Talk:Cocktail dress: Difference between revisions
m Maintain {{WPBS}} and vital articles: 4 WikiProject templates. Merge {{VA}} into {{WPBS}}. Keep majority rating "Start" in {{WPBS}}. Remove 3 same ratings as {{WPBS}} in {{WikiProject Fashion}}, {{WikiProject Women's History}}, {{WikiProject Women}}. |
|||
(31 intermediate revisions by 20 users not shown) | |||
Line 1: | Line 1: | ||
{{WikiProject |
{{WikiProject banner shell|class=Start|vital=yes|1= |
||
{{WikiProject Fashion|importance=mid}} |
|||
{{WikiProject Women's History|importance=low}} |
|||
{{WikiProject Women}} |
|||
{{WikiProject Culture}} |
|||
}} |
|||
== Image == |
== Image == |
||
Line 20: | Line 25: | ||
The statement that men may wear a dark suit to a semi-formal event is incorrect and should be removed. See [[Semi formal]]. In addition, it's off-topic in this article. [[User:Toddst1|Toddst1]] <small>([[User talk: Toddst1|talk]])</small> 17:12, 12 June 2009 (UTC) |
The statement that men may wear a dark suit to a semi-formal event is incorrect and should be removed. See [[Semi formal]]. In addition, it's off-topic in this article. [[User:Toddst1|Toddst1]] <small>([[User talk: Toddst1|talk]])</small> 17:12, 12 June 2009 (UTC) |
||
==web site== |
|||
==www.fashionable-advice.clothingforstyle.com== |
|||
Hi Leila, |
Hi Leila, |
||
I've removed the material you added from your website. While I can see you're trying to constructively contribute and you've solved the copyright problems, that material fails [[Wikipedia:Verifiability]] as [[WP:SPS]]. Bluntly, just because you published it on your website, doesn't make it true. Beyond that, the material is more of a style guide which we don't do per [[WP:HOWTO]]. While many folks think that type of info would be useful on Wikipedia, we have made a decision not to include that type of material. I hope this helps. [[User:Toddst1|Toddst1]] <small>([[User talk: Toddst1|talk]])</small> 17:43, 12 November 2009 (UTC) |
My apologies for the second undo, but I've removed the material you added from your website. While I can see you're trying to constructively contribute and you've solved the copyright problems, that material fails [[Wikipedia:Verifiability]] as [[WP:SPS]]. Bluntly, just because you published it on your website, doesn't make it true. Beyond that, the material is more of a style guide which we don't do per [[WP:HOWTO]]. While many folks think that type of info would be useful on Wikipedia, we have made a decision not to include that type of material. I hope this helps. [[User:Toddst1|Toddst1]] <small>([[User talk: Toddst1|talk]])</small> 17:43, 12 November 2009 (UTC) |
||
: Hi Toddst1, thanks for your notes. I'm still thinking about expanding of this article. This time I divided to consult with you first. I'm thinking about leaving History section with a reference to "da Cruz, Elyssa. "Dressing for the Cocktail Hour". In Heilbrunn Timeline of Art History. New York: The Metropolitan Museum of Art, 2000". As for rest of my content, I'm thinking about External Links section. Is such modification acceptable? WBR Leila Lynch 21:39, 12 November 2009 (UTC) |
|||
::Sounds like a great idea. Let me know if you need help with the [[Wikipedia:Citation templates]]. Good luck. [[User:Toddst1|Toddst1]] <small>([[User talk: Toddst1|talk]])</small> 21:47, 12 November 2009 (UTC) |
|||
:::I removed the History section, as it was copied verbatim from the web site. See [[wp:copyvio]]. [[User:Rees11|Rees11]] ([[User talk:Rees11|talk]]) 16:17, 30 December 2009 (UTC) |
|||
:::I see now that this material was removed once before and restored with a claim that it had been licensed for use here. But I don't see that on the source web page. [[User:Rees11|Rees11]] ([[User talk:Rees11|talk]]) 21:18, 30 December 2009 (UTC) |
|||
::::Thanks, Ress11, for notice. I'm restoring material, since CC-BY-SA notice was restored (it was forgotten during site-migration) Leila Lynch 20:13, 5 January 2010 (UTC) <small><span class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:LeilaLynch|LeilaLynch]] ([[User talk:LeilaLynch|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/LeilaLynch|contribs]]) </span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
|||
:::You can't just include the material here. The license requires attribution at the very least. I would also request that you get consensus here on the talk page before adding this material, per [[wp:coi]]. [[User:Rees11|Rees11]] ([[User talk:Rees11|talk]]) 20:39, 5 January 2010 (UTC) |
|||
== Bibliography == |
|||
# Da Cruz, Elyssa Schram. "Cocktail Dress." The Berg Companion to Fashion. Ed. Valerie Steele. Oxford: Bloomsbury Academic, 2010. Bloomsbury Fashion Central. Web. 31 Oct. 2017. https://www.bloomsburyfashioncentral.com/products/berg-fashion-library/encyclopedia/the-berg-companion-to-fashion/cocktail-dress.<ref name="undefined" /> |
|||
# Arnold Rebecca. Fashion, Desire, and Anxiety: Image and Morality in the Twentieth Century. New Brunswick, N.J.: Rutgers University Press, 2001.<ref name="undefined" /> |
|||
# Kirkham Pat. Women Designers in the USA 1900–2000. New York: Yale University Press, 2000.<ref name="undefined" /> |
|||
