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<s>This article appears to be a POV fork of [[Negev Bedouin]], to push the POV that these Bedouins are an organic part of the Palestinian people. Virtually all the contents there appears in the original article, with less POV terminology. [[User:Inf-in MD|Inf-in MD]] ([[User talk:Inf-in MD|talk]]) 00:25, 10 November 2021 (UTC) |
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You will not find a greater champion of Palestinian independence and Bedouin rights than me, ftr. But I find this article is very blatantly inclined to campaigning, and it is wrong. Why bother to say "can be understood as settler colonialism" in an article about this sensitive conflict? But the bias begins with only considering the Palestinian Bedouin in light of 1948, whereas eg in 1830s they took on the forces of Pasha, and Palestinian nationhood owes its identity to poets not of the 20th century but of the 18th. This is a crazy article about Palestinian Bedouins that only serves to wave a flag for Palestine vs Israel. It should go back to Ottoman times. [[Special:Contributions/88.110.147.104|88.110.147.104]] ([[User talk:88.110.147.104|talk]]) 19:34, 28 July 2023 (UTC) |
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:as no one seems to object, I'll redo the redirect. [[User:Inf-in MD|Inf-in MD]] ([[User talk:Inf-in MD|talk]]) 16:19, 18 November 2021 (UTC)</s> |
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I dont think thats accurate, this covers more than just the Negev. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User talk:Nableezy|<span style="color:#C11B17">nableezy</span>]]''' - 20:45, 18 November 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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:Please feel free to contribute and improve the article :) [[User:A455bcd9|a455bcd9 (Antoine)]] ([[User talk:A455bcd9|talk]]) 06:21, 29 July 2023 (UTC) |
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::<s>I don't think so. There may be single mention of non-Negev Bedouins ("predominantly concentrated in the South (al-Naqab/Negev and Gaza), the North (al-Jalil/Galilee) and in the Jerusalem area"), but the rest is essentially a content fork. [[User:Inf-in MD|Inf-in MD]] ([[User talk:Inf-in MD|talk]]) 21:52, 18 November 2021 (UTC)</s> |
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:Agreed. The article as is exists entirely to argue that A. Bedouins in Palestine are one people with the rest of Palestine, and B. Israel is ethnically cleansing Bedouins. Both of these claims are highly subjective and used to advance and justify a specific political view. Furthermore, to back up its claims, the article makes wild and self-contradictory claims, like Bedouin nomadism being an Israeli lie. I've tried to clean it up, but ultimately I don't see a reason for this article to exist in its current form. There is no objective fact on this page that isn't presented better in the page for [[Negev Bedouin]]. I'm surprised it hasn't been deleted. [[User:Bruhpedia|Bruhpedia]] ([[User talk:Bruhpedia|talk]]) 05:01, 8 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::This page is somewhat lacking, but definitely does not only cover Negev Bedouin. There are bedouin in the West Bank (see [https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2017/7/3/bedouin-communities-in-the-occupied-west-bank here] for example). That would very much not be covered by [[Negev Bedouin]], but would here. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User talk:Nableezy|<span style="color:#C11B17">nableezy</span>]]''' - 23:27, 18 November 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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:: While the text you removed was not great for the most part, a lot of it should have been recast as attributed opinion rather than deleted. The motivation of acquiring land for Jewish settlement is absolutely central to the treatment of bedouin since 1948 and the article is actively misleading without it. [[User:Zero0000|Zero]]<sup><small>[[User_talk:Zero0000|talk]]</small></sup> 05:39, 8 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::<s>This page does not discuss those West Bank Bedouins (other that in that single mention I called out above). It is simply a POV fork of Negev Bedouins if one looks at the content. If you want to create a new page about West Bank Bedouins, be my guest, but there's no reason to have another article that is 99% the same as Negev Bedouins, which is what this is. [[User:Inf-in MD|Inf-in MD]] ([[User talk:Inf-in MD|talk]]) 23:43, 18 November 2021 (UTC)</s> |
