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== Open Letter == |
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== New edits to controversy section == |
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The edit is certainly better, since the language is now neutral, but I think it's still misleading to say "Roach stated in a letter..." because it suggests to the reader that Roach is the only one who holds this opinion, despite the fact that the event being referred to is mentioned in numerous articles, and that the letter was published by Diamond Mountain, not by Roach on his personal web site. If you must qualify this, you should say "In a letter published by Diamond Mountain, Roach stated that...." But I think this is unnecessary and misleading, since the fact that they were ejected from DM for violating DM policy is not disputed. In general, you say "so and so says" because you are trying to make it clear that it is a minority position. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 17:53, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::If there is something that you think the article should say, you should say it. Do bear in mind though that in none of the source material does anyone assert that Geshe Michael and Christie McNally were not qualified to do this practice. Lama Surya Das says he's skeptical, but he doesn't claim to have any actual knowledge on the topic. Robert Thurman doesn't say what he thinks: he talks about the reaction he's observed in others. The reason that nobody says what they think, of course, is that the lineage does not require any test other than that the practitioner receive permission to practice from his or her root lama; in this case that would have been Geshe Lobsang Tharchin. So what Robert Thurman thinks, or what Lama Surya Das thinks, does not matter, and they know that, and are careful to avoid saying anything that would imply otherwise, even when pressed by a New York Times reporter. But if you have some additional information to add—a reliable source that says that it's not up to the root lama to determine whether or not a disciple is qualified to do the practice, or a reliable source that says that Geshe Lobsang Tharchin did not give his permission, then you should cite that source and make whatever statement it is that you want to make plainly, rather than trying to imply something that your source material doesn't support. |
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:You have gauged my intentions incorrectly. Let's assume you asked, and so here's my answer: my intention is to use a primary source in the correct way. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 17:58, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::I've read that admonition too, but it's neither in [[WP:PRIMARY]] or [[WP:SELFPUB]], and I don't remember where I saw it. I'm pretty sure it didn't apply to the situation we are discussing. You are essentially arguing that some policy you haven't cited means that we have to say something misleading because that's the policy. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:31, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::I'm tempted to delete the whole sentence, actually. Pay close attention to SELFPUB: a self-published source may be used if ... it does not involve claims about third parties... My construction of the sentence is meant to approximate adherence to that condition by ''at a minimum'' making clear that it is an assertion of a self-published source (as against including a sentence that states [after careful consideration blah blah] authoritatively in Wikipedia's voice that a third party VIOLATED THE TERMS etc etc). I trust things are now clear. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 21:17, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Roach asserts that violence is a violation of the agreement students make when they are permitted to stay at the center. This is not an assertion about a third party: it is an assertion about the rules of Diamond Mountain which, as a member of the board, Roach is well qualified to speak to. The actual violation that occurred has been reported in numerous reliable sources, some of which are cited here, and has even been admitted to by the perpetrator of the violence, in a [[WP:SPS]] that we can't refer to here. |
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::::Of course, one might follow your line of reasoning a little further and inquire as to why we are even ''speaking'' of a third party on a BLP, regarding events in which the subject of the BLP was only tangentially involved. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 23:41, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::The sentence in our article makes a claim about a third party. It really couldn't be clearer. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 06:17, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::The sentence in our article reports a documented fact about a third party, which is substantiated by reliable sources. So yes, it couldn't be clearer, but not in the way you suggest. The entire paragraph has been added on very flimsy basis, and if you insist that it be here, it needs to explain the situation accurately and in neutral language. Your edit is not neutral—it implies that there is some question as to the veracity of Roach's statement. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 14:02, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::Since you're evidently familiar with SYNTH, the following point should be accessible. While reliable sources document that there was a violent altercation, the only source for VIOLATED THE TERMS etc. is Roach's letter. I disagree that the sentence as constructed implies doubt about veracity -- it merely attributes, and the only intention is to attribute. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 14:20, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::I guess my main objection to it is that it's unnecessarily wordy. If you really think it's important to phrase it this way, I won't continue arguing with you about it. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:21, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Hm, I just noticed that you didn't add the text saying that Diamond Mountain published Roach's letter. Do you disagree with that suggestion? It seems to me that if you want to be really clear about who said what, you ought to include it—the fact that DM published the letter seems relevant, since it's talking about DM policy. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:39, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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== Please correct [[WP:BLPSPS]] violation. == |
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::Again, of course, I question why the deep interest in this question, when this spiritual partnership is far from the most interesting thing Geshe Michael has done in his life so far. Indeed, I would argue, far from the most controversial. |
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::BTW, I think the edits in general were good. Citing Christie's current partner as the cause for the breakup seems unwarranted; if you really think that belongs there, it would be nice if you could explain why. (By "you" here I mean [[User:Tao2911]] and [[User:Sylvain1972]] of course). I think it's worth noting that His Holiness' book actually disparages the use of the term "sexual intercourse" to describe the karmamudra practice, although he also uses it several times to describe the practice. I added "a yogic practice involving.." to make it clear that the karma mudra practice is not simply two people having sex. Otherwise, while I think that this section still goes into more detail than is warranted, it's much improved. |
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I'm requesting that an editor who has not been accused of COI revert [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Michael_Roach&diff=504114586&oldid=504080095 this edit], which is in violation of the Wikipedia policy for using a self-published source in a BLP ([[WP:BLPSPS]]). [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 03:05, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:Done. Vritti can make a case for restoration if desired, but I agree that it's SPS. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 06:14, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::He's already made a case on your talk page, for some reason, which is valid—I don't see any reason to dispute that source. However, the other reason for reverting this edit, which I didn't mention because SPS seemed like enough of a reason, is that Gyatso is talking about married monks living openly with their wives, which while certainly related to the case being discussed here, is not the same as the case being discussed here, and hence requires [[WP:SYNTHESIS]] to make the connection. I've been unable to locate any details on why these monks are married and living with their wives—perhaps the situation is exactly the same as the situation with Roach, but we have no way of knowing that, and at least in one sense the situation is different, since the fact of Roach and McNally's legal marriage is what's being discussed here, and that was not revealed until someone went through the records and found it, so while certainly Roach and McNally didn't try to hide the existence of a relationship after 2003, neither did they openly go about saying that they were married. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 14:09, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::If Gyatso is talking about married monks living openly with their wives, then I'm not persuaded that there's any synth involved here, given that it seems that Roach and McNally were in fact married. I don't have a strong feeling about it, though -- perhaps Vritti will shed more light. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 14:18, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::I don't really see the synth or stretch since the word married is being used the same way in both the existing paragraph and in the interview with the Dalai Lama. Even though the marriage was kept secret until 2003 they were still married and remained so until 2010. I believe the brief opinion of the DL clearly reflects the view of the Gelugpas and is important as Michael Roach was ordained as a Gelugpa monk. I'll put the words back in with the proper source to remove the BLPSPS issue. If this is still a problem, please discuss here and I will try to understand the issue I fail to see at the moment. [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 15:03, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::I can make a guess as to what [[User:Vritti]]'s response will be, but I suppose we should let him do that. In any case, if we ''are'' going to keep this text, I suggest removing the quote from the New York Times about it being a stark violation of the tradition, since it's essentially saying the same thing, but isn't attributed to a specific person who'd be qualified to make such a statement. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:21, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::Sorry, for some reason I read both paragraphs above as being from [[User:Nomoskedasticity]]—didn't mean to imply anything by not responding to [[User:Vritti]]. The reason I claim this is synthesis is that we don't know why the Columbian monks are married. Are they also claiming to be qualified to practice with a karma mudra? The article doesn't say. So by conflating the two situations, we are synthesizing the assumption that the Columbian monks are practicing with karma mudras, which are covered by the quote from ''How to Practice'', and excluding the possibility that these monks are not qualified to do ''karma mudra'' practice, and that that is why Gyatso has spoken of them as he has. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:43, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::I've removed the "stark violation" reference as per Abhayakara. If another editor feels this was rash, please discuss here. As for the claimed synthesis, I don't understand this argument. The reference says married and means married as found in any dictionary. Karma mudra is a different word with a different meaning not in the reference. One required qualification for a monastic to do karma mudra practice while maintaining precepts was revealed yesterday. When we have a reliable source that states Michael Roach is transmuting human excrement into ambrosia or turning bricks into gold or physically flying in the air, etc., then this should be added to the article at that time. [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 16:09, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::I've read that section of the book too. I didn't include that in the article because it seems inappropriate to be talking about excrement in a BLP. The talk about miracles must be taken either as hyperbolic, for those who do not believe in miracles, or as literal, for those who do. In the former case, the statement doesn't make much sense—why would Gyatso refer to something that was impossible as a basis for being permitted to do a practice he is clearly stating is permitted in some cases. In the latter case, I don't know what the wikipedia guideline would be—do we assume that Roach is telling the truth when he says he's qualified to do the practice, or assume he is not telling the truth? I don't think we're allowed to say either way. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 16:36, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::[[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]), I believe it was you who added the book by the Dalai Lama to the article. You clearly pointed out the "exception" to the monastic restrictions but you failed to include the conditions or single example of action required to uphold the exception. Some historical examples include, tying a knot in a yak's horn, reattaching a severed head without injury, being cremated and regaining the body, etc.. The office of the Dalai Lama and others have already communicated to Michael Roach that he must performs miracles and actions like the Siddhas of old to prove his claims of being qualified to perform karma mudra. To my knowledge there is no evidence he has accomplished this. If and when there is it can be added to the article. There is no argument that he legally married. The Dalai Lama's words puts the marriage aspect in perspective. In other words, I do understand your argument but find it baseless. If you want to continue this line of debate I would prefer not to be involved. I would however be inclined to examine the claims made by Michael Roach regarding his self purported realizations and spiritual accomplishments. The Vinaya vows of a monk by the way, restricts them from making any such claims. If they do, they are asked to prove these claims which explains the various requests by Lamas for Michael Roach to perform suitable miraculous manifestations and actions. [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 17:34, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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== What are we trying to accomplish here anyway? == |
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::I was interested to note that both this discussion page and the main article disappeared from my watchlist sometime in the past two days. Probably some kind of bug in mediawiki... [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 03:47, 16 July 2011 (UTC) |
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I think maybe it's worth revisiting what we are trying to accomplish here. I'm going to tackle this from the perspective of Wikipedia, not from the perspective of our various POVs or whatever. Wikipedia editors are supposed to take what the literature on a topic says and condense it into an encyclopedia article which is neutral and accurate to the sources. I think we ought to be able to use our knowledge of the subject to figure out where to go to find sources, and how to summarize what the sources say. But there is a danger in this: if we know the subject intimately, we start to put our own opinions into the article, rather than accurately representing what the sources say. |
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::Oh, [[User:Tao2911]], it's news to me that the karmamudra practice is not supposed to be romantic. It is of course a secret practice, so it's not surprising that I am so uninformed. Perhaps you have a source to cite? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 03:52, 16 July 2011 (UTC) |
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So to bring this back to the discussion at hand, we are talking about what to say about Roach's partner practice with McNally. This is a religious topic, so we have the additional morass of belief to sort through. We mustn't choose to say which beliefs are valid or correct—all we should do is to report what the sources say. Roach says he believes he is qualified to do the practice. Thurman says he finds this claim incredible. Gyatso says nothing specific at all about Roach. |
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Yeah - Michael Roach. He talks about how their relationship became colored with typical American romantic realtionship programing, and that this was not in keeping with the spirit of karmamudra. The high school bit, etc. Reread the interview, with any devotional goggles removed. Also discussed pointedly is the end of their relationship due not to some enlightened, clean, mutual agreement, but because she left him for their attendant. This is significant to the casual reader - ie me. To fail to mention that, when it is discussed clearly in the source for most of the events being detailed, is a gross oversight, and smacks of biased POV. I read this page, thought it was waaay too positive and hagiographic, encountered the controversy bit, read the actual sources, and had that assessment further confirmed.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 04:44, 16 July 2011 (UTC) |
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So let's take an example that I think none of us have a personal stake in, and think about how we'd write about it. Imagine for a moment that we are writing about a well-known Catholic who's an alcoholic, and who claims to be sober for ten years. Yet this Catholic has been seen taking communion faithfully every Sunday morning. Parishioners have reported that this person takes a healthy drink of the sacramental wine as it is passed to him. Questions are raised: is this person lying? |
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:You seem to be stipulating that it wasn't a standard romantic relationship: that Geshe Michael saw the tendency to think of it that way as a problem, not status quo. If it was not a romantic relationship, what's the proper sort of ending for it? Do you have some source material that says that all such relationships continue indefinitely? Or that there is some proper way that they should end, which was not honored here? What would be a "cleaner" ending than that the two Lamas continued to teach side-by-side after the "breakup"? "Waaaay to positive and hagiographic" seems like POV to me; if in fact there is something negative that needs to be said, can you articulate it clearly and cite a source that supports your point, so that we can add it? All I see here at the moment is innuendo. |
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Of course, we would never have this discussion. It is an element of faith in Catholicism that the sacramental wine is transformed by the priest's blessing into the blood of Christ. It isn't wine that we're pretending is the blood of Christ. It's actually the blood of Christ. At the same time, if you ask recovering alcoholics about this, they will often say that because taking the host alone still counts as taking the holy sacrament, there is no need to drink the sacramental wine, and that to do so is playing with fire. |
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:The gossip column claims that the new relationship was what caused the end of the old relationship; however, to the extent that the article offers any facts to support this assertion, the only facts it offers are that the one relationship ended, and that the other one started. No details about the timing of these events are on offer, which suggests to me that the author was not privy to such details. So I don't think that your citation really justifies the statement that "she left him for her attendant," with all that implies. Aside from this point, your edit seems fine. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 21:28, 16 July 2011 (UTC) |
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But here we have a recovering alcoholic who is taking both elements of the holy sacrament. Are we, as wikipedians, entitled to question his assertion that he is drinking the blood of Christ, and therefore not drinking wine? Clearly we are not. If someone else asserts that he is drinking wine, and not the blood of Christ, is it our duty as wikipedians to report this? Is it even appropriate to report this? |
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I have zero desire to get into "general discussions" (against WP guidelines) of what you think romance is or isn't. Your bias is crystal clear. I don't have one here. I have no opinion about this guy whatsoever. I don't need to. We go by ''sources'' here. The section is on "controversy", as the header states. The article is in fact called "Monk-y Business: Controversial NYC guru Michael Roach", for heaven's sake. The quote is as follows: ''"Last summer Christie left Geshe Michael for another man. Ian Thorson, a young student who had once served as the couple's attendant...had come between them.''...the couple's spiritual partnership came to a dramatic end. Now both Geshe Michael and his followers are devastated and questioning what, and whom, they believe in. "It's chaos" says Erin." It goes on. And on. |
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So to bring this back to Roach, he is saying that he is qualified. Does he mean that he can transform the atoms of meat, alcohol or feces into some other substance? I don't know, and it does seem incredible. Assuming that such a miracle were possible, what would we see if we watched him do it? Would we see the unclean substances miraculously turn into something pure? Or would we see him eating these substances in their impure form? Does "transform the substances" even mean that the atoms change, or is it just a matter of him experiencing the substances as if they were different? I don't think the answer actually matters, since we couldn't use this experience in our wikipedia article, but the point is that assertions that Roach is not qualified haven't been made. Questions have been raised as to whether he is qualified. I don't think it's even appropriate in a wikipedia article to report on these questions, because they are essentially speculation and matters of opinion, not matters of fact. No Buddhist tribunal has rendered a judgment on Roach in particular. The Dalai Lama's words on the topic in ''How to Practice'' are informative, but can't be used to decide either way. |
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You can feel whatever you choose to feel about this. But it is a major newspaper article. They were not sued. Roach participated, and his statements support all the allegations in the article. There were no retractions. I see no reason to question this source, or in particular this assertion, which is presented with absolute NPOV in the entry. Do not remove it again, or you face accusations of edit warring, and administrative sanction.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 21:51, 16 July 2011 (UTC) |
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::I agree that the present version is quite mild and NPOV. I am satisfied with it.[[User:Sylvain1972|Sylvain1972]] ([[User talk:Sylvain1972|talk]]) 15:55, 18 July 2011 (UTC) |
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On the question of his legal marriage to McNally, he provides an explanation for why it was done. They have not acted publicly like a married couple—I've never seen them embrace, or kiss, or do more than hold hands—itself somewhat scandalous for a monk, but certainly not grounds for an accusation of a downfall. We don't have pictures of them doing so, and we don't have reports of them doing so in any reliable sources. So the marriage question is really separate from the practice question, for which we do have reliable sources, including Roach. |
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:Coolness.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 21:17, 18 July 2011 (UTC) |
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Suppose a monk were to legally marry a woman, so as to have legal access to her insurance, or her to his, or so as to ensure that she would inherit his property, and they were ''not'' engaging in any karma mudra practice together, and did not openly act like a married couple. Would ''that'' qualify as a downfall? If so, why? Does the quote Vritti offered from Gyatso support such a contention, or not? I think it's a judgment call, and so we can't report on it: to do so would be [[WP:SYNTHESIS]]. |
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The article might want to include the newspaper articles about Michael Roach suggesting that people should look beautiful and dress up, and his hitting the clubs as not seeming to make sense. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/67.180.147.58|67.180.147.58]] ([[User talk:67.180.147.58|talk]]) 15:15, 4 December 2011 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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This is why I keep harping on all the gossipy stuff that keeps getting added to this article. It's not improving the article. This article isn't a place for determining whether Roach is a good guy or a bad guy—it's a place for reporting on what we know about him. We honestly don't know whether he's qualified to do the practice, and we don't know whether he's still got his monk's vows, or whether he's committed a downfall. And so we shouldn't say. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 17:55, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:if you have useful content from valid sources you would like to include, go for it. But this doesn't sound like you have neutral information you wish add; just more of an axe to grind.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 17:51, 5 December 2011 (UTC) |
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:I would like to begin with a plea to other editors to consider weighing in here with their thoughts. For myself, I am attempting to edit this article with an emphasis on NPOV so that anyone reading this article can understand what is being presented and make up their own minds as to what it may mean to them. If the article is well done, the reader can find most everything they need to know about the particular subject without further reference or study. For the record, I'm not a Buddhist of any stripe, robe, tradition or practice. I could not care less about what the subject of this article has done or hasn't done. Abhayakara's long arguments on this talk page often invoke in me a sense of disturbing cognitive dissonance. For example, he writes, "Roach says he believes he is qualified to do the practice. Thurman says he finds this claim incredible. Gyatso says nothing specific at all about Roach." ... You are correct that Gyatso, (AKA) the Dalai Lama doesn't mention Michael Roach by name. The Dalai Lama is the leader and spiritual head of the Gelugpa sect. He is the foremost authority regarding all aspects of Gelugpa tradition and practice. The Gelugpa sect is very strict in its observation and implementation of the Vinaya (rules) for its monastic community of monks and nuns. |
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## Vritti: You are abso fucking lutely WRONG about the Dalai Lama being "the leader and spiritual head of the Gelugpa sect." You have been pwned by facts. Ask the [[Ganden Tripa]] if you don't believe me. |