# Milbank Rennolds. New York Fashion: The Evolution of American Style. New York: Harry N. Abrams, 1989.<ref name="undefined" /> |
|||
# Seeling Charlotte. Fashion: The Century of the Designer, 1900–1999. Cologne, Germany: Konemann, 1999.<ref name="undefined" /> |
|||
# Steele Valerie. Paris Fashion: A Cultural History. New York: Oxford University Press, 1988.<ref name="undefined" /> |
|||
# Dirix, Emmanuelle. Dressing the decades: twentieth-Century Vintage style. Yale, 2016.<ref name="undefined" /> |
|||
[[User:Joannnnna|Joannnnna]] ([[User talk:Joannnnna|talk]]) 11:38, 1 November 2017 (UTC) |
|||
{{Reflist-talk}} |
|||
== Merge? == |
|||
Shouldn't [[Party dress]] merge into [[Cocktail dress]]? [[User:PPEMES|PPEMES]] ([[User talk:PPEMES|talk]]) 11:35, 7 February 2020 (UTC) |
|||
:Merging makes no sense to me. [[User:Toddst1|Toddst1]] <small>([[User talk: Toddst1|talk]])</small> 22:10, 7 February 2020 (UTC) |
|||
::How do the scopes distinctively differ? [[User:PPEMES|PPEMES]] ([[User talk:PPEMES|talk]]) 23:19, 7 February 2020 (UTC) |
|||
:::"Party dress" includes for children's and teen's dresses, but "cocktail dress" really doesn't. - [[User:PKM|PKM]] ([[User talk:PKM|talk]]) 04:15, 14 October 2020 (UTC) |
|||
: '''Comment''' - I agree with PKM. A party dress is more for children and teens and all-ages events, a cocktail dress is something very specifically adult/grown-up. It's the difference between a pink fondant fancy and a posh dark chocolate souffle. [[User:Mabalu|Mabalu]] ([[User talk:Mabalu|talk]]) 04:27, 15 October 2020 (UTC) |
|||
:: To clarify - I hadn't realised until I looked at it what a really scrappy little article "party dress" is. I propose that it should be merged instead into [[Dress]]. [[User:Mabalu|Mabalu]] ([[User talk:Mabalu|talk]]) 04:29, 15 October 2020 (UTC) |
|||
:::{{merge done}} (to [[Dress]]) [[User:Klbrain|Klbrain]] ([[User talk:Klbrain|talk]]) 09:41, 7 March 2021 (UTC) |
|||
==Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment== |
|||
[[File:Sciences humaines.svg|40px]] This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available [[Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/NA/History_of_Fashionable_Dress_(Fall_2017)|on the course page]]. Student editor(s): [[User:Joannnnna|Joannnnna]]. |
|||
{{small|Above undated message substituted from [[Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment]] by [[User:PrimeBOT|PrimeBOT]] ([[User talk:PrimeBOT|talk]]) 17:55, 16 January 2022 (UTC)}} |
|||
==Wiki Education assignment: Information Literacy and Scholarly Discourse== |
|||
{{dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment | course = Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/University_of_New_Orleans/Information_Literacy_and_Scholarly_Discourse_(Spring) | reviewers = [[User:Lmdenley|Lmdenley]] | start_date = 2022-01-26 | end_date = 2022-05-21 }} |
|||
<span class="wikied-assignment" style="font-size:85%;">— Assignment last updated by [[User:Mlclark1|Mlclark1]] ([[User talk:Mlclark1|talk]]) 13:22, 10 June 2022 (UTC)</span> |
Latest revision as of 15:35, 11 January 2024
This level-5 vital article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|
Image
[edit]The old image Image:PromDress.JPG was only a Prom dress - not a classical Cocktail dress like Image:Cocktail dress 22209831.jpg. I've exchanged the images --Herrick 13:30, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
- Oops, should've read this before reverting. Still, there ought to be an even better picture out there.... -- Smjg 23:30, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
I see problems with both images - the prom one is a poor pose and the dres isn't so good. the cocktail dress image can barely be seen. I took a look on Commons and flickr and came up with a few alternatives we could consider:
and a cc-by-sa 2.5 image on flickr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/iluvrhinestones/297039837/
My personal favorite is the first. -- SiobhanHansa 15:33, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
- Gosh. Inspite the fact that the first picture Image:Helen Sjöholm.jpg is a "nice" dress, it only shows a typically dress from 1950! It misses the classic strong line. --Herrick 08:40, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
Statement about men's attire
[edit]The statement that men may wear a dark suit to a semi-formal event is incorrect and should be removed. See Semi formal. In addition, it's off-topic in this article. Toddst1 (talk) 17:12, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
web site
[edit]Hi Leila, My apologies for the second undo, but I've removed the material you added from your website. While I can see you're trying to constructively contribute and you've solved the copyright problems, that material fails Wikipedia:Verifiability as WP:SPS. Bluntly, just because you published it on your website, doesn't make it true. Beyond that, the material is more of a style guide which we don't do per WP:HOWTO. While many folks think that type of info would be useful on Wikipedia, we have made a decision not to include that type of material. I hope this helps. Toddst1 (talk) 17:43, 12 November 2009 (UTC)
