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Sure we have attributed statements supporting the speculation that this attack was related to Islamic extremism, but can we, within the bounds of Wikipedia policies ([[WP:NOR]], [[WP:SYNTH]], [[WP:V]] & co) support the assertion that it was also somehow part of an implied centrally coordinated or organised campaign of attacks across Europe which started in 2014? I propose removing links and association to this notion (including the article [[Islamic terrorism in Europe (2014–present)]]) until we have adequately attributed and reliably sourced confirmation that that is indeed the case, -- [[User:DeFacto|de Facto]] ([[User Talk:DeFacto|talk]]). 06:40, 30 August 2017 (UTC) |
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:IMO the problem(s) are with the linked article.[[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 06:50, 30 August 2017 (UTC) |
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::There is a discussion pertinent to this at: [[Talk:June_2017_London_Bridge_attack#Islamic_terrorism_in_Europe_.282014.E2.80.93present]]. --[[User:TBM10|TBM10]] ([[User talk:TBM10|talk]]) 19:47, 7 September 2017 (UTC) |
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:Perpetrator [[Khalid Masood]] |
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I believe the use of "perpetrator" rather than "suspect" means he was convicted at some point? I am not able to find a conviction date mentioned though. Am I overlooking this or have we not added it yet? [[User:ScratchMarshall|ScratchMarshall]] ([[User talk:ScratchMarshall|talk]]) 19:44, 20 February 2018 (UTC) |
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That an attack took place in Westminster and at one of several entrances to the Houses of Parliament is significant. The reactions of the Mayor of London, the Prime Minister and the Speakers of both Houses are informative. I do not see how they could be described as "meaningless". In six months time, it will be helpful to have a brief but clear record of these reactions. [[User:Mathsci|Mathsci]] ([[User talk:Mathsci|talk]]) 03:51, 4 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:Don't have a strong feeling either way, the three block quotes seemed a bit excessive, maybe shorter and in text would work. [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 09:25, 4 April 2017 (UTC) |
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::Politicians are quite used to making vacuous sound bites. It's part of their job (when they're not fiddling expenses, that is {{wink}}). And it's not even a fine line between a valid expression by a political leader of shock and revulsion, and meaningless rhetoric calculated to make the morning tabloids, and I really have a problem seeing how what I deleted was in any way "informative". Wikipedia is neither [[WP:SOAP|a soapbox]] nor [[WP:NOT#NEWS|the news]]. Is it not sufficient to write that [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=2017_Westminster_attack&oldid=773518261#Domestic Khan condemned the attack and May as saying Britain would "never waver in the face of terrorism"]? --<small><span style="background-color:#ffffff;border: 1px solid;">[[User:Ohconfucius|'''<span style="color:#000000; background-color:#EEE8AA"> Ohc </span>''']]</span></small>[[User talk:Ohconfucius|<sup>''¡digame!''</sup>]] 08:34, 5 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:::I have no strong feelings, but it is fairly customary to include a statement from Mayor/Governer and Head of State, the justification for Speakers I guess is the location. [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 20:23, 5 April 2017 (UTC) |
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::::Customary is well and good, but what [[WP:ENC|encyclopaedic purpose]] would the inclusion of [[WP:SOAP|words of political bravado]] serve? , and would they not be more suited to inclusion in [[Wikiquote]]? Actually, I'm not targeting my comments at you specifically, but more interested in hearing from the person who reverted my change… before I revert. {{wink}}--<small><span style="background-color:#ffffff;border: 1px solid;">[[User:Ohconfucius|'''<span style="color:#000000; background-color:#EEE8AA"> Ohc </span>''']]</span></small>[[User talk:Ohconfucius|<sup>''¡digame!''