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== Request for sourcing ==
This draft is a translation of the [https://de.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Miki_Rofū German Wikipedia article], using Google Translate followed by some hand editing. It's very much a work in progress. [[User:Mortee|Mortee]] ([[User talk:Mortee|talk]]) 22:00, 19 February 2017 (UTC)


This page started life as a Google translated version of the [https://de.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Miki_Rofū German Wikipedia article]. I've added references since then but haven't yet put in the Japanese language references from that page or other equivalents. The biographical section in particular could use more sourcing, so I'd be grateful if anyone could help with adding those. [[User:Mortee|Mortee]] ([[User talk:Mortee|talk]]) 15:37, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
== To do ==

* Put in all the references
=== Japanese language sources ===
* Check translation (e.g. of the 'order of merit' vs 'medal of honor' towards the end, and of 'took care of' earlier)

* Try to find English translations of the works' titles
Putting these here in the hope that Japanese speakers can make use of them. I've taken the first five from the German article because I'm closer to being able to parse that one. Naturally there's more detail on the Japanese page that could also be incorporated here.
* Check formatting of Japanese - should it have spaces or not?

* <s>Add infobox</s>
(from German Wikipedia)
* Check if this should be Miki Rofū or Rofū Miki, add template or similar to explain which is the given name
* [http://near.nara-edu.ac.jp/bitstream/10105/3175/1/NUE17_1_15-23.pdf]
* Include his birthname and find out when he started using the pseudonym
* [http://kotobank.jp/word/三木露風]
* Double check dates - overlap of magazine work and teaching literature
* [http://kotobank.jp/word/碧川道夫]
* Add data-keys from German page
* [http://merlot.wul.waseda.ac.jp/sobun/m/mi008/mi008p01.htm]
* See if more works need listing; they stop midway through his life in this listing, which may or may not be accurate
* [http://www.tatsuno-cityhall.jp/abh/zaidan/doyo/doyo.htm]
* (After creation) add categories

* (After creation) add links from any other pages that mention him, and mentions to other pages that should e.g. [[Akai tori]]
(from elsewhere)
* (After creation) find out dates and classes for the two awards and add him to their recipient lists
* [http://getnews.jp/archives/713876]
[[User:Mortee|Mortee]] ([[User talk:Mortee|talk]])

[[User:Mortee|Mortee]] ([[User talk:Mortee|talk]]) 21:02, 20 February 2017 (UTC)

I've since put three of these references in the article in the same places where the French and German articles did, but would still appreciate someone verifying that they support the claims they're attached to (I've tried with Google Translate but can't be totally confident) [[User:Mortee|Mortee]] ([[User talk:Mortee|talk]]) 23:07, 20 February 2017 (UTC)

== Missing citations ==
{{user|Softlavender}} pointed out that the dates didn't seem to add up, as they showed his parents divorcing 15 years before his birth. His birth year is cited plenty. The divorce year looks like a mistake in the French and German articles. The Japanese one says (per Google Translate) that they divorced when he was 5, but they've added 5 to his mother's year of birth instead of his. So, fixed that but the divorce date still needs citing. It must be in one of the Japanese sources, but the Japanese article doesn't do inline references.

Similarly, his birth name has been marked as needing a citation. It's bolded in the Japanese article but again, I don't know which is the right source to quote. Searching for the Japanese finds other pages about him and it's given on Discogs [https://www.discogs.com/artist/1643217-Rofu-Miki] too, but that's not reliable. [https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=ZPBsJ3-IDloC&pg=PA70&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false This page] says "Misao" and doesn't give the Japanese form. So, another request for a Japanese speaker to help clear this up. [[User:Mortee|Mortee]] ([[User talk:Mortee|talk]]) 06:38, 21 February 2017 (UTC)
: Also, the English reference for his birthdate only gives the year. If someone could confirm that [http://near.nara-edu.ac.jp/bitstream/10105/3175/1/NUE17_1_15-23.pdf] gives the full date (the Japanese reference used inline at the end of the sentence here, copied from Germany and France), that'd be great. [[User:Mortee|Mortee]] ([[User talk:Mortee|talk]]) 06:46, 21 February 2017 (UTC)

== Consider moving this article to [[Rofū Miki]] ==

[[Rofū Miki]] is standard Western name order, and also is by far the most common order on Google. Here is the Google-result breakdown:

