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Dost Mohammad Khan was a Pathan/Pakhtun speaker and Ahmed Shah Massoud was a TAJIK/Persian speaker, they are not related in any way. Please correct this mistake as it leads to disinformation for students/readers wanting to learn about history. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zaryab Ayyub Khan (talk • contribs) 21:36, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Would like to add a reliable citation for the page.

The line "A street in New Delhi, India, is named after Ahmad Shah Massoud. It is the first time that such an honour has been extended to a leader from that country as part of close ties between Afghanistan and India.[citation needed]" is missing the citation as of now. Would like to add a source for this from MEA, India(Link) Rupz0 (talk) 10:33, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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A council led the foundation and a jury, consisting of impartial university lecturers, decided on the works of artists.

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A council led the foundation and a jury, consisting of impartial university lecturers, and decided on the works of artists. Alexander M Baker (talk) 06:45, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: The grammar is correct. Leaving out the parenthetical phrase "consisting of impartial university lecturers", the sentence simply reads "A council led the foundation and a jury decided on the works of artists". Liu1126 (talk) 18:13, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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A street in New Delhi, India, is named after Ahmad Shah Massoud. It is the first time that such an honour has been extended to a leader from that country as part of the close ties between Afghanistan and India.^[1] Rupz0 (talk) 07:24, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 04:39, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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 == Parent information is incorrect ==
-Dost Mohammad Khan was a Pathan/Pakhtun speaker and Ahmed Shah Massoud was a TAJIK/Persian speaker, they are not related in any way. Please correct this mistake as it leads to disinformation for students/readers wanting to learn about history.
+Dost Mohammad Khan was a Pathan/Pakhtun speaker and Ahmed Shah Massoud was a TAJIK/Persian speaker, they are not related in any way. Please correct this mistake as it leads to disinformation for students/readers wanting to learn about history. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Zaryab Ayyub Khan|Zaryab Ayyub Khan]] ([[User talk:Zaryab Ayyub Khan#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Zaryab Ayyub Khan|contribs]]) 21:36, 2 September 2021 (UTC)</small>
+== Would like to add a reliable citation for the page. ==
-== Semi-protected edit request on 12 May 2022 ==
+The line "A street in New Delhi, India, is named after Ahmad Shah Massoud. It is the first time that such an honour has been extended to a leader from that country as part of close ties between Afghanistan and India.[citation needed]" is missing the citation as of now. Would like to add a source for this from MEA, India([https://eoi.gov.in/kabul/?0208?sa021 Link]) [[User:Rupz0|Rupz0]] ([[User talk:Rupz0|talk]]) 10:33, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
+== Semi-protected edit request on 12 May 2024 ==
+{{Edit semi-protected|Ahmad Shah Massoud|answered=yes}}
+A council led the foundation and a jury, consisting of impartial university lecturers, decided on the works of artists.
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+A council led the foundation and a jury, consisting of impartial university lecturers, and decided on the works of artists. [[User:Alexander M Baker|Alexander M Baker]] ([[User talk:Alexander M Baker|talk]]) 06:45, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
+:[[File:Red information icon with gradient background.svg|20px|link=|alt=]] '''Not done:'''<!-- Template:ESp --> The grammar is correct. Leaving out the parenthetical phrase {{tq|"consisting of impartial university lecturers"}}, the sentence simply reads {{tq|"A council led the foundation and a jury decided on the works of artists"}}. [[User:Liu1126|Liu1126]] ([[User talk:Liu1126|talk]]) 18:13, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
+== Semi-protected edit request on 27 June 2024 ==
 {{edit semi-protected|Ahmad Shah Massoud|answered=yes}}
+A street in New Delhi, India, is named after Ahmad Shah Massoud. It is the first time that such an honour has been extended to a leader from that country as part of the close ties between Afghanistan and India.<ref>https://eoi.gov.in/kabul/?0208?sa021</ref> [[User:Rupz0|Rupz0]] ([[User talk:Rupz0|talk]]) 07:24, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
-Ahmad shah massoud was a warlord and terrorist. NOT A MILITARY GENERAL [[Special:Contributions/70.30.32.156|70.30.32.156]] ([[User talk:70.30.32.156|talk]]) 00:46, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
-:[[File:Red question icon with gradient background.svg|20px|link=|alt=]] '''Not done:''' it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a [[Wikipedia:Reliable sources|reliable source]] if appropriate.<!-- Template:ESp --> [[User:ScottishFinnishRadish|ScottishFinnishRadish]] ([[User talk:ScottishFinnishRadish|talk]]) 01:31, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
-:Wikipedia is not a place for you to share your political opinions or beliefs
-:* [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:SOAP&redirect=no WP:SOAP]
-:[[User:Nonamesoda|Nonamesoda]] ([[User talk:Nonamesoda|talk]]) 00:53, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
+:{{done}}<!-- Template:ESp --> [[User:AlphaBetaGamma|ABG]] <small> ([[User talk:AlphaBetaGamma|Talk/Report any mistakes here]]) </small> 04:39, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
-== Ahmad shah massuod ==
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-Ahmad shah massuod [[Special:Contributions/103.115.14.4|103.115.14.4]] ([[User talk:103.115.14.4|talk]]) 14:50, 27 January 2023 (UTC)