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== Menelik II ==

People here tend to add too much information of other peoples into this section , If you want to write about the life of Lij Iyasu or Emperor Tewodros , THEN PLEASE DO IT IN THEIR OWN WIKI SECTIONS and NOT here !!
Please keep this section clean !! [[User:Understandable science|Understandable Science]] 20:03 7 August 2010

== June 2016 ==
[[User:Stumink|Stumink]], need more clarification regarding to the reasons given for your last 4 reverts.

'''1)''' 1st revert saying "this is not contrary to the claims that slavery was carried out": pls make it more clear
:"Contorary" is used to inform that there is indeed an opposing view on the claim "large scale slavery" and it is used as in "contrary to the claims where large scale slavery were promoted, Chris Prouty on the other hand states that ..........". The reason why "According to Mekuria Bulcha and Mohammed Hasan" is added on top of the paragraph is to indicate that other scholars have different and opposing views and show within the paragraph that this and this writers claim this while this and that writers oppose this views. Remember not all scholars agree with Bulcha and Hassan and it needs to be addressed accordingly.

'''2)''' 2nd revert saying "First source is unreliable. Rest is original research. This info doesn't need to be here and can be added on a more relevant page":
: '''a)''' First sources is unreliable? guess what you are saying is the article from salem.com, I don't know based on which wikipedia rule is that this source cannot be reliable but salem.com is an American news organisation wich mainly report news for Oregon state people. This rule here [[WP:NEWSORG]] allows articles with opinion pieces from news organisations and it says:
:"Editorial commentary, analysis and opinion pieces, whether written by the editors of the publication (editorials) or outside authors (op-eds) are reliable primary sources for statements attributed to that editor or author"
:'''b)''' Rest is original research? The one you deleted for this reason was written based on the article written on salem.com as well as the other 6 citations used as refernce for the two sentences you deleted in this revert. Six of them are reliable published books that can be accessed from google book and when you click the link you will see that the citations are highlighted in yellow, you may review them and if required I can bring them here for discussion.
:'''C)''' Not relevant to this article? this one i guess is for the last sentence. It is used to support the sentence before it. It shows that other opposing scholars did state that indeed in present-day Ethiopia, before the establishment of a central government (before the rise of Menelik), there were many warring clans/nations who fight each other while no government imposing rule of law, just like what we have seen in Somalia between 1991-2006, where one language speaking and one religion following various Somali clans fighting continuously because there is not central government in 20-21st century. Now when you go back to 19th century we expect to observe much more ugly clan wars to occur in the land of presnt-day Ethiopia before the rise of Menelik and as part of his legacy, for stooping those bloody clan wars, it is of-course relevant to this page.

'''3)''' 3rd revert saying "Re-added death toll estimates from reliable source. Chris Prouty information has been removed because it is redundant as abolition of slavery is mentioned lower"
:'''a)''' Chris Prouty statement deleted and is redundant? Chris Prouty's statement is added to achieve neutral point of view (NPOV) to that paragraph, remember there are also people who have opinions contrary to Bulcha and Hassan and as their point of view has the right to be heard the other opposing peoples do also has the same right. Wikipedia says that when writing an encyclopedia biased points needs to be balanced by providing other opposing point of views by providing reliable sources. True about slavery abolition has been described below but the use of both of them is different and the one inserted at the top is with the objective of achieving NPOV to that specific paragraph while the other one is used for another topic and note that the same wording is not repeated below and they both are different wordings from different sources.
:'''b)''' Re-added death toll estimates from reliable source? Actually this is a very serious accusations towards him and needs to be discussed extensively before re-added.
:: * Unanswered questions: This statement needs to have answers to the following questions: 1) Millions (over 2 millions)? what is the maximum because it leads to assume unlimited number like 3, 10, 100 .....million? 2) What kind of material evidences were provided to estimate this much deaths? Material evidences like photographs, pictures and videos of mass graves and other materials related to genocide found in museums? 3) What kind of historically written documents were used to claim this much people died? Written documents that indicate genocide like copy of a law, decree, constitution, policy papers, verbal account, letters used to give orders to other military personals, eyewitness records 50% from the soldiers who carried out as well as 50% from the victims side as being done in other well researched genocide claims in other parts of the world. 4)If indeed there is some evidence then there should also be similar evidences to connect it with the leader but not by out of state control generals 5) Inorder to avoid biased research, who are the people involved in the research? Doest it inlcude from both opposing sides? what are their tribe, nationality etc etc also matters. If you personally checked the source you claim are reliable, please make it clear to those 5 questions.
:: * Issues with the source provided: there are two books provided as a source and none of them have page numbers where the citation for that claim is based upon. Please indicate the page numbers, if possible please bring the exact quotation extracted from the book here for discussion, otherwise it is not fair to leave it for other wikipedians to confirm it by going through all these 100s of pages to find a citation supporting this specific claim.
:: * Personaly, I have searched many books and I couldn't be able to find a reliable source implicating Menelik with equivalent story like this [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=b0_uAgAAQBAJ&pg=PA229&dq=%22slay+all+the+men,+cut+off+the+privy+parts+of+the+boys+kill+the+old+women%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjli8Kn28DNAhWEXhoKHTn7CHwQ6AEIHDAA#v=onepage&q=%22slay%20all%20the%20men%2C%20cut%20off%20the%20privy%20parts%20of%20the%20boys%20kill%20the%20old%20women%22&f=false diary of Bermudes] a primary source, an eye witness of Oromo expansion and also secondary sources like Mohamed Hassan and Richard Pankhurst stating it in their books as can be seen here [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=fg1zCgAAQBAJ&pg=PA166&dq=%22on+all,+only+to+destroy+and+depopulate+their+countries%22+%22slay+all+men+...+kill+the+old+women%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjOlvir3MDNAhXE6RQKHdYoATYQ6AEIHDAA#v=onepage&q=%22on%20all%2C%20only%20to%20destroy%20and%20depopulate%20their%20countries%22%20%22slay%20all%20men%20...%20kill%20the%20old%20women%22&f=false 1] [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=zpYBD3bzW1wC&pg=PA284&dq=%22on+all,+only+to+destroy+and+depopulate+their+countries%22+%22slay+all+the+men,+cut+off+the+privy+parts+of+the+boys,+kill+the+old+women%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjd-YLv28DNAhVIOBoKHdPUA20Q6AEIHDAA#v=onepage&q=%22on%20all%2C%20only%20to%20destroy%20and%20depopulate%20their%20countries%22%20%22slay%20all%20the%20men%2C%20cut%20off%20the%20privy%20parts%20of%20the%20boys%2C%20kill%20the%20old%20women%22&f=false 2] which clearly indicate genocide, also showing how it is done, and based on this eywitness account many can come up with death toll similar or more than the claim you re-added for Menelik. However, I don't think it is appropriate to write such graphic quotations under Wikipedia's article for Oromo expansion or under Oromo history neither under Menelik's biography even if those sources are reliable.

Issues similar to your points raised have been discussed above extensively and you may review them — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 13:48, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]], I agree with [[User:Stumink|Stumink]] when it comes to your unreliable sources which are original research synthesized from previous sources. I've deleted them as Stumink did prior but you reverted. I have previously added the sources associated with Menelik and his armies atrocities on the Dizi people, the Arsi Oromo in the article itself. I have cited sources(verified) of accounts of Bulatovich and Antonelli (both Men who were at Menelik's Court and Army), therefore it is verifiable and account of such atrocities per Wikipedia guidelines on verifiable sources. However,your sources are opinion pieces and synthesis based on sources, hence it is original research on your sources part and yours. Deleted for those reasons.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 05:02, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
:[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], from your above statement you have come up with following claims/accusations for your deletion of the statement
:1) Unreliable sources? please indicate clearly by saying X and Y source is unreliable
:2) Original research? indicate clearly saying the sentence that begins as ............. is not sourced therefore is an original research.
:3) Synthesized? indicate clearly by saying the sentence that begins as .............cannot be concluded based on the source used for reference.
:4) Your sources are opinion pieces? Indicate to which source this applies to and please indicate any Wikipedia rule that it violates, a rule that states that sources with opinion pieces cannot be used as a source.

:Unless your reasoning for your last revert gives answers to the above 4 questions, then anyother editor can revert your edit based on "convincing reason were not suppplied to justify your deletion."

:In your edit summary you claimed the sentence that begins with "some argue"? as a weasel word and asked the question "Some refers to who? the answer is Feqadu Lemesa and the other people quoted under his article. Since those people are known and that since the statement is supported with a reliable source then it cannot be considered as a weasel word. Speaking of weasel word the death toll added by stumnik starts by saying "Some estimates......." If I may, let me ask you the same question you asked me "Some refers to who? unless the name of those people who made the estimate is known then it will be considered as weasel word, and will be deleted based on the same rule you used. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 13:49, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

::"of Walaita also lost a large proportion of its inhab itants. An Abyssinian expedition in 1894 slaugh tered about 119,000 men, women and children (Prouty, 1986:115) in less than two weeks.", This information alone from Chris Prouty stating "Abysinnians" in 1894 (During the Reign of Menelik, under his leadership) "slaughtered about 119,000 men, women and children in less than two weeks" tells me and anyone capable of reading that an estimate of a million or even more getting killed during the Reign of Menelik is more likely than far fetched as you seem to try to stand in the Denial Camp. Mass murder is mass murder no matter how you try to spin it. Feqadu Lemesa was providing his Massmurder Apologist opinion in his salem article Synthesizing from sources that agree with his pre-determined opinion. There are more examples giving above about the Dizi People, Arsi Oromo. These accounts are coming from Primary Witnesses of Menelik's army and orders of which Menelik gave obviously.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

"The Abyssinians were delighted with the natives. "What kind of Shankala (Negroes) are these?" they asked. "Even though they are naked, this is a civilized people. They respect their king, and their houses are well built, and they were able to submit to us. Real Shankala would run away like animals and would perish to the last man, not realizing that it would be better to submit voluntarily. But why did they give us a dog? Either they are scoundrels and think that we eat dogs or, perhaps, they themselves eat them." This circumstance surprised me as well. Maybe there was some symbolic significance in the gift of a dog, or maybe they really do use them as food. I didn't succeed in finding out. " [http://www.samizdat.com/armies.html#_VI._FROM_TH] This is a side note however, if this account by this Primary Witness to Menelik's armies conquest is legitimate, then it says alot about those Abysinnian soldiers maurading and pillaging, raping and enslaving the civilians in the non-Abysinnian people and territories. In this account, the Abysinnians hunt the Shuro people shooting them out of trees, burning homes down. With this type of attitude and actions by Abysinnian soldiers, "some estimates go into the millions" is not farfetched and based on the numbers by the accounts of these Primary witnesses.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

"What was remarkable here is that mutilation did not stop with Abyssinian victory at the battle of Azule in 1886 that cost the lives over 12,000 Oromo fighters (Haji, 1995; Zewde, 1991: 63). Weeks after the Arsi were defeated at battle of Azule, the commander of the conquering forces, Ras Darge Sahle Selassie, ordered thousands of Oromos to gather at a place called Anole. Thousands came obeying the order and were killed or mutilated – the men of their hands and the women of their breasts (Haji, 1995: 15-16)." [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

"It was reported that in 1912, about 40,000 of the Gimira were rounded up and taken to the north, and that half of them died on the way while the rest were sold as slaves and scattered within and outside the Ethiopian empire (Pankhurst, 1968: 107)." [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

De Salviac, de Martial, 1901, Une peuple antique au pays Menelik: les Galla grand nation africaine, Paris. Translate by Dr. Ayalew Kanno [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Haji, Abbas, 1995, ‘Arsi Oromo Political and Military Resistance against the Shoan Conquest, (1881-86)’, Journal of Oromo Studies, Vol. II, Nos. 1 and 2 [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)


"Dejizmatch Wolde Gabriel mutilated the right wrist of 400 Oromos in one day"[https://books.google.com/books?id=cfjYAgAAQBAJ&pg=PA157&lpg=PA157&dq=Anole+arsi&source=bl&ots=4M1Y9V0SNK&sig=BBac1dkgwDKbyOAhiVgjPp77la8&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjE-afYscbNAhUC0WMKHVndDLA4ChDoAQgtMAQ#v=onepage&q=Anole%20arsi&f=false] which references "De Salviac page 278 [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:17, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

According to Atsma Giyorgis, young Teen Shoans went on hunting expeditions of Galla (Oromo) in Temquet. This was happening during the reign of Emperor menelik, therefore some estimates of millions of people getting killed is not farfetched when there was a culture of killing humans for sport and practice. Atsma Giyorgis and His works p.533, Bairu Tafla[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:17, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
::'''Summary of your response above'''
::'''1)''' All of it is in support of the sentence that begins "some estimate.........." should remain. For these see detailed response below
::'''2)''' The sentence that begins as "some argue........." written based on Fekadu Lemesa's point of view: as for this one well it should be known that there are opposing views and they also deserves their point to be heard. If you have any other specific reasons indicate.
::'''3)''' I have raised 4 questions above and still they need clarification for each of your claim/accusation by indicating so and so sentence is original reserch/unreliable/syntehsised/opinion pieces just to make our discussion more clear, simple and summarized.

::Now to your 1st point in support of the sentence which has 'millions'. The issue is the sources used for this sentence is Mohamed, Bultovich and Alemayehu, so that means in one of these sources we need to find exactly the number 'millions' otherwise it is considered original research. You and I cannot simply estimate the number of people killed. In my argument with you above the number of people killed by communists is very well researched and estimated by by various professionals from all sides. So If you can be able to provide the page number where 'millions' can be found in these sources then we are one step a head in deciding weather that particular sentence should be there or not.

:: That being said now we can scrutinize the sources you used above.
:: About 119,000 wolaita deaths: I amnot going to argue by saying people did not die but people did die from both sides. In [[American Civil War]] close to 1 million people are dead and the reason for the war is just "we can't have free and slave states". And what if one said that all clans were continuously fighting with no one stooping them, for instance see this source it says: [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=9Hfl5rpXM1sC&pg=PA107&dq=%22Kaffa+the+state+was+actively+involved+in+the+harvesting+of+captives.+As+Kaffa+expanded+after+1800+skirmishes+with+other+Omotic+states+like+Kullo+and+Walamo%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjJnMXWptLMAhUCVSwKHZgqApoQ6AEIGjAA#v=onepage&q=%22Kaffa%20the%20state%20was%20actively%20involved%20in%20the%20harvesting%20of%20captives.%20As%20Kaffa%20expanded%20after%201800%20skirmishes%20with%20other%20Omotic%20states%20like%20Kullo%20and%20Walamo%22&f=false Kaffa state expanded after 1,800 skirmishes] you can imagine the number of people suffering in those 1,800 wars/raids in both sides. Note that every tribe and clan raid each other unstopable and everyone is in fear of their neighbours even if their neighbour speaks and looks like them. The Wolayta war is one of the last wars to happen in that region. Also note that after 120 years the Wolayta people still exists and infact they are the second most people in SNNPR state after the Sidamo people. Besides descendants of Kawo Tona continued to administer their own people up until 1974.

:: By the way since we are talking about the Wolayta war it is also important to mention the military generals who participated and their soldier's background. You will be surprised to find out that majority of the generals are Oromos. See here [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=ZJLCZT7MW08C&pg=PA415&dq=%22Abba+Jifar+II+of+Jimma%22+%22Ras+Mikael%22+%22Fitawrari+Gabayahu%22+%22Hayla-Maryam+Wale%22+Makonnen+%22ras+walda-giyorgis%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjPgrSau5nNAhUCiRoKHRHZCXcQ6AEIHjAA#v=onepage&q=%22Abba%20Jifar%20II%20of%20Jimma%22%20%22Ras%20Mikael%22%20%22Fitawrari%20Gabayahu%22%20%22Hayla-Maryam%20Wale%22%20Makonnen%20%22ras%20walda-giyorgis%22&f=false History of the Wolayta war]. Here are the generals who participated: Ras Mikael Ali (Oromo), Sultan Aba Jifar (Oromo), Ras Mekonen (Oromo), Fit Gebeyehu (Oromo), Hayla Mariam Wale (mixed, his grandfather Ras Gugsa Mursa is a Yeju Oromo who ruled north Ethiopia) finally Ras Walda-Gyorgis (the only Amhara general) but still he came with Oromo Auxileries and his wife is from Yejju rulling class (Oromo). This shows that Menelik's armies backbone is the Oromo generals and their Soldiers they mobilize from their clan. Now same army generals also did went to Anole and other wars to whatever battles Menelik goes to. And what ever is looted and raided those generals will get their share as modern soldier gets paid. Also Menelike did marry his daughters to Ras Mikael and Ras Gobenas son (Also sharing the state power). Ras Mikael's soldier captured king Tona, and Tona later became administrator of Wolayta even after many died.

:: About what you said happen in Anole, all of it is quoted from "Abbas Gnamo". He hasnot been in 19th century therefore he is a secondary source and you don't expect me to beleive a secondary source who has not quoted a primary source like Bermudes and Bultovich who are neutrals. This foreigners when they go back to their country they can write whatever they observed in their own eyes and usually write both sides crimes, because they just write for sharing knowledge but not for imposing anyone's agenda. About what you said happened in Anole I have not seen it in Bultovich's own diary and if such thing indeed happen then there is no reason that prevented him from writing after he went to his country. Even if he did not go to Anole battle personally he most definetly mate and interviewed many of Menelik's soldiers who went to the battle. Since Menelik's army is multiethinc then it would have been very easy for him to find many Oromo soldiers who participated in the battle, if not there would definitely be gossips in the society for him to pick up if indeed such thing happen. Those foreigners even if gossip they will write it no matter what, for instance Italians feared the Oromo cavalary at the battle of Adwa more than any other armies of Menelik because of what they do to the soldiers they captured weather alive or dead. Based on this knowledge they had in advance many Italians through themselves into cliffs, committing suicide, rather than being captured by Oromo cavalry. [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 23:13, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

:::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]], I think you are missing the point here. This article is about the "Reign of Menelik" as an Emperor. His generals or soldiers being Oromo does not Remove the Atrocities which were Committed under His Reign as Emperor. You keep using Conquered Leaders as the backbone of your Argument for Non-inclusion of "atrocities committed under the Reign of Menelik II". Your argument against Inclusion based on "Secondary Sources" would disqualify also the "Secondary Sources" which Paint "Menelik II" as a "Angelic Hero of Ethiopian History". Again Oromos killing other Oromos does not remove the Fact that Menelik and Shewans(Amhara) engaged in and ordered the Slaughter of many thousands which led up into an estimate in the "Millions". I provided Primary Witness accounts of Menelik's Army, actual FOREIGN (Russian and Italian) soldiers involved in Menelik's War against the Non-Amhara(Shewan) people. Terms today used such as Galla, Shankalla, Shuro, Barya, etc are a Testament to the Racist nature of those Abysinnians (namely Amhara/Tigrayans) who went on Slave raids and conquering other people that are Non-Abysinnians. So your use of Token Oromos ( See [[Tokenism]] ) to so-called bring Balance and a "NPOV" is logically Fallacious to say the least. To use the argument of "Whatever happens in War is a result of War" does not Take away from the Barbarity of the soldiers and commanders and ultimately of Menelik in not only Allowing it to happen but in some cases employing such tactics as Mutilation, killings, and selling captured Soldiers/women/children/elderly men into Slavery.
:::: If we were to include every single Atrocity committed under the Reign of Emperor Menelik, this Article would be longer than what it is right now. So using "Some estimates that millions were killed", I do not think is specifically about the Oromos only, it includes "Shuros, Shankallas, Gallas, Wolyatas, etc" who were ultimately killed by Soldiers Representing Emperor Menelik II. There is no going around that, no matter how many Conquered or Complicit "Oromos" or "non-Amharas" that you present as being under the Command of Menelik. The Sources I called out are much more credible and closer to Menelik(as they were There when the Atrocities were Committed) than Lemassa's "Oromos killed more Oromos than Menelik did", that is his Original research. The number for Non-Abysinnians killed by the Menelik War Machine can be counted as there Witnesses such Blutavich and Antonelli, as well the Non-Abysinnian Ethiopian tribes in their oral history.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:24, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
::::: *[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], We have to follow Wikipedias rule and unsuported attribution is not allowed, it is not me who is saying this. So if you please name the people who estimated as 'millions' then we will be under the rule of Wikipedia. Since I can be able to access any kind of books and articles, then if you can help me by giving me the person's name, title of the book and page number then you are helping in confirming the number 'miilions'. Based on my personal research I could not be able to get this estimate from anyother reliable sources.
::::: *Still I didnot get convincing clarification for your deletion of statements based on the above 4 basic questions. The statment you deleted is not original researc because it is referenced with reliable source. Be specific on why you said original research?
::::: *The issue is if you search the internet almost all blogs indicate atrocities mainly to Oromos as if they have no involvment in Menelik's administration. The reason why I showed you there are indeed many Oromo generals participated in the campaign to the south is that for people to know the truth and stop distorting historical facts in broad day light. For whatever you claim bad happens in military campaign please know that Oromo generals and their own soldiers under only their command take more than half of it's share, this is historical fact. If we must blame people for any proven or fabricated bad history then we could say 40% Oromo (or more), 40% Amhara and 10% Tigre and 10% others and trying to draw a picture as if the 40% as innocent people is definitely historical distortion. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 17:00, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

:::::: *[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] First off, the sentence is "Some estimates for the number of people killed as a result of the conquest go into the millions." This sentence doesn't say "number of Oromo people", it says "number of people", which means it is More than just Oromo people. You are arguing from a false premise, a Strawman argument. The sentence has three citations, you can go verify those three sources but what you can not do is Delete because you do not agree with it. I was specific why it is Original research because Lemassa made a Statistical determination of "More Oromos killed other oromos". Hey I've read from the accounts of Primary witnesses in Menelik's Army. The citations are available for you to go look up. You are able to see the Citations attributed to the sentence "Some estimates for the number of people killed as a result of the conquest go into the millions", therefore you should have no issue Looking that up. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 18:59, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
::::::: *[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], if you go back and review my argument it's not because I don't agree with you but only because it is unsupported attribution. Estimating death toll is not something you and I seat in the computers and provide any numbers we feel like because that is simply an original research. By the way it says 'millions' therefore you are saying minimum of 2 million died and maximum is unlimited. I do have electronic access to all three of the sources and searched 'millions' and I could not be able to find it in all three of them. When you support it's inclusion I am assuming that you personally have seen it in your own eyes so I was asking which one of the three did have the word 'millions'. That is my main reason for opposition of that statement to be included, that is all.
::::::: * One concern you raised is Feqadu Lemesa's quote saying "other Oromos killing by other Oromos" that one will be corrected and name of tribe will not be mentioned and I think it's better I replace it as "Inter clan as well as inter tribal fighting for resource competition ....... this way it will combine Feqadu Lemesa's opinion with Keffa states expansion by 1800 skirmishs. Addition of this statement is needed again to balance what has been said at the beginning of the paragraph. You are trying to tell us you are so much concerned with human right but if you realy are concerned about Human right then for you there should not be a difference for people dying as result of 1800 wars of Kaffa state and also the many people dying as a result of other Oromo clans fighting with themselves as well as with all their neighbors for resource competition as Feqadu Stated as well as people dying in Menelik's expansion war. If indeed your concern is human right it should not matter for you people dying on whichever battles and with over whom. However, saying I only want what Menelik did should be known but the many people who died as result of clan/tribal fightings should be deleted/hidden by all means possible is to be biased and also imposing agenda. So if in Menelik article there is a word like "mass killings" "large scale slavery" (by the way previously I didnot delete them) is included then to balance it by saying like "Kaffa state also made 1,800 wars, also did large scale slavery", something with similar story is I think justifiable than just deleting those words just because they are biased. Remember mass killings weather done by Menelik or 16th centuary Oromos is mass killing and if you are concerned about human right then they both should be told with equivalent tone otherwise saying let's just use "mass killings" for Menelik but lets try as much as possible to hide it from being used to tarnish Oromo history and let's just draw a picture of Oromos as angels, innocent people who never harmed their neighboring people is what we call biased. Therefore, the paragraph at it's current state is so much biased and definitely requires to be balanced or otherwise should be removed entirely. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 21:15, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

If you think information about Oromo mass killings in the 16th century is important then please add it to a more relevant page describing the history of the Oromos for example. We do not need to balance claims about Menelik's mass killings with information that is irrelevant to Menelik. [[User:Stumink|Stumink]] ([[User talk:Stumink|talk]]) 21:56, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

:: *[[User:Stumink|Stumink]], Thank you for stating what I've been trying to make [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] understand. I used the citations (which I did not Add) but only viewed online and researched, and there happens to be witness testimonies by people that were with Menelik's armies namely Blutavoich(Russian) and Antonelli (Italian). EthiopianHabesha has been adding irrelevant information such as "Menelik's Generals were Oromos" which is Appealing to Tokenism to justify (not balance) the mass killings that were committed by soldiers obeying Menelik's emperorship. It seems quite obvious that EthiopianHabesha does not want Menelik's mass killings told as a matter of fact. I think I have exhausted myself trying to show him the thousands that got killed which lead to the sentence "Some estimates for the number of people killed as a result of the conquest go into the millions.", He/She denies even calling it a conquest but a "Re-unification". FYI, everything I listed above was from this article with the citations which were not added by me. Some I researched online using the citations and if probably a better way to capture this information on Menelik's mass killings is a new article "Massacres in the Ethiopian Empire"? [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:47, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

::: Well I think there should definitely be ageneral page describing Menelik's conquests of this period not just the atrocities. There really needs to be a separate page detailing the conquests in detail given how significant these events are.[[User:Stumink|Stumink]] ([[User talk:Stumink|talk]]) 14:03, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

:::: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], If you go back and review my statements I did not justify anything by saying Menelik's generals are Oromos. I brought this topic in response to your repeated usage of 'Amharas' and 'Abyssinians' did that & this. May be you have not notice it but it has been used repeatedly, by doing that you are trying to make a point. And the tribes of these key generals is mentioned to counter the point you are trying to make. As I said above if we must blame people then you should know that historcal documents doesn't back your accusations. The thing is there is no Tigre/Gojame/Gondare general who was close to being key person in the empire than the Oromo Habtegyorgis and Gobana so I don't see the reason why they are included in your accusation in the first place? Infact what we should be saying is Shewan Amharas and Western/Centeral/northern Oromos union government (reason for this claim is Menelik's and Haileselase being mixed themselves as well as their children politically dynastically married to Ras mikael Ali, Ras Gobana and Morada Bekere families who were powerful warlords of the western, central and northern Oromos). These above mentioned Oromo generals including Habtegyorrgis are the powrebase of the central government and these general's own people from their own clan takes the highest share in the military that campaigned to the south. And I have given you the evidence of who participated in Welayta war and the generals were 4 Oromos/1 mixed/1 Amhara not even a single Tigre general. Now if anyone is in wikipedia to share knowledge, and after looking at those generals, then how is it acceptable to say Amhara and Tigre when we suposed to be saying Oromo and Amhara? The soldiers will only lesson to their own generals who brought them in the first place, so if you think Menelik is unfair leader to Oromos or any other tribe these battle would have been their chance to collaborate their 4 armies and attack Menelik together with the Welayta army in Welayta land. Considering Tona was captured by Ras Mikael's soldier/army that means they had fit soldiers to win the battle easily and capture Menelik. But they didn't because simply he is not a leader like you are trying to tell the world. So don't try to give excuse by saying they are conquered generals, not using these opportunity if the leader is unfair will not make them innocent if indeed what you claim did happen. Teodros is cruel and unfair and indeed everyone revolted and in his final battle with the British the historian believed that it was actually difficult for Teodros to arrive at the battlefield than the British who were welcomed peacefully by all revolting clan lords who were unhappy by cruel treatment of Teodros. Of these revolting lords the Yejju Oromos take the lead, partly because they lost their power because of him and because all people including the church opposes his cruel leadership. So the point is if these ancient people were untreated well indeed they will revolt. In summary if we must blame people then as I said Oromos will take the largest share under Menelik's administration and hiding their mistake by saying "Amharas" and "Abyssinians" is indeed historical distortion. That is why I said majority generals are Oromo, not to justify any thing but to recommend the use of "Oromo and Amhara" instead of "Amhara and Tigre" because that is what the history book is clearly telling us.— [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 16:59, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

::::: [[User:Stumink|Stumink]], You have added page numbers and will be reviewing it. But as said above no wikipedia editor have the capacity to estimate death tolls, so that 'millions' should be in one of these page numbers, otherwise cannot be included in Wikipedia based on their rule. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 16:59, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

:::::: [[User:Stumink|Stumink]], in regards to your suggestion saying "If you think information about Oromo mass killings in the 16th century is important then please add it to a more relevant page describing the history of the Oromos for example. We do not need to balance claims about Menelik's mass killings with information that is irrelevant to Menelik" I have never said such kind of informations are important, you may review my statements again. On the other hand you suggest such kind of information are important and needs to be included under Menelik's biography? And you continued to say it is not relevant to this page and suggested "add it to a more relevant page describing the history of the Oromos for example", since you support this kind of informations to be included why don't you add it yourself to the relevant page? If I may ask, why do you suggest such informations to be included under Menelik but you don't want to add what happened in 16th centuary to the relevant page yourself? If you strongly believe such informations are important then you should have added it right after adding something similar under Menelik? You shouldn't be directing that job to me since I personaly don't support for such kind of informations to be added in wikipedia. Regarding to the mass killing in the 16th centuary, I have given you a source clearly indicating genocide, as being said by the neutral Portuguese man Bermudes in his own diary, who documented from his own observation, and also I gave you secondary sources from the neutral Britsh Richard Pankhurst as well as an Oromo historian Mohamed Hassan. If required I could also give you sources indicating the many number of peoples and states historically recorded by neutral Europeans, Arabs and Portuguese but later who disappeared from history after 16th century. If you are claiming the reason for strongly supporting the inclusion of such kind of information is because you have very strong concern for human right then for you what happened in 16th century people and 19th century people should not be different! And if the reason why you don't want to add it is because of problems with the sources or limited sources please let me know and I can help you and then you will personally add it yourself to the most relevant page you think is appropriate. Wikipedia says achieve Neutral point of view and suggests wikipedia editors needs to be balanced and not biased when writing an encyclopedia. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 20:40, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

== June 2016 ==
[[User:Stumink|Stumink]], need more clarification regarding to the reasons given for your last 4 reverts.

