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This article's deletion debate was closed (by me) as a '''Keep'''. This was due to the additional sources presented in that debate which would establish notability and sourceability. I leave it to editors involved with this article to add those sources to the article as appropriate, and to facilitate this I have copied them below. [[User:Ultraexactzz|UltraExactZZ]] <sup> [[User_talk:Ultraexactzz|Claims]] </sup>~<small> [[Special:Contributions/Ultraexactzz|Evidence]] </small> 12:44, 10 March 2008 (UTC) |
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== Independent sources == |
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*''The National Catholic Register'' [http://ncregister.com/site/article/3209/] |
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*''Zenit'' [http://www.zenit.org/article-20603?l=english] |
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*''Sacramento Bee'' [http://www.sacbee.com/city/story/452835.html] |
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Florida Catholic seems like a perfectly fine [[WP:RS|reliable secondary source]] to me. I am not sure why it would be deemed "not independent" of 40DFL (an interfaith org, based in TX). CBN - the Christian Broadcasting Network - seems to be a decent source of news. It is not deprecated. Please explain why it might not be a [[WP:RS]]. [[User:Elizium23|Elizium23]] ([[User talk:Elizium23|talk]]) 06:41, 16 November 2019 (UTC) |
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== POV == |
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:At a bare minimum it is very unequivocally [[WP:BIASED]] when it comes to abortion or religion, so it could only be cited for those things with an in-line citation (ie. "according to the Florida Catholic...") Additionally, we should try to reduce the number of biased sources in the article - citing sources with one particular bias excessively leads to [[WP:NPOV]] / [[WP:WEIGHT]] issues. Just a glance at this article's sources shows that it has ''serious'' [[WP:BALANCE]] issues when it comes to sources - we can cite a few Catholic / Christian / anti-abortion sources, in moderation, with in-line citations, in order to present their perspective; but we can't cite them for unqualified statements of fact on a topic that falls under their bias, and we definitely can't base so much of the article on them. --[[User:Aquillion|Aquillion]] ([[User talk:Aquillion|talk]]) 18:55, 25 November 2019 (UTC) |
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::{{ping|Aquillion}} How about facts like "the group began in Texas" or "The group runs campaigns during Lent"? I don't see how a source's bias would lead it to misrepresent these points, or why they would need in-text attribution. Cheers, [[User:Genericusername57|gnu]][[User talk:Genericusername57|<span style="color:#ff7000">57</span>]] 19:04, 25 November 2019 (UTC) |
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:::Those still require in-line citations when cited to an unequivocally [[WP:BIASED]] source, for several reasons. First, if a fact is citeable ''only'' to such sources, we should be seriously considering omitting it entirely. Second, those sources can, collectively, form a narrative about the organization that doesn't match or reflect how it's usually covered in more neutral sources. For instance, "this is just a mom-and-pop business founded in the basement" or "this is a grassroots campaign that began with one person's desire for change" are things that can be less neutral in context than they seem on the surface and which organizations frequently use to downplay problems that have dominated coverage (a major reason why [[WP:PROMOTIONAL]] articles are often filled with such random inoffensive trivia.) It's better for us to find more neutral sources and base the overarching structure and history as described in the article on those, confining [[WP:BIASED]] sources to opinions; random factoids that are ''only'' citeable to biased sources should be viewed with suspicion at best and should generally just be omitted to avoid a situation where (as is the case now) large parts of the article end up structured around a narrative set by people with a vested interest in portraying the topic in a particular way. Consider: If you look at the sources now in the article, we have neutral, mainstream news sources describing the organization as highly-controversial (one source in the lead actually only brings it up in reference to inspiring abortion-clinic shooters!) combined with [[WP:BIASED]] sources painting this inoffensive picture of how David Bereit and Shawn Carney greased up their arms and pushed for change. That isn't [[WP:NPOV]] - if reliable sources take a largely critical view, we need to reflect that, rather than "balancing" it out with a lot of factoids from biased sources. In fact, I would argue that biased sources are ''better'' used for overt, strident arguments in favor of the organization (with an in-line citation); facts should be cited to more neutral sources when available, and left out as [[WP:UNDUE]] when no neutral sources are available. Otherwise we end up with things like "Richard Nixon was well-known for doing crimes and also for his cute dog, Checkers." --[[User:Aquillion|Aquillion]] ([[User talk:Aquillion|talk]]) 19:12, 25 November 2019 (UTC) |
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::::{{tq|one source in the lead actually only brings it up in reference to inspiring abortion-clinic shooters!}} Sorry, which source do you mean? I don't have access to the Times one, but I've checked all the others and don't see that.{{pb}}I agree that trivial factoids should generally be omitted, but I don't agree that {{tq|if reliable sources take a largely critical view, we need to reflect that}}. There is no requirement or guarantee that a reliable source be an impartial one. Trusting a source for facts doesn't mean adopting its editorial line. (This applies to both religious and secular publications.){{pb}}If you're looking for a secular source for the history of the group's founding, here's something from a local newspaper: [https://www.theeagle.com/news/local/from-the-eagle-archives-stories-related-to-abortion-in-bryan/article_c0c06fc6-3cb0-11e6-82e2-5bf3530e4a83.html]. Cheers, [[User:Genericusername57|gnu]][[User talk:Genericusername57|<span style="color:#ff7000">57</span>]] 20:11, 25 November 2019 (UTC) |