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Someone added a bunch of text about the recent tragedy at Diamond Mountain. I think if there is some way that this can be written so that it is relevant biographical information about Geshe Michael, then it would make sense to include it here, but otherwise it belongs in a biography page about Ian or about Christie. I suggest that the authors write a bio page for Ian or Christie if they feel this is something that needs to be documented in Wikipedia. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 23:40, 7 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:wrong. He is the head of Diamond Mountain. McNally is solely authorized by him (and importantly by absolutely no one else), she and Thorson are/were officially his students, and all these events occurred at his "university". It all follows on the heels of reports (discussed in the entry) of their "partnership", and her leaving him for Thorson. Also, Roach issued a lengthy and highly controversial message about these events. He is the central pivot around whom these events turn. It is perfectly applicable.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 15:08, 8 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::I understand that the previous paragraph feels incomplete without some update as to what happened to Ian, but you will recall that I did not agree that it was appropriate to include that text in the first place, and I still don't. Be that as it may, the text you have now re-added does not suit the purpose you describe. If these events are Geshe Michael's doing, you need to show that, or else it's not relevant to his biography. Your current text clearly states that this is something that Ian and Christie chose to do. If you don't think that's the case, why did you say it is the case? If you do think it's the case, then this text belongs in Christie's or Ian's biography, perhaps with a reference here. If you must mention these events here, please seriously rethink your approach so that what you write is germane to *this* article. [[Special:Contributions/173.162.214.218|173.162.214.218]] ([[User talk:173.162.214.218|talk]]) 19:59, 8 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Argh. Sorry, the above edit and also the recent edit to the main article were done by me, but I didn't notice I wasn't logged in. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 20:00, 8 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Enter Michael Roach ordained as a Gelugpa monk. Since the entire "controversy" in this article revolves around the behavior of Michael Roach as an ordained monk, I think you are arguing and wiki-lawyering a very minority view that what the Dalai Lama says about Gelugpa monks and monastics somehow, has nothing to do with Michael Roach. The remarks of the Dalai Lama are in no way gossip as they reflect the view of the Gelugpa sangha of monks and nuns. It is clear that Michael Roach looks at things differently, but this is his minority view which he shares with very few. At the moment the article now includes exceedingly credible testimony on how the Gelugpas view monastic conduct and how Michael Roach views it. Let the reader decide what to think about this "controversy", the whole point in bringing this subject to NPOV. [[Special:Contributions/201.191.195.82|201.191.195.82]] ([[User talk:201.191.195.82|talk]]) 21:16, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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Look, you clearly have a bias here. I'd suggest you review guidelines about editing on pages where you have a clear POV ([[wp:npov]]). For instance, your suggestion to create a new page is classic [[content forking]]. I suspect you are a follower of the subject in which case it is suggested you not edit on this page at all. Given your bias, I make this case here for others, as I suspect you will argue against the inclusion of this material no matter what - given that you would remove the totally NPOV material about other controversy around him as reported in the New York Times and new york Post. Roach is a religious teacher, a spiritual leader. You didn't have any problem with highly inflated puffery that constituted most of this article when it shone his spiritual activities and organizations in a positive light (much of which I have edited to be more neutral). You only wish to remove the negative material. The death of one of his most senior students, whom his "partner" left him for (as reported in the Post), and the subsequent controversy and upheaval being created in his organization, can not and should not be left out of any thorough profile. I am not affiliated in any way with this guy, or his purported spiritual tradition. I am informed enough however to know that if I am to read a profile of him, I would expect this material to be there - just as I would if the founder of some other spiritual "university" had his partner (and most senior TEACHER) leave him for a senior student, later marry, then stab, said student, and then find him dead while they were alone in a cave having been kicked out of said university, all while claiming to be practicing according to the Buddhist retreat guidelines of their teacher, that they believed themselves to be following. Well...it's such a no-brainer that your repeated removal of it completely outs you as biased. And btw, there is no rule that says material needs to prove some kind of personal guilt to be included - it is of high general, and institutional, significance - and THAT is the guideline. So please leave it alone, and allow other editors to weigh in if they have opinions.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 20:28, 8 May 2012 (UTC) |
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I, Vritti wrote the statement immediately above. For some reason I am getting regularly logged out of Wikipedia today while doing all this writing ... [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 21:23, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::It happens to the best of us. Make sure you check the "remember me for 180 days" checkbox when you log in. It still makes you re-log-in every so often, of course. |
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::As for the question of whether or not you are a Buddhist, you have an excellent command of the Vinaya for a non-Buddhist. But your statement that you aren't a Buddhist rings true, because it's pretty clear that you haven't had any teachings on the topic of Vinaya from Buddhist masters—much of what you say here reflects a shallow knowledge of the topic, which a Tibetan Buddhist scholar would have long since surpassed. |
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::I'm referring to the Dalai Lama as Gyatso not out of disrespect, which I most certainly do not intend, but because [[User:Orangemike]] made the claim that I must have COI because I keep referring to various people using their titles, against house style. So I'm making an effort to follow house style. Gyatso is actually not the head of the Gelukpa lineage—that would be the [[Ganden Tripa]]. Gyatso is of course a highly respected scholar in the Gelukpa lineage. |
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::We don't actually have a majority or minority view among Gelukpa monastics. If we take your source as well as mine, we have Gyatso contradicting himself. Thurman expresses an opinion, but that's not the same as making a ruling on the status of a particular monk. What view the Gelukpa sangha of monks and nuns may have is not relevant because you haven't cited any source other than Gyatso who is a member of that sangha. |
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::Consider the rather excellent Wikipedia article on [[Karl Marx]]. It's substantially longer than this article. It talks in detail about his life, goes into some detail about his philosophies, and includes a criticism section titled "Totalitarianism" with a word count that is less than the "Marriage and controversy" section of this article. Given that you can't even cite a source who does more than doubt that Roach is being truthful, without actually making any argument to support that position or positively asserting that he knows Roach is not telling the truth, why do we have such a high word count for this criticism section? It is very much gossip, and it makes a mockery of Wikipedia's BLP polices. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 23:42, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Incidentally, FPMT founder [[Thubten Yeshe]] ("Lama Yeshe") was legally married to one of his followers, apparently just in order to apply for Australian nationality. --Dawud |
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If i can weigh in, the link here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Christie_McNally redirects to the Roach bio page, so therefore in my opinion either we make a separate christie McNally page and link it to the roach page, or we remove that redirect.. Tao2911... why dont you write that page. I think its a good idea and i think youd be a good person to do it <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/1.142.222.226|1.142.222.226]] ([[User talk:1.142.222.226|talk]]) 04:00, 9 May 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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== External links modified == |
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Changed [[Diamond Mountain University]] to [[Diamond Mountain Center]] as this is the official wikipedia page for that institution. The name 'University' is also not used on the official website other than as a strapline under the logo. There is no official use of the term 'University' that I can find on the website. If anyone feels this should be changed back, then please also change the wikipedia page so that [[Diamond Mountain Center]] redirects to [[Diamond Mountain University]] and not visa versa. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/101.171.85.78|101.171.85.78]] ([[User talk:101.171.85.78|talk]]) 00:43, 10 May 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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It is a matter of reliable sources (including recent articles in the NYT and the Independent) that are making the connection. I agree we shouldn't get into details of McNally and Thorson, but the basic fact of Thorson's death following their expulsion from the retreat belongs in the article, given that that's a connection good sources are making. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 16:11, 9 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:Think through your logic a bit here. You are saying [a] Ian Thorsen died. [b] this death occurred after Ian left the retreat. [c] Geshe Michael is the spiritual director for the retreat. Therefore [d] Ian's death is notable in an article about Geshe Michael. The sources you cite are sources reporting on Ian's death, not stories about Geshe Michael. It makes sense to talk about Geshe Michael when you talk about Ian's death, but the converse is not necessarily true. You would need to establish some kind of misfeasance or malfeasance on Geshe Michael's part before it would make sense for you to report on Ian's death here—that is, it would have to be the case that Ian's death was Geshe Michael's doing. The text you have added to the article doesn't make this case, and neither do the sources you cite. Hence, the text about Ian doesn't belong here. It belongs in the wikipedia article you do on Christie, or on Ian, if you feel that it is notable. That article would of course mention Geshe Michael, and that would be entirely appropriate. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 21:35, 11 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::Again, it is the sources that make this connection, and the sources themselves are just as much about Roach as they are about Thorson. The sources do not say that Roach is responsible for Thorson's death, and neither does our article here. I assume we're at least done with the misguided notion that there was a coatrack problem, nu? [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 14:22, 12 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Again, an article about Ian's death would rightly mention Geshe Michael, as the source articles do. However, the converse is not true: the mere fact that an article about Ian's death at a retreat center founded by Geshe Michael talks about both Ian and Geshe Michael does not mean that an article about Geshe Michael should talk about Ian. Can you explain why you think this is notable? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 16:18, 12 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Again, because multiple reliable sources are discussing it, quite prominently. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 17:33, 12 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::This isn't a valid reason, because you could also use it to justify adding some text here about the space shuttle because multiple valid sources attest to its historical existence. The mere fact that an article talks about Ian, and talks about Geshe Michael, does not mean that the subject matter of the article as it pertains to Ian is notable in an article about Geshe Michael. In order for it to be notable, Ian's death has to say something about Geshe Michael. So if you think it is notable, you must be able to say what Ian's death says about Geshe Michael. Can you please attempt to do so? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:02, 12 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::It is preposterous to suggest that this episode involving Roach's main protege, his ex-wife, and his former attendant, both of whom owed their prominence and status entirely to Roach, has no relevance to his wikipedia article. It is just not even arguable.[[User:Sylvain1972|Sylvain1972]] ([[User talk:Sylvain1972|talk]]) 20:12, 10 July 2012 (UTC) |
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== This article is being distorted by students of Michael Roach == |
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== Divorce == |
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I think this article should be rewritten by an established Wikipedia editor and locked against vandalism. There is minimal discussion of the most notable thing about Roach--the death of Ian Thorson and the controversial marriage to Christie McNally. Meanwhile, the talk page clearly indicates that people editing the page are extreme minority insiders with idiosyncratic ideas about Tibetan Buddhism--indicative of Roach's teachings. Furthermore, most recent edits come from accounts that don't even have user names, just anonymous IP addresses. [[User:Switfoot|Switfoot]] ([[User talk:Switfoot|talk]]) 22:58, 21 November 2022 (UTC) |
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We have had some discussion (not enough) on [[WP:BLPN]] about the recent edits where [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] has tried to introduce text indicating that Michael Roach dumped Christie McNally and immediately went to New York to go clubbing, when the source that talks about clubbing says that McNally dumped Roach, and the source that talks about filing for divorce doesn't give any context as to why Roach filed. The claim that Roach instigated the divorce is not sustained by the sources, and the juxtaposition of this claim with the clubbing claim tells a story that is contrary to the source material as well. |
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:Suggest reversion to May 2022 version of the page located here: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Michael_Roach&oldid=1089002018 [[User:Switfoot|Switfoot]] ([[User talk:Switfoot|talk]]) 23:03, 21 November 2022 (UTC) |
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If you really, truly think this text needs to be in the article, please get someone who is neutral to agree with you. When I've raised this on [[WP:BLPN]], nobody has supported your position, and several have argued against it. Arguing with you about this over and over again is a huge waste of time. Don't you have anything better to do? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 05:13, 14 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:1. No-one on BLPN took any view at all about this issue, so it's inaccurate to say others argued against my position. 2. Sources: [http://www.nytimes.com/2012/06/06/us/mysterious-yoga-retreat-ends-in-a-grisly-death.html?_r=1&pagewanted=all New York Times], "Mr. Roach had filed for divorce from her." [http://www.nypost.com/pagesixmag/issues/20100211/Monk+y+Business+Controversial+NYC+guru+Michael+Roach New York Post], several paragraphs about post-divorce activities, including clubbing in New York with young models. If you want to '''add''' context to all of this, please do suggest edits here as per the guidelines for COI editors. When you do so, avoid mischaracterizing other editors' edits (e.g. I did not talk about anyone dumping anyone else). [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 05:23, 14 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:*I don't think I've mischaracterized your edits. The text about clubbing has been added several times in the past by other wikipedia users, and taken down again. It's simply not notable. You haven't explained why you think it's notable. The fact that it appears in the source doesn't make it notable. This has been discussed on [[WP:BLPN]] before, and neutral parties have agreed that this is so. You can read all this history if you are interested—I'm not making this up. If you aren't interested enough to read the history, why are you editing this article? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 06:10, 14 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Please do have a look at [[WP:TPO]]. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 05:41, 14 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::You have not identified a BLP problem with my posts to this talk page. Presumably, that's because there isn't one. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 05:58, 14 June 2012 (UTC) |
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*"My edits ... were not coatracking" -- that doesn't seem relevant to how to edit the article? In any event, you are now focused on discussing me (and I on you, in response). In fact, I agree with you: we should get back to a discussion of how to edit the article. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 06:11, 14 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:*"Stay on topic: Talk pages are for discussing the article, not for general conversation about the article's subject (much less other subjects). Keep discussions focused on how to improve the article. '''Irrelevant discussions are subject to removal." [[WP:TPG]] ''' and 'timshol' --[[User:Canoe1967|Canoe1967]] ([[User talk:Canoe1967|talk]]) 18:34, 14 June 2012 (UTC) |
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==On the neutrality of the article - May 2023== |
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It seems that [[User:Tao2911]] is back and wants to add back the talk about Ian. The very tenuous claim that a distraught mother blames Geshe Michael for the death of her son seems to be the basis for claiming that this paragraph is notable. I think this is highly questionable, but I'm not prepared to unilaterally decide that the paragraph has to go. However, if the paragraph does need to be here, it needs to be complete and accurate, and not draw conclusions not sustained by source material. In particular, if you leave out Geshe Michael's long letter explaining what happened, and why Christie and Ian were asked to leave, the added text makes it sound like Geshe Michael is the villain. So I've added a sentence summarizing the letter. I think it makes the paragraph more balanced. |
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Anyone who reads this article, its editing history, and its Talk page, quickly realises that there had been numerous and consistent attempts to rewrite the article, manipulate the flow of its style and tone towards a certain biased point of view (from both sides of the isle). Both, those who are affiliated with Roach, and those who create [https://michaelroachfiles.wordpress.com/ blogs to work at destroying his reputation], had tried to push the article towards a certain direction. |
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I believe we shouldn't allow the article (or its Talk page for that matter) to be dominated only by one point of view that stems from a clear COI. |
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[[User:Tao2911]], if you want to make more changes, it would be nice if you could participate in a conversation about what you are trying to communicate and why you consider it notable, rather than leaving us to guess what you may have intended. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 04:45, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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In its current state, some sections of this article are biased against Roach. |
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Regarding the edit [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] made on the bases of [[WP:SPS]], I don't think that applies here. [[WP:SPS]] is specific to things like personal blogs, public postings on forums, tweets, and group blogs. [[Diamond Mountain Center]] is a 501c(3) religious organization with a board of directors, and this open letter was published on their web site, which is not a personal blog or a group blog, but rather the online public face of the retreat center. I can see where you might be tempted to say that it's still self-published since Geshe Michael founded Diamond Mountain, but then you are essentially claiming that the DM board are meatpuppets, and I would think you ought to justify that claim with some kind of sourced evidence. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 06:28, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:[[WP:RS]] is very clear on preferring sources that are ''independent''. No matter how you slice this one, the Diamond Mountain board is not independent of Roach. Putting that point in Wikipedia's voice instead of Roach's is not the way to do it -- a point that will be perfectly obvious to anyone who doesn't approach this article with a [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 07:45, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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We need to start an objective conversation around the current state of this article and where it is going.[[Special:Contributions/84.198.107.83|84.198.107.83]] ([[User talk:84.198.107.83|talk]]) 22:39, 29 May 2023 (UTC) |
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In case of such controversial figures and material, like we have here, no, arguments saying that the Diamond Mountain website could somehow be considered a valid "secondary or tertiary source" are utterly absurd. Of course it's not. The independence of the board is exactly the question in a number of places. Nomo is exactly right to call it into question here. Diamond Mountain is Roach's baby - you can't extol it as his creation, and then use it as independent source! Abhayakara is an admitted follower of Roach; considering this, I think s/he is doing ok with some edits - by basically no longer fruitlessly fighting the entire flood of information that is becoming available from an astounding wealth of reliable tertiary sources (that happen to include most major newspapers in the English speaking world.) Clearly, this editor would like to see this page be a glowing portrayal of their guru. Happily, there are other people here too. My motives, you ask? To have a decent, NPOV overview of this guy. I think we have one at the moment. Probably for a brief moment.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 15:21, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:As an aside, I removed "non tradional" from in front of "American". If this is readded, can it be after the nationality? Thank you. --[[User:Mollskman|Mollskman]] ([[User talk:Mollskman|talk]]) 16:22, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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[[User:Tao2911]], the fact that you have the various beliefs that you state above does not make them true. In order for them to be in the article, you have to have a source that says what you say above. You do not have a source. Therefore, it does not belong in the article. "The board is not independent?" Which source said that? "It's Geshe Michael's baby?" Which source said that? Furthermore, even if it's Geshe Michael's baby in the sense that he founded it, it's legally an independent entity with a board. It's not appropriate to presume something that's not stated in a source. |
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BTW, your motives really don't matter here. What matters is that you are making non-NPOV edits. Maybe you sincerely believe that your edits are accurate. That belief is not sufficient to establish that they are. To establish that they are, you need sources. The sources can't merely imply what you would like the article to say. They have to say it. The fact that these articles you are citing—as full of innuendo as they are—never actually come out and say what you are trying to say should tell you something. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 16:53, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:praytell, which of my edits are biased? Show one, darling. I don't see one line - except the ones about his claimed accomplishments, which I leave alone mainly out of good will - that we don't have absolutely perfect tertiary sources for, in triplicate. We're about business here, not name calling. If you actually look at mine, you'll see that I have fleshed out his early bio, corrected timelines, made sure his linguistic accomplishments were reinserted in the right place, worked on the grammar, fixed citations, corrected negative bias, added about half of the current sources, etc etc etc. And yes, I have fought your wish to make this a promotional site for your guru. I am sorry if this makes you sad or upset.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 17:48, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::You wrote that Ian and Christie were appointed as retreat directors by Geshe Michael. I don't know if Christie was in any sense appointed by Geshe Michael, but I wasn't able to find anything in the cited articles substantiating that. I do know that Ian was not retreat co-director, and by extension that he was not so appointed. As far as I know Christie volunteered to be the spiritual director for the retreat, but I really don't have any specific personal knowledge on that topic, so it would be necessary to find some source backing up the claim. This is just one of the many unsubstantiated and inaccurate additions that you made to the article. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:18, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Christie said that Ian was co-directing; I read it in numbers of early accounts. It wasn't in latest sources, so if you notice I did not re-add that after you removed it. Anything else? Oh, and the sources say (not inside rumor or guessing or personal knowledge) that Diamond Mountain is run by Michael Roach, and that he organized and was leading the three year retreat, and appointed Christie to be "director." Do you have another source, or have some alternative proposal for how she would end up directing a THREE YEAR LONG RETREAT without being appointed by the religious leader of said event? She just appointed herself you say?[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 18:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::I couldn't find the source that said Geshe Michael appointed Christie. Which one says that? Geshe Michael and Christie founded DM, so your statement that Christie would have had to have been appointed by Geshe Michael is mistaken. In any case, it's not for us to speculate. If the sources say that she was appointed by Geshe Michael, that's fine—I just couldn't find that in the sources. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 19:11, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::I've never seen a source that says she co-founded the place. Roach is sole man at the top, according to every news story. Find one source that differs. Please. Also, any teaching authority McNally has at all comes from Roach and no one else. So it makes the same point. Why are you even arguing this? What's your point? You say I am making all these biased additions, ruining the article. Is this all you have?[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 19:35, 16 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::You seem to have dodged my question. Which source says that Geshe Michael appointed Christie? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 00:07, 17 June 2012 (UTC) |
