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*Why is Mr. Bangladesh linked two times in the same sentence? Also, how are we supposed to refer to him? Is Mr. used every time in reliable sources, or do they shorten to Bangladesh?
*Why is Mr. Bangladesh linked two times in the same sentence? Also, how are we supposed to refer to him? Is Mr. used every time in reliable sources, or do they shorten to Bangladesh?
*: His production name is Mr. Bangladesh, regardless of how critics refer to him. Unlinked Crawford. [[User:Calvin999|<font color ="blue" face= "Aharoni">'''Aaron '''</font>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><font color="red">'''You '''</font><font color="red">'''Da '''</font><font color="red">'''One'''</font></sup>]]
*: His production name is Mr. Bangladesh, regardless of how critics refer to him. Unlinked Crawford. [[User:Calvin999|<span style="color:blue; font-family:Aharoni;">'''Aaron '''</span>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><span style="color:red;">'''You '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''Da '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''One'''</span></sup>]]
*I'd suggest splitting the lede into two paragraphs, one for production and one for the song and reception.
*I'd suggest splitting the lede into two paragraphs, one for production and one for the song and reception.
*: Done. [[User:Calvin999|<font color ="blue" face= "Aharoni">'''Aaron '''</font>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><font color="red">'''You '''</font><font color="red">'''Da '''</font><font color="red">'''One'''</font></sup>]]
*: Done. [[User:Calvin999|<span style="color:blue; font-family:Aharoni;">'''Aaron '''</span>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><span style="color:red;">'''You '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''Da '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''One'''</span></sup>]]


;Background and conception
;Background and conception
*Once again, why is Mr. Bangladesh linked twice?
*Once again, why is Mr. Bangladesh linked twice?
*: Unlinked Crawford. [[User:Calvin999|<font color ="blue" face= "Aharoni">'''Aaron '''</font>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><font color="red">'''You '''</font><font color="red">'''Da '''</font><font color="red">'''One'''</font></sup>]]
*: Unlinked Crawford. [[User:Calvin999|<span style="color:blue; font-family:Aharoni;">'''Aaron '''</span>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><span style="color:red;">'''You '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''Da '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''One'''</span></sup>]]


;2b
;2b
*What makes DJ Booth a reliable source? Cultureblues?
*What makes DJ Booth a reliable source? Cultureblues?
*: DJ Booth is perfectly reliable for GA. The critic, Nathan, has a BA in Journalism and Creative Writing. DJ Booth is not reliable for FA, which this article will not become. [[User:Calvin999|<font color ="blue" face= "Aharoni">'''Aaron '''</font>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><font color="red">'''You '''</font><font color="red">'''Da '''</font><font color="red">'''One'''</font></sup>]]
*: DJ Booth is perfectly reliable for GA. The critic, Nathan, has a BA in Journalism and Creative Writing. DJ Booth is not reliable for FA, which this article will not become. [[User:Calvin999|<span style="color:blue; font-family:Aharoni;">'''Aaron '''</span>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><span style="color:red;">'''You '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''Da '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''One'''</span></sup>]]
::*I don't get how something can be reliable enough for GA but not reliable enough for FA. Regarding the credentials, I have a BA in Indonesian lit, but that doesn't automatically make me a reliable critic for works such as ''[[Sitti Nurbaya]]''. I tried looking at RSN, but there was nothing on DJ Booth. Also, what about Cultureblues? [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 00:59, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
::*I don't get how something can be reliable enough for GA but not reliable enough for FA. Regarding the credentials, I have a BA in Indonesian lit, but that doesn't automatically make me a reliable critic for works such as ''[[Sitti Nurbaya]]''. I tried looking at RSN, but there was nothing on DJ Booth. Also, what about Cultureblues? [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 00:59, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
:::* DJ Booth is used in other GAs, it's acceptable. I know, I don't understand how something can be reliable for GA and not FA, but that's FAC for you! I'm pretty sure Culture Blues is reliable. [[User:Calvin999|<font color ="blue" face= "Aharoni">'''Aaron '''</font>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><font color="red">'''You '''</font><font color="red">'''Da '''</font><font color="red">'''One'''</font></sup>]] 01:02, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
:::* DJ Booth is used in other GAs, it's acceptable. I know, I don't understand how something can be reliable for GA and not FA, but that's FAC for you! I'm pretty sure Culture Blues is reliable. [[User:Calvin999|<span style="color:blue; font-family:Aharoni;">'''Aaron '''</span>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><span style="color:red;">'''You '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''Da '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''One'''</span></sup>]] 01:02, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
:::::*I've [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard#DJ_Booth asked] at RSN. I will add a question about Culture Blues. Of course, for this to pass immediately we could just remove the reviews until the RSN thread is finished. [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 01:04, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
:::::*I've [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard#DJ_Booth asked] at RSN. I will add a question about Culture Blues. Of course, for this to pass immediately we could just remove the reviews until the RSN thread is finished. [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 01:04, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
::::::* I'm not worried about it passing at this very moment in time lol. I don't mind waiting. [[User:Calvin999|<font color ="blue" face= "Aharoni">'''Aaron '''</font>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><font color="red">'''You '''</font><font color="red">'''Da '''</font><font color="red">'''One'''</font></sup>]]
::::::* I'm not worried about it passing at this very moment in time lol. I don't mind waiting. [[User:Calvin999|<span style="color:blue; font-family:Aharoni;">'''Aaron '''</span>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><span style="color:red;">'''You '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''Da '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''One'''</span></sup>]]
:::::::*Alright, hopefully they don't... well, I've had bad experiences with RSN. [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 01:21, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
:::::::*Alright, hopefully they don't... well, I've had bad experiences with RSN. [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 01:21, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
::::::::*The feedback was that DJ Booth is okay for a review but cultureblues should probably not be used. ([[Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard#DJ_Booth|here]]) [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 23:05, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