- Hi Toddst1, thanks for your notes. I'm still thinking about expanding of this article. This time I divided to consult with you first. I'm thinking about leaving History section with a reference to "da Cruz, Elyssa. "Dressing for the Cocktail Hour". In Heilbrunn Timeline of Art History. New York: The Metropolitan Museum of Art, 2000". As for rest of my content, I'm thinking about External Links section. Is such modification acceptable? WBR Leila Lynch 21:39, 12 November 2009 (UTC)
- Sounds like a great idea. Let me know if you need help with the Wikipedia:Citation templates. Good luck. Toddst1 (talk) 21:47, 12 November 2009 (UTC)
- I removed the History section, as it was copied verbatim from the web site. See wp:copyvio. Rees11 (talk) 16:17, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- I see now that this material was removed once before and restored with a claim that it had been licensed for use here. But I don't see that on the source web page. Rees11 (talk) 21:18, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks, Ress11, for notice. I'm restoring material, since CC-BY-SA notice was restored (it was forgotten during site-migration) Leila Lynch 20:13, 5 January 2010 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by LeilaLynch (talk • contribs)
- You can't just include the material here. The license requires attribution at the very least. I would also request that you get consensus here on the talk page before adding this material, per wp:coi. Rees11 (talk) 20:39, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
Bibliography
[edit]- Da Cruz, Elyssa Schram. "Cocktail Dress." The Berg Companion to Fashion. Ed. Valerie Steele. Oxford: Bloomsbury Academic, 2010. Bloomsbury Fashion Central. Web. 31 Oct. 2017. https://www.bloomsburyfashioncentral.com/products/berg-fashion-library/encyclopedia/the-berg-companion-to-fashion/cocktail-dress.[1]
- Arnold Rebecca. Fashion, Desire, and Anxiety: Image and Morality in the Twentieth Century. New Brunswick, N.J.: Rutgers University Press, 2001.[1]
- Kirkham Pat. Women Designers in the USA 1900–2000. New York: Yale University Press, 2000.[1]
- Milbank Rennolds. New York Fashion: The Evolution of American Style. New York: Harry N. Abrams, 1989.[1]
- Seeling Charlotte. Fashion: The Century of the Designer, 1900–1999. Cologne, Germany: Konemann, 1999.[1]
- Steele Valerie. Paris Fashion: A Cultural History. New York: Oxford University Press, 1988.[1]
- Dirix, Emmanuelle. Dressing the decades: twentieth-Century Vintage style. Yale, 2016.[1]
Joannnnna (talk) 11:38, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
References
Merge?
[edit]Shouldn't Party dress merge into Cocktail dress? PPEMES (talk) 11:35, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- Merging makes no sense to me. Toddst1 (talk) 22:10, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- How do the scopes distinctively differ? PPEMES (talk) 23:19, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- "Party dress" includes for children's and teen's dresses, but "cocktail dress" really doesn't. - PKM (talk) 04:15, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
- How do the scopes distinctively differ? PPEMES (talk) 23:19, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- Comment - I agree with PKM. A party dress is more for children and teens and all-ages events, a cocktail dress is something very specifically adult/grown-up. It's the difference between a pink fondant fancy and a posh dark chocolate souffle. Mabalu (talk) 04:27, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
- To clarify - I hadn't realised until I looked at it what a really scrappy little article "party dress" is. I propose that it should be merged instead into Dress. Mabalu (talk) 04:29, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
- Merger complete. (to Dress) Klbrain (talk) 09:41, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
- To clarify - I hadn't realised until I looked at it what a really scrappy little article "party dress" is. I propose that it should be merged instead into Dress. Mabalu (talk) 04:29, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
[edit]This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Joannnnna.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:55, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
Wiki Education assignment: Information Literacy and Scholarly Discourse
[edit]This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 26 January 2022 and 21 May 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Lmdenley.
— Assignment last updated by Mlclark1 (talk) 13:22, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
- Start-Class level-5 vital articles
- Wikipedia level-5 vital articles in Everyday life
- Start-Class vital articles in Everyday life
- Start-Class fashion articles
- Mid-importance fashion articles
- Start-Class Women's History articles
- Low-importance Women's History articles
- All WikiProject Women-related pages
- WikiProject Women's History articles
- Start-Class WikiProject Women articles
- WikiProject Women articles
- Start-Class culture articles
- Unknown-importance culture articles
- WikiProject Culture articles