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:::"There is no objective fact on this page that isn't presented better in the page for Negev Bedouin.": there are Bedouins outside the Negev (Gaza, West Bank, [[Galilee Bedouin]]), whose existence is covered by reliable sources, and for this reason alone this page makes sense. (then I don't have an opinion on the content itself, I'm not knowledgeable enough) [[User:A455bcd9|a455bcd9 (Antoine)]] ([[User talk:A455bcd9|talk]]) 07:19, 8 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::A hypothetical page about Palestinian Bedouins might make sense, sure, but if you take the stuff about the Negev out of this article you end up with two paragraphs, one of which is one sentence: |
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:Also if this article is to remain, it might need a disambiguator. "Palestinian Bedouin" typically refers to the Bedouin of the [[Negev desert]] (inside the [[Green line]])[https://scholar.google.com/scholar?start=10&q=%22palestinian+bedouin%22&hl=en&as_sdt=0,5].'''[[User:Vice regent|VR]]''' <sub>[[User talk:Vice regent|talk]]</sub> 04:19, 19 November 2021 (UTC) |
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::::''As of 2013, approximately 40,000 Bedouin reside in the West Bank, split among the [[Jahalin Bedouin|Jahalin]], Ka’abneh, Rashaydeh, Ramadin, ‘Azazme, Communities of Sawarka, Arenat and Amareen.'' |
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:Not really honestly, the Bedouin in Israel proper face their own challenges with the unrecognized villages and being denied equal rights as Israeli citizens. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User talk:Nableezy|<span style="color:#C11B17">nableezy</span>]]''' - 16:39, 19 November 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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::::''Within the [[Jordan Valley]], many Bedouin communities are located within 30% of [[Area C (West Bank)|Area C]] which Israel now classifies as military firing zones and whered nearly 6,200 Bedouin live. Numerous villages have been demolished by the [[Israel Defense Forces|IDF]], some repeatedly, and rebuilt by the affected Bedouin. Between November 2020 and July 2021, one community, in ''Humsa al-Baqai’a'' located in [[Area C (West Bank)|Area C]] had their hamlet. consisting of 83 structures, including water tanks and solar panels and other infrastructure provided by the [[European Union]], destroyed seven times. The November 2020 demolition, coinciding with the U.S. Elections, displaced 73 Palestinians, among them 41 children, and was the largest demolition carried out in years, according to the United Nations.'' |
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::No, a merge would be premature in the present state of articles. The Palestinian Bedouin article is undeveloped, a stub, but explores a distinct modern historical reality which the Negev Bedouin article openly admits in the final section. The Negev Bedouin article in turn looks like an official government whitewash of the history of the Bedouin in that region. Everytime I look at it I shake my head and the amount of material about their modern history not included in the article, which is massive. [[User:Nishidani|Nishidani]] ([[User talk:Nishidani|talk]]) 17:42, 22 November 2021 (UTC) |
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::::If there's nothing substantive to say about Palestinian Bedouins, (as opposed to [[Bedouin]]s and [[Negev Bedouin]]s, which have pages,) this page doesn't make sense. Following your logic, there are pages for [[Italian-Americans]] and [[Italians in New York City]]. There are Italians in New York State outside of New York City, whose existence is covered by reliable sources, but that doesn't mean we need a page for them. |
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:::<s>{{tq|"a merge would be premature in the present state of articles"}} - this has it exactly backwards. Right now the article (which is not a stub) has more than 95% overlap with [[Negev Bedouin]]. In fact, save for the single sentence I quoted above, it doesn't even mention the West Bank Bedouins. As such, we should either delete it as a POV fork, or redirect it to [[Negev Bedouin]], as a plausible search term. And if the [[Negev Bedouin]] article needs improvement - stop cringing and shaking your head and go fix it. If someday a meaningful article is written about the West Bank Bedouin, we can then remove the redirect, but we should not keep this POV fork in its current state in the hope that maybe, someday, someone will create that different article.[[User:Inf-in MD|Inf-in MD]] ([[User talk:Inf-in MD|talk]]) 00:36, 23 November 2021 (UTC)</s> |
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::::Additionally, while measured, reputable sources on settlement as a motivation for Bedouin resettlement would absolutely add to the article, the previous sources were fringe and incredibly opinionated. They were already cast as opinion, but, with wild claims and no counterpoint, keeping them would only make the article, well, actively misleading. Additionally, they were internally inconsistent. For example, the header calls Bedouins a traditionally nomadic people, which they are, almost by definition, but one of the sources I removed called this a lie with little evidence. There's already a [[Galilee Bedouin]] page too. |
