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== Neutrality ==


As this article talks way more about the Jews that have the disease, and not the others, I will be adding a neutrality tag. Some instances of it are:
* [[Tay–Sachs disease#Screening success with Ashkenazi Jews]]
* [[Tay–Sachs disease#Impact on Jewish communities]]
~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 01:35, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
::If you look at the academic literature such as this paper PMID: 12108829 it mentions Jewish people as the carrier state is 10 times more common and thus homozygous individuals would occur in 1 in 3600 as opposed to 1 in 360,000 in the general population.[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 13:23, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
:::Yes, but there was [[WP:UNDUE]] weight there. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 14:27, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
I removed one section that was just poor. But the rest... [[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 15:01, 28 December 2011 (UTC)


THE IRISH/ GAELS {? i.e. Inclusive of Scottish possibly other Celtic origin? Is this why the French/Gallic have the trait?}
I added a sentence about the Irish based on a couple articles read recently i.e. http://articles.philly.com/2012-03-10/news/31143221_1_cherry-red-spot-carrier-rate-day-parade but maybe I should remove this? Also, presumably this needs more rigorous sourcing and some brief in-article discussion.


Sorry to intrude my thought is we're coming up on St. Patrick's day and probably most doctors aren't looking for this disease in Irish/Scottish Gaels and it might be of some benefit to update this article in time for St. Pat's? There are more pressing concerns, I'm sure - [mrk1971] <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/38.111.36.79|38.111.36.79]] ([[User talk:38.111.36.79|talk]]) 18:09, 15 March 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
== Epidemiology ==


I feel like this is a really interesting topic, but that it really isn't lay (someone unfamiliar with the topic) friendly. Could someone perhaps make it more reader friendly? I'm not suggesting dumbing it down, but the ideas expressed are interesting to those who don't have as strong a biology background, too.--[[User:Chadamir|Chadamir]] 00:56, 17 Apr 2005 (UTC)
:Here's an article that is possibly more reader-friendly: http://www.nytimes.com/2011/10/16/opinion/sunday/notes-from-a-dragon-mom.html?src=tp&smid=fb-share [[User:SeanAhern|SeanAhern]] ([[User talk:SeanAhern|talk]]) 00:25, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
:I agree. Three apparently disparate groups all have a 1 in 27 chance of being a carrier? It would be great to add a treatment of: how did this eventuate? [[User:24.127.110.118|24.127.110.118]] 05:40, 16 August 2005 (UTC)


== [[WP:SS]] ==
* Check this out, and then put the TB resistance thing back in:


I suggest that we get this as [[Wikipedia:Summary Style]]. Getting [[Tay–Sachs disease#Genetics]], [[Tay–Sachs disease#Prevention]], [[Tay–Sachs disease#History]], [[Tay–Sachs disease#Society and culture]], and [[Tay–Sachs disease#Research directions]]. The page is {{PAGESIZE:Tay–Sachs disease}} bytes long, justifying the splitting. I'm posting this here as I won't be bold here as it's pretty fustrating being reverted for these things. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 19:04, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/evolution/educators/course/session7/explain_b_pop1.html
:Sure I support summarizing and creating [[Prevention of Tay-Sachs disease]] etc. with a main link.[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 19:13, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
::I will. Also webciting some references. Lets try to get this to GA. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 19:21, 28 December 2011 (UTC)


== A-Class ==
The PBS (Public Broadcasting System) is not a refereed scientific journal or source. PBS is normally a good source of popular science information, but the lay science writers who work on their projects can occasionally be wanna-believers. Furthermore, the junior science writers who summarize PBS programs on the PBS.org website do not necessarily understand the gist of what the senior science writers who actually work on PBS programs are talking about. I bet the real PBS program was comprehensive and presented all sides, with the tuberculosis theory shown as what it is, only a theory. At this time, no carefully constructed empirical scientific studies have been published and reviewed for either the tuberculosis theory or the intelligence theory. Let's agree to wait for real scientific results before we publish it in this encyclopedia. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 02:30, 25 April 2006 (UTC)


As some editors have improved the article even more from when it was re-promoted, I suggest that we get get this back. It is getting peer reviewed and I've requested copyediting. This article stands a chance at FA (I think). Apparently, we need 2 uninvolved users to endorse promoting this. So if you're uninvolved and think this article should be A-class, you may sign and comment. You may also participate in the peer review. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 01:46, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
::To those who keep talking about old science programs on public television ... remember that a lot of money is invested in creating television programs. Even when the information they contain becomes obsolete, public television stations still show them. Indeed, they have an incentive to show them, because their rental fees are lower (since the programs are old). The old science wasn't bad. It just didn't have the same information as the new science. So, enough of PBS and enough of BBC. Support public television so that they'll have enough money to develop good new programming! --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 08:33, 27 July 2006 (UTC)
:Define uninvolved? - [[User:SudoGhost|Sudo]][[User_talk:SudoGhost#top|Ghost]] 01:52, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
::I interpret "uninvolved" as not making numerous editorial changes. I don't think your one revert to this article disbars you from voting. Cheers, [[User:Magister Scienta|<span style="color:#4682B4;">Magister Scienta</span>]][[User talk:Magister Scienta|<sup><span style="color:#228B22;">talk</span></sup>]] 02:17, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
:::I guess that it may be changed now, as 2 people have supported, and it's been over a week. No opposes either. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 11:05, 30 January 2012 (UTC)


===A-class promotion vote===
24.127.110.118 writes ... "Three apparently disparate groups all have a 1 in 27 chance of being a carrier? It would be great to add a treatment of: how did this eventuate?"
====Supports====
# After reviewing the article, I support its bid for A status. [[User:Magister Scienta|<span style="color:#4682B4;">Magister Scienta</span>]][[User talk:Magister Scienta|<sup><span style="color:#228B22;">talk</span></sup>]] 02:12, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
# Likewise. - [[User:SudoGhost|Sudo]][[User_talk:SudoGhost#top|Ghost]] 10:15, 30 January 2012 (UTC)


====Opposes====
All these populations (Ashkenazi Jews, French Canadians, Cajuns) originated with small founder populations of a few thousand individuals that remained genetically isolated for many generations thereafter. In a small founder population, genetic drift can easily amplify a mutation found in only a single individual in the founder population. Actually, 1 in 27 is not very common. Homozygotes would still be very rare. Try cystic fibrosis for one that really is common. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 02:37, 25 April 2006 (UTC)


==NIH.GOV==
====Neutral====
#We do not have A class at [[WP:MED]]. Thus while it may be increased for other projects it would remain B class for WP:MED. I would recommend that the next step to FA would be a GA nomination which you have already done.[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 03:12, 31 January 2012 (UTC)
#:I meant for WP 0.5 assessment here, not the WPMED. A class is better than GA class, and the A indicates for a bit more work before FA, of which I will want for this article. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 11:32, 31 January 2012 (UTC)
#::Great as long as that is the understanding. --[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 00:28, 1 February 2012 (UTC)
=== Discussion ===
As there were no (significant) opposes (only a neutral about a specific WikiProject), and on the criteria page, it states nothing about the closing, but about 2 uninvolved reviewers, I'm closing this and setting WP:JEW and 0.5 as A-class. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 11:55, 7 February 2012 (UTC)


==Section on management==
http://www.ninds.nih.gov/disorders/taysachs/taysachs.htm
We need a section that discusses management and prognosis. Before we had:
<blockquote>There is currently no cure or treatment for TSD. Even with the best care, children with Infantile TSD die by the age of 5, and the progress of Late-Onset TSD can only be slowed, not reversed. Although experimental work is underway, no current medical treatment exists for infantile TSD. Patients receive palliative care to ease the symptoms. Infants are given feeding tubes when they can no longer swallow. Improvements in palliative care have somewhat lengthened the survival of children with TSD, but no current therapy is able to reverse or delay the progress of the disease.</blockquote> but of course there where no refs... [[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 03:17, 31 January 2012 (UTC)
:Working on it. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 10:44, 31 January 2012 (UTC)


== Have begun copyedit ==
This symptons section of this wikipedia article is almost identical to the one above. Changes should be made as not to plagiarize.


Hi. I've begun a copyedit of the article, although grading that I need to do will probably limit me from going further tonight. I've noted three or so places where clarification is needed. (In some respects, it will help that I'm a geneticist; in other respects, it may hurt because I won't see places where someone less familiar with the material would have problems. I will ask for it to be looked over by a non-geneticist copyeditor after I'm finished.) [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 22:17, 3 April 2012 (UTC)
:While I belive this would still be plagarizm, this would not be a problem for WP because, as the source is the NIH, that web page is PD. [[User:Xxpor | '''xxpor''']] ( [[user_talk:xxpor | Talk]] | [[Special:Contributions/Xxpor | Contribs]] ) 16:29, 20 June 2006 (UTC) See: {{tl|PD-USGov-HHS-NIH}}{{tl|commons ok}}
::Good point about NIH being public domain. But one more thing. Disease descriptions from NIH are not original works of a single author. They are the result of evidence-based medicine, and are based on the work and observations of many people. It is in fact desirable that all stakeholders in the battle against disease use the same descriptions of disease. Don't invent your own language. Since this is an encyclopedia article to help non-techies understand a techie issue, it is okay to simplify language here, if you have the knowledge and skills to do so. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 08:39, 27 July 2006 (UTC)


:I'm done with my first run-through. I've tagged a number of places for clarification; please take a look at these. [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 12:27, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
==Diamond theory==
I removed the theory by Diamond that tay-sachs would cause resistance to tbc. The following reference was the only thing I could find on it and it explicitely says they are not related:
{{cite journal | author=Spyropoulos B, Moens PB, Davidson J, Lowden JA | title=Heterozygote advantage in Tay-Sachs carriers? | journal=Am J Hum Genet | year=1981 | pages=375-80 | volume=33 | issue=3 | id=PMID 7246543}} : ''It is unlikely that there is any advantage to being a Tay-Sachs carrier insofar as resistance to tuberculosis is concerned.'' --[[User:Wouterstomp|WS]] 17:47, 5 January 2006 (UTC)


::I think it's about time I declared the copyediting done for now - I will continue to keep an eye on things during the GA review, to fix anything applicable during that. [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 17:31, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
You reverted my edit of 17:01 on 05 Jan (I wasn't logged on so my username isn't on it) -- fair enough, I was wrong. However to delete the Diamond TB theory w/o also deleting the following pgf ('Puzzlingly, it has been estimated...') is also wrong. The paragraph refers to the selection pressure in favour of the homozygous advantage and is meaningless w/o the Diamond reference.