:::::::::* Removed CultureBlues. [[User:Calvin999|<span style="color:blue; font-family:Aharoni;">'''Aaron '''</span>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><span style="color:red;">'''You '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''Da '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''One'''</span></sup>]] 23:21, 28 February 2012 (UTC)


:*Not much this time around. Just a couple fixes and we should be good to go
:*Not much this time around. Just a couple fixes and we should be good to go
::* Thanks ~~
::* Thanks ~~
:::*[http://toolserver.org/~dcoetzee/duplicationdetector/compare.php?url1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.digitalspy.co.uk%2Fmusic%2Fnews%2Fa353649%2Frihanna-perfect-for-talk-that-talk-track-cockiness-says-producer.html&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fw%2Findex.php%3Ftitle%3DCockiness_%2528Love_It%2529%26oldid%3D478867458&minwords=4&minchars=13&removequotations=1 Paraphrasing] [http://toolserver.org/~dcoetzee/duplicationdetector/compare.php?url1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.allmusic.com%2Falbum%2Ftalk-that-talk-r2318208%2Freview&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fw%2Findex.php%3Ftitle%3DCockiness_%2528Love_It%2529%26oldid%3D478867458&minwords=4&minchars=13&removequotations=1 checks] [http://toolserver.org/~dcoetzee/duplicationdetector/compare.php?url1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.nytimes.com%2F2011%2F11%2F22%2Farts%2Fmusic%2Ftalk-that-talk-by-rihanna-music-review.html&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fw%2Findex.php%3Ftitle%3DCockiness_%2528Love_It%2529%26oldid%3D478867458&minwords=4&minchars=13&removequotations=1 fine]. Spotchecks on three sources above also fine. [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 00:56, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
:::*[http://toolserver.org/~dcoetzee/duplicationdetector/compare.php?url1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.digitalspy.co.uk%2Fmusic%2Fnews%2Fa353649%2Frihanna-perfect-for-talk-that-talk-track-cockiness-says-producer.html&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fw%2Findex.php%3Ftitle%3DCockiness_%2528Love_It%2529%26oldid%3D478867458&minwords=4&minchars=13&removequotations=1 Paraphrasing] [http://toolserver.org/~dcoetzee/duplicationdetector/compare.php?url1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.allmusic.com%2Falbum%2Ftalk-that-talk-r2318208%2Freview&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fw%2Findex.php%3Ftitle%3DCockiness_%2528Love_It%2529%26oldid%3D478867458&minwords=4&minchars=13&removequotations=1 checks] [http://toolserver.org/~dcoetzee/duplicationdetector/compare.php?url1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.nytimes.com%2F2011%2F11%2F22%2Farts%2Fmusic%2Ftalk-that-talk-by-rihanna-music-review.html&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fw%2Findex.php%3Ftitle%3DCockiness_%2528Love_It%2529%26oldid%3D478867458&minwords=4&minchars=13&removequotations=1 fine]. Spotchecks on three sources above also fine. [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 00:56, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
*And that's a wrap. Congrats! [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 00:05, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
*: Thanks! [[User:Calvin999|<span style="color:blue; font-family:Aharoni;">'''Aaron '''</span>]]&bull; [[User talk:Calvin999|<sup><span style="color:red;">'''You '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''Da '''</span><span style="color:red;">'''One'''</span></sup>]] 00:17, 29 February 2012 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 00:17, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I will be taking this review. As this is my fourth or fifth review for this nominator, he should know what to expect. Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:17, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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1. Well-written:
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. See below Good
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. Good
2. Verifiable with no original research:
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. Good
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). See below Good
2c. it contains no original research. Good
3. Broad in its coverage:
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. Good enough for me
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). Good
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. Fine
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. Per definition
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. Good
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. Good
7. Overall assessment. Pending

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  • Why is Mr. Bangladesh linked two times in the same sentence? Also, how are we supposed to refer to him? Is Mr. used every time in reliable sources, or do they shorten to Bangladesh?
    His production name is Mr. Bangladesh, regardless of how critics refer to him. Unlinked Crawford. Aaron You Da One
  • I'd suggest splitting the lede into two paragraphs, one for production and one for the song and reception.
    Done. Aaron You Da One
Background and conception
  • Once again, why is Mr. Bangladesh linked twice?
    Unlinked Crawford. Aaron You Da One
2b
  • What makes DJ Booth a reliable source? Cultureblues?
    DJ Booth is perfectly reliable for GA. The critic, Nathan, has a BA in Journalism and Creative Writing. DJ Booth is not reliable for FA, which this article will not become. Aaron You Da One
  • I don't get how something can be reliable enough for GA but not reliable enough for FA. Regarding the credentials, I have a BA in Indonesian lit, but that doesn't automatically make me a reliable critic for works such as Sitti Nurbaya. I tried looking at RSN, but there was nothing on DJ Booth. Also, what about Cultureblues? Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:59, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'm not worried about it passing at this very moment in time lol. I don't mind waiting. Aaron You Da One
  • Not much this time around. Just a couple fixes and we should be good to go
  • Thanks ~~