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To Prepare this article for FA status.
From Peer review: It is mainly structural and syntactical issues that separate it from FA status - there are plenty of facts but they are poorly presented and organised.
Addition of pictures and/or photographs to illustrate the relevant topics/sections. Preferably free images.

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-*To Prepare for FA STATUS, from Peer Review:
+* To Prepare this article for FA status.
+* From Peer review: It is mainly structural and syntactical issues that separate it from FA status - there are plenty of facts but they are poorly presented and organised.
-*Sparse inline citations, and many of the ones that are there aren't high quality.
+* Addition of pictures and/or photographs to illustrate the relevant topics/sections. Preferably free images.
-*The Table of Contents is huge.
-*Get more critical analysis of her work (look up reviews in Rolling Stone, Entertainment Weekly, newspapers of large cities, etc.).
-*Personal section is light on real substance
-*"Career achievments" is light on real substance.
-*Fill in 2 citations
-*Format the 2 added in link links into citations
-*Some pictures have network logos in them and the logos should be cropped out or another picture should be found as this is copyright infrigment
-*a cover picture of Rolling Stone in April 1999 is discussed, yet the cover is not pictured in the article.
-*It is mainly structural and syntactical issues like this that which separate it from FA status - there are plenty of facts but they are poorly presented and organised.
-*The See also list is also shockingly biased - essentially a list of lists which make Spears look good. I wonder if I should add List of people with the shortest marriages to balance it out!
-*the article also has a very messy supporting article base, many needing serious cleanup.
-*I'd suggest to do a lot of paragraph merging - keep them nice and long.
-*I'd suggest getting rid of the subsections of "personal" and merging everything to get more prose.
-*Add that she was in a Girl Band before she was solo...but backed out of it