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At the moment, I think the article is in pretty good shape. The only point of cognitive dissonance I have is that [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] hasn't been booted from editing this subject due to an obvious conflict of interest.[[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|undated]] comment added 17:15, 17 June 2012 (UTC)</span><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:Thanks Vritti for your opinion; I happen to concur. I think the page is a good, NPOV summary of what is now a cornucopia/bumper crop of tertiary sources. And yes, Abhayakara is an admitted devotee of Roach, with a transparent history of whitewashing the page. Seriously, now...[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 18:07, 17 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::Oh btw, Roach in a clear attempt to deflect responsibility says in his public statement that the "Diamond Mtn board appointed Mcnally director". They are all of course picked by him, he's the head of the board and leader of the retreat - but I just took out his name, mainly because it just reads better.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 18:11, 17 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::If you find my participation so fascinating, maybe you should do a Wikipedia page about me. If you are interested in this article and in NPOV, perhaps you could respond to the question that I asked, instead of continuing to gossip here about topics that are irrelevant to the article. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:30, 17 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::apparently your bias is effecting your literacy, since I did, in the line preceding your snark? Read that and get back to us. And btw, agreeing with another editor's assessment of your bias is hardly "gossip." This kind of discussion is a record for future editors to track those involved and get a sense of what's going on. Your bias is important to delineate, for those who might have missed when you admitted Roach is your guru.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 21:42, 17 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::The correct answer to my question would be in the form "the article at http://blah says that the board appointed Christie." It is not snarky to ask you to answer a clarifying question. Also, BTW, read the article and tell me why it's notable. You seem to be really interested in editing it, but if in fact the only thing that's interesting about Geshe Michael is that he is a monk who was married, and someone died near a retreat center he's in charge of, then it's hard to see why there should be a Wikipedia article about him. If you think he's notable, why don't you add some text that says why? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 22:16, 17 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::read the letter from Roach, already used as citation - its there in black and white. "Lama Christie was appointed to be director of the retreat." And Roach is plenty notable - he just also happens to be increasingly notorious, or so it appears. Again - I don't know the guy. I just know '''what I read in sources'''. And I've been working on cleaning up that totally inaccurate virtual nonsense that was his bio before.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 23:19, 17 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Ah, okay, cool. Thanks. That wasn't one of the sources you cited—it's a source I added later. None of the sources you cited, as far as I can tell, contain this claim. But be that as it may, what about my question about notability? Why do you think this article is notable? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 04:36, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Are you proposing we delete it? He's your guru, after all.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 15:29, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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I'm asking why ''you'' haven't proposed we delete it: why ''you'' think it's interesting to talk about a person who, according to you, has never done anything of significant aside from getting ordained and then practicing with a partner, and then having someone die nearby a retreat center he founded. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:42, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:so, in other words, you don't have a proposal for the article, just some kind of mind game you want to play? No thank you. And I've never said he didn't warrant a page. Ever. Or anything close to it.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 21:22, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::I'm not saying that you said he didn't warrant a page. I'm saying that your edits suggest that he isn't notable—the only thing you're interested in editing is the controversy section, or taking out text in the rest of the article that you consider "hagiographic." So I'm asking you to say why you think he's notable, and therefore his article shouldn't be deleted. This isn't a mind game. It's a legitimate question. All of this back and forth is exhausting. I have a job, and I'm building a house, and I volunteer for various local organizations who actually need my help. I don't have time to spend several hours every night going through all your edits to see if your sources justify them. From my perspective, it would be better that there be no wikipedia page than that there be a page with all the non-notable gossip you've added. So I'm just wondering why you think that's not so. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 23:14, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Aw - Saint Abhayakara is taxed by my heresy. So sorry. You clearly don't understand wikipedia. As others have pointed out, and alerted you to, your bias is clouding your judgement. Roach has accomplished some things. He's also currently the most controversial member of the entire Tibetan Buddhist religious mandala, completely and utterly sanctioned and rejected by the entire establishment, Dalai Lama on down, for concrete reasons. It's not gossip dear. Why don't you just stay away, get some sleep, and let reality (not your fantasy about your guru) play itself out here.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 13:22, 19 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:Please try to refrain from all of this ad hominem stuff. Your duty as a wikipedia editor is to engage constructively when there is debate about what should be in an article you are editing, not to call the people who disagree with you names. As to your point, if he is, as you say, the most controversial member of the entire Tibetan Buddhist religious mandala, completely and utterly sanctioned and rejected by the entire establishment, Dalai Lama on down, why is it that the '''only''' source you have for this is a New York Times article that doesn't actually say that? Wouldn't it be more helpful to include, for example, a link to the page on His Holiness' web site where this is discussed? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 21:25, 19 June 2012 (UTC) |
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== OWN network proposal == |
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I had included this passage, which has been removed for notability issues. I'll make my argument following: |
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''In 2010, Roach submitted a video proposal for a television show on the Oprah Winfrey Network to be chosen by online voting. In the proposal he states, "When I was young, my mom got breast cancer and just before she died she put me into a Tibetan monastery. I stayed there for 20 years and became the first American geshe, or Buddhist Master. Nowadays a lot of people come to me with their problems and dreams and I help them figure out what karma they need to get things they want." The proposal has not yet been selected for production.[23][24]'' |
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Ok. So the lead says, ''"Roach's teaching includes the view that yoga and meditation can lead to financial prosperity. He has at times been the center of controversy for his views, teachings, activities, and behavior."'' |
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This quote directly demonstrates nearly everything in this passage, in a succinct way, in Roach's own words - better than many other parts of the entry. It is a proposal, viewable online, for a television show '''on the Oprah Network'''. This is exactly the kind of information the general reader, to whom we are told to be writing for in guidelines, is going to be interested in. We also have it referenced in a critique of Roach that is used by the New York Times, and other sources, cited throughout the article - in the Elephant Journal, an influential and highly regarded online and print subscription magazine. I think it genuinely fleshes out the article, and is a great opportunity to see Roach himself talk about what he's about, his views, and shows his aspirations. Why ''wouldn't'' we have it in the article? Such material is often included in profiles of less, and more, well-known figures.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 15:48, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:Link, please? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:42, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::http://myown.oprah.com/audition/index.html?request=video_details&response_id=19324&promo_id=1 [[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 21:23, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::I'm still not seeing the significance of this element, Tao2911. It would be an easier sell if it had been selected/broadcast. What does the Elephant Journal article have to say about it? [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 21:31, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::http://www.elephantjournal.com/2012/05/tragedy-at-diamond-mountain-an-update/#idc-cover It's a scathing critique of dozens of problematic issues around Roach, written by a former senior student. This post and the discussion threads following it were a source for NYT article, referenced and linked to. The threads by the way are fascinating - Roach's former attendent for the first 3 year retreat says the "five paraticpants" were all women, and that they all had sex together, and Roach liked to wear their lady things. I am not suggesting this for inclusion! |
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::::Here's the quote from the author, who while wearing opinion on his sleeve has done some amazing research. "In 2010, Roach recorded a video audition for the Oprah Network to propose a new show that he would host called “The Karma Show”. Oprah didn’t go for it, despite 11,861 votes. I think this 3-minute clip pretty much sums up Roach’s entire pitch and method. He confabulates his educational story, brags about the commercial bravado of his students, oversells his matchmaking and medical powers, all while bastardizing the crown jewel of Gelukpa metaphysics."[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 21:40, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::The conclusion you want to draw here is [[WP:OR]]: you are making an original criticism on the basis of a primary source. Not only that, but your criticism is not based on the content of the video, but the one-paragraph blurb. The video does not say what the blurb says. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 23:14, 18 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::I really don't think you can read - let me rephrase: Please read more carefully. I am not making any criticism, anywhere. And the blurb quoted accompanies the video on the site, and yes, pretty well synopsizes what it contains.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 13:26, 19 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::Hm, that would tend to suggest that I wouldn't be able to reply to what you said, and yet here I am replying, just as if I could read. This is a criticism: ''I think this 3-minute clip pretty much sums up Roach’s entire pitch and method. He confabulates his educational story, brags about the commercial bravado of his students, oversells his matchmaking and medical powers, all while bastardizing the crown jewel of Gelukpa metaphysics.'' [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:47, 19 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::hmm wow, that would be the part that I didn't say, put in quotations, and in fact immediately preceded it with the phrase "Here's the quote from the author, who while wearing opinion on his sleeve has done some amazing research." Abashed? No of course not. You have no shame - that's why you keep editing this entry, your stunning obtuse bias notwithstanding.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 19:07, 19 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::Oh my, you are right. You didn't say that. I'm sorry for having misrepresented this. I actually agree with you that the pitch explains Geshe Michael's teachings, since that's what it's intended to do. However, the blurb accompanying the pitch doesn't accurately represent what's in the pitch. And BTW, what he says in the pitch is something you'll hear from Tibetan lamas too, not just from Geshe Michael. It sounds weird and uncomfortable to western ears, including mine, but he says it because he's trying to get people to feel strongly motivated to keep their vows, and from what I've seen, it does have that effect. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 21:43, 19 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::Well, I've read a few critiques from Tibetan lamas of that very pitch calling it an abomination, but who cares? I too listened, I am relatively conversant with Dharma Tibetan, Gelug, and otherwise, and the summary provided is perfectly accurate. If it weren't, presumably Roach wouldn't allow it to represent his pitch. In any case, IF we were to summarize the video, we would use the summary provided, not yours. Or mine.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 02:27, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::The video is as valid a source as the summary; more so, since it contradicts the summary. Sources aren't more or less valid because of the form they come in. E.g., the summary of a Nightline episode in TV guide (does that even still exist?) is not more reliable than the Nightline episode, simply because it's text and Nightline is video. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 02:55, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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First, basically nothing you say here carries any weight since your bias is heinous and damning. Second, your analogy is utterly fallacious. The summary at OWN is FIRST PERSON, it is not pretending to be an independent summary. Third, I have watched the video, and read ROACH'S summary; it is perfectly suitable and accurate. Fourth, the issue is a none starter until I find a source that passes muster. So, you can stop now. Really. Go back to all those pressing issues you claim we are distracting you from. Please.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 13:42, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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[[User:Tao2911]] your edit history is public, you know. And it shows a pretty clear POV. The summary is unattributed. We know that Geshe Michael spoke in the video because we see him speaking. Both are primary sources, but one is not reliable, because we don't know who wrote it, and the other is reliable, because we see Geshe Michael speaking. Primary sources are generally not usable because using them requires interpretation, which would be [[WP:OR]]. So I'm glad you've concluded that you can't use these. But please dispense with the accusations and just do your job as an editor. A good start would be to remove all the text you've added to the article that's not backed up by the sources you've cited. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 16:09, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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==Elephant Journal== |
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Tao2911, I'm sorry, but it is now clear to me that the Elephant Journal does not meet [[WP:RS]]. The question is not whether it's prominent or well thought of. The problem is that it is, in its own words, an "open forum". The journal owners explicitly disclaim responsibility for what its authors write. They say they are simply providing a platform for others to write their own stuff. I'm confident you will disagree with me -- and so I suggest that you raise the question at [[WP:RSN]]. In the meantime, per [[WP:BLP]] I will have to remove anything that relies solely on a source in this "journal". I'll add that some of what I saw made for a fascinating read -- but there's no way that source is going to pass muster here. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 05:30, 19 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:Oh I expected as much. No big deal. I still think that Oprah proposal should be here. I'll see if I can find another mention in the plethora of other sources. Springing up like weeds these days...[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 13:14, 19 June 2012 (UTC) |
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== Full history of incident at DM == |
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[[User:Tao2911]] recently made the following change: |
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:In December 2010, McNally was appointed director of a three-year meditation retreat at Diamond Mountain. She and her husband, Thorson, participated in the retreat and had their own cabin. In a "Great Retreat Teaching" on February 4, 2012, Christie McNally revealed an incident in which she had stabbed Thorson in February, 2011. Following meetings by the Diamond Mountain Board and outside legal counsel, the Board voted to remove McNally from any leadership roles and to ask the couple to leave the campus for one year. |
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:In January 2012, McNally was appointed director of a three-year meditation retreat at Diamond Mountain. After an incident in which McNally stabbed Thorson in February, they were both told to leave. |
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This change is inappropriate. If the stabbing incident is not notable, it should be removed in its entirety. If it is notable, it's notable enough to describe in context. I originally just reverted [[User:Tao2911]]'s revert, but then noticed that the editor who added the text has no edit history. Since [[User:Tao2911]] has a history of accusing me of sockpuppetry, I decided to revert the edit back to [[User:Tao2911]]'s version and explain here why I think the edit was good. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 16:05, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:god can you get nothing right? I've never accused you of sockpuppetry. Again, literacy, dude. And I'm quite sure you would like to remove the stabbing. Quite sure. Then remove them having to leave, then remove thorson's death, then remove the Dalai Lama censure, etc etc. Back to the way the page used to read, of course! Like a Michael Roach commercial. Perfect![[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 18:46, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Hi, I'm the user who made the edits that you reverted. I've never edited wikipedia before, but the timeline of events is right on the Diamond Mountain website. I'm also frustrated that media outlets might get the sequence of events wrong if they look at this page. The stabbing incident did not occur shortly before the expulsion, but a full year prior. It was that McNally *spoke* of the incident on February 4 of this year. Some retreatants did know about it, but no one told the board. [[Special:Contributions/96.246.62.95|96.246.62.95]] ([[User talk:96.246.62.95|talk]]) 16:31, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:"Media outlets" don't use wikipedia without careful fact checking anyway, so I wouldn't get that frustrated...[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 19:00, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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== Retreat and death timeline == |
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Current page is factually inaccurate as to timeline. My edits were removed, however. |
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Retreat began December, 2010. McNally was both its director and a participant. She and Thorson had their own cabin. |
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On February 4, 2012, McNally gave a "Great Retreat Teaching" in which she mentioned an incident in which she had stabbed Thorson. This event, according to an account posted in April 2012 on her behalf by an assistant ("A Shift in the Matrix"), had occurred a year before, in February 2011. The actual audio of this talk is not posted online, unlike the other talks given the same weekend. |
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The Diamond Mountain board met, and also sought legal counsel, before asking McNally and Thorson to leave the campus for one year, and stripping McNally of any leadership role. |
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The couple left the campus on February 20th. Thorson died April 22. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/96.246.62.95|96.246.62.95]] ([[User talk:96.246.62.95|talk]]) 16:18, 20 June 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:Whoever did this edit, would you please get a wikipedia account and learn wikipedia procedure before making edits to the article? It's great that you want to make the article more accurate, and your edit did improve the article, but there is a dispute going on about the content of this article, and so you can't just edit it and expect your edit to stick; worse, by editing it without showing the appearance of being an independent editor, you raise the spectre of sockpuppetry accusations. Go get an account, look up [[WP:Sock puppetry]], go look up [[WP:MEAT]], go look up [[WP:NPOV]], go look up [[WP:OR]], and go look up [[WP:RS]]. Read these articles carefully. Then go look at [[User talk:Abhayakara]] and [[Wikipedia:Sockpuppet_investigations/Abhayakara/Archive]]. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 16:39, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Abhayakara, |
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Previous disputes about the content of this article have no bearing on the fact that dates on the current page are wrong. The right dates, given in my edits, are available from multiple sources, including the Diamond Mountain retreat's own website. I am an independent editor, and have worked as a magazine fact-checker. It does not make sense to me that I need to do tons of research on the accusations and counter-accusations made by previous contributors to this page in order to be qualified to correct factually inaccurate data. There's something bizarre about that. A wrong date can stand because I am not sufficiently educated about some insider thing known as "sockpuppetry"? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/96.246.62.95|96.246.62.95]] ([[User talk:96.246.62.95|talk]]) 16:53, 20 June 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:Just make a username and password, so that it's possible to be accountable for your edits. Nothing could be easier -- no personal information, no nothing apart from a username and password. As for the issue you're arguing: the way to make things right is to find a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] that provides the right information. Present that here, make your case, and if others are convinced the article will be changed accordingly. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 16:58, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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1) Retreat started December 2010: http://diamondmountain.org/an-open-letter-from-geshe-michael |
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1a) McNally as its spiritual director and also participant: http://retreat4peace.org/about/lineage (end of page) <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Ixnay99|contribs]]) 17:24, 20 June 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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2) Stabbing incident revealed Feb 4 2012 (ibid) plus, youtube videos of the other talks given that weekend, plus http://diamondmountain.org/node/33 |
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3) date of actual stabbing: http://www.scribd.com/doc/90220087/A-Shift-in-the-Matrix, page 2 of actual text |
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4) Date of couple leaving retreat: http://diamondmountain.org/an-open-letter-from-geshe-michael, also the NY times article, but I believe they also got the date from the official letter, which they cite |
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5) Date of ian's death, april 22 2012, -- every news story that has been written about this event |
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http://www.post-gazette.com/stories/news/us/mysterious-buddhist-retreat-in-the-desert-ends-in-a-grisly-death-639159/ <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Ixnay99|contribs]]) 17:19, 20 June 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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To be clear here, I think your edits are correct, and thank you for documenting them thoroughly. I just want to avoid a situation where someone accuses me of being you, because we happen to agree on this point. I pointed to past investigations solely for the purpose of warning you of that possibility. AFAIK, the person mentioned in the previous investigation is a student of one of Geshe Michael's students, who lives in Israel. I am sure an IP trace would have confirmed that, but none was done, and the investigation was closed without resolving the issue. Thanks for setting up an account! [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:10, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Also, BTW, be sure to sign your edits to the talk page. You can do this by ending what you write with four tildes. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:12, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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ok |
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with the above sources, I'd like whatever approving bodies to reconsider my edits, which replace the paragraph currently beginning "In January 2012" with: |
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McNally was appointed director of a three-year meditation retreat that began December 2010 at Diamond Mountain. She and her husband, Thorson, participated in the retreat and had their own cabin. In a "Great Retreat Teaching" on February 4, 2012, Christie McNally revealed an incident in which she had stabbed Thorson in February, 2011. Following meetings by the Diamond Mountain Board and outside legal counsel, the Board voted to remove McNally from any leadership roles and to ask the couple to leave the campus for one year. |
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[[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 18:17, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:Again: too much detail. We don't need to know about their cabin. We don't need to know "she revealed" the stabbing. We don't need to know about legal counsel. You add nothing of substance here. These facts are secondary. And some are not in our tertiary sources. Look, we could flesh all of this out in its gory details (by the way, your edits not so subtly distance Roach from events.) We already risk having that section too long. It needs to be terse and to the point, a NPOV summary of TERTIARY sources - that would be NYT, ABC, etc. They do our work - we don't have to put these pieces together. Done. No to these edits. I will check dates, and make sure they are in line with NYT etc. I will make whatever correction is needed in text as it is. But these edits you propose are no go.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 18:35, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::PS Thorson was RECOVERED on the 22nd. He had been dead at least a day.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 18:36, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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1) I'm interested in precision. Thence the distinction between when the stabbing took place and when it was revealed to the board. Without this distinction, we perpetuate the confusion that has appeared on blogs, etc, where it is assumed that the stabbing must have shortly preceded the expulsion. No, Christie writes that the incident took place "three months into the retreat." |
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:fixed that dates, so that's done.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 19:05, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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2) I added the legal counsel thing because currently the article is really vague about how they came to be expelled and by whom. It uses the passive voice and does not say who asked them to leave. |
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:doesn't matter. They were asked to leave - next line says board was involved. Enough. There are sources that are easily accessible if people want to know more. This is not a news story. Its an encyclopedic summary.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 19:05, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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3) The problem with tertiary sources is that once one of them gets a fact wrong, the subsequent reports incorporate the same mistake. The primary sources were used as the basis for a number of facts in the Times article, so it seems weird to prioritize the latter. |
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:if it's a choice between Michael Roach's, much less McNally's, version of events and the New York Times, wikipedia editors are going to favor the Times EVERY TIME. If the Times makes a mistake, then they should be asked to correct it. We can then use that. That is THEIR job. Not ours. Again, you're new here, so read your source guidelines.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 19:05, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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4) Are you the owner of this page? Like when you say "no to these edits" are you the decider? |
