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== Black Star Riders == |
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As of December 2012, the final lineup of Thin Lizzy decided to continue under a different name: Black Star Riders. See http://blackstarriders.com/?p=579 . Apparently they didn't think it was right to record new material without Phil. Anyway, what would be the best way to go about updating this page (and the members page) to reflect this? Mostly small changes (are -> were, etc) I guess. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/69.191.176.33|69.191.176.33]] ([[User talk:69.191.176.33|talk]]) 16:02, 1 May 2013 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:It's pretty much covered in the article, down in the "Thin Lizzy without Lynott (1996–present)" section. Thin Lizzy are not dead and buried though, and will surface occasionally to do odd shows here and there. [[User:Bretonbanquet|Bretonbanquet]] ([[User talk:Bretonbanquet|talk]]) 18:31, 1 May 2013 (UTC) |
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== "First Irishman to achieve fame in the field of rock and roll?" == |
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In the lede, there is a statement that Phil Lintot was the first Irish musician who became famous in rock and roll. While Phil Lintot was a wonderful singer/musician, [[Van Morrison]] and [[The Them]] predate Thin Lizzy by ''quite'' some time. As a rule of thumb, any superlative is ridiculous in any article. [[Special:Contributions/173.186.127.134|173.186.127.134]] ([[User talk:173.186.127.134|talk]]) 19:17, 12 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:Did you even read the lede? It clearly states: '''''the first black Irishman'''''. [[User:Ww2censor|ww2censor]] ([[User talk:Ww2censor|talk]]) 21:25, 12 April 2017 (UTC) |
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== Heavy metal genre == |
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Cheers. —[[User:Cyberbot II|<sup style="color:green;font-family:Courier">cyberbot II]]<small><sub style="margin-left:-14.9ex;color:green;font-family:Comic Sans MS">[[User talk:Cyberbot II|<span style="color:green">Talk to my owner]]:Online</sub></small> 06:47, 30 August 2015 (UTC) |
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It says on the main page that they are heavy metal, however, only one of their albums, [[Thunder and Lightning]], has the heavy metal tag. Even their songs such as [[The Boys Are Back in Town]], [[Jailbreak (Thin Lizzy song)|Jailbreak]], [[Whisky in the Jar]], etc do not bear the tag either. With this in mind, what makes them heavy metal. The only album of theirs to bear the tag is their final album in the early 1980s. While later configurations of the group do feature members known for heavy metal, they have not released any original metal material under the Thin Lizzy name and so it must be assumed that anything bearing a heavy metal sound (outside of that aforementioned studio album) are merely live albums put together from performances by the touring only version of the group. If anyone has any evidence to contradict my claims or has evidence that supports my claims, please do chime in below. [[User:Moline1|Moline1]] ([[User talk:Moline1|talk]]) 01:30, 3 April 2021 (UTC) |
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:Genres should come from [[WP:SECONDARY]] sources, not from looking around Wikipedia at related articles. The cited reference for heavy metal in the infobox is a book that says the band had a "considerable influence on heavy metal". The reference is not saying that the band is heavy metal themselves, but that they influenced other musicians who became metal. We should remove the heavy metal genre from the infobox. [[Scott Gorham]] and Harry Doherty write in their book ''Thin Lizzy: The Boys Are Back in Town'' ({{isbn|9780857128010}}) that the album ''Thunder and Lightning'' contained "overly metallic, un-Lizzy-like moments on it." The authors are saying that the heavy metal elements of that album are atypical of Thin Lizzy. Gorham and Doherty point to John Sykes as the person who brought metal influences into the band. [[User:Binksternet|Binksternet]] ([[User talk:Binksternet|talk]]) 03:49, 3 April 2021 (UTC) |
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::I've always left HM there as, by contemporary comparison, ''Thunder and Lightning'' is more or less a HM album. Sykes did bring HM influences into the band at that time, and that influence was atypical of Lizzy's output. That said, ''Thunder and Lightning'' was still arguably HM. Of the post-Lynott lineups, sure, they touched on HM at times, particularly the Sykes lineups. But I agree that shouldn't result in the band being tagged as HM. I also agree that influencing HM bands (Metallica etc) does not make Thin Lizzy HM. In my experience, passing editors love to tag Lizzy as HM, and I almost always remove it. It has been applied to ''Jailbreak'', "The Boys Are Back..." etc in the past. I'm happy for it to be removed from this article if that's the consensus. [[User:Bretonbanquet|Bretonbanquet]] ([[User talk:Bretonbanquet|talk]]) 17:34, 3 April 2021 (UTC) |
