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How is there no mention of Chico O'Farrill?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chico_O%27Farrill— Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.205.3.184 (talk • contribs) 22:45, 26 April 2016‎ (UTC)[reply]

Removed multiple possessive pronouns

I removed all "hises" but the first from the opening sentence of "His beret and horn-rimmed spectacles, his scat singing, his bent horn, pouched cheeks, and his light-hearted personality provided some of bebop's most prominent symbols." Could anyone please tell me if it's okay to list something like "his table, his chair, and his lamp" in a sentence, or if it's more acceptable to just use the possessive pronoun once? Also, sorry to be passive-aggressive to whoever wrote that sentences, or just the "hises", in my edit note. I originally wrote a version of this on the help desk, but then deleted it when I realized it would be better to ask it here first, since other users have told me to do that and this page seems to indicate that I should.--Thylacine24 (talk) 16:46, 18 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chico_O%27Farrill<small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:72.205.3.184|72.205.3.184]] ([[User talk:72.205.3.184|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/72.205.3.184|contribs]]) 22:45, 26 April 2016‎ (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned -->
-== Personal Life and Death ==
+== Removed multiple possessive pronouns ==
+I removed all "hises" but the first from the opening sentence of "His beret and horn-rimmed spectacles, his scat singing, his bent horn, pouched cheeks, and his light-hearted personality provided some of bebop's most prominent symbols." Could anyone please tell me if it's okay to list something like "his table, his chair, and his lamp" in a sentence, or if it's more acceptable to just use the possessive pronoun once? Also, sorry to be passive-aggressive to whoever wrote that sentences, or just the "hises", in my edit note. I originally wrote a [[Special:Redirect/revision/1018540617#Using multiple possessive pronouns in a list|version of this]] on the help desk, but then deleted it when I realized it would be better to ask it here first, since other users have told me to do that and [[Wikipedia:Help_desk/Are_you_in_the_right_place|this page]] seems to indicate that I should.--[[User:Thylacine24|Thylacine24]] ([[User talk:Thylacine24|talk]]) 16:46, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
-No section on Personal Life and Death, not even a mention of what he died from.? --[[Special:Contributions/169.0.4.50|169.0.4.50]] ([[User talk:169.0.4.50|talk]]) 15:51, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
-: Are you hoping for details about his family? His daughter maybe?<br />[[User:Vmavanti|Vmavanti]] ([[User talk:Vmavanti|talk]]) 03:27, 23 July 2019 (UTC)