== Suggestions ==
There *is* evidence showing the grandparents of children who died of TSD were less likely to have died from TB (it was this evidence the authors of the paper you cite were responding to). It is also worth noting that four of the so-called 'jewish diseases' (Tay-Sachs, Gaucher's, Newmann-Pick etc.) are Lipid Storage Disorders, and all affect common metabolic pathways, facts that cannot reasonably be ascribed to chance. Whether this is due to Tuberculosis or not I can't say.
I don't have time right now to do a full GA Review. I might get to it this weekend, depending on work. Here are a few suggestions in the interim:
*There are a lot of mentions of "rare" and "more rare" - some referenced incidence data would be an improvement.
*The genetics section could be rewritten to more traditional standards - there shouldn't be the need for quotes when describing basic recessive inheritance.
::Done. [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 02:23, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
*The "i.e." statements could be eliminated.
::I've removed one of them; should the one regarding heterozygosity be done via "&ndash; heterozygous &ndash;", or what? [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 02:23, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
*The "clarification needed" and "citation needed" tags could be considered criteria for a quick fail.
::Most if not all of those were added by me in the process of copyediting; I would prefer them not be used as reasons for a quick fail, but instead as reasons to delay evaluating the respective criteria. [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 02:23, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
*The treatment, diagnosis and management sections focus almost exclusively on the infantile form. There are clinical trials for adult onset Tay-Sachs treatment.
::There is one sentence about late-onset Tay-Sachs now in the treatment section, and another about research into treatments for late-onset in the research section; are there other drugs under investigation that aren't mentioned? [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 02:23, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
*The section about hexosaminidase needs expanding. ''HEXA'' mutations vs. ''HEXB'' mutations, Hexosaminidase A, B & S, etc.
This is a really good article. It needs some work, but this is a complex subject and it is a good start. [[User:Canada Hky|Canada Hky]] ([[User talk:Canada Hky|talk]]) 01:23, 10 April 2012 (UTC)


== Some comments ==
I've gathered a few refs.:


*Shouldn't hexosaminidase be lowercase in the first sentence?
{{cite journal | author=Myrianthopoulos NC, Melnick M | title=Tay-Sachs disease: a genetic-historical view of selective advantage. | journal=Prog Clin Biol Res | year=1977 | pages=95-106 | volume=18 | issue=? | id=PMID 341183}}
::I'll have to check [[MOS:LEAD]] on that. [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 19:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
*Maybe progressive would be a less emotionally loaded word than relentless.
::Corrected. [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 19:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
*Adult onset/late onset seem like they should be lowercase.
::I had thought I'd caught everyplace where they weren't; I'll take another look. [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 19:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
*I noticed [[WP:OVERLINK]]ing with French Canadian, for example.
::Fixed. (I use a script to spot duplicate links and it didn't there due to a redirect.) [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 19:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
*Seems like it should be "Researchers claimed" instead of claim when discussing the fur trader hypothesis. [[User:Biosthmors|Biosthmors]] ([[User talk:Biosthmors|talk]]) 18:43, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
::Fixed. Thanks! [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 19:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)


== "Tay-Sachs" without "disease" as colloquial? ==
{{cite journal | author= Zlotogora, J and Bach, G | title=The Possibility of a Selection Process in the Ashkenazi Jewish Population. | journal=Am. J. Hum. Genet. | year=2003 | pages=438-440 | volume=73 | issue=? | id=PMID 12868052}}


Axl recently added "disease" back to one instance of "Tay-Sachs" that I'd removed it from, calling it "a colloquial phrase" in the edit summary. I'd like to know what the opinions of others are; for mine, I note that NCBI uses the phrase "Tay-Sachs" to refer to "Tay-Sachs disease" in [http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmedhealth/PMH0002390/ http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmedhealth/PMH0002390/]. [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 21:43, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
{{cite journal | author=Zlotogora J, Zeigler M, Bach G. | title=Selection in favor of lysosomal storage disorders? | journal=Am J Hum Genet | year=1988 | pages=271-3 | volume=42 | issue=2 | id=PMID 3124612}}
:Most literature uses the phrases interchangeably, but for every source that uses one, I am sure one that goes in the opposite direction can be found. The somewhat standard abbreviation for the adult onset form is LOTS (late onset...), ignoring disease completely. I would suggest that introducing the abbreviation "TSD" and using that consistently throughout would be a better solution. [[User:Canada Hky|Canada Hky]] ([[User talk:Canada Hky|talk]]) 23:28, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
:: I have just discovered this discussion by chance. To Allens: it is particularly poor form to start a discussion about one of my edits without informing me. [[User:Axl|<span style="color:#808000;">'''Axl'''</span>]] <span style="color:#3CB371;">¤</span> [[User talk:Axl|<span style="color:#808000; font-size:smaller;">[Talk]</span>]] 20:42, 16 June 2012 (UTC)


::: Given that you'd edited the article, I thought you'd watchlisted it. (The only time I don't watchlist an article I've edited is if I don't care about the matter.) The discussion is about the edit, not you; as far as I am aware, a notification is generally only considered necessary if one is discussing an editor's general behavior, not an edit specific to an article. [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 20:50, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
-- [[User:Dduff442|Dduff442]] 15:42, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
::: I have invited WikiProject Medicine to comment. [[User:Axl|<span style="color:#808000;">'''Axl'''</span>]] <span style="color:#3CB371;">¤</span> [[User talk:Axl|<span style="color:#808000; font-size:smaller;">[Talk]</span>]] 21:08, 16 June 2012 (UTC)


:::: Good thought. [[User:Allens|Allens]] ([[User_talk:Allens|talk]] &#124; [[Special:Contributions/Allens|contribs]]) 00:22, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
: Yes, the other paragraph should also be removed, which I just did. Those theories are very interesting, however much of it is still speculation. Zlogotora et al conclude that the selection process is most likely nonrandom but also that that doesn't exclude the possibility of [[genetic drift]]. ([http://www.pubmedcentral.gov/articlerender.fcgi?tool=pubmed&pubmedid=12868052 Full text of that article]) Even more interesting is a study from the same author on genetic diseases in palestinian arabs (PMID 11977175 [http://www3.interscience.wiley.com/cgi-bin/fulltext/93514221/HTMLSTART Full text]) --[[User:Wouterstomp|WS]] 20:03, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
I am also very interested in having a look at PMID 3344043 but I don't have access to that here... --[[User:Wouterstomp|WS]] 20:07, 8 January 2006 (UTC)


:I'm not sure if Allens should have alerted Axl separately, but I agree with Axl that using "Tay-Sachs" without "disease" is indeed a colloquialism. Pubmedhealth uses colloquialisms, but we shouldn't. [[User:Jfdwolff|JFW]]&nbsp;&#124;&nbsp;[[User_talk:Jfdwolff|<small>T@lk</small>]] 22:50, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
The investigations of Zlogotora et al are motivated, of course, rather than random. That four random mutations should each result in a lipid storage disorder is a fantastically unlikely possibility. I don't think a mention of heterozygote advantage and/or of the ongoing investigations would be out of place. However, you're the expert so I'll leave it at that - [[User:Dduff442|Dduff442]] 13:53, 9 January 2006 (UTC)
::Don't really have a firm opinion on this, but [https://www.google.com/search?sugexp=chrome,mod=9&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8&q=%22Tay-Sachs%22#q=%22Tay-Sachs%22&hl=en&safe=off&prmd=imvns&ei=IWTdT8TuD9Dk6QHA7dSGCw&start=10&sa=N&bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.r_cp.r_qf.,cf.osb&fp=934f7434d4aff678&biw=1366&bih=653 search engine testing] certainly seems to suggest that "disease" almost always follows "Tay-Sachs". [[User:NickCT|NickCT]] ([[User talk:NickCT|talk]]) 05:03, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
:::"Tay-Sachs disease", in the spirit of [[WP:MOS]] (''Plain English works best''), including [[WP:JARGON]]. An article in a general encyclopedia written for a broad readership requires a different tone to many publications on PubMed. —[[User:MistyMorn|MistyMorn]] ([[User talk:MistyMorn|talk]]) 12:25, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
::*'''Tay-Sachs disease''' should be the default unless or until someone collects a list of precedent use from major reliable sources of '''Tay-Sachs''' as a preferred layman term. Right now, such a precedent has not been presented. [[User:Bluerasberry|<span style="background:#cedff2;color:#11e">''' Blue Rasberry '''</span>]][[User talk:Bluerasberry|<span style="cursor:help"><span style="background:#cedff2;color:#11e">(talk)</span></span>]] 16:08, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
::* I saw the note at WT:MED. I don't think that there's any compelling need to specify "disease", except in the first use. It's a bit like arguing over whether you should always spell it out or if it's okay to use an initialism. IMO "Tay-Sachs" is no better or worse than "TSD", which we would commonly accept. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 03:57, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
::*Pubmed Health and the ICD9 still say Tay-Sachs disease [http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmedhealth/PMH0002390/] would like to see evidence of the literature doing this before we follow.[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]])(please leave replies on my talk page) 20:03, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
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== Heterozygote advantage ==
The Japanese genome database [http://www.genome.jp/dbget-bin/www_bget?omim+272800], which is in English, contains a summary of research in peer-reviewed bioscience journals, and a complete list of papers on Tay-Sachs. I agree with [[User:Wouterstomp|WS]] that no relationship has been proven at this time. Therefore, I have modified the article to present arguments for selective advantage as an unproven hypothesis. I am a critic bigtime of the Cochran theory, but until it is tested, it should be mentioned here also as a theory. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 03:14, 18 April 2006 (UTC)