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:::I think it should be removed. If there is only one album featuring the genre, it does not define the band's sound as a whole. It's like defining [[Lady GaGa]]'s sound as a whole as [[Jazz music|jazz]] despite her only release in that genre being the album she did with [[Tony Bennett]]. If editors at the Lady GaGa article are saying jazz does not define her whole career just because of that album, then we too should say that heavy metal does not define Thin Lizzy's sound as a whole just because of the Thunder and Lightning album and later live performances probably featuring a metal sound. [[User:Moline1|Moline1]] ([[User talk:Moline1|talk]]) 18:56, 4 April 2021 (UTC) |
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== AllMusic critic John Dougan's statement is very likely erroneous == |
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== Decent article - now needs more support == |
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In the introduction, it states: |
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I started reading this article and a few things have become apparent. First is that it is a decent article, and second is that it needs some attention. The prose could be tightened up, the cites used often need page numbers, and some statements need checking, as not all statements are supported by the attached cites, though misleadingly some statements have cites next to them which makes it appear as though the statements have been verified ([https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Thin_Lizzy&diff=730194892&oldid=730194115 example] where the text says Bell bought the comic, but the sources do not support this). On looking into the article history I note that this article has been brought from [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Thin_Lizzy&oldid=47118660 this in 2006] to how it is now pretty much single-handedly by [[User:Bretonbanquet]]. Wikipedia depends on the hard work of such dedicated editors. But Bretonbanquet needs some support now. For 10 years he's worked on this article alone, and he can't be expected to get everything right, or to do all the work himself. The tedious and thankless job of putting in page numbers on over 40 cites will be done more quickly and easily if other folks join in. Other editors checking over the prose and improving it here and there would be a great asset. Discussions on improvements to the article (such as greater detail and depth on the early history - the band members each had a bit of history before they all met up in December 1969 in the Countdown Club, which it would be useful to detail) would help in driving the article forward. '''[[User:SilkTork|<span style="color:purple; font-family: Segoe Script">SilkTork</span>]]''' '''[[User talk:SilkTork|<font color="#347C2C"><sup>✔Tea time</sup></font>]]''' 12:15, 17 July 2016 (UTC) |
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AllMusic critic John Dougan has written that "As the band's creative force, Lynott was a more insightful and intelligent writer than many of his ilk, preferring slice-of-life working-class dramas of love and hate influenced by Bob Dylan, Bruce Springsteen and virtually all of the Irish literary tradition."[4] |
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:I appreciate your comments. Page numbers won't be a problem; I can deal with that pretty easily. I hesitate slightly with regard to tightening up the prose. I've no doubt that here and there, wording could be improved, but some Wikipedians have a habit of changing wording on a grand scale with little or no improvement, and I'd like to avoid that. Most of my wording is explicitly designed to convey a particular meaning, and I find that changing it can often mean that meaning is lost. |
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:The history of the band members prior to their time in Thin Lizzy – some members had quite extensive careers prior to joining the band, and I felt that this was better dealt with in those members' own articles, so as to avoid this one becoming too long, or to divert from the flow of the band narrative, for want of a better phrase. I could expand the band's pre-history to double the length of the article if I wanted. That said, some slight expansion on Orphanage, Skid Row and Bell's time in showbands is a good idea. SilkTork, if you feel that extra length is justified, I would be glad to expand on anything you feel would be worthwhile. Highlight anything else you feel looks misleading or not backed up by cites. |
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:With regard to the naming of the band, Bell told me he bought that particular copy of the Dandy, but I've also read that he had found a pile of old comics and was just browsing through them when he saw the Tin Lizzie strip. I doubt his memory is that great, so it might be worth glossing over the exact provenance of the comic he was reading that day. The idea that Tin Lizzie the robot was named after the Model T Ford... no idea, I didn't add that or the cite. I'm not sure it really matters here anyway. I can add further theories (from relevant people) on the naming of the band if required. It originally had its own section, which I left, but now it has been merged into the body of the main story – I don't have any strong opinion on that. |
