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== Expressing “the film was good” ==
== correction ==

The lead states that “the film was good” could not be expressed under E-prime. What about “I considered it a good film”? Or does that contain a contracted “to be”—“I considered it [to be] a good film”? Either way, it may be worth mentioning in the lead. —[[Special:Contributions/174.141.182.82|174.141.182.82]] ([[User talk:174.141.182.82|talk]]) 13:48, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
:No. the real trick that your sentence contains "I", i.e., it is a rephrasing with significantly changed structure of the sentence. You will find similar example in the article, e.g, "I see this film as good". [[User:Staszek Lem|Staszek Lem]] ([[User talk:Staszek Lem|talk]]) 23:37, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
::"Some people experience the film as good". [[user:Randy Kryn|Randy Kryn]] 10:45, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
: I think it's more that an utterance such as "the film was good" has the form of a universal objective statement about the world, whereas there is no doubt that "I considered it a good film" is an existential subjective statement about a personal taste. [[User:Sean_O%27Halpin|Sean O'Halpin]] 20:28, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
::Yep. This is a good illustration of why E-Prime-Prime, which our article does not seem to cover, is so much more practical: "It was a good film to me" and "I thought it was a good film" are equivalent and much more natural. In E-Prime-Prime it's permissible to use "the ''to be'' of identity" if it is explicitly qualified as a subjective perception. Whether derived directly from E-Prime-Prime or not, this is a big factor in [[nonviolent communication]] and several other approaches. <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — [[User:SMcCandlish|'''SMcCandlish''' ☺]] [[User talk:SMcCandlish|☏]] [[Special:Contributions/SMcCandlish|¢]] ≽<sup>ʌ</sup>ⱷ҅<sub>ᴥ</sub>ⱷ<sup>ʌ</sup>≼ </span> 05:06, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
:::Nope. The correct equivalent, albeit clumsy, is "The film exhibited the property of goodness". And this zen-like trick creates loopholes in many arguments about e-prime; in particular, my version simply sweeps under the carpet the problem of universal vs. subjective. [[User:Staszek Lem|Staszek Lem]] ([[User talk:Staszek Lem|talk]]) 02:30, 24 February 2017 (UTC)


== reasoning ==
''An anonymous user wrote:''
"To be" is the language of observation, tending toward abbreviated observation, fueling ambiguity/confusion, often fueling conflict. Also tendinf toward judgment (right/wrong), fueling the fire of authoritarianism (domination/submission, reward/punishment).
[[User:Rtdrury|Rtdrury]] ([[User talk:Rtdrury|talk]]) 18:29, 3 January 2017 (UTC)


== Self-e-primed ==
CORRECTION: the inventor of E-Prime was a student and follower of Alfred Korzybski, Dr. Bourland.


Please don't try to rewrite this article in e-prime. This will be invariably reverted, because this sub-language is not commonly accepted. [[User:Staszek Lem|Staszek Lem]] ([[User talk:Staszek Lem|talk]]) 20:57, 11 April 2017 (UTC)


i find this utterly sad... how little humour wikipedia have.
W. Paul Tabaka http://Korzybski.Org


would it stay alive if done in the talk page? i wouldn't do it, anyway! 🤣 [[User:Cregox|cregox]] ([[User talk:Cregox|talk]]) 01:16, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
== Bad Poem Translation ==


==An important issue which is not really discussed directly==
"Honey tastes sweet,/And so do you." does not convey the same meaning as "Honey is sweet,/And so are you."
The article doesn't very directly confront the fact that linguistic scholars do not find E-Prime to be of much interest or usefulness (insofar as they've even heard of it). For academic linguists, E-Prime is another in a long line of ideas arrived at by non-linguists ([[Basic English]] is another) which does not have much validity from a linguistic point of view. Whoever the "scholars" mentioned in the third paragraph of the article are, it's a safe bet they are not reputable linguists... [[User:AnonMoos|AnonMoos]] ([[User talk:AnonMoos|talk]]) 18:53, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
The adjective "sweet" takes on a different meaning in the 4th line of the poem which is completely lost in the translation.
This is somewhat creepy and a terrible example of E-Prime. Perhaps there is a better translation of this? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/24.12.88.141|24.12.88.141]] ([[User talk:24.12.88.141|talk]]) 06:44, 11 March 2011 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:I thought so too. Besides the poem is very trivial. A more difficult challenge would be this famous sentence from the King James Bible, Romans Chapter 13: "For there is no power but of God: the powers that be are ordained of God." [[User:Borock|Borock]] ([[User talk:Borock|talk]]) 09:10, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
::Religious texts often suffer from an excess of "is". [[User:Sicherman|Sicherman]] ([[User talk:Sicherman|talk]]) 03:34, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
::Jehovah's Witnesses appear to have already gone halfway to E' on this passage in their formal-equivalent [[New World Translation]]: "for there is no authority except by God; the existing authorities stand placed in their relative positions by God." ([http://www.jw.org/en/publications/bible/nwt/books/romans/13/ Romans 13:1, NWT]) Change the first words to "for no authority exists" to complete the translation. --[[User:Damian Yerrick|Damian Yerrick]] ([[User talk:Damian Yerrick|talk]]) 16:31, 6 October 2013 (UTC)
:::The comparison with the NWT in the article gave the appearance that the NWT takes a similar approach throughout that volume, which is not the case. I have therefore removed the comparison. The examples provided in the article already make the point.--[[User:Jeffro77|<span style='color:#365F91'>'''Jeffro'''</span><span style='color:#FFC000'>''77''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jeffro77|talk]]) 08:47, 18 December 2013 (UTC)