My (admittedly cursory) reading indicates that a) there is a widespread idea that Tay-Sachs provides [[heterozygote advantage]] in the form of resistance to [[tuberculosis]], and b) this idea is not actually correct. As well, the article's edit history and talkpage archive indicates that (a) has been added to, and removed from, the article more than once.
== restored add ==


I propose that the article contain a brief section explaining the speculations about tuberculosis, ''and'', immediately thereafter, an explanation of why it's wrong. "In <year>, <researcher> proposed that Tay-Sachs provides heterozygote advantage in the form of increased tuberculosis resistance, because of <reasons>; however, in <year>, <other researcher> showed that this is not the case, because of <reasons>. Other possible forms of heterozygote advantage for Tay-Sachs have been proposed, including <X> and <Y>." (www.scirp.org/journal/PaperInformation.aspx?paperID=21701, for instance, proposes that TS carriers have "a higher rate of neuronal growth, and thus greater learning capacity"; I have no idea if it's right.) [[User:DragonflySixtyseven|DS]] ([[User talk:DragonflySixtyseven|talk]]) 13:54, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
"Resistance to tuberculosis" and moved reference.[[User:Mikereichold|Mikereichold]] 13:34, 29 January 2006 (UTC)
: Unlinking predatory journal. <b>[[User Talk:JzG|Guy]]</b> <small>([[User:JzG/help|Help!]])</small> 19:43, 12 March 2017 (UTC)

== The article needs some work about Irish cases. POV==
== vandalism ==

Though I agree that the vandalism need to be removed, I must admit with vandal [[User:69.164.79.65|69.164.79.65]]: Tay-Sachs does, indeed, suck. [[User:Deborah-jl|Deborah-jl]] <sub>[[User talk:Deborah-jl|Talk]]</sub> 06:06, 18 March 2006 (UTC)

== Tuberculosis ==

In fact, what was on the page before was misinformation, and is completely unfounded. The idea that carriers have greater resistance to TB has never been proven. This is only one of a number of theories that has been put forth. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 09:08, 17 April 2006 (UTC)

== Pathogenisis Section ==

The material that I removed from this section appeared to have been copied verbatim from elsewhere, and it was not clear that the material was uncopyrighted. I have instead rewritten what was there in a simpler form, giving as an example the most common form of Tay-Sachs, caused by a 4bp insertion. (The Ashkenazi Jewish form). Note that over 90 Tay-Sachs mutations exist, that new ones are reported every year. Also note that limited genetic testing has been done on much of the world's population. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 09:25, 17 April 2006 (UTC)

== Backup to a previous version ==

Neutrality:

I think some of your edits were well intentioned, but you haven't read the underlying literature, and in several cases I found that you had changed the entire meaning of what was said. For example, the disease is a genetic disorder, and changing "Ashkenazi Jews" to "Jews" is not a change to more neutral language. The disease simply does not occur among non-Ashkenazi Jews.

I don't happen to agree with Mr. Cochran's theories, but your deletion of several words from that paragraph made it meaningless and completely changed the meaning of what was said.

While the Chicago Manual, written for works in the humanities, recommends the spelling out numbers up to 100 in some cases, the style manuals of all technical publications recommend using figures, except in a few cases at the editor's discretion. Technical articles tend to contain a great many numbers, and the use of figures makes them more accurate and readable.

I see that you are a high school student. Editing requires a great deal of experience and a large base of knowledge. I suggest you stay away from editing the more technical articles on Wikipedia until you have more experience.

--[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 07:22, 24 May 2006 (UTC)

== Style Notes ==

I have spent some time today cleaning up the references and notes. I have put them all into a single style and format. Please follow these guidelines as new sources of information become available.

* This is a highly technical article, but it is meant to be written in a way that is accessible to all educated people who speak English, not just to specialists. Since it in a technical style, please use technical style for numbers, not Chicago Manual.
* The Notes section is for original and primary source materials that provide the source for a specific section within the article. When possible these should be refereed journal articles, except perhaps where they are the source of an untested theory, like the TB or intelligence theories.
* The reference section is for general collections of information. It is an especially good place to have links to those databases that are updated regularly with new information, like the Online Mendelian Inheritance database and the NCBI database.
* External links is a good place to provide access to outside sources of information, especially those that are accessible. However, these are not primary sources of information and should not be added as notes for a particular section or paragraph. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 23:53, 26 July 2006 (UTC)

== Dr. Joanne Kurtzberg and her research (Duke University) ==

Some person, who I am sure is well meaning, keeps adding a sentence that claims that '''Dr. Joanne Kurtzberg''' at [[Duke University]] has cured several cases of Tay-Sachs Disease. I am aware that this research is underway. What you report may even be true at this time, but it has not been reported yet in a medical or scientific journal.

I took the trouble to look into what her work is about. She has indeed had promising results with [[Krabbe disease]], another liposomal storage disease that occurs on this metabolic pathway, but it is genetically unrelated. I believe that the personal who keeps adding the information to this page does not understand the Duke University research to date, and has misread the results. Research by Dr. Kurtzberg has been reported by Duke University in a press release.

I sincerely hope that Dr. Kurtzberg and her colleagues achieve success with their research. I hope you (the person who keeps adding this unwanted material to this page) understand that you may actually be doing a disservice to people by posting information you do not understand. At best, you may be creating false hopes for some families. And at worst you, you may be spreading false complacency and misinformation about disease.

Medical and scientific research depends on a system of [[peer review]]. Research is not considered valid until it has been reviewed and accepted by others in the field who are qualified to do so. I ask that you stand back and not keep adding possible misinformation to this page.

All of the studies cited by this article are peer-reviewed studies. I want this page to be a source that families concerned about disease, or couples concerned about conceiving a child, can read with confidence and understanding. I follow research on this disease very closely. When I hear that definitive results have been published, I will quickly read them and add to this article. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 05:57, 16 August 2006 (UTC)

:If this unverified addition continues the article can be temporarily semi-protected (see [[WP:SPP]]) to prevent users who are not logged in from editing the page, although that should be used only if the frequence of additions are hard to keep up with - for now just keep reverting. --[[User:Apers0n|apers0n]] 09:33, 16 August 2006 (UTC)

Thank you. I am simply not able to monitor this article that frequently. I read your link about what semi-protection is. All that I ask is that only registered users modify it. Is there a lower level of semiprotection. The misinformation that this person placed on this page was here for several weeks while I was on vacation. Perhaps regular admins or editors who like to monitor such things could pay attention to this kind of problem (persistent misinformation) as well. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 11:49, 16 August 2006 (UTC)

:Now that the issue has been raised with the Medical Genetics Wikiproject the article will be monitored regularly by members and any edits relating to this issue reverted immediately. If the problem persists then the article will be semiprotected. Thank you for your valuable contributions. --[[User:Apers0n|apers0n]] 13:00, 16 August 2006 (UTC)

::If you're fed up with reverting or just they start to try it more, leave us a message on the project. But in the next few days, we will monitor it. :) [[User:NCurse|NCurse]] [[Image:Edu science.png|16px]]<sub> [[User talk:NCurse|work]]</sub> 16:17, 16 August 2006 (UTC)

== Dr. Kurtzberg ==

Dr. Kurtzberg has, in fact, saved the lives of babies with Tay Sachs. Duke will verify the transplants and the success. More immediately, see the NY Times article this past week: http://www.nytimes.com/2006/08/24/nyregion/24disease.html?ref=nyregion.

To be clear, this is not an area in which there need be extensive peer review - either the transplants are happening or they are not; either the babies live or they don't. And in this case, the transplants are happening and at least some babies are living. Families with dying children should know of this option.

:There is a one sentence description of the research underway at Duke University in the section on gene therapy. When Dr. Kurtzberg and her colleagues report on their research, I will see to it that their work is summarized here immediately. In fact, the article in the New York Times did not report a cure. It reported that the child achieved neurological improvement. There are already some extremely good resources that a family or physician can use to find out about work in progress. Let's have Wikipedia be a source only for information that is qualified by peer review, so that we are not creating false hopes and spreading possibly inaccurate or incomplete information. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 06:22, 28 August 2006 (UTC)

== Dr. Michael Kaback, first mass genetic testing ==

I removed this passage which was added to the article a few days ago. I think it could become an excellent addition to this page, but first we need for it to be sourced.

* The world's first successful mass screening for Tay-Sachs Disease, indeed for any disease, was planned and executed by Dr. Michael Kaback, of Johns Hopkins University Hospital, in March of 1971 in the Wasington, D.C. suburb of Bethesda Maryland. Dr. Kaback's meticulous planning of every aspect of this land-mark genetic screening including community liaison, blood-draw procedure, laboratory set-up, and assay protocol and genetic counseling resulted in a flawless initial screening which demonstrated the efficacy and value of voluntary mass genetic screening of identifiable at-risk populations. Dr. Kaback's success was quickly emulated in cities throughout North America, Canada, Israel and Western Europe.

What is written here sounds like it was drawn from the [[Haverford College]] public relations "famous alumni" bulletin, or some such source. Would the author of this section please provide us with published sources such as article references in referred journals where Michael Kaback's work is described!