</sup>]] 08:29, 6 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:The statement from the speakers was significant both for being made jointly by both of them and for its prompt release. Quotes should sue quotation markup per HTML standards. <span class="vcard"><span class="fn">[[User:Pigsonthewing|Andy Mabbett]]</span> (<span class="nickname">Pigsonthewing</span>); [[User talk:Pigsonthewing|Talk to Andy]]; [[Special:Contributions/Pigsonthewing|Andy's edits]]</span> 19:26, 10 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:[[User:ScratchMarshall|ScratchMarshall]], Masood was shot by police during the attack and died at the scene, therefore there never will be a trial. The coroner's inquest is ongoing but is extremely unlikely to conclude anything other than his being lawfully killed and his victims being murdered. [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 20:15, 20 February 2018 (UTC) |
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{{ping|Pincrete}} thanks for clarifying that, missed that detail skimming the article. [[WP:BLPCRIME]] protections would not apply then. [[User:ScratchMarshall|ScratchMarshall]] ([[User talk:ScratchMarshall|talk]]) 20:16, 20 February 2018 (UTC) |
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{{u|Cyrus the Penner}}, I fail to see how using British English can be described as "[https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=2017_Westminster_attack&diff=774308882&oldid=774308721 heartless]". The use of the word "Attacker" is common in British English and has been present on the page for some time, and you trying to edit war in the more American terms "perpetrator" is perplexing and jarring in such a context. It's similarly jarring to see the American "stepfather" rather than the more British "step-father". It is a shame that despite my edit summaries explaining this, and the note on your talk page, you feel it more fitting to edit war to your preferred version, rather than accept the [[WP:STATUS QUO]] of the page and discuss it on the talk page, as [[WP:BRD]] advises. Is there a reason that BRD and ENGVAR are not applicable in this circumstance? I will only add that if you think the justification of "All the other articles use perpetrator" is acceptable, you really do need to read the ENGVAR guidelines again, and then have a look at [[WP:OSE]]. - [[User:The Bounder|The Bounder]] ([[User talk:The Bounder|talk]]) 16:05, 7 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:I agree about 'perp' and 'assailant', I checked with OED, and they seem to find stepfather normal these days in BritEng. I'm someone who tends to hyphenate everything and can never understand why people refer to their colleagues as "[[cow|female-bovine]] orkers", what's an "orker"? [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 23:01, 7 April 2017 (UTC) |
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::Urgh, I blame journalists and their love of copying horrible Americanisms for what I will always think of as sloppy grammar! Hyphens and definite articles should be protected against such neglect! (Maybe the orkers should join the movement?!) - [[User:The Bounder|The Bounder]] ([[User talk:The Bounder|talk]]) 06:11, 8 April 2017 (UTC) |
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The latest edit war in this article is on how to describe the perpetrator in the lead paragraph. Is he to be called a "British citizen" or a "Briton," to revive the archaism favoured decades ago by the Canadian owner of the [[Daily Express]]? I propose that as a compromise we return to calling him a "[[Kentish Man]]." [[User:NRPanikker|NRPanikker]] ([[User talk:NRPanikker|talk]]) 20:41, 22 November 2021 (UTC) |
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In so far as this has been discussed here, my impression has been that editors find flags inappropriate, since these people are in no sense representatives of their countries. Thoughts? [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 22:54, 7 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:I agree. Flags are entirely pointless when we are able to use words to say the same thing. The victims were not "representing" their country in an official sense, so the flag icons are not helpful. –. [[User:The Bounder|The Bounder]] ([[User talk:The Bounder|talk]]) 06:06, 8 April 2017 (UTC) |
