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This article has a great lead paragraph with good introductory information. Use of Wiki formatting is seen here. No errors found. Author meets criteria for NPOV and NOR. An improvement would be an addition of a few images. |
This article has a great lead paragraph with good introductory information. Use of Wiki formatting is seen here. No errors found. Author meets criteria for NPOV and NOR. An improvement would be an addition of a few images. |
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Comments from Jxu2881 - good content but lacks Wiki formatting and has some grammar errors. |
Comments from Jxu2881 - good content but lacks Wiki formatting and has some grammar errors. |
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* Words such as "finally", "liberated", and "accomplished" violate NPOV. |
* Words such as "finally", "liberated", and "accomplished" violate NPOV. |
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* Use double brakets [[like this]] to hyperlink other wikipedia articles that should be linked in your research. |
* Use double brakets [[Intentionally permanent red link|like this]] to hyperlink other wikipedia articles that should be linked in your research. |
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* include indie film names in content, especially because they are not listed elsewhere |
* include indie film names in content, especially because they are not listed elsewhere |
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* When just referring to him by one name, use "Thurston", not "Nick". |
* When just referring to him by one name, use "Thurston", not "Nick". |
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* The first two paragraphs lack citations and the sources tab is misformatted. |
* The first two paragraphs lack citations and the sources tab is misformatted. |
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* watch redundance and awkward sentence structure. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Jxu2881|Jxu2881]] ([[User talk:Jxu2881|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Jxu2881|contribs]]) 21:48, 6 October 2015 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-- |
* watch redundance and awkward sentence structure. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Jxu2881|Jxu2881]] ([[User talk:Jxu2881|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Jxu2881|contribs]]) 21:48, 6 October 2015 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-- |
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Images that were present were deleted due to copyright issues, the evidence of the images can be found in the history of the article~~~~ {{subst:Unsigned|1=Roo9820|2=21:16, 27 October 2015 (UTC)}} <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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[edit]This article has a great lead paragraph with good introductory information. Use of Wiki formatting is seen here. No errors found. Author meets criteria for NPOV and NOR. An improvement would be an addition of a few images.
Problem: this is not the right Nick Thurston! http://www.nickthurston.info/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.21.139.101 (talk) 21:46, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
Comments from Jxu2881 - good content but lacks Wiki formatting and has some grammar errors.
- Words such as "finally", "liberated", and "accomplished" violate NPOV.
- Use double brakets like this to hyperlink other wikipedia articles that should be linked in your research.
- include indie film names in content, especially because they are not listed elsewhere
- When just referring to him by one name, use "Thurston", not "Nick".
- The first two paragraphs lack citations and the sources tab is misformatted.
- watch redundance and awkward sentence structure. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jxu2881 (talk • contribs) 21:48, 6 October 2015 (UTC)