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::::The following is a bit tongue in cheek with overtones of seriousness so in that spirit. If "Arab citizens of Israel" is a catch all title, then we could have " X citizens of Israel" as components, where X = Palestinian, Druze, Bedouin. Do some Druze, Bedouin CoI identify as Palestinian, sure, does it matter, nope. There is some crossover but it doesn't mean the article(s) should not exist. Probably we should have an article for the Jewish citizens of Israel as well, oh wait, we do, [[Israeli Jews]] (so should be [[Israeli Bedouin]]? Shome mishtake, shorely). I realize that some would just like to have an article [[Non Jewish citizens of Israel]], oh well. So yes, I would merge the two articles under the name [[Bedouin (citizens) of Israel]] and then identify in that article, sub categories of that. Palestinian, Negev, tribe, whatever. Then what to do with residents who are not citizens and those in East Jerusalem and the Golan, tsk. Or perhaps wait till we sort out the biggest slice first [[Palestinian citizens of Israel]] or maybe [[Israeli Palestinians]] and then sort out the rest.[[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 12:34, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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::::It seems like this should just be a straightforward article on Bedouins in the West Bank. |
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:::::<s>The above has little to do with the merge discussion. We have an article for that sub-component- it is called [[Negev Bedouin]], and we shouldn't have POV fork of it called [[Palestinian Bedouin]]. If you want to have the [[Negev Bedouin]] article renamed to [[Bedouin (citizens) of Israel]] - make a move request. [[User:Inf-in MD|Inf-in MD]] ([[User talk:Inf-in MD|talk]]) 12:38, 23 November 2021 (UTC)</s> |
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::::[[User:Bruhpedia|Bruhpedia]] ([[User talk:Bruhpedia|talk]]) 08:19, 8 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::::It could equally go the other way around, couldn't it? There are plenty of sources for "Palestinian Bedouin". And anyway, I disagree in general, this is clearly linked with the other matters I raised, there needs to be consistency across articles.[[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 12:41, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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:::::I see your point. We could indeed rename to "Bedouins in the West Bank" or "Bedouin in Israel and Palestine" (similar to [[Armenians in Israel and Palestine]]). [[User:A455bcd9|a455bcd9 (Antoine)]] ([[User talk:A455bcd9|talk]]) 08:26, 8 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::::<s>It might, but again, that's a rename discussion, not a merge discussion. This article's content is entirely covered by [[Negev Bedouin]] one except for one sentence, with the latter one older, more developed and less POV, so it is the more natural one to be merged into. If you want to suggest a rename, post merger, you could do that [[User:Inf-in MD|Inf-in MD]] ([[User talk:Inf-in MD|talk]]) 12:45, 23 November 2021 (UTC)</s> |
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::::::::Redirect is usually result of an AfD, so what? You asked for a discussion and I have given my opinion. Atm , you don't have enough support for what you want to do unofficially, so maybe you better try something formal, don't you think? [[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 12:49, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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== Ta'amreh tribe deserves mention == |
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:::::::::<s>It can be, but there's no reason it must go to AfD if editors agree to redirect. There's a formal discussion taking place [[Talk:Negev_Bedouin#Merge|here]] - where there are currently 3 support for the redirect.[[User:Inf-in MD|Inf-in MD]] ([[User talk:Inf-in MD|talk]]) 12:52, 23 November 2021 (UTC)</s> strike sock |
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::::::::::And now 4 against.[[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 13:15, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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Ta'amreh & Ta'amireh (most common spelling), also Ta'amra, Ta'amira, 'Arab al-Ta'amira etc., tribe living near Bethlehem: no mention! Deserve attention. Articles about several Pal. towns mention them, first [[Dead Sea Scrolls]] found by them. Once listed, ideally also described: create redirect, link to it from articles. |