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:I am a veteran editor who has worked a bunch on this page. But I am happy to hear GOOD suggestions. You made some. They were incorporated.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 19:05, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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5) I think in your "not so subtly" comment you are implying I am a supporter or whitewasher of the biography subject, somehow invested in distancing him from events? I'm not, and also in rereading my contribution I can't figure out where you got that idea. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Ixnay99|contribs]]) 18:52, 20 June 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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6) According to Christie in her emergency call, Ian was "unresponsive." [http://www.willcoxrangenews.com/news/article_9a724b6c-b4da-11e1-8c99-001a4bcf887a.html] What's your source that he was actually in fact dead for a full day prior? [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 19:10, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:What difference does it make? NYTimes and others just say April, avoiding the question. We know he was found on the 22nd, dead. He could have been dead a week, we don't know and it doesn't matter. Most importantly, we don't need to add days to months and years in the confusing series of dates already listed. Simplify, condense, summarize.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 19:15, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Tao, I asked in response to your absolute assertion, above, "PS Thorson was RECOVERED on the 22nd. He had been dead at least a day." |
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It turns out you have no way of knowing that and then you chastise me that "it doesn't matter." It mattered enough for you to "correct" me on the point, on the basis of absolutely nothing!! <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Ixnay99|contribs]]) 19:23, 20 June 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:Actually, I asked you why it matters. I've read accounts that the coroner's report said he was dead for "days". But it doesn't matter here. Unless you have an actual argument to the contrary. (!!!)[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 19:52, 20 June 2012 (UTC) |
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== regarding any further expansion of 'controversy' section == |
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So Abhayakara added a line about Roach's marriage, his excuse that it was just so McNally would inherit his stuff. I want to say that I think the section is tight and highly NPOV considering the incendiary nature of the material. A guy is dead, and many are arguing that it is directly due to his involvement with Roach. So - we don't want to get into that, or many other topics (there are over 4000 comments on threads about this topic on ONE other site, and there are many others). Every line in the entry has 10 lines ready to be added around it, both pro and con. Abha. clearly and always will try to sneak a little positive spin in wherever possible. That's what this edit smacks of to me. But more importantly, it doesn't matter to the material. Roach said that, but we have sourced accounts saying that most of what he has had to say about that relationship is completely specious anyway. Are we going to add that, for balance? We already know, and state, that he lied about being married for over a decade as it is. We are to put his excuses for why now? In the Oprah video he says he lived in a Tibetan monastery in India for 20 years. That is quite simply a lie as well. He clearly isn't a good source about his own motivations or biography. Anyway, once again, let's keep it succinct, condensed, and minimize this slippery slope of unwarranted detail.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 00:07, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:''Roach said that, but we have sourced accounts saying that most of what he has had to say about that relationship is completely specious anyway.'' Name one [[WP:RS|reliable source]]. |
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:''We already know, and state, that he lied about being married for over a decade as it is.'' Then you should be able to produce a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] that says "Roach said in ''[insert date prior to 2012, when the article you cite was written]'' that he and McNally were not married." This would be unlikely, given that they went around wearing wedding rings the entire time that they were "out" about their relationship. I don't have a source that says that, but you don't have a source that says they lied about being married, either. |
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:''In the Oprah video he says he lived in a Tibetan monastery in India for 20 years.'' This is a primary source. What he says is that he met the Dalai Lama in India, and lived in a monastery for 20 years. This includes the time in India and the time at Rashi Gempil Ling in New Jersey. I can see how you could take what he said the way you took it, but that doesn't mean he was lying. Who knows, maybe he deliberately said it in such a way that you'd think he lived in India for 20 years. But you don't have a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] that says he did. |
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:''He clearly isn't a good source about his own motivations or biography.'' This is [[WP:OR|drawing a conclusion by interpreting a primary source]]. If you think this is true, go write a book about it. Don't put it in a wikipedia article. |
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:''A guy is dead, and many are arguing that it is directly due to his involvement with Roach.'' It's clearly true that if he had never met Roach, he would not have died in the particular way he did. But for all we know he would have died making some similar mistake. We can't second-guess the past. You are supposing here that if someone is dead, someone else must be to blame. This is not a valid supposition. Yes, Ian's mom blames Geshe Michael. Do you blame her? Would you claim that ''she'' is a [[WP:RS|reliable source]]? |
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:What your diatribe here illustrates is the risk of trusting unreliable sources. The reason you are so certain that I am whitewashing and you have NPOV is because you've been, as you admitted, reading comment threads on various online articles and taking what's said there as reliable. It's not. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 02:29, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::in fine retaliatory mode, Abhayakara is back to removing all mention of his marriage to McNally, etc. Usually people's marriages, divorces, etc are included in their bios - especially in light of these circumstances. Any other editors care to step in here, and take some action? I'm stepping away for a bit. This guy is a menace.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 02:32, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::I have repeatedly said that the section about Ian is not notable. I raised this on [[WP:BLPN]] and someone came by and agreed with me. Then you put it back. This is not retaliation. I don't even understand how someone could imagine that it was retaliation. I do not believe this belongs in the article, and so I took it out. If you want an article about Ian Thorson or Christie McNally, please write one. I think they are both notable, and you can float your theories about who's to blame for Ian's death there. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 02:39, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Hi, everybody. |
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Checking the page today, I see that the last paragraph of the controversy section has been shortened. It seems to me we are now omitting context, and the narrative makes no sense. We've got to mention the retreat itself before saying the couple was asked to leave the retreat, because it reads now: |
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"Roach and McNally divorced in September, 2010; McNally married one of Roach's senior students, Ian Thorson, one month later.[20] Due a pattern of suspected mutual abuse including an incident in which McNally stabbed Thorson, they were both told to leave the retreat in February, 2012.[24]" |
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I would like to add a sentence in the middle of the 2 existing sentences that clarifies what retreat and when: |
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"Roach and McNally divorced in September, 2010; McNally married one of Roach's senior students, Ian Thorson, one month later.[20] McNally was appointed director of a three-year meditation retreat that began December 2010 at Diamond Mountain. Due a pattern of suspected mutual abuse including an incident in which McNally stabbed Thorson, they were both told to leave the retreat in February, 2012.[24]" |
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Source is the Diamond Mountain website (all pages that describe the great retreat0 and also retreatforpeace.org, the retreat-specific website also maintained by Diamond Mountain. There are also pre-retreat interviews on the web with McNally in which she talks about when the retreat starts and what she hopes to accomplish there. |
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Reason for adding is that if we are mentioning the incident at all, we need enough context so the reader doesn't go "what?" [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 13:43, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Hi, again, everybody. |
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This crash-course in wikipedia editing is riveting. The sentence I proposed this morning was added, but then removed again. For the same reasons as given in my 13:43 post, directly above, I again ask if we can add a connecting/contextualizing sentence, to wit: |
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"Roach and McNally divorced in September, 2010; McNally married one of Roach's senior students, Ian Thorson, one month later.[20] McNally was appointed director of a three-year meditation retreat that began December 2010 at Diamond Mountain. Due a pattern of suspected mutual abuse including an incident in which McNally stabbed Thorson, they were both told to leave the retreat in February, 2012.[24]" [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 19:25, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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==Neutrality Dispute== |
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Please see the above responses under the heading "regarding <del>the</del>any further expansion of the controversy section." There's plenty more where this came from, but the point is to demonstrate that this editor is not neutral, and request that someone who is neutral take a look. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 02:36, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Just to go into some more detail on this, the most obvious evidence of POV in this article is that the section entitled "Marriage and Controversy" is about half the article. Edits to this section pointing out that the Dalai Lama has written that such relationships are sanctioned in some cases has been repeatedly deleted. The Dalai Lama's writing on the topic can be found on p.193 of his book, ''How To Practice''. |
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The following text appears in the article: ''This behavior was reported to include being seen in New York dance clubs and dating women.'' The cited source for this is a Page Six gossip column from the New York <del>p</del>Post four years ago. The sentence in question is linked with the sentence about the Office of the Dalai Lama in such a way as to imply that they are connected, but they are not—the article about Geshe Michael appearing in New York was written ''after the relationship ended,'' as can be clearly seen by reading the article. The article does not say anything about Geshe Michael dating anyone, although I will admit that it tries very hard to imply it. When this article first came out, it was cited as a source, and I disputed it as not reliable on [[WP:BLPN]]. My dispute was sustained, and the text was removed. Now it's been added back, I think by the same person. |
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The next sentence reads "Additionally, his long hair does not conform to the traditional shaved or close cropped head of Gelug monks." This is from a supposed primary source that is not cited in the article. It may well be true, but there's no citation to sustain it. |
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The next sentence refers to "numbers of prominent Buddhist leaders," but only names two: Robert Thurman, and "the abbot of Sera Monastery." Which Abbot is not stated, and no source supports the inclusion of the abbot of Sera Monastery in this sentence. The sentence also leaves out an important detail from the complete Robert Thurman quote, where he admits that what Geshe Michael is doing may be legitimate, but suggests that it would be superhuman, and that he personally doesn't believe it. |
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These edits in particular seem to come from a clear POV: someone wants to say that Geshe Michael has gone completely off the reservation. But the sources don't sustain this claim. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 03:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:I've taken care of some of these issues. I don't think we should include a general statement about the DL's views on this type of relationship sourced to a book that doesn't mention Roach. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 06:09, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::I guess your point is that to include this would be [[WP:OR]], but the Dalai Lama's book is a secondary source which we have to take as more reliable than the New York Times, because he's one of the high lamas in the lineage. So if we can take the New York Times' opinion about Geshe Michael's buddhist practice, it seems topical to include something from the Dalai Lama about the practice Geshe Michael was doing. Furthermore, to '''not''' do so seems to push a POV, as I have said, because you are not telling Geshe Michael's side of the story. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:36, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::If there's a reliable source that tells Roach's side of the story in this respect, then we can discuss how to use it. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 17:52, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::<del>The open letter from Geshe Michael published by the DM board is [[WP:RS]] in an article about Geshe Michael. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 19:39, 21 June 2012 (UTC)</del> Sorry, wrong topic. Speaking about the monk/long hair/spiritual partner controversy, Geshe Michael has written about this [http://geshemichaelroach.com/inner-life.html here]. This is [[WP:RS]] for a BLP article. HHDL is definitely [[WP:RS]]. |
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Hi, all, |
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I read the GMR bio cited above. It does not mention long hair. It does say that GMR holds the view that spiritual partnerships are within the tradition of the lineage. The wikipedia article would have to confine itself to saying that, perhaps by quoting that bio, but not go further and intimate that living leaders of the lineage in fact concur. Although the GMR bio implies that they concur, or have responded with approval to his disclosure via post-2003 letter, I have actually read both his letter and the responses. (Here are the citations: [http://michaelroachfiles.files.wordpress.com/2012/06/letter-to-lamas.pdf], [http://michaelroachfiles.files.wordpress.com/2012/06/lamas-replies.pdf] [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 20:53, 21 June 2012 (UTC) The responses are somewhat non-responsive on that point, and in fact most confine themselves to wishing him well and providing a blurb for his book, which was a request made in the disclosure letter. A nice book endorsement is not equal to an endorsement of spiritual partners within the tradition, and although we could do line-by-line textual analysis, I'm going to state my opinion which is that GMR's biography misrepresents the responses of his fellow Gelugpa leaders. |
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On one other point raised above, I concur that the "going to New York dance clubs" sentence is problematic. It appears to reference and provide detail about the "behavior" that earned the censure of the office of HHDL. The sentence begins "This behavior.." However, as wiki user Abahaya pointed out, the alleged behavior occurred much later than the 2006 censure. The implied causality by repeating the phrase "behavior" and in the location of the sentence directly after mentioning "unconventional behavior." Now, it is possible that GMR went to dance clubs at some point and through word of mouth HHDL's office got wind of it, but we have no reason to believe that is true and certainly no source. Finally, I also find the "behavior was reported to include" phrase misleading. The reportage was one "page six" article in the NY Post. It's a gossip page, and, as such, I don't think it holds itself to the standards of reporting that apply in the rest of the paper. Since both the Post and its Page 6 have a certain reputation, I believe this is a sentence that would be made more objective by including the source in the actual sentence, such as "In 2010 the New York Post's Page Six reported that..." Also, there is no source citation at all on the wiki article for that sentence now. [http://www.nypost.com/pagesixmag/issues/20100211/Monk+y+Business+Controversial+NYC+guru+Michael+Roach?page=1] [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 20:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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More uncited text: ''Thorson's family and some former followers publicly blamed Roach, amid accusations that he is a "cult leader".'' In none of the cited sources is Geshe Michael referred to as a "cult leader." None of the cited sources mention any former followers who blame Roach. Remski, for instance, is quoted taking Roach to task for his teachings and the close inner circle, but not for Ian's death. Ekan and Sid complain about things that happened during a secret initiation ritual, but again are not quoted blaming Roach for Ian's death. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 20:06, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:In response to one of your earlier complaints about the cult passage, I reworded the sentence to conform to the source that made the point about Roach running the retreat as a cult. This didn't satisfy you either and so you deleted it. I now can't recall which source made the point about Roach running the retreat as a cult. Perhaps you could help sort this out here. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 20:22, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::The Daily Mail article says this: ''A man who was part of a mysterious yoga retreat - likened to a cult - has been found dead in the mountains in Bowie, Arizona after fleeing the sect with his wife and succumbing to exposure.'' The ABC News article leads with this: ''An Arizona man who was a member of a Buddhist yoga retreat that his family compared to a cult was found dead in a mountain cave in Bowie, Ariz., Tuesday, weeks after being asked to leave the sect with his wife.'' The New York Times article says ''Their spiritual leader was a charismatic Princeton-educated monk whom some have accused of running the retreat as a cult.'' |
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::So there are some mentions of the word "cult." But none of the articles refer to Geshe Michael as a "cult leader." And none of them affirm the comparison to a cult—instead, the Times reports that an un-named source ("some") accused him of running the retreat as a cult. ABC news attributes the "cult" claim to his family, but doesn't affirm it. The Daily Mail, interestingly, says "likened to a cult," meaning that they don't affirm that it's a cult either, but they imply, again without attribution, that ''someone'' thinks it's a cult. |
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::If we were to stray into the territory of [[WP:OR]], there are some really good articles on what cults look like, and if you look at what's reported about Geshe Michael, Diamond Mountain and the retreat, they don't seem to me to fit. But we can't do that—it's against Wikipedia policy. So instead we have these tenuous statements in several articles that suggest that someone thinks it's a cult. But they don't ''say'' it's a cult, and they don't ever refer to Geshe Michael as a "cult leader." |
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::If we were rating these articles as wikipedia articles, we would reject them because of all the weasel words the authors salted them with to avoid taking responsibility for anything that was said. But instead we are stuck with these articles and nothing else. In this context, I think it's absurd for the Wikipedia article to use the word "cult." If the source won't even come out and say that it's a cult, why should the fact that ''someone'' said it was a cult be notable? The Wikipedia article seems to imply that it's broadly accepted that it's a cult, and the sources ''certainly'' don't say this. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 20:56, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Yes, thank you: NYT, "running the retreat as a cult". So that's what I did. I'll do it again. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 21:47, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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The closest i can find to a source is slate.com -- the piece calls it a cult twice. But it's a first-person sort of news-stories-observed piece, and not a piece of original reporting with sources. [http://www.slate.com/blogs/xx_factor/2012/06/06/dead_buddhist_in_the_desert.html] [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 21:31, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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== clarify controversy section == |
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I thinks it important, as in keeping with precedents on other pages, to mention the 'event' of all of this information making such a splash in the media. So I mentioned how we even know what we know due to the int'l coverage. Also, I added some of this material from NYTimes - here's the quote so you don't have to dig. |
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''Still, the events at Diamond Mountain University, as the place that hosts the retreat is known, have pried open the doors of an intensely private community, exposing rifts among some of Mr. Roach’s most loyal followers and the unorthodoxy of his practices. In an interview, Matthew Remski, a yoga teacher from Toronto who unleashed a storm online after posting a scathing critique of Mr. Roach after Mr. Thorson’s death, described Mr. Roach as a “charismatic Buddhist teacher” whom he used to respect until his popularity “turned him into a celebrity” whose inner circle was “impossible to penetrate.” Others spoke of bizarre initiation ceremonies at Diamond Mountain. Sid Johnson, a former volunteer who also served on its board of directors, said his involved “kissing and genital touching.” Ekan Thomason, a Buddhist priest who graduated from a six-year program there, said hers included drawing blood from her finger and handling a Samurai sword, handed to her by Ms. McNally. ''[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 14:18, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:also added to two sub headings as the section has grown confusing and unwieldy.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 14:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:The fact that someone's death gets international coverage does not mean that an article about someone else should contain this coverage. As I've said, I agree that Ian is notable, and that Christie is notable, and that it would be appropriate to have an article about this in Wikipedia. But Wikipedia is not a newspaper, and the rush to publish something about this in Geshe Michael's wikipedia article is premature. Perhaps at some point someone will say something convincing to indicate that Geshe Michael is in some way responsible for this event, but the newspaper articles do not—they just repeat a distraught mother and sister's accusations, which are not [[WP:RS]]. BTW, have you ''read'' the Independent article? The writing is ''terrible'', whether we consider it [[WP:RS]] or not. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:36, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::Simply as record for other editors, and with no hope or desire to change this admittedly biased editor's fixed view (he is Roach's web manager for goodness sake), I am not making the call about what is important. I am simply summarizing what this ridiculous plethora of sources deem important. These events are being directly tied to Roach, as similar events would be to any spiritual leader. You wouldn't have an article on David Koresh and not talk about the Waco slaughter. you wouldn't have an article on Jim Jones and not talk about Jonestown and the Kool Aid. You wouldn't talk about that OTHER guy in Arizona who killed a couple people in a sweat lodge and not mention it. And every source talks about this death and its fallout as they relate to these people being students of Roach and at his retreat. It's all related to Roach, in the stories - and in the reported fall out. Stupid to even have to say, but maybe this will be helpful to someone stumbling over here.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 15:53, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Koresh kept his followers in a compound and refused lawful orders from the BATF (IIRC) who then fired on the compound. Jones gave his followers poison. Roach was concerned about domestic violence between two of his followers, consulted his lawyers and the Cochise County sheriff's department, and asked the two followers in question to leave the retreat, which they did. One of them subsequently died as a result of his own actions. The circumstances are practically identical. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:59, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::that is your opinion. The sources cite the opinions of others who say this death was Roach's fault. I don't have an opinion. I don't need to. You show '''a source''', as strong as the New York Times, that says "so and so says it's not Roach's fault" and we can maybe add that too.[[User:Tao2911|Tao2911]] ([[User talk:Tao2911|talk]]) 16:03, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::The sources you have blaming Roach for Ian's death are Ian's mother and sister, as quoted by the Independent and paraphrased by Nightline. Neither source affirms the claim; they simply report it. You've claimed that we can't use Geshe Michael's letter as a source for his side of the story, and you've repeatedly deleted edits I've made attempting to do so. So that's how we got here. It's hard to believe that you really believe this story is similar to the Jonestown massacre or the Branch Davidian compound fire. But if you do, then that proves my point about POV. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 19:39, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::Tao2911 will be taking a short break from the article (I'm letting you know only so that you aren't puzzled by lack of response). [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 19:56, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::Thanks, but I'm responding for the benefit of any neutral editors who come along. It's great that [[User:Tao2911]] is explaining his thinking, but I think we both know we disagree, so the point here is to document ''why'' we disagree for the benefit of neutral editors, not to convince each other of anything. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 20:10, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Yeah, I just looked this up and the Times [http://www.nytimes.com/2012/06/06/us/mysterious-yoga-retreat-ends-in-a-grisly-death.html?pagewanted=all] is cagey, saying "some say..." They don't even have someone willing to go on record that it's "run like a cult." I will, however, say that the blogosphere in general is using the word cult liberally when posting about this situation. [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 21:03, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:What may or may not be being said in the "blogosphere" is not notable. This is sometimes frustrating, but what you just said illustrates why it is so. If the Times editorial department really thought that Diamond Mountain was a cult, the article would have said so. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 21:35, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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I went to bookmark Christie's "A Shift in the Matrix" on Delicious. One recommended tag came up: "cults." Crowdsourced. [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 04:02, 22 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Hi, everyone, |
