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|name = Straight Edge |
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|stylistic_origins = [[Hardcore punk]]<br>[[Crossover thrash]]<br>[[Washington, D.C. hardcore]] |
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|cultural_origins = Early-1980s [[Washington D.C]] |
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|instruments = [[Singing|Vocals]] - [[Electric guitar]] - [[Bass guitar|Bass]] - [[Drum kit|Drums]] |
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|popularity = Very low |
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|derivatives = [[Youth crew]] - [[Positive hardcore]] |
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I removed the infobox because I feel that this article was written from more of a social science prospective looking at straight edge as a subculture and less as an artistic genere. What do others think? --[[User:Guerillero|<font color="#0b0080">Guerillero</font>]] | [[User_talk:Guerillero|<font color="green">My Talk</font>]] 13:08, 20 March 2012 (UTC) |
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== So what is Straight edge? == |
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Is it a punk movement? A military movement? A religion? |
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I previously knew OF this straight edge thingy. I thought of it as just another American puritan movement. But since I never encountered it, other than the music, I never gave it much thought. Now decades later I read this and know not much more than what I did when I knew nothing. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/89.253.73.146|89.253.73.146]] ([[User talk:89.253.73.146|talk]]) 11:56, 29 April 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:It is a movement within the Hardcore Punk scene. --[[User:Guerillero|<font color="#0b0080">Guerillero</font>]] | [[User_talk:Guerillero|<font color="green">My Talk</font>]] 19:45, 6 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:Yeah, it is not affiliated with any one religion or military. Many straight edge people share common morals on certain things, but there is no formal political agenda either. On its own it is simply a choice to refrain from consuming certain things, just like vegetarianism. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 01:28, 7 May 2012 (UTC) |
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== Where it went? == |
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It seems today that straightedge is a term commonly used by emos and ravers ('scene kids'), who have little understanding of the origin of straightedge but brandish the orientation and/or the X to indicate their abstinence in otherwise drug-centered subcultures. Rave, for example, stresses the ideas of peace while still being quite enthusiastic about amphetamines, so it would be logical for some to go X. With Emo, Punk and Rave being more closely associated these days (with scene subculture and emo/rave cross bands like Blood On The Dance Floor) by the mainstream music industry, is this the fourth wave of X? --[[Special:Contributions/24.118.61.24|24.118.61.24]] ([[User talk:24.118.61.24|talk]]) 00:07, 10 December 2012 (UTC) |
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:Please read [[Wikipedia:Talk page guidelines]]. Talk pages are for discussing how to improve the article. '''"Article talk pages should not be used by editors as platforms for their personal views on a subject."''' [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 00:14, 10 December 2012 (UTC) |
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The article dates it back to the 80's - is there any actual reference material for this? Everything seems to be written in the 2010's claiming it existed in the 80's. The only 80's mention is actually a 2010's article saying a 80's song sung about vegetarianism. |
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== List of People That Follow a Straight Edge Lifestyle == |
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== Crass, Conflict, etc. == |
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Due to a mistake of capitalization, see [[Talk:Straight Edge]]. I think [[List of People That Follow a Straight Edge Lifestyle]] should be merged back to this article rather than exist standalone. <font face="copperplate gothic light">[[User:Chris troutman|<span style="color:#36454F">Chris Troutman</span>]] ([[User talk:Chris troutman|<span style="color:#36454F">talk</span>]])</font> 00:47, 18 April 2013 (UTC) |
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Veganism in punk music goes back to Crass in the late 1970s. According to members of the Swedish punk band, there is a huge difference between American and European straight edge. It was hyper political in Europe, veganism, feminism, etc. In the USA it was completely apolitical. Dennis Lyxzén of Refused said that in the USA it was a "life style patch" that you would put on when you were to be seen in public. |
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Discussion is now closed [[User:Black60dragon|<font color="black">'''Black'''</font><font color="red">'''Dragon'''</font>]] 00:22, 25 April 2013 (UTC) |
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There is always problems when you deal with radically different cultures like America and European. As a European I read things through secular eyes. I have no concept of religion. In the USA, everything is about religion. Maybe this should be divided into American and European straight edge, because much of the stuff mentioned makes no sense to a European. I guess it's the same the other way around. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/89.253.73.146|89.253.73.146]] ([[User talk:89.253.73.146#top|talk]]) 15:34, 2 April 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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{{Discussion top|1=The result was to '''Keep''' the two pages separate. The list has greatly expanded and no comment has been made here since the moment it was made-- |
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[[User:Black60dragon|<font color="black">'''Black'''</font><font color="red">'''Dragon'''</font>]] 00:21, 25 April 2013 (UTC)}} |
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Hi, I would like to discuss... |