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:::::::::::I'm in favor of a redirect. It's just a non-NPOV fork to criticize Israel. We only need one article about the Bedouin between the river and the sea. [[User:Press olive, win oil|Press olive, win oil]] ([[User talk:Press olive, win oil|talk]]) 13:51, 15 February 2023 (UTC) |
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[[Arab et Ta'amira]] already redirects far too narrowly to [[Beit Ta'mir]]. I'll change that now. |
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Here a complete list of spelling variants and where they occur: |
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* Ta'amireh ([[Qumran Caves]], with [[1QIsab]], [[4Q41]], [[Isaiah Scroll]], [[Paleo-Hebrew Leviticus Scroll]]; [[Wadi Murabba'at]], [[Cave of Letters]], [[Wadi Daliyeh]], [[Hebrew and Aramaic papyri]]). Also at Wikisource, [https://en.m.wikisource.org/wiki/The_Handbook_of_Palestine/2 The Handbook of Palestine/2] (1922). |
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* Ta'amirah ([[Peasants' revolt in Palestine]], [[Beit Ta'mir]]) |
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* Ta'amira ([[Beit Ta'mir]], [[Beit Jala]]) |
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* Ta'amreh ([[Rachel's Tomb]], [[Jab'a]], [[Nuaman]]) |
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* Ta'amra ([[Teqoa]]) |
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* Arab al-Ta'amira ([[Al-Asakra]], [[Ubeidiya, West Bank|Ubeidiya]]) |
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* 'Arab al-Ta'amira ([[Teqoa]]) [[User:Arminden|Arminden]] ([[User talk:Arminden|talk]]) 12:20, 20 February 2024 (UTC) |
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:Done, wrote a section using the above & linked all of them. |
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:If anyone fells the urge, you can add refs. I've had enough. There are so many Wikilinks that it shouldn't bother anyone anyway. [[User:Arminden|Arminden]] ([[User talk:Arminden|talk]]) 17:16, 21 February 2024 (UTC) |
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Bias
[edit]You will not find a greater champion of Palestinian independence and Bedouin rights than me, ftr. But I find this article is very blatantly inclined to campaigning, and it is wrong. Why bother to say "can be understood as settler colonialism" in an article about this sensitive conflict? But the bias begins with only considering the Palestinian Bedouin in light of 1948, whereas eg in 1830s they took on the forces of Pasha, and Palestinian nationhood owes its identity to poets not of the 20th century but of the 18th. This is a crazy article about Palestinian Bedouins that only serves to wave a flag for Palestine vs Israel. It should go back to Ottoman times. 88.110.147.104 (talk) 19:34, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
- Please feel free to contribute and improve the article :) a455bcd9 (Antoine) (talk) 06:21, 29 July 2023 (UTC)
- Agreed. The article as is exists entirely to argue that A. Bedouins in Palestine are one people with the rest of Palestine, and B. Israel is ethnically cleansing Bedouins. Both of these claims are highly subjective and used to advance and justify a specific political view. Furthermore, to back up its claims, the article makes wild and self-contradictory claims, like Bedouin nomadism being an Israeli lie. I've tried to clean it up, but ultimately I don't see a reason for this article to exist in its current form. There is no objective fact on this page that isn't presented better in the page for Negev Bedouin. I'm surprised it hasn't been deleted. Bruhpedia (talk) 05:01, 8 October 2023 (UTC)
- While the text you removed was not great for the most part, a lot of it should have been recast as attributed opinion rather than deleted. The motivation of acquiring land for Jewish settlement is absolutely central to the treatment of bedouin since 1948 and the article is actively misleading without it. Zerotalk 05:39, 8 October 2023 (UTC)
- "There is no objective fact on this page that isn't presented better in the page for Negev Bedouin.": there are Bedouins outside the Negev (Gaza, West Bank, Galilee Bedouin), whose existence is covered by reliable sources, and for this reason alone this page makes sense. (then I don't have an opinion on the content itself, I'm not knowledgeable enough) a455bcd9 (Antoine) (talk) 07:19, 8 October 2023 (UTC)
- A hypothetical page about Palestinian Bedouins might make sense, sure, but if you take the stuff about the Negev out of this article you end up with two paragraphs, one of which is one sentence:
- As of 2013, approximately 40,000 Bedouin reside in the West Bank, split among the Jahalin, Ka’abneh, Rashaydeh, Ramadin, ‘Azazme, Communities of Sawarka, Arenat and Amareen.