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I made 2 edits to the article, justified in above sections dated today. 1) I added a sentence that says there was a 3-year retreat at DM with CM as leader; 2) I inserted date and actual paper name into the sentence about the dance clubs to remove ambiguity or implication that this behavior was what incurred HHDL's disapproval. [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 21:18, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:Okay, but can you say why you think the article needs to include the bit about dance clubs at all? We already know that Geshe Michael married a woman and lived with her for ten years. We know why he says he did it (although Wikipedia readers don't). We know what Lama Surya Das had to say about it (although Wikipedia readers don't). We know what Robert Thurman had to say about it (and Wikipedia readers know part of this). Being at clubs isn't forbidden to Buddhist monks, although in general it's discouraged if their preceptor thinks they might succumb to temptation and start holding a girl's hand. So the fact that Geshe Michael was seen in clubs isn't particularly interesting, unless he was seen doing something inappropriate to a monk. The article doesn't say anything to that effect. So why is what it says notable in an biographical article? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 21:35, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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I am not sure that it does. What I *do* know is that I'm a new user and that someone else really really wants this piece of information in the article. So I decided to edit it by giving context and removing the implication that the Dalai Lama disapproved of this particular incident. My feeling is that if I took that entire sentence out, it would be back in in 10 minutes, just the way it was. The edit I made, I believe, should not be objectionable on its own merits, as a clarification, and might therefore stand and also end the tug-of-war. [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 21:42, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Wow! The sentence is back, the way it was before. Ok, so it took half an hour and not 10 minutes. Can the person who changed it chime in here about why we are including it at all, and, if it is pertinent, what was wrong with my edit? [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 22:10, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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I also took out the "cult leader" thing. There is no source that calls him a cult leader, except I do think Ian's mother uses the word cult nea the end of the Nightline piece. [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 21:45, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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What's going on here is that [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] has been editing this article with POV since before [[User:Tao2911]] came back and started doing it again. His edit was reverted after a [[WP:BLPN]] notice, but he just waited until the [[WP:BLPN]] people weren't looking anymore, and added it back again. It's possible that you are the nearest person to neutral here. [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] has a clear POV, as you can see from surfing his contrib history. I'm a student of Geshe Michael. Tao2911 has a pretty clear POV as well. So in fact it's pretty inappropriiate for [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] to be reverting your edits, even if you are a new editor. But when I've confronted him about this, he claims that the only reason I can't see he's neutral is that I'm not. So you be the judge. Just don't get into an edit war with him. If you revert edits to an article three times in the same 24 hour period, it can get you blocked. Read [[WP:3rr]] for full details—don't assume you're safe because you think what you're doing is right. But also don't assume that you aren't entitled to an opinion yet because you're new. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 22:55, 21 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Thanks. I just took a break and then read the whole article afresh. I now concur with you; the "dance club" sentence sticks out like a sore thumb. I think it should be deleted. Either we get into the whole long hair, jewelry thing and the dance club is part of a pattern, or we omit that level of detail. Personally, I find the long hair/jewelry censure, and Roach's explanation of the same to be fascinating and revelatory of the biography subject. I wonder whether the sentence about the clubs keeps getting added back because it's a way to cite/link the Page Six piece, which is really suggestive and juicy. Anyhow, I looked into the conflict resolution avenues and saw that Nomos. is super-active in conflict resolution, which means to me he carries some authority here and will probably prevail. on the other hand, I don't know for certain it is he who put the sentence back in. I think there must be a "history of edits" thing, but I haven't found it. [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 01:21, 22 June 2012 (UTC) |
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If you look at the top of the web page, there should be a series of tabs, one of which is ''View History.'' If you click on the contribs link next to a user on the history page, you can see what other edits they have done. [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] appears to like to surf the [[WP:BLPN]] page. He is quite active there, but I wouldn't describe what he does as "conflict resolution." Generally speaking, editors don't have "authority." They may have more or less ''credibility'', but whatever authority they may have is the result of other editors giving it to them. Editors can get admin privileges if a lot of other editors nominate them. Some editors with admin privileges behave well; others abuse them. |
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I think that if you weave the accusations against Geshe Michael with his own explanations of them, it might make an interesting article. But at some point you might stray into [[WP:OR]], so beware of that. To get a clear understanding of what is being reported in the Page Six article, you would really have to do a bunch of original research. Generally speaking Buddhists who practice Vajrayana won't talk about it, and may even deny that they do it. I think Lama Yeshe's book on the topic, ''Introduction to Tantra,'' and His Holiness' comprehensive book, ''How to Practice'' are excellent primers that will give you a better understanding of what is going on here. Neither is particularly long, but both are fairly deep. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 02:38, 22 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:Hi guys. Having fun discussing me? Here's the thing: on this talk page you're meant to discuss how to edit the article on Michael Roach. Do have a look at [[WP:NPA]]: "comment on content, not on the contributor". (Note that observing someone has a [[WP:COI]] is an explicit exception -- hello, Abhayakara!) Let's recap about me and then move on: I'm a regular at BLPN. That's how I learned about Roach. I'm not a Buddhist, never went to any Buddhist retreats (still less one by Roach), never heard of McNally or Thorson. No preconceived views at all. You might want to have a look at [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Administrators%27_noticeboard/Edit_warring#User:Tao2911_reported_by_Nomoskedasticity_.28talk.29_.28Result:_48_hours.29 this] regarding our fellow editor Tao2911 (quick before it's gone) -- I've had to do almost as much work to deal with your main opponent as to deal with you. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 05:47, 22 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Hi, Nomo. 1)What is BLPN? 2)Let's talk about the dance club sentence. My feeling is that, and I went into sentence phrasing-and-placement detail in the section above this one, the sentence seems to amplify or tease out the "behavior" referred to in the previous sentence, whereas we have no source that "dance club-going" informed the censure from HHDL office. I added a date to show it was reported 4 years after the previous behavior. But I'm also in agreement with Abhay. in wondering why we need this particular detail in the article at all. It's granular on a level to which the rest of the article is not, and to my mind, for consistency we would either also get into other specific objectionable behaviors (long hair, jewelry, and the entire Vajrayogini-come-to-life claims), or simply remove the sentence, as the previous paragraph encapsulates the core of the objectionable behaviors that led to censure. I went and checked some wiki pages about what to put in and leave out of articles, and noted that just because something can be sourced adequately does not mean it has to be in the article. I do not feel as though meaning or thoroughness would be sacrificed by deleting this sentence; I do feel like the article will be more self-consistent as to level of detail and also holistically more readable without it. What say you? [[User:Ixnay99|Ixnay99]] ([[User talk:Ixnay99|talk]]) 12:09, 22 June 2012 (UTC) |
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[[User:Ixnay99]], please be careful to log in before making edits. It looks like you made an edit to the main article, but weren't logged in. I say "looks like" because you've said you're attuned to detail, and your edit is very detail-oriented. :) I usually forget to log in too, so I check the box that says "stay logged in." This is good for about a month. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 19:41, 22 June 2012 (UTC) |
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=== Next Steps: Neutrality Dispute === |
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Okay, we've gotten no joy on the POV dispute for several weeks. The only real direction we've gotten on this from anyone neutral was last month when, after requesting help on [[WP:BLPN]], a neutral editor determined that the text on Ian was coatracking. If I don't hear any objections in the next day or so, I'm going to edit this part of the article for brevity. Really the only thing we've heard on this topic from a knowledgeable, reliable and citable source is [http://www.huffingtonpost.com/lama-surya-das/spiritual-responsibility-_b_1597886.html Surya Das' article in the Huffington Post]. He concludes, "Don't spy out the flea in another's hair while overlooking the yak on one's own nose." I think this is good advice, which Wikipedia editors should follow. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 22:09, 2 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:Once again, "neutral" appears to mean (for you) "agrees with Abhayakara". For the benefit of others who might not know the history here: I came to this article from BLPN and would count as neutral by anyone except Abhayakara. In any event, I look forward to seeing Abhayakara's proposed changes here, prior to implementing them. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 22:18, 2 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::I don't think anybody's interested in this debate, but should the person reading this be someone other than [[User:Nomoskedasticity]], you might want to review [[User:Nomoskedasticity]]'s contributions before concluding that he can claim [[WP:NPOV]]. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 03:00, 3 July 2012 (UTC) |
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=== Neutrality Dispute: read this if you are reading the talk page in response to the POV-check tag === |
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The neutrality of edits to this article is generally in dispute, but I'd like to draw your attention to the following text specifically: |
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:In 1996, Christie McNally, then a recent college graduate, became Roach's student. They soon began what they referred to as a "spiritual partnership" in which they took vows that included never being more than 15 feet apart, eating from the same plate, reading the same books together, etc. Though kept secret for a number of years, they went public with their relationship in 2003. This disclosure led to controversy in the Tibetan Buddhist community, as such relationships are generally[24] in contravention of monastic vows in the Gelug order.[2][25] |
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:The Office of the Dalai Lama stated that Roach's "unconventional behavior does not accord with His Holiness’s teachings and practices" and rebuffed his plan to teach in Dharamsala in 2006. In 2010 the New York Post's Page Six reported that Roach was going to New York dance clubs. Some Buddhist leaders, including former monk, scholar, and friend of Roach, Robert Thurman, have urged him to renounce his monastic vows and stop wearing his robes; Roach has refused to comply.[23][25][26] |
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Notice all the vagueness here. "A recent college graduate..." They "soon began..." "Though kept secret for a number of years..." Look at the articles that are used as references. There's a news article in the Home and Garden section of the New York Times about the spiritual partnership. A gossip column from the New York Post. "Controversy in the Tibetan Buddhist community..." What exactly does this mean? It also seems to be very newsy, talking about an event in 2006, but not reporting any further analysis. Presumably by now, in 2012, we should have access to more than a news article from 2006 about this controversy, if it is notable. Next paragraph: |
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:It later emerged that McNally and Roach had secretly been married in a Christian ceremony in Rhode Island in 1998; Roach explained to the New York Times that they had wished to honor their Christian heritage. Roach filed for divorce in September, 2010; McNally married one of Roach's senior students, Ian Thorson, one month later.[23] McNally was appointed director of a three-year meditation retreat that began December 2010 at Diamond Mountain. Due to a pattern of suspected mutual abuse including an incident in which McNally stabbed Thorson, they were both told to leave the retreat in February, 2012.[27] Against the directions of Roach and the Diamond Mountain board, the pair secretly went to a nearby cave to continue their retreat, surreptitiously supported by other retreat participants. Thorson died in April, 2012 of dehydration and exposure. Thorson's family publicly blamed Roach, amid accusations that he was running the retreat as a cult. Police found no cause for a criminal investigation.[2][4][5][6][28][29] |
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So the first and most obvious thing about this paragraph is that it's largely about an event that happened between two people who are not Michael Roach, without Michael Roach's involvement, and the event resulted in the death of one of those two people. This was a big scandal in the news recently, and much was made of it, but nobody except Ian's mother is quoted as blaming Michael Roach for what happened. So why is this in a wikipedia BLP about Michael Roach? |
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Moving on from that, "it later emerged that..." Various pictures in cited articles show both Michael Roach and Christie McNally wearing wedding rings, so the implication of secrecy here is hard to understand. It's true that a source claims that this was secret, but given that they were open about their relationship and were openly wearing wedding rings in cited articles, the implication that they were hiding something seem intended to imply something that's not said. |
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Michael Roach is notable for having written quite a few books, founding and guiding an organization that has for the past 30 years, [http://vimeo.com/32600495#at=0 as acknowledged by Professor Thurman in 2010], faithfully preserved thousands of Buddhist texts that were at risk of destruction. He has a long career as a Buddhist student and teacher that spans more than those thirty years. His partnership with Christie, while it has been controversial, has been [http://www.tibetanbookofmeditation.org/about-LC.html an integral part of his teaching process since they began talking about it] in 2003. And what we see in his Wikipedia article is a bunch of gossip about something that happened while he was out of the country, in BLM land near a retreat center he founded, without his knowledge. |
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Part of the problem with this article is that there are very few sources to quote on Geshe Michael since 2003. Most of them are involved in reporting on the controversy, so in that sense it's not surprising that we see such a large controversy section. However, Geshe Michael and Christie have both spoken at length about these topics, and when I try to include their explanation of their actions in this article, my edits are deleted as "whitewashing." I don't really get the "whitewashing" claim—what exactly is it that needs whitewashing here? It seems that some editors of this article want to make the article read as if there is something bad going on here, but the article doesn't actually manage to ''say'' anything bad—it just contains a lot of innuendo that I think leads the reader to wonder what's ''not'' being said. |
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=== Marriage/Controversy edits === |
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So I just made an edit to the marriage/controversy section. Part of the goal of the edit was just to make it flow better—the text as it was written kind of stumbled on the way into the bit about HHDL's office, and I think it flows better this way. I also removed the text on clubbing; I realize that this may seem like whitewashing, but before accusing me of this, consider how the text scanned in that paragraph. The paragraph basically read like a laundry list of disconnected complaints. What does the bit about clubbing have to do with the rest of the paragraph? The paragraph seems to be focused on saying that Geshe Michael's behavior with Christie was controversial, and gives two specific examples—the incident with HHDL's office and the quote from the NY Times about Robert Thurman. The bit about clubbing just plainly states that he was seen going to a club, but doesn't explain why this is controversial, nor does the article actually say that what he did was controversial. Also, this text has been removed by neutral editors twice before—it's not just my opinion that it doesn't belong here. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 13:58, 8 July 2012 (UTC) |
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=== Reverting removal of Non-biographical content considered harmful === |
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[[User:Nomoskedasticity]], this means you. Please do not simply revert edits that you don't agree with. This isn't constructive—we're just going to be going back and forth over and over again if you do that. Try to propose a compromise. What is it that you think is important about this text? Can you express that more clearly? The text you put back is non-biographical—it's a description of a series of events that took place on BLM land near Diamond Mountain, which Geshe Michael and one of the parties involved founded. If this is relevant to a biography about Geshe Michael, can you say why? Can you express this relevance? |
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To illustrate the problem I'm talking about, there are two bits of this text that I think are most telling. First, there's the bit where Geshe Michael is said to be "running the retreat like a cult." Since he's not retreat director, this text is clearly counterfactual. And, it's attributed to unnamed parties in the article. So it's an unsubstantiated allegation that has been reported, but not substantiated, in the press. Such allegations are made about public figures all the time. Why is ''this'' allegation notable? Can you explain? |
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Second, the text says that Ian's family blames Geshe Michael for what happened. Okay. So what? Why is this notable? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 22:49, 9 July 2012 (UTC) |
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To expand on that, what I mean is, does some disinterested third party agree that what happened is Geshe Michael's fault? E.g., does the newspaper reporter who wrote the article agree? Does a court agree? If not, this is just an unsubstantiated accusation. The source reporting the accusation is reliable—we can trust that they are not lying about the fact that the accusation was made. But the accusation itself is not substantiated. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 22:54, 9 July 2012 (UTC) |
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=== Sources on Buddhist practice === |
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It's interesting to see the New York Times cited as an authority on Buddhist practice. It is a reliable source, so I can't really contest the addition of this text, but it seems a bit weird. Isn't there a better source for this? Does Lama Yeshe say anything about it in his excellent Introduction to Tantra? What about Geshe Kelsang Gyatso, in his excellent book, Guide to Dakini Land? Or even His Holiness himself? It would be nice to be able to cite an authority here that isn't a newspaper article by a non-Buddhist, opining about a very obscure nicety of Buddhist protocol. |
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For my own part, I think that if the relationship itself is ever allowed, then a marriage would be equally allowable. And we have a very reliable source (HHDL) saying that the practice is allowed in some cases. We don't have any authority aside from Khen Rinpoche, who is no longer with us, saying that it's allowed for Geshe Michael, but neither do we have some authority saying it is not. So I think it's really weird to add this text if you don't have a better source than the NYT. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 02:32, 11 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:Just so I understand you correctly, you are saying that because the secret practice of karmamudra is permissible in the Gelukpa lineage, there is no reason why getting married is not allowed? Karmamudra is a secret yogic practice intended to produce enlightenment, whereas marriage is a social, economic and/or romantic relationship. Gelukpa monks have never gotten married. This distinction isn't a "nicety of Buddhist protocol." Could you restate your objection to clarifying it in the article?[[User:Sylvain1972|Sylvain1972]] ([[User talk:Sylvain1972|talk]]) 16:52, 11 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::Here is a further reliable ource of relevant material, which can be incorporated if anyone has time: http://www.thedailybeast.com/articles/2012/07/10/buddhist-retreat-s-death-saga.html.[[User:Sylvain1972|Sylvain1972]] ([[User talk:Sylvain1972|talk]]) 16:59, 11 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Interesting, I've never heard Geshe Michael refer to himself as an "enlightened being." I wonder where the author of the article in the Daily Beast gets that. Be that as it may, no, what I am asking of you is that you come up with a scriptural source for your claim that a monk who enters into a relationship with a karma mudra is not permitted to marry her. I've never heard any such prohibition, but I don't claim to have read everything there is to read on the topic. The fact that the New York Times article says this is the case doesn't mean that it's backed up by scripture. It sounds more like a shoot-from-the-hip remark by someone who disapproves of the relationship anyway, quoted as if it were scripture by a layperson—the reporter from the NYT. |
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:::My own opinion on the topic, based on my limited understanding of this rather obscure corner of the monastic code, is that it's not something anyone ever anticipated, but it is consistent with the practice. When you hear stories of great Lamas of the past who have taken on karma mudras, the relationship has seemed similar, but the tradition of marriage in Tibetan culture is so different from the tradition in American culture that it's hard to draw parallels. But I'm a student of Geshe Michael, and so it's not surprising that I would have this opinion. That's why I asked you if you know of a better source. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 23:02, 11 July 2012 (UTC) |
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=== Removing non-biographical material (again) === |
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I'm going to remove the non-biographical information about Ian Thorson and Christie McNally that keeps getting added back in. My expectation here is not that my edit will stick around—I expect it to be reverted again. But now the article is on more watchlists, so maybe there will be some meaningful discussion about this text. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:59, 13 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:If you consider that previous discussions were not "meaningful", then it's hard for me, at least, to see the value in attempting to discuss it with you again. Perhaps someone else will indeed have something to add. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 16:34, 13 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::By "meaningful," I mean "including more than you with your POV, me with mine, and two other editors who also have really strong POV." What I would like to see is some editors who don't have a strong POV participating. You and I can't really approximate NPOV simply by opposing each other. It would be nice if you could have more of a sense of humor about this. If it's wearying for you to keep participating in the editing of this article, nobody's forcing you to. If you consider it important, then it would be better if we could acknowledge our differences rather than beating each other up with them. A [[Ralph_Wolf_and_Sam_Sheepdog|Don't Give Up The Sheep]] relationship would be better than a [[Road_Runner_cartoon_series|Fast and Furry-ous]] one. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:19, 13 July 2012 (UTC) |
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=== Current status of neutrality dispute === |
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At this point, there are a couple of problems remaining with the article, although a lot has been cleaned up by me and [[User:Nomoskedasticity]]. What remains is largely what we do not agree on. In my opinion, nearly the entire last paragraph of the "marriage and controversy" section should be removed. The reason for this is that it's about events that occurred to persons who are not Michael Roach, and were not in the control of Michael Roach, and were not the result of actions taken by Michael Roach. (Be careful here—you may ''think'' these events are Michael Roach's fault, but no reliable source says they are!) I think this text qualifies for immediate removal and for the 3RR exception. However, I have refrained from removing this text because it's clear to me that doing so will result in an edit war. |
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[[User:Nomoskedasticity]] asserts that because there is no consensus to remove this text, it should remain. But this is not correct: [[WP:BLPGOSSIP]] and [[WP:BLPSTYLE]] pretty clearly apply here, and the burden of proof here is on [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] to demonstrate why this text should be included. Several of the sources cited here seem subject to the [[WP:BLPSOURCES]] policy as well, as it applies to tabloid journalism. [[WP:UNDUE]] also seems to apply—the sole justification for including this text is that Ian's mother blames Michael Roach for the events described here. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 05:07, 14 July 2012 (UTC) |
