Talk:Djibouti at the 2012 Summer Paralympics

External links modified

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified one external link on Djibouti at the 2012 Summer Paralympics. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20120904071253/http://www.francetv.fr:80/sport/les-jeux-paralympiques-2012/athletisme-qualifications-et-finales-01-09-2012 to http://www.francetv.fr/sport/les-jeux-paralympiques-2012/athletisme-qualifications-et-finales-01-09-2012

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true or failed to let others know (documentation at {{Sourcecheck}}).

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

• If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
• If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 07:58, 14 December 2016 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Djibouti at the 2012 Summer Paralympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:57, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:57, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Mention Hassan in the lead
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "He did poorly in his heat due to an ankle injury, and did not win a medal." - and despite not winning a medal, he was cheered on by the crowd as he ran alone on the track for two laps.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Background

• "The event was from August 29 to September 9." - The event was held from August 29 to September 9.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "The country had one athlete compete, in the men's 1500m T46." - 1500 meters
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Athletics

• Is there any information that states how Hassan qualified for the Paralympics? Is so, that would be useful to have in the article.
  • I tried English and French Google, but neither returned anything. Do you have any good places to look? Kees08 (Talk)
• "competed in the men's 1,500m T46" - same issue as in the background section
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• You should add the mention of the ankle injury Hassan sustained in this section as you have done in the lede
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "Hassan finished with a time of 11:23.50, a season best." - try: Hassan finished the race with a season-best time of 11:23.50.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

References

• Reference two is missing the date it was published
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Remove the Djibouti sports stub template
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

That is all the issues I discovered during my read-through. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 08:24, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

@MWright96: Fixed all the issues I could. Kees08 (Talk) 03:59, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

@Kees08: Regarding the qualification aspect, I myself could not locate the exact reason despite my best efforts or the Paralympics website sources are not specific enough in this instance. Nevertheless, this article is now a GA. MWright96 (talk) 11:46, 19 April 2018 (UTC)