- Within the Jordan Valley, many Bedouin communities are located within 30% of Area C which Israel now classifies as military firing zones and whered nearly 6,200 Bedouin live. Numerous villages have been demolished by the IDF, some repeatedly, and rebuilt by the affected Bedouin. Between November 2020 and July 2021, one community, in Humsa al-Baqai’a located in Area C had their hamlet. consisting of 83 structures, including water tanks and solar panels and other infrastructure provided by the European Union, destroyed seven times. The November 2020 demolition, coinciding with the U.S. Elections, displaced 73 Palestinians, among them 41 children, and was the largest demolition carried out in years, according to the United Nations.
- If there's nothing substantive to say about Palestinian Bedouins, (as opposed to Bedouins and Negev Bedouins, which have pages,) this page doesn't make sense. Following your logic, there are pages for Italian-Americans and Italians in New York City. There are Italians in New York State outside of New York City, whose existence is covered by reliable sources, but that doesn't mean we need a page for them.
- Additionally, while measured, reputable sources on settlement as a motivation for Bedouin resettlement would absolutely add to the article, the previous sources were fringe and incredibly opinionated. They were already cast as opinion, but, with wild claims and no counterpoint, keeping them would only make the article, well, actively misleading. Additionally, they were internally inconsistent. For example, the header calls Bedouins a traditionally nomadic people, which they are, almost by definition, but one of the sources I removed called this a lie with little evidence. There's already a Galilee Bedouin page too.
- It seems like this should just be a straightforward article on Bedouins in the West Bank.
- Bruhpedia (talk) 08:19, 8 October 2023 (UTC)
- I see your point. We could indeed rename to "Bedouins in the West Bank" or "Bedouin in Israel and Palestine" (similar to Armenians in Israel and Palestine). a455bcd9 (Antoine) (talk) 08:26, 8 October 2023 (UTC)
- "There is no objective fact on this page that isn't presented better in the page for Negev Bedouin.": there are Bedouins outside the Negev (Gaza, West Bank, Galilee Bedouin), whose existence is covered by reliable sources, and for this reason alone this page makes sense. (then I don't have an opinion on the content itself, I'm not knowledgeable enough) a455bcd9 (Antoine) (talk) 07:19, 8 October 2023 (UTC)
- While the text you removed was not great for the most part, a lot of it should have been recast as attributed opinion rather than deleted. The motivation of acquiring land for Jewish settlement is absolutely central to the treatment of bedouin since 1948 and the article is actively misleading without it. Zerotalk 05:39, 8 October 2023 (UTC)
Ta'amreh tribe deserves mention
[edit]Ta'amreh & Ta'amireh (most common spelling), also Ta'amra, Ta'amira, 'Arab al-Ta'amira etc., tribe living near Bethlehem: no mention! Deserve attention. Articles about several Pal. towns mention them, first Dead Sea Scrolls found by them. Once listed, ideally also described: create redirect, link to it from articles.
Arab et Ta'amira already redirects far too narrowly to Beit Ta'mir. I'll change that now.
Here a complete list of spelling variants and where they occur:
- Ta'amireh (Qumran Caves, with 1QIsab, 4Q41, Isaiah Scroll, Paleo-Hebrew Leviticus Scroll; Wadi Murabba'at, Cave of Letters, Wadi Daliyeh, Hebrew and Aramaic papyri). Also at Wikisource, The Handbook of Palestine/2 (1922).
- Ta'amirah (Peasants' revolt in Palestine, Beit Ta'mir)
- Ta'amira (Beit Ta'mir, Beit Jala)
- Ta'amreh (Rachel's Tomb, Jab'a, Nuaman)
- Ta'amra (Teqoa)
- Arab al-Ta'amira (Al-Asakra, Ubeidiya)
- 'Arab al-Ta'amira (Teqoa) Arminden (talk) 12:20, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
- Done, wrote a section using the above & linked all of them.
- If anyone fells the urge, you can add refs. I've had enough. There are so many Wikilinks that it shouldn't bother anyone anyway. Arminden (talk) 17:16, 21 February 2024 (UTC)