'''1)''' 1st revert saying "this is not contrary to the claims that slavery was carried out": pls make it more clear
:"Contorary" is used to inform that there is indeed an opposing view on the claim "large scale slavery" and it is used as in "contrary to the claims where large scale slavery were promoted, Chris Prouty on the other hand states that ..........". The reason why "According to Mekuria Bulcha and Mohammed Hasan" is added on top of the paragraph is to indicate that other scholars have different and opposing views and show within the paragraph that this and this writers claim this while this and that writers oppose this views. Remember not all scholars agree with Bulcha and Hassan and it needs to be addressed accordingly.

'''2)''' 2nd revert saying "First source is unreliable. Rest is original research. This info doesn't need to be here and can be added on a more relevant page":
: '''a)''' First sources is unreliable? guess what you are saying is the article from salem.com, I don't know based on which wikipedia rule is that this source cannot be reliable but salem.com is an American news organisation wich mainly report news for Oregon state people. This rule here [[WP:NEWSORG]] allows articles with opinion pieces from news organisations and it says:
:"Editorial commentary, analysis and opinion pieces, whether written by the editors of the publication (editorials) or outside authors (op-eds) are reliable primary sources for statements attributed to that editor or author"
:'''b)''' Rest is original research? The one you deleted for this reason was written based on the article written on salem.com as well as the other 6 citations used as refernce for the two sentences you deleted in this revert. Six of them are reliable published books that can be accessed from google book and when you click the link you will see that the citations are highlighted in yellow, you may review them and if required I can bring them here for discussion.
:'''C)''' Not relevant to this article? this one i guess is for the last sentence. It is used to support the sentence before it. It shows that other opposing scholars did state that indeed in present-day Ethiopia, before the establishment of a central government (before the rise of Menelik), there were many warring clans/nations who fight each other while no government imposing rule of law, just like what we have seen in Somalia between 1991-2006, where one language speaking and one religion following various Somali clans fighting continuously because there is not central government in 20-21st century. Now when you go back to 19th century we expect to observe much more ugly clan wars to occur in the land of presnt-day Ethiopia before the rise of Menelik and as part of his legacy, for stooping those bloody clan wars, it is of-course relevant to this page.

'''3)''' 3rd revert saying "Re-added death toll estimates from reliable source. Chris Prouty information has been removed because it is redundant as abolition of slavery is mentioned lower"
:'''a)''' Chris Prouty statement deleted and is redundant? Chris Prouty's statement is added to achieve neutral point of view (NPOV) to that paragraph, remember there are also people who have opinions contrary to Bulcha and Hassan and as their point of view has the right to be heard the other opposing peoples do also has the same right. Wikipedia says that when writing an encyclopedia biased points needs to be balanced by providing other opposing point of views by providing reliable sources. True about slavery abolition has been described below but the use of both of them is different and the one inserted at the top is with the objective of achieving NPOV to that specific paragraph while the other one is used for another topic and note that the same wording is not repeated below and they both are different wordings from different sources.
:'''b)''' Re-added death toll estimates from reliable source? Actually this is a very serious accusations towards him and needs to be discussed extensively before re-added.
:: * Unanswered questions: This statement needs to have answers to the following questions: 1) Millions (over 2 millions)? what is the maximum because it leads to assume unlimited number like 3, 10, 100 .....million? 2) What kind of material evidences were provided to estimate this much deaths? Material evidences like photographs, pictures and videos of mass graves and other materials related to genocide found in museums? 3) What kind of historically written documents were used to claim this much people died? Written documents that indicate genocide like copy of a law, decree, constitution, policy papers, verbal account, letters used to give orders to other military personals, eyewitness records 50% from the soldiers who carried out as well as 50% from the victims side as being done in other well researched genocide claims in other parts of the world. 4)If indeed there is some evidence then there should also be similar evidences to connect it with the leader but not by out of state control generals 5) Inorder to avoid biased research, who are the people involved in the research? Doest it inlcude from both opposing sides? what are their tribe, nationality etc etc also matters. If you personally checked the source you claim are reliable, please make it clear to those 5 questions.
:: * Issues with the source provided: there are two books provided as a source and none of them have page numbers where the citation for that claim is based upon. Please indicate the page numbers, if possible please bring the exact quotation extracted from the book here for discussion, otherwise it is not fair to leave it for other wikipedians to confirm it by going through all these 100s of pages to find a citation supporting this specific claim.
:: * Personaly, I have searched many books and I couldn't be able to find a reliable source implicating Menelik with equivalent story like this [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=b0_uAgAAQBAJ&pg=PA229&dq=%22slay+all+the+men,+cut+off+the+privy+parts+of+the+boys+kill+the+old+women%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjli8Kn28DNAhWEXhoKHTn7CHwQ6AEIHDAA#v=onepage&q=%22slay%20all%20the%20men%2C%20cut%20off%20the%20privy%20parts%20of%20the%20boys%20kill%20the%20old%20women%22&f=false diary of Bermudes] a primary source, an eye witness of Oromo expansion and also secondary sources like Mohamed Hassan and Richard Pankhurst stating it in their books as can be seen here [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=fg1zCgAAQBAJ&pg=PA166&dq=%22on+all,+only+to+destroy+and+depopulate+their+countries%22+%22slay+all+men+...+kill+the+old+women%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjOlvir3MDNAhXE6RQKHdYoATYQ6AEIHDAA#v=onepage&q=%22on%20all%2C%20only%20to%20destroy%20and%20depopulate%20their%20countries%22%20%22slay%20all%20men%20...%20kill%20the%20old%20women%22&f=false 1] [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=zpYBD3bzW1wC&pg=PA284&dq=%22on+all,+only+to+destroy+and+depopulate+their+countries%22+%22slay+all+the+men,+cut+off+the+privy+parts+of+the+boys,+kill+the+old+women%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjd-YLv28DNAhVIOBoKHdPUA20Q6AEIHDAA#v=onepage&q=%22on%20all%2C%20only%20to%20destroy%20and%20depopulate%20their%20countries%22%20%22slay%20all%20the%20men%2C%20cut%20off%20the%20privy%20parts%20of%20the%20boys%2C%20kill%20the%20old%20women%22&f=false 2] which clearly indicate genocide, also showing how it is done, and based on this eywitness account many can come up with death toll similar or more than the claim you re-added for Menelik. However, I don't think it is appropriate to write such graphic quotations under Wikipedia's article for Oromo expansion or under Oromo history neither under Menelik's biography even if those sources are reliable.

Issues similar to your points raised have been discussed above extensively and you may review them — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 13:48, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]], I agree with [[User:Stumink|Stumink]] when it comes to your unreliable sources which are original research synthesized from previous sources. I've deleted them as Stumink did prior but you reverted. I have previously added the sources associated with Menelik and his armies atrocities on the Dizi people, the Arsi Oromo in the article itself. I have cited sources(verified) of accounts of Bulatovich and Antonelli (both Men who were at Menelik's Court and Army), therefore it is verifiable and account of such atrocities per Wikipedia guidelines on verifiable sources. However,your sources are opinion pieces and synthesis based on sources, hence it is original research on your sources part and yours. Deleted for those reasons.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 05:02, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
:[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], from your above statement you have come up with following claims/accusations for your deletion of the statement
:1) Unreliable sources? please indicate clearly by saying X and Y source is unreliable
:2) Original research? indicate clearly saying the sentence that begins as ............. is not sourced therefore is an original research.
:3) Synthesized? indicate clearly by saying the sentence that begins as .............cannot be concluded based on the source used for reference.
:4) Your sources are opinion pieces? Indicate to which source this applies to and please indicate any Wikipedia rule that it violates, a rule that states that sources with opinion pieces cannot be used as a source.

:Unless your reasoning for your last revert gives answers to the above 4 questions, then anyother editor can revert your edit based on "convincing reason were not suppplied to justify your deletion."

:In your edit summary you claimed the sentence that begins with "some argue"? as a weasel word and asked the question "Some refers to who? the answer is Feqadu Lemesa and the other people quoted under his article. Since those people are known and that since the statement is supported with a reliable source then it cannot be considered as a weasel word. Speaking of weasel word the death toll added by stumnik starts by saying "Some estimates......." If I may, let me ask you the same question you asked me "Some refers to who? unless the name of those people who made the estimate is known then it will be considered as weasel word, and will be deleted based on the same rule you used. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 13:49, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

::"of Walaita also lost a large proportion of its inhab itants. An Abyssinian expedition in 1894 slaugh tered about 119,000 men, women and children (Prouty, 1986:115) in less than two weeks.", This information alone from Chris Prouty stating "Abysinnians" in 1894 (During the Reign of Menelik, under his leadership) "slaughtered about 119,000 men, women and children in less than two weeks" tells me and anyone capable of reading that an estimate of a million or even more getting killed during the Reign of Menelik is more likely than far fetched as you seem to try to stand in the Denial Camp. Mass murder is mass murder no matter how you try to spin it. Feqadu Lemesa was providing his Massmurder Apologist opinion in his salem article Synthesizing from sources that agree with his pre-determined opinion. There are more examples giving above about the Dizi People, Arsi Oromo. These accounts are coming from Primary Witnesses of Menelik's army and orders of which Menelik gave obviously.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

"The Abyssinians were delighted with the natives. "What kind of Shankala (Negroes) are these?" they asked. "Even though they are naked, this is a civilized people. They respect their king, and their houses are well built, and they were able to submit to us. Real Shankala would run away like animals and would perish to the last man, not realizing that it would be better to submit voluntarily. But why did they give us a dog? Either they are scoundrels and think that we eat dogs or, perhaps, they themselves eat them." This circumstance surprised me as well. Maybe there was some symbolic significance in the gift of a dog, or maybe they really do use them as food. I didn't succeed in finding out. " [http://www.samizdat.com/armies.html#_VI._FROM_THE] This is a side note however, if this account by this Primary Witness to Menelik's armies conquest is legitimate, then it says alot about those Abysinnian soldiers maurading and pillaging, raping and enslaving the civilians in the non-Abysinnian people and territories. In this account, the Abysinnians hunt the Shuro people shooting them out of trees, burning homes down. With this type of attitude and actions by Abysinnian soldiers, "some estimates go into the millions" is not farfetched and based on the numbers by the accounts of these Primary witnesses.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

"What was remarkable here is that mutilation did not stop with Abyssinian victory at the battle of Azule in 1886 that cost the lives over 12,000 Oromo fighters (Haji, 1995; Zewde, 1991: 63). Weeks after the Arsi were defeated at battle of Azule, the commander of the conquering forces, Ras Darge Sahle Selassie, ordered thousands of Oromos to gather at a place called Anole. Thousands came obeying the order and were killed or mutilated – the men of their hands and the women of their breasts (Haji, 1995: 15-16)." [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

"It was reported that in 1912, about 40,000 of the Gimira were rounded up and taken to the north, and that half of them died on the way while the rest were sold as slaves and scattered within and outside the Ethiopian empire (Pankhurst, 1968: 107)." [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

De Salviac, de Martial, 1901, Une peuple antique au pays Menelik: les Galla grand nation africaine, Paris. Translate by Dr. Ayalew Kanno [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Haji, Abbas, 1995, ‘Arsi Oromo Political and Military Resistance against the Shoan Conquest, (1881-86)’, Journal of Oromo Studies, Vol. II, Nos. 1 and 2 [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:01, 26 June 2016 (UTC)


"Dejizmatch Wolde Gabriel mutilated the right wrist of 400 Oromos in one day"[https://books.google.com/books?id=cfjYAgAAQBAJ&pg=PA157&lpg=PA157&dq=Anole+arsi&source=bl&ots=4M1Y9V0SNK&sig=BBac1dkgwDKbyOAhiVgjPp77la8&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjE-afYscbNAhUC0WMKHVndDLA4ChDoAQgtMAQ#v=onepage&q=Anole%20arsi&f=false] which references "De Salviac page 278 [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:17, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

According to Atsma Giyorgis, young Teen Shoans went on hunting expeditions of Galla (Oromo) in Temquet. This was happening during the reign of Emperor menelik, therefore some estimates of millions of people getting killed is not farfetched when there was a culture of killing humans for sport and practice. Atsma Giyorgis and His works p.533, Bairu Tafla[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:17, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
::'''Summary of your response above'''
::'''1)''' All of it is in support of the sentence that begins "some estimate.........." should remain. For these see detailed response below
::'''2)''' The sentence that begins as "some argue........." written based on Fekadu Lemesa's point of view: as for this one well it should be known that there are opposing views and they also deserves their point to be heard. If you have any other specific reasons indicate.
::'''3)''' I have raised 4 questions above and still they need clarification for each of your claim/accusation by indicating so and so sentence is original reserch/unreliable/syntehsised/opinion pieces just to make our discussion more clear, simple and summarized.

::Now to your 1st point in support of the sentence which has 'millions'. The issue is the sources used for this sentence is Mohamed, Bultovich and Alemayehu, so that means in one of these sources we need to find exactly the number 'millions' otherwise it is considered original research. You and I cannot simply estimate the number of people killed. In my argument with you above the number of people killed by communists is very well researched and estimated by by various professionals from all sides. So If you can be able to provide the page number where 'millions' can be found in these sources then we are one step a head in deciding weather that particular sentence should be there or not.

:: That being said now we can scrutinize the sources you used above.
:: About 119,000 wolaita deaths: I amnot going to argue by saying people did not die but people did die from both sides. In [[American Civil War]] close to 1 million people are dead and the reason for the war is just "we can't have free and slave states". And what if one said that all clans were continuously fighting with no one stooping them, for instance see this source it says: [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=9Hfl5rpXM1sC&pg=PA107&dq=%22Kaffa+the+state+was+actively+involved+in+the+harvesting+of+captives.+As+Kaffa+expanded+after+1800+skirmishes+with+other+Omotic+states+like+Kullo+and+Walamo%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjJnMXWptLMAhUCVSwKHZgqApoQ6AEIGjAA#v=onepage&q=%22Kaffa%20the%20state%20was%20actively%20involved%20in%20the%20harvesting%20of%20captives.%20As%20Kaffa%20expanded%20after%201800%20skirmishes%20with%20other%20Omotic%20states%20like%20Kullo%20and%20Walamo%22&f=false Kaffa state expanded after 1,800 skirmishes] you can imagine the number of people suffering in those 1,800 wars/raids in both sides. Note that every tribe and clan raid each other unstopable and everyone is in fear of their neighbours even if their neighbour speaks and looks like them. The Wolayta war is one of the last wars to happen in that region. Also note that after 120 years the Wolayta people still exists and infact they are the second most people in SNNPR state after the Sidamo people. Besides descendants of Kawo Tona continued to administer their own people up until 1974.

:: By the way since we are talking about the Wolayta war it is also important to mention the military generals who participated and their soldier's background. You will be surprised to find out that majority of the generals are Oromos. See here [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=ZJLCZT7MW08C&pg=PA415&dq=%22Abba+Jifar+II+of+Jimma%22+%22Ras+Mikael%22+%22Fitawrari+Gabayahu%22+%22Hayla-Maryam+Wale%22+Makonnen+%22ras+walda-giyorgis%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjPgrSau5nNAhUCiRoKHRHZCXcQ6AEIHjAA#v=onepage&q=%22Abba%20Jifar%20II%20of%20Jimma%22%20%22Ras%20Mikael%22%20%22Fitawrari%20Gabayahu%22%20%22Hayla-Maryam%20Wale%22%20Makonnen%20%22ras%20walda-giyorgis%22&f=false History of the Wolayta war]. Here are the generals who participated: Ras Mikael Ali (Oromo), Sultan Aba Jifar (Oromo), Ras Mekonen (Oromo), Fit Gebeyehu (Oromo), Hayla Mariam Wale (mixed, his grandfather Ras Gugsa Mursa is a Yeju Oromo who ruled north Ethiopia) finally Ras Walda-Gyorgis (the only Amhara general) but still he came with Oromo Auxileries and his wife is from Yejju rulling class (Oromo). This shows that Menelik's armies backbone is the Oromo generals and their Soldiers they mobilize from their clan. Now same army generals also did went to Anole and other wars to whatever battles Menelik goes to. And what ever is looted and raided those generals will get their share as modern soldier gets paid. Also Menelike did marry his daughters to Ras Mikael and Ras Gobenas son (Also sharing the state power). Ras Mikael's soldier captured king Tona, and Tona later became administrator of Wolayta even after many died.

:: About what you said happen in Anole, all of it is quoted from "Abbas Gnamo". He hasnot been in 19th century therefore he is a secondary source and you don't expect me to beleive a secondary source who has not quoted a primary source like Bermudes and Bultovich who are neutrals. This foreigners when they go back to their country they can write whatever they observed in their own eyes and usually write both sides crimes, because they just write for sharing knowledge but not for imposing anyone's agenda. About what you said happened in Anole I have not seen it in Bultovich's own diary and if such thing indeed happen then there is no reason that prevented him from writing after he went to his country. Even if he did not go to Anole battle personally he most definetly mate and interviewed many of Menelik's soldiers who went to the battle. Since Menelik's army is multiethinc then it would have been very easy for him to find many Oromo soldiers who participated in the battle, if not there would definitely be gossips in the society for him to pick up if indeed such thing happen. Those foreigners even if gossip they will write it no matter what, for instance Italians feared the Oromo cavalary at the battle of Adwa more than any other armies of Menelik because of what they do to the soldiers they captured weather alive or dead. Based on this knowledge they had in advance many Italians through themselves into cliffs, committing suicide, rather than being captured by Oromo cavalry. [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 23:13, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

:::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]], I think you are missing the point here. This article is about the "Reign of Menelik" as an Emperor. His generals or soldiers being Oromo does not Remove the Atrocities which were Committed under His Reign as Emperor. You keep using Conquered Leaders as the backbone of your Argument for Non-inclusion of "atrocities committed under the Reign of Menelik II". Your argument against Inclusion based on "Secondary Sources" would disqualify also the "Secondary Sources" which Paint "Menelik II" as a "Angelic Hero of Ethiopian History". Again Oromos killing other Oromos does not remove the Fact that Menelik and Shewans(Amhara) engaged in and ordered the Slaughter of many thousands which led up into an estimate in the "Millions". I provided Primary Witness accounts of Menelik's Army, actual FOREIGN (Russian and Italian) soldiers involved in Menelik's War against the Non-Amhara(Shewan) people. Terms today used such as Galla, Shankalla, Shuro, Barya, etc are a Testament to the Racist nature of those Abysinnians (namely Amhara/Tigrayans) who went on Slave raids and conquering other people that are Non-Abysinnians. So your use of Token Oromos ( See [[Tokenism]] ) to so-called bring Balance and a "NPOV" is logically Fallacious to say the least. To use the argument of "Whatever happens in War is a result of War" does not Take away from the Barbarity of the soldiers and commanders and ultimately of Menelik in not only Allowing it to happen but in some cases employing such tactics as Mutilation, killings, and selling captured Soldiers/women/children/elderly men into Slavery.
:::: If we were to include every single Atrocity committed under the Reign of Emperor Menelik, this Article would be longer than what it is right now. So using "Some estimates that millions were killed", I do not think is specifically about the Oromos only, it includes "Shuros, Shankallas, Gallas, Wolyatas, etc" who were ultimately killed by Soldiers Representing Emperor Menelik II. There is no going around that, no matter how many Conquered or Complicit "Oromos" or "non-Amharas" that you present as being under the Command of Menelik. The Sources I called out are much more credible and closer to Menelik(as they were There when the Atrocities were Committed) than Lemassa's "Oromos killed more Oromos than Menelik did", that is his Original research. The number for Non-Abysinnians killed by the Menelik War Machine can be counted as there Witnesses such Blutavich and Antonelli, as well the Non-Abysinnian Ethiopian tribes in their oral history.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:24, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
::::: *[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], We have to follow Wikipedias rule and unsuported attribution is not allowed, it is not me who is saying this. So if you please name the people who estimated as 'millions' then we will be under the rule of Wikipedia. Since I can be able to access any kind of books and articles, then if you can help me by giving me the person's name, title of the book and page number then you are helping in confirming the number 'miilions'. Based on my personal research I could not be able to get this estimate from anyother reliable sources.
::::: *Still I didnot get convincing clarification for your deletion of statements based on the above 4 basic questions. The statment you deleted is not original researc because it is referenced with reliable source. Be specific on why you said original research?
::::: *The issue is if you search the internet almost all blogs indicate atrocities mainly to Oromos as if they have no involvment in Menelik's administration. The reason why I showed you there are indeed many Oromo generals participated in the campaign to the south is that for people to know the truth and stop distorting historical facts in broad day light. For whatever you claim bad happens in military campaign please know that Oromo generals and their own soldiers under only their command take more than half of it's share, this is historical fact. If we must blame people for any proven or fabricated bad history then we could say 40% Oromo (or more), 40% Amhara and 10% Tigre and 10% others and trying to draw a picture as if the 40% as innocent people is definitely historical distortion. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 17:00, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

:::::: *[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] First off, the sentence is "Some estimates for the number of people killed as a result of the conquest go into the millions." This sentence doesn't say "number of Oromo people", it says "number of people", which means it is More than just Oromo people. You are arguing from a false premise, a Strawman argument. The sentence has three citations, you can go verify those three sources but what you can not do is Delete because you do not agree with it. I was specific why it is Original research because Lemassa made a Statistical determination of "More Oromos killed other oromos". Hey I've read from the accounts of Primary witnesses in Menelik's Army. The citations are available for you to go look up. You are able to see the Citations attributed to the sentence "Some estimates for the number of people killed as a result of the conquest go into the millions", therefore you should have no issue Looking that up. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 18:59, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
::::::: *[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], if you go back and review my argument it's not because I don't agree with you but only because it is unsupported attribution. Estimating death toll is not something you and I seat in the computers and provide any numbers we feel like because that is simply an original research. By the way it says 'millions' therefore you are saying minimum of 2 million died and maximum is unlimited. I do have electronic access to all three of the sources and searched 'millions' and I could not be able to find it in all three of them. When you support it's inclusion I am assuming that you personally have seen it in your own eyes so I was asking which one of the three did have the word 'millions'. That is my main reason for opposition of that statement to be included, that is all.
::::::: * One concern you raised is Feqadu Lemesa's quote saying "other Oromos killing by other Oromos" that one will be corrected and name of tribe will not be mentioned and I think it's better I replace it as "Inter clan as well as inter tribal fighting for resource competition ....... this way it will combine Feqadu Lemesa's opinion with Keffa states expansion by 1800 skirmishs. Addition of this statement is needed again to balance what has been said at the beginning of the paragraph. You are trying to tell us you are so much concerned with human right but if you realy are concerned about Human right then for you there should not be a difference for people dying as result of 1800 wars of Kaffa state and also the many people dying as a result of other Oromo clans fighting with themselves as well as with all their neighbors for resource competition as Feqadu Stated as well as people dying in Menelik's expansion war. If indeed your concern is human right it should not matter for you people dying on whichever battles and with over whom. However, saying I only want what Menelik did should be known but the many people who died as result of clan/tribal fightings should be deleted/hidden by all means possible is to be biased and also imposing agenda. So if in Menelik article there is a word like "mass killings" "large scale slavery" (by the way previously I didnot delete them) is included then to balance it by saying like "Kaffa state also made 1,800 wars, also did large scale slavery", something with similar story is I think justifiable than just deleting those words just because they are biased. Remember mass killings weather done by Menelik or 16th centuary Oromos is mass killing and if you are concerned about human right then they both should be told with equivalent tone otherwise saying let's just use "mass killings" for Menelik but lets try as much as possible to hide it from being used to tarnish Oromo history and let's just draw a picture of Oromos as angels, innocent people who never harmed their neighboring people is what we call biased. Therefore, the paragraph at it's current state is so much biased and definitely requires to be balanced or otherwise should be removed entirely. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 21:15, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

