid=150698900 Diff]. --[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] - ''[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson/Shazaam|Shazaam!]]'' - [[User_Talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|<*>]] 04:06, 12 August 2007 (UTC) |
::::Thanks for your help. I applied the fixes noted, verified the remaining external links, and hid the note on computer programming (as the company appears to no longer produce the software). [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Spoo&diff=150704467&oldid=150698900 Diff]. --[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] - ''[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson/Shazaam|Shazaam!]]'' - [[User_Talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|<*>]] 04:06, 12 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*As for the Babylon 5 component, I ask editors to consider whether an article relying heavily on Internet posts would be featured today. I cannot imagine a fictional food from [[RuneScape]] or [[Naruto]] being featured on the back of Internet posts from the creators.--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 09:18, 12 August 2007 (UTC) |
*As for the Babylon 5 component, I ask editors to consider whether an article relying heavily on Internet posts would be featured today. I cannot imagine a fictional food from [[RuneScape]] or [[Naruto]] being featured on the back of Internet posts from the creators.--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 09:18, 12 August 2007 (UTC) |
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**I cannot imagine that this article, with the sourcing it uses, could be featured today. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy< |
**I cannot imagine that this article, with the sourcing it uses, could be featured today. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<span style="color:green;">Georgia</span>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 15:38, 12 August 2007 (UTC) |
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**Comparing Straczynski's involvement in the ''Babylon 5'' franchise both in an executive role & his nearly unprecedented creative control to the creators of nearly any other franchise is like comparing apples and caterpillars. --[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] - ''[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson/Shazaam|Shazaam!]]'' - [[User_Talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|<*>]] 17:42, 12 August 2007 (UTC) |
**Comparing Straczynski's involvement in the ''Babylon 5'' franchise both in an executive role & his nearly unprecedented creative control to the creators of nearly any other franchise is like comparing apples and caterpillars. --[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] - ''[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson/Shazaam|Shazaam!]]'' - [[User_Talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|<*>]] 17:42, 12 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''Keep featured.''' Like I said before. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] <sup>[[User talk:Fang Aili|< |
*'''Keep featured.''' Like I said before. --[[User:Fang Aili|Fang Aili]] <sup>[[User talk:Fang Aili|<span style="color:green;">talk</span>]]</sup> 01:46, 13 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''Keep''' I have no problem with either reference quality or focus. [[User:DrKiernan|DrKiernan]] 09:21, 13 August 2007 (UTC) |
*'''Keep''' I have no problem with either reference quality or focus. [[User:DrKiernan|DrKiernan]] 09:21, 13 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''Comment''', this paper needs citation info (like title, publisher, date etc.) " ... and cited by linguist [[Pamela Munro]] in a paper on 1980s collegiate slang at [[UCLA]]."{{Fact|date=August 2007}} [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy< |
*'''Comment''', this paper needs citation info (like title, publisher, date etc.) " ... and cited by linguist [[Pamela Munro]] in a paper on 1980s collegiate slang at [[UCLA]]."{{Fact|date=August 2007}} [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<span style="color:green;">Georgia</span>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 14:10, 13 August 2007 (UTC) |
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**Fixed. The cite was [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=User_talk%3AJeffrey_O._Gustafson&diff=46421254&oldid=46401462 left on my talk page] ages ago, so I do not know why neither myself or the editor providing the fact added it to the article. --[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] - ''[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson/Shazaam|Shazaam!]]'' - [[User_Talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|<*>]] 16:57, 13 August 2007 (UTC) |
**Fixed. The cite was [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=User_talk%3AJeffrey_O._Gustafson&diff=46421254&oldid=46401462 left on my talk page] ages ago, so I do not know why neither myself or the editor providing the fact added it to the article. --[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] - ''[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson/Shazaam|Shazaam!]]'' - [[User_Talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|<*>]] 16:57, 13 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''Keep''' I do not see any compelling reason to remove this one. Not every FA has to be of earth shattering importance. [[User:Dalf|Dalf]] | [[User talk:Dalf|Talk]] 03:56, 14 August 2007 (UTC) |
*'''Keep''' I do not see any compelling reason to remove this one. Not every FA has to be of earth shattering importance. [[User:Dalf|Dalf]] | [[User talk:Dalf|Talk]] 03:56, 14 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''Remove'''. The article fails [[WP:FICTION]] miserably; it does not use one secondary source independent of the subject (except when discussing the ''spoo'' "separate from its fictional meaning", which doesn't even belong in this article). [[Bulbasaur]] was defeatured because it has similar sourcing problems. Some particular comments: The