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So last night I went through the disputed paragraph and removed each bit of it separately, citing wikipedia policies justifying each removal in the edit summary. Without discussion, [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] reverted all of these edits. This is not surprising to me, and I do not fault him or her for doing so, aside from his refusal to participate in any discussion. The purpose of my edits was to document the problems, and I didn't expect these edits to resolve the problem. I have subsequently added tags to the article to point out bits that I think ought to be removed, and to explain why. Hopefully these will be of some use to editors reviewing what's happening with this article. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 13:32, 14 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:Since this is now listed at [[WP:3]] and will likely get some new eyes (a good thing), it will help (particularly those who don't go through the wall of text above) to point out Abhayakara is a COI editor here (see e.g. [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest/Noticeboard&diff=501881496&oldid=501870595 this] and his user page) and has been trying for more than four years to control this article in a non-NPOV way. The edits can of course be considered on their merits, but it is worth considering where they come from. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 15:45, 14 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::There's a discussion about my "COI" on the COI noticeboard here: [[WP:COIN#Michael Roach]]. [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] repeatedly refers to my "COI" rather than responding substantively to criticism of his edits. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 16:03, 14 July 2012 (UTC) |
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== The REAL Controversy == |
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In order to edit this article correctly, any editor needs to understand the correct basis of the controversy. At its core it has little to do with the performance of a "Buddhist" sex practice which is known in other traditions as well. The controversy is clearly pointed out by Chhime R. Chhoekyapa |
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Joint Secretary of the Office of the Dalai Lama. He writes .. |
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"Moreover, we have become aware that there is an unresolved controversy over your current observation of the Vinaya vows and your keeping company with women. We have received inquiries and letters of concern about your status and conduct from many people. |
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We have seen a photograph of you wearing long hair, with a female companion at your side, apparently giving ordination. This would seem to conflict with the rules of Vinaya, and as you know, the Gelug tradition makes a point of upholding these very strictly. |
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This unconventional behavior does not accord with His Holiness’s teachings and practice. |
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Under the circumstances, keeping the greater interest of the purity of Buddhist tradition in mind, we advise you not to come to Dharamsala on this occasion." |
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The point is that a Gelugpa monk as a part of their ordination takes a vow to live and conduct themselves according to the rules of the Vinaya. Michael Roach's behavior appears to the office of the Dalai Lama to be at odds with these rules. This was true even before it was revealed that he had married. Monks do not get married unless they remove their robes, much like Robert Thurman correctly did. |
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Robert Thurman writes; |
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“I told him to renounce his monastic vows because under our tradition monks do not keep consorts,” Thurman said, recalling a meeting he had with Roach and McNally. But Roach insisted he was technically celibate, and told Thurman he’d never had genital contact with a mortal being. According to Thurman, McNally’s response was, “He said it, not me.” |
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The assertion that the controversy is about a Buddhist sex practice (karmamudra) is a canard and beside the point. The controversy is about the Vinaya vows which Michael Roach took to become a Gelugpa monk and his apparent failure to uphold these vows. This simple fact has been repeatedly buried in the talk pages of this article and removed from the body of the article by a conflict of interest editor who has been attempting for over six years to protect the image of his teacher, Michael Roach. [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 15:13, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:Yup, there is definitely a controversy over that, and you seem to have a pretty strong opinion about which side is right. However, it's the coatracking at the end of the article that led me to add this to the third opinion noticeboard. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 16:50, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::[[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]), A couple more points for the record. It is revealing as usual to see your comment here. Once again you don't really discuss the issue raised, but leap to point out what you believe my opinion to be. If you were a NPOV editor we would be discussing facts of the matter related to the article so that any reader would be free to come to their own opinion on the subject. So, you've added something to the "third opinion noticeboard". That's interesting since I've never heard of such a noticeboard and you don't include a link to what you are referring to. [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 17:39, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::I have engaged in discussions with you about this, and you haven't responded. I asked you specifically for a scriptural source for your assertion that monks involved in a karma mudra relationship aren't allowed to marry their practice partner. You offered no response. I think it's a really interesting question, but I think the reason you don't have a scriptural source is that there isn't one: this is, first of all, a secret topic, and second, an obscure topic. It's very rare for monks to practice with karma mudras. Is what Geshe Michael is doing proper in that context? I don't know. I would like to hear Je Tsongkapa speak to the question, or even an opinion from His Holiness (not his secretary). Dr. Thurman is great, and I admire him, but he chose to disrobe so that he could get married. So his opinion on what Geshe Michael should do is neither surprising nor compelling: he thinks Geshe Michael should do what he did. That doesn't mean that's what Geshe Michael should do, and it's certainly not a directive from the lineage. I'd love to have a debate with you about this, and I don't necessarily think I'd win. But this is not the place for such a debate. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 17:47, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::Sorry, it was [[User:Sylvain1972]] who asked this question before, and of whom I requested a scriptural source. I'm sorry for having said otherwise. But the question still stands: if you have a source, let's have it! [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:33, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::Abhayakara, since you give no indication of knowing what the Vinaya is or what vows a Gelugpa monk makes as a prerequisite for ordination it is not surprising to me that you don't know what I am talking about. For the sake of brevity, how about this quote from the Dalai Lama made at the Life as a Western Buddhist Nun conference; |
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”According to our tradition, we are monastics and are celibate, and we practice the Tantrayana simultaneously. But the way of practice is through visualization. For example, we visualize the consort, but we never touch.” |
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— His Holiness the 14th Dalai Lama. |
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Would you be so kind as to look into the Vinaya before making any more uninformed arguments on this particular matter? Please ... If you find a reference to a Gelugpa monk openly (not in secret) engaging in consort practice while maintaining their robes (besides Michael Roach) I would be interested in reviewing this also. [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 19:50, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:He contradicts what you quote him as having said directly and unequivocally, in writing, on p. 193 of ''How To Practice.'' Your point about secret versus public is a good one, but it's not all that easy to keep secrets when people don't respect them. In Tibet, the lamas who did this practice could keep their secrets because their followers were keeping Vinaya vows and treating them with respect and deference. Geshe Michael and Christie were routinely followed around the East Village by students who had no such respect for their privacy. So then they were in a position to either lie, in a way that could be easily disproven, or admit to the relationship. I was there when they were practicing together in New York prior to the three year retreat, when they were still keeping the practice secret. I had no idea that they were doing this practice, because they didn't speak about it, and I didn't follow them around the Village invading their privacy. |
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:But my question still stands, and you haven't answered it. ''Any'' karma mudra practice necessarily contradicts monastic vows, unless there is a nye me (བརྙས་མེད།) for the practice. HHDL says there is a nye me for advanced monastic practitioners. If we rely solely on the Vinaya to answer this question, the Vinaya directly contradicts what HHDL has said on the topic. If we rely on HHDL, then we have to find some source that does not contradict HHDL, but that does speak to the specific question you are asking: is it forbidden for a monk to marry his or her tantric partner. It's your position that it is forbidden, and this is certainly a plausible and defensible position. However, there is no scriptural authority that supports this position. So from the perspective of making statements about it in a wikipedia article, it would be [[WP:OR]]. |
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:If you want to carry this back to what HHDL says about acknowledging the relationship in public, and if you take HHDL's word as scripture, then there is a scriptural authority for this position. However, HHDL doesn't say what to do in the case where the practitioner is outed, which is what happened here. Geshe Michael chose to just go with it and turn it into a part of his teaching. He could equally validly have disrobed, but in order to do so he would have had to give back his monk's vows, which he considers important. HHDL doesn't say "if you are outed, you have to disrobe." So until he does, Geshe Michael's choice here is just as valid as the choice Dr. Thurman urged him to make. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 20:41, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::Poor logic Abhayakara (talk). Michael Roach took ordination as a Gelugpa monk. He took his vows to follow the Vinaya rules. This happened and there is no controversy that I am aware of about this. Next, as you Abhayakara write, "Geshe Michael and Christie were routinely followed around the East Village by students who had no such respect for their privacy." Why was Michael Roach wandering around in public with his consort when this is in violation of the Vinaya in the first place? It is specifically the behavior of Michael Roach which is at the basis of the controversy. It is that simple. You diminish the opinion of Robert Thurman. “I told him to renounce his monastic vows because under our tradition monks do not keep consorts,” Thurman said, recalling a meeting he had with Roach and McNally. Apparently in your POV, a distinguished professor of Gelugpa Buddhism is just tossing a bit of dirt at MR and the Dalai Lama, head of the Gelugpas is too inconsistent (for your taste) to be taken seriously by Wikipedia. I know that Michael Roach is the only authority that you recognize, but I need to point out that this is an extreme minority view. Your conflict of interest and extreme POV is why I have criticized your editing here. [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 22:26, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::If you think my logic is poor, please refute it instead of calling it names. If you think I am wrong, there's no need to bring up POV—just say why. Supposedly we are having a debate over a question of practice; in any such debate, it is natural for one participant to advance one POV, and another participant to attempt to show that it is not valid. So asserting POV when we're having a debate is absurd. |
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:::Your question as to why Roach and McNally were wandering around the village together is an interesting one, but suggests that you don't know what it's like to live in New York, or to have a large number of students. It also ignores the point that it is not a violation of Vinaya for a monk to meet with a female student in public, as long as their behavior toward one another is proper. But if you want a serious answer, ask Geshe Michael, not me. I would speculate that it's because they had to in order to find opportunities to meet and talk about their practice. It may be that Christie didn't have her own apartment; it's certainly true that Geshe Michael did not. From the perspective of a wikipedia article, none of this is relevant. He says this is what happened; if it is someone's job to decide whether it was appropriate, that someone is not an editor of this wikipedia article. |
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:::As for Dr. Thurman, as a wikipedia editor, I am not obligated to respect him in any way, other than as a potential source. As a fellow practitioner, I would be well advised to listen to what he says, and evaluate it, which I have done. I understand his position, and I understand Geshe Michael's position. I see the logic behind both positions. Dr. Thurman's position doesn't trump Geshe Michael's position due to his fame or whatever. It's just the opinion of a senior practitioner and teacher. For my part, I see no need to make a ruling here. Dr. Thurman's position is interesting, and I do not propose removing it from the article. But you asked me for my reasoning, and I gave it to you. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 23:06, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::The quote by Robert Thurman I have presented twice is not in the article, but should be in my opinion. I'll put it in and begin to edit when I have some reasonable assurance you are not going to delete things as you usually do. I understand your position in human terms, but I do not understand your position as an editor here. The controversy surrounding Michael Roach is based on his behavior. Do you concede this much? He has taken vows. You don't get an exemption from this by living in New York or anywhere else. If the behavior doesn't live up to the vows you cause controversy. The Vinaya was written and vows made to uphold it to avoid controversy in the Sangha of monks and nuns. One is not supposed to wonder or gossip about whether or not any monk on nun is behaving improperly. I have pointed out the Vinaya to you so that you would realize that it is the Vinaya which constrains monks and nuns from commenting on the matter. When it is seen that a monk or nun has failed in their vows and refuses to remove their robes, then the Sangha turns its back on them. This is why there is not a number of Gelugpa monks commenting here. This is how they handle the matter. I have pointed out the comment of Robert Thurman because he is no longer a monk and is not constrained by the Vinaya. “I told him to renounce his monastic vows because under our tradition monks do not keep consorts,” Thurman said. It is that cut and dried. In my opinion you cling to an extreme minority POV. [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 23:45, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::From the perspective of a Wikipedia article, I think Thurman's quote of what Christie said is a real stretch, because it requires interpretation. She doesn't say "I disagree." She simply says she didn't say it. What does she mean? Is she being modest, or contradicting him? Do you know? I sure don't. But sure, knock yourself out. Be bold. At the same time, don't be offended if I debate you. |
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:::::I think we're tubing on the Vinaya discussion. I agree with a lot of what you say, but some of the conclusions you draw require you to know what is going on in the mind of another person. Whether you have this ability or not, you are not yourself [[WP:RS]], so from the perspective of a Wikipedia article it doesn't matter what you think about it. Discussions of what you have heard monks say privately likewise have no place here. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 00:08, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::BTW, if the quote you want to include is the one you quote directly above, I don't have a problem with you including it, because it's essentially the same as what the article says now. However, it's worth noting that it contradicts what His Holiness says. It also seems a little odd: "I told Geshe Michael to ..." Who is Robert Thurman to tell Geshe Michael anything? He's not one of Geshe Michael's lamas, which would be a bare minimum requirement for such an action. So I think you might want to consider the impression that a non-Buddhist reader might have when they come here and read this. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 03:26, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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== Third opinion == |
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{{user|bdb484}} wants to offer a [[WP:THIRD|third opinion]]. |
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I think I've got the general flavor of the dispute here, but it would be really helpful if each side could distill their main points into just a few short sentences. |
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; Viewpoint by Nomoskedasticity: |
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In recent years when reliable sources have given coverage to Michael Roach, overwhelmingly that coverage has focused on the events at [[Diamond Mountain Center]] that Abhayakara wants to omit here, and also on Roach's relationship/marriage to one of his students (also something Abhayakara wants to minimize and portray in a very particular way, disregarding what the sources we have say about it). It is very much a matter of NPOV to have the article here cover those matters. Abhayakara wants to take the view that these issues are not really about Roach -- but it's the sources (including the NY Times) that are connecting them to Roach, and we should follow the sources. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 22:12, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:Thanks. I'm also seeing some mentions about potential COI issues. Is that still an active concern? — [[User:Bdb484|Bdb484]] [[User_talk:Bdb484|(talk)]] 22:29, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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; Viewpoint by Abhayakara: |
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If you look at my edit history, what I've generally tried to do is to minimize reporting on what happened ''after'' the marriage was over, because I feel that it's being given undue emphasis, and to minimize gossipy content that I think violates [[WP:STYLE]]. Consider for example the article on [[Nicole Kidman]]. Why doesn't it mention Penelope Cruz or Katie Holmes? According to [[User:Nomoskedasticity]], a brief mention of Cruise' subsequent marriage would be topical and ought to be included in the article. The bit from the Monk-y business article came up in (IIRC) 2008 when the article was first published. I raised the question as to whether it ought to be in the article on [[WP:BLPN]] and several editors said no. It was added back in recently, and I was subsequently accused of POV for re-removing it, despite some agreement that it was still not appropriate on [[WP:BLPN]]. |
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As for Ian's death, the theme in reporting that [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] refers to would have to be [[WP:OR]] or else would have to appear explicitly in recent articles, so the claim of a long-term trend is unnecessary: either the recent articles support the inclusion of this material, or they don't. I think inclusion of this material is [[WP:UNDUE]] because the opinion that it has something to do with Geshe Michael is attributed to one person: Ian's mother. I think including the other material from this article is in conflict with [[WP:STYLE]] because of the quality of the article being cited. Furthermore, the whole bit is in conflict with what Wikipedia is not: a newspaper. |
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I don't have a problem with the marriage section as it exists now. Nobody is denying that Geshe Michael was married to Christie. You can see my debate with [[User:Vritti]] on the topic of what this section ought to say above. I think it's an interesting debate. I think that this is being given undue emphasis, but agree that there should be something about it in the article. It used to be that when I tried to add information to correct for POV, whatever I added was removed; that hasn't happened recently, and as a result I think that section is reasonably balanced—it gets across the criticisms of those who disagree with what Geshe Michael has done, but also gets across the reasons why Geshe Michael has done it. It could use a little more explanation from Geshe Michael, but there's been some dispute over whether I'm allowed to reference Geshe Michael's writing on the topic. |
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Whatever the outcome, thanks for being willing to review this article. BTW, you can see some more discussion of this on [[WP:COIN]]. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 22:52, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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; Viewpoint by Vritti |
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Michael Roach was ordained as a monk of the Gelugpa tradition of Buddhism. As a prerequisite for this ordination he took vows to live and behave according to the Vinaya. The Vinaya sets out the rules of behavior and conduct for all Buddhist monks and nuns. Michael Roach secretly married a student and later publicly introduced her as his "tantric consort". He was criticized by the Office of the Dalai Lama and leading Buddhist scholars. Michael Roach has refused to remove his monks robes. The controversy surrounding his status as a monk and failure to observe his Vinaya vows continue to this day. The problem here is that one COI editor and student of Michael Roach continues to remove references to the main controversy on almost any pretext and argue ad infinitum on this talk page. [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 23:08, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
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; Third opinion by bdb484: |
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I see a few issues here, based on the article's [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Michael_Roach&oldid=502227077 current state]: |
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'''COI:''' Although it seems that the issue is being handled in greater depth at the COI noticeboard, I'd say that being a student of Michael Roach raises at least minor conflict/POV issues for Abhayakara. I don't believe it to be required by WP guidelines, but it might be better for him to bring edits up on the talk page rather than directly editing the page himself. |
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'''Edit warring:''' It looks like both sides are engaged in at least low-level edit warring. Settling these disputes through the talk page would probably be more productive than endless reversions. |
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'''Coatracking:''' I don't think the McNally/Thorson material -- at least in its current state -- constitutes a coatracking, which is an article that purports to be about one thing but is about another. However, I do think the material presents some other issues, including... |
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'''Relevance:''' The background on the couple's marriage is already getting to the point where I'm fuzzy on whether the amount of detail provided is necessary. That leads to concerns about... |
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'''Undue weight:''' Although we have a [[WP:RS]] to verify that the mother sought to blame Roach for her son's death, the fact that she was the only one making that accusation, along with the fact that there wasn't even enough evidence to support opening an investigation into Roach, raises questions for me about the appropriateness of including this material here. It seems roughly analogous to including information about the [[Clinton Body Count]] on the [[Bill Clinton]] page. Given that there's no evidence or suggestion that Roach actually had anything to do with it, including one grief-stricken parent's unsubstantiated allegation seems inappropriate. I would support removing that entire paragraph. |
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'''Relevance, Pt. 2:''' Content reflecting the incidents described above by Vritti seem to be well within the scope of encyclopedic content. Assuming that they are all cited with reliable sources, I would likely support the inclusion of such material. |
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— [[User:Bdb484|Bdb484]] [[User_talk:Bdb484|(talk)]] 00:45, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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===What now?=== |
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[[User:bdb484]], thanks for the careful review! [[User:Nomoskedasticity]], comments? Are you willing to concede the point, or are we still at loggerheads? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 02:03, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:See, this is how it goes with COI editors: you see what you want to see. Yes, it's true that Bdb484 recommended removal. However, what's also true is that at COIN two editors took different views: Olyeller21 expressed support for inclusion, and Uzma Gamal recommended including a single sentence on it. A reasonable compromise position, then, is to include a single sentence on it -- which is what I have now done. I doubt it will satisfy you -- again, that in the nature of having a conflict of interest. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 18:29, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::[[User:OlYeller21]] expressed support for inclusion based on your assertion that this was the only reason why Geshe Michael was notable, which I don't think was what you intended to say, but that's what he or she was responding to. Before you gave him that impression, he or she seemed to think the text didn't merit inclusion. [[User:Uzma Gamal]] said that one or two sentences would belong in a much more exhaustive article, but not in the article at its current level of detail. So, whatever, I guess your answer is that yes, we are still at loggerheads on this. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:50, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::To be clear, I supported inclusion '''''if''''' it was shown that Roach's image is synonymous with the death (a majority of articles about him discuss the death). I haven't done my own research and I haven't seen any research that shows anything, either way. I was waiting until some more discussion took place before taking the time to do that. |
