Talk:Arrest of Omi in a Hellcat

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 22:24, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

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• ... that Omi in a Hellcat owned three Dodge Hellcats? Source: [1]
  • Reviewed: N/A (third nomination)
  • Comment: I'm personally on the edge about this one. The article is about a living person being arrested, however the hook is not about any crime.

Moved to mainspace by ClydeFranklin (talk). Self-nominated at 02:04, 14 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Arrest of Omi in a Hellcat; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

•  Doing... -Nizil (talk) 06:45, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
  • ClydeFranklin Thank you for contributing to DYK. new; long enough; cited; neutral; blp-ok; hook interesting and short; no qpq needed. There is no direct copyvio but some of the sentences are very closely paraphrased WP:CLOP to Inquirer. Please fix this. Another issue is hook citation. The hook cites an auction website listing Omi's cars which might qualify as WP:OR and I am not able to verify that the auction is indeed of Omi's properties. This secondary source CNN mentions details of his cars including three Dodge Charger Hellcats. So better cite it. -Nizil (talk) 07:17, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Nizil Shah, added that citation, https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Arrest+of+Omi+in+a+Hellcat&oldid=&use_engine=0&use_links=0&turnitin=0&action=compare&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.inquirer.com%2Fnews%2Fomi-in-a-hellcat-case-jail-sentence-20230308.html tells me the only similarities are "as Omi in a Hellcat", "care of relatives, foster parents, and his father", and "to a mental health institution", none of which I think can be reworded. Clyde _{[trout needed]} 00:30, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
      • , thank you for fixing issues. Good to go now. Happy Editing! -Nizil (talk) 14:34, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

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Bill Omar Carrasquillo was raised in North Philadelphia as one of 38 children. - Is the implication that his father had 38 children? It's not impossible that his mother had 38 children, but it is very unlikely and seems like it would have been a major human interest news story if a woman was pregnant with her 30th+ child. 97.102.30.205 (talk) 00:27, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

It looks as though the Philadelphia Inquirer is citing him saying he had 38 siblings and was in foster care from a youtube video. Another source seems to indicate that he grew up with his father and stepmother, which contradicts the foster care portion of his story. In this case, I'd cite WP:ECREE and remove it. Alternatively, we could follow WP:SOURCESDIFFER, and state what the Inquirer says and what the Deccan Chronicle says. Poppa shark (talk) 01:27, 10 November 2023 (UTC)