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Peer Review: There are a few word choice and phrasing things that I would consider changing. For example, I would reword the phrase "for private purposes" and maybe change that to "personally help." I would also continue to expand your article, since there are still a good many questions left to explore. Overall, however, I think that it is a really interesting topic and that you do a good job of introducing it. I would just reread it and clean up some of the wording. I'm excited to see how it turns out! |
Peer Review: There are a few word choice and phrasing things that I would consider changing. For example, I would reword the phrase "for private purposes" and maybe change that to "personally help." I would also continue to expand your article, since there are still a good many questions left to explore. Overall, however, I think that it is a really interesting topic and that you do a good job of introducing it. I would just reread it and clean up some of the wording. I'm excited to see how it turns out! |
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--[[User:Rolandcharlotte|Rolandcharlotte]] ([[User talk:Rolandcharlotte|talk]]) 15:15, 8 April 2015 (UTC) |
--[[User:Rolandcharlotte|Rolandcharlotte]] ([[User talk:Rolandcharlotte|talk]]) 15:15, 8 April 2015 (UTC) |
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Peer Review: There are a few word choice and phrasing things that I would consider changing. For example, I would reword the phrase "for private purposes" and maybe change that to "personally help." I would also continue to expand your article, since there are still a good many questions left to explore. Overall, however, I think that it is a really interesting topic and that you do a good job of introducing it. I would just reread it and clean up some of the wording. I'm excited to see how it turns out! --Rolandcharlotte (talk) 15:15, 8 April 2015 (UTC)