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:::::I would hesitate long and hard about describing "news sources" as "neutral". In fact, most news sources such as CNN are heavily [[WP:BIASED]] in favor of abortion, and their stories tend to be [[WP:PROMOTIONAL]] of Planned Parenthood and political candidates who support them. Not to mention actresses and musicians who support Planned Parenthood and contraception by activism, the arts and other efforts. So it's hilarious to me that once we find a couple of tenable [[WP:IS]] independent sources that they'd be dismissed out-of-hand as biased. '''Face it: every source on abortion is biased'''. It's a polarizing topic. There is no source that's going to sit there and go "meh, abortion is ok, but kinda avoid it if you can..." if that's what you expect out of a neutral source. That's not CNN or MSNBC, who are more like "abortion! rah rah rah! go PP!" [[User:Elizium23|Elizium23]] ([[User talk:Elizium23|talk]]) 22:29, 25 November 2019 (UTC) |
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=== Fallacies in Avatar317's reasoning === |
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There were a number of unsourced claims and biased sentences which I have removed. If anyone feels that there was important content that I removed, feel free to restore it as long as it is sourced and rephrased in a NPOV manner. For example, I believe it may be an important fact that local 40 Days campaigns are aligned with local CPCs. However, I don't have a source to back that up. The information about Austin, Texas might be good as well, but again was unsourced. The rest of it seemed marginally informative to downright incorrect or biased. I'm not sure if the rest is salvageable, but again, I'd encourage editors who would support it's inclusion to find sources and rephrase in the cases of overt bias. Good luck!-[[User:Andrew c|Andrew c]] [[User talk:Andrew c|<sup>[talk]</sup>]] 20:23, 20 April 2009 (UTC) |
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# A source does not need to be listed in [[WP:RS/P]] in order to be considered reliable. In fact, it's best if it isn't found there, as RS/P is chiefly for deprecating bad sources. |
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== Babies Saved From Abortion == |
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# A source that opposes abortion is not an independent source? What kind of crack are you smoking? There are thousands of independent pro-life organizations, and plenty of news sources that are pro-life, pro-choice, and pro-abortion. It only serves neutrality if we are able to use all of those which are reliable. Also, you're an anti-Catholic bigot for saying that Catholic sources can't be used. |
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This article is under [[WP:Discretionary sanctions]] so I'd advise, rather than reverting again, to discuss here. If you'd like, we can go to [[WP:RSN]] about the reliability of sources you question, but I'm afraid you wouldn't like the answers. [[User:Elizium23|Elizium23]] ([[User talk:Elizium23|talk]]) 06:10, 18 November 2019 (UTC) |
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== Anti-Abortion == |
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"Babies Saved From Abortion" is opinionated and imprecise language. There is no such thing as a baby saved from abortion, as fetuses and embryos are aborted, not babies. |
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[[Special:Contributions/199.66.66.140|IP]], the terminology on Wikipedia has been discussed and editor consensus has been reached as to the language used in articles relating to abortion. Please see the [[Anti-abortion movements|Anti-Abortion Movements]] and associated [[Talk:Anti-abortion movements|Talk page]], and the linked discussion on that page. Please do not outright revert again, without first discussing here. Consensus can change, but only if you talk it out. [[User:King keudo|King keudo]] ([[User talk:King keudo|talk]]) 19:30, 10 February 2023 (UTC) |
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The citation uses this language because they believe that fetuses and embryos are babies. Wikipedia does not hold that belief, as you can see at such pages as [[fetus]] and [[embryo]]. [[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 03:15, 26 September 2011 (UTC) |
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: The citation, nevertheless, is the basis for the statement. To change its wording (especially to have a different meaning) is original research. Wikipedia is merely a collection of articles, each based on cited facts. as such it does not nor is it capable of holding any "belief". Anyway, the wording of the citation is not necessarily imprecise. After the creatures who were not aborted are born they indeed are babies. So today, as we write and read about them, it is proper to refer to them as such. [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 15:39, 26 September 2011 (UTC) |
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:: As time passes, will it become proper to refer to them as toddlers, teenagers, adults, geriatrics, and corpses? 40DfL does not confirm that these pregnancies were then carried to term. |
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:: If a piece by Rush Limbaugh referred to the US presidential election of a "Kenyan-born socialist," would it be appropriate to use that language when citing Mr. Limbaugh at [[Barack Obama]]? |
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:: I agree that it's tricky work to interpret sources. Perhaps we can agree on some compromise phrasing. "40DfL claims to have prevented the terminations of # pregnancies over the course of this campaign." [[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 06:57, 27 September 2011 (UTC) |
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::: I like your idea of some compromise phrasing that puts the burden on 40Dfl. But why not use what they actually claim, which is "we are aware of … 483 babies who have been saved from abortion" in the citation? So I would suggest "40 Days for Life claims they are aware of 483 babies who have been saved from abortion.", which is objectively true. Your suggested wording indicates they claim to have prevented abortions, but they don't use the word "prevent" (which is way too strong). |