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::Decidedly so… Finally, some sanity prevails. {{wink}} Thanks, --<small><span style="background-color:#ffffff;border: 1px solid;">[[User:Ohconfucius|'''<span style="color:#000000; background-color:#EEE8AA"> Ohc </span>''']]</span></small>[[User talk:Ohconfucius|<sup>''¡digame!''</sup>]] 15:57, 8 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:Seriously folks? A person's county is not a nationality. "British" is good enough for any person born and brought up in Britain and holding British citizenship. Masood ticks all of these boxes. He was not one of those pesky foreigners with an Islamic sounding name. It's also unlikely that people outside Britain would have much idea what "Kentish man" means. Even in Britain this isn't a commonly used phrase.--'''''[[User:ianmacm|<span style="background:#88b;color:#cff;font-variant:small-caps">♦Ian<span style="background:#99c">Ma<span style="background:#aad">c</span></span>M♦</span>]] <sup>[[User_talk:ianmacm|(talk to me)]]</sup>''''' 08:13, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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::A [[Man of Kent]] would know what a [[Kentish Man]] (or Maid) was. [[User:NRPanikker|NRPanikker]] ([[User talk:NRPanikker|talk]]) 17:58, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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An editor (WWGB) has claimed in an edit summary that word "perpetrator" is not used in British English and substituted the word "assailant". The BBC News service have used the term perpetrator (and attacker) for this terrorist attack and the more recent vehicular attack in Stockholm. I have not heard or read the word "assailant" used in this context. I think lots of UK editors have been editing or watching this article, so it is unlikely at this stage that there are systematic errors of this kind in the article. [[User:Mathsci|Mathsci]] ([[User talk:Mathsci|talk]]) 07:07, 8 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:::The long-standing term is 'Briton', which implies someone born in Britain, rather than simply acquiring citizenship. Why would we change an established term? Do we call someone born in Edinburgh a 'Scottish person'? Someone from Dublin an 'Irish person'? [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 18:05, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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::::I'm not really keen on the word Briton and opted for "British man" which is used at [[Killing of David Amess]]. This comes about because some people think that foreign sounding name = foreign person. Khalid Masood and Ali Harbi Ali were both born and brought up in Britain. I'm not sure that the word Briton automatically implies that a person was born in Britain.--'''''[[User:ianmacm|<span style="background:#88b;color:#cff;font-variant:small-caps">♦Ian<span style="background:#99c">Ma<span style="background:#aad">c</span></span>M♦</span>]] <sup>[[User_talk:ianmacm|(talk to me)]]</sup>''''' 19:31, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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:Assailant doesnt seem right to me from a British point of view and would expect the more usual attacker to be used for a UK article, perpetrator would be seen as an Americanism. [[User:MilborneOne|MilborneOne]] ([[User talk:MilborneOne|talk]]) 07:55, 8 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:::::"British man" certainly doesn't imply 'native of UK'. To my ears it sounds unnatural and implies acquired citizenship. [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 19:37, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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::Perpetrator seems acceptable to me, since a lot of Americanisms have entered the British language. The classic one is jail vs gaol, both of which are used (though it tends to be the former rather than the latter). Assailant doesn't seem right to me. It would be appropriate in the context of a robbery, mugging, etc, but not here. We can't even use the term suspect in this case. [[User:This is Paul|This is Paul]] ([[User talk:This is Paul|talk]]) 12:34, 8 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:::It is not better (and arguably worse) than "attacker". Just because lazy journalists use Americanisms, that should not affect the formal encyclopaedic English for which we are aiming. – [[User:The Bounder|The Bounder]] ([[User talk:The Bounder|talk]]) 12:37, 8 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:::{{ec}} Also [http://www.thesaurus.com/browse/perpetrator thessaurus.com] (which I always find helpful when writing) doesn't list assailant as an alternative for perpetrator. I don't think any of the other terms there would work either. [[User:This is Paul|This is Paul]] ([[User talk:This is Paul|talk]]) 12:40, 8 April 2017 (UTC) |