Kaback is one of the authors of a book about Tay-Sachs disease, published by Academic Press. Does Kaback describe this event in that book, or is that book purely a scientific description of the disease? The book sells for well over $100 and is not something you would find anywhere but in a very complete medical library. Please don't give that book as a reference unless you have access to it and have checked it. If so, you could use that book as a source. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 22:02, 5 March 2007 (UTC)

* A handful of pages from the introduction to Kaback's book are available on Amazon. Kaback reports there on where to find a description of the initial screenings. I'll have to see if the complete title is in my local medical library. --[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 22:35, 5 March 2007 (UTC)

== Re-assessing to B-class ==
I moved the assessment from A-class to B-class because large portions of the article are still uncited. A-class is an article which is almost ready for [[WP:FA|featured status]], with only minor editing still needed. Articles that aren't fully cited won't pass [[WP:GAC]] and aren't almost ready for FAC. There's not much left to do here, though, other than finish citing the article, and make sure it conforms with [[WP:MEDMOS]]. I think once the article is fully cited, it certainly warrants A-class. Regards, [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<font color="green">Georgia</font>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 23:38, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

: Sandy. Since I have done most of the footnoting and organizing on this article, please help me out by adding a cite tag anyplace where you think one is needed, but where there isn't one now. I know the sources materials, and I can add the appropriate citation if one is needed. The general information in the article, that which simply isn't controversial and doesn't have to track back to a specific scientific paper, comes from the National Institute of Neurological Disorders and Stroke page, which is the first citation, as well as the main PMID page about the disease, which has the latest evidence medicine.

: I think a better approach than footnoting every sentence is to list those two articles as the general external sources. They are already in the footnotes, of course. But one of the weaknesses of the "footnote every sentence in the article" approach is that the footnotes themselves are frequently no accurate, or they reference the wrong article, or the article they reference does not say what some editor thought they said.--[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 23:51, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

::I'm not a fan of peppering a well-written article with fact tags; can you go through and add the most obvious first, and then I'll recheck? Most of it can probably be cited to NINDS &mdash; do you know how to use named refs? You can see from my examples; I'll name the NINDS ref, and then you can just add <nowiki> <ref name = "NINDS"/ > </nowiki> after anything that can be cited to them. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<font color="green">Georgia</font>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 00:24, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

:OK, I added about a half dozen fact tags, and I also picked up a few missing wikilinks. An A-class article should be above what would pass [[WP:GAC]] and almost at [[WP:FA|featured quality]]; the article wouldn't pas GAC or FAC without thorough citation, and wouldn't likely pass [[WP:FAC]] without conformance to [[WP:MEDMOS]], and a bit more attention to wikilinking, but it's a superb article and, IMO, with the remaining few citations added, it can be considered A-class. I also bumped the assessment to high per Metzenberg's post to my talk page about the research significance of the disease. (For examples of medical articles that have recently passed FAC/FAR, see [[Influenza]], [[Tuberculosis]], [[Coeliac disease]], [[Immune system]] and [[Tourette syndrome]]). [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<font color="green">Georgia</font>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 11:29, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

::Also, this reference is missing a publisher, and it doesn't appear to be a peer-reviewed source (looks like a personal website):
::*Gregory Cochran, Jason Hardy, and Henry Harpending. Natural History of Ashkenazi Intelligence (PDF).
::A better source for that &mdash; or at least the information of where it was originally published if it is a peer-reviewed source &mdash; would be good. [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<font color="green">Georgia</font>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 11:47, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

Sandy, a citation about HEXA enzyme and [[blood-brain barrier]] isn't needed. That's general knowledge in this case. ('''All''' large molecules are unable to cross the blood-brain barrier.) Better that the reader clicks on the wikilink to read the wikipedia page on [[blood-brain barrier]] for general discussion of the concept.

The Cochran-Harpending article is published, but by having a link to it in PDF format, the reader is actually able to read the article itself. The journal in which it is published charges quite a high fee to read the article. IN my opinion, it's a terrible article and a lousy journal, but it has been in the news a great deal, including both the New York Times and the Economist. So, a lot of people may be coming to this page because of an interest in that article. It could have both sources. Note that there is a link to [[Gregory Cochran]] himself, and that full documentation is available on that page.--[[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] 10:14, 13 May 2007 (UTC)

:Looking good! I'm going to post to both medical WikiProjects so others will look over the article for an A-class assessment. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Medicine#Re-assessments_and_Tay-Sachs] [[User:SandyGeorgia|Sandy<font color="green">Georgia</font>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 12:15, 14 May 2007 (UTC)

Depromoted again. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 01:05, 30 December 2011 (UTC)

== Expansion of Historical Significance Section ... from the 1880s to the 1960s ==

This is work in progress. Here is a preview. Comment please.

:With the development and acceptance of the [[germ theory of disease]] in the 1860s and 1870s, the possibility that science could explain and even prevent or cure illness prompted medical doctors to undertake more precise description and diagnosis of disease. Warren Tay and Bernard Sachs, two physicians of the late 19th century, described the progression of the disease precisely and provided differential diagnostic criteria to distinguish it from other neurological disorders with similar symptoms.

:Bernard Sachs, who recognized that the disease had a familial basis, proposed that the disease should be called ''amaurotic familial idiocy''. However, its genetic basis was still poorly understood. Although [[Gregor Mendel]] had published his article on the genetics of peas in 1865, Mendel’s paper was largely forgotten for more than a generation, not rediscovered by other scientists until 1899. Thus, the Mendelian model for explaining Tay-Sachs was unavailable to scientists and medical practitioners of the time. The first edition of the Jewish Encyclopdia, published in 12 volumes between 1901 and 1906, described what was then known as amaurotic familial idiocy:

Source: cite web url=”http://www.jewishencyclopedia.com/view.jsp?artid=83&letter=I”

::''It is a curious fact that amaurotic family idiocy, a rare and fatal disease of children, occurs mostly among Jews. The largest number of cases have been observed in the United States—over thirty in number. It was at first thought that this was an exclusively Jewish disease, because most of the cases at first reported were among Russian and Polish Jews; but recently there have been reported a few cases occurring in non-Jewish children. The chief characteristics of the disease are progressive mental and physical enfeeblement; weakness and paralysis of all the extremities; and marasmus, associated with symmetrical changes in the macula lutea. On investigation of the reported cases it has been found that neither consanguinity nor syphilitic, alcoholic, or nervous antecedents in the family history are factors in the etiology of the disease. No preventive measures have as yet been discovered, and no treatment has been of any benefit, all the cases having terminated fatally.''

:According to sociologist Shelley Reuter, early medical writing about Tay-Sachs disease from the time it was first described scientifically until the end of the Second World War era, often treated it as a Jewish disease and in the process contributed to a characterization of Jews as a racial group. This treatment mirrored the view of genetic disease in society as a whole, in a time when the [[Eugenics]] movement was ascendant.

Source: cite journal ''The Canadian Journal of Sociology'', Volume 31, Number 3, Summer 2006 author=Reuter, Shelley. title=The Genuine Jewish Type: Racial Ideology and Anti-Immigrationism in Early Medical Writing about Tay-Sachs Disease. pp. 291-323.

:Even the Jewish Encyclopedia reflected such a racial characterization of Tay-Sachs disease and Jewry:

::''In the present state of knowledge of the etiology of idiocy and imbecility in general the only cause of their frequency among Jews that may be considered is the neurotic taint of the race. Children descending from a neurotic ancestry have nervous systems which are very unstable, and they are often incapable of tiding safely over the crises attending growth and development. They are often idiots or imbeciles.''

Source: cite web url=”http://www.jewishencyclopedia.com/view.jsp?artid=83&letter=I”

:With the rediscovery of Mendel’s work after 1900, scientists began to identify human genetic diseases that could be explained by Mendelian patterns. By the 1930s, several hundred cases of Tay-Sachs disease had been reported in medical literature. David Slome, a researcher in the Department of Social Biology at the University of London, summarizing the knowledge of time, concluded that Tay-Sachs disease was caused by a single genetic defect, and that it followed a autosomal recessive pattern of inheritance. Slome also presented evidence that Tay-Sachs was not exclusively a Jewish phenomenon.

Source: Slome D. 1933. The genetic basis of amaurotic family idiocy. Journal of Genetics 27:3 363-376. url=”http://www.ias.ac.in/jarch/jgenet/27/363.pdf”

Still to do on this section ... describe how the advances in genetics and biochemistry from the 1930s to the 1960s furthered understanding of Tay-Sachs disease. [[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] ([[User talk:Metzenberg|talk]]) 07:06, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

== Incorrect spelling in reference #4 ==

This is a small nit to pick, but the first author of cited reference #4 should be O'Brien JS, not O'Brine JS. I knew Dr. O'Brien many years ago and noticed this misspelling of his name. I did not know how to edit a reference that is protected. Perhaps the original author would like to do this. Here is a reference:

http://health.ucsd.edu/news/2001/Obrien.html
[[User:Dfuerpo|Dfuerpo]] ([[User talk:Dfuerpo|talk]]) 19:32, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
:Fixed, thank you.-<font face="cursive" color="#808080">[[User talk:gadfium|gadfium]]</font> 20:38, 19 March 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for pointing this out, and a question I have is how to properly credit the work of Kaback (public health) and O'Brien (biochemistry). O'Brien created the enzyme assay test, while Kaback worked out the detabils of mass carrier screening. Both were at UCSD, and they are coauthors on some papers. O'Brien's UCSD obituary is inaccurate with respect to what he actually discovered. O'Brien discovered the basis for TSD at the protein (enzyme) level. Actual identification of the gene and of specific mutations was not possible in 1969. [[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] ([[User talk:Metzenberg|talk]]) 09:02, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

== Concept of Lysosomal Storage Diseases ==

Here is another important article that made it possible to understand TSD.

