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==No Mention of the French?==
I find strange the fact that France is not even mentioned in this page. Starting with the "Livre de Taille" (1292) to the "Académie d'Armes de France" 1569, France has a long history of swordsmanship. I am not confident enough of my skills as a writer and amateur historian to create a French section on this page but it certainly would have its place. Cordialement, Renaud. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/92.133.186.53|92.133.186.53]] ([[User talk:92.133.186.53|talk]]) 21:21, 5 March 2013 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

==Untitled==
As you may have noticed, the main article has been revamped to include swordsmanship on a global scale. To provide this information without a massive article, I think it would be best to follow the [[WP:SS]] type of page design. This will allow us to provide succinct general information with wikilinks to more in depth and detailed articles that deal with a specific subsections of swordsmanship, be it swords themselves, schools, masters, or the tactical deployment of swordsmen in battle.


Because of this revamp, I have added an archive page and cleared the old talk page. As far as I'm concerned, the article is experiencing a rebirth, so the talk page needs a new beginning as well. Here it is! --<b>[[User:Xiliquiern|<span style="color:#d20000;">xiliquiern</span>]]</b>[[User talk:Xiliquiern|<span style="color:Black;"><sup>talk</sup></span>]] 16:27, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
==merge?==
see [[Talk:European dueling sword]]. [[User:Dbachmann|dab]] <small>[[User_talk:Dbachmann|('''&#5839;''')]]</small> 16:06, 13 May 2005 (UTC)


== European Section ==
==list==
This section has been pretty heavily rewritten, but I think a few more important links could be added. In the mean time, I'd like if someone would verify my edits. I don't want to have any mistakes, big or small, made in the chronology or subject of the article. Thanks! --<b>[[User:Xiliquiern|<span style="color:#d20000;">xiliquiern</span>]]</b>[[User talk:Xiliquiern|<span style="color:Black;"><sup>talk</sup></span>]] 20:12, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
the "list of swordsmen" seems a bit arbitrary, without any context. Any fencer may be considered a swordsman, at the very least, the list should be organized by period or tradition. [[User:Dbachmann|dab]] <small>[[User_talk:Dbachmann|('''&#5839;''')]]</small> 14:05, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)
:Yeah that should probably be its own article with at most a link in the see also section of this article. - [[User:Taxman|Taxman]] <sup><small>[[User talk:Taxman|Talk]]</sup></small> 17:19, Jun 9, 2005 (UTC)


:You might should consider breaking the Modern section of European swordmanship into Classical and Modern? Great work on the article![[User:Ranp|Ranp]] 22:20, 2 November 2006 (UTC)
I guess that's true. It is quite arbitrary. I thought I was doing a favor to merge Swordsmen based on suggestions, but now it does seem odd. Please do what you think it should be. - Aree


::Thanks for the vote of confidence! Breaking up the Modern section probably wouldn't be a bad idea. What would you think of subsections: Classical, Historical, Sport? That way the big three modern western ambitions each have their own little section? - <b>[[User:Xiliquiern|<span style="color:#d20000;">xiliquiern</span>]]</b>[[User talk:Xiliquiern|<span style="color:Black;"><sup>talk</sup></span>]] 22:35, 2 November 2006 (UTC)
no, I quite agree with the merge. The list was out of place even before. I'll just remove it for now, we have categories for that (lists only add something if they are sorted or annotated in some way). [[User:Dbachmann|dab]] <small>[[User_talk:Dbachmann|('''&#5839;''')]]</small> 09:36, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)


I'm not going to change anything, but I would like to point out that the Roman system of fighting with the gladius was fairly balanced between the cut and the thrust. That whole bit about a thrusting sword is a bit of a myth...
I agree with [[User:Dbachmann|dab]]. Just make sure all those articles are in a sane category. If not, it's no waste to create 'list of swordsman' as an article. - [[User:Taxman|Taxman]] <sup><small>[[User talk:Taxman|Talk]]</sup></small> 12:31, Jun 10, 2005 (UTC)
-Jeff <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Jmclark56|Jmclark56]] ([[User talk:Jmclark56|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Jmclark56|contribs]]) 09:55, 18 December 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