If you think information about Oromo mass killings in the 16th century is important then please add it to a more relevant page describing the history of the Oromos for example. We do not need to balance claims about Menelik's mass killings with information that is irrelevant to Menelik. [[User:Stumink|Stumink]] ([[User talk:Stumink|talk]]) 21:56, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

:: *[[User:Stumink|Stumink]], Thank you for stating what I've been trying to make [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] understand. I used the citations (which I did not Add) but only viewed online and researched, and there happens to be witness testimonies by people that were with Menelik's armies namely Blutavoich(Russian) and Antonelli (Italian). EthiopianHabesha has been adding irrelevant information such as "Menelik's Generals were Oromos" which is Appealing to Tokenism to justify (not balance) the mass killings that were committed by soldiers obeying Menelik's emperorship. It seems quite obvious that EthiopianHabesha does not want Menelik's mass killings told as a matter of fact. I think I have exhausted myself trying to show him the thousands that got killed which lead to the sentence "Some estimates for the number of people killed as a result of the conquest go into the millions.", He/She denies even calling it a conquest but a "Re-unification". FYI, everything I listed above was from this article with the citations which were not added by me. Some I researched online using the citations and if probably a better way to capture this information on Menelik's mass killings is a new article "Massacres in the Ethiopian Empire"? [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:47, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

::: Well I think there should definitely be ageneral page describing Menelik's conquests of this period not just the atrocities. There really needs to be a separate page detailing the conquests in detail given how significant these events are.[[User:Stumink|Stumink]] ([[User talk:Stumink|talk]]) 14:03, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

:::: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], If you go back and review my statements I did not justify anything by saying Menelik's generals are Oromos. I brought this topic in response to your repeated usage of 'Amharas' and 'Abyssinians' did that & this. May be you have not notice it but it has been used repeatedly, by doing that you are trying to make a point. And the tribes of these key generals is mentioned to counter the point you are trying to make. As I said above if we must blame people then you should know that historcal documents doesn't back your accusations. The thing is there is no Tigre/Gojame/Gondare general who was close to being key person in the empire than the Oromo Habtegyorgis and Gobana so I don't see the reason why they are included in your accusation in the first place? Infact what we should be saying is Shewan Amharas and Western/Centeral/northern Oromos union government (reason for this claim is Menelik's and Haileselase being mixed themselves as well as their children politically dynastically married to Ras mikael Ali, Ras Gobana and Morada Bekere families who were powerful warlords of the western, central and northern Oromos). These above mentioned Oromo generals including Habtegyorrgis are the powrebase of the central government and these general's own people from their own clan takes the highest share in the military that campaigned to the south. And I have given you the evidence of who participated in Welayta war and the generals were 4 Oromos/1 mixed/1 Amhara not even a single Tigre general. Now if anyone is in wikipedia to share knowledge, and after looking at those generals, then how is it acceptable to say Amhara and Tigre when we suposed to be saying Oromo and Amhara? The soldiers will only lesson to their own generals who brought them in the first place, so if you think Menelik is unfair leader to Oromos or any other tribe these battle would have been their chance to collaborate their 4 armies and attack Menelik together with the Welayta army in Welayta land. Considering Tona was captured by Ras Mikael's soldier/army that means they had fit soldiers to win the battle easily and capture Menelik. But they didn't because simply he is not a leader like you are trying to tell the world. So don't try to give excuse by saying they are conquered generals, not using these opportunity if the leader is unfair will not make them innocent if indeed what you claim did happen. Teodros is cruel and unfair and indeed everyone revolted and in his final battle with the British the historian believed that it was actually difficult for Teodros to arrive at the battlefield than the British who were welcomed peacefully by all revolting clan lords who were unhappy by cruel treatment of Teodros. Of these revolting lords the Yejju Oromos take the lead, partly because they lost their power because of him and because all people including the church opposes his cruel leadership. So the point is if these ancient people were untreated well indeed they will revolt. In summary if we must blame people then as I said Oromos will take the largest share under Menelik's administration and hiding their mistake by saying "Amharas" and "Abyssinians" is indeed historical distortion. That is why I said majority generals are Oromo, not to justify any thing but to recommend the use of "Oromo and Amhara" instead of "Amhara and Tigre" because that is what the history book is clearly telling us.— [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 16:59, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

::::: [[User:Stumink|Stumink]], You have added page numbers and will be reviewing it. But as said above no wikipedia editor have the capacity to estimate death tolls, so that 'millions' should be in one of these page numbers, otherwise cannot be included in Wikipedia based on their rule. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 16:59, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

:::::: [[User:Stumink|Stumink]], in regards to your suggestion saying "If you think information about Oromo mass killings in the 16th century is important then please add it to a more relevant page describing the history of the Oromos for example. We do not need to balance claims about Menelik's mass killings with information that is irrelevant to Menelik" I have never said such kind of informations are important, you may review my statements again. On the other hand you suggest such kind of information are important and needs to be included under Menelik's biography? And you continued to say it is not relevant to this page and suggested "add it to a more relevant page describing the history of the Oromos for example", since you support this kind of informations to be included why don't you add it yourself to the relevant page? If I may ask, why do you suggest such informations to be included under Menelik but you don't want to add what happened in 16th centuary to the relevant page yourself? If you strongly believe such informations are important then you should have added it right after adding something similar under Menelik? You shouldn't be directing that job to me since I personaly don't support for such kind of informations to be added in wikipedia. Regarding to the mass killing in the 16th centuary, I have given you a source clearly indicating genocide, as being said by the neutral Portuguese man Bermudes in his own diary, who documented from his own observation, and also I gave you secondary sources from the neutral Britsh Richard Pankhurst as well as an Oromo historian Mohamed Hassan. If required I could also give you sources indicating the many number of peoples and states historically recorded by neutral Europeans, Arabs and Portuguese but later who disappeared from history after 16th century. If you are claiming the reason for strongly supporting the inclusion of such kind of information is because you have very strong concern for human right then for you what happened in 16th century people and 19th century people should not be different! And if the reason why you don't want to add it is because of problems with the sources or limited sources please let me know and I can help you and then you will personally add it yourself to the most relevant page you think is appropriate. Wikipedia says achieve Neutral point of view and suggests wikipedia editors needs to be balanced and not biased when writing an encyclopedia. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 20:40, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

== About death toll ==
*'''The issue in summary:''' [[User:Stumink|Stumink]] want to add "Some estimates for the number of people killed as a result of the conquest from war, famine and atrocities go into the millions" into the article based on sources written by Alemayehu Kumsa and Aleksandr Bulatovich.

''' Reason for oposition to it's inclusion'''
The source used for claiming millions of deaths (2+ million) is only Alemayehu's publication, while Bulatovich did not say 'millions of people died' and when searching 'millions' and 'million' under his book in Google books I found the following results.[https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&dq=Ethiopia+Through+Russian+Eyes%3A+Country+in+Transition%2C+1896-1898&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=millions] [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&dq=Ethiopia+Through+Russian+Eyes%3A+Country+in+Transition%2C+1896-1898&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=million]. Also based on the reference, the estimate is not found on page 68.

Based on the reference, Alemayehu's publication Page number 1122, the citation used is as follows: "This conquest war reduced the population of Oromo nation from 10 million to 5 million people as eye witnessed by Bulatovich: The dreadful annihilation of more than half the population during the conquest ...........". The writer, Alemayehu, came with this estimate by saying "as eye witnessed by Bulatovich's eye account" but this estimate is not found under Bulatovich's book.

I reviewed both books and found that what has been said in Bultovich's book is distorted by Alemayehu. After reading Bultovich's own book below is what I got for his use of "half population died", I summerised it as follows:

:"as a result of the famine, which is caused by cattle disease, and the conquest many have died, even half the population in one area he observed and in that particular area he found a farmstead where half of the population dead as a result of fever." [https://www.google.com.et/search?tbm=bks&hl=en&q=%22Almost+half+of+the+population+of+this+farmstead+died+this+year+from+fever.%22][https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&q=%22a+cattle+disease+led+to+famine,+and+destruction+of+the+population+during+the+subjugation+of+the+region+has+half+depopulated+it.%22&dq=%22a+cattle+disease+led+to+famine,+and+destruction+of+the+population+during+the+subjugation+of+the+region+has+half+depopulated+it.%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwj68oafus3NAhUDahoKHaRkD2AQ6AEIJTAA][http://www.samizdat.com/entotto.html]

That is what I got after reading several paragraphs before it and after it's usage of "half population died". He is talking about a particular area called 'Didesa' valley and he is not talking about an ethnicgroup, a tribe or not even a clan. He stated that the valley of the 'Didesa' is one of the most fever-ridden place.[https://www.google.com.et/search?biw=1600&bih=775&tbm=bks&q=%22The+valley+of+the+Didessa+is+one+of+the+most+fever-ridden%22&oq=%22The+valley+of+the+Didessa+is+one+of+the+most+fever-ridden%22&gs_l=serp.3...220920.221747.0.222455.2.2.0.0.0.0.407.407.4-1.1.0....0...1c.1.64.serp..1.0.0.HSN3HOF6xe4][http://www.samizdat.com/entotto.html] On another topic he stated that in those incorporated territories the assigned rulers do not violate the people and their religious beliefs and they also treat them lawfully and justly.[https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&q=%22not+violating+their+customers+and+religious+beliefs+and+treating+them+lawfully+and+justly.%22&dq=%22not+violating+their+customers+and+religious+beliefs+and+treating+them+lawfully+and+justly.%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwibmevBrM3NAhXBbxQKHQbbCrsQ6AEIHDAA][http://www.samizdat.com/entotto.html]

Eventhough Bulatovich described many factors for the deaths like famine caused by cattle disease, the place being fever ridden and even found a farmstead with half of it's population dead by fever in only 1 year, Alemayehu did not mention all of those important factors in his publication and just used only 'conquest' as the only reason for his claimed deaths. Moreover, he wrote as if Bulatovich is talking about half of an ethnic-group died while he was infact talking about a particular area called Didesa. His publication show that he is completely distorting the source where his estimate is based upon.

Besides when searching for Alemyaehu's publication in Google Books, Google search engine and Amazon.com this was the result: [https://www.google.com.et/search?biw=1600&bih=775&tbm=bks&q=%22Power+and+Powerlessness+in+Contemporary+Ethiopia%22&oq=%22Power+and+Powerlessness+in+Contemporary+Ethiopia%22&gs_l=serp.3...56467.58861.0.59722.2.2.0.0.0.0.1469.2115.5-1j0j1.2.0....0...1c.1.64.serp..0.0.0.EDGn4Miipiw][https://www.google.com.et/search?q=%22Power+and+Powerlessness+in+Contemporary+Ethiopia%22&biw=1600&bih=775&source=lnms&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwi2u4GJs9LNAhWLAxoKHQ5ADbUQ_AUIBygA]
[https://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_noss?url=search-alias%3Daps&field-keywords=%22Power+and+Powerlessness+in+Contemporary+Ethiopia%22]. Considering how serious the topic is it should have been supported by a well notable scholar where his book is available for sell in Amazon and Google Books.

Based on all of these findings I disagree with the use of this source for a very serious topic with claim of millions (over 2 million deaths). In other parts of the world similar number of deaths have minimum and maximum death estimates, and estimated deaths are divided into like Y# from soldiers on A-side & X# from soldiers on B-side as well as W# from war related deaths. But Alemayehu didnot divide those deaths this way. Also most international researches are supported with material evidences like photographs, pictures and videos as well as verbal account and written documents such as letters used to communicate between military personals, eye accounts from both sides, the victim side and from those who carried out etc etc. Besides these kind of estimates are done with team of experts specialized in various fields. The source used to make estimate in this case is not researched by international standard but by one writer, a research that is not notable and a researcher who distorted an eye account and not mentioned all factors observed by Bulatovich and who didnot estimated deaths from all sides.

'''Proposed solution:''' only use Bulatovich's statement taken from his own book and not use the other sources who used him as their evidence by distorting his statement.

[[User:Stumink|Stumink]], if possible let's discuss and solve it, if not let's list our issues and ask for administrative intervention. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 23:57, 1 July 2016 (UTC)
: In addition to the above findings it does not fulfill the following Wikipedia criteria
::[[WP:QS]] saying "Questionable sources are those that have a poor reputation for checking the facts, lack meaningful editorial oversight, or have an apparent conflict of interest. Such sources include websites and publications expressing views that are widely considered by other sources to be extremist or promotional, or that rely heavily on unsubstantiated gossip, rumor or personal opinion. Questionable sources should only be used as sources for material on themselves, such as in articles about themselves. They are not suitable sources for contentious claims about others."
::[[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]] saying "Exceptional claims require exceptional sources: Any exceptional claim requires multiple high-quality sources. Red flags that should prompt extra caution include:
::*surprising or apparently important claims not covered by multiple mainstream sources;
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::[[WP:CHALLENGE]] saying "Attribute all quotations and any material challenged or likely to be challenged to a reliable, published source using an inline citation." and saying "Any material lacking a reliable source directly supporting it may be removed and should not be restored without an inline citation to a reliable source." and also saying "Cite the source clearly and precisely (specifying page, section, or such divisions as may be appropriate)". Since the claim is controversial the editor needs to provide inline citation, with page number supporting the estimate claimed.

:: Based on all the above mentioned reasons the claimed death toll should not be included. It's been already one day since reasons for opposition to it's inclusion is posted here with no response so far and within the next day if no convincing opposition is provided then I think it should be deleted. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 13:48, 2 July 2016 (UTC)


:::[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] and [[User:Stumink|Stumink]] '''Here is a part of the Entire Bulatovich Account as translated by Richard Seltzer''' <ref>http://www.samizdat.com/entotto.html</ref>
"'''The Original Form of Galla Government'''
The original form of government of the Galla and the beginnings of their legal procedure and of criminal law were entirely changed with the conquest of the area by the Abyssinians.

Originally, they were separated into a mass of separate clans, and each clan was a completely independent unit. A large part of them, namely all the western clans, had a monarchic form of government. But some southern clans had a republican form of government.

The republics of Goma and Gera chose several rulers, whom they drove away quickly whenever they had the slightest cause for dissatisfaction. In all the other clans, the eldest in the clan, descended by the eldest line from the founder of the clan, was the head of state. But his rights were completely fictitious.

He did not have the use of any revenues from his subjects, because he did not have the right to collect taxes. His revenues consisted of rare voluntary gifts, portions of military plunder and revenues from his own properties, cattle, and land. This was because, in the primogeniture system of inheritance he, descended by the eldest line from the founder of the clan, was the richest landowner in his tribe. In case of war, he was at the head of his clan, but he could neither begin nor end war, nor undertake anything at all independently without having consulted with the elders. He presided in the lube, but all the business was decided there without his knowledge.

The lube is a very unique institution. Each head of a family in the state has the right each 40 years to become a member of the lube for five years. If the head of a family turns out to be a young boy, this does not prevent him from taking part. This assembly of the leaders of the families of the state perform all the functions of court and of state government.

The court, whether civil or criminal court, is conducted in the following manner. The plaintiff and the respondent, or the accuser and the accused, each entrust their business to one of the members of the lube. Those entrusted explain the essence of the matter to the council, wrangle with one another; then when the matter has been made sufficiently clear, the lube decides on the verdict. For the duration of the trial, neither the respondent nor the plaintiff have the right interfere. They are not asked about anything. There are two criminal punishments -- fine and exile. And, in some western regions there is still sale into slavery.

There is no capital punishment for ordinary criminal acts.

Premeditated murder is punished the most severely. The property of the killer is confiscated for the use of the family of the victim, and he himself is expelled from the borders of the country. But if after some time he arrives at an agreement with the family of the victim on the extent of compensation, then he can return again. Theft is punished by large fines and, in some border regions, by sale into slavery. Adultery is punished by fines, if the deceived husband did not already deal with the insulter in some way.

Since the right of property in land in the majority of regions up to now has been identified with actual possession, law suits on this question could only arise in the thickly populated regions of Leka, Wollaga, and Jimma, where already there exist not only property in land but also servitude.

Aside from the administration of justice, it was likewise the duty of the lube to reconcile quarreling clans.66

Such was the form of government of Galla states up until their conquest by the Abyssinians. But from that time the peaceful, free way of life, which could have become the ideal for philosophers and writers of the eighteenth century, if they hadknown of it, was completely changed. Their peaceful way of life is broken; freedom is lost; and the independent, freedom-loving Gallas find themselves under the severe authority of the Abyssinian conquerors.

The Abyssinians pursue two goals in the governing of the region: fiscal and political -- security of the region and prevention of an uprising. All families are assessed a tax.

This is very small, not more than a unit of salt a year per family. In addition, families are attached to the land. Part of the population is obliged to cultivate land for the main ruler of the country, and part is divided among the soldiers and military leaders. The whole region is divided among separate military leaders who live off their district and feed their soldiers.

'''The dreadful annihilation of more than half the population during the conquest took away from the Galla all possibility of thinking about any sort of uprising.''' And the freedom-loving Galla who didn't recognize any authority other than the speed of his horse, the strength of his hand, and the accuracy of his spear, now goes through the hard school of obedience.

The lube no longer exists. The Abyssinians govern through clan leaders aba-koro and aba-langa (the aba-koro's assistant).

The aba-koro is the head of the clan, who gathers the Gallas for work, gathers coffee for the leader of the region, levies taxes for them, and, when it is necessary, collects durgo. The Abyssinian leaders only supervise the correctness of the actions of the aba-koro. The court of the first instance is the aba-koro, but important matters go straight to the leader of the region who punishes in accord with Abyssinian laws, and, in the case of political crimes, robbery, attempted murder or murder of an Abyssinian, uses capital punishment.

'''That's the way things are done in the conquered regions. But aside from these there are three states -- Jimma, Leka, Wollaga -- which voluntarily submitted to Abyssinia and pay it tribute.'''

In those places, the former order has been preserved, although the lube no longer exists. The Abyssinians obtain taxes from them and do not interfere in their self-government. Aside from payment of taxes, they also feed the troops stationed there.

'''After all that has been said above, the question automatically arises -- what are the relations of the conquered to the conquerors? Without a doubt, the Galla, with their at least five million population,''' occupying the best land, all speaking one language, could represent a tremendous force if they united. But the separatist character of the people did not permit such a union. '''Now subjugated by the Abyssinians,''' who possess a higher culture, they little by little adopt this culture from the Abyssinians, and accept their faith. Since there is no national idea, in all probability, they will with time blend with the Abyssinians, all the more because the Abyssinians skillfully and tactfully manage them, not violating their customers and religious beliefs and treating them lawfully and justly.

Only those states that pay tribute and preserve their independence represent a danger. Among these, hate for the Abyssinians is apparent in the ruling class, although they have adopted all the customs and even the household etiquette of the Abyssinians. In case of internal disorders, these states will certainly try to use such opportunity to their advantage. But Emperor Menelik doesn't disturb these states for the time being, in view of the fact that they are the most profitable regions of his empire. "

:::::: Two Quotes Stick out to me
1. "The dreadful annihilation of more than half the population during the conquest took away from the Galla all possibility of thinking about any sort of uprising. And the freedom-loving Galla who didn't recognize any authority other than the speed of his horse, the strength of his hand, and the accuracy of his spear, now goes through the hard school of obedience."
2. " Without a doubt, the Galla, with their at least five million population, occupying the best land, all speaking one language, could represent a tremendous force if they united. But the separatist character of the people did not permit such a union. Now subjugated by the Abyssinians, who possess a higher culture, they little by little adopt this culture from the Abyssinians, and accept their faith."See References<ref>https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&dq=Ethiopia+Through+Russian+Eyes%3A+Country+in+Transition%2C+1896-1898&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=million</ref><ref>https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&dq=Ethiopia+Through+Russian+Eyes%3A+Country+in+Transition%2C+1896-1898&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=annihilation</ref> [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]]

Taking Bulatovich's OWN WORDS here, he says "half of the population(Galla) annihilated during the conquest(Menelik's Abysinnian soldiers raiding, killing). Then Bulatovich mentions that the Conquered Galla(Oromo) are atleast 5 MILLION. If the Abysinnian conquest of the Galla(Oromo) annihilated half of the Galla(Oromo) population and the Post-Conquered(Subjugated) Bulatovichs population estimate was atleast 5 million Galla (Oromo). 5 Million is Half of 10 million. Alemayehu is not Incorrect in using Bulatovichs account of the number of Galla(Oromos) annihilated, killed during the conquest. I found Alemayehu's book <ref>http://gadaa.com/OromoStudies/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/The-conflict-between-the-Ethiopian-State-and-the-Oromo-People.pdf</ref> At this point, the statement as Stumink added shall remain and is backed up by the Source (Bulatovich) that you agree with.See References <ref>https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&dq=Ethiopia+Through+Russian+Eyes%3A+Country+in+Transition%2C+1896-1898&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=million</ref><ref>https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&dq=Ethiopia+Through+Russian+Eyes%3A+Country+in+Transition%2C+1896-1898&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=annihilation</ref>
[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:58, 2 July 2016 (UTC)

:*[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], but still that estimated deaths is not estimated by Bulatovich himself. If he can be able to estimate the size of an ethnic-group then I don't see the reason why he cannot himself calculate the deaths. He even used 'half the population' died in fever in Didesa valley and again said another half dead by famine caused by cattle disease and conquest in Didesa Valley so even by his calculation 0 number of people would have been found in Didesa Valley area.
::- Since Bulatovich is the eye witness then he is the only one with the right to come up with death estimates by providing proper calculation, but still in his whole book there is no mention of x million deaths.
::- If Alemayehu came up with that number based on a source that didnot say clearly "they killed x number of people" then imagine what other pseudo historians might come up based on the portugese Bermudez's eye account which he said to the 16th century expanding Oromos:
"on all, only to destroy and depopulate their countries. In the places they conquer they slay all the men, ………….., kill the old women, and keep the young for their own use and service”<ref>https://books.google.com.et/books?d=&id=b0_uAgAAQBAJ&q=%22slay+all+the+men%22#v=snippet&q=%22slay%20all%20the%20men%22&f=false</ref><ref>https://books.google.com.et/books?id=fg1zCgAAQBAJ&pg=PA166&dq=%22slay+all+men%22#v=onepage&q=%22slay%20all%20men%22&f=false</ref><ref>https://books.google.com.et/books?id=zpYBD3bzW1wC&pg=PA284&dq=%22slay+all+the+men,%22#v=onepage&q=%22slay%20all%20the%20men%2C%22&f=false</ref>
::- Based on the same logic used by Alemayehu Kumsa and based on these similar account (also reported by neutral European) and based on other many historians reporting many recorded people disappearing from history after 16th centuary then one can say "all the people in 16th centuary died with no people left" or "millions were mass killed in 16th centuary" etc etc
::- Earlier in Bulatovich's book he indicated "half population died because o fever" and also included famine and conquest but Bermudez didnot provide anyother factors.

::- I still don't support using Bulatovich or Bermudez account to use them and claim millions of deaths while both of them did not clearly said millions died. I still believe those people who come up with such estimate are required to find mass graves, and surely they will not find any. In the old time people don't kill other people in mass like witnessed in communist system. Just think of it like this "a land without people is worthless" and if you have large land then you need a lot of people to make it economical and then they will cultivate it and make it useful. Infact because of diseases and ancient low life expectancy clan warlords may not even have enough people to cultivate their land so what do they do? They raid neighboring people and bring as many people as possible, the more people they have the more the land become useful. Therfore everyone raid eachother i.e Oromos will raid Gurage or even go as far as the Amhara Gondar to raid and bring as many people as they can and then they integrate them. The same applies for every clans, tribes and ethnicgroups of Africa. Therfore it is absolutely impossible for people to just go into places and kill all the people because that is no way possible. It's like you fight to death to get gold and then after that you through it into the ocean, which nobody will do. The Oromos integrated the conquered people and also the Amhara and Oromo rulling classes of Menelik also integrated them. The difference is Oromos require full assimilation, and for that many people recorded in history didnot disappear but just switched identity. On the Contorary Abyssinians donot require assimilation, remember during Menelik's reign there were two Sultans namely Aba Jifar and Sheh Khojele who administer their people with islamic laws and their own language and tradition while no interfering from the central government except their duty of paying annual tax and providing soldiers when the empire needs for defending the overall territory and also for expansion into other territories. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 00:33, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] I completely Disagree with your assertion about "He did not estimate". He infact did estimate without saying "Millions died". You are clearly using "Semantics" to make your point and not using the information provided. Bulatovich is a Primary Witness to military and non-military actions of Menelik's armies during the Conquest of Oromos, Dizi, Maji, etc other Non-Abysinnian ethnicities. I will repeat again that Bulatovich made an estimation which agrees with the statement "Some estimates for the number of people killed as a result of the conquest from war, famine and atrocities go into the millions".
I will repeat again Bulatovich's own Quotes from his Book:
1. "The dreadful annihilation of more than half the population during the conquest took away from the Galla all possibility of thinking about any sort of uprising. And the freedom-loving Galla who didn't recognize any authority other than the speed of his horse, the strength of his hand, and the accuracy of his spear, now goes through the hard school of obedience."
2. " Without a doubt, the Galla, with their at least five million population, occupying the best land, all speaking one language, could represent a tremendous force if they united. But the separatist character of the people did not permit such a union. Now subjugated by the Abyssinians, who possess a higher culture, they little by little adopt this culture from the Abyssinians, and accept their faith."See References<ref>https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&dq=Ethiopia+Through+Russian+Eyes%3A+Country+in+Transition%2C+1896-1898&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=million</ref><ref>https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&dq=Ethiopia+Through+Russian+Eyes%3A+Country+in+Transition%2C+1896-1898&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=annihilation</ref>
You can clearly read that Bulatovich says the "the Galla, with their at least five million population", he is speaking in present tense at that moment.
You can clearly read that Bulatovich estimated "the dreadful annihilation of more than half the population during the conquest took away from the Galla". The "population" is "Galla". He doesn't have to say 5 million Gallas were annihilated (killed) during the conquest, his sentence says it all. So the Statement that Stumink put should actually read as "After the conquest of the Galla which resulted in the annihilation of more than half of their population, their population became 5 million." Your use of semantics does not change that half of the Galla(Oromo) population at that time was annihilated due to the conquest. I will wait for Stumink's input on this. On a side note, I see that at first you didn't like Alemayuh's citation and you wanted to ONLY use Bulatovich. Now that I have shown you that Bulatovich said that "more than half of the population(Galla)" were "annihilated during the conquest" is the First hand account of His Witnessing these atrocities and wars waged. You state to Not Use Bulatovich or Bermudes because it doesn't agree with your predetermined conclusion. The statement at this time stays as is or can be updated to match what Bulatovich stated in the Quotes I provided.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 01:09, 3 July 2016 (UTC)


'''Estimation Done Per Wikipedia Standards''' [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 02:16, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

[[Alexander Bulatovich]] is a Primary Source per [[WK:PRIMARY]]

Alemayehu Kumsa is a Secondary Source who use Bulatovich's work and published in ECAS 2013 5th European Conference on African Studies African Dynamics in a Multipolar World ©2014
Centro de Estudos Internacionais do Instituto Universitário deLisboa (ISCTE-IUL) ISBN: 978-989-732-364-5 THE CONFLICT BETWEEN THE ETHIOPIAN STATE AND THE OROMO PEOPLE

Alemayehu Kumsa
Charles University in Prague
alemayehu.kumsa@ff.cuni.cz

Per Wikipedia's use of Sources
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Per Wikipedias Routine Calculation
"Routine calculations do not count as original research, provided there is consensus among editors that the result of the calculation is obvious, correct, and a meaningful reflection of the sources. Basic arithmetic, such as adding numbers, converting units, or calculating a person's age are some examples of routine calculations. See also Category:Conversion templates."