* Hers, H.G. (1965) "Inborn lysosomal diseases" Gastroenterology 48 pp 625-633. Description of lysosomal storage diseases as a class of diseases.

Review article on history of understanding Lysosomal Storage Diseases

* Watts, Richard W.E. (2003) "A historical perspective of the glycosphingolipids and sphingolipidoses" Philosophical Transactions of the Royal Society of London 358 pp 975-983. [[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] ([[User talk:Metzenberg|talk]]) 08:59, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

== Population genetics -- to be added in a few days ==

In the wider sphere of debates within population genetics, the [[neutral allele theory]] and its successors have gained widespread recognition and acceptance. Modern papers on autosomal recessive genetic disease seldom speculate about heterozygote advantage; [[founder effects]] are regarded as a robust theory for explaining the prevalence of most genetic diseases. Population genetic studies of particular diseases often seek to identify the coalescence date for a mutation, based on linkage disequilibrium and probability theory, supplemented by historic and pedigree studies. Where there is continued discussion of heterozygote advantage, it is for mutations with ancient coalescence and a long history in human populations, such as [[cystic fibrosis]].


The Irish are given one passing, unsourced mention.
Sources:
Sources:
*Are you of Irish descent? Are you aware you may be a carrier for Tay-Sachs Disease? If you have at least 3 Irish grandparents and are 18 years or older, you may be eligible to receive carrier screening for Tay-Sachs disease at no cost to you.<ref>{{cite web|title=IRISH TAY-SACHS CARRIER STUDY|publisher=National Tay-Sachs & Allied Diseases
* James F. Crow's various retrospective articles on Motoo Kimura.
Associaton of Delaware Valley|website=http://www.tay-sachs.org/|url=http://www.tay-sachs.org/irish_taysachs_study.php}}</ref>
* Coalescent Theory: An Introduction. by Julia Sigwart
**Also[http://www.tay-sachs.org/taysachs_disease.php].
* Cystic fibrosis review article.
*Every person of Jewish, French-Canadian, Cajun or Irish heritage should be tested for Tay-Sachs carrier status.<ref>{{cite web|title=Genetic Diseases:What Is Tay-Sachs Disease?|publisher=National-Tay Sachs & Allied Diseases Association|website=http://www.ntsad-ny.org/|url=http://www.ntsad-ny.org/disease-taysachs.html}}</ref>
* The genetic basis of common diseases. By Richard Allen King, Jerome I. Rotter, Arno G. Motulsky, "Bad for homozygotes, good for heterozygotes" pages 53-56. ISBN=0195125827 [[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] ([[User talk:Metzenberg|talk]]) 11:20, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
*“I thought Tay Sachs was a Jewish disease,” says Cathy. The Mitchells, who live in Langhorne, then learned that this deadly inherited disease, which cripples and kills, is common among people of Irish descent. As many as 1 in 50 Irish Americans is a carrier.<ref>{{cite web|title=The Irish Risk for Tay-Sachs Disease|publisher=Irish Philadelphia|website=http://irishphiladelphia.com/|url=http://irishphiladelphia.com/2012/07/the-irish-risk-for-tay-sachs-disease/}}</ref>
*"It is not an exclusively Jewish genetic disease," says Miriam Blitzer, professor and geneticist at the University of Maryland School of Medicine, ''who says most cases today involve non-Jews. "We have been trying to teach that for years."''<ref>{{cite web|publisher=The Wall Street Journal|website=http://wsj.com/|title=Study Looks at Irish Risk for a Rare Fatal Disease|author=By AMY DOCKSER MARCUS|date=June 25, 2012|url=http://online.wsj.com/news/articles/SB10001424052702304458604577488842861558400}}</ref>
*The incidence of Tay-Sachs among babies born to Jews in North America has dropped 95 percent since efforts began to combat the deadly disease that strikes Jews of Ashkenazi descent disproportionately. In fact, most of the handful of babies born each year with Tay-Sachs are not Jewish, according to Dr. Michael Kaback, director of the California Tay-Sachs Disease Prevention Program in San Diego.<ref>{{cite web|title=Now more common in non-Jews: Years of genetic testing virtually erase Tay-Sachs|date= June 13, 2003|author= ABBY COHN|publisher=Jewish news weekly of Northern California|website=http://www.jweekl.com/|url=http://www.jweekly.com/article/full/20063/now-more-common-in-non-jews-years-of-genetic-testing-virtually-erase-tay-sa/}}</ref>
<references /> [[Special:Contributions/24.241.69.99|24.241.69.99]] ([[User talk:24.241.69.99|talk]]) 01:35, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
:Reminder. Do not remove NPOV tags until the situation is corrected. [[Special:Contributions/24.241.69.99|24.241.69.99]] ([[User talk:24.241.69.99|talk]]) 20:58, 26 June 2014 (UTC)


== 1 in 3600 figure for prevalence among Ashkenazim is misleading ==
Tay-Sachs biochemistry breakthrough article in 1969.
<ref>{{cite journal | author=Okada S, O'Brien JS | title=Tay-Sachs disease: generalized absence of a beta-D-N-acetylhexosaminidase component | journal=Science | date=1969 | volume=165 | pages=698-700}}</ref>


This number is misleading. If 1) 1 in 30 Ashkenazim are carriers; 2) All Ashkenazim marry (or have children exclusively with) other Ashkenazim; 3) There is no significant effort to avoid the development of Tay-Sachs disease, then the expected prevalence would be 1 in 3600 births. The first premise is at the lower end of estimates of the prevalence of carriers among Ashkenazim, which is arguably a poor choice, but is not wrong. The other two, however, are definitely incorrect, however, and result in a gross over-estimation of the actual frequency.
Second biochemistry article in 1969.<ref>{{cite journal | author=Kolodny EH, Brady RO, Volk BW | title=Demonstration of an alteration of ganglioside metabolism in Tay-Sachs disease | journal=Biochemical and Biophysical Research Communications | date=1969-10-22 | volume=37 | issue=3 | pages=526-531}}</ref>


Using the population information in [[Ashkenazi Jews]] we see that between 45% and 60% of Ashkenazim live in the United States, and between 70% and 88% of Ashkenazim live in either the US or Israel. Out-marriage is common among Ashkenazim in the US; and strong screening programs among the Ashkenazim exist in the United States and Israel. Reference 34 says that such programs in various countries have been shown to result in up to a 90% reduction in Tay-Sachs births. Ignoring the out-marriage issue, we would expect that the rate of Tay-Sachs births to be 1 in 360 wherever such screening is done. If we assume that there is no screening programs in any other country than the US and Israel (terrible assumption) then the expected prevalence of Tay-Sachs births among Ashkenazim worldwide is between 1 in 749 and 1 in 1332, a considerable reduction from 1 in 3600. This should be reduced further due to out-marriage and screening programs in other countries, but a higher prevalence of carriers would raise this somewhat.


The reference cited (reference 2) does say that "In this specific Jewish population, about one in 3,600 live births is affected" but this could only be true if the specific Jewish population is restricted to those Ashkenazim who marry other Ashkenazim (note: not other Jews) and who do not take part in screening, or who ignore the results. In any population of Ashkenazim where screening is used, the prevalence of Tay-Sachs births is 90% or greater reduced from 1 in 3600.
== Comparative genetic screening programs ==


I suggest that a more accurate reference be found or that a more specific description of what the 1 in 3600 figure be written.
<ref>{{cite book | first=Troy | last=Duster | title=Backdoor to Eugenics | publisher=Routledge | place=New York | date=2003 }}</ref>


[[User:TopherCooper|TopherCooper]] ([[User talk:TopherCooper|talk]]) 23:53, 29 October 2019 (UTC)


== Sachs ==
{{reflist}} [[User:Metzenberg|Metzenberg]] ([[User talk:Metzenberg|talk]]) 03:23, 22 April 2009 (UTC)


Tay-Sachs is a genetic disease. It happens when Chromosome 15 has a genetic problem. The problem is caused by a defective HEXA gene.[1] It is recessive, which means both parents must give the baby the defective gene for the baby to have Tay-Sachs. One in every twenty seven Jewish American has one defective gene and can give Tay-Sachs the defective gene to their child. The disease is very rare. It is most common in Jewish families.[2] There is a blood test to see if a person has the Tay Sachs gene. This blood test has helped reduce the number of babies born with Tay-Sachs. In 1800’s, there were 60 new cases and in the 21st century there were 5.
Troy Duster notes that while voluntary TSD screening achieved a high degree of success in Jewish communities, early screening programs for sickle-cell anemia met widespread resistance in African-American communities. Screening programs for sickle cell disease were often mandatory, and screening identified carriers as well as victims, yet no interventions or cures were available for patients. Screening was frequently regarded with suspicion, as a possible form of eugenic control. Some radical leaders even blamed white society for creating the disease, or ignoring its consequences.


Infants with the Tay-Sachs gene from both parents usually die of pneumonia or other infections during their first four years of life. Some symptoms include: lack of energy, loss of vision and motor skills (paralyzation), and seizures.[3] Tay–Sachs disease is usually first noticed in infants around six months old. They show an abnormally strong response to sudden noises or other stimulus. This is called the "startle response". The child may also be listlessness or have muscle stiffness (hypertonia). The disease is classified into several forms, which are based on the age when the neurological symptoms began. There is no known treatment for this disease. [[Special:Contributions/2601:344:C081:2AB0:A8FD:15CB:2E48:19B6|2601:344:C081:2AB0:A8FD:15CB:2E48:19B6]] ([[User talk:2601:344:C081:2AB0:A8FD:15CB:2E48:19B6|talk]]) 22:45, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
By comparison, Jewish communities cooperated because the political controls were seen to be sufficiently in the hands of the Jewish community.