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:I'd also like to say that this article has been ''very'' stable for a good few years, and has attracted very kind words from several members of the band regarding its "warts and all" nature, and general accuracy. One current member recently told me he actually learned something about the band from this article, and asked another member to verify it, which he did. It's a complicated story, and it can easily be overcomplicated if sufficient care and attention is not exercised. The main objectives should continue to be readability and accuracy. [[User:Bretonbanquet|Bretonbanquet]] ([[User talk:Bretonbanquet|talk]]) 16:02, 17 July 2016 (UTC) |
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Thin Lizzy's first album was released in [[Thin Lizzy (album)|1971]] and their second album, [[Shades of a Blue Orphanage|Shades of a Blue Orphanage in 1972]], while Bruce Springsteen's first album, "[[Greetings_from_Asbury_Park,_N.J.|Greetings from Asbury Park, N.J."]] was released in 1973. The first two Thin Lizzy albums are the only ones that have similarities with Springsteen's work, so it's very unlikely Lynott was influenced in any way by Springsteen. It's more likely it was the other way around. |
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::With regard to page numbers in cites – I use Alan Byrne's original 2004 text, not any of the later versions. It would be worth sticking to one or the other. Also, {{u|SilkTork}}, we can clean up the use of "frontman" in the intro if you wish – I didn't actually write much of the intro, and it could probably be improved, although again, it has been stable. There was a time when this article was anything but stable! [[User:Bretonbanquet|Bretonbanquet]] ([[User talk:Bretonbanquet|talk]]) 16:13, 17 July 2016 (UTC) |
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Suggestion: There could be a comment stating the possible inaccuracy of Dougan's quote, or his quote should be removed altogether. |
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:::The 2007 SAF version of Byrne's book is on Google Books, which makes citing that version preferable as readers will be more easily able to verify the facts. In general, more recent publications are preferred anyway as they tend to correct earlier errors, and to be updated. |
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:::I think you have done a grand job with this article. I rarely get involved in articles for prolonged periods, however I would be happy to stay around for a while to push this article a little closer to Featured article quality. I do think that is something you could be aiming for. '''[[User:SilkTork|<span style="color:purple; font-family: Segoe Script">SilkTork</span>]]''' '''[[User talk:SilkTork|<font color="#347C2C"><sup>✔Tea time</sup></font>]]''' 17:06, 17 July 2016 (UTC) |
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::::I'll leave the page numbers to someone else then, as my technology struggles with Google Books. Thanks for your kind words; anything you can suggest to make improvements is welcomed, particularly in areas where you think clarity could be improved. [[User:Bretonbanquet|Bretonbanquet]] ([[User talk:Bretonbanquet|talk]]) 17:45, 17 July 2016 (UTC) |
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[[Special:Contributions/79.107.177.26|79.107.177.26]] ([[User talk:79.107.177.26|talk]]) 15:28, 28 June 2022 (UTC) |
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==Skid Row== |
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It would be useful to briefly mention that Lynott formed [[Skid Row (Irish band)|Skid Row]] given the later links with that band to Thin Lizzy. '''[[User:SilkTork|<span style="color:purple; font-family: Segoe Script">SilkTork</span>]]''' '''[[User talk:SilkTork|<font color="#347C2C"><sup>✔Tea time</sup></font>]]''' 12:27, 17 July 2016 (UTC) |
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:{{u|SilkTork}}, how do you feel about a separate pre-history sub-section prior to talking about when the band members first met? It might be a clear way to lay a bit of foundation instead of inserting talk of previous bands into the current text. [[User:Bretonbanquet|Bretonbanquet]] ([[User talk:Bretonbanquet|talk]]) 16:22, 17 July 2016 (UTC) |
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::I'd already started some work on the earlier history before I saw this note. Yes, I agree that the pre=history shouldn't be excessive; we should be looking at what might be important details and getting the balance right rather than merely listing early bands. Skid Row seems significant. A few quick mentions on the members backgrounds can also be helpful so as to inform readers on basic facts, such as that Lynott was born in England, but that his mother was Irish, and he was brought up in Dublin from an early age. On a related note, I have amened the lead from "Thin Lizzy are an Irish rock band... " to "Thin Lizzy are a rock band formed in Dublin, Ireland..." as I don't think any of the current members are Irish, and through the band's history only a handful of members (mainly the founding members) were Irish. The band's Irish roots are important, but they became more international as time went on. '''[[User:SilkTork|<span style="color:purple; font-family: Segoe Script">SilkTork</span>]]''' '''[[User talk:SilkTork|<font color="#347C2C"><sup>✔Tea time</sup></font>]]''' 17:06, 17 July 2016 (UTC) |
