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I welcome suggestions on my [[User_talk:Millahnna|talk page]], if you know of a plot that needs whacking. I'm mostly a genre nerd so the odds of my working on an article dramatically increases if it involves [[time travel]], [[Space_battle|space battles]], [[zombies]], or [[Wizard_(fantasy)|wizards]]. |
I welcome suggestions on my [[User_talk:Millahnna|talk page]], if you know of a plot that needs whacking. I'm mostly a genre nerd so the odds of my working on an article dramatically increases if it involves [[time travel]], [[Space_battle|space battles]], [[zombies]], or [[Wizard_(fantasy)|wizards]]. |
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[https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Pinocchio_and_the_Emperor_of_the_Night&diff=prev&oldid=427201041 The biggest plot trim I ever finished.] |
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===Peeves (as in pet)=== |
===Peeves (as in pet)=== |
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*'''Irregardless''': No. |
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*'''Irregardless''': If you use this "word" I will have a very hard time taking you seriously. I will probably mock you mercilessly. IMO, it's worth getting banned for it if just one person realizes they are speaking gibberish. |
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*'''General consensus''': Redundant redundant |
*'''General consensus''': Redundant redundant |
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*'''It is shown''' that "it is shown" may be one of the most abused phrases in the fiction related articles on Wikipedia. |
*'''It is shown''' that "it is shown" may be one of the most abused phrases in the fiction related articles on Wikipedia. |
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The editor who started that whole mess has since been banned. And I still get mad when I remember this incident. I've never seen an ANI I've been involved in handled this poorly. |
The editor who started that whole mess has since been banned. And I still get mad when I remember this incident. I've never seen an ANI I've been involved in handled this poorly. |
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==Stuff to poke== |
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*https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/F/X:_The_Series Under cast list, Jacqueline Torres needs a stub page. Way outside my usual wheelhouse but kind of weird she doesn't have one given that she still works fairly often. I'm trying very, very hard to not read into why that might be. |
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=== Plots === |
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*https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seeing_Red_(Buffy_the_Vampire_Slayer) I'm actually extremely hesitant to dip my toe back into trimming Buffy related plots due to some nasty experiences I've had here on Buffy articles in the past regarding in-universe and fancruft problems. But this one is similar enough to the fandom wiki's episode description that I'm surprised it hasn't triggered a plagiarism tag. ANd it's freaky long. |
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* [[The Joy Luck Club (film)]] Currently 1900+ words but well written, do in sandbox and tag the article talk page first to get input, need to rewatch |
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*https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heartland_(Canadian_TV_series) Holy character bloat; mostly in-universe, fancruft, and original research problems. |
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** https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=The_Joy_Luck_Club_(film)&action=history The version I tagged, in case of major edits before I come back to it |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I,_Frankenstein#Plot barely over 700 but has contractions in need of fixing and some readability problems |
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* [[Whitney Houston: I Wanna Dance with Somebody]] 1000ish, shorter one in history but this one is a better framework, probably will still run a little long post trim, maybe 800 |
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*[[Harriet_(film)]] Barely over and well structured but has some bulky phrasing that makes it a little hard to follow. Just needs a polish but I want to rewatch first. |
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* [[Flatland (2007 film)]] 1114 but well structured, reception needs revamp |
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* [[Pandemic (film)]] Needs full plot and polish for tone in real world sections |
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''THere's a better than average chance I will never get around to any of these. Please feel free to beat me to them.'' |
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Been awhile since I've played with these but it needs reception and box office fleshed out enough to be able to kill the tone problems in what little is currently there. SHould be able to get at least a bare bones paragraph there. Ask for extra eyeballs when done to make sure I don't go against standards or bork a ref tag. |
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*Nyesha Arrington needs a page. Way outside my usual wheelhouse. There's a SUn article with her early life background; find other sources. |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dark_Places_(2015_film)#Plot Polish for length. Might need a different structure for the concurrent timelines. |
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**https://www.theroot.com/nyesha-arrington-on-being-a-mentor-amidst-the-chaos-of-1850108890 |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flatliners_(2017_film) polish for lengthy phrasing |
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**https://www.fox13news.com/news/foxs-next-level-chef-judge-hopes-to-inspire-more-black-women-to-follow-her-path |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Fantasy_Island_(film)&diff=prev&oldid=941181488 Current is to long, pre bloat in diff needs a polish, hybrid? |
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**https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Fantasy_Island_(film)&diff=940874905&oldid=940873268 First iteration |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Admiral_(2008_film) |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alice_in_Wonderland_(1985_film) |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_World_(2013_film) |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Noah%27s_Ark_(2007_film) |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Teacher's_Pet_(2004_film) |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tekken_(2009_film) Not sure I can fix this one without rewatching and oh boy did I not like this movie. |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mirror_Mirror_(film) |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dennis_the_Menace_(film) big hoss |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mr._Church |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Extant_(TV_series) Needs a blurb for second season reception |
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* https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Mother%27s_Day_(2010_film)&diff=441030583&oldid=438639428 current one is longer, trimmest one in history, should make ok framework to pair down |
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===Wiki backlogs=== |
===Wiki backlogs=== |
Latest revision as of 05:55, 20 February 2023
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About Me
I come and go in extremely long stretches. I get email if you drop a note on my talk page, though.