I don't think Romans brought widescale usage of the sword to Europe; I think it was already there. Mycenaean grave site have tons of swords, as well as Homer writing of heros with swords. Egyptian reliefs show them, as well as their enemies using sword. The ancient Celts used swords, and of course Rome only started using the Gladius after they had been fighting in Spain, before which, they probably used another type of sword. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/170.173.0.16|170.173.0.16]] ([[User talk:170.173.0.16|talk]]) 23:19, 17 July 2013 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
== Two Weapon Fighting ==


== Japanese Section ==
this article lacks the idea of havin a sword in each hand
[[User:Dudtz|Dudtz]] 8/5/05 1:26 Pm EST


I'll see what I can do about this and the Other Asian section - I might be able to dig up a citable blurb or two about Southeast Asian swordsmanship. Just saying that I'm on board. [[User:Kensai Max|Kensai Max]] 16:18, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
== Wiki contradictions ==


It is slower to draw a katana, from the blade down position. The art of Iaijutsu required a blade up draw, because it was fastest. There is a cultural aspect here. Blade down is war, if you came into another person's presence with your blades down, it was almost a threat of violence. However, if you came into their presence with the blades up...it was neutral...and easier for the iaijutsu draw. I will try to source this asap. [[User:Khallus Maximus|Khallus Maximus]] ([[User talk:Khallus Maximus|talk]]) 21:44, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
The Zweihander section of the article, when discussing historical use is inconsistant with the [[Zweihander]] article.


== Pacific/Philipino Section ==
It is my personal belief that the Goliath manuscript does not infact protray zweihanders but longswords that are illustrated in a distored way. And as far as I know the historical fencing community agrees with my view.
I think this should be added in. I am particularly interested in the notion that the Spanish and Portugues traders influenced the native fighting arts, which use two sticks (sometimes equal length, sometimes one long and one short). The sticks can be traded for blades at any time. It is theorized that the European sword arts of rapier and dagger influenced this. Even if this were not the case, historically documented evidence of possible "cross-pollination of sword arts" is appropriate for the article.


Also, I think there needs to be some mention of De Re Militari. This Roman document offers a primary reference to the training of Roman soldiers, including the use of the "pell".
Zweihanders are used more in the fashion of a polearm than a langschwert from my experiments with them.


[[User:38.98.155.132|38.98.155.132]] 22:39, 22 January 2007 (UTC)
I can cite a swordforum thread that supports my arguement if asked.


:Can someone please rewrite the "Filipino" section so that it sounds less like an advert? I would do it, but my edits are always reverted by a well-meaning but overzealous ''kabayan'' who thinks my edits is to "put down the Pinoy". So, ''di bale, kayo na lang.'' [[User:Gryphon Hall|Gryphon Hall]] ([[User talk:Gryphon Hall|talk]]) 23:37, 19 February 2010 (UTC)
:It is not a controversy over the use of any given sword. It is a matter of terminology what we want to call a Zweihander. If we take Tobler's definition, I think the Goliath swords would qualify; please collect as many citeable definitions of the term as you can and we can match them against each other here. I would be interested in the pike-formation-attacking "myth". Do we have any citation of the assertion, and do we have any citeable debunking of the assertion? [[User:Dbachmann|dab]] <small>[[User_talk:Dbachmann|('''&#5839;''')]]</small> 20:06, 27 January 2006 (UTC)


The Filipino section is terrible. I almost deleted it completely. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/67.49.155.226|67.49.155.226]] ([[User talk:67.49.155.226|talk]]) 01:07, 20 March 2010 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
== This article should be revamped: WMA Bias ==


==On its way to B class==
As it currently stands this article serves as a patchy overview of reconstructed Western Martial Arts. While that is all well and good, it needs to be in a seperate WMA article, not in an article on generalized swordsmanship.
Come on poeple - a few more in line references and some pictures and we have a B-class article. I made a small start.[[User:PRehse|Peter Rehse]] 12:42, 28 August 2007 (UTC)