So does the statement "Some estimates of the number of people killed as a result of the conquest goes into the millions" meets Wikipedia rules?

1. Bulatovich (Primary Source) gave an estimation "annihilation(killed/died) of more than half of the population...Galla"

2. Bulatovich (Primary Source) estimated the "Gallas were atleast 5 million" Post-Conquest. Written source states this Post-Conquest.

3. Kumsa (Secondary Source) estimated from Bulatovich's estimations of 5 million Post-Conquest and Bulatovichs estimation of "more than half" "annihilated" as a result of Conquest. Kumsa estimated that Gallas were 10 million prior to Conquest and were reduced by half(per Bulatovich) to 5 million, therefore 5 million Gallas(Oromo) were "annihilated(killed/died)" as a result of the Conquest.
10 Million Gallas(Oromo) prior to Conquest. 5 million Gallas(Oromo) after conquest. 10 million divided by 2 = 5 million. Or the inverse, 5 million (present) divided by the "1/2" "annihilated due to conquest" = 10 million. 5/0.5 = 10 (Kumsa's calculation). I agree with this after Reading Bulatovich's estimation. This meets Wikipedia's routine calculations policy.


So the Wikipedia entry meets Wikipedia standards therefore shall remain. Infact, I think it should explicitly state per the Wikipedia Routine Calculations the actual number if we add the deaths of the Dizi, Maji, Wolyata, and Oromo, the estimates would be about 5.5 million if they meet the Wikipedia standards for Routine Calculations. Your attempt to use "strictly" primary sources and actual International standards for numbers of annihilated people does not Meet Wikipedia Standards. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 01:46, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

'''M Vanderheym Primary Witness of Menelik Military conquest'''
More sources for Menelik's military campaigns and atrocities <ref>https://books.google.com/books?id=Q_VaAAAAQAAJ&pg=PA52&lpg=PA52&dq=Gallas+killed+during+Menelik&source=bl&ots=k7Nj0mcDGP&sig=RGKPmJV73-_SxUmkE0YSBlA1FR8&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjXj6C1mNbNAhVCwGMKHZY7DFwQ6AEIPjAF#v=onepage&q=Gallas%20killed%20during%20Menelik&f=false</ref> Africa. v.4. Australia; New Zealand; South Pacific Islands. v.5. South America by Ascott Robert Hope Moncrieff 1907 Page 52. This book speaks of Massacring 100,000 Gallas by the Accounts of M. Vanderheym who went with Menelik on a military campaign in a Rich Galla country with the use of Deadly modern Arms(weapons) against the Gallas spears, shields of a disunited tribe(Galla). [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 02:06, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

'''Population of Ethiopia in 1896-1898 According to Bulatovich'''
"which for a population of 15 to 17 million" See page 117 <ref>https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&dq=%22not+violating+their+customers+and+religious+beliefs+and+treating+them+lawfully+and+justly.%22&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=million</ref>
Going from 15 million to 17 millions(1896) Bulatovich enters Ethiopia and supports Menelik's wars against the Italians and the Southern Tribes. By 1900 , See '''Population of Ethiopia 1900''', the other source states the Population of Ethiopia is 11,754,300. Bulatovich states that after the conquest of the Gallas(Oromo), there population was 5 million (1899) after a "dreadful annihilation of more than half of the population...Gallas", which means 5 million Oromos(Gallas) died as result of the Abyssinian conquest. Starting off with 15 million - 5 million = 10 million by 1899 which births happened by 1900, the population of Ethiopia(Abyssinia + Galla/Southern Tribes) = 11,754,300.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 22:41, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

'''Population of Ethiopia in 1900'''
1900 11,754.3(thousands) = 11,754,300. Menelik was crowned in 1889,he went on military campaigns until he faced off the Italians in 1896. Of those 5 million were Galla(Oromo). Prior to this Abyssinia's(Shoa, Tigray, Gondar, Amhara) population was 6,000,000 estimate.See The class and home-lesson book of geography 1870 Page 45<ref>https://books.google.com/books?id=B2kDAAAAQAAJ&pg=PA45&lpg=PA45&dq=estimates+of+deaths+Abyssinian+conquests&source=bl&ots=g-fgzoqklJ&sig=gYDe6eI2AmSJxSIAlLi-WHNHouM&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwitse-19tbNAhVI8IMKHe5sDgkQ6AEILzAD#v=onepage&q=estimates%20of%20deaths%20Abyssinian%20conquests&f=false</ref> which states Population of Abyssinia(Amhara, Tigre, Shoa, and Samara) 250,000 sq miles, Population of 5,000,000. With the subjugation of the Oromo and other non-Abysinnian tribes by 1900 you end up with 11,754,300.
Page 7 Table 1.1 Population Size and Growth Rate1900 -1984 and 1994-2035
See Source: CSA, 1988 and OPHCC, 1999.<ref>http://www.irpps.cnr.it/etiopia/pdf/Population_Growth_and_Environment.PDF</ref> [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 05:56, 3 July 2016 (UTC)
:::*[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], Wikipedia repeatedly warns editors need to be neutral and discuss issues by taking all opposing sides. Let's not make this talk page into a wrestling match. Unless you and Stumnik are not interested to be neutral then it will be hard to make wikipedia a place for sharing knowledge and it will become a place for Politcal and nationalist agenda. In my previous post I asked both of you to give me a reason why you beleive it is important information and that why one of you didnot find what happens in 16th centuary as important and why both of you are not willing to add that content to the place which one of you think is relevant page. Still didnot got an answer to that question?
:::::*[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]], I am only using the Sources provided and additional sources I have searched online. I think I am being neutral here by giving an audience to all of your arguments for the exclusion of the statement.I have stayed with my position because the sources I keep finding lead towards keeping the statement in this article. I do not have to agree with your position to be neutral. I have provided population data of the 1900(during Menelik's reign) SEE '''Population of Ethiopia in 1900'''. I provided how 5 million killed during Menelik's conquest of Gallas was estimated SEE '''Estimation Done Per Wikipedia Standards'''. As for a response to all of your questions SEE the Response below '''Key words are..'''[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 21:33, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

:::* Now to your points raised above: let's bring the quote and here is what he said "The dreadful annihilation of more than half the population '''during''' the conquest took away from the Galla............." in here see carefully the most important word '''"during"''' that connect with the word "conquest". While he would have said clearly "by the conquest" or "as result of the conquest" or "only by the conquest" why did he choose to use '''"during"'''? Besides before this paragraph he used 'half the population died' twice. In his 1st usage he clearly said only by fever and in his second usage of 'half population' he clearly said by famine caused by cattle disease and conquest. So for this paragraph these two usage are his evidences for his conclusion. In a very disciplined scientific research a researcher before conclusion explains his methodology, then in the next chapter presents his raw data or sampling then based on the methodology he analysis the data and finally comes to the conclusion. Therfore for Bulatovich's use of "annihilation of more than half" is tied to his two previous usage of 'half the population died'. And to support your preferred view i.e. "Half died by conquest" then '''during''' should have not been used and that he should have gave examples (raw data or sampling) supporting your view like for example saying "I have seen in X or Y battle on this W date Z number of people dead from soldiers and civilians" as well by saying "A person by the name X told me he has seen Y number of people mass killed and were buried in mass in W location". Some very small example for us to conclude indeed half people died only by conquest, but unfortunately no such example is provided other than his clear examples with a combination of several factors that occur during the conquest. Since he didnot divide those factors properly then we cannnot be able to know how many died by fever, famine, loss of livestock estimated to go upto 90% by the disease and the conquest.
:::* Besides he begun the paragraph as ""The dreadful annihilation of more than half the population '''during'''....." so what he is saying is during (at the time of the conquest) a dreadfull anhilation of more than half the population occurred (reason is described in his earlier usage of 'half population died'). If his use of 'annihilation' (by the reasons he mentioned above) only applies to Oromo then he could have started the paragraph by saying "The dreadful annihilation of more than half of the Oromo" but he chose not to begin that way and begun first as if it applies to all people in Ethiopia which hapenned during (at the time of the conquest) the conquest time and then begun to apply it to Oromo (Going from general to specific). I believe these people give care in the use of their every single words and it's application.
:::* No mention of famine and fever in Alemayehu's publication as well as no reason provided for killing that much people raises the question of his neutrality and the quality of his research and will not qualify him as a reliable source based on this rule here [[WP:QS]]. The Great famine of 1888-1892 which is the worst in the region in history is also part of Oromo history and if he is writing for sharing knowledge then there should at least be a one line comment that have killed over 1/3 (millions) of the region's inhabitants including Oromos, Amharas and all other human beings. This famine has killed over 90% of the cattles and 1/3 of the peoples according to Michael H. Glantz and Peter Gill even believes cattle disease was introduced by Italians to wipe out Eritreans and settle in their land as can be seen here [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=lzZpOyYE1DYC&q=%22a+third%22+Italians+worst#v=snippet&q=%22a%20third%22%20Italians%20worst&f=false][https://books.google.com.et/books?id=VFE7AAAAIAAJ&q=%2290%25+of+the+cattle%22#v=snippet&q=%2290%25%20of%20the%20cattle%22&f=false] Since Italians have two countries, the indigenous people of Horn of Africa did not have a place to run away from the famine caused by the cattle disease.
:::* '''Proposed Solution''' let's replace the statment that say 'millions' by the following statement:
While Bulatovich reported depopulation in 19th centuary, another Portuguese by the name Bermudez also reported depopulation in 16th centuary and Donald Levine concludes that before 20th centaury virtually all the peoples in the region have been in hostile contact. According to Donald the reasons for warfare is to acquire cattle, slaves, to gain territories or control over trade routes, to carry out ritual requirements or secure trophies to prove masculinity.

:::: Then in inline citation we present the three neutral sources statement and let the readers make their own conclusion, their own estimate, no need for Alemayehu Kumsa's or Prof. Mesfin Woldemariam's analysis. This way we get a balanced statement and we will make Wikipedia a place for fair knowledge sharing but not an ideology tool. There are already a lot of blogs available for ideology propaganda. In the inline citation we include the paragraph of Bulatovich's account that begins with "The dreadful annihilation of..........."[https://books.google.com.et/books?id=W3hyAAAAMAAJ&dq=Ethiopia+Through+Russian+Eyes%3A+Country+in+Transition%2C+1896-1898&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=annihilation] as it is and also Bermudez's paragraph that begins "they are a fierce and cruel.............."[https://books.google.com.et/books?d=&id=b0_uAgAAQBAJ&q=%22slay+all+the+men%22#v=snippet&q=%22slay%20all%20the%20men%22&f=false][https://books.google.com.et/books?id=zpYBD3bzW1wC&pg=PA284&dq=%22slay+all+the+men,%22#v=onepage&q=%22slay%20all%20the%20men%2C%22&f=false] also as it is as well as Donald's paragraph "one hardly needs to describe the importance of warfare................." and also as it is.[https://books.google.com.et/books?id=TtmFQejWaaYC&pg=PA43&dq=%22importance+of+warfare+as+a+form+of+intertribal+relations+in+Greater+Ethiopia%22+cattle+slaves+territory+%22trade+routes%22+%22ritual+requirements%22+%22virtually+all%22+%22hostile+contact%22+trophies+masculinity&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjI1Yiex83NAhXGXBQKHSm5A1EQ6AEIHDAA#v=onepage&q=%22importance%20of%20warfare%20as%20a%20form%20of%20intertribal%20relations%20in%20Greater%20Ethiopia%22%20cattle%20slaves%20territory%20%22trade%20routes%22%20%22ritual%20requirements%22%20%22virtually%20all%22%20%22hostile%20contact%22%20trophies%20masculinity&f=false].Let's include all 3 of them in the inline citation (not in the article but under reference) — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 16:25, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

'''Key words are "The dreadful annihilation", "relations of the conquered to the conquerors", "Now subjugated by the Abyssinians"'''[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:08, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] Your argument about '''during''' being the keyword is irrelevant. The focus of topic is what Happened During the Conquest?

1. Bulatovich states " '''The dreadful annihilation''' of more than half of the population during the conquest took away from the Galla all possibility of thinking about any sort of uprising."

2. Definition of annihilation is complete destruction so that the person does not exist (killed). Definition of dreadful is causing or involving great suffering. When combined together it speaks of intentionally caused complete destruction of Gallas (who were his subject topic).

3. '''Context''' Further in Bulatovich's witness statements, he states "After all that has been said above, the question automatically arises -- what are the relations of the conquered to the conquerors? Without a doubt, the Galla, with their at least five million population,......Now subjugated by the Abyssinians" Key words here '''After all that has been said above" ie "dreadful annihilation", "relations of the conquered to the conquerors?", "the Galla, with their at least five million population"..."Now subjugated by the Abyssinians". The Gallas(Oromo) were subjugated by the Abyssinians(Amhara) during the Abyssinian conquest of the Galla which resulted in the dreadful annihilation of more than half of the population (Galla).''' Your use of "semantics" such as "during" when there are none to use but the statement being as readable as what Bulatovich states is clear to me. The context of his entry here is very clear and I read this a couple times. His mention of famines in the Didessa valley does not take away from what he stated in quoted and the implications of his statements are clear as well.

4. Bermudes was 16th century which means Bermudes is Not a Primary source on Menelik who is 19th century. Bulatovich was a contemporary of Menelik's and was embedded in Menelik's army. Bulatovich is a Relevant Primary Source and thus qualifies to be used in Wikipedia per the Standards I mentioned above. Kumsa is a Secondary source who used Bulatovich and Other sources (Link is provided to his Document) with more than 15 sources cited in his book. So far, Bulatovich, Kumsa are Relevant sources to this Menelik article. While Bermudes is Not Relevant Source therefore will not add a neutral point of view.

5. Kumsa's argument is about the colonization of the Galla(Oromo) by the Abyssinians(Amhara). Bulatovich describes what is by definition colonization ie Subjugation, Assimilation into a second class or serf class, forcing religion and language on the Galla. He states it. He describes the Gallas political structure and how the "Lube" was not allowed under Abyssinian subjugation of the Galla.

6. Therefore I disagree with adding your Proposed Statement and would rather keep the current statement as Stumink has put it. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:08, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

:::* what does "dreadful annihilation" means? if you search 'dreadful' in in his book he used it as "dreadful fevers" and "oppressive heat becomes dreadful" so if heat and fever disease is considered dreadful then obviously famine can also be considered very dreadful. So it is also possible to say "The dreadful annihilation by famine or by conquest". The question is why did he prefer to use '''"during"''' and not '''"by"''' if their is no doubt they all died by conquest then why not simply use "by"?
::::*'''See Response '''2''' above. Definitions provided. Cherrypicking "during" and not reading the entire source, and deliberately arguing without the entire context is what your argument is based on.'''[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:29, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

:::* No example provided other than his example in Didesa Valley. He did not say how he came up with that figure? You know his book is not a bible, as if we are not allowed to question on what is stated under his book. Every scientific research, even by Albert Einstein is questioned, and if not provided with convincing explanation and examples then it can be droped. He should have dedicated a one page to present his evidences to support his figure like detailed interviews, copy of letters, detailed eye observation in a particular battlefield or any other detailed story or detailed calculation that supports his claim. If a research paper by statisticians, scientists can be questioned I don't see the reason why we can not question a document presented by a military officer.
::::*'''Have you read the entire book? Also this is Historical analysis, not "Scientific research". Two different fields of study. Historical analysis requires Primary sources such as Bulatovich. His witness statements is actually more credible than the Bible. Atleast, it can be checked with other sources. You have not provided 19 century Primary source to counter Bulatovich. You brought a 16th century Bermudes who was considered Not Credible by his Portoguese contemporaries.''' [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:29, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

:::* About Colonization: we discussed about it above. Ashanti tribe of Ghana/citizens of colony of USA has no state power share in their colonizer's nation, England. Menelik married his daughters to his top Oromo generals Ras Mikael Ali Aba Bula and Ras Gobana Dache. While Gobana's grandSon eliminated from succession due to his dwarfism, Mikael's Son Lij Iyasu elected heir by Menelik only to be overthrown by Habtegyorgis and Teferi also Oromos. Again I am recommending the use of Oromo and Amhara rulling classes. Bulatovich's book is not a bible so we don't have to accept whatever he said, and we have the right to question his statement.
::::*'''Again you are appealing to [[Tokenism]]. First it was Menelik Oromo generals, now its Menelik marries off his daughter to Oromo generals. 10 Oromo generals are still less than 5 million Annihilated Oromo (women, children, and men). Bulatovich in conjunction with Kumsa and the other sources I provided are a good starting point and meet Wikipedia standards.'''[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:29, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

:::*About Bermudes: When one talks about world war 2nd there might be times the history of world war 1st should be mentioned. Somehow there might be things that connects them, and saying this is only about WW2 but not WW1 and not a relevant place is not justifiable. The topic is somehow similar and if you beleive such type of information are important and suggest it should be included under Menelik then I see no reason why we shouldn't include what happened in 16th century in this article as well considering all sources are similar, European scholars and neutrals. Horn of Africans (Oromo, Amhara and Tigre) are usually biased, and best thing is to avoid them. Alemayehu Kumsa did not say anything about The Great famine of 1888-1892 that killed 90% of the cattle and 1/3 of the region's inhabitants, Why? — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 00:01, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
::::*'''See Response above about 16th century Bermudes as an Irrelevant Source to 19th Century Bulatovich about 19th Century Menelik II. Your comment about "Horn of Africans(Oromo, Amhara and Tigre) are usually biased, and best thing is to avoid them." I take it you belong to either Amhara or Tigre so should I best avoid discussing with you about this? Bulatovich is a "European neutral" according to you, his word is the "Bible"?'''[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:29, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

:::::*[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]], I've provided everything that I can provide at this time. You have unfortunately gone around in circles, changed your mind several times on using Bulatovich. Did not provide a convincing argument on removing Bulatovich and Kumsa sources. Also you have thrown many things which just did not merit a response within the scope of this Discussion. Unless, you can provide a source that is 19th century Primary Source and credible Secondary Sources, if possible Tertiary sources to add to this discussion. I do not think you have made a convincing case for Removal of Stumink's statement, and I have provided more than 3 Sources (Primary and Secondary Sources) to keep Stumink's statement. On a sidenote,I would like to mention, that you are trying to prove a Negative here in logical argumentation which is the "Non-occurrence of the annihilation of 5 million Oromos perishing as result of the Abyssinian Conquest", the mere fact of Bulatovich's witnessing and writing about what transpired in his time while he served as an advisor within Menelik's army does not permit you a room to weasel word out, which has been the attempts made within your argumentation in this discussion. Unless you have anything more relevant and or significant to this discussion, I will wait for Stumink or anyone else to chime in and give their two cents.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:29, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

::::::*[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], There are not just 3 tribes in Ethiopia. The other tribes excluding Oromo, Amhara and Tigre are more than 1/3 (over 30 million) so always remeber these collection of minorities also have a say on that region's politics, history and economy. Your chance of knowing my tribe is not 1/2 or 1/3 but 1/80.
:::::::* '''Well you are the one that has an issue with ethnic Horn of African historians. My question was rhetorical basically explaining to you that Wikipedia does not discriminate based on an author's ethnic background but you definitely are by attacking Kumsa for being a ethnic Horn of Africa African of Oromo tribe.'''[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 23:09, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::*If I was Alemayehu Kumsa and I am writing a book for just sharing a knowledge then there is no way I would come up with that number after seeing the word '''during''' that connects with the the word 'conquest'. But then again even if that "during" is "by" I will still not come up with that figure without seeing detailed calculations by Bulatovich. Even if he gave detailed calculations I will still question his methodology and the quality of his data and sampling and confirm them with atleast other 3 reliable books with eye or verbal account and if all three matches then probably I might take it seriously by 50/50 probability, because I also need material evidences (like photos of mass graves) and then may be I could be certain with over 90%.
:::::::*''' You are doing Original Research by questioning the Primary source. Bulatovich meets Wikipedia's Primary Sources(See [[WK:PRIMARY]]), Kumsa is a Secondary. Please read this [[Wikipedia:Identifying and using primary and secondary sources]].'''[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 23:09, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::* '''3 witness requirement:''' You do know that in court you have to provide 3 witnesses to make one person guilty. Imagine what will happen if one day we decide to make the requirement of eye witnesses as one person to reach guilty verdict? Trust me 100s of millions of people would have been guilty and in jail by now because 3 liers cannot come up with 100% identical stories, somehow one of them will distort the story even if told to lie. Therefore what you simply are telling us is that we must accept Alemayehu's calculation simply by one person witness with a very ambiguous statement? None of the other evidences you brought above upto Wolayta war do not say half of that particular ethnic group and even if we add them they no more than add up 140,000. Based on how international laws/courts work you need to provide atleast two more primary sources (witnesses) to support your claim of half died to the ethnic group you are talikng about, even the one provided is still ambiguous and doesnot clearly support your claim. In other military court hundreds/thousands of eye witneses are required but considering it has been over 120 years provide at least two more primary source (witnesses) and prove the claim you made above i.e Bulatovich account is more credible than bible because it can be confirmed with other primary sources.
:::::::*''' You are doing Original Research by questioning the Primary source and coming to your own conclusions. Bulatovich meets Wikipedia's Primary Sources(See [[WK:PRIMARY]]), Kumsa is a Secondary. Please read this [[Wikipedia:Identifying and using primary and secondary sources]].'''[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 23:09, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::*'''About what happen in 16th centuary''': it is not used to deny the claim you support, but to show how the region was before 20th century. It is important to show how everyone was in hostile environment and how everyone is a victim. You try to deny what is reported by Bermudes (not ambiguous and clearly stated How people died and Why people died) but will not accept the statment made by Bulatovich ('''Ambiguous and not describing how people died, not describing why people died but just said during the time of the conquest dreadful annihilation occurred, by what?''') yet they both are neutrals and Europeans. Both sources are equal and there is no reason to say this is better and the other one is bad? — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 21:45, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

::::::::*[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] The sentence you are trying to argue for removal meets Wikipedia guidelines as I have demonstrated through this lengthy discussion. Per [[WK:PRIMARY]], Bulatovich is a verified, Primary source. Kumsa is a verified, Secondary Source. I add this Source as well Frontiers of Violence in North-East Africa: Genealogies of Conflict Since C.1800 By Richard J. Reid <ref>https://books.google.com/books?id=m5ESDAAAQBAJ&pg=PA87&lpg=PA87&dq=annihilation+of+the+Galla&source=bl&ots=yCEmO50QWz&sig=i0hkvikhzxp6no6PcEGBx4OsQu4&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiz7bPZ69rNAhUEwmMKHRtGDuIQ6AEINzAJ#v=onepage&q=annihilation%20of%20the%20Galla&f=false</ref> as a "Secondary Source" which quotes Bulatovich. So it isn't only Kumsa. Your addition of "Bermudes" as a source to Menelik is neither here nor there when it comes to what actually Happened in the 19th Century Abyssinian conquest of the Galla(Oromos). 16th Century Bermudes is NOT a Primary source for 19th Century Menelik II. Do you have another 19th Century Primary Source? If not, then your arguing over and over about Bermudes will not get a response from me. Your misreading of Bulatovich's Primary account of Menelik's army is not going to get me or anyone who reads this discussion to agree with you.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 23:09, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

'''To summarize for you on the sources for that sentence:'''

Bulatovich (Primary Source)-See Above '''The Original Form of the Galla Government'''

M Vanderheym (Primary Source)-(see above in discussion)

De Salviac, 1901:349-354 (Primary Source)

Dr. Donaldson Smith(Primary Source) (see above in M Vanderheym linked source)


==The image that says "Menelik's campaigns (1879-1889)" is falsified.==
Kumsa (Secondary Source)-based on Bulatovich
Hi,
The image that says "Menelik's campaigns (1879-1889)" is falsified. There was no Gondar province that extends to [[Welkait]] before 1930. It is misleading. The expansion for Gonder province (i.e. [[Begemder]] province) happened on 1941. <ref>Bereket Habte Selassie, [https://www.jstor.org/stable/744683 "Constitutional Development in Ethiopia", ''Journal of African Law''], '''10''' (1966), p. 79.</ref><ref>{{Cite web|url=https://www.era.lib.ed.ac.uk/bitstream/id/1299/vaughanphd.pdf |title=Sarah Vaughan, "Ethnicity and Power in Ethiopia", PhD dissertation, p. 123, 2003}}</ref><ref>Bahru Zewde, ''A History of Modern Ethiopia'' (London: James Currey, 1991), p. 86.</ref>


I am going to remove the map since it is misleading, and it appears to be added for the purpose of current day land politics (which is killing people). Lets only share facts please.
Richard J.Reid (Secondary Source)- based on Bulatovich [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 23:09, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
Best regards,
[[User:Truth gate keeper|Truth gate keeper]] ([[User talk:Truth gate keeper|talk]]) 15:13, 4 March 2019 (UTC)Truth gate keeper [[User:Truth gate keeper|Truth gate keeper]]
{{reflist talk}}
== 'Centralisation' Section ==