== In my view Tay-Sachs carriers do have symptoms that are noticed by sciense ==
==Organization==
Began organizing per [[Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style_(medicine-related_articles)#Diseases.2Fdisorders.2Fsyndromes]]. Formatted images per Wiki policy.--[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 04:22, 16 June 2009 (UTC)


Hence i would like to suggest an edit such as: “carriers are considered to show no sign.”
==Images==
Removed a number of images as they did not add to the article as did not pertain to tay-sachs disease. A blood draw, a embyro patho section, a generic protein diagram, two people talking.


I would also like to use this opportunity to call researchers to research under FMRI brain activity of carriers under different condition of fatigue, nutrition, alcohol, and etc.
How about an image of someone with this condition?--[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 04:32, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
In my view this kind of research can considerably advance brain science. [[Special:Contributions/2A06:C701:4E54:8800:B144:3AF9:AA02:B2B7|2A06:C701:4E54:8800:B144:3AF9:AA02:B2B7]] ([[User talk:2A06:C701:4E54:8800:B144:3AF9:AA02:B2B7|talk]]) 10:56, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

==Another question?==
[[Image:Irvingberlin1948.jpg|right|thumb|Jewish immigrant [[Irving Berlin]] performing the patriotic standard ''[[God Bless America]]'', which he composed at the height of [[World War I]], in 1918.]]

Did this person have Tay-Sachs? Did he do important work regarding the condition? There is nothing in the text of the article about him.--[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 05:00, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

== Name of page ==

I'm new here, but shouldn't the whole page be under the "scientific" name of the disease, a.k.a "Hexosaminidase A Deficiency"? [[User:MERRF|MERRF]] ([[User talk:MERRF|talk]]) 15:37, 28 June 2009 (UTC)
==Reassessment==
Currently this article has a number of issues:

The page was organized per wikipedia medicine MOS. It however has been rearranged without discussion.

Many of the images add little to the page.

More concerns are found at the FA review.

Currently I do not think it fulfills A status.--[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 23:35, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

== Prenatal Screening Under Wrong Title ==

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== Neutrality ==

As this article talks way more about the Jews that have the disease, and not the others, I will be adding a neutrality tag. Some instances of it are:
* [[Tay–Sachs disease#Screening success with Ashkenazi Jews]]
* [[Tay–Sachs disease#Impact on Jewish communities]]
~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 01:35, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
::If you look at the academic literature such as this paper PMID: 12108829 it mentions Jewish people as the carrier state is 10 times more common and thus homozygous individuals would occur in 1 in 3600 as opposed to 1 in 360,000 in the general population.[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 13:23, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
:::Yes, but there was [[WP:UNDUE]] weight there. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 14:27, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
I removed one section that was just poor. But the rest... [[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 15:01, 28 December 2011 (UTC)

== [[WP:SS]] ==

I suggest that we get this as [[Wikipedia:Summary Style]]. Getting [[Tay–Sachs disease#Genetics]], [[Tay–Sachs disease#Prevention]], [[Tay–Sachs disease#History]], [[Tay–Sachs disease#Society and culture]], and [[Tay–Sachs disease#Research directions]]. The page is {{PAGESIZE:Tay–Sachs disease}} bytes long, justifying the splitting. I'm posting this here as I won't be bold here as it's pretty fustrating being reverted for these things. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 19:04, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
:Sure I support summarizing and creating [[Prevention of Tay-Sachs disease]] etc. with a main link.[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 19:13, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
::I will. Also webciting some references. Lets try to get this to GA. ~~[[User:Ebe123|<span style="text-shadow:#9e6d3f 2px 2px 1px; color:#21421E; font-weight:bold;">Ebe</span><span style="color:#000000">123</span>]]~~ → <small>[[User talk:Ebe123|report]] on my [[Special:Contributions/Ebe123|contribs]].</small> 19:21, 28 December 2011 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 13:34, 12 February 2024

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Neutrality

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As this article talks way more about the Jews that have the disease, and not the others, I will be adding a neutrality tag. Some instances of it are:

~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 01:35, 20 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

If you look at the academic literature such as this paper PMID: 12108829 it mentions Jewish people as the carrier state is 10 times more common and thus homozygous individuals would occur in 1 in 3600 as opposed to 1 in 360,000 in the general population.Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 13:23, 28 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, but there was WP:UNDUE weight there. ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 14:27, 28 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I removed one section that was just poor. But the rest... Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 15:01, 28 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

THE IRISH/ GAELS {? i.e. Inclusive of Scottish possibly other Celtic origin? Is this why the French/Gallic have the trait?} I added a sentence about the Irish based on a couple articles read recently i.e. http://articles.philly.com/2012-03-10/news/31143221_1_cherry-red-spot-carrier-rate-day-parade but maybe I should remove this? Also, presumably this needs more rigorous sourcing and some brief in-article discussion.

Sorry to intrude my thought is we're coming up on St. Patrick's day and probably most doctors aren't looking for this disease in Irish/Scottish Gaels and it might be of some benefit to update this article in time for St. Pat's? There are more pressing concerns, I'm sure - [mrk1971] — Preceding unsigned comment added by 38.111.36.79 (talk) 18:09, 15 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]


I suggest that we get this as Wikipedia:Summary Style. Getting Tay–Sachs disease#Genetics, Tay–Sachs disease#Prevention, Tay–Sachs disease#History, Tay–Sachs disease#Society and culture, and Tay–Sachs disease#Research directions. The page is 58,720 bytes long, justifying the splitting. I'm posting this here as I won't be bold here as it's pretty fustrating being reverted for these things. ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 19:04, 28 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Sure I support summarizing and creating Prevention of Tay-Sachs disease etc. with a main link.Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 19:13, 28 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I will. Also webciting some references. Lets try to get this to GA. ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 19:21, 28 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

A-Class

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As some editors have improved the article even more from when it was re-promoted, I suggest that we get get this back. It is getting peer reviewed and I've requested copyediting. This article stands a chance at FA (I think). Apparently, we need 2 uninvolved users to endorse promoting this. So if you're uninvolved and think this article should be A-class, you may sign and comment. You may also participate in the peer review. ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 01:46, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Define uninvolved? - SudoGhost 01:52, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I interpret "uninvolved" as not making numerous editorial changes. I don't think your one revert to this article disbars you from voting. Cheers, Magister Scientatalk 02:17, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I guess that it may be changed now, as 2 people have supported, and it's been over a week. No opposes either. ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 11:05, 30 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

A-class promotion vote

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Supports

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  1. After reviewing the article, I support its bid for A status. Magister Scientatalk 02:12, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  2. Likewise. - SudoGhost 10:15, 30 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Opposes

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Neutral

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  1. We do not have A class at WP:MED. Thus while it may be increased for other projects it would remain B class for WP:MED. I would recommend that the next step to FA would be a GA nomination which you have already done.Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:12, 31 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    I meant for WP 0.5 assessment here, not the WPMED. A class is better than GA class, and the A indicates for a bit more work before FA, of which I will want for this article. ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 11:32, 31 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Great as long as that is the understanding. --Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 00:28, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion

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As there were no (significant) opposes (only a neutral about a specific WikiProject), and on the criteria page, it states nothing about the closing, but about 2 uninvolved reviewers, I'm closing this and setting WP:JEW and 0.5 as A-class. ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 11:55, 7 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Section on management

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We need a section that discusses management and prognosis. Before we had:

There is currently no cure or treatment for TSD. Even with the best care, children with Infantile TSD die by the age of 5, and the progress of Late-Onset TSD can only be slowed, not reversed. Although experimental work is underway, no current medical treatment exists for infantile TSD. Patients receive palliative care to ease the symptoms. Infants are given feeding tubes when they can no longer swallow. Improvements in palliative care have somewhat lengthened the survival of children with TSD, but no current therapy is able to reverse or delay the progress of the disease.

but of course there where no refs... Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:17, 31 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Working on it. ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 10:44, 31 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Have begun copyedit

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Hi. I've begun a copyedit of the article, although grading that I need to do will probably limit me from going further tonight. I've noted three or so places where clarification is needed. (In some respects, it will help that I'm a geneticist; in other respects, it may hurt because I won't see places where someone less familiar with the material would have problems. I will ask for it to be looked over by a non-geneticist copyeditor after I'm finished.) Allens (talk | contribs) 22:17, 3 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'm done with my first run-through. I've tagged a number of places for clarification; please take a look at these. Allens (talk | contribs) 12:27, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I think it's about time I declared the copyediting done for now - I will continue to keep an eye on things during the GA review, to fix anything applicable during that. Allens (talk | contribs) 17:31, 10 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Suggestions

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I don't have time right now to do a full GA Review. I might get to it this weekend, depending on work. Here are a few suggestions in the interim:

  • There are a lot of mentions of "rare" and "more rare" - some referenced incidence data would be an improvement.
  • The genetics section could be rewritten to more traditional standards - there shouldn't be the need for quotes when describing basic recessive inheritance.
Done. Allens (talk | contribs) 02:23, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The "i.e." statements could be eliminated.
I've removed one of them; should the one regarding heterozygosity be done via "– heterozygous –", or what? Allens (talk | contribs) 02:23, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The "clarification needed" and "citation needed" tags could be considered criteria for a quick fail.
Most if not all of those were added by me in the process of copyediting; I would prefer them not be used as reasons for a quick fail, but instead as reasons to delay evaluating the respective criteria. Allens (talk | contribs) 02:23, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The treatment, diagnosis and management sections focus almost exclusively on the infantile form. There are clinical trials for adult onset Tay-Sachs treatment.
There is one sentence about late-onset Tay-Sachs now in the treatment section, and another about research into treatments for late-onset in the research section; are there other drugs under investigation that aren't mentioned? Allens (talk | contribs) 02:23, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The section about hexosaminidase needs expanding. HEXA mutations vs. HEXB mutations, Hexosaminidase A, B & S, etc.