==External Links==
The term "swordsmanship" applies equally to all sword arts, and it has a great deal of cultural baggage chained to it that should also be dealt with. The article should be revamped into an overview of the world's many traditions of swordsmanship (with links to more detailed pages), and perhaps their philosophical baggage. Claiming the "swordsmanship" article for reconstructed WMA is simply biased and unrepresentative of actual traditions of swordsmanship and the meaning of the word, and serves to give an incorrect impression to the inexperienced.
Since the article is now a more general one rather than specific to European swordsmanship - the external links need to reflect this. I think they should be trimmed right down. I am sure they can be found in more specific articles and besides there were too many.[[User:PRehse|Peter Rehse]] 13:33, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
[[User:Kensai Max|Kensai Max]] 23:07, 5 May 2006 (UTC)
:I assume that the term "swordsman" is mainly applied to western swordsmen, while other cultures have other terms such as [[kensei]]. Of course we should reference these, but I see no problem with having ''this'' article focus on western traditions. [[User:Dbachmann|dab]] <small>[[User_talk:Dbachmann|('''&#5839;''')]]</small> 20:37, 25 May 2006 (UTC)


== Korean? ==
:I see no reason why this article couldn't include both, and then perhaps be split later on? Or more asceticly pleasing might be to write the other articles seperately and incorporate them. I think that the article exists the way it does is because only WMA-ers have added to it. [[User:Sethwoodworth|Sethwoodworth]] 21:51, 25 May 2006 (UTC)
::sure, do go ahead and expand its scope. you can cry bias once people try to stop you from doing this. So far, I suppose just the most obvious connotation of the term is covered, it's the "principle of least surprise", meaning, the article covers what people are most likely to expect under this title. There is nothing to be said against a wider coverage of "non-western" swordsmanship at all as long as it is done informedly and encyclopedically. [[User:Dbachmann|dab]] <small>[[User_talk:Dbachmann|('''&#5839;''')]]</small> 20:18, 28 May 2006 (UTC)


I think the korean section is unappropiate, Korean swordsmanship is non-existant, Kumdo is a renamed version of the Japanese Kendo, which is an already washed down version of the also Japanese Kenjustu. Other Korean martial arts that are renamed versions of washed down versions of real Japanese martial arts include Hapkido[Aikido(Aikijujutsu)] and Yudo[Judo(Jujutsu)], a renamed version of an actual Japanese martial art could also be Taekwando(Karate). So, I request it to be removed or at least revised in order to include some truth. Good day. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/201.200.222.22|201.200.222.22]] ([[User talk:201.200.222.22|talk]]) 23:45, 26 September 2010 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:To be honest, to myself and to what I believe is the large majority of the general public, any person using a sword is considered a swordsman, and any sword art as swordsmanship. This also fits the exact, encyclopedic definition of the word.


:If there is a Korean martial art by the name of Kumdo, then however it arose or wherever it came from it deserves a mention. If the legacy behind the artform is important then so be it, then amend the entry in a [[WP:NPOV|neutral tone]]. Just removing the content is unhelpful, and will always be reverted. -- [[User:Roleplayer|'''<span style="font-family:Verdana;color:#006400">role</span>''']][[User talk:Roleplayer|'''''<sup><em style="font-family:Verdana;color:#9ACD32">player</em></sup>''''']] 13:55, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
:If we're only applying the English term to Western swordsmanship while reserving ethnic terms for various other styles, then there's really no reason to use it for the various Western styles either - there are more appropriate "ethnic" terms for them like Fencing and reconstructed German schwert-fechten or whatever. By constraining it to Western styles the term stops having meaning. There's too much outright WMA or heavily WMA-slanted stuff running around in the sword articles on Wiki, like [[Katana#Comparisons with European Swords]], which seems to have gotten even worse lately.


::Roleplayer, I agree with you - but I haven't restored the section for the simple reason that it was completely unreferenced. I support adding any sourceable, referenced content on Korean swordsmanship, though. <span style="white-space:nowrap">— [[User:Gavia immer|Gavia immer]] ([[User talk:Gavia immer|talk]])</span> 01:35, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
:I'll get to work on a rewrite. [[User:Kensai Max|Kensai Max]] 03:04, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
::well, yes, but what is a "sword"? it's a Germanic term, describing the western weapon. To include the katana in the term, for example, is rather an extension. Strictly speaking, a sword has two symmetrical edges and a point. The katana is often called a "sword" because of its similar cultural status, but it is not, technically, a sword. Common usage may trump this objection, though, and I don't mind too much. I would just like the "bias" template to be gone, either way. [[User:Dbachmann|dab]] <small>[[User_talk:Dbachmann|('''&#5839;''')]]</small> 19:36, 5 July 2006 (UTC)