I'd recommend someone completely revise the 'Centralisation' center of this page. It has very evident biases, does not give proper context to events [references the last major war in Ethiopia as having been in the 16th century... and says tactics hadn't much changed from there??? This is incorrect, see '[[Zemene Mesafint]]'. This period of constant warfare undeniably brought many changes to Ethiopia which should be explored in more depth.
The Edinburgh Review: Or Critical Journal, Volume 195 (Primary/Tertiary Source) Page 346 "Menelik seeked to subjugate the Galla", Page 351 "The Abyssinians are not truthful, and they are arrogant-or, at least, they have none of the Oriental's submissiveness. Their OPPRESSION of the Gallas and their barbarous cruelty to the other tribes alienates all sympathy"<ref>https://books.google.com/books?id=a1LImYZLf50C&pg=PA346&dq=Menelik%27s+view+on+Gallas&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjH-qWFt9vNAhUD_mMKHRdSDUsQ6AEINTAE#v=onepage&q=Menelik%27s%20view%20on%20Gallas&f=false</ref> [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 04:14, 5 July 2016 (UTC)
It also depicts Ethiopian wars as much more petty than they actually were. True geo-political motives are not mentioned or considered and should be, otherwise this falls largely into the trope of pointless 'tribal wars'.
While on an individual level, conflict may have been about gaining trophies, ritual requirements, and looting goods - there was an undeniable other reason for warfare: political incentives, desire of certain trade routes, power, etc. 'Lords' were often driven by these desires - economic, geopolitical, etc. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:HiddenHistoryPedia|HiddenHistoryPedia]] ([[User talk:HiddenHistoryPedia#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/HiddenHistoryPedia|contribs]]) 23:29, 28 November 2019 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


== Aanolee massacre ==
"The Negus(Menelik) had just returned, it is true, from a successful raid on a Galla tribe of Wollamo, 150 kilometres S. of Addis Abeba, wherein his men had shown the true barbarian groundwork shining through the veneer of civilization, by massacring thousands of unresisting men, women and children." from The Campaign of Adowa and the Rise of Menelik By George Fitz-Hardinge Berkeley Page 88<ref>https://books.google.com/books?id=sBc1AQAAIAAJ&pg=PA114&dq=Menelik%27s+view+on+Gallas&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjH-qWFt9vNAhUD_mMKHRdSDUsQ6AEIKjAC#v=onepage&q=Galla&f=false</ref> [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 04:20, 5 July 2016 (UTC)
There is an editorial dispute about the 1886 Aanolee massacre. If you disagree with the sourcing and text in {{oldid|Menelik_II|1050300489|this version}}, which seems to be identical to the version prior to the [[WP:EDITWAR|edit war]], then please explain what is wrong with the sources. Two alternative sources that have been suggested include [https://zehabesha.com/delusion-of-oromo-and-pseudohistorical-of-emperor-menelik/ zahabesha] and [https://borkena.com/2019/06/13/settler-colonialism-the-oromo-extremist-narrative-getaneh-yismaw Borkena (federal government news media)]. If these sources are serious enough, then [[WP:NPOV]] might be justified. [[User:Boud|Boud]] ([[User talk:Boud|talk]]) 01:08, 17 October 2021 (UTC)


The references are not the easiest to use.
"When Donaldson-Smith crossed the Shebeyli in 1894 he found the southern bank deserted. The previous occupants, the Arusi Gallas, had just been routed by the Abyssinians. Their men had been mutilated and killed, their women and youths carried off as slaves and their crops destroyed." Page 30 from White mans's country
* [https://brill.com/view/title/24518 Abbas Gnamo's ''African Social Studies Series''] book is paywalled, although there's a quote in the [https://www.opride.com/2014/04/08/aanolee-mutilation-a-tragedy-on-which-ethiopian-sources-are-silent Mohammad A. 'opride.com'] article.
"out eastwards and southwards, raiding, murdering, mutilating and enslaving the Gallas and other tribes, capturing their women and their stock, and leaving behind a trail of razed villages, Galla skeletons, and a few small but strongly fortified military post to collect tribute from the chiefs.Page 38 from White man's country
* [https://core.ac.uk/download/pdf/234675954.pdf Mulualem Daba Tola's article] is published [[:Category:International Institute for Science, Technology and Education academic journals|by a predatory publisher]] and presents views for and against the claim of cutting off men's right hands and women's right breasts.
White man's country: Lord Delamere and the making of Kenya, Volume 1<ref>https://books.google.com/books?id=HQEOAQAAMAAJ&q=Arusi+Gallas&dq=Arusi+Gallas&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiRydLHvdvNAhVNzmMKHRUmAeI4ChDoAQhBMAg</ref> [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 04:34, 5 July 2016 (UTC)
* [https://archive.today/yIi1b Rosa Abadir's zahabesha.com article] doesn't seem to say anything about the hands and breasts being cut off (except for the comments section).
:::* '''1)'''[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], '''Let's solve one issue at a time:''' You are making the discussion much more complex. We are talking about death toll, so clarification is needed how the claimed millions are killed. We need to know exactly how millions can die in conquest? We need to explain by evidences like on this date and on this place 300,000 died, and on another day and in another particular place 500,000 died by military personels, by these mechanism for this and that reasons etc etc, just like how death tolls are estimated in other parts of the world. Somehow we need to add up and reach over 2 million deaths. This is the topic of discussion. Unless we reach by these way to over 2 millions and convince wikipedia administrators then that number needs not to be there based on the rules of [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]] which says '''Exceptional claims require exceptional sources'''. Over 2 million deaths is indeed exceptional claim and requires exceptional source which clearly says '''"on ........ and ..........day .......... number of people died on a place called ..... with order given by generals named ........... and these number of people were killed by ............. mechanism for a reason of ............"'''
* [https://archive.today/Kujda Getaneh Yismaw's borkena.com article] argues (using the spelling "Anole"), stating the names of several people making apparently public comments on the issue, that cutting off women's breasts was a hoax created by the TPLF to stoke hatred.
:::* '''2)''' Using Alemayehu as a source for death toll estimate does not fulfil the requirement stated under:
::::*[[WP:QS]] which says "Questionable sources are those that have a poor reputation for checking the facts, lack meaningful editorial oversight, or have an apparent conflict of interest.”
::::*[[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]] which says "Exceptional claims require exceptional sources: Any exceptional claim requires multiple high-quality sources.”
:::* '''3)''' Alemayehu should not be used for the estimate for the following reasons:
::::*'''a) For not providing data in the above way:''' Alemayehu came up with his total deaths by not using the above way of data collection and calculation. Against WP:EXCEPTIONAL
::::*'''b) For using only one ambiguous statement for his estimate:''' For his estimate he simply used an ambigues statement made by Bulatovich which says “dreadful annihilation of half the population '''during''' the conquest”. Bulatovich’s usage of '''during''' is ambiguous and can be regarded as during the time of the conquest a dreadful annihilation occurred, most probably by famine which most scholars believed the worst in the regions history. Against WP:QS
::::*'''c) For not mentioning the famine''' that killed 1/3 of the regions inhabitants, and 90% of the cattle by disease that was believed to be introduced by Italians.[https://books.google.com.et/books?id=lzZpOyYE1DYC&q=%22a+third%22+Italians+worst#v=snippet&q=%22a%20third%22%20Italians%20worst&f=false][https://books.google.com.et/books?id=VFE7AAAAIAAJ&q=%2290%25+of+the+cattle%22#v=snippet&q=%2290%25%20of%20the%20cattle%22&f=false] This famine is mentioned in Bulatovich’s account while Alemayehu did not mention it. Againest WP:QS


[[WP:NPOV]]-ing the current text (not deleting it) may be justified, but others should look through the sources, and maybe find better sources. The [https://www.ryerson.ca/politics/people/contract-lecturers/gnamo-abbas/ Abbas Gnamo] book seems the most serious, as the only academic source. [[User:Boud|Boud]] ([[User talk:Boud|talk]]) 02:43, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
::::*'''d) Population estimate before conquest?''' For not providing additional 1 more primary source for his estimate of the people before the conquest. Against WP:EXCEPTIONAL and WP:QS
::::*'''e) Other primary source with half died not supplied:''' For not providing atleast 1 more primary source supporting his claim of half of that particular ethnic-group died. WP:EXCEPTIONAL and WP:QS
::::*'''f) How?''' For not showing how his claimed 5 million people were killed. Not mentioning at least one mechanism to kill all these people. In Libya we have seen unarmed people revolting and deposing a very well organised centralised government system armed with 21st century modern weapon. He should have explained how these much people were killed because nobody just gets killed without making an effort to defend himself. Against WP:EXCEPTIONAL and WP:QS
::::*'''g) No material evidence''' provided like pictures and photos of mass graves supporting the claim of millions killed. Against WP:EXCEPTIONAL and WP:QS
::::*'''h) No written documents''' provided like copy of letter or verbal accounts used to order execution of people in 100s of thousands something supporting the claim of millions killed. Against WP:EXCEPTIONAL and WP:QS
::::*'''i) Individual work:''' estimating death tolls require experts specialised in different fields.
::::*'''j) Work not widely available?''' His work is not found in Google books and Amazon as can be seen here [https://www.google.com.et/search?biw=1600&bih=775&tbm=bks&q=%22Power+and+Powerlessness+in+Contemporary+Ethiopia%22&oq=%22Power+and+Powerlessness+in+Contemporary+Ethiopia%22&gs_l=serp.3...56467.58861.0.59722.2.2.0.0.0.0.1469.2115.5-1j0j1.2.0....0...1c.1.64.serp..0.0.0.EDGn4Miipiw][https://www.google.com.et/search?q=%22Power+and+Powerlessness+in+Contemporary+Ethiopia%22&biw=1600&bih=775&source=lnms&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwi2u4GJs9LNAhWLAxoKHQ5ADbUQ_AUIBygA][https://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_noss?url=search-alias%3Daps&field-keywords=%22Power+and+Powerlessness+in+Contemporary+Ethiopia%22]. Considering how serious the topic is it should have been supported by a well notable scholar where his book is available for sell in Amazon and Google Books where it has been widely scrutinised by the media. Against WP:EXCEPTIONAL
::::*'''k) No disciplined research:''' Usually researches with estimating population and deaths are required to show dedicated chapters which explain and show their methodology, data and sampling presentation, analysis, conclusion and recommendations.


[https://www.opride.com/2014/04/18/q-a-with-professor-abbas-haji-gnamo Abbas Gnamo] says that his book was "based on extensive research undertaken over two decades" and that "the review process and the preparation of the final text took more one and half years." He claims that he "examined all the available sources in Ethiopian languages, foreign languages (including French and Italian) published and unpublished academic sources, theoretical works, and above all, oral data collected over a long period of time in Arsi-Bale regions from Amhara and Oromo informants." [[User:Boud|Boud]] ([[User talk:Boud|talk]]) 02:51, 17 October 2021 (UTC) The [https://www.opride.com/2014/04/25/q-a-with-professor-abbas-haji-gnamo-part-ii second part of the interview with Abbas Gnamo] includes a discussion of the Aanolee massacre/mass mutilation and the claims of whether it happened or not, stating that the event {{tq|"is deeply entrenched in the collective memory of the Arsi Oromo and Oromos everywhere. Some of the survivors lived with the mutilated right hands until the 1950s and 60s. One example which captured my imagination was an Oromo elder who lived with a militated right hand among the Jaawwii clan and who always showed his mutilated hand to the public, and explained how he lost his precious hand in defending their dignity and land."}} A 16-year-old in 1886 would have been 80 in 1950, and 90 in 1960. [[User:Boud|Boud]] ([[User talk:Boud|talk]]) 03:03, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
:::* '''4) Conclusion:'''Therefore, for these reasons it should not be used as a reference to support an exceptional claim of over 2 million deaths. A wikipedia editor who estimates by himself based on a primary source is 'Original research' and is also against the rule.


::I added one more reference to a paper by Gnamo Abbas.<ref>[https://www.jstor.org/stable/40761358?origin=JSTOR-pdf&seq=1#metadata_info_tab_contents Abbas, H.G., 1999. La conquête impériale éthiopienne des Oromo-Arsi (1882-1892). Africa, pp.85-115.]</ref> This is not small stuff; the man obtained his PhD at Sorbonne in Paris! Thank you, [[User:Boud|Boud]] for pointing to his interview also. We'll soon have enough materials to write a separate article in addition on the Aanolee massacre; it would be good if somebody could access the corresponding entry in the [[Encyclopaedia Aethiopica]], Institut f. Afrikanistik und Athiopistik, Universitat Hamburg, Germany, 2004. And, I would suggest to [[User:Mooproop1|Mooproop1]]: better to face it, so many countries need to face their past. [[User:Rastakwere|Rastakwere]] ([[User talk:Rastakwere|talk]]) 15:19, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
::::Otakrem, do not provide your responses under the above statment, it is against the rule. If you want to respond for each of the points above you may refer the numbers. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 15:47, 5 July 2016 (UTC)


