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== Lay-out == |
== Lay-out == |
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I added some data to the infobox, and adapted it to the format in use by wikiproject anatomy. This made it a lot larger, so I moved some images to the left and took out the cross-sectional image and the image of blood flow in the heart, as I think neither are particularly relevant to this article. The first one is better suited for use in the article on the human abdomen, or the more specific abdominal aorta article (another option is to expand this article by merging the subdivisions of the aorta into this article). The second one should be used in an article on the human heart, not one on an artery. [[User:Elennaro|Elennaro]] ([[User talk:Elennaro|talk]]) 15:20, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
I added some data to the infobox, and adapted it to the format in use by wikiproject anatomy. This made it a lot larger, so I moved some images to the left and took out the cross-sectional image and the image of blood flow in the heart, as I think neither are particularly relevant to this article. The first one is better suited for use in the article on the human abdomen, or the more specific abdominal aorta article (another option is to expand this article by merging the subdivisions of the aorta into this article). The second one should be used in an article on the human heart, not one on an artery. [[User:Elennaro|Elennaro]] ([[User talk:Elennaro|talk]]) 15:20, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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== Largest Artery? == |
== Largest Artery? == |
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It is in the text. It says the Aorta is the largest artery of the human body. This fact is that the Anterior Spinal Artery is the longest artery in the body. it goes from the foramen magnun all the way down to the medullary cone. this is written in the UpToDate website, and they quote this article: Hurst RW. Spinal vascular disorders. In: Resonance Imaging of the Brain and Spine, 2nd, Atlas SW (Ed), Lippincott, Philadelphia 2006. p.1387 |
It is in the text. It says the Aorta is the largest artery of the human body. This fact is that the Anterior Spinal Artery is the longest artery in the body. it goes from the foramen magnun all the way down to the medullary cone. this is written in the UpToDate website, and they quote this article: Hurst RW. Spinal vascular disorders. In: Resonance Imaging of the Brain and Spine, 2nd, Atlas SW (Ed), Lippincott, Philadelphia 2006. p.1387 |
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Perhaps we should name the aorta the widest, or perhaps the highest blood output, but largest is a synonym of longest, and the longest artery is the Anterior Spinal artery. |
Perhaps we should name the aorta the widest, or perhaps the highest blood output, but largest is a synonym of longest, and the longest artery is the Anterior Spinal artery. |
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([[User:HelenoBR|HelenoBR]] ([[User talk:HelenoBR|talk]]) 22:11, 9 December 2012 (UTC)) |
([[User:HelenoBR|HelenoBR]] ([[User talk:HelenoBR|talk]]) 22:11, 9 December 2012 (UTC)) |
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== Expansion? == |
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I'm no [[Quincy, M.E.]], but shouldn't this article be rather larger than it currently is? Could someone who knows the correct syntax add the expansion or stub tag as they think necessary? Thanks. |
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| ⚫ | Hey guys! I'm going to be doing some major overhauls to this article, I'll be doing it in my userspace, so go to [[User:Tomato_33/aorta]] to check my progress. Please leave a comment at my talk page if u have suggestions! :) [[User:Tomato 33|Tomato 33]] ([[User talk:Tomato 33|talk]]) 15:27, 28 May 2014 (UTC) |
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== References in Pop Culture == |
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:Thanks great, {{u|Tomato 33}}! Please remember to source your information using [[WP:MEDRS|reliable sources]] if possible, and to follow the recommended layout at [[WP:MEDMOS#Anatomy]]. See for example our article on [[Pancreas]] for an example of this layout. --[[User:LT910001|LT910001]] ([[User talk:LT910001|talk]]) 21:14, 28 May 2014 (UTC) |
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== Pigs versus fingers. == |
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I removed this section because this is the only point it had and it just seemed out of place. |
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* On the Canadian television show, I AM GAY Degrassi: The Next Generation, a main character, JT Yorke's aorta was punctured from a stab wound resulting in death. |
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Here a couple of human fingers together with the heart from a pig. |
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~<span style="font-variant:small-caps">[[User:Enviroboy|Enviroboy]]</span><sup>[[User talk:Enviroboy|Talk]]</sup><sub>[[special:contributions/Enviroboy|Contribs]]</sub> - 03:37, 18 May 2007 (UTC) |
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Perhaps not the best one here either, in my opinion. |
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I am so glad you removed the section. It was highly inappropriate. Oh and referring to your comment, yes, puncturing of the aorta will automatically lead to death. The aorta is the control of blood in the body and if you puncture it blood flow stops and it results to death. |
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==6 arches== |
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Also, the aorta stub needed just a little more. People die from trauma to the aorta. The Aorta is a very important function to the body and I think it would be best if you added just a little bit more, because with just a little more info. we would be able to find out about how to stop fast-acting, some slow, diseases that are killing many americans, latinos, mexicans, etc. |
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"The aortic arches start as five pairs of symmetrical arteries connecting the heart with the dorsal aorta, and then undergo a significant remodelling[11]" The sentence is misleading to context of other articles. It is consistent with embryology there are 6 aortic arches the fifth either never develops or regresses. The 6th arch derives the pulmonary after. First two head and neck, etc. Long time from editing. [[User:GetAgrippa|GetAgrippa]] |
