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Emd6gfg (talk) 02:27, 4 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Frankly, this wholesale addition is not on its own an improvement. You've added multiple paragraphs without any inline citations, a long list of unexplained external links not in English, and the added paragraphs have not been edited for tone, brevity, links or usefulness. Per the template instructions: "Do not translate text that appears unreliable or low-quality. If possible, verify the text with references provided in the foreign-language article." For example, In accordance with the relatives who stated since the beginning that they knew and could tell the plane crashed at Chimborazo, it is there that the 59 victims of this tragic accident rest, and their families can now live in peace knowing the truth of what really happened that day is not a sentence that should appear on wikipedia as prose. It is possible that a portion of the added content might be useful, but if kept a significant edit is required. Echoedmyron (talk) 11:38, 4 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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 [[User:Emd6gfg|Emd6gfg]] ([[User talk:Emd6gfg|talk]]) 02:27, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
+:Frankly, this wholesale addition is not on its own an improvement. You've added multiple paragraphs without any inline citations, a long list of unexplained external links not in English, and the added paragraphs have not been edited for tone, brevity, links or usefulness. Per the template instructions: "Do not translate text that appears unreliable or low-quality. If possible, verify the text with references provided in the foreign-language article." For example, ''In accordance with the relatives who stated since the beginning that they knew and could tell the plane crashed at Chimborazo, it is there that the 59 victims of this tragic accident rest, and their families can now live in peace knowing the truth of what really happened that day'' is not a sentence that should appear on wikipedia as prose. It is possible that a portion of the added content might be useful, but if kept a significant edit is required. [[User:Echoedmyron|Echoedmyron]] ([[User talk:Echoedmyron|talk]]) 11:38, 4 March 2022 (UTC)