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::: About Rush Limbaugh, it might be appropriate to use such language if prefaced by "Limbaugh claims" and was relevant to some aspect of the [[Barack Obama]] article. |
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::: About referring to the aborted creatures as toddlers, teenagers, ..., you make a good point. However, such reference would be proper in various contexts provided the number was adjusted to reflect those that survived to each stage. [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 15:53, 27 September 2011 (UTC) |
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:::: Here's the problem with saying "40DfL claims 483 babies were saved" -- it's equivalent to saying "Rush Limbaugh claims that this Kenyan-born socialist shot JFK." It puts the burden of "shot JFK" on Rush Limbaugh, but Wikipedia would still be using the phrase "Kenyan-born socialist" to refer to Barack Obama. Similarly, even though 40DfL uses the phrase "babies," it is irresponsible of Wikipedia to use that term to refer to embryos and fetuses, which it clearly does in this context. |
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:::: I feel that such references would be grossly improper, but we don't need to debate the general case -- do you feel it's proper in this context, where we have absolutely no way of adjusting the number to reflect how many of these pregnancies were carried to term? |
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:::: Finally, it is not objectively true that 40 Days for Life is aware of 483 babies who were saved from abortion. They are aware of 483 pregnancies that were not terminated, or the terminations of which were delayed. To them, these are equivalent. To Wikipedia, they are not. [[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 02:21, 28 September 2011 (UTC) |
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::::: You make a good point that Wikipedia would carry the burden of an implication made in the subject of a claim if included in an article. I tend to agree. But what is the remedy? I don't think your substitution "40 Days for Life documented 483 reports of people who were deterred from obtaining abortions, or whose abortions were delayed, as a result of the campaign" works because it substantively changes the meaning of the cited statement, which concerns unborn creatures that were saved not mothers that were deterred. For one thing, suppose some of those saved were twins, triplets, etc, then the number of deterred mothers would not be 483. A better remedy is to avoid any unsupported implication in the subject, while retaining the essential meaning of the citation. Any word used to substitute for "babies" would need to include both "fetuses" and "embryos" because likely both were included in the 483 count. "Unborn creatures" is way too general. I'm now wondering why "babies" can not be used as a general term to include both both fetuses and embryos. I can't find any definition of "babies" or "baby" at all in Wikipedia nor any definition elsewhere that excludes fetus and embryo. On the other hand, many people commonly use "baby" or "unborn baby" to refer to the creature developing within a pregnant woman. So I now suggest that the phraseology used in the citation is proper for Wikipedia. [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 01:01, 29 September 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::: "Baby" is frequently used to mean "fetus" and "embryo" in an unscientific sense because many but far from all women carrying pregnancies intend and look forward to carrying them to term and delivering a [[baby]]. It's a charged word when used during pregnancy, and "unborn baby" is equally charged language, full of intent and pressure. Ditto "saved." "Limbaugh reported that the people of America were saved from a Kerry presidency in 2004" is not appropriate language for Wikipedia. |
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:::::: Also and quite frankly, I doubt 40DfL could recognize multiple pregnancies at that stage, and even if they did do an ultrasound on every last patient they heckled into their van, we're talking about an error margin of 1% on a number that nobody should be trusting in the first place. [[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 02:17, 30 September 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::: At what point during development does a fetus scientifically become a baby? To say birth is the demarcation seems unscientific. Why is scientific language required in an article that really doesn't involve science? People are more likely to talk about the creature(s) within a pregnant women in terms of being a baby than as a fetus or embryo because they are not scientists talking about a scientific entity. As far as I can tell, "baby" is not a scientific term because it is not precisely defined as such. Does that mean it can not be used in a Wikipedia article? |
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::::::: If "baby" is considered a charged word it's because it connotes a living human being. But to deny or avoid the humanity of the unborn creature is also charged. Likewise, in this context, "saved" may be considered charged but so is its avoidance. [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 03:42, 30 September 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::: Just came across a reliable source, The World Book Encyclopedia (1976) in its article "Baby" <ref><i>The World Book Encyclopedia</i>, Field Enterprises Educational Corporation, Chicago, 1976, article <b>BABY</b>, contributed by Ruth A. Lawrence, Associate Professor of Pediatrics, University of Rochester, School of Medicine and Dentistry. Section “<b>The Developing Baby</b>. A baby goes through two major stages of development before birth. During the first stage, which lasts about two months, a developing baby is called an <i>embryo</i>. During the second stage, which lasts about seven months or until birth, it is called a <i>fetus</i>.”