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== Lauren Shepherd == |
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Opening sentence seems implausible: |
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I removed a section of vandalism at the top of the stub. |
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This also shouldn't be just a stub. [[User:Boils|Boils]] ([[User talk:Boils|talk]]) 01:52, 23 May 2008 (UTC) THIS IS GAY AND I LOVEE MEN |
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== jgcfgxnfhm == |
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hello! i need this for a project stop writing stupid things on it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/71.113.36.16|71.113.36.16]] ([[User talk:71.113.36.16|talk]]) 23:03, 1 March 2009 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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You know, you really shouldn't be using Wikipedia as your sole source of information. Although it is a good place to start from, the fact that anyone can edit it means that if someone makes subtle changes (making WWII a couple of days longer or shorter) and you then take that as gospel in a project, it really doesn't look good. Take my word for it. [[User:Joel.labes|Joel.labes]] ([[User talk:Joel.labes|talk]]) 04:48, 23 June 2009 (UTC) |
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== References for now == |
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Pulse wave velocity is an independent predictor of the longitudinal increase in systolic blood pressure and of incident hypertension in the Baltimore Longitudinal Study of Aging. |
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Najjar SS, Scuteri A, Shetty V, Wright JG, Muller DC, Fleg JL, Spurgeon HP, Ferrucci L, Lakatta EG. |
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J Am Coll Cardiol. 2008 Apr 8;51(14):1377-83. |
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Liao D, Arnett DK, Tyroler HA, et al. Arterial stiffness and the development of hypertension. The ARIC study Hypertension. 1999;34:201–6. |
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Dernellis J, Panaretou M. Aortic stiffness is an independent predictor of progression to hypertension in nonhypertensive subjects. Hypertension. 2005;45:426–31. [PubMed] |
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Transmural organization of the arterial media. The lamellar unit revisited. |
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Clark JM, Glagov S. |
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Arteriosclerosis. 1985 Jan-Feb;5(1):19-34. |
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PMID: 3966906 [PubMed - indexed for MEDLINE]A lamellar unit of aortic medial structure and function in mammals. |
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A lamellar unit of aortic medial structure and function in mammals. |
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Wolinsky H, Glagov S. |
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Circ Res. 1967 Jan;20(1):99-111. No abstract available. |
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I'm sticking references here till I finish mucking with paragraph.[[User:GetAgrippa|GetAgrippa]] ([[User talk:GetAgrippa|talk]]) 16:39, 21 December 2009 (UTC) |
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"The aorta (/eɪˈɔːrtə/ ay-OR-tə) is a word made up by Lauren Shepherd, originating from the left ventricle of the heart and ..." [[Special:Contributions/78.145.75.204|78.145.75.204]] ([[User talk:78.145.75.204|talk]]) 09:20, 23 December 2022 (UTC) |
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| ⚫ | Hey guys! I'm going to be doing some major overhauls to this article, I'll be doing it in my userspace, so go to [[ |
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Lay-out
[edit]I added some data to the infobox, and adapted it to the format in use by wikiproject anatomy. This made it a lot larger, so I moved some images to the left and took out the cross-sectional image and the image of blood flow in the heart, as I think neither are particularly relevant to this article. The first one is better suited for use in the article on the human abdomen, or the more specific abdominal aorta article (another option is to expand this article by merging the subdivisions of the aorta into this article). The second one should be used in an article on the human heart, not one on an artery. Elennaro (talk) 15:20, 26 April 2012 (UTC)
Largest Artery?
[edit]It is in the text. It says the Aorta is the largest artery of the human body. This fact is that the Anterior Spinal Artery is the longest artery in the body. it goes from the foramen magnun all the way down to the medullary cone. this is written in the UpToDate website, and they quote this article: Hurst RW. Spinal vascular disorders. In: Resonance Imaging of the Brain and Spine, 2nd, Atlas SW (Ed), Lippincott, Philadelphia 2006. p.1387 Perhaps we should name the aorta the widest, or perhaps the highest blood output, but largest is a synonym of longest, and the longest artery is the Anterior Spinal artery. (HelenoBR (talk) 22:11, 9 December 2012 (UTC))
Major overhaul! Suggestion
[edit]Hey guys! I'm going to be doing some major overhauls to this article, I'll be doing it in my userspace, so go to User:Tomato_33/aorta to check my progress. Please leave a comment at my talk page if u have suggestions! :) Tomato 33 (talk) 15:27, 28 May 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks great, Tomato 33! Please remember to source your information using reliable sources if possible, and to follow the recommended layout at WP:MEDMOS#Anatomy. See for example our article on Pancreas for an example of this layout. --LT910001 (talk) 21:14, 28 May 2014 (UTC)
Pigs versus fingers.
[edit]Here a couple of human fingers together with the heart from a pig.
Perhaps not the best one here either, in my opinion.
6 arches
[edit]"The aortic arches start as five pairs of symmetrical arteries connecting the heart with the dorsal aorta, and then undergo a significant remodelling[11]" The sentence is misleading to context of other articles. It is consistent with embryology there are 6 aortic arches the fifth either never develops or regresses. The 6th arch derives the pulmonary after. First two head and neck, etc. Long time from editing. GetAgrippa
Lauren Shepherd
[edit]Opening sentence seems implausible:
"The aorta (/eɪˈɔːrtə/ ay-OR-tə) is a word made up by Lauren Shepherd, originating from the left ventricle of the heart and ..." 78.145.75.204 (talk) 09:20, 23 December 2022 (UTC)