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::::{{ping|The Bounder}} Attacker or offender are probably the two most usable words. [[User:This is Paul|This is Paul]] ([[User talk:This is Paul|talk]]) 12:42, 8 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:::::Attacker is closest to common Brit Eng, I find "assailant" strange and as US as 'perp', we understand all these words but they are not the "default terms". Attacker has the advantage of simplicity - a murder is done by a murderer, an attack by an attacker, why make it more complicated? [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 17:35, 8 April 2017 (UTC) |
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*The [https://www.thefreedictionary.com/Briton Free Dictionary] says that a Briton is "A native or inhabitant of Great Britain". This confirms my theory that the word Briton does not automatically prove that a person was born in Britain. I think this is [[WP:OR]] by Pincrete.--'''''[[User:ianmacm|<span style="background:#88b;color:#cff;font-variant:small-caps">♦Ian<span style="background:#99c">Ma<span style="background:#aad">c</span></span>M♦</span>]] <sup>[[User_talk:ianmacm|(talk to me)]]</sup>''''' 19:41, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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:"A native"? I repeat, "British man" certainly doesn't imply UK-born. Briton ''implies'' British-born to the same extent that "Scot' ''implies'' something more than habitation. There is no single word that'' 'proves' ''one is UK-born and I never claimed this word did ''(ditto German/American/Frenchman etc)''. [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 20:03, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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::There is no word that automatically guarantees that a person was born in Britain. None of the three definitions at the Free Dictionary says this. A Briton *may* have been born in Britain, but may also be an inhabitant.--'''''[[User:ianmacm|<span style="background:#88b;color:#cff;font-variant:small-caps">♦Ian<span style="background:#99c">Ma<span style="background:#aad">c</span></span>M♦</span>]] <sup>[[User_talk:ianmacm|(talk to me)]]</sup>''''' 20:15, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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:::In the lede (and also the body of the article), why not switch the role of noun and adjective with a change in the order? Thus "52-year-old" would be used as a "noun" and "British" as an adjective. So instead of "a 52-year-old Briton", write "a British 52-year-old" (or even "British-born 52-year-old" to avoid any ambiguity). Just an idea ... [[User:Mathsci|Mathsci]] ([[User talk:Mathsci|talk]]) 22:07, 23 November 2021 (UTC) |
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::::Firstly, The Free Dictionary is a crap source. It’s about as basic as you can get, but even if it weren’t, NO dictionary is authoritative about the implications of words, which relate to common usage not literal meaning. The best that any dictionary will offer is to indicate “usually … “ or by the order that it offers meanings. Thus by putting ‘native of’ first, TFD is indicating that the most common meaning is precisely that - a native of Britain - someone born there. I think you would not find ’native of’ in the definition of the word ‘British’, which when applied to people simply means citizenship, however acquired. [[T S Eliot]] was a British citizen, he was not a Briton. |
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::::I don’t know what ‘inhabitant’ means in this context, unless perhaps they mean the ancient Britons. I defy anyone to find the word used commonly of people currently living in the UK, who are NOT British citizens. That’s [[WP:OR]] of course, but the arguments refuting this are equally OR and OR based on interpreting what a truly crap source fails to say. |