</ref> that describes a baby as a human that develops from the time of conception through two preborn stages, embryo and fetus, and then after birth to about 18 months. That settles it as far as I'm concerned. Preborn human creatures are indeed properly refered to as babies, attempts to discredit such usage by calling it charged notwithstanding. So I propose that in the article the use of baby to refer to preborn humans be first established by citing the World Book article and then a statement similar to that of 40Dfl be included. I insist on this. [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 01:57, 1 October 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::::While the World Book is not a reliable source, I am still persuaded by Roesser's argument. I see no problem with including "Babies saved..." as long as it is attributed.– [[user:Lionelt|Lionel]] <sup>([[user talk:Lionelt|talk]])</sup> 11:07, 2 October 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::::: I'm glad you agree that it is charged to use the words "saved" and "baby." Run by me how it is charged to avoid them, please? If using precise language strikes you as being charged, it is because reality has a liberal bias, not my language. If you dislike this, try Conservapedia. [[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 23:38, 2 October 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::::::: Triacylglyceride, please notice I used "if" in regard to "baby" and "may be considered" in regard to "saved". I was speaking hypotheically in response to you. However, neither word is charged. In light of the World Book article, "baby" is a common and direct way of referencing an unborn human creature, which is normally alive. If a plan to kill it through abortion is stopped, then it is common and direct to say the baby was saved. Conversely, it is charged to indirectly refer to the subject and action of abortion by avoiding direct terms for euphemisic purposes. "Baby" is a precise term to refer to an unborn human creature, since it includes both "fetus" and "embryo". You had to manipulate the language quite imprecisly when you wrote "deterred or delayed 483 people from obtaining abortions" [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 00:29, 3 October 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::::::: Roesser, while "baby" might be a common term used to denote an unborn human in many areas of the English-speaking world, the fact that "baby" redirects to the Wikipedia article on infants would give me the impression that Wikipedia, for one, is using the term differently than does World Book. As such, I would tend to agree with Triacylglyceride that use of this term should be avoided. As for the use of save, it seems that a more objective wording would be more in line with other relevant Wikipedia articles. I for one would say that internal cohesion within Wikipedia is more valuable than avoiding (controversial) slight biases within individual corner cases. As such, referring to the act prevented, the abortion, as opposed to the intended goal is preferrable. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/138.16.107.42|138.16.107.42]] ([[User talk:138.16.107.42|talk]]) 03:49, 3 October 2011 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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::::::::::: "Baby" is not precise language to refer to the human conceptus, as it refers to (in my opinion, technically exclusively) the post-partum human, which 40 Days for Life patently does not mean. With the citation, consider the parallel construction, "after developing an internal space, a morula is called a blastocyst." Just as an uncoelated blastocyst is not a blastocyst, an unborn baby is not a baby. The language remains politically-motivated and inappropriate for Wikipedia. [[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 23:12, 7 November 2011 (UTC) |
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How are the funds received used for salaries/administration, advertising, campaigns, etc. ? Would appreciate a percentage breakdown of categories. [[Special:Contributions/35.134.242.56|35.134.242.56]] ([[User talk:35.134.242.56|talk]]) 02:49, 2 March 2023 (UTC) |
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There is no valid reason to deny that "483 Babies Saved from Abortion" is an understandable and legitimate statement used in the context of a 40 DFL announcement of results for its Spring 2011 campaign. The use of the words "babies" and "saved" is very adequately defended by Roesser, 30 Sept 2011 and 1 Oct 2011 and agreed to by Lionell, 2 Oct 2011. [[User:Gtcooney|Gtcooney]] ([[User talk:Gtcooney|talk]]) 00:11, 5 November 2011 (UTC) George C. 4 Nov 2011 |
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:I'm sorry, but I don't feel it's appropriate to act as though consensus has been reached on this matter. I will be reverting the recent edits, as they were made without establishment of a consensus on this debated subject. [[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 23:12, 7 November 2011 (UTC) |
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::There never was a consensus either way and likely never will. You originally acted without a consensus when you changed it from a form consistent with the referenced source. Without a consensus, the referenced source should be the guide. Baby is used formally and informally to refer to both born and unborn humans, as attested to by the World Book article. Most mothers, I dare say, refer to their unborn child as a baby. You say such language is politically motivated, well your rewording it appears to be politically motivated. [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 00:09, 8 November 2011 (UTC) |
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:::"Fetus" is precise, medically recognized terminology, whereas 40 Days for Life's use of "baby" to refer to the unborn is significantly more colloquial, and ideologically based to boot. In the interests of neutrality, Wikipedia should not endorse 40DfL's viewpoint by adopting the movement's own language, unless quoting, which is not the case here; grammatically speaking, the sentence under review is an indirect statement, and thus neither implies nor requires exactitude in its replication of 40DfL's phrasing. I therefore agree with Triacylglyceride that "fetus," being both more precise and more neutral than "baby," is preferable in this context. [[User:Threonine|Threonine]] ([[User talk:Threonine|talk]]) 04:47, 9 November 2011 (UTC) |