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Crass were vegetarian. I don't know when or if they or individuals became vegan. Certain some, e.g. Steve Ignorant, weren't. Yeah, I know the comment's 4 years old but otherwise, it raises fair points I refer to below. --[[User:Danny Mamby|Danny Mamby]] ([[User talk:Danny Mamby|talk]]) 08:29, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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"List of People that follow a Straight Edge" stub article should have been created in the original Straight Edge article so that consensus could have been reached about creating a separate list. <font face="copperplate gothic light">[[User:Chris troutman|<span style="color:#36454F">Chris Troutman</span>]] ([[User talk:Chris troutman|<span style="color:#36454F">talk</span>]])</font> 00:22, 18 April 2013 (UTC) |
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== Origins of term == |
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Its a "stub" because I just created it and I have a life and dont want to add like a hundred people at once. They are many people that follow this lifestyle and could produce a big list, if people helped of course, but the article literally just started and should stay separate and not merge. This would make the Straight Edge page a list and not an article and would make it pretty long, which is unnecessary. This page should have a list section and then have a link to the list page I just made. Besides there are tons of list articles and they have to start out somewhere. So the page should stay how it is and everyone should help make it longer, I mean I barely scraped the list, just kinda added the more well known ones like Punk and Hetfield. [[User:Black60dragon|<font color="black">'''Black'''</font><font color="red">'''Dragon'''</font>]] 00:34, 18 April 2013 (UTC) |
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I read an interview with the “Godfather of Vegan Straight Edge”, Patrick “Rat” Poole[https://diyconspiracy.net/statement-tracing-the-roots-of-vegan-straight-edge/] and it says, |
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And if refs are a worry I can easily find them and add them in no prob. [[User:Black60dragon|<font color="black">'''Black'''</font><font color="red">'''Dragon'''</font>]] 00:36, 18 April 2013 (UTC) |
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"When was the first time someone used the term Vegan Straight Edge? What’s the world’s first vegan straight edge band and what’s the story of the bands you’ve been involved in prior to the birth of Vegan Reich / Statement? |
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I've moved the closed discussion back here for archival purposes as I am redirecting Talk:Straight '''E'''dge to this page so that this capital issue does not happen a third time. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) |
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Ha, well, if you read about [[Hardline (subculture)|Hardline]] on wikipedia, it states that I came up with the term Vegan Straight Edge. I’ve recently spoken to Sean Muttaqi ([[Vegan Reich]]) about this, and he confirms that it was me!" |
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== Some of you forgot something... == |
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There's a reference on the Hardline page, but not here. Poole's mention but not relating to this. |
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Prominent lyrics by Minor Threat themselves that were a major basis of the initial straight edge movement, (from the track Out of Step)-<br /> |
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"Listen,<br /> |
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this is no set of rules<br /> |
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I'm not telling you what to do<br /> |
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all i'm saying, is that i'm bringing up like three things<br /> |
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that are like so important to the whole world,<br /> |
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that i don't have to find, much importance in<br /> |
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because of these things, whether it's fucking or playing golf,<br /> |
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i feel that...<br /> |
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I can't keep up!"<br /> |
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"all i'm saying, is that i'm bringing up like three things"<br /> |
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"BRINGING UP LIKE THREE THINGS"<br /> |
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Earlier in the song Ian declares;<br /> |
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"(I) don't smoke<br /> |
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I don't drink<br /> |
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I don't fuck<br /> |
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At least I can fucking think"<br /> |
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Not smoking, not drinking, (presumabley drugs in general) and not having promiscuous sex were his own personal preferences.<br /> |
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Somehow I think things took a turn for the worse when some parade of dipshits started incorporating fascist(and/or)christianity.<br /> |
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So, I'm definitely altering this part from the beginning paragraph-<br /> |
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"While the common thread in all straight edge identity has always been the abstinence of alcohol, nicotine, and illegal drugs"<br /> |
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to:<br /> |
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"While the commonly expressed aspects in the majority of the straight edge subculture have been abstinence of alcohol, nicotine, and illegal drugs"<br /> |
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I'm fairly dissappointed in whomever decided to condone that bit of the article. Very misinformative when declaring those kind of thoughtless absolutes. |