This is a really good article. It needs some work, but this is a complex subject and it is a good start. Canada Hky (talk) 01:23, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Some comments

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  • Shouldn't hexosaminidase be lowercase in the first sentence?
I'll have to check MOS:LEAD on that. Allens (talk | contribs) 19:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Maybe progressive would be a less emotionally loaded word than relentless.
Corrected. Allens (talk | contribs) 19:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Adult onset/late onset seem like they should be lowercase.
I had thought I'd caught everyplace where they weren't; I'll take another look. Allens (talk | contribs) 19:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. (I use a script to spot duplicate links and it didn't there due to a redirect.) Allens (talk | contribs) 19:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. Thanks! Allens (talk | contribs) 19:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Tay-Sachs" without "disease" as colloquial?

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Axl recently added "disease" back to one instance of "Tay-Sachs" that I'd removed it from, calling it "a colloquial phrase" in the edit summary. I'd like to know what the opinions of others are; for mine, I note that NCBI uses the phrase "Tay-Sachs" to refer to "Tay-Sachs disease" in http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmedhealth/PMH0002390/. Allens (talk | contribs) 21:43, 13 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Most literature uses the phrases interchangeably, but for every source that uses one, I am sure one that goes in the opposite direction can be found. The somewhat standard abbreviation for the adult onset form is LOTS (late onset...), ignoring disease completely. I would suggest that introducing the abbreviation "TSD" and using that consistently throughout would be a better solution. Canada Hky (talk) 23:28, 13 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I have just discovered this discussion by chance. To Allens: it is particularly poor form to start a discussion about one of my edits without informing me. Axl ¤ [Talk] 20:42, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Given that you'd edited the article, I thought you'd watchlisted it. (The only time I don't watchlist an article I've edited is if I don't care about the matter.) The discussion is about the edit, not you; as far as I am aware, a notification is generally only considered necessary if one is discussing an editor's general behavior, not an edit specific to an article. Allens (talk | contribs) 20:50, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I have invited WikiProject Medicine to comment. Axl ¤ [Talk] 21:08, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Good thought. Allens (talk | contribs) 00:22, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure if Allens should have alerted Axl separately, but I agree with Axl that using "Tay-Sachs" without "disease" is indeed a colloquialism. Pubmedhealth uses colloquialisms, but we shouldn't. JFW | T@lk 22:50, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Don't really have a firm opinion on this, but search engine testing certainly seems to suggest that "disease" almost always follows "Tay-Sachs". NickCT (talk) 05:03, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Tay-Sachs disease", in the spirit of WP:MOS (Plain English works best), including WP:JARGON. An article in a general encyclopedia written for a broad readership requires a different tone to many publications on PubMed. —MistyMorn (talk) 12:25, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tay-Sachs disease should be the default unless or until someone collects a list of precedent use from major reliable sources of Tay-Sachs as a preferred layman term. Right now, such a precedent has not been presented. Blue Rasberry (talk) 16:08, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • I saw the note at WT:MED. I don't think that there's any compelling need to specify "disease", except in the first use. It's a bit like arguing over whether you should always spell it out or if it's okay to use an initialism. IMO "Tay-Sachs" is no better or worse than "TSD", which we would commonly accept. WhatamIdoing (talk) 03:57, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Pubmed Health and the ICD9 still say Tay-Sachs disease [1] would like to see evidence of the literature doing this before we follow.Doc James (talk · contribs · email)(please leave replies on my talk page) 20:03, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Will review

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In a couple of days. Others are free to comment. --Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 19:01, 29 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Reference number 3 "Neurologic and Muscular Disorders" could use an ISBN. We will also need page numbers.
    Put an ISBN, only thing I know about the chapter is that it's the 23rd. Added another reference.
  • We have this extensive review Fernandes Filho, JA (2004 Sep). "Tay-Sachs disease". Archives of neurology. 61 (9): 1466–8. PMID 15364698. {{cite journal}}: Check date values in: |date= (help); Unknown parameter |coauthors= ignored (|author= suggested) (help) yet it does not appear to be used as a reference.
    There is no harm in having it.
  • Same with this one Sutton, VR (2002 Jun). "Tay-Sachs disease screening and counseling families at risk for metabolic disease". Obstetrics and gynecology clinics of North America. 29 (2): 287–96. PMID 12108829. {{cite journal}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)
    As above. ~~Ebe123~~ → report 10:58, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Further comments

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Will provide further comments however away for a bit... --Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 23:32, 10 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Is this review going to be done? Wizardman Operation Big Bear 12:42, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Yes. But feel free to provide additional feedback. --Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 18:38, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Sign and symptoms

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  • These terms should be defined in the text "atrophied, and paralytic"
  • We do not typically use the term "victims" but rather "person with X" per WP:MEDMOS
  • Could use more refs such as for "People with late-onset Tay–Sachs frequently become full-time wheelchair users in adulthood."
  • What do you mean by "late-onset Tay–Sachs disease is usually not fatal as it can stop." It sort of implies that this type goes away.
  • This could also us a ref "Until the 1970s and 1980s, when the disease's molecular genetics became known, the juvenile and adult forms of the disease were not always recognized as variants of Tay–Sachs disease."
  • Ref 6 is a primary research paper and review are available. We should use reviews. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/6454083Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 12:45, 11 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Research

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The reference does not support the text in question. A 12 infant study does not "prove effectiveness" in Krabbe disease.

Gene therapy possibilities have been explored for Tay–Sachs and other lysosomal storage diseases. If the defective genes were replaced throughout the brain, Tay–Sachs would be cured. However, researchers working in this field believe that they are years away from the technology to transport the genes into neurons, which may be as difficult as transporting the enzyme itself. Use of a viral vector, which uses a (semi-)infectious virus as a means to introduce new genetic material into target cells, has been proposed as a technique for curing genetic diseases in general. Hematopoietic stem cell therapy (HSCT), another form of gene therapy, takes primitive cells that have not yet differentiated and taken on more highly specialized functions, removes them from the body, alters their genetics, then puts them back into the body. Yet another approach to gene therapy uses stem cells from umbilical cord blood in an effort to replace the defective gene, which has been proven effective with Krabbé disease.[1]

Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 12:52, 11 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  • Some of the references such as number 22 are not filled in "N Engl J Med 2012;366:64"
  • We should not be using a 1966 primary research paper "http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/5947589"
  • Here is another primary research paper "http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/2953646"
  • As is this "http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/1307230"
  • This ref is another primary source and not formatted properly "Late-onset Tay-Sachs disease: phenotypic characterization and genotypic correlations in 21 affected patients."
  • Where you quote the references of Tay and Sach directly in the history section, some consider this to be primary research and would prefer that you quote a secondary source.

Before this will pass FA the references need to be improved to secondary sources from the last 10 years per WP:MEDRS Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 12:45, 11 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Additional notes from another user

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  • The diagnosis section should not focus on the cherry red spot. Tay-Sachs is not the only disease that presents with a cherry red spot, nor do all forms of Tay-Sachs present with a cherry red spot. If this section is going to stay, it needs to focus on clinical symptoms and then the testing that would follow - enzyme assays and molecular.
    The section has a mention of hepatosplenomegaly. Added a way to disambiguate. ~~Ebe123~~ → report 17:42, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    It still only focuses on infantile onset disease. The absence of hepatosplenomegaly is not considered a distinguishing factor between Tay-Sachs and Sandhoff, most infants with Sandhoff do not have it either. The cherry red spot is a feature of the disease, but to imply such a focus in the diagnosis section is incorrect. Canada Hky (talk) 23:54, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Microscopic analysis of retinal neurons is not used for the diagnosis of the disease. It might be seen in individuals of the disease, but it is not a commonly used diagnostic tool. Literature searches will show a lot more mentions of storage material in rectal biopsy, than retinal neuron cells.Canada Hky (talk) 23:54, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The research section seems a little bit overemphasized, although if it is going to stay, it should mention treatments for adult-onset Tay-Sachs, which are actually in clinical trials, as opposed to being largely theoretical.
    Are you talking about Research directions? ~~Ebe123~~ → report 17:42, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yes, that section is either pure theory or attempted treatments, and I would argue has no place in the article. That material could all be summed up in two or three sentences in the treatment section. A mention of enzyme replacement (doesn't work), gene therapy and substrate reduction could all be done there. Canada Hky (talk) 23:54, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The most promising research in Tay-Sachs isn't in the infantile form, but the adult form. This is not mentioned at all. Pyrimethamine is in clinical trials for adult onset patients. Canada Hky (talk) 23:54, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • While I realize this article nominally has "A class" status, in my opinion it needs a lot of work. It has a lot of information mashed up and is quite confusing to read (and I did post-doc research in Tay-Sachs and Sandhoff disease). There seems to be an attempt to cram in everything related to Tay-Sachs, rather that building up the key information about the disease, even if it ends up leaving out a few references here and there (a sentence about founder effect should not need two different citations throughout it).
    I would like some specific advice, as I do not know where people will be confused while reading. ~~Ebe123~~ → report 17:42, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The article is too focused on the infantile form. It mentions the late onset and juvenile onset forms initially, and then all following sections relate almost exclusively to the infantile form. Canada Hky (talk) 23:54, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • If the evidence has decided that the founder effect explains Tay-Sachs, separate bullet points for the other theories have no place. They have been supplanted, and deserve a passing mention if at all. Canada Hky (talk) 23:54, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the epidemiology section, there should be mention of the change in incidence with the advent of carrier testing. After the incidence data in different communities, this information is far more important than largely debunked theories about heterozygote advantage. Canada Hky (talk) 23:54, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Canada Hky (talk) 18:04, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