I can has words
Writing is my first love. Which is not to say I'm great at it. I mostly just don't suck; I can string a decent sentence together, but I am the queen of typos. Consequently, I mostly fix text problems like awkward and repetitive phrasing. And since I'm a huge nerd, this means I mostly end up polishing plot summaries, primarily for the Film Project. Bonus: it means I don't have to try and hold too much wikicode in my head.
I welcome suggestions on my talk page, if you know of a plot that needs whacking. I'm mostly a genre nerd so the odds of my working on an article dramatically increases if it involves time travel, space battles, zombies, or wizards.
Stuff I've done
The biggest plot trim I ever finished.
Peeves (as in pet)
- Irregardless: No.
- General consensus: Redundant redundant
- It is shown that "it is shown" may be one of the most abused phrases in the fiction related articles on Wikipedia.
- The film begins is no way to start a plot summary.
- Mixed to generally positive reviews is sort of to essentially meaningless.
- He is the secondary antagonist of the film And wikipedia is not your book report. Reverted.
Why people quit editing
The editor who started that whole mess has since been banned. And I still get mad when I remember this incident. I've never seen an ANI I've been involved in handled this poorly.
Stuff to poke
Plots
plot trimming and/or polishing.
- The Joy Luck Club (film) Currently 1900+ words but well written, do in sandbox and tag the article talk page first to get input, need to rewatch
- https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=The_Joy_Luck_Club_(film)&action=history The version I tagged, in case of major edits before I come back to it
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Raid_2 not over just clunky
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_First_Purge 946
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grand_Isle_(2019_film)#Plot
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I,_Frankenstein#Plot barely over 700 but has contractions in need of fixing and some readability problems
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Gentlemen_(2019_film)#Plot 846
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Voices#Plot
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mischief_Night_(2013_film) needs full plot
- Whitney Houston: I Wanna Dance with Somebody 1000ish, shorter one in history but this one is a better framework, probably will still run a little long post trim, maybe 800
- Harriet_(film) Barely over and well structured but has some bulky phrasing that makes it a little hard to follow. Just needs a polish but I want to rewatch first.
- Flatland (2007 film) 1114 but well structured, reception needs revamp
- Pandemic (film) Needs full plot and polish for tone in real world sections
Misc
THere's a better than average chance I will never get around to any of these. Please feel free to beat me to them.
- Nyesha Arrington needs a page. Way outside my usual wheelhouse. There's a SUn article with her early life background; find other sources.
Wiki backlogs
- Plot summaries Does not differentiate between different mediums.
- Copy edit
- Link rot
- All the hidden junk
Resources
General
- Help:Contents#For_editors and also at Wikimedia
- Help:Tables
- Wikipedia:Picture_tutorial
- Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Resources
Tools
- Word Count Tool
- Spellcheck.net, advanced spell check Also has wordcount.
- Cliche finder This is so genius.
- Wordcounter Can help find overused words in a block of text.
- untested
- Wikiblame For tracking down problem edits