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As an aside, I find both topics, especially the Hardline one, a little problematic in the way they/it portray the ideas as a "gang code" or rigidly adhered to identity required to be a member of something (that basically didn't exist beyond an op-ed in a 'zine), as if it was [[Mean Girls]]. It get worse when claims like "influenced by Islam" are included. I'm guessing they were written by people who weren't alive at the time? --[[User:Danny Mamby|Danny Mamby]] ([[User talk:Danny Mamby|talk]]) 08:17, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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:How is it a thoughtless absolute when it's backed up by the research that has been sited? It looks clear to me that it's the one part that is absolute and agreed throughout, unlike veganism, promiscuity, etc. How would you define the universally held beliefs? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/96.241.75.163|96.241.75.163]] ([[User talk:96.241.75.163|talk]]) 04:04, 22 November 2013 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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== Political ideology == |
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Per recommendation from Damien Linnane, raising the issue of what seems like unnecessary muddling in the second paragraph. The sentence "some left-leaning activists" is vague and selectively biased. There is nothing to suggest some right-leaning activists don't view straight edge with hostility. In fact, straight edge as a reaction to the status quo puts it in contrast with the right-wing's adherence to the status quo. The inclusion of the sentence also gives the false impression that straight edge isn't generally left-leaning. Haenfler calls straight edgers "(usually) progressive."<ref>https://haenfler.sites.grinnell.edu/subcultures-and-scenes/straight-edge/</ref> To avoid causing misperception, I believe the sentence should be removed or replaced with a more precise statement on the political identity of straight edgers. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/2601:600:9180:6AD0:91D5:49C7:DA8:CED0|2601:600:9180:6AD0:91D5:49C7:DA8:CED0]] ([[User talk:2601:600:9180:6AD0:91D5:49C7:DA8:CED0#top|talk]]) 07:15, 16 January 2023 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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Per [[WP:UNDUE]] a whole top level section on vegan straight edge is unnecessary. The section needs to be forked back into the 90s section with less puffery. While some bands of the era were hardline or krishna, it wasn't a majority. --[[User:Guerillero|<font color="#0b0080">Guerillero</font>]] | [[User_talk:Guerillero|<font color="green">Parlez Moi</font>]] 21:09, 7 February 2016 (UTC) |
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:Actually this whole article needs to be written from the ground up. --[[User:Guerillero|<font color="#0b0080">Guerillero</font>]] | [[User_talk:Guerillero|<font color="green">Parlez Moi</font>]] 21:10, 7 February 2016 (UTC) |
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Older references to validate.
[edit]The article dates it back to the 80's - is there any actual reference material for this? Everything seems to be written in the 2010's claiming it existed in the 80's. The only 80's mention is actually a 2010's article saying a 80's song sung about vegetarianism.
Crass, Conflict, etc.
[edit]Veganism in punk music goes back to Crass in the late 1970s. According to members of the Swedish punk band, there is a huge difference between American and European straight edge. It was hyper political in Europe, veganism, feminism, etc. In the USA it was completely apolitical. Dennis Lyxzén of Refused said that in the USA it was a "life style patch" that you would put on when you were to be seen in public.
There is always problems when you deal with radically different cultures like America and European. As a European I read things through secular eyes. I have no concept of religion. In the USA, everything is about religion. Maybe this should be divided into American and European straight edge, because much of the stuff mentioned makes no sense to a European. I guess it's the same the other way around. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.253.73.146 (talk) 15:34, 2 April 2017 (UTC)
Crass were vegetarian. I don't know when or if they or individuals became vegan. Certain some, e.g. Steve Ignorant, weren't. Yeah, I know the comment's 4 years old but otherwise, it raises fair points I refer to below. --Danny Mamby (talk) 08:29, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
Origins of term
[edit]I read an interview with the “Godfather of Vegan Straight Edge”, Patrick “Rat” Poole[1] and it says,
"When was the first time someone used the term Vegan Straight Edge? What’s the world’s first vegan straight edge band and what’s the story of the bands you’ve been involved in prior to the birth of Vegan Reich / Statement?
Ha, well, if you read about Hardline on wikipedia, it states that I came up with the term Vegan Straight Edge. I’ve recently spoken to Sean Muttaqi (Vegan Reich) about this, and he confirms that it was me!"
There's a reference on the Hardline page, but not here. Poole's mention but not relating to this.
As an aside, I find both topics, especially the Hardline one, a little problematic in the way they/it portray the ideas as a "gang code" or rigidly adhered to identity required to be a member of something (that basically didn't exist beyond an op-ed in a 'zine), as if it was Mean Girls. It get worse when claims like "influenced by Islam" are included. I'm guessing they were written by people who weren't alive at the time? --Danny Mamby (talk) 08:17, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
Political ideology
[edit]Per recommendation from Damien Linnane, raising the issue of what seems like unnecessary muddling in the second paragraph. The sentence "some left-leaning activists" is vague and selectively biased. There is nothing to suggest some right-leaning activists don't view straight edge with hostility. In fact, straight edge as a reaction to the status quo puts it in contrast with the right-wing's adherence to the status quo. The inclusion of the sentence also gives the false impression that straight edge isn't generally left-leaning. Haenfler calls straight edgers "(usually) progressive."[1] To avoid causing misperception, I believe the sentence should be removed or replaced with a more precise statement on the political identity of straight edgers. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:600:9180:6AD0:91D5:49C7:DA8:CED0 (talk) 07:15, 16 January 2023 (UTC)
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