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:::::::*[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] I have responded to all of these questions that you have Asked in the previous Posts above. You keep ignoring my responses to all of your questions and then restarting your questions all over again. You have a Bias against Dr. Alemayehu Kumsa on the basis of his ethnic and racial background(Oromo and Black African). You stated that '''"Horn of Africans (Oromo, Amhara and Tigre) are usually biased, and best thing is to avoid them."''' His work is based on Bulatovich's. Here he is as a Professor of Charles University in Prague presenting his work <ref>http://www.nomadit.co.uk/ecas/ecas2013/panels.php5?PanelID=2223</ref>. I've googled him and found his works. In addition, I supplied you with more sources above in '''To summarize for you on the sources for that sentence:''' But you refuse acknowledge these sources and seem hellbent on removing Kumsa's source which if you want to argue against, maybe you should contact Dr. Kumsa at <ref>http://hiso.fhs.cuni.cz/HISOENG-10.html</ref>. But as far as being a Secondary source to primary sources such as Bulatovich, Donaldson, Vanderheym, De Salvac, etc, Kumsa meets the Wikipedia guidelines. What you are doing is Original Research. I have even shown you how just taking Bulatovich's own estimations, I concluded with a number of 5 million Gallas(Oromos) died as result of the conquest. But you refuse to read Bulatovich's work in its entirety and you cherrypicked the word "during" and "Diddessa". I am not going to get involved in Original Research as you are trying to do here. As far as Kumsa and the other sources, I provided back up sources for keeping the Sentence that Stumink has written into the Menelik's Reign as Emperor section. Now since you have not been able to give a Primary/Secondary source that states "No Oromos were killed during Menelik's conquest" <==Impossibility from a Logical Definitions of "Conquest" and "Population Deaths", you have resorted to trying to remove Kumsa. Kumsa is relevant and Wiki verifiable/secondary source.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 21:04, 5 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::::* [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], I usually avoid to attack Wikipedia editors and focus only on the sources they use and the content they provide. The topic of this section is about death toll estimate. Recommended estimates should be based on various and quality sources reporting deaths in 100s, 300s of thousands so that we reach your claim of at least 2 million. But what you are doing is providing sources with graphic details and try to play with emotions so that we believe your claim. I am opposing the use of millions died based on wikipedia rule which says exceptional sources for exceptional claims and sources that are not questionable. The reason why I say scholars from outside Horn of Africa is preferable is because I have seen works of many professor and doctor scholars, some even well known, particularly from Amhara, Oromo, Tigre and Somalis twisting primary sources for their political and nationalist agenda. Most scholars outside from this region usually write with neutral tone, and since most have no political and nationalist interest in the region they write for sharing knowledge and usually make sure everyone's point of view is heard. I cannot believe Alemayehu Kumsa, whom you said has a PHD wrote a publication about what happened in 19th century and could not be able to mention the word 'famine' and 'fever' in his work! I searched those words and he did not even mention them ones! A famine that even Bulatovich wrote in his book, a fever that he also claimed to have killed half the population in Diddesa, a famine that killed 1/3 and over 90% of cattle is not important for him but deaths by other means are important and dedicated almost whole of his publication. Among others that is one of the reasons why I don't take his publication seriously but not because of his ethnicity. About the estimate you show me based on Bulatovich's account, well you clearly know that it's original research. You can not make estimate on your own. What you can do is provide reliable sources with clear estimate and then we will scrutinize the source and make sure it fulfills these criteria: [[WP:QS]] and [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]]. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 22:54, 5 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::*[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] See the EIGHT sources in '''To summarize for you on the sources for that sentence:''' Above for Primary and Secondary Sources listed with the Links provided below with Page numbers. Direct quotes from those sources have also been provided see Above in this discussion. You invited me to discuss with you on the sentence "Some estimates for the number of people killed as a result of the conquest from war, famine and atrocities go into the millions." I think I have provided you with all of those sources Primary and Secondary a total of eight. Also your issue with Dr.Kumsa is not valid because your argument is "Bias in Kumsa source" is your own POV See[[Wikipedia:Neutral point of view]] "Bias in Source". As for Bulatovich and Kumsa's estimation, I showed you how Kumsa came to that estimation by doing Wikipedia Acceptable Routine Calculation based on Bulatovich's estimations (Not My Original Research). Again you are doing Original Research by trying to find a "direct quote" from one or two primary sources, Bulatovich says more than 5 million Gallas died as a result of the Conquest by his own Words. You refuse to read the entry within its context. Kumsa comes to that conclusion as well as a secondary source. The other sources give the breakdowns that you are asking for such as 100s or thousands perished etc. The "emotional" play that you speak of is probably from reading exactly the same thing that I have read from those Books I listed above. The more I read about these conquests, the more it shows how destructive Empire Building is as Menelik did as he Reigned as an Emperor.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 06:25, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::::::* [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], NO he did not say millions died, not even 100s of thousands died by conquest. Do not paraphrase out of context. But if he beleives millions have died by the conquest then I see no reason why he cannot say clearly "Yes indeed millions have died by/as a result of the conquest" and state exactly the estimate made by you and Alemayehu, I beleive he is capable of making that simple calculation without any assistance. Instead of that he used '''"during"''' and made his statement ambiguous? Even if he said millions have died by the conquest then he is definitely required to show his estimation methodology and the examples/datas/interviews he used for his analysis and his conclusion and explain mechanisms used to kill 100s or 300s of thousands of people. Even Albert Einestine's work goes through review and is questioned as well as tested to prove his theory. Therfore there is no reason why we cannot question an estimation done by Bulatovich, who was just a military officer. Your statment above which says '''"Again you are doing Original Research by trying to find a "direct quote" from one or two primary sources"''' the answer for this issue of yours is found under [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]] which says '''Any exceptional claim requires multiple high-quality sources'''. As the rule says many high-quality sources are required for your claim of millions killed by conquest and I think we have extensively discussed about Bulatovich and no need to discuss about him further. You may bring other primary sources and show just their estimated death numbers, no need for graphic details. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 15:23, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::::::::::*[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] It seems you are intentionally Misreading Bulatovich's quote of '''""The dreadful annihilation of more than half the population during the conquest took away from the Galla all possibility of thinking about any sort of uprising. And the freedom-loving Galla who didn't recognize any authority other than the speed of his horse, the strength of his hand, and the accuracy of his spear, now goes through the hard school of obedience." 2. " Without a doubt, the Galla, with their at least five million population, occupying the best land, all speaking one language, could represent a tremendous force if they united. But the separatist character of the people did not permit such a union. Now subjugated by the Abyssinians,"''' I do not think that you are correct here. Ask for a 3rd Opinion. I completely Disagree with your conclusion on Bulatovich's quote as well as your use of "WP Exceptional here. You are not even Acknowledging the other Sources provided. There is no longer a need to continue this discussion with your narrow view on only one word and Not the entire Context of the source. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:32, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::::::::* '''Actually it is not just that one word why I oppose your supported claim. I have given over 13 reasons and briefly described them above on my post dated on 5th July. Therefore, my opposition is based on those multiple reasons, but not just 1 word.''' — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 20:13, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::::::::::::* You have your perspective and I am basing my understanding of Menelik's Reign as Emperor through the 8 Sources and many more that I keep finding in Primary and Secondary sources. Your request for removing the Sentence "Some estimates of deaths due to the conquest go into the millions" has so far not been based on reliable sources but only your 13 reasons. "Reasons" alone are but an aspect of Original Research. In wikipedia, sources are used but not necessarily directly quoted and based on the sources, the implication and content is placed in the collective words of the editors of wikipedia. I agree so far with Stumink's latest edit of the sentence since it is backed by reliable and verifiable sources. It meets wikipedia guidelines, therefore it will remain for the time being.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 02:51, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::::::::::* In regards to your statement '''"Your request for removing the Sentence...... has so far not been based on reliable sources but only your 13 reasons. "Reasons" alone are but an aspect of Original Research.''' What kind of reliable sources do you want me to provide to oppose your supported claim of millions killed by conquest? Firstly, I did provide one reliable source supporting my opposition here [http://www.salem-news.com/articles/july282013/oromo-truths-fl.php] and if you think this source is not reliable you may provide your reasons briefly or indicate any wikipedia rule shortcut which it violates. Secondly and most importantly I have listed 11 reasons why it violates wikipedias rules here [[WP:QS]] and [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]]. If you think it does not violate these two rules then you may provide reasons for your opposistion for each of those 11 reasons one by one and briefly. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 16:50, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::::::::::::::* First there are multiple sources to back the sentence (Primary and Secondary), I provided 8 of them. The sources do not violate [[WP:QS]] nor [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]]. They were published and have been cited in other sources. They are verifiable. Secondly, the claim of "millions" or "thousands" perishing as a result of Abyssinian conquest has been documented in many publications and by many historians and primary witnesses including De Salviac, Pankhurst, Prouty, Bulatovich, Kumsa, Bulcha, M Vandeym, Donaldson Smith etc. Your one source(Lemassa) that disagrees with this and wrote his Opinion piece based on his own Personal Analysis(Original Research). As far as the sentence by Stumink, it covers all causes of death(killings, atrocities, famines, disease) due to the Conquest of the Southern people of Ethiopia by Menelik. Also, many sources(readily available online) state that Menelik's army had Modern weapons like 82,000 rifles and 28 cannons which was far superior and Deadly to the Oromo, Wolyataas, spear and shield, also woman and children were not spared as all the sources I've provided above in this discussion have stated. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 18:03, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
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:::* The 11 reasons listed above for violating those two rules applies only to Alemayehu Kumsa and Aleksander Bulatovich's books which are provided by Stumnik. None of the sources you provided says millions were killed by conquest. Since we are talking about death estimates could you show each sources with the number they estimated. Because in our discussion above you used most of them for what happened at the battlefield but not death numbers.
:::* As for your claim with 82,000 rifles and 28 cannons, the thing is [[Rifled musket]] are backward weapons, and only shoots 4 in 60 seconds see here [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SJMbxZ1k9NQ] which is no match to the Oromo cavalary. After 8 minutes one soldier probably shoots 32 times (considering there are no regular and trained soldiers the chance of missing a target could be over 50%) but within 4 minutes a cavalry army, armed with spear and shield will destroy him. Menelik's strength is not having modern weapons because even Teowdros had modern weapon and in his final battle he managed to bring only 4,000 soldiers because many have already abonden him for his less diplomatic skills and his crulity. See here [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/British_Expedition_to_Abyssinia#The_campaign] under Tewdros section and you will see that it was actually difficult for Tewodros to arrive to the battlefield than the British because every lord and peoples be it Oromo, Amhara or Agaws were revolting and no well know general stood by him. After his defeat he even had a chance to escape but was prevented by rebellious Oromos surrounding the battlefield.[https://books.google.com.et/books?id=0b4gAQAAIAAJ&dq=dalanta+OR+delanta+british+Magdala+by+galla+prevented&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=galla] The point here is that if people are not treated fairly they just don't seat and wait to be killed. If in one place 40,000 got killed unfairly then everyone will know about it through gossips then everyone will organise an army to defend themselves and revolt and if they don't have modern weapons they will collaborate with Europeans surrounding Ethiopia who were waiting for any opportunity to expand into the fertile highland. While many Tigrayan, Oromo, Agaw and Amhara lords collaborated with British against Teowdros unfortunately there was no well known lord siding with Italians or any other European powers during Menelik's reign. Unlike Tewdros's 4,000 Menelik went to Adwa with over 100,000 soldiers see the over 100,000 peoples/armies and the top mutiethnic generals, mainly Oromos, who stood by him here [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=nljca_pOqrEC&pg=PA77&dq=adwa+oromo+cavalary&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiOxNOPoOLNAhVDORQKHdbRAX8Q6AEIHjAA#v=onepage&q=adwa%20oromo%20cavalary&f=false]. As you can see in the book to take an army of that much diverity the only thing you need is diplomatic skill, fair leadership but not weapons and crulity which didn't work for Tewodros. As I showed you above King Tekle Haimanot of Gojam was captured by Oromo army of Ras Gobana and Kawo Tona of Welayta was also captured by Ras Mikael's Oromo army as can be seen here [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=ZJLCZT7MW08C&pg=PA415&dq=%22Abba+Jifar+II+of+Jimma%22+%22Ras+Mikael%22+%22Fitawrari+Gabayahu%22+%22Hayla-Maryam+Wale%22+Makonnen+%22ras+walda-giyorgis%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjPgrSau5nNAhUCiRoKHRHZCXcQ6AEIHjAA#v=onepage&q=%22Abba%20Jifar%20II%20of%20Jimma%22%20%22Ras%20Mikael%22%20%22Fitawrari%20Gabayahu%22%20%22Hayla-Maryam%20Wale%22%20Makonnen%20%22ras%20walda-giyorgis%22&f=false History of Wolayta War] and after the battle both Tona and Tekle-haimanot were released and given back their territory. Therefore, the modern Weapons you talked about was also given to Oromo lords and their soldiers who might point their guns at any time on the opposite side had they been treated unfairly, just like they did it to Tewodros. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 23:20, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::* This again Original Research on your part. Menelik's Armies(specifically Shoans) had Machine guns <ref>https://books.google.com/books?id=sBc1AQAAIAAJ&pg=PA206&lpg=PA206&dq=menelik+machine+guns&source=bl&ots=fu3eo1JhwV&sig=0Q8P_memj2Y-HZCKm3GuP5n06_w&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjPzcHA4-LNAhUG62MKHTdWAr4Q6AEIHzAB#v=onepage&q=menelik%20machine%20guns&f=false</ref> and they had foreign advisors as well. I won't get into an argument with you on "Oromo cavalary" since MEnelik's Army had Abyssiniazed oromos fighting in his army for his emperorship. Nonetheless, your 11 reasons have not shown that Kumsa and Bulatovich have violated anything, they are merely Sources within Multiple sources which supports the statement "Some estimates of deaths due to the conquest..go into the millions". Are you sure you want to go into the Details of how Abyssinian military units were going into Villages in Oromo, Wolyata, Shuro(racial insult), Sidamo, Kaffa, etc? As I spoke with Stumink a few discussions ago, we are Planning to start a Separate Article on Menelik's conquests of the Southern People in Further details.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 02:12, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::* [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], are you saying those Oromos, under the leadership of the Oromo women Workitu and Mestawit, who surrounded Emperor Tewodros after his defeat with British and did not allow him and his remaining 2,000 soldiers to escape are not Abysinianised and that is why they revolted against Tewodros?[https://books.google.com.et/books?id=0b4gAQAAIAAJ&dq=dalanta+OR+delanta+british+Magdala+by+galla+prevented&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=galla] The question is who was much Abyssinianised, is it Mestawit & Workitu or Gobana Dache & Sulatan Aba jifar? Still today one's genealogies (you are the son of who, who is your grandfather, who are your ancestors) is the primary identity formula. Me speaking English or Chinese or following Scientology religion will not change my genealogy and ancestry. In the old time genealogy is much much important than it is today. Therofore, if Menelik is unfair and cruel like Tewodros there is no convincing reason for him not to be abandoned and remain only with 2,000 soldiers at the time of his death. In your last statment you said Abysinian military did this and that, wherever you do that I will make sure that infact the military of Menelik is dominated by Oromo generals and their soldiers from their clan based on reliable sources (like I showed you in Wolayta battle with 4Oromo/1mixed/1Amhara generals [https://books.google.com.et/books?id=ZJLCZT7MW08C&pg=PA415&dq=%22Abba+Jifar+II+of+Jimma%22+%22Ras+Mikael%22+%22Fitawrari+Gabayahu%22+%22Hayla-Maryam+Wale%22+Makonnen+%22ras+walda-giyorgis%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjPgrSau5nNAhUCiRoKHRHZCXcQ6AEIHjAA#v=onepage&q=%22Abba%20Jifar%20II%20of%20Jimma%22%20%22Ras%20Mikael%22%20%22Fitawrari%20Gabayahu%22%20%22Hayla-Maryam%20Wale%22%20Makonnen%20%22ras%20walda-giyorgis%22&f=false]) and if necesary I will bring in details and stories that happened before Menelik and even go upto 16th centuary and also state why/how people just get killed, just to balance it based on reliable neutral sources based on Wikipedia NPOV policy. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 13:43, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::::* EthiopianHabesha, regardless if they are "Oromo" or "Tigre" or "100% Amhara(Abyssinian)", if they willfully or for their own purposes served Menelik and in his army, then they are Abyssiniazed Oromos which means that any atrocities they committed was done for the Benefit of Abyssinia and Menelik. Your point about what happened in the 16th century will not take away from the Atrocities committed by Menelik's army and Menelik himself. The Sources based on 19th century accounts mentions this. If you add "16th century Bermudes" account, it will be neither here or there when it comes to what Menelik's army did against the Southern people(Oromos, Wolyatas, Arsi, Bale, Sidamo, Shuro, Shankalla, Kaffa..etc). The article is about the Reign of Menelik(19th century) not 16th century Bermudes(Primary source), by the way, you need to provide a Secondary source for your claims that use 16th Century Bermudes otherwise it will fail to meet the [[WP:PRIMARY]] guidelines on sourcing and thus be your own Original Research.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 18:54, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::* [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], Every war the Oromo generals and their soldiers fought is for their own interest, not for anybody's interest. Ras Gobana Dache, Ras Mikael Ali and Ras Mekonen all three Oromo generals fought for their own interest. Ras Gobana for his grandson to be emperor of Ethiopia, Ras Mikael Ali for his son Lij Eyasu to be emperor and Ras Mekonen for his son Haileselase to be emperor. All of them want to be on top of every one and fought for their own interest. As for their soldiers they fight hard because they beleive that if they fight hard they will be rewarded with military titles and will be given fiefdom, district, province or even top positions in the central government like the Oromo Habtegyorgis who was a nobody captive, captured by Ras Gobana army who later took the position of prime minister& War minister and became king maker after Menelik's death. The Oromo Balcha Aba Nefso, similarly a nobody captive captured by Ras Gobana, the lord of Falle, was given Harar and Sidamo province to administer. Many unknown Oromo soldiers were also given Fiefdoms and higer positions. So everyone fights for his interest. Someone who is in USA works hard 16 hours, not for the interest of the whites, or for the interest of Obama but for himself, and he teaches his child in the best school so that one day his son becomes the president of USA and be on top of the world. The rule doesn't say we are not allowed to use primary sources, it just says extra care must be given. Let me ask you, if you think what you claim for 19th century is important then why is it not important for you to what happened in 16th century? Aren't they humans too? I did not respond to your graphic details above but trust me I have so many graphic details to what hapened in 16th centuary with detailed story of why/how people gets killed. If requested I can list for you many sources. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 21:21, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::::* [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] I know what was happening in the 16th century as well, I've read many sources. If you put 16th century information in the Reign of 19th Century Menelik, it will be very confusing. You are more than welcome to create a separate article on what transpired in the 16th century within a History Article. I understand you are trying to explain "why Menelik did what he did " but that is too many centuries apart that it is not the real reason why he had an Army that was pillaging and destroying villages and selling the women and children into slavery. Menelik himself stated that "I will not be a spectator" in the "European" scramble for Africa. Menelik basically played the role of a "Black" "european colonialist" and trying to seize as much land as he could no matter how much suffering was inflicted on the native populations of those lands. The Article about Menelik should be about Menelik and his Reign as an Emperor or Prior to that, things he did, things he had ownership over such as his army. I provided sources. Like I said, you can put that 16th century source but eventually someone else (Not me) will most likely remove it because it will not make sense in the article about 19th century Menelik.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 04:00, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
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:::* First of all there is no convincing reason for me to beleive what you claim did happen and for that I have given you many reasons above but to go throgh with it briefly '''1) No body just seat and wait to be killed:''' gave example of Tewodros's crulity and the fact that northern Oromos, Agaws, Tigrayans and Amaharas defended themselves even by collaborating with Europeans while even the church was opposing his cruel administration. '''2) No body works with with cruel leader who has no diplomatic skill:''' also gave example of Tewdors fighting the British with only 4,000 soldiers, even the Oromos prevented him to escape with his remaining 2,000 soldiers after his defeat and also showed no well known general stood by him in his last battle. On the contrary, Menelik fought with Italians with over 100,000 soldiers (in spite of the famine many came to support him) and by his side many well known generals stood by him like Ras Mikael Ali, Sultan Aba jifar, Moroda Bekere, Jote Tullu, Ras Mekonen, Fit Gebeyehu, Ras Wale all Oromos and non Oromos follows: Ras Mengesha, Ras Teklehaimanot and Sultan Sheh Khojele and it was also a battle where ordinary soldiers like the Oromo Habtegyorgis and Oromo Balcha showed their military skill and later took top positions in the central government. '''3) Centeral government is shared between Amharas and Oromos:''' I have showed you that Menelik married his daughter to Gobana's son and Mikael with the hope that their descendants will be emperor '''4) For no source available supporting your claim that meets the 11 reasons I listed above:''' even all the 11 points apply to the source you provided, by Eshetu Gemeda, except "j". That being said, '''colonisation is defined above''' and that Zulu, Masai, Ashanti tribal leaders and the leaders of the 13 colonies (USA) had no share in England, their common coloniser, while England's relation with Scotland is not considered colonisation but a Union ([[Acts of Union 1707]]). Please let's not repeat our dialogue again and again, just because statements are said repeatedly it does not become true. Let's make wikipedia a place where knowledge is shared and let's not make it a tool for corrupted ideology. Secondly, I didnot say Menelik killed your claimed death numbers because of what happened in 16th century but I said it is important to balance your intention of drawing a picture by saying "we are innocent people who have never harmed any of our neighbours and we respected our borders and are the most victimised in the region (with over 85% deaths) but other people are very bad people and should be demonised while we should not be". You may correct me if I am wrong but that is what I am getting from our dialogue. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 12:53, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
::::*This article is about Menelik not Tewodros. "corrupted ideology"? Your viewpoint is your own POV. I've countered all of your points in prior discussion(See [[Tokenism]]). I am only trying to show what happened during Menelik's Reign as Emperor especially what was within his control. Things that happened prior may have played a role in setting a background but they are not the Focus of the article. If you are feeling offended because there are plenty of Primary and Secondary sources stating what Menelik and his army/empire did in Ethiopia, then that is your own Bias. To me and other observers, Menelik became an emperor, he formed an Abyssinian-dominated Empire, by conquering Southern people through war and bribery(such as the Oromo on his side that you mention). Mentioning 16th century things in an article about a 19th century Person(Menelik) does nothing to lead the article to NPOV. Like I've stated above, Menelik's main focus was becoming an Emperor and grabbing as much territory as he could in competition with the Europeans, hence he used barbaric methods like raids, burning villages, mutilating men, selling off women and children into slavery(All of this is documented in Primary and Secondary Sources). Those things are Atrocities and never Justified. Two Wrongs Don't Make a Right.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:48, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::* Tewdros is in to show no amount of bribery will make an adult wise person follow a cruel leader who has no diplomatic skill. Tewodros is in because I can't use Gadafi to show my point on what happened in 19th centuary. Timewise Tewdros is the best example and he was dealing with the same people that Menelik was dealing with i.e. Oromos, Agaws, Tigrayans and Amharas whom all revolted to a cruel leader and even collaborated with the British. Indeed, those ancient people will not allow a leader who is cruel, unfair and undiplomatic to rule them and just kill them how ever he feel like and those Oromos in the north have shown that they will defend themselves by abondening Tewodros and if necessary by aiding the British, an option that was widely available for all Oromos. They could have collaborated with the British in Sudan and Kenya and Frenches in Djibouti and Italians in Eritrea and Somalia. They didnot betray Menelik (none of his lords aided with Europeans) simply because he is fair and was not like Tewodros (all northern lords revolted & some even aided the British).
:::::*Could you show me any Wikipedia rule that says articles should not bring related story from the past to support a particular topic within the article? For instance when I talk about a famine that occurred during his reign I might need to compare it with other past famines that devastated the region by telling briefly how/why/where/when the famines of let say 18th, 16th, 12th and 6th century affected the people and governments. Remember the topic is still about famine and historical events are used to compare how the famine at his time is compared to the past and show it is the worst, average or minimal and this comparison is used to support the particular factor that affected his government i.e. famine. Since you and Stumnik said it is important to show death toll, then estimated death tolls in 16th centuary is a relevant topic and is required to show how wars in the region have been devastating untill his reign but not to justify any thing as you said. Not informing how battles of that era look like leads people to think other clans war is not devastating while Menelik's is which is not allowed by the NPOV policy which says any sentence which looks like biased should be balanced. By showing what Bulatovich has written (as it is without modification) and Bermudes has written (as it is without modification) people will make their own conclusion. That is how it should be until death estimates are made for 19th or 16th century by scholars (a team that comprised black Africans, Europeans and scholars from all Horn of Africa) and provide us a document properly researched based on international standard methodology for estimating death tolls. Exceptional claim like this with millions of death by conquest in other parts of the world is not estimated just by one persons comment, if there is any one you or Stumnik knows let us know. Many multiple high quality primary sources and many 100s of material and written evidences are required for one to make an estimate. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 22:56, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::* Bermudes 16th century accounts do not meet [[Wikipedia:Relevance]], [[Wikipedia:Out of scope]], and [[Wikipedia:Article size]]. As for your mention of every Person involved in Menelik's army has resulted in a BLoated article with out of scope content. However, the famine mentioned for the years 1882 - 1892 belongs only because his reign began in 1889. Bulatovich's accounts(Primary Witness) is from 1896-1898. Bulatovich's estimate is based on his account the battles and raids that he went on with Menelik's armies from 1896-1898. The mention of the famine in 1882-1892 is not witnessed by Bulatovich's accounts of 1896-1898. I saw you added the Famine of 1882-1892, again it doesn't take away from Bulatovich's account and the other 8 sources provided above which give their accounts and examination of primary sources. However, the 16th century account of Bermudes(one Primary source) which was found questionable by his Portoguese contemporaries due to what Bermudes himself was stating (Exceptional Claims) does not belong in Menelik's article.Bulatovich didn't make an exceptional claim, Kumsa citing Bulatovich didn't make an exceptional claim, Reid quoting Bulatovich did not make an Exceptional claim. Bermudes being of 16th century is out of scope and just adds to the Bloatness of this article. The focus of his Reign as Emperor should be about events, happening, significant persons, achievements, atrocities, wars from 1889-1913. The sections should probably differentiated by the years in addition to the Titles they currently have. Currently this article on Menelik as written with some of your additions has added to the Bloatness focusing on insignificant and irrelevant topics. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 00:41, 10 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::* I am saying Bulatovich and Bermudes account should be inline in the reference and it will not be visible in the article. And what is going to be in the article is the proposal I made on my post dated on 3 July above. What is to be added about Bermudes in the article is only 12 words i.e. "another Portuguese by the name Bermudes also reported depopulation in 16th century". It's addition is required to compare and contrast devastating wars in the region and it's like adding only 14 words in Wikipedias article for WW2 which says: "in ww1 over 38 million people died while in WW2 73 million people died" and this is still talking about WW2 and used show how much it is devastating by comparing it to other past wars and it will not be against the rule you mentioned above i.e. relevance, out of scope and article size. You may see the article for [[World War II]] and stories related to [[World War I]] have been mentioned multiple times (I counted 9 times) and based on your justification then all of these mentions should have been removed. The thing is you know yourself it is possible to add it and that it is you who don't want it's inclusions for your own personal reason. And I oppose a sentence used to make one tribe angel and demonise another one, and this is the only reason why I insist for Bermudes's inclusion not to justify anything or to indicate a background for the war. Insisting Bermudes should not be included while it can is to tell the world we are angels while others are devils which is biased and againest the rule of wikipedia. I also have over 8 primary sources describing what hapened in 16th centuary and I have told you above I can provide them if requested and since there is no request from you I did not list them, which shows you don't have interest to prove Bermudes statement. If death toll should be included, then Bermudes should also be in. Wikipedia is not a place to demonize any other people and incite violence/hate/revenge/distabilisation in the Horn of Africa. Note that in your previous posts you have repeatedly used 'Amharas' and 'Abysinians' did this & did that while you should have used the most appropriate term like 'Menelik and his Oromo and Amhara rulling classes'. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 11:55, 10 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::* Bulatovich is relevant, in scope, and does not bloat the article. However, 16th century Bermudes is not relevant, out of scope, and adds to the bloatness of the article. As for your example of [[World War II]] and [[World War I]] being mentioned in that article, is properly connected since they happened within the same century and World War I directly led to World War II see [[Adolf Hitler]]. However, what you are trying to add happened in the 16th century, which is 4 Centuries apart and Out of Scope when the article is about Menelik's 19th century Reign as Emperor. If you want to write a 16th century Article about Abyssinia and Galla(Oromo) etc, go ahead start a new article. Adding that to Menelik's article Bloats the article and confuses readers. As for your comment '''"Wikipedia is not a place to demonize any other people and incite violence/hate/revenge/distabilisation int he Horn of Africa."''', I edit in good faith and for the purpose of telling the history as the Sources provide them. As for my use of Amhara/Abyssinians did this or that, well that is what the sources say, that is what Menelik was an Abyssinian, he was the Emperor of Abyssinia and then he expanded his empire on the Southern people (Oromos, Arsi, Shankalla,Afar, Konso, basically Non-Amhara). I won't use the term "Ethiopian" because "Abysinnia + Oromo and other Non-Amhara" became "Ethiopia", so Menelik was in the process of forming the modern-state of Ethiopia. I will not bloat the article nor the discussion with the term you recommended "Menelik and his Oromo and Amhara ruling classes". For your information, the Oromo ruling class did not like being under Amhara-domination either, sources are avaliable for that too. So if you add 16th century Bermudes account in 19th century Menelik article, someone will most likely remove it for violating WK relevance,outofscope, and article size.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:46, 10 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::::::* You have seen the article for [[World War I]] and [[World War II]], you have seen that deaths from both sides are estimated based on multiple high quality sources. One thing you cannot deny is that all of the sources provided so far do not estimate deaths from both sides precisely. In both world wars whoever provoked the war the estimate did not prejudice and still estimated from all sides. If we must blame for any negative history it is only the world leaders and their generals to be blamed and those millions of soldiers from all sides are just following their masters order. Simply that is what I am requesting i.e. until a team of professionals from all sides seat together and estimate deaths from all sides properly then death toll should not be mentioned. An Oromo fighting by the order of Gobana Dache might be fighting believing he will no more be terrorized by all his neighboring slaver terrorizing clan warlords, another Oromo might be fighting Gobana's army may be because he does not trust Gobana or Menelik. Whatever their reasons is deaths from both sides should be estimated because both of them are just following the order of their clan warlords. However, still if their is continued insist death tolls made by just one person comment are important then Bermudes should be in. For ww2 article to include ww1 story is not just because they are in the same century but also before WW2 WW1 is the most devastating war. As for 19th century war the most devastating war before it was of the 16th century wars and since I am just adding 12 words visible in the article for only compare and contrast purpose it is relevant within the scope and does not make the article bloat. In ww2 see the paragraph that starts by "Land warfare changed from the static....." it's comparing and contrasting how warfares look like between the two wars and I am also comparing warfare between the two most devastating wars of 19th and 16th centuary. It is possible to add Bermudes and it is just you who does not want it in for a reason only known to you. You mentioned "Amhara domination" can you name the Amhara persons who dominated the central government and what their positions was? All the multi ethnic elites/lords/rulling classes are united by a common interest and I believe they all know the danger of distablisation which obviously follows by scramble of the country by Surrounding Europeans who are just waiting for any opportunity. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 22:06, 10 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::::* First, I gave the Wikipedia guidelines with regard to Bermudes(one Primary source), not my personal view. Just as Stumink told you, Oromo killings should be addressed in Oromo related article, so should Bermudes accounts go there. Your mention of "Scramble of the country by Surrounding Europeans" is your own Personal Analysis(Original research). And You are using the Nazi German soldiers excuse during the [[Nuremburg Trial]] which is called the [[Superior orders]] (Nuremburg defense). Which if that is the case then Menelik is wholly responsible for all atrocities committed. However sources do state that Menelik also ordered his military men not to do things like mutilations on occasion or until he was troubled. At the end of the day, whatever motivations each and every soldier had, they decided to do the atrocity(mutilation, murder, torture, rape, selling people into slavery). If you are going to use modern legal defenses for past atrocities, then you will have to deal with modern laws dealing with soldiers committing atrocities. However, the Death Toll belongs in the Menelik Article because it happened then and has been properly sourced per Wikipedia guidelines. Menelik(Sahle Maryam) was Amhara even if his mother was Oromo, he was of Solomonic Dynasty which is an Amhara and Amharaized Tigrayan dynasty. See the 1998 Rome Statute of the International Criminal Court. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 00:09, 11 July 2016 (UTC)


== Aanollee ==
'''The 1998 Rome Statute of the International Criminal Court'''
1. The fact that a crime within the jurisdiction of the Court has been committed by a person pursuant to an order of a Government or of a superior, whether military or civilian, shall not relieve that person of criminal responsibility unless:
(a) The person was under a legal obligation to obey orders of the Government or the superior in question;
(b) The person did not know that the order was unlawful; and
(c) The order was not manifestly unlawful.
2. For the purposes of this article, orders to commit genocide or crimes against humanity are manifestly unlawful.
Mutilating someones hands, feet, breasts etc is a disgusting display of barbarity no matter what century you are from. The soldier doing that most likely in that time wanted to do it and not just simply following orders. Either way, it is indefensible and I don't understand why you are so passionate trying to defend war crimes committed in the 19th century? It happened and it was documented then and reviewed by modern scholars as well as on here in Wikipedia.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 00:07, 11 July 2016 (UTC)
: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], Even Bulatovich did not say anything about breast and feet. As a military officer he had observation/interviews with many multi ethnic soldiers of Meneleik and even if he heard a gossip circulating in the society then he could have written it, but he did not because it did not happen. I showed you above by comparing with Tewodros that those ancient people will abandon/revolt to a cruel leader and if such thing happen Menelik like Tewodros would have fought Italians with 4,000 soldiers. I avoid any books written by Horn of Africans in general (because most write for nationalism & political agenda), if you think that they are very reliable then that is your choice but I will not believe any books written by writers from this region without confirming their references. If you have any scholar from outside this region for those claims you may inform me to my user talk page. If requested and if you show me your interest I can also send you sources to very similar disgusting atrocities committed in 16th century to your talk page, and trust me I have many sources. Since our topic is about estimating death numbers I don't want to list them here. You are using the emotion card to convince your supported claim of ‘millions killed by conquest’. Anyways, all humans are equal weather dead in 16th or 19th century for whatever reason (unjustifiable or justifiable) and I believe that is why the civilised world estimated deaths from all sides as you see in WW1 and WW2 article. If Germans and French (Key nations in EU who fought in both WW2 & WW1) can be civilised I see no reason why Horn of Africans cannot become civilised and seat in one table and estimate their deaths from all sides precisely based on multiple high quality sources for 19th century as well as 16th century. Humans dead whenever and for whatever reason are also humans. If the reason why you insist the inclusion of deaths in 19th century is for human right reason then actually you would have been the one to insist the inclusion of what happened in 16th century as well. What you are saying equals Germans saying we only want our peoples death to be known and we don't care about the French's death or the British's death and it should not be known, while British & French people also insisting the same way. This kind of attitude does not work in a civilised world. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 12:42, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
:::[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] That is the point you are missing here. Bulatovich isn't the only witness. He is but one witness in many who are saying similar things in regards to mass murders, mutilations, Abyssinian machine guns vs unarmed or weakly armed people, enslavement of women and children after the raids, etc. I am using the sources available including Bulatovich, Kumsa, Prouty, Vanderhym, Bulcha, Hajji, Pankhurst, Marcus, etc! I've already explained why 16th century should have it's own article. You can go create a new Article on the 16th century. Your example of WWI and WWII does not apply for 19th century Menelik army conquest of Non-Abyssinians. There is not a Direct Causal link between 16th Century Bermudes account and 19th Century Menelik Conquest of Non-Abyssinian people. Per Wikipedia standards, I mentioned above, your addition of 16th Century account by Bermudes(even your other 8 sources) will Bloat the article, will be out of scope(Focus is 19th Century Menelik Conquest), and will be irrelevant as the people in 19th century are Not the same as the people in 16th century. For example, what you are doing is like bringing up Roman colonization of Germanic Tribes and then Hitler in WWII invades countries in the area, the Roman colonization of Germany did not Cause Hitler to Mass murder Jews. Hitler mass murder Jews because of his own agenda and goals. Menelik had his own agenda and goals which were not a direct result of 16th century Bermudes accounts. As for your comment, '''If Germans and French (Key nations in EU who fought in both WW2 & WW1) can be civilised I see no reason why Horn of Africans cannot become civilised and seat in one table and estimate their deaths from all sides precisely based on multiple high quality sources for 19th century as well as 16th century.''', that is pretty sad you feel that way about Africans, clearly your own Bias. French, Germans, and British have actually very Uncivilised, quite Barbaric wars with each other, I recommend you read the History of Europe. Remember, Africans and Europeans are humans too hence do Inhumane things as well. Therefore, presenting Menelik only as an Angel as you are trying to do by covering up(Censoring) what is clearly Sourced is an Injustice to those Humans that suffered. This story is more than just Menelik's legacy which It seems you are trying to protect or defend here. I defend the statement of "millions were killed as a result ....due to the conquest" because it is backed by Primary, Secondary, and Tertiary sources, in addition, there are many Oromo groups who are very passionate about this, therefore it must have some truth. People do not just cry about being victims, if there wasn't any truth to it. The NPOV for Menelik's article is that he was "good at these things" but he was "bad to these people", he simply couldn't have been a "conqueror" if he didn't use "violence" and "destruction", no Physical impossible way. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 01:48, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
::::[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], '''primarily my issue is how the death estimate is calculated'''. And I have proposed that if based only on one persons comment i.e. Bulatovich's ambiguous and contradicting statement one can estimate millions died by conquest then obviously Wikipedians need to know that with Bermudes's clear, not ambiguous and explaining clearly why and how many got killed (to show how and how many he used words like 'all men killed' and 'all old women killed' and 'all boys muti...' to show the reason for killings he used words like 'only to destroy' and 'depopulate') one may also say millions were killed in 16th centuary. Therefore, if an estimate calculated based on Bulatovich ambiguous comment should be in then the proposal is to just state what both eye witnesses have said and let wikipedia readers make their own conclusion. This is based on your suggestions. Personaly what I want is just to wait our scholars seat in one table, like the civilised world, and give us precise estimate after going through 100s of documents and by providing material and other evidences. In Menelik's article there is already words used like 'mass killings' and 'large scale slavery' which eye wittneses like Bulatovich and other neutral scholars from outside this region, within their 100s of pages of their books, did not state clearly saying 'mass killed/murdered', 'large scale' or even 'all killed' like Bermudes clearly stated it, but still that one may stay however death number should not be mentioned until it is estimated properly with unbiased tone and with multiple high quality sources. As I said 12 words about Bermudes with inline citation of his and Bulatovich's account will not be irrelevant and is used to compare and contrast it with the last devastating war fought in the region before 19th century. As you have seen yourself there is already a paragraph dedicated to compare the warfare system of WW2 with the last devastating war fought before it i.e. WW1. If you you disagree with this proposal then the other option is not to mention death estimate for both 19th and 16th century. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 14:51, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] Bulatovich is a relevant and credible(reliable) source when it comes to Menelik's armies actions from 1896-1898. Read Bulatovich on how he calculated the population of "Abyssinia + the conquered territories" and how he calculated how many Gallas existed after the conquest (5 million). You are able to read the book, he did state that half of the Gallas(Oromos) were "dreadfully annihilated" due to the conquest. He clearly expanded on so many things about the Oromo, the Amhara/Abyssinians, he mentioned alot of things that you simply refuse to acknowledge. As for Bermudes, he wasn't a Primary source for Menelik and his only relation to Menelik 19th century is that he went to 16th Century Abyssinia. Your addition of Bermudes accounts will not add anything to Menelik article as there is not a Direct Link between 16th Century Abyssinia and 19th Century Menelik. Bring something that was happening in 19th Century prior to Menelik becoming an Emperor, that would something worthwile to the article. As for your desire to do Original Research by examining all the Primary Sources to come up with a number, well that is outside of purpose of Wikipedia. The estimate remains because it is sourced by Primary and Secondary Sources.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:40, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], I have given profesor Feqadu Lemesas analysis on Bulatovich which he went to deny such thing happened. I have given an example that the same people and lords/rulling classes (Oromo, Tigrayans, Agaws & Amharas) that Menelik used to rule were all of them revolting to unfair/cruel leader called Tewodros and this shows that those ancient people don't just seat and wait to be killed unfairly/cruely and even will go as far as aiding Europeans or abonden the leader until he remains with just 4,000 soldiers or like the women Workitu & Mestawit who were chifes of the Oromo people (whom their children were killed unfairly by Tewodros) might surround him and prevent him from escaping with his remaining 2,000 soldiers after his defeat with the British. Tewodros's wife being an Oromo called Empress Tewabech Ali, didnot make the Oromo Workitu & Mestawit to give mercy to Tewodros and allow him to escape. Tewodros was still ruling north Ethiopia while Menelik was just King of Shewa. With all these examples if you still insist an estimate made by just Bulatovich's ambiguous comment is appropriate then it is better to put his words and Bermudes's word as it is with inline citation and let people make their own conclusion. Above you changed the word 'during the conquest' to 'due to the conquest' and made it from ambiguous to precise, but still it is a one person comment and if we take it as if he is what you are saying then he did not answer the question of how and why like Bermudes precisely stated it. Eventhough Bermudes precisely said how many died by using 'all' still it is only one persons comment and that there has to be multiple supporting evidences for one to make an estimate. The best solution is for a team of scholars and experts specialized in various field comprising different ethnic groups from Horn of Africa and others from outside this region to analyse multiple high quality evidences carefully and estimate deaths from both wars and give us their estimates as well answering the question of How/Why/Where/When/ clearly with unbiased tone in a way people learn from it but not written in a way 'we are innocent while others are bad' and not in a way to provoke and incite violence/hate/revenge/extremism. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 21:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::::[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] With all the sources available including Bulatovich, it obviously happened due to the conquest. I read the his Book obviously you have not since you ask questions which are answered in the book. Already Experts have examined this data and have come up with the numbers. You have a Bias against them. Also, you are fighting tooth and nail to remove one statement which is backed by Primary sources and Secondary Sources. I will not be a party to you Doing Original Research here. You can collect all the "experts" and write a Book that gets published by a credible, reliable Publisher of History. I think this discussion is over since you are regurgitating your points ad naseum. The conclusion of this discussion is the statement stays as it is. Your addition of Bermudes will most likely get removed for being off topic, bloating the article, and irrelevancy.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:12, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::::::[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] What University is "Professor Feqadu Lemesas"/"Feqadu Lemessa", a Professor at and what department is he a Professor of?[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 06:55, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::::::: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], about Professor Feqadu Lemesa, he teaches in Adama university and his opinion is published in website that writes news for US residents (not blog and self published). Whoever he is not that much important because even journalists without much university education do write opinion pieces. The most important thing is the content presented which should be confirmed with multiple high quality primary sources. I have also seen the work of Horn of Africans (Amharas, Oromos, Tigres and Somalis) who have Phd and some even teaches in respected universities in USA and Europe who manipulate and paraphrase out of context just for nationalism and political agenda. For your requesting me to provide credible document for 19th century to oppose/balance your supported millions killed, I did give example of Tewdros on how those ancient people don't just get killed that easily and unfairly and that the central government is a multi ethnic government (rulling classes with equally Oromo and Amhara blood/ancestry and much more Oromo blood on military generals) which is not a good environment for killing Oromos and Amharas unfairly but probably good environment for killing non Oromos and Amharas. Actually I have given a source above that ancient Tigre rulling classes refer Amharas as half Galla and half Amhara. After seeing the biography of all key people in the empire between 1774-1974 (200 years) one can notice why the Tigres call Amharas as half Oromo and half Amhara. Within this 200 years simply there was no key person in the empire who has no Oromo blood or not married himself or his descendants to an Oromo and if there is any you know let us know. What kind of other document do you want me to provide for why I don't believe your supported POV? — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 21:33, 16 July 2016 (UTC)