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:::Further, while I do not dispute your assertion that mothers refer to their unborn children as babies, it seems obvious that many people seeking abortions do not identify as mothers, and indeed are vehemently opposed to the idea. And unless you're interested in entertaining "pumpkin" or "snookums" as Wikipedia-valid synonyms for "fetus"—which I, for one, am not—I suggest you abandon the argument that parents' usage of a word justifies its adoption by Wikipedia. [[User:Threonine|Threonine]] ([[User talk:Threonine|talk]]) 05:12, 9 November 2011 (UTC) |
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::::Threonine, "fetus" indeed is precise, but in this case too precise. Many abortions, perhaps most, are that of embryos not fetuses. "Fetus" is also, as you indicate, a medical term, but this article is not addressed particularly to a medical audience and thus "fetus" might not be as familiar to the intended reader as is "baby". Furthermore, the suggestion that many people seeking abortions do not identify as mothers (which I contest) is not particularly relevant because it's communication with the general reader of this article that's important. |
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::::Concerning the movement's own language: the current sentence is indeed an indirect statement, which asserts that the movement said something that they did not say. It's a false statement. To argue otherwise is original research. The current sentence replaced a direct statement that faithfully represents what 40DFL did say. Truth trumps neutrality. [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 05:56, 9 November 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::Do you feel it would be appropriate, with sparse context, to say, "Rush Limbaugh said that 40 babies were killed at the local Planned Parenthood this week."? I feel that would neither be true or neutral, and I find it a comparable example. How do you feel? |
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:::::Let's find a compromise. How about, "40 Days for Life, according to their definition of human embryos and fetuses as babies, says that they saved X# babies from abortion."? |
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:::::(Odd quotation-punctuation use for precision in quotes.) [[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 06:20, 9 November 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::Triacylglyceride, I agree to your suggested compromise. Concerning the example Rush Limbaugh statement, I don't feel it would be appropriate in a sparse context. However, in an adequate context (e.g., an article about him, in a section about his remarks) and if he did make the statement, then I feel it would be appropriate. [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 14:27, 9 November 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::: Restructured it slightly to work as a direct quote; also because they didn't say they saved the babies, they said the babies were saved. Let me know if there's a problem.[[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 16:34, 9 November 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::::: Reads well, I like it. [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 17:00, 9 November 2011 (UTC) |
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===References=== |
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== First sentence of "Opposition" section == |
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== 24-hour vigil == |
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Recently, [[User:King keudo|King keudo]] reverted changes I made to the sentence referred to above. I suspect keudo might not have read the source article [https://www.theguardian.com/lifeandstyle/2013/mar/26/40-days-life-prayers-protests] carefully. It's author, Holly Baxter, does use the word "harass" in her article, but does not accuse the anti-abortion protesters of ''"regularly harassing women and pregnant children as young as 12 years old trying to access vital healthcare, photograph them as they enter sexual health or maternity clinics, and provide these vulnerable people with leaflets disguised as NHS literature, which health professionals describe as 'pseudo-medical' and 'misleading"''. |
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Not all 40 Days for Life protests are 24-hours. Vigils are protests during hours normally reserved for sleeping. The 40dfl website lets one see the schedules of various protest sites, and for the fall season, there were ''plenty'' of sites that didn't have anywhere close to 24-hour coverage, not just one or two exceptions. |
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So while the ideal 40dfl protest is 24h, and there does exist "a" 40dfl protest that lasts 24/7, the current phrasing makes it sound like that's always the case. I'll be editing it to read that it "may, with sufficient volunteers, be round-the-clock." |
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[[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 16:44, 9 November 2011 (UTC) |
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: I agree [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 17:00, 9 November 2011 (UTC) |
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::Well, that was easy. Edited it, again, slight restructuring to read better in situ. As an aside, I really should get in the habit of writing my edits verbatim in talkpages -- most of my history as a Wikipedian has been with Spoken Wikipedia and fixing grammatical errors. [[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 21:30, 12 November 2011 (UTC) |
