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Notification: G13 speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos (AFCH)
 
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== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos|Prince Estifanos Matewos]] (January 28) ==
<div style="border: solid 1px #FCC; background-color: #F8EEBC; padding: 0.5em 1em; color: #000; margin: 1.5em; width: 90%;"> [[File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svg|50px|left]]Your recent article submission to [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for Creation]] has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time.<nowiki> </nowiki>The reason left by Greenman was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in [[Wikipedia:Writing better articles#Information style and tone|the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article]]. Entries should be written from a [[Wikipedia:Neutral point of view|neutral point of view]], and should refer to a range of [[Wikipedia:Reliable sources|independent, reliable, published sources]]. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch#Puffery|peacock terms]] that promote the subject.|}}<!--
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-->&nbsp;The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=Claims made in the personal life section are only sourced to a PR company.

[[WP:External link|External links]] should also be removed or converted to [[WP:IC|inline citations]] where appropriate.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit ''after they have been resolved''.
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* If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to [[Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos]] and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
* If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and [[Wikipedia:Criteria for speedy deletion#G13. Abandoned Drafts and Articles for creation submissions|may be deleted]].
* If you need any assistance, or have experienced any [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Scam warning|untoward behavior]] associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the <span class="plainlinks">[//en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Prince_Estifanos_Matewos '''Articles for creation help desk''']</span>, on the <span class="plainlinks">[//en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Greenman&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Prince_Estifanos_Matewos '''reviewer's talk page''']</span> or use [[Wikipedia:IRC help disclaimer|Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors]].

[[User:Greenman|Greenman]] ([[User talk:Greenman|talk]]) 06:13, 28 January 2024 (UTC)</div><!--Template:AfC decline-->

:This is my third re-submission. I have revised the version to maintain a neutral tone, avoids promotional language, and replaces external links with inline citations for a more encyclopedic style, as you noted. [[User:Asphalt Redd|Asphalt Redd]] ([[User talk:Asphalt Redd#top|talk]]) 20:24, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
:Please also note that all the sources are credible, as they are mostly from the African Union agencies, and notable media houses in Africa. If there is a particular source which is questionable to you, kindly note it and I will correct accordingly.
:Thank you [[User:Asphalt Redd|Asphalt Redd]] ([[User talk:Asphalt Redd#top|talk]]) 20:26, 28 January 2024 (UTC)

== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos|Prince Estifanos Matewos]] (January 29) ==
<div style="border: solid 1px #FCC; background-color: #F8EEBC; padding: 0.5em 1em; color: #000; margin: 1.5em; width: 90%;"> [[File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svg|50px|left]]Your recent article submission to [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for Creation]] has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time.<nowiki> </nowiki>The reasons left by 331dot were:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission's references do not show that the subject [[Wikipedia:Notability|qualifies for a Wikipedia article]]—that is, they do not show ''significant'' coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in ''published'', [[Wikipedia:Reliable sources|''reliable'']], [[Wikipedia:No_original_research#Secondary|''secondary'']] sources that are ''[[Wikipedia:Independent sources|independent]]'' of the subject (see the [[Wikipedia:Notability (people)|guidelines on the notability of people]]). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see [[Help:Referencing_for_beginners#Inserting_a_reference|technical help]] and learn about [[Wikipedia:Common sourcing mistakes (notability)|mistakes to avoid]] when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}}<!--
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-->&nbsp;The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=Prior reviews must remain on the draft until it is accepted. Any article about this person must summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage choose to say about them, showing how they are notable.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit ''after they have been resolved''.
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* If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to [[Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos]] and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
* If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and [[Wikipedia:Criteria for speedy deletion#G13. Abandoned Drafts and Articles for creation submissions|may be deleted]].
* If you need any assistance, or have experienced any [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Scam warning|untoward behavior]] associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the <span class="plainlinks">[//en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Prince_Estifanos_Matewos '''Articles for creation help desk''']</span>, on the <span class="plainlinks">[//en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=User_talk:331dot&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Prince_Estifanos_Matewos '''reviewer's talk page''']</span> or use [[Wikipedia:IRC help disclaimer|Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors]].

[[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 11:14, 29 January 2024 (UTC)</div><!--Template:AfC decline-->

==Concern regarding [[Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos]]==
[[File:Information.svg|25px|alt=Information icon]] Hello, Asphalt Redd. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that [[Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos]], a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months [[WP:G13|may be deleted]], so if you wish to retain the page, please [[Special:EditPage/Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos|edit it]] again&#32;or [[WP:USERFY|request]] that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can [[Wikipedia:Requests for undeletion/G13|request it be undeleted]] so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. [[User:FireflyBot|FireflyBot]] ([[User talk:FireflyBot|talk]]) 12:05, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

==Your draft article, [[Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos]]==
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Hello, Asphalt Redd. It has been over six months since you last edited the [[WP:AFC|Articles for Creation]] submission or [[WP:Drafts|draft]] page you started, "[[Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos|Prince Estifanos Matewos]]".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia [[WP:mainspace|mainspace]], the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply {{edit|Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos|edit the submission}} and remove the {{tlc|db-afc}}, {{tlc|db-draft}}, or {{tlc|db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at [[WP:REFUND/G13|this link]]. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! <!-- Template:Db-draft-notice --> [[User:CptViraj|CptViraj]] ([[User talk:CptViraj|talk]]) 12:33, 29 July 2024 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 12:33, 29 July 2024

Your submission at Articles for creation: Prince Estifanos Matewos (January 23)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheBritinator was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
TheBritinator (talk) 17:08, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. I have revised the version, and replaced the bare URLs with formatted citations. I hope this will make the references more reliable for reviewers to consider adding the profile of this person of notoriety. Asphalt Redd (talk) 22:25, 24 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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Hello, Asphalt Redd! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! TheBritinator (talk) 17:08, 23 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Prince Estifanos Matewos (January 28)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Greenman (talk) 06:13, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is my third re-submission. I have revised the version to maintain a neutral tone, avoids promotional language, and replaces external links with inline citations for a more encyclopedic style, as you noted. Asphalt Redd (talk) 20:24, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please also note that all the sources are credible, as they are mostly from the African Union agencies, and notable media houses in Africa. If there is a particular source which is questionable to you, kindly note it and I will correct accordingly.
Thank you Asphalt Redd (talk) 20:26, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Prince Estifanos Matewos (January 29)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by 331dot were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
331dot (talk) 11:14, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Information icon Hello, Asphalt Redd. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Prince Estifanos Matewos, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 12:05, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Asphalt Redd. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Prince Estifanos Matewos".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! CptViraj (talk) 12:33, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]