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==Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment==
[[File:Sciences humaines.svg|40px]] This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between <span class="mw-formatted-date" title="2020-08-25">25 August 2020</span> and <span class="mw-formatted-date" title="2020-12-04">4 December 2020</span>. Further details are available [[Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/University_of_Massachusetts/Sport_Analytics_(Fall_2020)|on the course page]]. Student editor(s): [[User:MJT027|MJT027]], [[User:Gagasantos|Gagasantos]].

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==Peer Review (Alex DaSilva)==
The article thus far has good historical content for the title term, Expected Goals, but I would suggest a couple things. First, I would suggest dividing the article into sections, one of which would be the origin of the term as well as its application to soccer and hockey. Another section I would say to create is a calculation section in which formulas for expected goals are derived. Following this, a content box should be created with a more developed lead section at the beginning of the article. As for the current content, I would recommend using shorter quotations and/or summarize what data scientists have stated rather than actually quoting them. I also believe wikipedia frowns upon hyperlinks to outside sources, which you have for the Sarah Rudd paragraph. Then of course, add some images to finish up.
[[User:Alexdasilva47|Alexdasilva47]] ([[User talk:Alexdasilva47|talk]]) 13:29, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
:{{ping|Alexdasilva47}} Hi Alex, I think your points are largely correct. I've also added two equals signs to either side of your title to create a new section, just so you know how to do that next time. [[User:Alyo|<span style="font-variant:small-caps">Alyo</span>]] ''([[User talk:Alyo|<b style="font-family:courier; font-size:small">chat</b>]]·[[Special:Contributions/Alyo|<b style="font-family:courier; font-size:small">edits</b>]])'' 15:23, 9 November 2020 (UTC)

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 August 2020 and 4 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): MJT027, Gagasantos.

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Peer Review (Alex DaSilva)

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The article thus far has good historical content for the title term, Expected Goals, but I would suggest a couple things. First, I would suggest dividing the article into sections, one of which would be the origin of the term as well as its application to soccer and hockey. Another section I would say to create is a calculation section in which formulas for expected goals are derived. Following this, a content box should be created with a more developed lead section at the beginning of the article. As for the current content, I would recommend using shorter quotations and/or summarize what data scientists have stated rather than actually quoting them. I also believe wikipedia frowns upon hyperlinks to outside sources, which you have for the Sarah Rudd paragraph. Then of course, add some images to finish up. Alexdasilva47 (talk) 13:29, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Alexdasilva47: Hi Alex, I think your points are largely correct. I've also added two equals signs to either side of your title to create a new section, just so you know how to do that next time. Alyo (chat·edits) 15:23, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]