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Title needs to read "2017 Westminster Terror attack" [[User:Cllgbksr|Cllgbksr]] ([[User talk:Cllgbksr|talk]]) 18:53, 9 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:{{replyto|Cllgbksr}} It doesn't look like that's how these articles get named. See [[September 11 attacks]], [[2008 Mumbai attacks]], and [[7 July 2005 London bombings]]. But precedent set at other articles is generally not a compelling reason to do anything per [[WP:OTHERSTUFF]] so I'll ask: can you explain why this article needs to have "terror" added to its name? '''''[[User talk:CityOfSilver|<font color="#EDDA74" face="Bradley Hand ITC">City</font>]][[Special:Contribs/CityOfSilver|<font color="Green" face="Bradley Hand ITC">O</font><font color="Red" face="Bradley Hand ITC">f</font>]][[Special:EmailUser/CityOfSilver|<font color="#708090" face="Bradley Hand ITC">Silver</font>]]''''' 18:57, 9 April 2017 (UTC) |
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::::What is hoped to be achieved here? If the intention is to make clear that Masood was born in the UK, and not simply acquired his ‘British-ness’, then simply say that. If not not, then why use a tortured construction with the hope of ''implying'' ‘British-born’ ''(although the proposal doesn’t do this anyhow, ‘British man’ simply means male citizen, like Eliot or tens of thousands of others who moved to the UK)'' . Why not use the ordinary noun for a British person, regardless of whether I am right about the additional implications of the word? Which btw has been here since the event occurred. [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 07:06, 24 November 2021 (UTC) |
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:::::The [https://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/definition/english/briton?q=briton Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary] says that a Briton is "a person from Britain" I think you would be hard pushed to find any dictionary which said that "Briton ''implies'' British-born". Pincrete seems to be stuck in [[WP:OR]] mode here. Saying that it has been in the article since 2017 is a [[WP:UNCHALLENGED]] argument and proves very little. I was interested in [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=2017_Westminster_attack&diff=1056283639&oldid=1056278778 this edit summary] by {{u|HJ Mitchell}}. There is a tendency to assume that crimes like this must be committed by foreigners, but Khalid Masood was not foreign and chose this name after converting to Islam.--'''''[[User:ianmacm|<span style="background:#88b;color:#cff;font-variant:small-caps">♦Ian<span style="background:#99c">Ma<span style="background:#aad">c</span></span>M♦</span>]] <sup>[[User_talk:ianmacm|(talk to me)]]</sup>''''' 07:25, 24 November 2021 (UTC) |
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{{ping|WWGB}} Care to elaborate your reason for reverting me? Don't you agree that terrorist attacks motivated by Islamic extremism (that is, Jihadism, as the source states), is terrorism? --[[User:BurritoBazooka|'''BurritoBazooka''']] [[User talk:BurritoBazooka|<sup>Talk</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/BurritoBazooka|<small>Contribs</small>]] 01:12, 28 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:::::btw, from later in the TFD entry ‘for ‘Briton’ : ''In writing, an individual British person can be referred to as a Briton. - The youth, a 17-year-old Briton, was searched and arrested.'' |
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:::::I admit my OR, and say it isn’t relevant anyway. You continue OR-ish arguments based on what dictionaries fail to say. The very best dictionary would not be expected to state explicitly all the implications that attach to a word. More importantly, it doesn’t actually matter much whether ‘Briton’ implies ‘British-born’, because ‘British man’ certainly DOESN’T imply ANYTHING - it states sex and citizenship ONLY. |
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:::::Did you actually read my posts? If you want to tell readers that Masood was born in the UK, the only way of saying it AFAIK is by clearly saying it. He adopted his ‘foreign-sounding’ name only on conversion. Country of birth, ethnicity and religious ‘status’ ''(whether inherited or adopted)'' are frequently relevant to terrorist events, and we shouldn’t shy away from including them explicitly- though not in sentence one of the lead of course. |