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::Thin Lizzy's first two albums and Springsteen's albums (especially his first ones) have a folk, soft-rock sound and their themes deal mainly with a romantic view of street-city-life and its everyday heroes. Both artists were very likely inspired by Bob Dylan. From their third album onwards, Thin Lizzy moved to a heavier, hard-rock oriented sound and their themes started to also incorporate fantasy and sci-fi. [[Special:Contributions/79.107.177.26|79.107.177.26]] ([[User talk:79.107.177.26|talk]]) 12:31, 2 July 2022 (UTC) |
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:::Lynott's romantic heroes and street rebel imagery continued throughout the 70s and beyond; there were literally dozens of songs along those lines. There was no more fantasy/sci-fi from '73 onwards than there was on the first two records really, i.e. not a great deal. [[User:Bretonbanquet|Bretonbanquet]] ([[User talk:Bretonbanquet|talk]]) 17:22, 2 July 2022 (UTC) |
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::::That may be, but musically Thin Lizzy was very different from Springsteen from the third album onwards. Anyway, that doesn't have anything to do with Lynott being (lyrically) influenced by Bruce Springsteen, since he started with this lyrical style 2 years before Springsteen. [[Special:Contributions/79.107.177.26|79.107.177.26]] ([[User talk:79.107.177.26|talk]]) 18:30, 2 July 2022 (UTC) |
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==Style and legacy section== |
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:::I'm never that happy with ascribing nationalities to bands anyway, as there's no real-world way to verify them. They're generally referred to as an Irish band, and some editors may well try to restore that wording, but let's hope not. Ricky Warwick continues the Irish strain in the current line-up, but that doesn't satisfy everyone by any means. That's the kind of problem this article had some years ago, nationalist stuff. Skid Row is definitely significant as that's where Lynott first encountered Moore. I'll make an attempt at a paragraph about the members' earlier experience and include your idea of a brief family background in that. The mechanics of how the band members met can come after that in a paragraph devoted just to that. [[User:Bretonbanquet|Bretonbanquet]] ([[User talk:Bretonbanquet|talk]]) 17:45, 17 July 2016 (UTC) |
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Regarding {{ping|Susrage}}'s recent additions to this section, I thought I'd start a discussion here. The general description touching on genres should be in the lead section, to explain to readers unfamiliar with the band just what kind of music we're talking about, before going too far into anything else. Further explanation of genres can be in the style and legacy section. |
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With regard to the additions about Lynott's techniques, I have a few problems with this piece in particular: ''"Lynott became known for his unique style of bass playing, utilizing alternate picking to strum eighth notes or triplets. Lynott's hard-hitting rhythmic approach pushed his bass parts to the forefront of the music, often playing on top of the beat and signalling pushed chords"''. The problem here is that Wikipedia is a general purpose encyclopedia, and this is way too technical for the average reader to understand. Only students of music are going to get this kind of jargon, and it needs to be dumbed down (a lot) for the vast majority of readers. Alternate picking, eighth notes, playing on top of the beat and signalling pushed chords – none of that means anything to me at all, and it doesn't explain why this stuff matters with relation to Thin Lizzy. There needs to be examples of songs in which these techniques are employed, and wikilinks to articles which help explain what this stuff means. Triplets, for example, I understand. Lynott employed triplets a lot – easy to play while singing at the same time – on songs like "Angel of Death". Also, I feel the technical stuff belongs at [[Phil Lynott]] rather than here, because you're dissecting his technique as a musician, rather than describing Thin Lizzy. Consider similar sections for other musicians, like [[Flea (musician)#Musical style|Flea]], for how this should be handled. |
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The additions on his lyric writing and singing are fine – easy to understand and very helpful. I don't think Lynott was a unique player though – many bassists play like him, then and now. He was a very clever guy who, while not hugely gifted technically, knew exactly what to play and when, playing for the song rather than ever showing off. Lizzy were better known for the twin lead guitar thing than Lynott's bass, and this section should probably reflect that. Most of all, it should be kept general, and not diverge into musical jargon. [[User:Bretonbanquet|Bretonbanquet]] ([[User talk:Bretonbanquet|talk]]) 13:19, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:I get where you are coming from with the musicial term stuff, I just thought it would be important to include details about Phil's playing since it's a big part of what makes Thin Lizzy so unique. I do believe it's important to include this stuff, just not entirely sure how to dumb it down or make it sound entirely objective [[User:Susrage|Susrage]] ([[User talk:Susrage|talk]]) 14:41, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== Other Thin Lizzy releases and tributes== |