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:::Wait a minute, that's not what I agreed to! I was responding to your quoted text "may, with sufficient volunteers, be around the clock", but you also changed "vigil" to "protest". Protest, which implies issuing demands to an authority, is definitely not the correct word. That is not the intention of participants in 40dfl, rather their objectives are to bring the public's attention to the effects of abortion, to pray to God about it, and atone for it by their sacrifice. In those instances where it is around the clock, "vigil" would be appropriate and descriptive. In other instances "witness" would be a more descriptive term than "protest". [[User:Roesser|Roesser]] ([[User talk:Roesser|talk]]) 01:16, 13 November 2011 (UTC) |
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::::Sorry! I hope you can see how I thought you were agreeing to that part of my statement, too. |
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::::I find "vigil" and "witness" to be rather weaselish -- a little bit like, "well, this is our religion, so you have to use nicer words to talk about what we do." The signs that I've seen 40dfl protestors holding makes me very comfortable calling them protestors. The things I've heard them shouting at patients going in and out of clinics makes me hesitant to call their protest a "vigil." But I need a citation. I'm a bit busy for the next week or so -- I invite you to do a good-faith compromise edit, and then I want to find a better solution over Thanksgiving. |
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::::Part of the problem here is that (big IMHO here) this article was made mostly by people who are pro-40dfl, judging by the slant of most of the citations. I hold the reasonable, widely-held opinion that clinic protests traumatize patients and are a bad thing. The 40dfl article isn't the place to hash that out. I wish there were an article on clinic protests, so we could slap a line on there of, "while 40dfl refers to themselves as a vigil, those outside of the movement see it as a protest that, like other clinic protests, is unnecessarily emotionally traumatic to patients seeking services at abortion clinics." With a citation and a link to the main article on clinic protests. |
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::::Ugh, just looked a little further, and [[Sidewalk counseling]] seems totally insufficient. [[User:Triacylglyceride|Triacylglyceride]] ([[User talk:Triacylglyceride|talk]]) 19:39, 13 November 2011 (UTC) |
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Baxter does mention one protester who claims to have "saved" a twelve-year-old girl, but does not describe this ''presumed'' interaction as either "regular" or as "harassment". She does relate a story from the clinic supervisor about "a particularly threatening man" who, "last year", took photos of clients at the clinic door, but the supervisor goes on to say that the protesters claimed the man had nothing to do with their group. While Baxter might well agree that health care at this particular clinic is "vital" she doesn't actually use that adjective, nor does she call the clients "vulnerable" although she would probably agree that they are. Finally, while most health professionals probably would agree that the information in the leaflets handed out by the protesters was "misleading" and "pseudo-scientific" these particular descriptions actually come from a clinic "spokesperson". |
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In short, the Wikipedia editor who used this ''Guardian'' article embellished it, by trying to cross all the t's and dot all the i's, or at least the t's and i's, which would cast 40 Days in a worse light, and that is not acceptable. [[User:Goodtablemanners|Goodtablemanners]] ([[User talk:Goodtablemanners|talk]]) 19:23, 9 March 2023 (UTC) |
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:Noting that there is a long discussion above, the 40 Day's webpage stated does not claim to have "prevented" anything. No amount of discussion can over come that simple fact. A different source would have to be cited to used this terminology. --[[User:Zfish118|Zfish118]] ([[User_talk:Zfish118|talk)]] 13:27, 17 October 2015 (UTC) |
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:Correct. The article does not describe "regular" harassment. It relates the story of one 12 year old who chose not to have an abortion, and the story of "one particularly intimidating" man who took photos. The phrase claiming they "regularly" harass twelve-years olds and take photos can of women entering/exiting clinics simply not be substantiated by this source. –[[User:Zfish118|Zfish118]]<sup>⋉[[User_talk:Zfish118|talk]]</sup> 16:05, 11 March 2023 (UTC) |
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Almost all sources are from either the 40 Day organization, or local chapters. This makes neutral coverage difficult. Additional sources would be appreciated. --[[User:Zfish118|Zfish118]] ([[User_talk:Zfish118|talk)]] 03:13, 15 October 2015 (UTC) |
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There is currently no content that is disproportionately praising or reading like advertisement copy. The article is pretty barebone facts, each directly attributed by citation and in most cases in text attribution. I am removing the neutrality tag (but not the reliable source tag). The sources are transparently used in the current state, but other mainstream sources may be available for further context and commentary. –[[User:Zfish118|Zfish118]]<sup>⋉[[User_talk:Zfish118|talk]]</sup> 17:03, 13 March 2023 (UTC) |
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==According to their definition== |
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It seems pedantic to include the phrase "according to the definition of embryos and fetus as babies". I believe a footnote adequately addresses any confusion. Secondly, the cited webpage does not offer this definition; I have altered the phrase as a general observation that "40 Days for Life often refers to unborn embryos or fetuses as 'babies'". I also added a note on the timing of the statement on the last day of the campaign. I might also note the [http://www.oed.com/view/Entry/14250?rskey=3V2X79&result=1&isAdvanced=false#eid OEM] allows that "baby" can refer to unborn children, so this is hardly a definition or use unique to 40 Days for Life. --[[User:Zfish118|Zfish118]] ([[User_talk:Zfish118|talk)]] 13:53, 17 October 2015 (UTC) |
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Independent sources