This is a fake massacre made up by tplf so stop putting it here. Zehabesha and Bokerna are much more reputable than the oromo.com websites you've provided. Menelik saved oromo from colonisation and had a wife and was christan. stop spreading lies. just because oromo region talks about these lies doesnt make them real. they haven't provided any "scientific evidence". it is just a lie to divide the country. i've cited many source proving that. stop spreading lies <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Mooproop1|Mooproop1]] ([[User talk:Mooproop1#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Mooproop1|contribs]]) 03:42, 17 October 2021 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
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== WOLKAIT IS ALWAYS AMHARA GODNAR ==
== Salem-news Article "Professor Feqadu Lemessa" appears to be a Sockpuppet ==
[[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] I googled "Professor Feqadu Lemesa/Lemassa/Lemessa]] and the results show he is a Fictitious Person(Does not Exist). See [http://www.awrambatimes.com/?p=9442] '''We couldn’t match the infamous internet professor to a real life person–breathing, talking or perhaps writing history. The only close match we found was the Academic Vice President of Dire Dawa University, Dr. Fekadu Lemessa. Pay attention here. The internet historian’s name is spelled “Feqadu,” and he is a former Adama University professor and writer. You would think you would know someone like professor Feqadu Lemessa. Right? He writes about stuff (I have no idea what it is about but it could be history.)'''. I also found a LinkedIn [https://et.linkedin.com/in/fekadu-lemessa-53560854] of a "Fekadu Lemessa" who claims to be an PH'd in Agricultural Process engineer therefore not a Ph'd in History or Social Sciences or Political Science. I think from these searches, "Professor Feqadu/Fekadu Lemessa" is a Sockpuppet used as a source. To make matters worst in the Salem article [http://www.salem-news.com/articles/july282013/oromo-truths-fl.php] you referenced, '''dated July 28, 2013''' it calls him Former Professor while the LinkedIn Profile says '''Fekadu Lemessa Associate Professor Adama Science and Technology University 2014 – Present (2 years)'''. Your Salem-news Professor "Feqadu Lemessa" is an unverified/unreliable source therefore will be deleted if used to add anything.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 23:46, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], the issue is the above quoatation you extracted is from a blog called awrambatimes.com, a type of source that is not reliable and not allowed in Wikipedia and could be regarded also as self-published. You know anyone can easily open website/blogs and add content and then use it as a reference. To make that claim another equal news organisation like salem.com is required that states "Feqadu Lemesa is fictious and non existent person" then probably the issue could be taken seriously. We know how the regions politics work and when someone writes an article that damages political and nationalism interest then obviously the person's name will be defamed. Instead of engaging with dialogue just like how the rest of the civilized world solve issues in our region defamation is a shortcut to assert ones POV. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 13:27, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
:: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] "Professor Feqadu Lemessa" does not appear to be a real person therefore the Salem-news article is an Unreliable Source.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 05:14, 18 July 2016 (UTC)


Oh yeah and by the way the picture is not falsified. Tigray just stole the land in 1991. Just becaus every single map shows what you don't want it to doesn't make it falsified. It is the map of gondar and welqait was a part of gondar. Deal with it <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Mooproop1|Mooproop1]] ([[User talk:Mooproop1#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Mooproop1|contribs]]) 03:50, 17 October 2021 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
== Issues with the sources used to estimate death toll ==


== Aanollee ==
There is no source provided which listed several death estimates extracted from multiple high quality sources in the following format: '''"in a place called.......on date....... people numbering........were killed by.......method for.........reason"'''. None of the sources came up with total death estimate by providing data in the above way like death estimates made in other parts of the world with similar exceptional claim of over 2 million deaths by an army. Not providing these kind of reliable sources that somehow adds up to 2+ million and using millions dead is against the rule here [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]]. However, all the sources used to support their POV of millions were killed were based only on one persons comment, an ambiguous comment made by Bulatovich's which he said '''"half died during the conquest"''' and if we assume he said 'half died due to the conquest' then in his entire book he did not dedicate not even a single paragraph to explain what method was used to kill that many people and why that many people were killed. Moreover, he did not even gave one example story where he personally observed killings of 100s or 1000s or 100,000s being killed by Menelik's army at a specific battle/place/date and explain why/when/where/how that precisely stated number of people were killed, and using only this kind of source is also against [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]] and [[WP:QS]]. Secondary sources using only one persons ambiguous comment for estimating millions of deaths is against [[WP:QS]] and [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]] . Wikipedia editors coming up with exceptional claim of ‘millions killed by conquest’, something not precisely stated in the primary source is Original research and is not allowed. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 19:38, 15 July 2016 (UTC)
::See Talk Section '''About death toll''', Eight other sources were provided demonstrating the numbers per Abyssinian raid on Oromo/Kaffa/Shuro villages, Bulatovich gave his final estimation. Your refusal to read the Sources provided does not take away from Bulatovich being backed by other Primary as well as Secondary sources. Your refusal to acknowledge the other sources provided does not demonstrate good faith discussion and editing. As for Bermudes, you are giving Undue Weight to his 16th century account on a 19th Century article, this is a case of [[False balance]], See [[Wikipedia:Neutral point of view]] for articles on Undue Weight and False balance. A 19th century account or a secondary verifiable and credible source could add balance. The analogy of WWI and WWII does not really apply in the Bermudes to Bulatovich account. Also your Bermudes addition as a counter to Bulatovich is your own Original research as you have demonstrated in the discussion above. You still didn't answer my question on '''Professor Fekadu Lemassa''', since he was one of your Counter sources to Kumsa/Bulatovich, what college is he a Professor at? [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 04:36, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
::: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], as for Bulatovich's account and secondary sources estimating based on his account let it wait as we will request for comment from other Wikipedians and administrators on weather it is againest wikipedia rule of [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]] and [[WP:QS]] or not. For now let's compile other sources which estimated deaths by using other primary sources other than Bulatovich. Since now we are concluding our discussion could you just briefly list death numbers only and the source's writer, title of the reliable source and page number/section for only those sources who did not use Bulatovich for their estimate. This is a very exceptional claim so please avoid a secondary source which did not show clearly the primary source he used for his estimate or show clearly the methodology he used for his death calculation. Please let's not bring all the details described above and here in this section let's focus only on death numbers. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 20:29, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
:::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] I already listed the 8 Sources including Bulatovich, see all of the discussion above. The claim is not exceptional as there are sources that confirm it. You refuse to acknowledge those sources and then you present Two "sources": Bermudes(16th century) and Lemassa(Original research Source) as your counter. All of your "requirements" for a reliable source are extremely extravagant for the 8(Bulatovich included) Primary/Secondary Sources that I provided, yet you have a double standard in permitting your sources(16th century Bermudes and Original Research Lemassa) a pass to be used in the Menelik article. Also, on the one hand you want every detail from my sources to come up with that "number", yet then you say '''Please let's not bring all the details described above and here in this section let's focus only on death numbers.''', Which is it? Do you want Details or do you just want a Number, because the 8 Sources(including Bulatovich) give details and numbers. Either way, I have provided above with the sources the Details and Numbers. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 23:21, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
::::: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], we are requesting administrators opinion on the death estimate and what they need to know is death numbers and sources. As for your continued claim: "8 sources are under wikipedia guidelines and are not against [[WP:QS]] and [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]]" "2+ million killed is not exeptional/controversial" and "8 sources have death numbers" we will leave that for others to make their judgment and listing your sources in the following simple way: "X writer precisely said Y number of people died as being found in his book titled X and on page number Y" will be very helpful to support or oppose your POV by evaluating/confirming the sources easily. Since you claimed that you have full access to the 8 sources then it would not be much of a problem to just list the death numbers. As I said we will open a new topic/section in this talk page as for Bulatovich and secondary sources using his comment for estimating. But for now in advance it will be very helpful if you could list the sources estimating with other primary sources other than Bulatovich. Secondary sources should clearly indicate their references for their estimate based on wikipedias rule saying exceptional/controversial claim requires exceptional high quality sources — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 14:16, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] The links to the 8 Sources are provided in the Above Discussion. Click the link and read the Sources. I am not going to regurgitate everything in the sources provided, you are more than Free and Able to read the Sources. You wanted sources and they have been provided to you and wikipedia. Read them! EthiopianHabesha, everything that you have been stating throughout all of these Discussion Sections have been your own Original Research and Personal Analysis. To continue this discussion on this menelik article, I think the "death toll" remains since it has been sourced properly per Wikipedia guidelines. As for your own opinion on the sources, or numbers, please see that you are not following Wikipedia guidelines [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:What_Wikipedia_is_not#Wikipedia_is_not_a_publisher_of_original_thought] Regarding, '''Wikipedia is not a publisher of original thought''', All of your request to do "Analysis" of numbers based on sources etc is your own Original Research. I do not think this discussion can continue unless you desist from doing "original research" in this discussion page.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 05:12, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], I thought it would have been best if you could provide the precise numbers from your 8 sources. Anyways, no problem I will go through all of them and will list the estimates with writer and page number briefly together with the link so that it can be easily confirmed then you may evaluate each of them and then probably give your approval and rejections. Will finish listing them in a day or two. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 13:21, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] I already provided direct quotations from those 8 sources in the above Section discussions. You requested not to get into details such as actually explaining what happened to the victims of Meneliks' war machine(Army). It has been provided but those are not the only Sources, they are only 8, there are more I am certain and in due time as other editors look into this, will find them. So far the 8 sources provided are reliable sources therefore support the statement in the Menelik article.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 00:07, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::::: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], Why don't you say Menelik and his Oromo army generals (Ras Gobana Dache, Ras Mekonen...Gudisa and War minister & prime minister Habtegyorgis Dinagde Botera as well as Ras/Nigus Mikael Ali Aba Bula)? Who also were given war machines/modern weapons whom then gave it to their loyal soldiers mobilized from their Oromo clan. And after Menelik's death these Oromo generals fought to be emperor of Ethiopia. Can you name one Amhara or Tigre general who equally participated like these Oromo generals and what is their positions under Menelik's central government?? If there is anyone you know then it would have been easy to back it with one of the 100s of books written for Menelik. As for your 8 sources I need more time to go through them, but it will be listed briefly with 1 line for every scholar estimate. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 13:41, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::::::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] Because this article is about Menelik's reign as an Emperor and not his Generals. He was the Emperor, he gave the orders or overall goal which was subjugation and conquest of the Southern people (a big majority of them being Oromos). It doesn't matter that he employed Oromos to do so, the result is the same which is Oromo people conquered in a violent way. That is a fact that is undeniable by the current status of Oromo people and their historical status within the Gabbar system in the Abyssinian-controlled/dominated Ethiopian Empire. They were all Abyssiniazed hence their being "Oromo" by "DNA" does not take away from their actions and deeds as Abyssiniazed "Oromos".[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:02, 25 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::::::: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], you may have your own Identity formula but for me blood/ancestory/DNA is an identity. As I have no control over my grandfathers preferred language/culture/religion/values and wife choice I will also have no control over my childrens and grand childerens who may prefer to speak European language/culture/religion/values and no control over their wife choices who also change their names from African name to European names or Arab names (like Mohamed, Jemal....) because of globalization and integration. Even in the strict Communist China business men wear the European suits and no one wear the traditional chinese clothing everyday and they even give European names (James/Adam....) when doing business with the outside world. Before feudalism (Gabar system) raiding neighbouring people is the main form of resource collecting system. Therfore, all clan lords (including Oromo) raided between themselves as well as other neighbouring people (Amhara,Tigre,Gurage,Wolayta,Kaffa,Afar,Shuro,Gambela & Somali.....) contineously uncontrolled and freely. Same story for world history and raiding system (lawlesness) is followed by feudalism/Gabar System (33-50% tax payed to fiefdom holders & state) then comes capiatalism (33-50% tax payed directly to the state) and in this transformations the above mentioned key Oromo generals played great role by stabilizing the Central government. This is also a fact in our history. Still you didnot name a key Amhara or Tigre person and their positions in Menelik's centeral government, therefore there are none. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 09:49, 25 July 2016 (UTC)
::::::::::::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] The end result is Amhara ethnic domination since Menelik's reign as an Emperor until the overthrow of Mengistu Hailemariam, now Ethiopia is ruled by the Tigrayans in the form of the "Tigrayan Liberation People's Front". I've been reading the news and the history, "Non-Abyssinian footsoldiers(including Generals)" following the leadership of Abyssinian political leaders all since the creation of the Modern State of Ethiopia, prior to that, Oromo, Afar, Somali had their Frreedom from the Abyssinian rule which is quite apparent today. This isn't my defintion by the way, this is from allt he sources I've read and provided here.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:46, 25 July 2016 (UTC)
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:: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], the sources you read have agendas of establishing a united ethnic federations with equality or may be for separation and lead for creation of over 80 republics in Horn of Africa. Because if a 20,000 ethnic nation Harari can become a republic then I see no reason why ethnic Welayta and Gamos (both speaking Omotic languages) with over a million members to be separate republics. If Isaaq clan nation dominated Somaliland requests for republic, then I see no reason for Issas, Degodia and Issaq clans requesting separation from Ogaden dominated Somali region as well as other Amhara and Oromo clans requesting for republic because they assume there is domination of Wellegas/Mechas or Gojames domination. Anyways, everyone might have his agenda and interests and for that reason they write and censor other materials damaging their interest. In here Wikipedia readers need to know what exactly has been going on the region. If top key military generals of Menelik are Oromos (Oromo domination) who fought each other after Menelik's death to be emperor of Ethiopia and even continued to rule upto 1974, and if before Menelik the primary system of collecting resources is 'raiding system' then I see no reason why they should not be known in a way we learn our history in neutral/unbiased tone but not by using extreme tone. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 14:23, 26 July 2016 (UTC)
::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] As far as the sources state, those "Oromo Generals" were no longer culturally nor linguistically Oromo. They became Abyssinianized (Christian, Spoke Amharic, Married Amhara women vice versa). Like Stumink and I have stated, what Oromos in the 16th Century did should have its own article. This article is about Menelik and his Reign in the 19th century. You can add that history to the Oromo article. As for everyone having their own agenda, well Amhara/Abyssinians have their own agenda which is domination(historically it's been shown), therefore only reading the History of the Region through the Perspective of the Amhara will not give a Neutral POV for this article or any other Article of on Wikipedia in relation to the Horn of Africa region. The Ethnic Amhara/Abyssinian bias has littered Ethiopian Studies for so long that it is due for a revision. That is why there are scholars like Kumsa, Hajji, etc who are doing their part to Bring the History from the Oromo Perspective in the Journal of Oromo Studies (University-validated Research). [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 01:43, 27 July 2016 (UTC)
:::: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], still today in Ethiopia the primary identity formula is determined by "who is your father? grandfather? your ancestors?" and no one identify himself with the language and culture he follows, even if he does not speak his forfathers languages. We are talking about 19th centuary where the question of "Who are your ancestors?" is the most and very important identity formula with more than 10x importance compared to today. Those Oromo military generals as well as Menelik and Haileselase are bilinguals, based on reliable sources, and speak both Amharic and Oromo fluently and their families are intermarried by dynastic marriages. Note that even lower class societies mix with other people that are the victims of the 'raiding system' that existed for thousands of years between clan warlords in the Horn of Africa. In the future we need to prepare for more European/American/African American languages and cultures influence because of globalization just like experienced in the multi ethnic African republics and in the more cultured Asians like capitalist South Korea and communist China. You may have your POV but my POV is that all Languages/History/Culture of Horn of Africa belongs to everyone of us. As for agenda I also said above that Amharas/Oromos/Somalis/Tigreans have agendas and that is why I said it is better to use writers from outside the region and for that reason I try not to use writers from this region as much as possible. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 14:04, 28 July 2016 (UTC)
:::::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] By your own Bias towards Horn Africans, then you must disqualify the Unverified Fictitious "Professor Feqadu Lemessa". However, Kumsa, et al can remain because they are verified Real Persons that have written books within their respective Western/European Universities. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 19:34, 28 July 2016 (UTC)


This guy just uses pro oromo websites and all this stuff like oromopride.com this isn't reputable. Many oromo doctors have debunked this myth in my sources. Stop changing and go do something else instead of spreading hate. I've seen your other edits. Just anti amhara stuff. Go do something else or go watch ur tigrai media house stop spreading fake news <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Mooproop1|Mooproop1]] ([[User talk:Mooproop1#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Mooproop1|contribs]]) 15:43, 17 October 2021 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
== Offtopic Items ==
:{{re|Mooproop1}} Please read [[WP:AGF]]. Wikipedians have patience, but not infinite patience. Understanding and following [[WP:AGF]] is one of the fundamental requirements for editing Wikipedia content. [[User:Boud|Boud]] ([[User talk:Boud|talk]]) 19:22, 17 October 2021 (UTC)


Why not just lock meneliks wikipedia account? these people keep editing and putting bias sources just let it be the way it was before. why do they get to keep switching it and I can't? <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Mooproop1|Mooproop1]] ([[User talk:Mooproop1#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Mooproop1|contribs]]) 01:24, 19 October 2021 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
There seems to be alot of "Offtopic" mentions and notations in "His Reign as Emperor" as well as throughout the article.
:The reason why others are conserving the ''status quo'' of the article is that you have not (yet) engaged fully in the discussion and do not seem to have understood the principles and methods of editing Wikipedia, such as [[WP:TALK|signing]] with <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>, using [[WP:INDENT|indenting]], and [[WP:AGF]] and [[WP:VERIFIABILITY]]. You should also use the ''preview'' button to check the meaning of what you have typed on a talk page before hitting the ''save'' button. People make mistakes, but if you make so many mistakes that others have to guess what you're trying to say, then it's difficult to converge on a decision; for example, you wrote {{tq|meneliks wikipedia account}} when what you meant was ''the [[Menelik II]] Wikipedia article''.{{pb}}If you ''read'' [[Talk:Menelik II#Aanolee massacre]], then you will see the current state of discussion about the sources. You are welcome to participate in the discussion, but you have to focus on the discussion and present your arguments about the sources clearly, in a structured rational way, seeking [[WP:CONS|editorial consensus]] based on sources and respect for other editors, and making an effort to understand and discuss the sources themselves. You cannot expect others to do all the work in guessing what you are trying to say. Please ''read'' the links (typically shown in blue, but this may depend on your browser) that you have been shown by myself and others. [[User:Boud|Boud]] ([[User talk:Boud|talk]]) 05:54, 19 October 2021 (UTC)


== Gadaa conquests ==
Namely the account of 16th Century Bermudes is offtopic since the article is about 19th century Menelik's reign as an Emperor. Prior discussions in this Talkpage attempted to make "equivalency" arguments between a source by the name of Bulatovich(Primary Witness in Menelik's Army) and 16th Century Portoguese Bermudes accounts. This False Equivalency used to incorrectly reach an NPOV has been used to keep this Offtopic material with regards to 16th century Bermudes. This is a candidate for removal from this article. Any arguments for removing Bulatovich are highly contested and should be confronted since Bulatovich was deeply embedded in 19th Century Menelik II's Army and there is a separate article on him. Bulatovich's mention in this Article is to help understand Menelik II in many facets.
I'm not sure how relevant this bit on 16th century Ethiopia is to an article about a late 19th century Emperor, but regardless by real problem is that this term is not explained. [[Gadaa]] links to an article about a system of government, so it is not clear what is meant by 'Gadaa conquests'. It is like referring to 'democratic conquests' without even saying who the democrats are. [[User:LastDodo|LastDodo]] ([[User talk:LastDodo|talk]]) 10:03, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
16th Century Bermudes adds nothing in terms of Neutrality to this Article rather it is an offtopic rant within this article. 16th Century Bermudes does not deserve 3 Sentences let alone 1 sentence in this article due to the reasonings and Wikipedia guidelines mentioned.
:{{re|LastDodo}} It's not relevant to this article, but Oromo nationalists are promoting Gadaa as a idignous form of ‘‘democratic system’’, someone needs to take a good look at [[Gadaa]] article for [[WP:NPOV]]. Gadaa conquest only means that the Gadaa system divides Oromos in age classes, and Oromos falling into the warrior age classes are supposed to conquer and kill enemies. It's a barbaric system if you ask me. [[User:YonasJH|YonasJH]] ([[User talk:YonasJH|talk]]) 10:12, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
::I'm not here to take a position on a contentious issue, but if you understand the meaning of the term and the history, it would be good of you to bring some clarity to that section of the article. Most people outside Ethiopia will have no understanding of what it means at present. [[User:LastDodo|LastDodo]] ([[User talk:LastDodo|talk]]) 11:15, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
:::{{re|LastDodo}} Yes maybe it's should be a subsection ''background'' in the centralisation section, but i don't see the need for it to go all the way back to the 16th century, it's kind of crazy if you ask me. I'll work on it when i have more time, and some other editor can help. Thank you for pointing it out, i had to read the whole article to find it. It looks out of place in this article. [[User:YonasJH|YonasJH]] ([[User talk:YonasJH|talk]]) 13:03, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
::::Ok great, I'll leave it with you. Btw 'CTRL-F' and 'Gadaa' would have found it instantly (assuming you're on a PC) :) [[User:LastDodo|LastDodo]] ([[User talk:LastDodo|talk]]) 13:31, 6 July 2022 (UTC)


== Ethnic makeup of Menelik's government and forces ==
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Removal of 16th century Bermudes account from "His Reign as Emperor" as it is Offtopic, adds Bloat to the article, and infact belongs in its own article. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 05:16, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
:: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], before I revert your last edit under Menelik (addition of atrocity section) after 24 hours I want to discuss. The question that I did not get an answer from you is "Why do we need to include millions+mass killings+large scale slavery?". If your answer is for human right reason then I believe people murdered/enslaved 100 years, 500 years or even 1000 years ago should not make a difference for a person who is very much concerned about human right! The reason why 16th century Bermudes included is discussed in your talk page in detail here [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Otakrem#Menelik_Article] and in a nutshell it is included because using ‘millions’+’mass killings’+’large scale slavery’ is obviously to indicate worst & unique in the regions as well as in African history (which the secondary sources Bulcha, Kumsa & Gelete claimed in their writings). Based on Wikipedias rule which states articles should use impartial and neutral tone and should not be used for advocating (political, nationalism, creating resentment/hate followed by revenge attack between peoples, to tell the world we are good people but our neighbors are bad people.....so and so personal & group agendas/advocation) this claim needs to be balanced & compared with worst war in the region before it (16th century) just like World war 1 story mentioned multiple times in world war 2nd article. By the way I am still against the use of extreme tones in Menelik article and if the sentence written by Bermudes reference is removed then that sentence written by Bulcha, Kumsa & Gelete should be deleted as well. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 08:47, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] You have been warned on your behavior on wikipedia articles and talkpages, please go read the warnings provided to you on your personal Talkpages, you are violating Wikipedia Talkpage guidelines here as well.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 09:08, 26 August 2016 (UTC)