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::Also the stuff about genres, I think that putting it in the style section is more fitting because that's where a reader would want to go to get an idea of a band's style. The intro, at least to me, should be more of a brief intro of the bandmembers and how the band was formed. I usually don't see stuff about musical style in the intro on most articles. [[User:Susrage|Susrage]] ([[User talk:Susrage|talk]]) 14:44, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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This section is fairly minor, and mainly deals with compilation albums that could be better dealt with in the [[Thin Lizzy discography]] article. However, a section on the legacy of Thin Lizzy would be useful. '''[[User:SilkTork|<span style="color:purple; font-family: Segoe Script">SilkTork</span>]]''' '''[[User talk:SilkTork|<font color="#347C2C"><sup>✔Tea time</sup></font>]]''' 12:34, 17 July 2016 (UTC) |
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:::Ok I'll rephrase that, putting a band's style and sound in the intro(at least a brief summation) is fine, I just thought the way it was described in this article was a little too descriptive for an intro, and better suited for the style section. [[User:Susrage|Susrage]] ([[User talk:Susrage|talk]]) 14:47, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::Cool, yes, it is hard to make the technical stuff easy to understand, which is probably why it hasn't been done before. Maybe we can figure something out which at least helps to explain some of what that source is talking about. The intro piece is pretty general; it just so happens that Lizzy touched on a lot of genres. The genre sentence is also not sourced, which is sort of okay in the lead, but not in the article body – each genre would need to be sourced. Ideally, the sentence in the lead would be expanded in the style section, with all the sources thrown at it. [[User:Bretonbanquet|Bretonbanquet]] ([[User talk:Bretonbanquet|talk]]) 15:02, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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"First Irishman to achieve fame in the field of rock and roll?"
[edit]In the lede, there is a statement that Phil Lintot was the first Irish musician who became famous in rock and roll. While Phil Lintot was a wonderful singer/musician, Van Morrison and The Them predate Thin Lizzy by quite some time. As a rule of thumb, any superlative is ridiculous in any article. 173.186.127.134 (talk) 19:17, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
- Did you even read the lede? It clearly states: the first black Irishman. ww2censor (talk) 21:25, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
Heavy metal genre
[edit]It says on the main page that they are heavy metal, however, only one of their albums, Thunder and Lightning, has the heavy metal tag. Even their songs such as The Boys Are Back in Town, Jailbreak, Whisky in the Jar, etc do not bear the tag either. With this in mind, what makes them heavy metal. The only album of theirs to bear the tag is their final album in the early 1980s. While later configurations of the group do feature members known for heavy metal, they have not released any original metal material under the Thin Lizzy name and so it must be assumed that anything bearing a heavy metal sound (outside of that aforementioned studio album) are merely live albums put together from performances by the touring only version of the group. If anyone has any evidence to contradict my claims or has evidence that supports my claims, please do chime in below. Moline1 (talk) 01:30, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
- Genres should come from WP:SECONDARY sources, not from looking around Wikipedia at related articles. The cited reference for heavy metal in the infobox is a book that says the band had a "considerable influence on heavy metal". The reference is not saying that the band is heavy metal themselves, but that they influenced other musicians who became metal. We should remove the heavy metal genre from the infobox. Scott Gorham and Harry Doherty write in their book Thin Lizzy: The Boys Are Back in Town (ISBN 9780857128010) that the album Thunder and Lightning contained "overly metallic, un-Lizzy-like moments on it." The authors are saying that the heavy metal elements of that album are atypical of Thin Lizzy. Gorham and Doherty point to John Sykes as the person who brought metal influences into the band. Binksternet (talk) 03:49, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
