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==Anti-London bid== |
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Is it neccessary to have two links to the anti-london bid site? I think it over-emphasises the point and puts an unfair bias against london [[User:Joolz|Joolz]] 08:29, 28 Jan 2005 (UTC) |
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:I agree - and it's a pretty unprofessional site, especially of you look at their guestbook. Doesn't add much to Wikipedia, I would say, unless it becomes a more notable site. --[[User:ALargeElk|ALargeElk]] | [[User talk:ALargeElk|Talk]] 11:41, 28 Jan 2005 (UTC) |
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::There does appear to be an anti-London emphasis in this article, it's the only city that includes negative comment. I'm sure domestic opposition exists in Paris and I know it does in New York. If there's already a link to the anti-London bid in the main body, I don't see why it should be repeated at the bottom.--[[User:Ayrshire--77|Ayrshire--77]] 08:23, 16 Feb 2005 (UTC) |
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== Page has been mangled == |
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What has happened in the last couple of days (see [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=2012_Summer_Olympics&diff=0&oldid=14821373 this diff])? It appears [[Special:Contributions/63.202.178.253|63.202.178.253]] has completely re-written the article, and changed quite a bit of info in it. I think the old one was better, but I'll mention it on the anon's talk page before making changes - what do others think of the re-written article? -- [[User:Chuq|Chuq]] 22:22, 7 Jun 2005 (UTC) |
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== Template for winner == |
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When the winner is announced it might be an idea to copy the victor's {{[[Template:2012 Olympic bid|2012 Olympic bid]]}} call into this article for consistency. [[User:Violetriga|violet/riga]] [[User_talk:violetriga|(t)]] 5 July 2005 22:43 (UTC) |
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== Bid Evaluations == |
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This section is misleading as it does not report on the final bid reviews by the IOC. The section currently only reports on the original bids and the first IOC evaluation to create the shortlist. The shortlisted cities then created their final bid and this was evaluated by the ICO commission. This section does not report on this, now creating the appearance that the IOC made a somewhat illogical decision in selecting the London bid that scored markedly lower than the Paris bid. Although the final IOC evaluation did not provide scores, it was clear that London's evaluation had improved considerably and was much closer to Paris'. This was both observed in the French and British press at the time and also lead to London closing the gap with Paris on the GamesBid Index. |
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==GA review== |
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Right off the bat, I see that there are a lot of fair use images and none of them have rationales. However, the article is well-written and it is also well-sourced, although the trivia section should go. The note about questioning the security of Madrid could go in the Madrid section, and the note about Singapore could go in the final selection process section, although I'm not sure if it is needed. I'll place it on hold for the time being so you can consider my suggestions. -- [[User:Scorpion0422|Scorpion]] 15:44, 12 March 2007 (UTC) |
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:Thank you for reviewing the article. It must have slipped my mind to check for FURs, but I've done them. It was just the Olympic logos that were the problem. As well, I removed the trivia section; I found it rather "trivial" myself when I first saw the article, but have now reintegrated the material: the terrorism paragraph is in the Madrid section and the part about the flower was put as a comment of the image and placed in the final selection section. Thank you for your suggestions, again. <sub>└</sub><sup>'''[[User:Jared|<span style="color:#0084C9;">Jared</span>]]'''</sup><sub>┘</sub><sup>┌</sup><sub>''[[User talk:Jared|<span style="color:#009E49;">talk</span>]]''</sub><sup>┐</sup>  19:34, 12 March 2007 (UTC) |
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::Alright then, I grant this article GA status. -- [[User:Scorpion0422|Scorpion]] 22:34, 12 March 2007 (UTC) |
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==Madrid Votes?== |
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Hi, reading this page I've noticed that Madrid actually got more votes in round 3 than either Paris or London, but it's not mentioned or explained in the text that I can see... is there any reason for this strange vote, is it incorrect and either way does it deserve a mention? Thanks [[User:80.47.113.150|80.47.113.150]] 20:27, 15 March 2007 (UTC) |
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== Copy edit == |
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An editor has expressed concern that the prose for the article may not be professional. Could we get an idea may an example from the article, so that we'll know what to look for. Thanks in advance, [[User:Navou|<span style="color:Blue;">'''Navou'''</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Navou|'''<span style="color:Blue;">banter</span>''']]</sup> 12:38, 11 April 2007 (UTC) |
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:Well, my idea was to get some editors to read through the article and find out things that could be improved on the prose, without having to change significantly the current structure. More like finding typos and syntactic weaknesses. '''[[User:Parutakupiu|<span style="color:#008080;">Parutakupiu</span>]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Parutakupiu|<span style="color:#c00000;">talk</span>]] || [[Special:Contributions/Parutakupiu|<span style="color:#008000;">contribs</span>]]</sup> 16:06, 11 April 2007 (UTC) |
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::I gave it a once over, and made a few minor changes. It certainly is thoroughly footnoted![[User:Konczewski|Konczewski]] 13:59, 12 April 2007 (UTC) |
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== Protection? == |
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I've noticed that the page has been vandalized several times. Seeing as it's on the front page, could we possibly get some protection on the page? |