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:::I don't believe that a single sentence would justify undue weight (unless it's some sort of super-run-on sentence). The death seems to be brought up with at least some frequency when discussing Roach. To go past a single sentence, I think there would need to be research done and presented to show that coverage of Roach mentions the death a majority of the time and I'm doubting that's the case. '''[[User:OlYeller21|<font style="color:#827839;">Ol<font style="color:#FBB117;">Yeller21</font></font>]]'''<sup>[[User_talk:OlYeller21|<font style="color:#827839;">Talktome]]</font></sup> 18:57, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Sources currently in use that discuss the death in connection with Roach: [http://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/americas/the-death-of-yoga-student-ian-thorson---and-the-wall-of-meditative-silence-that-met-police-7821159.html], [http://www.nytimes.com/2012/06/06/us/mysterious-yoga-retreat-ends-in-a-grisly-death.html?_r=1&pagewanted=all], [http://abcnews.go.com/US/buddhist-yoga-retreat-death-raises-questions-ariz-monks/story?id=16526754&page=2#.UARlGo7FWWh], [http://www.slate.com/articles/life/family/2008/06/on_a_short_leash.single.html], [http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2155340/Diamond-Mountain-retreat-death-Ian-Thorson-dies-fleeing-mysterious-yoga-retreat-wife.html], [http://www.willcoxrangenews.com/news/article_9a724b6c-b4da-11e1-8c99-001a4bcf887a.html]. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 19:06, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::There are of course others: [http://www.huffingtonpost.com/derek-rose/stanford-grad-dies-in-cav_b_1536868.html], and several found via Nexis that don't come up in regular GNews searchs -- including one in the IHT and one in ''Business Insider''. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 19:11, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::To speak to your question about prevalence, [[User:OlYeller21]], articles about Michael Roach go back to the early nineties. He's in the acknowledgements section of one book by the Dalai Lama (mid-90's). There was a big flurry of articles about him in 2006-2008 because of the "monk with a partner" controversy. News of Ian's death has made a lot of news in the past month because it's a juicy gossip story, but the fact is that Geshe Michael is mentioned in these articles because of his position at Diamond Mountain, not because he had something to do with the death. What the absolute number of articles is that mention one thing or another, I couldn't say, but I really don't think that a substantial percentage of the literature on Geshe Michael is about Ian. Of course, more recent articles are better represented in search engines... [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 19:14, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Here's another article, if you want to count articles: [http://www.huffingtonpost.com/lama-surya-das/spiritual-responsibility-_b_1597886.html] <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Abhayakara|contribs]]) 19:18, 16 July 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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::::As a straw poll, can we agree on one sentence? If not, we can go from there. I'd like to get some more input so that I'm not a single tie-breaker if you two disagree. '''[[User:OlYeller21|<font style="color:#827839;">Ol<font style="color:#FBB117;">Yeller21</font></font>]]'''<sup>[[User_talk:OlYeller21|<font style="color:#827839;">Talktome]]</font></sup> 19:25, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::A single sentence is what I did earlier today -- so yes, I can agree to it. FWIW, I have never pushed for a highly detailed exposition here. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 20:01, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::Read the two sentences [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] added. What do they imply to you in the context in which they are presented? Ask yourself, as a Wikipedia reader who knows nothing about Michael Roach: why does the article mention that Christie and Ian married? Why does it mention that Ian died after being ejected from the retreat? Is it clear to you how this happened? Can you impute some kind of retaliatory intention on the basis of the text as it stands? If so, then the sentence is not merely POV, but leads the reader to a factually inaccurate conclusion. |
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:::::Now, go back and look at the paragraph as it was. Is this long dissertation on the events relevant? I don't think it is—it's really a story about Christie and Ian, in which Geshe Michael is a bit player. So it belongs in an article about Diamond Mountain, or an article about Christie, or an article about Ian. Not in this article. Again, ask yourself what a Wikipedia reader is going to think when they see this at the end of an article about Geshe Michael. Nobody's saying that what happened was Geshe Michael's doing, but here it is in the article. Why is that? What is the article trying to imply? |
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:::::So what you should be weighing in the balance is (1) is this relevant; (2) is it being given undue emphasis and (3) what does it imply that's not stated. I don't think [[User:Nomoskedasticity]] has any intention to mislead the reader here, but he can't help but mislead the reader if this text is included. So no, it doesn't belong here. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Abhayakara|contribs]]) 20:46, 16 July 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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::::::That's a whole lotta heavy reading. The normal thing to do at Wikipedia is to follow the sources, without layering all sorts of editor interpretation on it. Omitting all mention of this incident is not consistent with NPOV. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 22:08, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::I'm sure it's more relaxing for you to just not bother to follow the editing guidelines, but in fact writing a wikipedia article in such a way that it implies what is not stated does go against the guidelines. If you think the article should say that Ian's death is Geshe Michael's doing, you should argue that point. Instead, you are arguing that despite the fact that Ian's death was not Geshe Michael's doing, text should be in the article that implies that it was. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 23:23, 16 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::To not mention Ian Thorson's death in this article would be preposterous, and complete and reprehensible whitewashing. Of course it has bearing on Roach. It's his organization! As has been mentioned before, numerous reputable international media sources have connected it to him. The New York Times has a whole article examining the criticism of Roach related to the incident. We shouldn't even have to have this discussion. It's ridiculous.[[User:Sylvain1972|Sylvain1972]] ([[User talk:Sylvain1972|talk]]) 14:03, 18 July 2012 (UTC) |
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==Recommended Reading== |
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I wish it were not necessary to include this here, but as far as I can tell the participants in the above dispute have not read it. This is from [[WP:NPOV]]: |
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:An article should not give undue weight to any aspects of the subject but should strive to treat each aspect with a weight appropriate to its significance to the subject. For example, discussion of isolated events, criticisms, or news reports about a subject may be [[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]] and NPOV, but still be disproportionate to their overall significance to the article topic. This is a concern especially in relation to [[Wikipedia:Recentism|recent events]] that may be in the [[Wikipedia:What Wikipedia is not#Wikipedia is not a newspaper|news]]. Note that undue weight can be given in several ways, including, but not limited to, depth of detail, quantity of text, prominence of placement, and juxtaposition of statements. |
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::From [[Jimbo Wales]], paraphrased from [http://mail.wikipedia.org/pipermail/wikien-l/2003-September/006715.html a September 2003 post on the WikiEN-l mailing list]: |
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::*If a viewpoint is in the majority, then it should be easy to substantiate it with reference to commonly accepted reference texts; |
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::*If a viewpoint is held by a significant minority, then it should be easy to name ''[[Wiktionary:prominent|prominent]]'' adherents; |
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::*If a viewpoint is held by an extremely small (or vastly limited) minority, it does not belong in Wikipedia regardless of whether it is true or not and regardless of whether you can prove it or not, except perhaps in some ancillary article. |
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:Keep in mind that, in determining proper weight, we consider a viewpoint's prevalence in reliable sources, ''not'' its prevalence among Wikipedia editors or the general public. |
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Why is this excerpt relevant? Because you are claiming that because this exciting news about Ian has been all over the gossip rags this month, it must be included in the article about [[Michael Roach]]. So okay, who's the prominent person who blames Roach for Ian's death? Where is the book about Buddhism that blames Roach for Ian's death? Of course there isn't one, because no notable person has made any such assertion, with the possible exception of Ian's mother, and even she equivocated. When a notable person ([[Surya Das]]) was asked about this question ''specifically'', he declined to blame Roach for what happened. So we have a bunch of he said she said articles that insinuate that Roach had something to do with this, but do not say so. And we have Surya Das saying "sure, you should definitely be careful about any situation where people are in a long retreat," but not blaming Roach. So? What do you have other than your personal indignation at the notion that anything bad that is ever implied by anyone about Roach might not be documented in triplicate here on Wikipedia? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 17:04, 18 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:No worries, Abhayakara -- you've convinced me that we shouldn't include the bit about Ian's mother blaming Roach. You've puzzled me, though -- I don't think I've ever heard anyone describe the ''New York Times'' as a "gossip rag"; not even the ''Independent''. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 17:13, 18 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::Sometimes they do well, but frequently they do very poorly. I don't know why this is, and find it really disappointing—when I lived in New York and took the paper regularly, it seemed that we could depend on them for journalistic integrity, but yeah, they do sometimes seem to stop to the level of a gossip rag now. The Santos article is basically a he said she said—there's no real investigation, and no analysis at all. It provokes controversy, rather than weighing in on it. I'm sure you will tell me that it's just my POV saying this, but this is what I've found a lot in the Times in the past five years or so—the Santos article is not the one that led me to form this opinion. I really wish you were right about the Times. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 17:24, 18 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:No one is talking about "gossip rags" -- we are talking about multiple respected international media outlets. All of them connect the death of Thorson to Roach. It is far and away the topic that he has received the most mainstream media attention for. The suggestion that having a paragraph about it in this article constitutes "undue weight" under [[WP:NPOV]] is absurd.[[User:Sylvain1972|Sylvain1972]] ([[User talk:Sylvain1972|talk]]) 15:58, 19 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:[[User:Sylvain1972]], you didn't respond to what I wrote. ''This'' is not a gossip column—could you ''please'' try to participate in the discussion and not just spout off whatever comes to your head each time something is added to the talk page? [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 16:23, 19 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::I did indeed respond to what you wrote, directly, using your words.[[User:Sylvain1972|Sylvain1972]] ([[User talk:Sylvain1972|talk]]) 03:28, 22 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::Abhayakara, if you're going to do [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Michael_Roach&curid=1801949&diff=503153285&oldid=502818708 this], I would suggest not complaining about "undue weight". This is how we keep ending up with expansion of coverage of this incident. I'm not going to revert you (though I'm quite puzzled by the addition of a section heading) -- again, though, let's not have complaining about how this issue is dominating the rest of the article. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 18:20, 19 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::The complaint about undue weight was with respect to Ian's mother's opinion, which you now seem to agree doesn't belong. I don't consider the problem with this section to be undue weight—I consider it to be completely off topic. Hence the title, which I think illustrates the point nicely. I suppose you could also call it undue weight in the sense that we have not reported on every other decision that the DM board has made with Geshe Michael participating, so it's surprising that we are reporting on this one. |
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:::In any case, the reason I made the section longer is because the way you wrote it, it implies that Geshe Michael kicked Christie and Ian out of the retreat in retribution for the divorce, without providing them with any support, and implies that that's why Ian died. In order to make this section not imply that, it's necessary to explain what happened in detail. So yes, the amount of detail here is absurd, but if we are going to report on this at all, we have to report on it in such a way that it doesn't lead the reader to draw a erroneous conclusion. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 19:35, 19 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Ah -- well if the point of the section heading is simply to make a point, then please see [[WP:NOTPOINTY]]. I suggest that you revert that element. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 17:02, 20 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::I don't think that section of [[WP:POINTY]] says what you think it says. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:24, 20 July 2012 (UTC) |
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==Tying it together== |
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I think [[User:Sylvain1972]]'s recent edit to the section about Ian's death does do a good job of tying it together and uses good neutral language to express the point, so on the whole I think this improves the article. I still think the whole thing is being given undue emphasis, but let's not beat that dead horse. I do however question the new heading. "Criticism" and "controversy" sections are generally advised against in the wikipedia guidelines. I can understand the desire to change the heading, but I think the new heading is not neutral, and ought to be rephrased. Why not just "Death at Diamond Mountain?" It probably also ought not to be a sub-head under "biography," since it's not biographical. Just make it a top-level head. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 14:49, 24 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:I'm not bothered either way, and you're probably right about "criticism" sections. But I'm confused by the idea that the death took place off diamond mountain property but within the retreat boundaries. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 20:33, 24 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::Tibetan Buddhist retreats occur within a tsam—the Tibetan word for boundary—which is defined at the time of the retreat. Generally speaking, you want to keep the tsam small enough that people aren't likely to wander into it, but large enough that you can go on walks. Diamond Mountain is a 1000-acre property with a big mountain just outside the property line that belongs to the BLM. I don't actually know if this is where the cave is, but that would be my guess. I am pretty sure that mountain was included in the tsam, because it's an attractive hiking feature, but far enough off the beaten path that it's unlikely anybody not from DM would bother to seek it out—there are much more attractive hiking opportunities nearby at Cochise Stronghold and Chiricahua National Monument. As far as I know, despite the proximity of Fort Bowie National Monument (which is right across the property line from DM on one side), there aren't any developed trails on the mountain. It's quite rugged. There's also quite a bit of land that's to the south of the property but drained by the main wash that runs down the retreat valley; this land is a less rugged hike because you can just go into the wash and walk up it to the top of the ridge. There are also some nice trees up there, which is a rarity in the Sonoran desert. These again are outside the property line on BLM land, <del>that</del> and I think the retreaters would want to be able to hike <del>to</del> there. So I can't give you a definite answer as to exactly where the tsam is, but that's what they mean by "retreat boundary" versus "property line," and that's why they are different. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 20:44, 24 July 2012 (UTC) |
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BTW, the violation of Diamond Mountain rules is acknowledged by McNally in her own letter about the incident, which I think people have referred to here in the past. Her letter can't be used as a source in the article because it's also SPS and not by the subject of the BLP, but my point is that it's not a disputed question, and the way you've phrased the text now gives the appearance that it is disputed—you're saying that Geshe Michael is the only person saying this, and you use the word "assertion" instead of "statement," suggesting that it is part of an argument. The letter was published by Diamond Mountain, and I think that unless someone disputes the statement (and no-one has), it's reasonable to take them at their word. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 12:30, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:Also, while the letter from Geshe Michael is the only source that says that they violated the terms under which they were permitted to be on campus, every other article that's cited here talks about what they did that violated the terms, and it would be somewhat absurd to claim that the terms that they violated were unreasonable, or that the Diamond Mountain board's decision to ask them to leave was unreasonable. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:41, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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==Open Letter== |
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The edit is certainly better, since the language is now neutral, but I think it's still misleading to say "Roach stated in a letter..." because it suggests to the reader that Roach is the only one who holds this opinion, despite the fact that the event being referred to is mentioned in numerous articles, and that the letter was published by Diamond Mountain, not by Roach on his personal web site. If you must qualify this, you should say "In a letter published by Diamond Mountain, Roach stated that...." But I think this is unnecessary and misleading, since the fact that they were ejected from DM for violating DM policy is not disputed. In general, you say "so and so says" because you are trying to make it clear that it is a minority position. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 17:53, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:You have gauged my intentions incorrectly. Let's assume you asked, and so here's my answer: my intention is to use a primary source in the correct way. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 17:58, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::I've read that admonition too, but it's neither in [[WP:PRIMARY]] or [[WP:SELFPUB]], and I don't remember where I saw it. I'm pretty sure it didn't apply to the situation we are discussing. You are essentially arguing that some policy you haven't cited means that we have to say something misleading because that's the policy. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 18:31, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::I'm tempted to delete the whole sentence, actually. Pay close attention to SELFPUB: a self-published source may be used if ... it does not involve claims about third parties... My construction of the sentence is meant to approximate adherence to that condition by ''at a minimum'' making clear that it is an assertion of a self-published source (as against including a sentence that states [after careful consideration blah blah] authoritatively in Wikipedia's voice that a third party VIOLATED THE TERMS etc etc). I trust things are now clear. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 21:17, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Roach asserts that violence is a violation of the agreement students make when they are permitted to stay at the center. This is not an assertion about a third party: it is an assertion about the rules of Diamond Mountain which, as a member of the board, Roach is well qualified to speak to. The actual violation that occurred has been reported in numerous reliable sources, some of which are cited here, and has even been admitted to by the perpetrator of the violence, in a [[WP:SPS]] that we can't refer to here. |
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::::Of course, one might follow your line of reasoning a little further and inquire as to why we are even ''speaking'' of a third party on a BLP, regarding events in which the subject of the BLP was only tangentially involved. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 23:41, 25 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::The sentence in our article makes a claim about a third party. It really couldn't be clearer. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 06:17, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::The sentence in our article reports a documented fact about a third party, which is substantiated by reliable sources. So yes, it couldn't be clearer, but not in the way you suggest. The entire paragraph has been added on very flimsy basis, and if you insist that it be here, it needs to explain the situation accurately and in neutral language. Your edit is not neutral—it implies that there is some question as to the veracity of Roach's statement. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 14:02, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::Since you're evidently familiar with SYNTH, the following point should be accessible. While reliable sources document that there was a violent altercation, the only source for VIOLATED THE TERMS etc. is Roach's letter. I disagree that the sentence as constructed implies doubt about veracity -- it merely attributes, and the only intention is to attribute. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 14:20, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::I guess my main objection to it is that it's unnecessarily wordy. If you really think it's important to phrase it this way, I won't continue arguing with you about it. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:21, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Hm, I just noticed that you didn't add the text saying that Diamond Mountain published Roach's letter. Do you disagree with that suggestion? It seems to me that if you want to be really clear about who said what, you ought to include it—the fact that DM published the letter seems relevant, since it's talking about DM policy. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:39, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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== Please correct [[WP:BLPSPS]] violation. == |
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I'm requesting that an editor who has not been accused of COI revert [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Michael_Roach&diff=504114586&oldid=504080095 this edit], which is in violation of the Wikipedia policy for using a self-published source in a BLP ([[WP:BLPSPS]]). [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 03:05, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:Done. Vritti can make a case for restoration if desired, but I agree that it's SPS. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 06:14, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::He's already made a case on your talk page, for some reason, which is valid—I don't see any reason to dispute that source. However, the other reason for reverting this edit, which I didn't mention because SPS seemed like enough of a reason, is that Gyatso is talking about married monks living openly with their wives, which while certainly related to the case being discussed here, is not the same as the case being discussed here, and hence requires [[WP:SYNTHESIS]] to make the connection. I've been unable to locate any details on why these monks are married and living with their wives—perhaps the situation is exactly the same as the situation with Roach, but we have no way of knowing that, and at least in one sense the situation is different, since the fact of Roach and McNally's legal marriage is what's being discussed here, and that was not revealed until someone went through the records and found it, so while certainly Roach and McNally didn't try to hide the existence of a relationship after 2003, neither did they openly go about saying that they were married. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 14:09, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::If Gyatso is talking about married monks living openly with their wives, then I'm not persuaded that there's any synth involved here, given that it seems that Roach and McNally were in fact married. I don't have a strong feeling about it, though -- perhaps Vritti will shed more light. [[User:Nomoskedasticity|Nomoskedasticity]] ([[User talk:Nomoskedasticity|talk]]) 14:18, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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::::I don't really see the synth or stretch since the word married is being used the same way in both the existing paragraph and in the interview with the Dalai Lama. Even though the marriage was kept secret until 2003 they were still married and remained so until 2010. I believe the brief opinion of the DL clearly reflects the view of the Gelugpas and is important as Michael Roach was ordained as a Gelugpa monk. I'll put the words back in with the proper source to remove the BLPSPS issue. If this is still a problem, please discuss here and I will try to understand the issue I fail to see at the moment. [[User:Vritti|Vritti]] ([[User talk:Vritti|talk]]) 15:03, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::I can make a guess as to what [[User:Vritti]]'s response will be, but I suppose we should let him do that. In any case, if we ''are'' going to keep this text, I suggest removing the quote from the New York Times about it being a stark violation of the tradition, since it's essentially saying the same thing, but isn't attributed to a specific person who'd be qualified to make such a statement. [[User:Abhayakara|Abhayakara]] ([[User talk:Abhayakara|talk]]) 15:21, 26 July 2012 (UTC) |
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Open Letter
[edit]The edit is certainly better, since the language is now neutral, but I think it's still misleading to say "Roach stated in a letter..." because it suggests to the reader that Roach is the only one who holds this opinion, despite the fact that the event being referred to is mentioned in numerous articles, and that the letter was published by Diamond Mountain, not by Roach on his personal web site. If you must qualify this, you should say "In a letter published by Diamond Mountain, Roach stated that...." But I think this is unnecessary and misleading, since the fact that they were ejected from DM for violating DM policy is not disputed. In general, you say "so and so says" because you are trying to make it clear that it is a minority position. Abhayakara (talk) 17:53, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
- You have gauged my intentions incorrectly. Let's assume you asked, and so here's my answer: my intention is to use a primary source in the correct way. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 17:58, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
- I've read that admonition too, but it's neither in WP:PRIMARY or WP:SELFPUB, and I don't remember where I saw it. I'm pretty sure it didn't apply to the situation we are discussing. You are essentially arguing that some policy you haven't cited means that we have to say something misleading because that's the policy. Abhayakara (talk) 18:31, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
- I'm tempted to delete the whole sentence, actually. Pay close attention to SELFPUB: a self-published source may be used if ... it does not involve claims about third parties... My construction of the sentence is meant to approximate adherence to that condition by at a minimum making clear that it is an assertion of a self-published source (as against including a sentence that states [after careful consideration blah blah] authoritatively in Wikipedia's voice that a third party VIOLATED THE TERMS etc etc). I trust things are now clear. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 21:17, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
- Roach asserts that violence is a violation of the agreement students make when they are permitted to stay at the center. This is not an assertion about a third party: it is an assertion about the rules of Diamond Mountain which, as a member of the board, Roach is well qualified to speak to. The actual violation that occurred has been reported in numerous reliable sources, some of which are cited here, and has even been admitted to by the perpetrator of the violence, in a WP:SPS that we can't refer to here.
