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==Assessment comment== |
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup> |
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup> |
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*This article has no [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup> |
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*See if possible if there is a [[WP:IT|free use]] image that can go on the top right corner of this article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup> |
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*There may be an applicable [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article. For example, see [[Template:Infobox Biography]], [[Template:Infobox School]], or [[Template:Infobox City]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually) |
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''500 mg'', use ''500 mg'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>500&nbsp;mg</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup> |
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 500 mg. |
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*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup> |
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*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. |
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**''is considered'' |
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**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <s>strike</s> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this--> |
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*Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): ''isn't''. |
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*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup> |
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You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, <span style="color:#B03060;"><i>[[User:Wimvandorst|Wim van Dorst'']] ([[user talk:Wimvandorst|''Talk'']])</i></span> 21:42, 6 April 2007 (UTC)}} |
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== Side effects == |
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The second section (beginning, “[c]ommon side effects include...”) seems odd to me. I’m not educated in what is & isn’t considered a side effect, but I find “[s]erious side effects are rare. They include suicide...” to be strange. I (not a doctor) would not consider suicide as a side effect of a drug just the same as I would not consider a pregnancy a side effect of alcoholic beverages. In my opinion, decisions based on a drug’s effect aren’t side effects in their own right, but suicidal tendencies would be. After all, a chemical can’t make someone have a decision, but it can certainly lead her into acting upon it. I think the section below that mentions the adverse effects puts it better than this section. [[User:Dfcorrea00|Dfcorrea00]] ([[User talk:Dfcorrea00|talk]]) 23:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC) [[User:Dfcorrea00|Dfcorrea00]] ([[User talk:Dfcorrea00|talk]]) 23:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC) |
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::Some medications result in higher rates of suicidal thoughts / suicide which is a side effect. And this is how it is generally presented in the medical literature. [[User:Doc James|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Doc James|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Doc James|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Doc James|email]]) 01:32, 1 November 2017 (UTC) |
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== Source 3 error == |
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Source 3 directs to dead link (error 404) |
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[[Special:Contributions/5.144.208.90|5.144.208.90]] ([[User talk:5.144.208.90|talk]]) 13:12, 5 April 2018 (UTC) |
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:I can't believe this still hasn't been fixed. I've added the archive link with InternetArchiveBot now, it should work correctly. [[User:MutchyMan112|MutchyMan112]] ([[User talk:MutchyMan112|talk]]) 21:23, 20 August 2018 (UTC) |
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Last edited at 21:42, 6 April 2007 (UTC). Substituted at 13:22, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
Side effects
[edit]The second section (beginning, “[c]ommon side effects include...”) seems odd to me. I’m not educated in what is & isn’t considered a side effect, but I find “[s]erious side effects are rare. They include suicide...” to be strange. I (not a doctor) would not consider suicide as a side effect of a drug just the same as I would not consider a pregnancy a side effect of alcoholic beverages. In my opinion, decisions based on a drug’s effect aren’t side effects in their own right, but suicidal tendencies would be. After all, a chemical can’t make someone have a decision, but it can certainly lead her into acting upon it. I think the section below that mentions the adverse effects puts it better than this section. Dfcorrea00 (talk) 23:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC) Dfcorrea00 (talk) 23:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Some medications result in higher rates of suicidal thoughts / suicide which is a side effect. And this is how it is generally presented in the medical literature. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 01:32, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]Source 3 directs to dead link (error 404) 5.144.208.90 (talk) 13:12, 5 April 2018 (UTC)
- I can't believe this still hasn't been fixed. I've added the archive link with InternetArchiveBot now, it should work correctly. MutchyMan112 (talk) 21:23, 20 August 2018 (UTC)
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