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[[User:Psychoman364|Psychoman364]] 03:51, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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:I just blocked the latest bringer of nonsense. Even semi-protection of today's featured article [[Wikipedia:Main Page featured article protection|is controversial]], but heavy IP vandalism can prompt it. I'll look into it.--[[User:Chaser|Chaser]] - [[User_talk:Chaser|T]] 03:54, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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:[[File:Pictogram voting oppose.svg|20px|link=|alt=]] '''Declined'''<!-- Template:RFPP#deny --> We're doing a good job with reversions. Please add the page to your watchlists and help us keep this article free of vandalism!--[[User:Chaser|Chaser]] - [[User_talk:Chaser|T]] 03:56, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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== Out of context... == |
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The second paragraph says "By a margin of four votes over Paris, London won the final round and secured the right to host the 2012 Olympics." It should say how many votes the four were out of. Am I correct in thinking it was a 203 country vote? Without that context, you can't tell how contested it was. [[User:Quantumelfmage|Quantumelfmage]] 03:58, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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:The total votes for each of the last two bidding cities are displayed at the bottom of the infobox (used precisely to provide quick info without reading the whole article). '''[[User:Parutakupiu|<span style="color:#008080;">Parutakupiu</span>]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Parutakupiu|<span style="color:#c00000;">talk</span>]] || [[Special:Contributions/Parutakupiu|<span style="color:#008000;">contribs</span>]]</sup> 04:06, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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== London Bombing == |
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The 7/7 bombings in London took place the day after the city won the Olympics. Isn't this worth a mention in the article? |
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:Unless there's some correlation between the two, I don't think so. [[User:Raul654|Raul654]] 14:27, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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:I clearly remember statements made by the British and the IOC President soon after news broke about the bombing, and most of the British delegation returned in double quick time. Sources should be available to support these reactions, which was also given prominent coverage in the Singaporean media (where the IOC voting took place).--[[User:Huaiwei|Huaiwei]] 15:04, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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::Allow me to clarify -- I clearly remember news commetators saying that the timing (so soon after London was chosen) was fishy. But unless there is a statement from the suicide bombers (in the stuff they left behind) or other evidence, mentioning the London bombings in that section seems like a textbook case of [[apophenia]] [[User:Raul654|Raul654]] 15:07, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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:::Making mention of that may not mean an attempt to strike a connection between the two. The fact that we do have news commentators speculating the said connections, and the obvious reactions amongst the delegations, are relevant information which can be sourced and added. All the more so when the incident in Madrid was cited as a security issue mid-way through the selection process, and there were plenty of questions over London's ability to stage the event with the needed security controls in place. I have rather strong recollections on this topic, because I was personally involved in security coverage for the IOC session in Singapore. I have yet to start looking for sources on this one thou.--[[User:Huaiwei|Huaiwei]] 15:13, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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:::I think it's worth mentioning not because there is (necessarily) a link, but simply that the events were so close together -- I remember extensive news coverage about how the celebrations of winning the bid (which would have been huge) were pretty much ruined by the events of the very next morning. So it certainly had an impact, intended or otherwise. — [[User:Johantheghost|Johan the Ghost]] [[User talk:Johantheghost|<sub>seance</sub>]] 19:29, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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::::Please note that there is a mention of the bombings [[2012_Summer_Olympics_bids#Madrid|in this section]]. <sub>└</sub><sup>'''[[User:Jared|<span style="color:#0084C9;">Jared</span>]]'''</sup><sub>┘</sub><sup>┌</sup><sub>''[[User Talk:Jared|<span style="color:#009E49;">t</span>]]''</sub><sup>┐</sup>  19:30, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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== Spelling Errors == |
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There seem to be a lot of spelling errors on this page. I have fixed a few but it still needs help. |
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:There can hardly be any spelling errors since the article was thoroughly reviewed before its promotion. And switching "organisation" with "organization" isn't fixing spelling, it's assuming American English is better than British English when Wikipedia clearly [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style#National varieties of English|says that is perfectly OK]] to use any of them '''IF''' it's used throughout the article. So please, don't go changing words to American English. |
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==Being pedantic== |
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Sorry to be pedantic but London hasn't held the Olympics three times yet. Normally I would edit it to read "London is destined to be the first city to hold the Olympics three times." and change it come 2012 :).but since this article is todays featured article I think I'd best leave it to those who have worked to get this article to feaured article status to consider the merits of such an edit.[[User:KTo288|Koonan the almost civilised]] 22:06, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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:You're right and I've rephrased it to remove that past tense sensation. Thanks for pointing it out. '''[[User:Parutakupiu|<span style="color:#008080;">Parutakupiu</span>]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Parutakupiu|<span style="color:#c00000;">talk</span>]] || [[Special:Contributions/Parutakupiu|<span style="color:#008000;">contribs</span>]]</sup> 22:18, 6 July 2007 (UTC) |
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==Copyedit== |
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==Image copyright problem with File:London 2012 Olympic Games bid logo.jpg== |
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