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:No, I don't. Masood's intention of "waging jihad in revenge against Western military action in Muslim countries in the Middle East" is not the same as terrorism, which is intent to provoke fear or terror. There is no evidence that Masood wanted to create terror, he just wanted to get even. [[User:WWGB|WWGB]] ([[User talk:WWGB|talk]]) 01:20, 28 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:::::So, even if I admit that the implications I attach to ‘Briton’ are wrong - or at least unproven - what is the objection to ‘Briton’ as the normal word for ‘a British person’ and what are the advantages of avoiding it? Even TFD endorses its use in that way. [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 07:55, 24 November 2021 (UTC) |
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::{{ping|WWGB}} [[Definitions of terrorism|Politically motivated violence with the intent to cause harm to civilians]] (such as driving a car into pedestrians on Westminster Bridge) is terrorism. The rest of the article also already describes the attack as a terrorist attack, and so do most of the sources talking about intent. The UK also has [[Definitions_of_terrorism#United_Kingdom|a clearer definition of what a terrorist attack is]]. --[[User:BurritoBazooka|'''BurritoBazooka''']] [[User talk:BurritoBazooka|<sup>Talk</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/BurritoBazooka|<small>Contribs</small>]] 05:49, 28 April 2017 (UTC) |
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::[[7_July_2005_London_bombings#Videotaped_statements|The 7/7 bombers also had the same stated motives]] (which boiled down to Islamic extremism), but the act was terrorism in the effect that it had (most probably an intentional effect) and the way it was done (non-state actors, to civilians, for political reasons). If you revert me again, please escalate by also removing this article (and the talk page) from terrorist-related categories, and change the article to read as if the attack wasn't terrorism. Then it is clearer when one of us calls for an RfC. --[[User:BurritoBazooka|'''BurritoBazooka''']] [[User talk:BurritoBazooka|<sup>Talk</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/BurritoBazooka|<small>Contribs</small>]] 06:05, 28 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:::I'm still not satisfied it meets the definition of Islamic terrorism, but I am happy to wait for other editors to weigh in. [[User:WWGB|WWGB]] ([[User talk:WWGB|talk]]) 08:17, 28 April 2017 (UTC) |
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Why use the word terrorist to describe this attack? I thought wikipedia stood for npov [[Special:Contributions/94.174.60.160|94.174.60.160]] ([[User talk:94.174.60.160|talk]]) 16:29, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Terrorism |
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::::Part of the article now says it is terrorism, and another part says the motive for this act (of terrorism) was Islamic extremism. Why not be consistent? --[[User:BurritoBazooka|'''BurritoBazooka''']] [[User talk:BurritoBazooka|<sup>Talk</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/BurritoBazooka|<small>Contribs</small>]] 12:07, 28 April 2017 (UTC) |
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:NPOV does not mean ignoring ''(almost)'' universally used descriptions. Driving a car into pedestrians to kill them and then knifing an unarmed policeman to death for quasi-political reasons is terrorism. Terrorism is a method of affecting change using terror as your weapon, it may be justified sometimes perhaps, but it's still terrorism. [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 18:20, 8 November 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::Terrorism isn't a motive, any more than murder or theft are motives. [[User:Pincrete|Pincrete]] ([[User talk:Pincrete|talk]]) 15:09, 28 April 2017 (UTC) |
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::::::{{ping|Pincrete}} Yes, that position agrees with my own. I think the dispute is over whether this fulfils the intent clauses in the [[definitions of terrorism]]. I argue that the new information present doesn't show that this isn't terrorism, and the security services (and the Independent) haven't released the full message. WWGB says there is not enough evidence to say that he did it to create terror - but the premeditated public killing of civilians is more than enough for me to say that the methods used, were used with the purpose of creating terror. --[[User:BurritoBazooka|'''BurritoBazooka''']] [[User talk:BurritoBazooka|<sup>Talk</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/BurritoBazooka|<small>Contribs</small>]] 15:17, 28 April 2017 (UTC) |
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Part of a "campaign"?