@[[User:Ozywikieditor|Ozywikieditor]] I don't believe this was a necessary addition to the page. And per Wikipedia rules this is on grounds for removal, as there is also a copy and paste on the [[Battle of Adwa]] page. The title says "Ethnic makeup of Menelik's government and forces" but only talks about the different ethnic and regional groups that served in the army of Adwa. Hence, this is not relevant to the page. Per [[WP:IRRELEVANT]] and [[WP:ANOTHER]] [[User:محرر البوق|محرر البوق]] ([[User talk:محرر البوق|talk]]) 23:02, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
== RfC on Menelik's "Reign as Emperor" split out ==
Menelik's Reign as Emperor needs to be split up based on the focus, examples: Wars, Atrocities, Developments, Private Life, etc? Please read the [[Menelik II]] "Reign as Emperor" and provide comments on how to improve this article section and article.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 21:44, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
* '''<s>Oppose</s>''' – The section titled "Reign as Emperor" is short enough; no need for a separate article until and unless it gets vastly expanded. However, glancing at the [[WP:WALL|walls of text]] on this talk page, you guys could probably write a few books. {{p}} — [[User:JFG|JFG]] <sup>[[User talk:JFG|talk]]</sup> 01:03, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
*: Thanks for your input, as for the wall of text, I'm glad it happened because it forced us to research for verifiable sources. I feel his "Reign as Emperor" should be split up into a few sections within the main article to capture all the happenings during his reign, which was alot if you read any biography on Menelik II. [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 02:43, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
*::Oh sorry, I thought you wanted to create a new article about his reign. Within this page, sure it could be split into subsections, I'll change my !vote.
* '''Support''' – OP suggests to split the "Reign as Emperor" section into subsections, not forking it out to a new page as I interpreted earlier. Also, it is not necessary to keep everything under a "Biography" section: the whole article is the subject's biography. I would suggest renaming the first section "Early life" and continuing from there at the same section level. Then, "Reign as Emperor" could have subsections as suggested. — [[User:JFG|JFG]] <sup>[[User talk:JFG|talk]]</sup> 05:00, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
*::Thanks for the support. So maybe reorganize his Biography as "Early Life", "Rise to Power", "Reign as Emperor - Subsections: Diplomacy, Wars, Atrocities, Developments, and so on. As it currently reads, it jumps from place to place and is packed with sidenote information(ie name dropping of generals,who they are related to whom by what reason..etc.) I just don't get an understanding of Menelik's Reign as Emperor from the way the article is written.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 22:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
* '''Oppose''' – All paragraphs under 'Reign us emperor' are interconnected and splitting them into various sections is not a good idea. Besides, most paragraphs are also very important & each also need new sections as well. For instance 1) Battle of Adwa 2)End of clan wars & end of raiding neighbours for resources 3) Abolition of Slavery 4) Ethnic make up Menelik's government 5)The great famine that killed 1/3 of people caused by Italians 6) The region before centralization. Instead of splitting reign as emperor into several related (all of them about politics) sections we can discuss and remove some repeated statements and shorten it i.e. if [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] creates an environment where we can work with an impartial tone, not taking any sides and carefully reviewing all opposing sources instead of him just bringing only that criminalizes Menelik. People need to get all kind of information from various sources and so far all the sources he is bringing is only that criminalizes Menelik, which by the way are questionable sources in my opinion and may not be used for exceptional claims, and I believe they need to be reviewed by administrators. Rule in Wikipedia says editors need to be impartial and need not to use articles for advocation (political and nationalism). — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 15:02, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
* '''Support''' as per OP, brought here by bot [[User:BlueSalix|BlueSalix]] ([[User talk:BlueSalix|talk]]) 23:41, 7 September 2016 (UTC)
::Thanks for your input [[User:BlueSalix|BlueSalix]] Would appreciate more editor(s) support in improving this article. I can start some of the New sections and copying over some of the section/subsection breakdowns.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 07:12, 8 September 2016 (UTC)
:::[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], adding sections & subsections requires a long discussion & consensus between various editors who have contributed in the article for the past 13 years. So far there are 62 editors watching the article [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Menelik_II&action=info#mw-pageinfo-watchers]. This kind of major change requires extensive discussion and not simply edited by one editor alone without presenting his proposal for review and discussion. It also requires impartiality and carefully reviewing sources from all sides. Most importantly discussing and trying to get consensus before adding any new section or subsection is required. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 12:48, 8 September 2016 (UTC)
::::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] Not necessarily, any Editors are permitted to add new sections especially if they have received Support from other Editors as has been done here. This is RfC has been sent out to all Editors, therefore just as the following Editors have provided their support. Also there is no Ownership of an Article by let alone 1 Editor or 62 Editors See [[Wikipedia:Ownership of articles]]. This RfC is a discussion between uninvolved Editors, you and I have been too involved in this article, therefore I requested an RfC.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 20:44, 8 September 2016 (UTC)
:::::: [[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], they may support adding sections but regarding to what sections should be added will be decided after discussion & consensus. If we can not reach consensus then we will request other editors/administrators intervention. Many administrators recommend to other editors "discuss first then edit". — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 12:39, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
::::::: [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] What do you think this RfC is for? It is being discussed here? If you are here to Discuss the Topic fine, if you are here tell me or anyone else how we are supposed to use Wikipedia Talkpage guidelines here, please kindly stop.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 22:24, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
*'''Oppose'''. Private life has already been spun off and that seems enough. I don't see the chronological distinction between the proposed sections reflected in the text as it is now. Adding an "atrocities" subsection when there is much more than that in the section would be a [[WP:NPOV]]-issue and be [[WP:BALASP|unbalanced]] when there are many things with equal importance highlighted in the section.---- [[User:Patar knight|Patar knight]] - <sup>[[User talk:Patar knight|chat]]</sup>/<sub>[[Special:Contributions/Patar knight|contributions]]</sub> 18:47, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
:::He was a Public figure and head of a government in which atrocities were committed. Well that's the problem is that his current Reign as Emperor has too many topics some jumping back and forth. It would read better if it was broken into subsections, timelines, etc. If there is a developments in his reign section, there should be a counter to that which would be "atrocities" which has been properly sourced with first hand accounts by people like Bulatovich, Donaldson, etc. As the article sits right now, its trying to reach [[WK:NPOV]] but in a cluttered way. As for the atrocities it isn't unbalanced nor is it insignificant as a major portion of his life was in war, slavery, etc. Only highlighting the positives of his biography and not showing the negatives makes the article Not NPOV but POV biased.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 21:41, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
::::I would support sub-sectioning out by chronology, but not by topic. The flow could probably be improved, but it would be hindered by moving different parts to atemporal locations based on topic. Wikipedia articles are meant to be summaries of the topic area, and the best way to do that for historical topics is usually chronological. It is in fact unbalanced to single out atrocities as a top-level subtopic when the entire section deals with topics like famine, the suppression of slavery, and the Treaty of Wuchale, etc. at similar or greater length than atrocities. Unless you can show that [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] on Menelik II consistently single out atrocities as one of the most important aspects of his reign, I won't support having a subsection on it per [[WP:UNDUE]]. ---- [[User:Patar knight|Patar knight]] - <sup>[[User talk:Patar knight|chat]]</sup>/<sub>[[Special:Contributions/Patar knight|contributions]]</sub> 08:11, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
:::::I recommend you read Bulatovich's account on Menelik's army [http://www.samizdat.com/entotto.html] [http://www.samizdat.com/armies.html] Actually if you scroll up in this talkpage there have been several links to atrocities committed under the reign of Menelik which was tied to other parts of his reign. Slavery was not suppressed in his reign other. Menelik personally owned tens of thousands of slaves. If you are going to have a section talking about Menelik's victories in his wars against Southern(Ethiopian) people, then it is quite relevant to talk about the atrocities and slavery associated with it without any apologetics or tokenism as the current article tries to do.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 08:46, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
:::::: As for slavery, even [[George Washington]] owned slaves and in his article it is not written as there was large scale slavery because of him/his policy as it is now written under Menelik. Slavery was system that was widely practised in all parts of Africa and was hard for many African states to abolish even by 1960s because of many uncontrolled/ungoverned areas and also fearing clan warlords whom if pushed harder to abolish this age-old practice carried out for 1000s of years could be a threat to centralisation, just like Southern states of America (slave owners) declared independence after northern slave free states pushed southerners to end slavery. There are sources written by neutral scholars as to how Menelik (whom his mother was also a servant/slave) prohibited slavery after mid 1890s by destroying notorious slave markets and issuing a harsh law to amputate slavers (as USA still continues to punish criminals by death while most Europeans now see that as inhuman). — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 14:18, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
::::::Interesting, but ultimately primary sources. The weight that Wikipedia gives to content should roughly match what ''secondary'' sources do. Even in the primary source, Bulatovich devotes a lot more space to non-atrocity events of Menelik's reign than to atrocities, so even if this was representative of the body of historical literature on Menelik, it still wouldn't justify having an entire subsection split off from the rest of the article. ---- [[User:Patar knight|Patar knight]] - <sup>[[User talk:Patar knight|chat]]</sup>/<sub>[[Special:Contributions/Patar knight|contributions]]</sub> 20:26, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
{{od}} Well by that same token, nor should there be a "Developments in his Reign" separate section either. As Development wasn't the biggest portion of his Biography either. And I recommended breaking his Reign as Emperor into subsections of which it would cover: diplomacy, atrocities/wars, development, alliances, etc. Bulatovich is but one source, I provided more than 8 sources which talk about the atrocities committed during his reign as emperor. If this article is just going to about Pro-Amhara(Abyssinian)biased version, then this article is POV.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 00:44, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
:It's prima facie absurd to assert that social, economic, technological, and civil developments during Menelik's reign are not a major part of the historical literature surrounding him. Unless there's something bizarrely lacking in Menelik historiography, those areas of development are ''consistently'' covered at length in biographies of any major ruler. Quickly going through the walls of text above this RFC by searching for "atrocities", it looks like your assertions that "atrocities" should get its own section derive from primary source accounts from Menelik II's contemporaries (which would constitute [[WP:OR]]) and a book from 1907 (which isn't a [[WP:RS|reliable source]]). You're going to have to do better than that. An example of what to aim for is the [[Haile Selassie#Wollo famine|sub-section on "Wollo famine" in the Haile Selassie]] page, which devotes attention to a specific, unflattering element of Selassie's reign, but has a multitude of sources that justify it having its own subsection. ---- [[User:Patar knight|Patar knight]] - <sup>[[User talk:Patar knight|chat]]</sup>/<sub>[[Special:Contributions/Patar knight|contributions]]</sub> 04:28, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
::You agreeing to completely Disregard and Censor the reliably sourced fact that more than 5 million People being Killed during his(Menelik II) Conquest of the Southern parts of modern Ethiopia are insignificant. I guess Black African Lives DO NOT MATTER to you or Wikipedia. By the way, [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] has been using Primary Sources to make his claims and litter this article and other Article with his Pro-Amhara(abyssinian) Bias all through out Wikipedia articles. If you are saying Primary Sources are completely unreliable then we will have to Delete Every Entry that EthiopianHabesha added based on primary sources [[Tigrayans]], [[Abyssinian people]], [[Tigrinyas]], [[Menelik II]], etc.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 05:16, 15 September 2016 (UTC)


== Emperor Menelik II ate pages of the Bible when he was sick, which also caused his death ==
:::Secondary Source From Page 35 of '''Nomads in the Shadows of Empires: Contests, Conflicts and Legacies on the ..by By Gufu Oba''' [https://books.google.com/books?id=dascAAAAQBAJ&pg=PA35&lpg=PA35&dq=Menelik%27s+atrocities&source=bl&ots=UW9ILaNwLx&sig=j7gLjeLp59Aegt3bNGkdwfi-pXE&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjD1s6W2pDPAhUM9WMKHSHCCL04ChDoAQhVMBA#v=onepage&q=Menelik%27s%20atrocities&f=false]
:::These Abyssinian Atrocities committed under Menelik's reign shall be presented in Wikipedia, unless you are trying to Censor this information?[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 06:09, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
::::[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]], first of all I do not have any Amhara ethnic group ancestry but I am a citizen of Ethiopia born from one of the 78 language speakers who is so much concerned about peace in my home country Ethiopia & I don't want the nation to go into stateless Somalia or like Rwanda Hutu tribe & Tutsi tribe hostility. That is if you must know my personal detail which should have not been the topic of our discussion. If we must mention ethnicgroups in this topic as you said 'Amhara' or 'Abyssinian' then it should also be noted that all the secondary sources you brought are written by Oromos (not that it matters but since you are mentioning ethnic groups either to blame people/tribes in general for ethnic nationalism purpose or for reason only known to you) who did not provide material evidences for what they claim but only came up with that figure based on 1 person Bulatovich comment whom included many factors as to why people died. I beleive your use of 5 million is regarding Oromo people (as widely circulated among ethnic Oromo nationalist), and I think editors need to know that Menelik only gave the top military leadership in the centeral government only to army commanders with full [[Oromo people|Oromo]] ethnic group blood (Gobana, Gebeyehu, Mekonene, Habtegyorgis) while no single Amhara or Tigre took this most important position in the centeral government while they served as regional generals commanded by these central army commanders; of these four top army commanders only 1 of them, Mekonene, has Amhara blood on his mother side while full Oromo blood in his father side. Menelik (himself half non-Amhara) even married his daughters mainly to Oromo generals knowing the descendants (with Half an Oromo ancestry) will takeover the nation he built after him based on how Kingdoms create union like [[United Kingdom]] & [[United Arab Emirates]]. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 13:29, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
{{od}} Your outright Bias against Oromo sources(especially if they are Experts in Anthropology or History) is your own personal Bias. Your name is "Ethiopian"HABESHA which means you identify as Habesha(Abyssinian) which throughout your edits, you have a clear Pro_Amhara(Abyssinian) Bias. Your POV edits have attempted to minimize or outright deflect the historical reality that Menelik and his armies committed atrocities not only on Oromos, but also other Southern ethnic groups. So your entire argument is, well they were Oromos...well so were the 5 million who were killed by Menelik and his armies.[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 13:46, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
:[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] what ever source says 100 or 1,000 killed he must provide dates when people killed, list of specific places they were killed and why they were killed and how they were killed in which I didnot get an answer to these questions either from our long discussions above in this talkpage or from all the sources you provided so far. Using a source who states million (that much exceptional claim) got killed by telling us but I don't know "how that much people died", "why that much people died", "I don't know on which specific dates (list of dates associated with number of deaths) they died" and "which specific villages/wars that much people died", and also a source that says I got no material evidences (mass graves) as well as no official written documents (copy of letter or Verbal exchange between military personnel) can be used to claim that exceptional claim or not (qualify [[WP:QS]] or [[WP:EXCEPTIONAL]]) we may ask other editors opinion. — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 15:19, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
::I already provided more than 8 Sources (Primary and Secondary). Your extra requirements are your own personal opinionated requirements. Your willful attempt at completely Ignoring the Sources I provided in the Above discussion is getting quite old. I only add what the Primary and Secondary Sources stated in Wikipedia. You are requesting for Original research to be done, well get off Wikipedia and do your own Original Research. As far as Wikipedia is concerned, the Primary and Secondary Sources (more than 8) provide the verifiable and reliable information to input into a topic called Atrocities. And I completely Reject your Assertion that "No Atrocities happened during Menelik's reign as Emperor". That defies logic, you can't Conquer and Subjugate a People if you don't Kill them especially with the weaponry that Menelik's army had and mission to Conquer the land regardless of what people lived there. And it is very important that this topic is covered in his Article because the span of time is 1880s - 1913 (in terms of atrocities, slavery).[[User:Otakrem|Otakrem]] ([[User talk:Otakrem|talk]]) 03:05, 16 September 2016 (UTC)


There's a widely-circulated factoid that this guy ate pages of the Bible whenever he fell ill because he believed Bible pages to have special healing abilities if ingested, and that he died as a result of eating the entire book of Kings. This Wikipedia article about him doesn't mention that at all, and no one has discussed the topic here, so I'll just submit that if anyone can verify that factoid- that Menelik II ate Bible pages, and died from eating the entire book of Kings- it should most definitely be added to this article about him. Just a suggestion. [[Special:Contributions/50.249.29.169|50.249.29.169]] ([[User talk:50.249.29.169|talk]]) 05:50, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
* <small>(from [[wp:FRC]])</small> '''support''' the general ideia, as explained by [[User:JFG]] early on. That is, there is no need for a "biography" section, as the article is the biography. So every sub-section in there should be promoted one level. The "Reign as Emperor" section is quite large - naturally - so it would be better split in a few main sections. Looking only at the top-level I would try something along the lines of: Early Life (the current intro of Biography); King of Shewa; Emperor of Ethiopia (with the [//en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Menelik_II&oldid=740314621 current] "succession" section); most of the sections from "Centralisation" to "Developments" with possibly a reorganisation; Private Life (could be next to Early Life too); Death and Succecion. I have only skimed through the article, nut one issue that may result in some subjects coming up on more than one section may be that the organization sometimes looks to be by topic, sometimes chronological, using one and the main organisation guide could help. As a quick comparisom, I like the structure on [[Hitler]], mostly chronological, with a few section on the end about transversal personal traits. I like less [[Barak Obama]]'s, which as almost the same problem as this one, with one overwhelming section (presidency) that coulld be split. Good luck. Enjoy! - [[User:Nabla|Nabla]] ([[User talk:Nabla|talk]]) 17:33, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
:: Adjusted sections based on your opinion — [[User:EthiopianHabesha|EthiopianHabesha]] ([[User talk:EthiopianHabesha|talk]]) 16:50, 25 September 2016 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 05:50, 14 May 2024

The image that says "Menelik's campaigns (1879-1889)" is falsified.

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Hi, The image that says "Menelik's campaigns (1879-1889)" is falsified. There was no Gondar province that extends to Welkait before 1930. It is misleading. The expansion for Gonder province (i.e. Begemder province) happened on 1941. [1][2][3]

I am going to remove the map since it is misleading, and it appears to be added for the purpose of current day land politics (which is killing people). Lets only share facts please. Best regards, Truth gate keeper (talk) 15:13, 4 March 2019 (UTC)Truth gate keeper Truth gate keeper[reply]

References

  1. ^ Bereket Habte Selassie, "Constitutional Development in Ethiopia", Journal of African Law, 10 (1966), p. 79.
  2. ^ "Sarah Vaughan, "Ethnicity and Power in Ethiopia", PhD dissertation, p. 123, 2003" (PDF).
  3. ^ Bahru Zewde, A History of Modern Ethiopia (London: James Currey, 1991), p. 86.

'Centralisation' Section

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I'd recommend someone completely revise the 'Centralisation' center of this page. It has very evident biases, does not give proper context to events [references the last major war in Ethiopia as having been in the 16th century... and says tactics hadn't much changed from there??? This is incorrect, see 'Zemene Mesafint'. This period of constant warfare undeniably brought many changes to Ethiopia which should be explored in more depth. It also depicts Ethiopian wars as much more petty than they actually were. True geo-political motives are not mentioned or considered and should be, otherwise this falls largely into the trope of pointless 'tribal wars'. While on an individual level, conflict may have been about gaining trophies, ritual requirements, and looting goods - there was an undeniable other reason for warfare: political incentives, desire of certain trade routes, power, etc. 'Lords' were often driven by these desires - economic, geopolitical, etc. — Preceding unsigned comment added by HiddenHistoryPedia (talkcontribs) 23:29, 28 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Aanolee massacre

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There is an editorial dispute about the 1886 Aanolee massacre. If you disagree with the sourcing and text in this version, which seems to be identical to the version prior to the edit war, then please explain what is wrong with the sources. Two alternative sources that have been suggested include zahabesha and Borkena (federal government news media). If these sources are serious enough, then WP:NPOV might be justified. Boud (talk) 01:08, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The references are not the easiest to use.

WP:NPOV-ing the current text (not deleting it) may be justified, but others should look through the sources, and maybe find better sources. The Abbas Gnamo book seems the most serious, as the only academic source. Boud (talk) 02:43, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Abbas Gnamo says that his book was "based on extensive research undertaken over two decades" and that "the review process and the preparation of the final text took more one and half years." He claims that he "examined all the available sources in Ethiopian languages, foreign languages (including French and Italian) published and unpublished academic sources, theoretical works, and above all, oral data collected over a long period of time in Arsi-Bale regions from Amhara and Oromo informants." Boud (talk) 02:51, 17 October 2021 (UTC) The second part of the interview with Abbas Gnamo includes a discussion of the Aanolee massacre/mass mutilation and the claims of whether it happened or not, stating that the event "is deeply entrenched in the collective memory of the Arsi Oromo and Oromos everywhere. Some of the survivors lived with the mutilated right hands until the 1950s and 60s. One example which captured my imagination was an Oromo elder who lived with a militated right hand among the Jaawwii clan and who always showed his mutilated hand to the public, and explained how he lost his precious hand in defending their dignity and land." A 16-year-old in 1886 would have been 80 in 1950, and 90 in 1960. Boud (talk) 03:03, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I added one more reference to a paper by Gnamo Abbas.[1] This is not small stuff; the man obtained his PhD at Sorbonne in Paris! Thank you, Boud for pointing to his interview also. We'll soon have enough materials to write a separate article in addition on the Aanolee massacre; it would be good if somebody could access the corresponding entry in the Encyclopaedia Aethiopica, Institut f. Afrikanistik und Athiopistik, Universitat Hamburg, Germany, 2004. And, I would suggest to Mooproop1: better to face it, so many countries need to face their past. Rastakwere (talk) 15:19, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Aanollee

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This is a fake massacre made up by tplf so stop putting it here. Zehabesha and Bokerna are much more reputable than the oromo.com websites you've provided. Menelik saved oromo from colonisation and had a wife and was christan. stop spreading lies. just because oromo region talks about these lies doesnt make them real. they haven't provided any "scientific evidence". it is just a lie to divide the country. i've cited many source proving that. stop spreading lies — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mooproop1 (talkcontribs) 03:42, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

WOLKAIT IS ALWAYS AMHARA GODNAR

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Oh yeah and by the way the picture is not falsified. Tigray just stole the land in 1991. Just becaus every single map shows what you don't want it to doesn't make it falsified. It is the map of gondar and welqait was a part of gondar. Deal with it — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mooproop1 (talkcontribs) 03:50, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Aanollee

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This guy just uses pro oromo websites and all this stuff like oromopride.com this isn't reputable. Many oromo doctors have debunked this myth in my sources. Stop changing and go do something else instead of spreading hate. I've seen your other edits. Just anti amhara stuff. Go do something else or go watch ur tigrai media house stop spreading fake news — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mooproop1 (talkcontribs) 15:43, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Mooproop1: Please read WP:AGF. Wikipedians have patience, but not infinite patience. Understanding and following WP:AGF is one of the fundamental requirements for editing Wikipedia content. Boud (talk) 19:22, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Why not just lock meneliks wikipedia account? these people keep editing and putting bias sources just let it be the way it was before. why do they get to keep switching it and I can't? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mooproop1 (talkcontribs) 01:24, 19 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The reason why others are conserving the status quo of the article is that you have not (yet) engaged fully in the discussion and do not seem to have understood the principles and methods of editing Wikipedia, such as signing with ~~~~, using indenting, and WP:AGF and WP:VERIFIABILITY. You should also use the preview button to check the meaning of what you have typed on a talk page before hitting the save button. People make mistakes, but if you make so many mistakes that others have to guess what you're trying to say, then it's difficult to converge on a decision; for example, you wrote meneliks wikipedia account when what you meant was the Menelik II Wikipedia article.
If you read Talk:Menelik II#Aanolee massacre, then you will see the current state of discussion about the sources. You are welcome to participate in the discussion, but you have to focus on the discussion and present your arguments about the sources clearly, in a structured rational way, seeking editorial consensus based on sources and respect for other editors, and making an effort to understand and discuss the sources themselves. You cannot expect others to do all the work in guessing what you are trying to say. Please read the links (typically shown in blue, but this may depend on your browser) that you have been shown by myself and others. Boud (talk) 05:54, 19 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gadaa conquests

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I'm not sure how relevant this bit on 16th century Ethiopia is to an article about a late 19th century Emperor, but regardless by real problem is that this term is not explained. Gadaa links to an article about a system of government, so it is not clear what is meant by 'Gadaa conquests'. It is like referring to 'democratic conquests' without even saying who the democrats are. LastDodo (talk) 10:03, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@LastDodo: It's not relevant to this article, but Oromo nationalists are promoting Gadaa as a idignous form of ‘‘democratic system’’, someone needs to take a good look at Gadaa article for WP:NPOV. Gadaa conquest only means that the Gadaa system divides Oromos in age classes, and Oromos falling into the warrior age classes are supposed to conquer and kill enemies. It's a barbaric system if you ask me. YonasJH (talk) 10:12, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not here to take a position on a contentious issue, but if you understand the meaning of the term and the history, it would be good of you to bring some clarity to that section of the article. Most people outside Ethiopia will have no understanding of what it means at present. LastDodo (talk) 11:15, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@LastDodo: Yes maybe it's should be a subsection background in the centralisation section, but i don't see the need for it to go all the way back to the 16th century, it's kind of crazy if you ask me. I'll work on it when i have more time, and some other editor can help. Thank you for pointing it out, i had to read the whole article to find it. It looks out of place in this article. YonasJH (talk) 13:03, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Ok great, I'll leave it with you. Btw 'CTRL-F' and 'Gadaa' would have found it instantly (assuming you're on a PC) :) LastDodo (talk) 13:31, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Ethnic makeup of Menelik's government and forces

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@Ozywikieditor I don't believe this was a necessary addition to the page. And per Wikipedia rules this is on grounds for removal, as there is also a copy and paste on the Battle of Adwa page. The title says "Ethnic makeup of Menelik's government and forces" but only talks about the different ethnic and regional groups that served in the army of Adwa. Hence, this is not relevant to the page. Per WP:IRRELEVANT and WP:ANOTHER محرر البوق (talk) 23:02, 8 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Emperor Menelik II ate pages of the Bible when he was sick, which also caused his death

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There's a widely-circulated factoid that this guy ate pages of the Bible whenever he fell ill because he believed Bible pages to have special healing abilities if ingested, and that he died as a result of eating the entire book of Kings. This Wikipedia article about him doesn't mention that at all, and no one has discussed the topic here, so I'll just submit that if anyone can verify that factoid- that Menelik II ate Bible pages, and died from eating the entire book of Kings- it should most definitely be added to this article about him. Just a suggestion. 50.249.29.169 (talk) 05:50, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]