:Made some changes. I agree that Kumdo is a derivative of Kendo, and so implied in a neutral manner. Though having studied both, I strongly disagree that Kumdo is just a renaming of Kendo, as the sets of techniques the arts have improved since the split are distinct; likewise for the techniques they preserve. I also disagree with the rest of 201.200.222.22's suggestions as they defy facts and common sense. 1) Hapkido and Aikido were founded respectively by Choi Yongsul and Ueshiba Morihei who both studied Daitoryu Aikijujutsu under Takeda Sokaku. Thus a) Hapkido is not a version of Aikido, and b) Hapkido is derived from Aikijujutsu, but it still remains to be justified how Hapkido is a washed down version unlike Aikido, with respect to Aikijujutsu. 2) Who claims that there is a distinct Korean equivalent of Judo? 3) Karate has Chinese roots and existed in Okinawa before its annexation by Japan. It wasn't introduced to Japan until the 1920s and was known to Korea in the 1930s at the latest. Thus it is questionable whether a) Karate is a real Japanese martial art, b) at the time of its founding, Taekwondo derived from something that could be called a real Japanese martial art, and c) all other non-Japanese arts Taekwondo lists as its roots are either false or insignificant. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/128.189.227.20|128.189.227.20]] ([[User talk:128.189.227.20|talk]]) 13:45, 21 July 2011 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
==Current state of the article==
This is a topic I think that deserves ''much'' more work than is visible here. A few questions, with numbers for easy referencing:
# '''Will the article continue to focus on western swordsmen and swordsmanship?''' This seems fitting, as noted above, because other cultural groups have entries devoted to their specific form of swordsmanship. A section within this article wikilinking and briefly discussing other forms would not be unwelcome, by any means, however.
:*The use of [[swordsmanship]] as a disambiguation page may also work well, with the content of this article becoming the culturally related [[European Swordsmanship]] or [[Western Swordsmanship]]. The disambiguation page could then provide broad information on swordsmanship and a list of other wiki articles that view other 'cultural' forms of swordsmanship.
# '''Are there articles that could be merged into this topic, or topics this article could be merged into?''' Currently, the article does not stress much about the actual role of swordsmanship, but rather the schools and well known teachers - information found in greater detail in other articles.
# '''Should the article become more socially and culturally focused? I.e., what constituted a "swordsman" in different time periods, what role they were likely to play in society, and what role in the military?''' It seems this expansion would provide more information on the idea of swordsmanship as an identity and less on the martial arts surrounding it, a topic covered in other sections.


== African Section ==
I think this article, in its current state, needs to be careful not to step on the toes of [[Western Martial Arts]], [[Historical European martial arts]], or [[Historical martial arts reconstruction]]. Instead, as I stated, I think the article should focus more on what being a swordsman meant aside from the obvious martial connotations. What was the life of a swordsman like? Did they geneally live richly? Connected to the nobility? Were they the 'average footsoldier' or did they usually hold more prestigious positions among the 'brass'? How did they train? Were there specific guilds or schools that were common? What was the implication of swordsmanship in law? Duels? Where men (or women?) with swords at their hip viewed immediately as 'special'? If so, in what way? Fear, respect, worry, honor? I believe these are the sort of questions this article should answer.--[[User:Xiliquiern|Xiliquiern]] 03:15, 30 October 2006 (UTC)
The North African portion of this section mentions a few swords, such as the ma, the kat, and an unnamed straight sword, all in addition to the khopesh. Internet sources for these swords are non-existant it seems, and there are no cited printed or academic sources either. Additionally, because of the incongruities of ancient egyptian transliteration, perhaps an inclusion of the original names referencing the Gardiner sign list could be included if somebody knew what they were. I'll keep digging on this, but I think somebody has some fairly specialized knowledge, or a book from a library somewhere that's not immediately obvious to me, and if that's the case this could take a while.
:this article should discuss swordsman''ship'', not swordsmen. "Swordsman" is not on official title or social class. I think it should be in [[WP:SS]], with sub-articles such as [[Gladiator]], [[German school of swordsmanship]], [[Italian school of swordsmanship]], [[George Silver]], [[Kenjutsu]] and the like. Obviously, worlds lie between a gladiator of Roman times and gentlemanly exercise in Silver's time, so that if you're going to ask questions regarding "how did a swordsman live", you need to sort answers by century and by country. [[User:Dbachmann|dab]] <small>[[User_talk:Dbachmann|('''&#5839;''')]]</small> 08:03, 30 October 2006 (UTC)
—[[User:Jason-derp86 |Jason-derp86]] ([[User talk:Jason-derp86|talk]]) 03:07, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
::The [[WP:SS]] was exactly what I was looking for when I mentioned that it may work as a disambiguation page leading to other swordsmanship pages. That would work very nicely. And if any social mention was to be made, chronological placement would be a very important note. -- [[User:Xiliquiern|Xiliquiern]] 13:55, 30 October 2006 (UTC)
:::so we agree :) you are most welcome to adopt this article! [[User:Dbachmann|dab]] <small>[[User_talk:Dbachmann|('''&#5839;''')]]</small> 15:11, 30 October 2006 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 04:54, 23 September 2024