[edit]Sure we have attributed statements supporting the speculation that this attack was related to Islamic extremism, but can we, within the bounds of Wikipedia policies (WP:NOR, WP:SYNTH, WP:V & co) support the assertion that it was also somehow part of an implied centrally coordinated or organised campaign of attacks across Europe which started in 2014? I propose removing links and association to this notion (including the article Islamic terrorism in Europe (2014–present)) until we have adequately attributed and reliably sourced confirmation that that is indeed the case, -- de Facto (talk). 06:40, 30 August 2017 (UTC)
- IMO the problem(s) are with the linked article.Pincrete (talk) 06:50, 30 August 2017 (UTC)
- There is a discussion pertinent to this at: Talk:June_2017_London_Bridge_attack#Islamic_terrorism_in_Europe_.282014.E2.80.93present. --TBM10 (talk) 19:47, 7 September 2017 (UTC)
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Date of conviction needed
[edit]The template presently says:
- Perpetrator Khalid Masood
I believe the use of "perpetrator" rather than "suspect" means he was convicted at some point? I am not able to find a conviction date mentioned though. Am I overlooking this or have we not added it yet? ScratchMarshall (talk) 19:44, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
- ScratchMarshall, Masood was shot by police during the attack and died at the scene, therefore there never will be a trial. The coroner's inquest is ongoing but is extremely unlikely to conclude anything other than his being lawfully killed and his victims being murdered. Pincrete (talk) 20:15, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
@Pincrete: thanks for clarifying that, missed that detail skimming the article. WP:BLPCRIME protections would not apply then. ScratchMarshall (talk) 20:16, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
Short description of Perpetrator
[edit]The latest edit war in this article is on how to describe the perpetrator in the lead paragraph. Is he to be called a "British citizen" or a "Briton," to revive the archaism favoured decades ago by the Canadian owner of the Daily Express? I propose that as a compromise we return to calling him a "Kentish Man." NRPanikker (talk) 20:41, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
- Seriously folks? A person's county is not a nationality. "British" is good enough for any person born and brought up in Britain and holding British citizenship. Masood ticks all of these boxes. He was not one of those pesky foreigners with an Islamic sounding name. It's also unlikely that people outside Britain would have much idea what "Kentish man" means. Even in Britain this isn't a commonly used phrase.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 08:13, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- A Man of Kent would know what a Kentish Man (or Maid) was. NRPanikker (talk) 17:58, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- The long-standing term is 'Briton', which implies someone born in Britain, rather than simply acquiring citizenship. Why would we change an established term? Do we call someone born in Edinburgh a 'Scottish person'? Someone from Dublin an 'Irish person'? Pincrete (talk) 18:05, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- A Man of Kent would know what a Kentish Man (or Maid) was. NRPanikker (talk) 17:58, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- I'm not really keen on the word Briton and opted for "British man" which is used at Killing of David Amess. This comes about because some people think that foreign sounding name = foreign person. Khalid Masood and Ali Harbi Ali were both born and brought up in Britain. I'm not sure that the word Briton automatically implies that a person was born in Britain.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 19:31, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- "British man" certainly doesn't imply 'native of UK'. To my ears it sounds unnatural and implies acquired citizenship. Pincrete (talk) 19:37, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- I'm not really keen on the word Briton and opted for "British man" which is used at Killing of David Amess. This comes about because some people think that foreign sounding name = foreign person. Khalid Masood and Ali Harbi Ali were both born and brought up in Britain. I'm not sure that the word Briton automatically implies that a person was born in Britain.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 19:31, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- The Free Dictionary says that a Briton is "A native or inhabitant of Great Britain". This confirms my theory that the word Briton does not automatically prove that a person was born in Britain. I think this is WP:OR by Pincrete.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 19:41, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- "A native"? I repeat, "British man" certainly doesn't imply UK-born. Briton implies British-born to the same extent that "Scot' implies something more than habitation. There is no single word that 'proves' one is UK-born and I never claimed this word did (ditto German/American/Frenchman etc). Pincrete (talk) 20:03, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- There is no word that automatically guarantees that a person was born in Britain. None of the three definitions at the Free Dictionary says this. A Briton *may* have been born in Britain, but may also be an inhabitant.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 20:15, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- In the lede (and also the body of the article), why not switch the role of noun and adjective with a change in the order? Thus "52-year-old" would be used as a "noun" and "British" as an adjective. So instead of "a 52-year-old Briton", write "a British 52-year-old" (or even "British-born 52-year-old" to avoid any ambiguity). Just an idea ... Mathsci (talk) 22:07, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- Firstly, The Free Dictionary is a crap source. It’s about as basic as you can get, but even if it weren’t, NO dictionary is authoritative about the implications of words, which relate to common usage not literal meaning. The best that any dictionary will offer is to indicate “usually … “ or by the order that it offers meanings. Thus by putting ‘native of’ first, TFD is indicating that the most common meaning is precisely that - a native of Britain - someone born there. I think you would not find ’native of’ in the definition of the word ‘British’, which when applied to people simply means citizenship, however acquired. T S Eliot was a British citizen, he was not a Briton.