;Miki Rofu
* Web: [https://www.google.com/search?num=100&newwindow=1&site=&source=hp&q=%22Miki+Rofu%22+-wikipedia&oq=%22Miki+Rofu%22+-wikipedia&gs_l=hp.3...2341.8586.0.8847.15.15.0.0.0.0.139.1768.0j15.15.0....0...1c.1j2.64.hp..0.5.644.0..0j0i22i30k1j0i30k1.kWbUBlmfKWE 804]
* Books: [https://www.google.com/search?q=%22Miki+Rofu%22+-wikipedia&num=100&newwindow=1&source=lnms&tbm=bks&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjzyeLz5a_SAhVGz2MKHfwND0EQ_AUIDSgG&biw=1057&bih=874 82]

;Miki Rofū
* Web: [https://www.google.com/search?num=100&newwindow=1&site=&source=hp&q=%22Miki+Rof%C5%AB%22+-wikipedia&oq=%22Miki+Rof%C5%AB%22+-wikipedia&gs_l=hp.3...2240.9961.0.10209.15.15.0.0.0.0.138.1831.0j15.15.0....0...1c.1j2.64.hp..0.4.541.0..0i22i30k1.S0bHEFPftNQ 960]
* Books: [https://www.google.com/search?q=%22Miki+Rof%C5%AB%22+-wikipedia&num=100&newwindow=1&source=lnms&tbm=bks&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwi7vJWf5q_SAhUTwGMKHQiqCd0Q_AUIDSgG&biw=1057&bih=874 48]

;Rofu Miki
* Web: [https://www.google.com/search?q=%22Rofu+Miki%22+-wikipedia&num=100&newwindow=1&biw=1057&bih=874&source=lnms&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjj7ZPS5q_SAhVX7WMKHXAMCXkQ_AUIBygA&dpr=1 1,910]
* Books: [https://www.google.com/search?q=%22Rofu+Miki%22+-wikipedia&num=100&newwindow=1&biw=1057&bih=874&source=lnms&tbm=bks&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwigw-XT5q_SAhVHyWMKHTDnAwQQ_AUIDSgG 77]

;Rofū Miki
* Web: [https://www.google.com/search?num=100&newwindow=1&site=&source=hp&q=%22Rof%C5%AB+Miki%22+-wikipedia&oq=%22Rof%C5%AB+Miki%22+-wikipedia&gs_l=hp.3...2027.9293.0.9502.15.15.0.0.0.0.144.1803.0j15.15.0....0...1c.1j2.64.hp..0.4.528.0..0i22i30k1.Z06QOjvEgjA 2,380]
* Books: [https://www.google.com/search?q=%22Rof%C5%AB+Miki%22+-wikipedia&num=100&newwindow=1&biw=1057&bih=874&tbm=bks&source=lnms&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjOufuS56_SAhVE3WMKHdz3AhwQ_AUIDSgG&dpr=1 35]

Double searches:

;Surname first
* Web: [https://www.google.com/search?num=100&newwindow=1&q=%22Miki+Rof%C5%AB%22+OR+%22Miki+Rofu%22+-wikipedia&oq=%22Miki+Rof%C5%AB%22+OR+%22Miki+Rofu%22+-wikipedia&gs_l=serp.12...2882.18934.0.22063.9.9.0.0.0.0.149.1070.0j9.9.0....0...1c.1j2.64.serp..0.0.0.i5KUd_f1dXY 960]
* Books: [https://www.google.com/search?num=100&newwindow=1&q=%22Miki+Rof%C5%AB%22+OR+%22Miki+Rofu%22+-wikipedia&oq=%22Miki+Rof%C5%AB%22+OR+%22Miki+Rofu%22+-wikipedia&gs_l=serp.12...2882.18934.0.22063.9.9.0.0.0.0.149.1070.0j9.9.0....0...1c.1j2.64.serp..0.0.0.i5KUd_f1dXY 46]

;Surname last
* Web: [https://www.google.com/search?q=%22Rof%C5%AB+Miki%22+OR+%22Rofu+Miki%22+-wikipedia&num=100&newwindow=1&biw=1057&bih=874&source=lnms&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjAy9H-56_SAhVG-2MKHeClCeoQ_AUIBygA&dpr=1 2,380]
* Books: [https://www.google.com/search?num=100&newwindow=1&biw=1057&bih=874&tbm=bks&q=%22Rof%C5%AB+Miki%22+OR+%22Rofu+Miki%22+-wikipedia&oq=%22Rof%C5%AB+Miki%22+OR+%22Rofu+Miki%22+-wikipedia&gs_l=serp.12...41087.57163.0.59454.9.9.0.0.0.0.192.1115.0j9.9.0....0...1c.1j2.64.serp..0.0.0.dsomDSrE83k 72]

