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==Biological engineering== |
==Biological engineering== |
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1) MLA: Lee, M., B.A., M.A. "Bioengineering." Salem Press Encyclopedia Of Science (2015): Research Starters. Web. 22 Oct. 2015. |
1) MLA: Lee, M., B.A., M.A. "Bioengineering." Salem Press Encyclopedia Of Science (2015): Research Starters. Web. 22 Oct. 2015. |
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2) MLA: Pasotti, Lorenzo, and Susanna Zucca. "Advances And Computational Tools Towards Predictable Design In Biological Engineering." Computational & Mathematical Methods In Medicine (2014): 1-16. Academic Search Complete. Web. 22 Oct. 2015. |
2) MLA: Pasotti, Lorenzo, and Susanna Zucca. "Advances And Computational Tools Towards Predictable Design In Biological Engineering." Computational & Mathematical Methods In Medicine (2014): 1-16. Academic Search Complete. Web. 22 Oct. 2015. |
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4) MLA: Johnson, Arthur T. "The Basics Of Bioengineering Education." 26Th Southern Biomedical Engineering Conference SBEC 2010, April 30 - May 2, 2010, College Park, Maryland, Usa (2010): 65. Publisher Provided Full Text Searching File. Web. 22 Oct. 2015. |
4) MLA: Johnson, Arthur T. "The Basics Of Bioengineering Education." 26Th Southern Biomedical Engineering Conference SBEC 2010, April 30 - May 2, 2010, College Park, Maryland, Usa (2010): 65. Publisher Provided Full Text Searching File. Web. 22 Oct. 2015. |
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:Your sources look okay, but you only list three in your sandbox. The sandbox is where you should put the complete list of your sources, not on this talk page.[[User:Josefhoracek|Josef Horáček]] ([[User talk:Josefhoracek|talk]]) 18:49, 26 October 2015 (UTC) |
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== The Lead == |
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Your draft is a good start. I recommend that you delete the last two sentences. You should also delete all citations - the lead doesn't need citations if they are in the body of the article. Finally, proofread one more time, then post the lead. [[User:Josefhoracek|Josef Horáček]] ([[User talk:Josefhoracek|talk]]) 20:48, 1 November 2015 (UTC) |
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[edit]Article in need of better references and citations:Biological engineering
Biological engineering
[edit]1) MLA: Lee, M., B.A., M.A. "Bioengineering." Salem Press Encyclopedia Of Science (2015): Research Starters. Web. 22 Oct. 2015.
link: http://eds.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/eds/detail/detail?sid=d65dfe7e-ce9e-4b78-9bb1-88a1174a6354%40sessionmgr120&vid=4&hid=126&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#AN=89250372&db=ers
2) MLA: Pasotti, Lorenzo, and Susanna Zucca. "Advances And Computational Tools Towards Predictable Design In Biological Engineering." Computational & Mathematical Methods In Medicine (2014): 1-16. Academic Search Complete. Web. 22 Oct. 2015.
link: http://eds.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/eds/detail/detail?sid=84eb2d02-6fb9-431a-8343-1af4f9227169%40sessionmgr110&vid=0&hid=126&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#AN=100486134&db=a9h
3) MLA: Biological Engineering. n.p.: 2015. Gale Virtual Reference Library. Web. 22 Oct. 2015.
link: http://eds.a.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/eds/detail/detail?vid=12&sid=50676317-1376-48d4-aa97-a657fa0bbd1b%40sessionmgr4001&hid=4211&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#AN=edsgcl.7071300008&db=edsgvr
4) MLA: Johnson, Arthur T. "The Basics Of Bioengineering Education." 26Th Southern Biomedical Engineering Conference SBEC 2010, April 30 - May 2, 2010, College Park, Maryland, Usa (2010): 65. Publisher Provided Full Text Searching File. Web. 22 Oct. 2015.
link: http://eds.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/eds/detail/detail?sid=1d2026d1-3ead-48dc-b508-b4051dfd1520%40sessionmgr110&vid=0&hid=126&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#AN=76880059&db=edb
- Your sources look okay, but you only list three in your sandbox. The sandbox is where you should put the complete list of your sources, not on this talk page.Josef Horáček (talk) 18:49, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
The Lead
[edit]Your draft is a good start. I recommend that you delete the last two sentences. You should also delete all citations - the lead doesn't need citations if they are in the body of the article. Finally, proofread one more time, then post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:48, 1 November 2015 (UTC)