No Mention of the French?

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I find strange the fact that France is not even mentioned in this page. Starting with the "Livre de Taille" (1292) to the "Académie d'Armes de France" 1569, France has a long history of swordsmanship. I am not confident enough of my skills as a writer and amateur historian to create a French section on this page but it certainly would have its place. Cordialement, Renaud. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.133.186.53 (talk) 21:21, 5 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Untitled

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As you may have noticed, the main article has been revamped to include swordsmanship on a global scale. To provide this information without a massive article, I think it would be best to follow the WP:SS type of page design. This will allow us to provide succinct general information with wikilinks to more in depth and detailed articles that deal with a specific subsections of swordsmanship, be it swords themselves, schools, masters, or the tactical deployment of swordsmen in battle.

Because of this revamp, I have added an archive page and cleared the old talk page. As far as I'm concerned, the article is experiencing a rebirth, so the talk page needs a new beginning as well. Here it is! --xiliquierntalk 16:27, 31 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

European Section

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This section has been pretty heavily rewritten, but I think a few more important links could be added. In the mean time, I'd like if someone would verify my edits. I don't want to have any mistakes, big or small, made in the chronology or subject of the article. Thanks! --xiliquierntalk 20:12, 31 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

You might should consider breaking the Modern section of European swordmanship into Classical and Modern? Great work on the article!Ranp 22:20, 2 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the vote of confidence! Breaking up the Modern section probably wouldn't be a bad idea. What would you think of subsections: Classical, Historical, Sport? That way the big three modern western ambitions each have their own little section? - xiliquierntalk 22:35, 2 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not going to change anything, but I would like to point out that the Roman system of fighting with the gladius was fairly balanced between the cut and the thrust. That whole bit about a thrusting sword is a bit of a myth... -Jeff —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jmclark56 (talkcontribs) 09:55, 18 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think Romans brought widescale usage of the sword to Europe; I think it was already there. Mycenaean grave site have tons of swords, as well as Homer writing of heros with swords. Egyptian reliefs show them, as well as their enemies using sword. The ancient Celts used swords, and of course Rome only started using the Gladius after they had been fighting in Spain, before which, they probably used another type of sword. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 170.173.0.16 (talk) 23:19, 17 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Japanese Section

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I'll see what I can do about this and the Other Asian section - I might be able to dig up a citable blurb or two about Southeast Asian swordsmanship. Just saying that I'm on board. Kensai Max 16:18, 10 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

It is slower to draw a katana, from the blade down position. The art of Iaijutsu required a blade up draw, because it was fastest. There is a cultural aspect here. Blade down is war, if you came into another person's presence with your blades down, it was almost a threat of violence. However, if you came into their presence with the blades up...it was neutral...and easier for the iaijutsu draw. I will try to source this asap. Khallus Maximus (talk) 21:44, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Pacific/Philipino Section

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I think this should be added in. I am particularly interested in the notion that the Spanish and Portugues traders influenced the native fighting arts, which use two sticks (sometimes equal length, sometimes one long and one short). The sticks can be traded for blades at any time. It is theorized that the European sword arts of rapier and dagger influenced this. Even if this were not the case, historically documented evidence of possible "cross-pollination of sword arts" is appropriate for the article.