article calls one of the USENET postings "classic and hilarious"; it is up to reliable secondary sources to make that judgment. The article says that many fans have tried to make spoo, and even discusses common methods for making spoo, but all the reference says is that ''one'' fan presented Straczynski one dish they christened spoo. The "Commodity" section offers two interpretations—"mistake" or "intentional"—but only the "intentional" interpretation is sourced. The source for the "intentional" interpretation is a fan site, but we can ignore that for now because the site doesn't even claim that the 10-15 discrepancy was Straczynski's intention to begin with. The "Real-world etymology of the word" section is made up of trivia, most of which is irrelevant to ''Babylon 5''. Surveying internet message boards and search engines to draw conclusions about word usage is original research. Keep in mind that everything in this article may be true, but Wikipedia is based on verifiability through reliable sources, not truth. [[User:Punctured Bicycle|Punctured Bicycle]] 10:13, 21 August 2007 (UTC) |
*'''Remove'''. The article fails [[WP:FICTION]] miserably; it does not use one secondary source independent of the subject (except when discussing the ''spoo'' "separate from its fictional meaning", which doesn't even belong in this article). [[Bulbasaur]] was defeatured because it has similar sourcing problems. Some particular comments: The article calls one of the USENET postings "classic and hilarious"; it is up to reliable secondary sources to make that judgment. The article says that many fans have tried to make spoo, and even discusses common methods for making spoo, but all the reference says is that ''one'' fan presented Straczynski one dish they christened spoo. The "Commodity" section offers two interpretations—"mistake" or "intentional"—but only the "intentional" interpretation is sourced. The source for the "intentional" interpretation is a fan site, but we can ignore that for now because the site doesn't even claim that the 10-15 discrepancy was Straczynski's intention to begin with. The "Real-world etymology of the word" section is made up of trivia, most of which is irrelevant to ''Babylon 5''. Surveying internet message boards and search engines to draw conclusions about word usage is original research. Keep in mind that everything in this article may be true, but Wikipedia is based on verifiability through reliable sources, not truth. [[User:Punctured Bicycle|Punctured Bicycle]] 10:13, 21 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''Remove''', per Punctured Bicycle. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy< |
*'''Remove''', per Punctured Bicycle. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<span style="color:green;">Georgia</span>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 01:00, 23 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''Keep Featured''', the article is well written, well sourced, well supported and makes for a fine FA. Jeffrey O Gustafson is right on the mark about Straczynski, the fans, and the release of information on the show through the internet and other fan outlets, including information on spoo. Although I know it’s not WP:V from a WP:RS, I remember Spoo very well from my days working on the trading floor for a Wall Street Investment bank, and there were a number of traders who were B5 fans that enjoyed the B5/Spoo connection. Several even showed up at office parties dressed as a B5 character with plates of Spoo…especially around Halloween. [[User:Dreadstar|Dreadstar]] <small>[[User talk:Dreadstar|<span class="Unicode">†</span>]]</small> 01:47, 23 August 2007 (UTC) |
*'''Keep Featured''', the article is well written, well sourced, well supported and makes for a fine FA. Jeffrey O Gustafson is right on the mark about Straczynski, the fans, and the release of information on the show through the internet and other fan outlets, including information on spoo. Although I know it’s not WP:V from a WP:RS, I remember Spoo very well from my days working on the trading floor for a Wall Street Investment bank, and there were a number of traders who were B5 fans that enjoyed the B5/Spoo connection. Several even showed up at office parties dressed as a B5 character with plates of Spoo…especially around Halloween. [[User:Dreadstar|Dreadstar]] <small>[[User talk:Dreadstar|<span class="Unicode">†</span>]]</small> 01:47, 23 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''Remove''' as per Nydas and Punctured Bicycle. I'm far from convinced that semi-humourous Usenet posts, even by the sainted JMS, can be considered as reliable sources. Virtually the entire "Real-world etymology" section is irrelevant - a grab-bag of unrelated uses of a word similar to Spoo. There's very little in the article to demonstrate the out-of-universe importance of the topic. --[[User:OpenToppedBus|OpenToppedBus]] - [[User talk:OpenToppedBus|Talk to the driver]] 09:59, 24 August 2007 (UTC) |
*'''Remove''' as per Nydas and Punctured Bicycle. I'm far from convinced that semi-humourous Usenet posts, even by the sainted JMS, can be considered as reliable sources. Virtually the entire "Real-world etymology" section is irrelevant - a grab-bag of unrelated uses of a word similar to Spoo. There's very little in the article to demonstrate the out-of-universe importance of the topic. --[[User:OpenToppedBus|OpenToppedBus]] - [[User talk:OpenToppedBus|Talk to the driver]] 09:59, 24 August 2007 (UTC) |