:Huh? There an extensive section "Criticisms". I added this to the lede. (BTW, the references of kins "third paragraph" are not very good. For example, I've just moved the 3rd para out of the lede as an unnecessary detail.) [[User:Staszek Lem|Staszek Lem]] ([[User talk:Staszek Lem|talk]]) 19:41, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
== More examples ==


::"Some support it, some criticize it" is fine as far as it goes -- but as I said, it doesn't really address the fact that that E-prime is about language, while scholars in the field of the scientific study of language (linguistics) overwhelmingly do not find it of much interest or usefulness (insofar as they've even heard of it, which many wouldn't have, because it's so remote from what they're mainly concerned with in their day-to-day work). Robin Lakoff is a somewhat well-known linguist; I don't recognize the other names. It would be nice to have more material which is not sourced to General Semantics publications... [[User:AnonMoos|AnonMoos]] ([[User talk:AnonMoos|talk]]) 23:25, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
I would like to ask that more examples be added. Specifically for the Examples section to be integrated with the "Different functions of "to be"" section, to provide an example of each.


do you have any updates on this yourself, anon?
[[User:Fulldecent|Full Decent]] ([[User talk:Fulldecent|talk]]) 02:00, 21 October 2013 (UTC)


also, why do you give this "scholars grading" so much importance, anyway?
== Arabic ==
i personally believe that pure logic beats scholarship any time, any where. 😁 [[User:Cregox|cregox]] ([[User talk:Cregox|talk]]) 01:14, 8 October 2021 (UTC)


== i am depressed because ==
Arabic does have a verb 'to be' in the present tense - yakuun (يَكُون)
It is not used in the same way as in English of course. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/82.47.182.20|82.47.182.20]] ([[User talk:82.47.182.20|talk]]) 12:45, 26 March 2014 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


i wonder why the psychological effect compared 2 completely different things on that study.
== What about "maybe"? ==


"instead of saying i am depressed" differs a lot when replacing it for "i feel depressed when". unless we include "because" in there!
According to the ''Online Etymology Dictionary'', "maybe" comes (unsurprisingly) from "''(it) may be''."[http://etymonline.com/index.php?search=maybe] Should we maybe add "maybe" to the article, or does "maybe" maybe qualify for exception according to an authoritative source? --[[User:DigitalBluster|DigitalBluster]] ([[User talk:DigitalBluster|talk]]) 19:06, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
:Good thing you mentioned 'an authoritative source'. There is a wikipedia policy [[WP:RS]] about this. According to it, you may add anything that makes sense, provided it is discussed in authoritative sources and you provide a foootnote to it. [[User:Staszek Lem|Staszek Lem]] ([[User talk:Staszek Lem|talk]]) 21:25, 23 June 2014 (UTC)


anyone knows why? [[User:Cregox|cregox]] ([[User talk:Cregox|talk]]) 01:21, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
== Change to Bible example ==
:Well, yeah. I mean that is kind of the point, to make a subtle change in the effect of the statement. [[User:Herostratus|Herostratus]] ([[User talk:Herostratus|talk]]) 03:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)


== Explanation needing in asymmetrical relations ==
Attempting to fulfill a recent [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=E-Prime&diff=614148509&oldid=612447312 citation request], I found numerous [http://www.generalsemantics.org/the-general-semantics-learning-center/applications-of-general-semantics/the-new-american-standard-bible-in-e-prime/ excerpts from the New American Standard Bible, rendered into E-Prime by Dr. David F. Maas]. These do not include Romans 13:1, which was used as an example here. I went ahead and changed the example (I chose a verse from the [[Sermon on the Mount]], just because), which also meant changing the original from the King James. If anyone objects, well, ''you know what to do''. --[[User:DigitalBluster|DigitalBluster]] ([[User talk:DigitalBluster|talk]]) 07:16, 24 June 2014 (UTC)
What is followint text supposed to mean: """To be statements convey not only identity but also asymmetrical relations ("X heights more than Y"); negation ("A differs from B"); location ("Another castle contains the princess"); auxiliary ("He goes to the store") etc., forms that would also have to be excluded.""" at #Criticisms <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/87.116.165.130|87.116.165.130]] ([[User talk:87.116.165.130#top|talk]]) 18:24, 13 September 2023 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:Good job. Now, how about fixing the 'A in W' example? By the way, these examples are a good demonstration how, despite good intentions, e-prime often actually messes with the intention of the phrase rather than fixes it: while the "kingdom" part is OK, the "blessing" part is screwed, if someone wants to dive deeply into theology. [[User:Staszek Lem|Staszek Lem]] ([[User talk:Staszek Lem|talk]]) 20:54, 24 June 2014 (UTC)