- I've always left HM there as, by contemporary comparison, Thunder and Lightning is more or less a HM album. Sykes did bring HM influences into the band at that time, and that influence was atypical of Lizzy's output. That said, Thunder and Lightning was still arguably HM. Of the post-Lynott lineups, sure, they touched on HM at times, particularly the Sykes lineups. But I agree that shouldn't result in the band being tagged as HM. I also agree that influencing HM bands (Metallica etc) does not make Thin Lizzy HM. In my experience, passing editors love to tag Lizzy as HM, and I almost always remove it. It has been applied to Jailbreak, "The Boys Are Back..." etc in the past. I'm happy for it to be removed from this article if that's the consensus. Bretonbanquet (talk) 17:34, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
- I think it should be removed. If there is only one album featuring the genre, it does not define the band's sound as a whole. It's like defining Lady GaGa's sound as a whole as jazz despite her only release in that genre being the album she did with Tony Bennett. If editors at the Lady GaGa article are saying jazz does not define her whole career just because of that album, then we too should say that heavy metal does not define Thin Lizzy's sound as a whole just because of the Thunder and Lightning album and later live performances probably featuring a metal sound. Moline1 (talk) 18:56, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
- I've always left HM there as, by contemporary comparison, Thunder and Lightning is more or less a HM album. Sykes did bring HM influences into the band at that time, and that influence was atypical of Lizzy's output. That said, Thunder and Lightning was still arguably HM. Of the post-Lynott lineups, sure, they touched on HM at times, particularly the Sykes lineups. But I agree that shouldn't result in the band being tagged as HM. I also agree that influencing HM bands (Metallica etc) does not make Thin Lizzy HM. In my experience, passing editors love to tag Lizzy as HM, and I almost always remove it. It has been applied to Jailbreak, "The Boys Are Back..." etc in the past. I'm happy for it to be removed from this article if that's the consensus. Bretonbanquet (talk) 17:34, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
AllMusic critic John Dougan's statement is very likely erroneous
[edit]In the introduction, it states:
AllMusic critic John Dougan has written that "As the band's creative force, Lynott was a more insightful and intelligent writer than many of his ilk, preferring slice-of-life working-class dramas of love and hate influenced by Bob Dylan, Bruce Springsteen and virtually all of the Irish literary tradition."[4]
Thin Lizzy's first album was released in 1971 and their second album, Shades of a Blue Orphanage in 1972, while Bruce Springsteen's first album, "Greetings from Asbury Park, N.J." was released in 1973. The first two Thin Lizzy albums are the only ones that have similarities with Springsteen's work, so it's very unlikely Lynott was influenced in any way by Springsteen. It's more likely it was the other way around.
Suggestion: There could be a comment stating the possible inaccuracy of Dougan's quote, or his quote should be removed altogether.
79.107.177.26 (talk) 15:28, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
- In what sense are Thin Lizzy's first two albums the only ones similar to Springsteen's work? Bretonbanquet (talk) 14:22, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- Thin Lizzy's first two albums and Springsteen's albums (especially his first ones) have a folk, soft-rock sound and their themes deal mainly with a romantic view of street-city-life and its everyday heroes. Both artists were very likely inspired by Bob Dylan. From their third album onwards, Thin Lizzy moved to a heavier, hard-rock oriented sound and their themes started to also incorporate fantasy and sci-fi. 79.107.177.26 (talk) 12:31, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
- Lynott's romantic heroes and street rebel imagery continued throughout the 70s and beyond; there were literally dozens of songs along those lines. There was no more fantasy/sci-fi from '73 onwards than there was on the first two records really, i.e. not a great deal. Bretonbanquet (talk) 17:22, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
- That may be, but musically Thin Lizzy was very different from Springsteen from the third album onwards. Anyway, that doesn't have anything to do with Lynott being (lyrically) influenced by Bruce Springsteen, since he started with this lyrical style 2 years before Springsteen. 79.107.177.26 (talk) 18:30, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
- Lynott's romantic heroes and street rebel imagery continued throughout the 70s and beyond; there were literally dozens of songs along those lines. There was no more fantasy/sci-fi from '73 onwards than there was on the first two records really, i.e. not a great deal. Bretonbanquet (talk) 17:22, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
- Thin Lizzy's first two albums and Springsteen's albums (especially his first ones) have a folk, soft-rock sound and their themes deal mainly with a romantic view of street-city-life and its everyday heroes. Both artists were very likely inspired by Bob Dylan. From their third album onwards, Thin Lizzy moved to a heavier, hard-rock oriented sound and their themes started to also incorporate fantasy and sci-fi. 79.107.177.26 (talk) 12:31, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
