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The last of the four {{sclass|Nassau|battleship|6}}s to grace the hallowed Milhist ACR page, ''Rheinland'' was the first vessel to be laid down but the third completed. I wrote this article primarily in May, and it has since passed a Good Article review and been copy-edited by Dank. I feel the article is at or close to A-class quality, and I look forward to working with the reviewers toward improving this article for an eventual run at FAC. Thanks in advance to all those who take the time to examine the article. [[User:Parsecboy|Parsecboy]] ([[User talk:Parsecboy|talk]]) 19:42, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
The last of the four {{sclass|Nassau|battleship|2}}s to grace the hallowed Milhist ACR page, ''Rheinland'' was the first vessel to be laid down but the third completed. I wrote this article primarily in May, and it has since passed a Good Article review and been copy-edited by Dank. I feel the article is at or close to A-class quality, and I look forward to working with the reviewers toward improving this article for an eventual run at FAC. Thanks in advance to all those who take the time to examine the article. [[User:Parsecboy|Parsecboy]] ([[User talk:Parsecboy|talk]]) 19:42, 26 July 2010 (UTC)


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*When I did an English-language Google search, I got many more hits for "German Imperial Navy" than for "Kaiserliche Marine", so I'm assuming the English term goes first with the German in parentheses ... does anyone know different? - Dank ([[User talk:Dank|push to talk]])
*When I did an English-language Google search, I got many more hits for "German Imperial Navy" than for "Kaiserliche Marine", so I'm assuming the English term goes first with the German in parentheses ... does anyone know different? - Dank ([[User talk:Dank|push to talk]])
*I don't know if you care about consistency with hyphens before "class", Nate ... if so, search for "Sachsen class armored frigate". - Dank ([[User talk:Dank|push to talk]])
*I don't know if you care about consistency with hyphens before "class", Nate ... if so, search for "Sachsen class armored frigate". - Dank ([[User talk:Dank|push to talk]])
*Although "manned" is acceptable to a lot of people, and there's an argument that it fits well with the wiki-philosophy that we're not trying to be in any sense "better" or "more sensitive" than our sources, I still think that we need to be aware that many academics and professionals feel that words like "manned" are outdated and even reflect negatively on the writer (and copyeditor!) ... even though the crew was (probably) all male. The thinking is that the automatic and unconscious use of such words reinforces the bias that things will go horribly wrong if you put women on a ship. - Dank ([[User talk:Dank|push to talk]])
*Although "manned" is acceptable to some, and there's an argument that it fits with the wiki-philosophy that we're not trying to be in any sense "better" or "more sensitive" than our sources, I still think that we need to be aware that most writers, academics and professionals have felt that words like "manned" have been outdated since before 1980, and some feel they reflect negatively on the writer (and copyeditor!) ... even though the crew was (probably) all male. The thinking has been that the automatic and unconscious use of such words reinforces the bias that things will go horribly wrong if you put women on a ship. But I think the main argument isn't about "sensitivity", it's that I haven't seen the word for over 30 years in writing of the kind we're trying to emulate. - Dank ([[User talk:Dank|push to talk]])
*<s>I believe I've copyedited the ''Battle of the Gulf of Riga'' section before. - Dank ([[User talk:Dank|push to talk]])</s>
*<s>Same with ''Battle of Jutland'' and the first paragraph in the next section. If someone could look through to make sure that the stuff that was copyedited before still looks good, I'd appreciate it. It's a fine article but I'll hold off on my support for now. - Dank ([[User talk:Dank|push to talk]]) 04:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)</s>

<b>Support</b> per usual [[User:Dank/Copyediting|disclaimer]]. I finished up the copyediting I was asking for help with. I would appreciate it if someone would check my copyediting. - Dank ([[User talk:Dank|push to talk]]) 22:46, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

'''Support''' -- prose, sourcing, and supporting materials all look good. Cheers, [[User:Ian Rose|Ian Rose]] ([[User talk:Ian Rose|talk]]) 10:20, 9 August 2010 (UTC)

'''Support <s>Comments</s>'''
*Oil or coal-fired?
*Conversion needed for ihp
*What time is used in the Jutland section?--[[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]) 02:49, 12 August 2010 (UTC)
**All fixed. [[User:Parsecboy|Parsecboy]] ([[User talk:Parsecboy|talk]]) 11:53, 13 August 2010 (UTC)
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