- Of course, one might follow your line of reasoning a little further and inquire as to why we are even speaking of a third party on a BLP, regarding events in which the subject of the BLP was only tangentially involved. Abhayakara (talk) 23:41, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
- The sentence in our article makes a claim about a third party. It really couldn't be clearer. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 06:17, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- The sentence in our article reports a documented fact about a third party, which is substantiated by reliable sources. So yes, it couldn't be clearer, but not in the way you suggest. The entire paragraph has been added on very flimsy basis, and if you insist that it be here, it needs to explain the situation accurately and in neutral language. Your edit is not neutral—it implies that there is some question as to the veracity of Roach's statement. Abhayakara (talk) 14:02, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- Since you're evidently familiar with SYNTH, the following point should be accessible. While reliable sources document that there was a violent altercation, the only source for VIOLATED THE TERMS etc. is Roach's letter. I disagree that the sentence as constructed implies doubt about veracity -- it merely attributes, and the only intention is to attribute. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 14:20, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I guess my main objection to it is that it's unnecessarily wordy. If you really think it's important to phrase it this way, I won't continue arguing with you about it. Abhayakara (talk) 15:21, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- Hm, I just noticed that you didn't add the text saying that Diamond Mountain published Roach's letter. Do you disagree with that suggestion? It seems to me that if you want to be really clear about who said what, you ought to include it—the fact that DM published the letter seems relevant, since it's talking about DM policy. Abhayakara (talk) 15:39, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I guess my main objection to it is that it's unnecessarily wordy. If you really think it's important to phrase it this way, I won't continue arguing with you about it. Abhayakara (talk) 15:21, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- Since you're evidently familiar with SYNTH, the following point should be accessible. While reliable sources document that there was a violent altercation, the only source for VIOLATED THE TERMS etc. is Roach's letter. I disagree that the sentence as constructed implies doubt about veracity -- it merely attributes, and the only intention is to attribute. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 14:20, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- The sentence in our article reports a documented fact about a third party, which is substantiated by reliable sources. So yes, it couldn't be clearer, but not in the way you suggest. The entire paragraph has been added on very flimsy basis, and if you insist that it be here, it needs to explain the situation accurately and in neutral language. Your edit is not neutral—it implies that there is some question as to the veracity of Roach's statement. Abhayakara (talk) 14:02, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- The sentence in our article makes a claim about a third party. It really couldn't be clearer. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 06:17, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I'm tempted to delete the whole sentence, actually. Pay close attention to SELFPUB: a self-published source may be used if ... it does not involve claims about third parties... My construction of the sentence is meant to approximate adherence to that condition by at a minimum making clear that it is an assertion of a self-published source (as against including a sentence that states [after careful consideration blah blah] authoritatively in Wikipedia's voice that a third party VIOLATED THE TERMS etc etc). I trust things are now clear. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 21:17, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
- I've read that admonition too, but it's neither in WP:PRIMARY or WP:SELFPUB, and I don't remember where I saw it. I'm pretty sure it didn't apply to the situation we are discussing. You are essentially arguing that some policy you haven't cited means that we have to say something misleading because that's the policy. Abhayakara (talk) 18:31, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
{{Request edit}}
I'm requesting that an editor who has not been accused of COI revert this edit, which is in violation of the Wikipedia policy for using a self-published source in a BLP (WP:BLPSPS). Abhayakara (talk) 03:05, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Vritti can make a case for restoration if desired, but I agree that it's SPS. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 06:14, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- He's already made a case on your talk page, for some reason, which is valid—I don't see any reason to dispute that source. However, the other reason for reverting this edit, which I didn't mention because SPS seemed like enough of a reason, is that Gyatso is talking about married monks living openly with their wives, which while certainly related to the case being discussed here, is not the same as the case being discussed here, and hence requires WP:SYNTHESIS to make the connection. I've been unable to locate any details on why these monks are married and living with their wives—perhaps the situation is exactly the same as the situation with Roach, but we have no way of knowing that, and at least in one sense the situation is different, since the fact of Roach and McNally's legal marriage is what's being discussed here, and that was not revealed until someone went through the records and found it, so while certainly Roach and McNally didn't try to hide the existence of a relationship after 2003, neither did they openly go about saying that they were married. Abhayakara (talk) 14:09, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- If Gyatso is talking about married monks living openly with their wives, then I'm not persuaded that there's any synth involved here, given that it seems that Roach and McNally were in fact married. I don't have a strong feeling about it, though -- perhaps Vritti will shed more light. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 14:18, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I don't really see the synth or stretch since the word married is being used the same way in both the existing paragraph and in the interview with the Dalai Lama. Even though the marriage was kept secret until 2003 they were still married and remained so until 2010. I believe the brief opinion of the DL clearly reflects the view of the Gelugpas and is important as Michael Roach was ordained as a Gelugpa monk. I'll put the words back in with the proper source to remove the BLPSPS issue. If this is still a problem, please discuss here and I will try to understand the issue I fail to see at the moment. Vritti (talk) 15:03, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I can make a guess as to what User:Vritti's response will be, but I suppose we should let him do that. In any case, if we are going to keep this text, I suggest removing the quote from the New York Times about it being a stark violation of the tradition, since it's essentially saying the same thing, but isn't attributed to a specific person who'd be qualified to make such a statement. Abhayakara (talk) 15:21, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry, for some reason I read both paragraphs above as being from User:Nomoskedasticity—didn't mean to imply anything by not responding to User:Vritti. The reason I claim this is synthesis is that we don't know why the Columbian monks are married. Are they also claiming to be qualified to practice with a karma mudra? The article doesn't say. So by conflating the two situations, we are synthesizing the assumption that the Columbian monks are practicing with karma mudras, which are covered by the quote from How to Practice, and excluding the possibility that these monks are not qualified to do karma mudra practice, and that that is why Gyatso has spoken of them as he has. Abhayakara (talk) 15:43, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I've removed the "stark violation" reference as per Abhayakara. If another editor feels this was rash, please discuss here. As for the claimed synthesis, I don't understand this argument. The reference says married and means married as found in any dictionary. Karma mudra is a different word with a different meaning not in the reference. One required qualification for a monastic to do karma mudra practice while maintaining precepts was revealed yesterday. When we have a reliable source that states Michael Roach is transmuting human excrement into ambrosia or turning bricks into gold or physically flying in the air, etc., then this should be added to the article at that time. Vritti (talk) 16:09, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I've read that section of the book too. I didn't include that in the article because it seems inappropriate to be talking about excrement in a BLP. The talk about miracles must be taken either as hyperbolic, for those who do not believe in miracles, or as literal, for those who do. In the former case, the statement doesn't make much sense—why would Gyatso refer to something that was impossible as a basis for being permitted to do a practice he is clearly stating is permitted in some cases. In the latter case, I don't know what the wikipedia guideline would be—do we assume that Roach is telling the truth when he says he's qualified to do the practice, or assume he is not telling the truth? I don't think we're allowed to say either way. Abhayakara (talk) 16:36, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- Abhayakara (talk), I believe it was you who added the book by the Dalai Lama to the article. You clearly pointed out the "exception" to the monastic restrictions but you failed to include the conditions or single example of action required to uphold the exception. Some historical examples include, tying a knot in a yak's horn, reattaching a severed head without injury, being cremated and regaining the body, etc.. The office of the Dalai Lama and others have already communicated to Michael Roach that he must performs miracles and actions like the Siddhas of old to prove his claims of being qualified to perform karma mudra. To my knowledge there is no evidence he has accomplished this. If and when there is it can be added to the article. There is no argument that he legally married. The Dalai Lama's words puts the marriage aspect in perspective. In other words, I do understand your argument but find it baseless. If you want to continue this line of debate I would prefer not to be involved. I would however be inclined to examine the claims made by Michael Roach regarding his self purported realizations and spiritual accomplishments. The Vinaya vows of a monk by the way, restricts them from making any such claims. If they do, they are asked to prove these claims which explains the various requests by Lamas for Michael Roach to perform suitable miraculous manifestations and actions. Vritti (talk) 17:34, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I've read that section of the book too. I didn't include that in the article because it seems inappropriate to be talking about excrement in a BLP. The talk about miracles must be taken either as hyperbolic, for those who do not believe in miracles, or as literal, for those who do. In the former case, the statement doesn't make much sense—why would Gyatso refer to something that was impossible as a basis for being permitted to do a practice he is clearly stating is permitted in some cases. In the latter case, I don't know what the wikipedia guideline would be—do we assume that Roach is telling the truth when he says he's qualified to do the practice, or assume he is not telling the truth? I don't think we're allowed to say either way. Abhayakara (talk) 16:36, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I've removed the "stark violation" reference as per Abhayakara. If another editor feels this was rash, please discuss here. As for the claimed synthesis, I don't understand this argument. The reference says married and means married as found in any dictionary. Karma mudra is a different word with a different meaning not in the reference. One required qualification for a monastic to do karma mudra practice while maintaining precepts was revealed yesterday. When we have a reliable source that states Michael Roach is transmuting human excrement into ambrosia or turning bricks into gold or physically flying in the air, etc., then this should be added to the article at that time. Vritti (talk) 16:09, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry, for some reason I read both paragraphs above as being from User:Nomoskedasticity—didn't mean to imply anything by not responding to User:Vritti. The reason I claim this is synthesis is that we don't know why the Columbian monks are married. Are they also claiming to be qualified to practice with a karma mudra? The article doesn't say. So by conflating the two situations, we are synthesizing the assumption that the Columbian monks are practicing with karma mudras, which are covered by the quote from How to Practice, and excluding the possibility that these monks are not qualified to do karma mudra practice, and that that is why Gyatso has spoken of them as he has. Abhayakara (talk) 15:43, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I can make a guess as to what User:Vritti's response will be, but I suppose we should let him do that. In any case, if we are going to keep this text, I suggest removing the quote from the New York Times about it being a stark violation of the tradition, since it's essentially saying the same thing, but isn't attributed to a specific person who'd be qualified to make such a statement. Abhayakara (talk) 15:21, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I don't really see the synth or stretch since the word married is being used the same way in both the existing paragraph and in the interview with the Dalai Lama. Even though the marriage was kept secret until 2003 they were still married and remained so until 2010. I believe the brief opinion of the DL clearly reflects the view of the Gelugpas and is important as Michael Roach was ordained as a Gelugpa monk. I'll put the words back in with the proper source to remove the BLPSPS issue. If this is still a problem, please discuss here and I will try to understand the issue I fail to see at the moment. Vritti (talk) 15:03, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- If Gyatso is talking about married monks living openly with their wives, then I'm not persuaded that there's any synth involved here, given that it seems that Roach and McNally were in fact married. I don't have a strong feeling about it, though -- perhaps Vritti will shed more light. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 14:18, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- He's already made a case on your talk page, for some reason, which is valid—I don't see any reason to dispute that source. However, the other reason for reverting this edit, which I didn't mention because SPS seemed like enough of a reason, is that Gyatso is talking about married monks living openly with their wives, which while certainly related to the case being discussed here, is not the same as the case being discussed here, and hence requires WP:SYNTHESIS to make the connection. I've been unable to locate any details on why these monks are married and living with their wives—perhaps the situation is exactly the same as the situation with Roach, but we have no way of knowing that, and at least in one sense the situation is different, since the fact of Roach and McNally's legal marriage is what's being discussed here, and that was not revealed until someone went through the records and found it, so while certainly Roach and McNally didn't try to hide the existence of a relationship after 2003, neither did they openly go about saying that they were married. Abhayakara (talk) 14:09, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
What are we trying to accomplish here anyway?
[edit]I think maybe it's worth revisiting what we are trying to accomplish here. I'm going to tackle this from the perspective of Wikipedia, not from the perspective of our various POVs or whatever. Wikipedia editors are supposed to take what the literature on a topic says and condense it into an encyclopedia article which is neutral and accurate to the sources. I think we ought to be able to use our knowledge of the subject to figure out where to go to find sources, and how to summarize what the sources say. But there is a danger in this: if we know the subject intimately, we start to put our own opinions into the article, rather than accurately representing what the sources say.
So to bring this back to the discussion at hand, we are talking about what to say about Roach's partner practice with McNally. This is a religious topic, so we have the additional morass of belief to sort through. We mustn't choose to say which beliefs are valid or correct—all we should do is to report what the sources say. Roach says he believes he is qualified to do the practice. Thurman says he finds this claim incredible. Gyatso says nothing specific at all about Roach.
So let's take an example that I think none of us have a personal stake in, and think about how we'd write about it. Imagine for a moment that we are writing about a well-known Catholic who's an alcoholic, and who claims to be sober for ten years. Yet this Catholic has been seen taking communion faithfully every Sunday morning. Parishioners have reported that this person takes a healthy drink of the sacramental wine as it is passed to him. Questions are raised: is this person lying?
Of course, we would never have this discussion. It is an element of faith in Catholicism that the sacramental wine is transformed by the priest's blessing into the blood of Christ. It isn't wine that we're pretending is the blood of Christ. It's actually the blood of Christ. At the same time, if you ask recovering alcoholics about this, they will often say that because taking the host alone still counts as taking the holy sacrament, there is no need to drink the sacramental wine, and that to do so is playing with fire.
But here we have a recovering alcoholic who is taking both elements of the holy sacrament. Are we, as wikipedians, entitled to question his assertion that he is drinking the blood of Christ, and therefore not drinking wine? Clearly we are not. If someone else asserts that he is drinking wine, and not the blood of Christ, is it our duty as wikipedians to report this? Is it even appropriate to report this?
So to bring this back to Roach, he is saying that he is qualified. Does he mean that he can transform the atoms of meat, alcohol or feces into some other substance? I don't know, and it does seem incredible. Assuming that such a miracle were possible, what would we see if we watched him do it? Would we see the unclean substances miraculously turn into something pure? Or would we see him eating these substances in their impure form? Does "transform the substances" even mean that the atoms change, or is it just a matter of him experiencing the substances as if they were different? I don't think the answer actually matters, since we couldn't use this experience in our wikipedia article, but the point is that assertions that Roach is not qualified haven't been made. Questions have been raised as to whether he is qualified. I don't think it's even appropriate in a wikipedia article to report on these questions, because they are essentially speculation and matters of opinion, not matters of fact. No Buddhist tribunal has rendered a judgment on Roach in particular. The Dalai Lama's words on the topic in How to Practice are informative, but can't be used to decide either way.
On the question of his legal marriage to McNally, he provides an explanation for why it was done. They have not acted publicly like a married couple—I've never seen them embrace, or kiss, or do more than hold hands—itself somewhat scandalous for a monk, but certainly not grounds for an accusation of a downfall. We don't have pictures of them doing so, and we don't have reports of them doing so in any reliable sources. So the marriage question is really separate from the practice question, for which we do have reliable sources, including Roach.
Suppose a monk were to legally marry a woman, so as to have legal access to her insurance, or her to his, or so as to ensure that she would inherit his property, and they were not engaging in any karma mudra practice together, and did not openly act like a married couple. Would that qualify as a downfall? If so, why? Does the quote Vritti offered from Gyatso support such a contention, or not? I think it's a judgment call, and so we can't report on it: to do so would be WP:SYNTHESIS.
This is why I keep harping on all the gossipy stuff that keeps getting added to this article. It's not improving the article. This article isn't a place for determining whether Roach is a good guy or a bad guy—it's a place for reporting on what we know about him. We honestly don't know whether he's qualified to do the practice, and we don't know whether he's still got his monk's vows, or whether he's committed a downfall. And so we shouldn't say. Abhayakara (talk) 17:55, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- I would like to begin with a plea to other editors to consider weighing in here with their thoughts. For myself, I am attempting to edit this article with an emphasis on NPOV so that anyone reading this article can understand what is being presented and make up their own minds as to what it may mean to them. If the article is well done, the reader can find most everything they need to know about the particular subject without further reference or study. For the record, I'm not a Buddhist of any stripe, robe, tradition or practice. I could not care less about what the subject of this article has done or hasn't done. Abhayakara's long arguments on this talk page often invoke in me a sense of disturbing cognitive dissonance. For example, he writes, "Roach says he believes he is qualified to do the practice. Thurman says he finds this claim incredible. Gyatso says nothing specific at all about Roach." ... You are correct that Gyatso, (AKA) the Dalai Lama doesn't mention Michael Roach by name. The Dalai Lama is the leader and spiritual head of the Gelugpa sect. He is the foremost authority regarding all aspects of Gelugpa tradition and practice. The Gelugpa sect is very strict in its observation and implementation of the Vinaya (rules) for its monastic community of monks and nuns.
- Vritti: You are abso fucking lutely WRONG about the Dalai Lama being "the leader and spiritual head of the Gelugpa sect." You have been pwned by facts. Ask the Ganden Tripa if you don't believe me.
Enter Michael Roach ordained as a Gelugpa monk. Since the entire "controversy" in this article revolves around the behavior of Michael Roach as an ordained monk, I think you are arguing and wiki-lawyering a very minority view that what the Dalai Lama says about Gelugpa monks and monastics somehow, has nothing to do with Michael Roach. The remarks of the Dalai Lama are in no way gossip as they reflect the view of the Gelugpa sangha of monks and nuns. It is clear that Michael Roach looks at things differently, but this is his minority view which he shares with very few. At the moment the article now includes exceedingly credible testimony on how the Gelugpas view monastic conduct and how Michael Roach views it. Let the reader decide what to think about this "controversy", the whole point in bringing this subject to NPOV. 201.191.195.82 (talk) 21:16, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
I, Vritti wrote the statement immediately above. For some reason I am getting regularly logged out of Wikipedia today while doing all this writing ... Vritti (talk) 21:23, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- It happens to the best of us. Make sure you check the "remember me for 180 days" checkbox when you log in. It still makes you re-log-in every so often, of course.
- As for the question of whether or not you are a Buddhist, you have an excellent command of the Vinaya for a non-Buddhist. But your statement that you aren't a Buddhist rings true, because it's pretty clear that you haven't had any teachings on the topic of Vinaya from Buddhist masters—much of what you say here reflects a shallow knowledge of the topic, which a Tibetan Buddhist scholar would have long since surpassed.
- I'm referring to the Dalai Lama as Gyatso not out of disrespect, which I most certainly do not intend, but because User:Orangemike made the claim that I must have COI because I keep referring to various people using their titles, against house style. So I'm making an effort to follow house style. Gyatso is actually not the head of the Gelukpa lineage—that would be the Ganden Tripa. Gyatso is of course a highly respected scholar in the Gelukpa lineage.
- We don't actually have a majority or minority view among Gelukpa monastics. If we take your source as well as mine, we have Gyatso contradicting himself. Thurman expresses an opinion, but that's not the same as making a ruling on the status of a particular monk. What view the Gelukpa sangha of monks and nuns may have is not relevant because you haven't cited any source other than Gyatso who is a member of that sangha.
- Consider the rather excellent Wikipedia article on Karl Marx. It's substantially longer than this article. It talks in detail about his life, goes into some detail about his philosophies, and includes a criticism section titled "Totalitarianism" with a word count that is less than the "Marriage and controversy" section of this article. Given that you can't even cite a source who does more than doubt that Roach is being truthful, without actually making any argument to support that position or positively asserting that he knows Roach is not telling the truth, why do we have such a high word count for this criticism section? It is very much gossip, and it makes a mockery of Wikipedia's BLP polices. Abhayakara (talk) 23:42, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- Incidentally, FPMT founder Thubten Yeshe ("Lama Yeshe") was legally married to one of his followers, apparently just in order to apply for Australian nationality. --Dawud
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This article is being distorted by students of Michael Roach
[edit]I think this article should be rewritten by an established Wikipedia editor and locked against vandalism. There is minimal discussion of the most notable thing about Roach--the death of Ian Thorson and the controversial marriage to Christie McNally. Meanwhile, the talk page clearly indicates that people editing the page are extreme minority insiders with idiosyncratic ideas about Tibetan Buddhism--indicative of Roach's teachings. Furthermore, most recent edits come from accounts that don't even have user names, just anonymous IP addresses. Switfoot (talk) 22:58, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
- Suggest reversion to May 2022 version of the page located here: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Michael_Roach&oldid=1089002018 Switfoot (talk) 23:03, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
On the neutrality of the article - May 2023
[edit]Anyone who reads this article, its editing history, and its Talk page, quickly realises that there had been numerous and consistent attempts to rewrite the article, manipulate the flow of its style and tone towards a certain biased point of view (from both sides of the isle). Both, those who are affiliated with Roach, and those who create blogs to work at destroying his reputation, had tried to push the article towards a certain direction.
I believe we shouldn't allow the article (or its Talk page for that matter) to be dominated only by one point of view that stems from a clear COI.
In its current state, some sections of this article are biased against Roach.
We need to start an objective conversation around the current state of this article and where it is going.84.198.107.83 (talk) 22:39, 29 May 2023 (UTC)