Style and legacy section
[edit]Regarding @Susrage:'s recent additions to this section, I thought I'd start a discussion here. The general description touching on genres should be in the lead section, to explain to readers unfamiliar with the band just what kind of music we're talking about, before going too far into anything else. Further explanation of genres can be in the style and legacy section. With regard to the additions about Lynott's techniques, I have a few problems with this piece in particular: "Lynott became known for his unique style of bass playing, utilizing alternate picking to strum eighth notes or triplets. Lynott's hard-hitting rhythmic approach pushed his bass parts to the forefront of the music, often playing on top of the beat and signalling pushed chords". The problem here is that Wikipedia is a general purpose encyclopedia, and this is way too technical for the average reader to understand. Only students of music are going to get this kind of jargon, and it needs to be dumbed down (a lot) for the vast majority of readers. Alternate picking, eighth notes, playing on top of the beat and signalling pushed chords – none of that means anything to me at all, and it doesn't explain why this stuff matters with relation to Thin Lizzy. There needs to be examples of songs in which these techniques are employed, and wikilinks to articles which help explain what this stuff means. Triplets, for example, I understand. Lynott employed triplets a lot – easy to play while singing at the same time – on songs like "Angel of Death". Also, I feel the technical stuff belongs at Phil Lynott rather than here, because you're dissecting his technique as a musician, rather than describing Thin Lizzy. Consider similar sections for other musicians, like Flea, for how this should be handled.
The additions on his lyric writing and singing are fine – easy to understand and very helpful. I don't think Lynott was a unique player though – many bassists play like him, then and now. He was a very clever guy who, while not hugely gifted technically, knew exactly what to play and when, playing for the song rather than ever showing off. Lizzy were better known for the twin lead guitar thing than Lynott's bass, and this section should probably reflect that. Most of all, it should be kept general, and not diverge into musical jargon. Bretonbanquet (talk) 13:19, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
- I get where you are coming from with the musicial term stuff, I just thought it would be important to include details about Phil's playing since it's a big part of what makes Thin Lizzy so unique. I do believe it's important to include this stuff, just not entirely sure how to dumb it down or make it sound entirely objective Susrage (talk) 14:41, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
- Also the stuff about genres, I think that putting it in the style section is more fitting because that's where a reader would want to go to get an idea of a band's style. The intro, at least to me, should be more of a brief intro of the bandmembers and how the band was formed. I usually don't see stuff about musical style in the intro on most articles. Susrage (talk) 14:44, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
- Ok I'll rephrase that, putting a band's style and sound in the intro(at least a brief summation) is fine, I just thought the way it was described in this article was a little too descriptive for an intro, and better suited for the style section. Susrage (talk) 14:47, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
- Cool, yes, it is hard to make the technical stuff easy to understand, which is probably why it hasn't been done before. Maybe we can figure something out which at least helps to explain some of what that source is talking about. The intro piece is pretty general; it just so happens that Lizzy touched on a lot of genres. The genre sentence is also not sourced, which is sort of okay in the lead, but not in the article body – each genre would need to be sourced. Ideally, the sentence in the lead would be expanded in the style section, with all the sources thrown at it. Bretonbanquet (talk) 15:02, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
- Ok I'll rephrase that, putting a band's style and sound in the intro(at least a brief summation) is fine, I just thought the way it was described in this article was a little too descriptive for an intro, and better suited for the style section. Susrage (talk) 14:47, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
- Also the stuff about genres, I think that putting it in the style section is more fitting because that's where a reader would want to go to get an idea of a band's style. The intro, at least to me, should be more of a brief intro of the bandmembers and how the band was formed. I usually don't see stuff about musical style in the intro on most articles. Susrage (talk) 14:44, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
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