Also, I think there needs to be some mention of De Re Militari. This Roman document offers a primary reference to the training of Roman soldiers, including the use of the "pell".

38.98.155.132 22:39, 22 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Can someone please rewrite the "Filipino" section so that it sounds less like an advert? I would do it, but my edits are always reverted by a well-meaning but overzealous kabayan who thinks my edits is to "put down the Pinoy". So, di bale, kayo na lang. Gryphon Hall (talk) 23:37, 19 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Filipino section is terrible. I almost deleted it completely. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.49.155.226 (talk) 01:07, 20 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

On its way to B class

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Come on poeple - a few more in line references and some pictures and we have a B-class article. I made a small start.Peter Rehse 12:42, 28 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Since the article is now a more general one rather than specific to European swordsmanship - the external links need to reflect this. I think they should be trimmed right down. I am sure they can be found in more specific articles and besides there were too many.Peter Rehse 13:33, 28 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Korean?

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I think the korean section is unappropiate, Korean swordsmanship is non-existant, Kumdo is a renamed version of the Japanese Kendo, which is an already washed down version of the also Japanese Kenjustu. Other Korean martial arts that are renamed versions of washed down versions of real Japanese martial arts include Hapkido[Aikido(Aikijujutsu)] and Yudo[Judo(Jujutsu)], a renamed version of an actual Japanese martial art could also be Taekwando(Karate). So, I request it to be removed or at least revised in order to include some truth. Good day. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 201.200.222.22 (talk) 23:45, 26 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

If there is a Korean martial art by the name of Kumdo, then however it arose or wherever it came from it deserves a mention. If the legacy behind the artform is important then so be it, then amend the entry in a neutral tone. Just removing the content is unhelpful, and will always be reverted. -- roleplayer 13:55, 28 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Roleplayer, I agree with you - but I haven't restored the section for the simple reason that it was completely unreferenced. I support adding any sourceable, referenced content on Korean swordsmanship, though. Gavia immer (talk) 01:35, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Made some changes. I agree that Kumdo is a derivative of Kendo, and so implied in a neutral manner. Though having studied both, I strongly disagree that Kumdo is just a renaming of Kendo, as the sets of techniques the arts have improved since the split are distinct; likewise for the techniques they preserve. I also disagree with the rest of 201.200.222.22's suggestions as they defy facts and common sense. 1) Hapkido and Aikido were founded respectively by Choi Yongsul and Ueshiba Morihei who both studied Daitoryu Aikijujutsu under Takeda Sokaku. Thus a) Hapkido is not a version of Aikido, and b) Hapkido is derived from Aikijujutsu, but it still remains to be justified how Hapkido is a washed down version unlike Aikido, with respect to Aikijujutsu. 2) Who claims that there is a distinct Korean equivalent of Judo? 3) Karate has Chinese roots and existed in Okinawa before its annexation by Japan. It wasn't introduced to Japan until the 1920s and was known to Korea in the 1930s at the latest. Thus it is questionable whether a) Karate is a real Japanese martial art, b) at the time of its founding, Taekwondo derived from something that could be called a real Japanese martial art, and c) all other non-Japanese arts Taekwondo lists as its roots are either false or insignificant. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.189.227.20 (talk) 13:45, 21 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

African Section

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The North African portion of this section mentions a few swords, such as the ma, the kat, and an unnamed straight sword, all in addition to the khopesh. Internet sources for these swords are non-existant it seems, and there are no cited printed or academic sources either. Additionally, because of the incongruities of ancient egyptian transliteration, perhaps an inclusion of the original names referencing the Gardiner sign list could be included if somebody knew what they were. I'll keep digging on this, but I think somebody has some fairly specialized knowledge, or a book from a library somewhere that's not immediately obvious to me, and if that's the case this could take a while. —Jason-derp86 (talk) 03:07, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]