As my computer is broken, I will come back to this GA nomination in 1 week or so. Good suggestions though. ~~Ebe123~~ on the go! 10:45, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I'm back. ~~Ebe123~~ → report 19:23, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The review has been open for two months, and it's been over a week since the last edit here and longer than that in the article itself. Progress on improving the article to GA requirements has stalled, and the list of issues presented by Canada Hky seems quite formidable for the typical one-week hold. Will there be significant work done soon? BlueMoonset (talk) 12:36, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I am happy to give Ebe123 more time. Part of the delay has been my fault. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your talk page please reply on mine) 19:48, 16 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lets just close this GAN, as it is inactive. ~~Ebe123~~ → report 19:33, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Sure the article however is very close. It is comprehensive. Well written. Well illustrated. Just needs a bit of work on the references IMO. Renominate when you have more time. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your talk page please reply on mine) 19:55, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Single founding family for French Canadian mutation

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There are are two separate mutant alleles that cause Tay-Sachs disease in French-Canadians, see [www.scirp.org/journal/PaperInformation.aspx?paperID=21701[predatory publisher] Tay-Sachs and French Canadians: A Case of Gene-Culture Co-evolution?] so how can the article say "pedigree analysis has traced the French Canadian mutation to a founding family that lived in southern Quebec in the late 17th century.[11][12]". How can there be one founding family if there are two mutations ? Overagainst (talk) 10:11, 11 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Prevalence in French Canadians

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The lead says it's only in the population of southeastern Quebec that French Canadians have a carrier frequency similar to that seen in Ashkenazi Jews. this is, roughly speaking, correct (see [www.scirp.org/journal/PaperInformation.aspx?paperID=21701[predatory publisher] Tay-Sachs and French Canadians: A Case of Gene-Culture Co-evolution?]). However the main body of article misleadingly says; " A mutation unrelated to the predominant Ashkenazi/Cajun mutation, consisting of a long sequence deletion, occurs with a similar frequency in families with French Canadian ancestry,", the error is repeated in the 'Epidemiology' section. Overagainst (talk) 10:52, 11 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Heterozygote advantage

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My (admittedly cursory) reading indicates that a) there is a widespread idea that Tay-Sachs provides heterozygote advantage in the form of resistance to tuberculosis, and b) this idea is not actually correct. As well, the article's edit history and talkpage archive indicates that (a) has been added to, and removed from, the article more than once.

I propose that the article contain a brief section explaining the speculations about tuberculosis, and, immediately thereafter, an explanation of why it's wrong. "In <year>, <researcher> proposed that Tay-Sachs provides heterozygote advantage in the form of increased tuberculosis resistance, because of <reasons>; however, in <year>, <other researcher> showed that this is not the case, because of <reasons>. Other possible forms of heterozygote advantage for Tay-Sachs have been proposed, including <X> and <Y>." (www.scirp.org/journal/PaperInformation.aspx?paperID=21701, for instance, proposes that TS carriers have "a higher rate of neuronal growth, and thus greater learning capacity"; I have no idea if it's right.) DS (talk) 13:54, 25 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Unlinking predatory journal. Guy (Help!) 19:43, 12 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The article needs some work about Irish cases. POV

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The Irish are given one passing, unsourced mention. Sources:

  • Are you of Irish descent? Are you aware you may be a carrier for Tay-Sachs Disease? If you have at least 3 Irish grandparents and are 18 years or older, you may be eligible to receive carrier screening for Tay-Sachs disease at no cost to you.[2]
  • Every person of Jewish, French-Canadian, Cajun or Irish heritage should be tested for Tay-Sachs carrier status.[3]
  • “I thought Tay Sachs was a Jewish disease,” says Cathy. The Mitchells, who live in Langhorne, then learned that this deadly inherited disease, which cripples and kills, is common among people of Irish descent. As many as 1 in 50 Irish Americans is a carrier.[4]
  • "It is not an exclusively Jewish genetic disease," says Miriam Blitzer, professor and geneticist at the University of Maryland School of Medicine, who says most cases today involve non-Jews. "We have been trying to teach that for years."[5]
  • The incidence of Tay-Sachs among babies born to Jews in North America has dropped 95 percent since efforts began to combat the deadly disease that strikes Jews of Ashkenazi descent disproportionately. In fact, most of the handful of babies born each year with Tay-Sachs are not Jewish, according to Dr. Michael Kaback, director of the California Tay-Sachs Disease Prevention Program in San Diego.[6]
  1. ^ Escolar, M L; Poe, M D; Provenzale, J M; Richards, K C; Allison, June; Wood, Susan; Wenger, David A; Pietryga, Daniel; Wall, Donna (2005). "Transplantation of Umbilical-Cord Blood in Babies with Infantile Krabbe's Disease". New England Journal of Medicine. 352 (20): 2069–2081. doi:10.1056/NEJMoa042604. PMID 15901860.
  2. ^ "IRISH TAY-SACHS CARRIER STUDY". http://www.tay-sachs.org/. National Tay-Sachs & Allied Diseases Associaton of Delaware Valley. {{cite web}}: External link in |website= (help); line feed character in |publisher= at position 37 (help)
  3. ^ "Genetic Diseases:What Is Tay-Sachs Disease?". http://www.ntsad-ny.org/. National-Tay Sachs & Allied Diseases Association. {{cite web}}: External link in |website= (help)
  4. ^ "The Irish Risk for Tay-Sachs Disease". http://irishphiladelphia.com/. Irish Philadelphia. {{cite web}}: External link in |website= (help)
  5. ^ By AMY DOCKSER MARCUS (June 25, 2012). "Study Looks at Irish Risk for a Rare Fatal Disease". http://wsj.com/. The Wall Street Journal. {{cite web}}: External link in |website= (help)
  6. ^ ABBY COHN (June 13, 2003). "Now more common in non-Jews: Years of genetic testing virtually erase Tay-Sachs". http://www.jweekl.com/. Jewish news weekly of Northern California. {{cite web}}: External link in |website= (help)

24.241.69.99 (talk) 01:35, 30 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Reminder. Do not remove NPOV tags until the situation is corrected. 24.241.69.99 (talk) 20:58, 26 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

1 in 3600 figure for prevalence among Ashkenazim is misleading

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This number is misleading. If 1) 1 in 30 Ashkenazim are carriers; 2) All Ashkenazim marry (or have children exclusively with) other Ashkenazim; 3) There is no significant effort to avoid the development of Tay-Sachs disease, then the expected prevalence would be 1 in 3600 births. The first premise is at the lower end of estimates of the prevalence of carriers among Ashkenazim, which is arguably a poor choice, but is not wrong. The other two, however, are definitely incorrect, however, and result in a gross over-estimation of the actual frequency.

Using the population information in Ashkenazi Jews we see that between 45% and 60% of Ashkenazim live in the United States, and between 70% and 88% of Ashkenazim live in either the US or Israel. Out-marriage is common among Ashkenazim in the US; and strong screening programs among the Ashkenazim exist in the United States and Israel. Reference 34 says that such programs in various countries have been shown to result in up to a 90% reduction in Tay-Sachs births. Ignoring the out-marriage issue, we would expect that the rate of Tay-Sachs births to be 1 in 360 wherever such screening is done. If we assume that there is no screening programs in any other country than the US and Israel (terrible assumption) then the expected prevalence of Tay-Sachs births among Ashkenazim worldwide is between 1 in 749 and 1 in 1332, a considerable reduction from 1 in 3600. This should be reduced further due to out-marriage and screening programs in other countries, but a higher prevalence of carriers would raise this somewhat.

The reference cited (reference 2) does say that "In this specific Jewish population, about one in 3,600 live births is affected" but this could only be true if the specific Jewish population is restricted to those Ashkenazim who marry other Ashkenazim (note: not other Jews) and who do not take part in screening, or who ignore the results. In any population of Ashkenazim where screening is used, the prevalence of Tay-Sachs births is 90% or greater reduced from 1 in 3600.

I suggest that a more accurate reference be found or that a more specific description of what the 1 in 3600 figure be written.

TopherCooper (talk) 23:53, 29 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sachs

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Tay-Sachs is a genetic disease. It happens when Chromosome 15 has a genetic problem. The problem is caused by a defective HEXA gene.[1] It is recessive, which means both parents must give the baby the defective gene for the baby to have Tay-Sachs. One in every twenty seven Jewish American has one defective gene and can give Tay-Sachs the defective gene to their child. The disease is very rare. It is most common in Jewish families.[2] There is a blood test to see if a person has the Tay Sachs gene. This blood test has helped reduce the number of babies born with Tay-Sachs. In 1800’s, there were 60 new cases and in the 21st century there were 5.

Infants with the Tay-Sachs gene from both parents usually die of pneumonia or other infections during their first four years of life. Some symptoms include: lack of energy, loss of vision and motor skills (paralyzation), and seizures.[3] Tay–Sachs disease is usually first noticed in infants around six months old. They show an abnormally strong response to sudden noises or other stimulus. This is called the "startle response". The child may also be listlessness or have muscle stiffness (hypertonia). The disease is classified into several forms, which are based on the age when the neurological symptoms began. There is no known treatment for this disease. 2601:344:C081:2AB0:A8FD:15CB:2E48:19B6 (talk) 22:45, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

In my view Tay-Sachs carriers do have symptoms that are noticed by sciense

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Hence i would like to suggest an edit such as: “carriers are considered to show no sign.”

I would also like to use this opportunity to call researchers to research under FMRI brain activity of carriers under different condition of fatigue, nutrition, alcohol, and etc. In my view this kind of research can considerably advance brain science. 2A06:C701:4E54:8800:B144:3AF9:AA02:B2B7 (talk) 10:56, 26 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]