- In the lede (and also the body of the article), why not switch the role of noun and adjective with a change in the order? Thus "52-year-old" would be used as a "noun" and "British" as an adjective. So instead of "a 52-year-old Briton", write "a British 52-year-old" (or even "British-born 52-year-old" to avoid any ambiguity). Just an idea ... Mathsci (talk) 22:07, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- There is no word that automatically guarantees that a person was born in Britain. None of the three definitions at the Free Dictionary says this. A Briton *may* have been born in Britain, but may also be an inhabitant.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 20:15, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- I don’t know what ‘inhabitant’ means in this context, unless perhaps they mean the ancient Britons. I defy anyone to find the word used commonly of people currently living in the UK, who are NOT British citizens. That’s WP:OR of course, but the arguments refuting this are equally OR and OR based on interpreting what a truly crap source fails to say.
- What is hoped to be achieved here? If the intention is to make clear that Masood was born in the UK, and not simply acquired his ‘British-ness’, then simply say that. If not not, then why use a tortured construction with the hope of implying ‘British-born’ (although the proposal doesn’t do this anyhow, ‘British man’ simply means male citizen, like Eliot or tens of thousands of others who moved to the UK) . Why not use the ordinary noun for a British person, regardless of whether I am right about the additional implications of the word? Which btw has been here since the event occurred. Pincrete (talk) 07:06, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
- The Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary says that a Briton is "a person from Britain" I think you would be hard pushed to find any dictionary which said that "Briton implies British-born". Pincrete seems to be stuck in WP:OR mode here. Saying that it has been in the article since 2017 is a WP:UNCHALLENGED argument and proves very little. I was interested in this edit summary by HJ Mitchell. There is a tendency to assume that crimes like this must be committed by foreigners, but Khalid Masood was not foreign and chose this name after converting to Islam.--♦IanMacM♦ (talk to me) 07:25, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
- btw, from later in the TFD entry ‘for ‘Briton’ : In writing, an individual British person can be referred to as a Briton. - The youth, a 17-year-old Briton, was searched and arrested.
- I admit my OR, and say it isn’t relevant anyway. You continue OR-ish arguments based on what dictionaries fail to say. The very best dictionary would not be expected to state explicitly all the implications that attach to a word. More importantly, it doesn’t actually matter much whether ‘Briton’ implies ‘British-born’, because ‘British man’ certainly DOESN’T imply ANYTHING - it states sex and citizenship ONLY.
- Did you actually read my posts? If you want to tell readers that Masood was born in the UK, the only way of saying it AFAIK is by clearly saying it. He adopted his ‘foreign-sounding’ name only on conversion. Country of birth, ethnicity and religious ‘status’ (whether inherited or adopted) are frequently relevant to terrorist events, and we shouldn’t shy away from including them explicitly- though not in sentence one of the lead of course.
- So, even if I admit that the implications I attach to ‘Briton’ are wrong - or at least unproven - what is the objection to ‘Briton’ as the normal word for ‘a British person’ and what are the advantages of avoiding it? Even TFD endorses its use in that way. Pincrete (talk) 07:55, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
terrorist attack
[edit]Why use the word terrorist to describe this attack? I thought wikipedia stood for npov 94.174.60.160 (talk) 16:29, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Terrorism
- NPOV does not mean ignoring (almost) universally used descriptions. Driving a car into pedestrians to kill them and then knifing an unarmed policeman to death for quasi-political reasons is terrorism. Terrorism is a method of affecting change using terror as your weapon, it may be justified sometimes perhaps, but it's still terrorism. Pincrete (talk) 18:20, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
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