[edit]Florida Catholic seems like a perfectly fine reliable secondary source to me. I am not sure why it would be deemed "not independent" of 40DFL (an interfaith org, based in TX). CBN - the Christian Broadcasting Network - seems to be a decent source of news. It is not deprecated. Please explain why it might not be a WP:RS. Elizium23 (talk) 06:41, 16 November 2019 (UTC)
- At a bare minimum it is very unequivocally WP:BIASED when it comes to abortion or religion, so it could only be cited for those things with an in-line citation (ie. "according to the Florida Catholic...") Additionally, we should try to reduce the number of biased sources in the article - citing sources with one particular bias excessively leads to WP:NPOV / WP:WEIGHT issues. Just a glance at this article's sources shows that it has serious WP:BALANCE issues when it comes to sources - we can cite a few Catholic / Christian / anti-abortion sources, in moderation, with in-line citations, in order to present their perspective; but we can't cite them for unqualified statements of fact on a topic that falls under their bias, and we definitely can't base so much of the article on them. --Aquillion (talk) 18:55, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Aquillion: How about facts like "the group began in Texas" or "The group runs campaigns during Lent"? I don't see how a source's bias would lead it to misrepresent these points, or why they would need in-text attribution. Cheers, gnu57 19:04, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
- Those still require in-line citations when cited to an unequivocally WP:BIASED source, for several reasons. First, if a fact is citeable only to such sources, we should be seriously considering omitting it entirely. Second, those sources can, collectively, form a narrative about the organization that doesn't match or reflect how it's usually covered in more neutral sources. For instance, "this is just a mom-and-pop business founded in the basement" or "this is a grassroots campaign that began with one person's desire for change" are things that can be less neutral in context than they seem on the surface and which organizations frequently use to downplay problems that have dominated coverage (a major reason why WP:PROMOTIONAL articles are often filled with such random inoffensive trivia.) It's better for us to find more neutral sources and base the overarching structure and history as described in the article on those, confining WP:BIASED sources to opinions; random factoids that are only citeable to biased sources should be viewed with suspicion at best and should generally just be omitted to avoid a situation where (as is the case now) large parts of the article end up structured around a narrative set by people with a vested interest in portraying the topic in a particular way. Consider: If you look at the sources now in the article, we have neutral, mainstream news sources describing the organization as highly-controversial (one source in the lead actually only brings it up in reference to inspiring abortion-clinic shooters!) combined with WP:BIASED sources painting this inoffensive picture of how David Bereit and Shawn Carney greased up their arms and pushed for change. That isn't WP:NPOV - if reliable sources take a largely critical view, we need to reflect that, rather than "balancing" it out with a lot of factoids from biased sources. In fact, I would argue that biased sources are better used for overt, strident arguments in favor of the organization (with an in-line citation); facts should be cited to more neutral sources when available, and left out as WP:UNDUE when no neutral sources are available. Otherwise we end up with things like "Richard Nixon was well-known for doing crimes and also for his cute dog, Checkers." --Aquillion (talk) 19:12, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
one source in the lead actually only brings it up in reference to inspiring abortion-clinic shooters!
Sorry, which source do you mean? I don't have access to the Times one, but I've checked all the others and don't see that.I agree that trivial factoids should generally be omitted, but I don't agree thatif reliable sources take a largely critical view, we need to reflect that
. There is no requirement or guarantee that a reliable source be an impartial one. Trusting a source for facts doesn't mean adopting its editorial line. (This applies to both religious and secular publications.)If you're looking for a secular source for the history of the group's founding, here's something from a local newspaper: [1]. Cheers, gnu57 20:11, 25 November 2019 (UTC)- I would hesitate long and hard about describing "news sources" as "neutral". In fact, most news sources such as CNN are heavily WP:BIASED in favor of abortion, and their stories tend to be WP:PROMOTIONAL of Planned Parenthood and political candidates who support them. Not to mention actresses and musicians who support Planned Parenthood and contraception by activism, the arts and other efforts. So it's hilarious to me that once we find a couple of tenable WP:IS independent sources that they'd be dismissed out-of-hand as biased. Face it: every source on abortion is biased. It's a polarizing topic. There is no source that's going to sit there and go "meh, abortion is ok, but kinda avoid it if you can..." if that's what you expect out of a neutral source. That's not CNN or MSNBC, who are more like "abortion! rah rah rah! go PP!" Elizium23 (talk) 22:29, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