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::::::That is correct, to an extent. As noted above, the relationship between the creator (JMS) and the property (owned by Warner Bros) is unique. Straczynski is the keeper of the canon, in part because he says so, and in part because the fans will not except anything else. In an unrelated example to that effect, Mongoose, a book/comic/game publishing company specializing in licenses for pre-existing properties, obtained publishing rights for ''Babylon 5''. Warner Bros said it was "official" (which is technically correct). Mongoose trumpeted it as official.... and canon, claiming it was JMS approved. JMS said it was not canon, and that he was explicitly against it. The backlash from fans was so great that Mongoose more or less ''abandoned the license''. JMS said, in essence, that anything not by him, or produced without his approval and oversight, is nothing more than fan fiction, regardless if it is officially licensed. "JMS says so" is the policy of B5 canon, and the fans wouldn't accept anything less. --[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] - ''[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson/Shazaam|Shazaam!]]'' - [[User_Talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|<*>]] 09:46, 1 September 2007 (UTC) |
::::::That is correct, to an extent. As noted above, the relationship between the creator (JMS) and the property (owned by Warner Bros) is unique. Straczynski is the keeper of the canon, in part because he says so, and in part because the fans will not except anything else. In an unrelated example to that effect, Mongoose, a book/comic/game publishing company specializing in licenses for pre-existing properties, obtained publishing rights for ''Babylon 5''. Warner Bros said it was "official" (which is technically correct). Mongoose trumpeted it as official.... and canon, claiming it was JMS approved. JMS said it was not canon, and that he was explicitly against it. The backlash from fans was so great that Mongoose more or less ''abandoned the license''. JMS said, in essence, that anything not by him, or produced without his approval and oversight, is nothing more than fan fiction, regardless if it is officially licensed. "JMS says so" is the policy of B5 canon, and the fans wouldn't accept anything less. --[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|Jeffrey O. Gustafson]] - ''[[User:Jeffrey O. Gustafson/Shazaam|Shazaam!]]'' - [[User_Talk:Jeffrey O. Gustafson|<*>]] 09:46, 1 September 2007 (UTC) |
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:::::::Sounds like this article has POV problems as well. Since when was the content of articles dictated by fan concepts like 'keeper of the canon'?--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 18:03, 1 September 2007 (UTC) |
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::::::::While it's vaguely touching to know that you're this unrelentingly dense in all debates you get involved in, questions of canonicity are pretty standard, at least, in Doctor Who and Star Trek articles. Though in the current version, I'm pretty sure there are no canon discussions. [[User:Phil Sandifer|Phil Sandifer]] 18:56, 1 September 2007 (UTC) |
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:::::::::It would be better to let the reader to judge for themselves.--<strong>[[User:Nydas|Nydas]]</strong>[[User talk:Nydas|<sup>(Talk)</sup>]] 20:08, 1 September 2007 (UTC) |
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*Straczynski's USENET postings are reliable enough. The main problem is that the article '''lacks secondary sources, independent of the subject, that assert the importance of the subject.''' I want to know why ''Babylon 5''<nowiki>'</nowiki>s spoo is important outside of the mere '''6 out of 110''' episodes of ''Babylon 5'' it appeared in, and outside of J. Michael Straczynski's personal recollections. The article lacks '''substantial''' real world content—critical and popular reception, development, cultural impact, etc. Any subject deserving an article deserves a featured article, but this subject doesn't appear to deserve a full article. [[User:Punctured Bicycle|Punctured Bicycle]] 01:00, 31 August 2007 (UTC) |
*Straczynski's USENET postings are reliable enough. The main problem is that the article '''lacks secondary sources, independent of the subject, that assert the importance of the subject.''' I want to know why ''Babylon 5''<nowiki>'</nowiki>s spoo is important outside of the mere '''6 out of 110''' episodes of ''Babylon 5'' it appeared in, and outside of J. Michael Straczynski's personal recollections. The article lacks '''substantial''' real world content—critical and popular reception, development, cultural impact, etc. Any subject deserving an article deserves a featured article, but this subject doesn't appear to deserve a full article. [[User:Punctured Bicycle|Punctured Bicycle]] 01:00, 31 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''Remove''' Per 1b and 4. Article omits the necessary real world information and focuses too much on the fictional aspects. I would also note that there is potentially a strong case against this article if it were taken to AFD. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 01:33, 31 August 2007 (UTC) |
*'''Remove''' Per 1b and 4. Article omits the necessary real world information and focuses too much on the fictional aspects. I would also note that there is potentially a strong case against this article if it were taken to AFD. [[User:Jay32183|Jay32183]] 01:33, 31 August 2007 (UTC) |
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*'''More Comment''' I've made a pass at revising the article - renaming two sections and refocusing them to foreground the out-of-universe issues over plot trivia, and re-ordered another section so that it flows more chronologically. A bit of plot detail got lost, but I think the article still captures the silliness of spoo while foregrounding its out-of-universe material. I will note, I don't particularly think this was a vital revision, but it did mildly improve the article. [[User:Phil Sandifer|Phil Sandifer]] 15:19, 31 August 2007 (UTC) |
*'''More Comment''' I've made a pass at revising the article - renaming two sections and refocusing them to foreground the out-of-universe issues over plot trivia, and re-ordered another section so that it flows more chronologically. A bit of plot detail got lost, but I think the article still captures the silliness of spoo while foregrounding its out-of-universe material. I will note, I don't particularly think this was a vital revision, but it did mildly improve the article. [[User:Phil Sandifer|Phil Sandifer]] 15:19, 31 August 2007 (UTC) |
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