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Expressing “the film was good”

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The lead states that “the film was good” could not be expressed under E-prime. What about “I considered it a good film”? Or does that contain a contracted “to be”—“I considered it [to be] a good film”? Either way, it may be worth mentioning in the lead. —174.141.182.82 (talk) 13:48, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No. the real trick that your sentence contains "I", i.e., it is a rephrasing with significantly changed structure of the sentence. You will find similar example in the article, e.g, "I see this film as good". Staszek Lem (talk) 23:37, 25 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"Some people experience the film as good". Randy Kryn 10:45, 26 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I think it's more that an utterance such as "the film was good" has the form of a universal objective statement about the world, whereas there is no doubt that "I considered it a good film" is an existential subjective statement about a personal taste. Sean O'Halpin 20:28, 7 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Yep. This is a good illustration of why E-Prime-Prime, which our article does not seem to cover, is so much more practical: "It was a good film to me" and "I thought it was a good film" are equivalent and much more natural. In E-Prime-Prime it's permissible to use "the to be of identity" if it is explicitly qualified as a subjective perception. Whether derived directly from E-Prime-Prime or not, this is a big factor in nonviolent communication and several other approaches.  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  05:06, 26 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Nope. The correct equivalent, albeit clumsy, is "The film exhibited the property of goodness". And this zen-like trick creates loopholes in many arguments about e-prime; in particular, my version simply sweeps under the carpet the problem of universal vs. subjective. Staszek Lem (talk) 02:30, 24 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

reasoning

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"To be" is the language of observation, tending toward abbreviated observation, fueling ambiguity/confusion, often fueling conflict. Also tendinf toward judgment (right/wrong), fueling the fire of authoritarianism (domination/submission, reward/punishment). Rtdrury (talk) 18:29, 3 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Self-e-primed

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Please don't try to rewrite this article in e-prime. This will be invariably reverted, because this sub-language is not commonly accepted. Staszek Lem (talk) 20:57, 11 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

i find this utterly sad... how little humour wikipedia have.

would it stay alive if done in the talk page? i wouldn't do it, anyway! 🤣 cregox (talk) 01:16, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

An important issue which is not really discussed directly

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The article doesn't very directly confront the fact that linguistic scholars do not find E-Prime to be of much interest or usefulness (insofar as they've even heard of it). For academic linguists, E-Prime is another in a long line of ideas arrived at by non-linguists (Basic English is another) which does not have much validity from a linguistic point of view. Whoever the "scholars" mentioned in the third paragraph of the article are, it's a safe bet they are not reputable linguists... AnonMoos (talk) 18:53, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Huh? There an extensive section "Criticisms". I added this to the lede. (BTW, the references of kins "third paragraph" are not very good. For example, I've just moved the 3rd para out of the lede as an unnecessary detail.) Staszek Lem (talk) 19:41, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"Some support it, some criticize it" is fine as far as it goes -- but as I said, it doesn't really address the fact that that E-prime is about language, while scholars in the field of the scientific study of language (linguistics) overwhelmingly do not find it of much interest or usefulness (insofar as they've even heard of it, which many wouldn't have, because it's so remote from what they're mainly concerned with in their day-to-day work). Robin Lakoff is a somewhat well-known linguist; I don't recognize the other names. It would be nice to have more material which is not sourced to General Semantics publications... AnonMoos (talk) 23:25, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

do you have any updates on this yourself, anon?

also, why do you give this "scholars grading" so much importance, anyway? i personally believe that pure logic beats scholarship any time, any where. 😁 cregox (talk) 01:14, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

i am depressed because

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i wonder why the psychological effect compared 2 completely different things on that study.

"instead of saying i am depressed" differs a lot when replacing it for "i feel depressed when". unless we include "because" in there!

anyone knows why? cregox (talk) 01:21, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Well, yeah. I mean that is kind of the point, to make a subtle change in the effect of the statement. Herostratus (talk) 03:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Explanation needing in asymmetrical relations

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What is followint text supposed to mean: """To be statements convey not only identity but also asymmetrical relations ("X heights more than Y"); negation ("A differs from B"); location ("Another castle contains the princess"); auxiliary ("He goes to the store") etc., forms that would also have to be excluded.""" at #Criticisms — Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.116.165.130 (talk) 18:24, 13 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]