- Those still require in-line citations when cited to an unequivocally WP:BIASED source, for several reasons. First, if a fact is citeable only to such sources, we should be seriously considering omitting it entirely. Second, those sources can, collectively, form a narrative about the organization that doesn't match or reflect how it's usually covered in more neutral sources. For instance, "this is just a mom-and-pop business founded in the basement" or "this is a grassroots campaign that began with one person's desire for change" are things that can be less neutral in context than they seem on the surface and which organizations frequently use to downplay problems that have dominated coverage (a major reason why WP:PROMOTIONAL articles are often filled with such random inoffensive trivia.) It's better for us to find more neutral sources and base the overarching structure and history as described in the article on those, confining WP:BIASED sources to opinions; random factoids that are only citeable to biased sources should be viewed with suspicion at best and should generally just be omitted to avoid a situation where (as is the case now) large parts of the article end up structured around a narrative set by people with a vested interest in portraying the topic in a particular way. Consider: If you look at the sources now in the article, we have neutral, mainstream news sources describing the organization as highly-controversial (one source in the lead actually only brings it up in reference to inspiring abortion-clinic shooters!) combined with WP:BIASED sources painting this inoffensive picture of how David Bereit and Shawn Carney greased up their arms and pushed for change. That isn't WP:NPOV - if reliable sources take a largely critical view, we need to reflect that, rather than "balancing" it out with a lot of factoids from biased sources. In fact, I would argue that biased sources are better used for overt, strident arguments in favor of the organization (with an in-line citation); facts should be cited to more neutral sources when available, and left out as WP:UNDUE when no neutral sources are available. Otherwise we end up with things like "Richard Nixon was well-known for doing crimes and also for his cute dog, Checkers." --Aquillion (talk) 19:12, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Aquillion: How about facts like "the group began in Texas" or "The group runs campaigns during Lent"? I don't see how a source's bias would lead it to misrepresent these points, or why they would need in-text attribution. Cheers, gnu57 19:04, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
Fallacies in Avatar317's reasoning
[edit]- A source does not need to be listed in WP:RS/P in order to be considered reliable. In fact, it's best if it isn't found there, as RS/P is chiefly for deprecating bad sources.
- A source that opposes abortion is not an independent source? What kind of crack are you smoking? There are thousands of independent pro-life organizations, and plenty of news sources that are pro-life, pro-choice, and pro-abortion. It only serves neutrality if we are able to use all of those which are reliable. Also, you're an anti-Catholic bigot for saying that Catholic sources can't be used.
This article is under WP:Discretionary sanctions so I'd advise, rather than reverting again, to discuss here. If you'd like, we can go to WP:RSN about the reliability of sources you question, but I'm afraid you wouldn't like the answers. Elizium23 (talk) 06:10, 18 November 2019 (UTC)
Anti-Abortion
[edit]IP, the terminology on Wikipedia has been discussed and editor consensus has been reached as to the language used in articles relating to abortion. Please see the Anti-Abortion Movements and associated Talk page, and the linked discussion on that page. Please do not outright revert again, without first discussing here. Consensus can change, but only if you talk it out. King keudo (talk) 19:30, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
Funding
[edit]How are the funds received used for salaries/administration, advertising, campaigns, etc. ? Would appreciate a percentage breakdown of categories. 35.134.242.56 (talk) 02:49, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
First sentence of "Opposition" section
[edit]Recently, King keudo reverted changes I made to the sentence referred to above. I suspect keudo might not have read the source article [2] carefully. It's author, Holly Baxter, does use the word "harass" in her article, but does not accuse the anti-abortion protesters of "regularly harassing women and pregnant children as young as 12 years old trying to access vital healthcare, photograph them as they enter sexual health or maternity clinics, and provide these vulnerable people with leaflets disguised as NHS literature, which health professionals describe as 'pseudo-medical' and 'misleading".
Baxter does mention one protester who claims to have "saved" a twelve-year-old girl, but does not describe this presumed interaction as either "regular" or as "harassment". She does relate a story from the clinic supervisor about "a particularly threatening man" who, "last year", took photos of clients at the clinic door, but the supervisor goes on to say that the protesters claimed the man had nothing to do with their group. While Baxter might well agree that health care at this particular clinic is "vital" she doesn't actually use that adjective, nor does she call the clients "vulnerable" although she would probably agree that they are. Finally, while most health professionals probably would agree that the information in the leaflets handed out by the protesters was "misleading" and "pseudo-scientific" these particular descriptions actually come from a clinic "spokesperson".
In short, the Wikipedia editor who used this Guardian article embellished it, by trying to cross all the t's and dot all the i's, or at least the t's and i's, which would cast 40 Days in a worse light, and that is not acceptable. Goodtablemanners (talk) 19:23, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
- Correct. The article does not describe "regular" harassment. It relates the story of one 12 year old who chose not to have an abortion, and the story of "one particularly intimidating" man who took photos. The phrase claiming they "regularly" harass twelve-years olds and take photos can of women entering/exiting clinics simply not be substantiated by this source. –Zfish118⋉talk 16:05, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
Neutrality tag
[edit]There is currently no content that is disproportionately praising or reading like advertisement copy. The article is pretty barebone facts, each directly attributed by citation and in most cases in text attribution. I am removing the neutrality tag (but not the reliable source tag). The sources are transparently used in the current state, but other mainstream sources may be available for further context and commentary. –Zfish118⋉talk 17:03, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
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