Also, it is disorienting to read an article that mentions his name more than once, and find what appears from the full name to be his forename being used to refer to him thenceforth. I have therefore used [[Rofū Miki]] on the article [[Akatombo]]. -- [[User:Softlavender|Softlavender]] ([[User talk:Softlavender|talk]]) 08:08, 27 February 2017 (UTC)

: Sure. I used Miki Rofū because it's a more direct approximation of the Japanese and having looked at [[WP:JTITLE]] it allows for either, depending on what's most common in academia and encylopedias, so I went with the order in the references I ended up using. Since the reverse is clearly used too (thank you for the figures) and changing would match [[Kosaku Yamada]], I don't object to changing. Certainly this page and [[Akatombo]] should use the same order, especially if they're going to feature in a [[WP:Did You Know]] together (thank you again for that nomination). I'll make the move. [[User:Mortee|Mortee]] ([[User talk:Mortee|talk]]) 23:22, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
:: {{re|Softlavender}} I've made the move and updated incoming links. If you could take a pass through the article to make sure I haven't missed anything, that would be great. [[User:Mortee|Mortee]] ([[User talk:Mortee|talk]]) 23:47, 27 February 2017 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 16:01, 5 February 2024

Request for sourcing

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This page started life as a Google translated version of the German Wikipedia article. I've added references since then but haven't yet put in the Japanese language references from that page or other equivalents. The biographical section in particular could use more sourcing, so I'd be grateful if anyone could help with adding those. Mortee (talk) 15:37, 20 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Japanese language sources

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Putting these here in the hope that Japanese speakers can make use of them. I've taken the first five from the German article because I'm closer to being able to parse that one. Naturally there's more detail on the Japanese page that could also be incorporated here.

(from German Wikipedia)

(from elsewhere)

Mortee (talk) 21:02, 20 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I've since put three of these references in the article in the same places where the French and German articles did, but would still appreciate someone verifying that they support the claims they're attached to (I've tried with Google Translate but can't be totally confident) Mortee (talk) 23:07, 20 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Missing citations

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Softlavender (talk · contribs) pointed out that the dates didn't seem to add up, as they showed his parents divorcing 15 years before his birth. His birth year is cited plenty. The divorce year looks like a mistake in the French and German articles. The Japanese one says (per Google Translate) that they divorced when he was 5, but they've added 5 to his mother's year of birth instead of his. So, fixed that but the divorce date still needs citing. It must be in one of the Japanese sources, but the Japanese article doesn't do inline references.

Similarly, his birth name has been marked as needing a citation. It's bolded in the Japanese article but again, I don't know which is the right source to quote. Searching for the Japanese finds other pages about him and it's given on Discogs [7] too, but that's not reliable. This page says "Misao" and doesn't give the Japanese form. So, another request for a Japanese speaker to help clear this up. Mortee (talk) 06:38, 21 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Also, the English reference for his birthdate only gives the year. If someone could confirm that [8] gives the full date (the Japanese reference used inline at the end of the sentence here, copied from Germany and France), that'd be great. Mortee (talk) 06:46, 21 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Consider moving this article to Rofū Miki

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Rofū Miki is standard Western name order, and also is by far the most common order on Google. Here is the Google-result breakdown:

Miki Rofu
Miki Rofū
Rofu Miki
Rofū Miki

Double searches:

Surname first
Surname last

Also, it is disorienting to read an article that mentions his name more than once, and find what appears from the full name to be his forename being used to refer to him thenceforth. I have therefore used Rofū Miki on the article Akatombo. -- Softlavender (talk) 08:08, 27 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Sure. I used Miki Rofū because it's a more direct approximation of the Japanese and having looked at WP:JTITLE it allows for either, depending on what's most common in academia and encylopedias, so I went with the order in the references I ended up using. Since the reverse is clearly used too (thank you for the figures) and changing would match Kosaku Yamada, I don't object to changing. Certainly this page and Akatombo should use the same order, especially if they're going to feature in a WP:Did You Know together (thank you again for that nomination). I'll make the move. Mortee (talk) 23:22, 27 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Softlavender: I've made the move and updated incoming links. If you could take a pass through the article to make sure I haven't missed anything, that would be great. Mortee (talk) 23:47, 27 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]