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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:09, 9 August 2014 (UTC)
Unfortunately this article does not qualify for DYK because it has been insufficiently expanded. Suggest taking to GA and renominating

House of Kamehameha

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... that as heir to the House of Kamehameha, Kauikeaouli (pictured) named his aikāne (same sex partner), Kaomi, co-ruler ("engrafted king") of the Kingdom of Hawaii in 1833?

ALT1:... that at 18, Kamehameha III (pictured), heir to the House of Kamehameha named his aikāne (same sex partner), Kaomi, co-ruler ("engrafted king") of the Kingdom of Hawaii, shocking the Christian church of the time?

5x expanded by Mark Miller (talk). Self nominated at 06:21, 16 July 2014 (UTC).

Both hooks are a bit wordy without much flow. How about:

ALT2: ... that as heir to the House of Kamehameha, Kauikeaouli (pictured) named his aikāne (same sex partner) co-ruler of the Kingdom of Hawaii in 1833? 97198 (talk) 13:17, 25 July 2014 (UTC)

Unfortunately this article does not qualify for DYK because it has been insufficiently expanded, going from 3156 B on 4th July, before the expansion started, to 11 kB now. It would need to reach 15+ kB to qualify. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:28, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
Doesn't meet expansion size requirements. Rcsprinter₁₂₃ (natter) @ 17:06, 4 August 2014 (UTC)

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+* ... that as heir to the '''[[House of Kamehameha]]''', [[Kamehameha III|Kauikeaouli]] ''(pictured)'' named his [[Aikāne relationships in Hawaii|aikāne]] (same sex partner), Kaomi, co-ruler ("engrafted king") of the [[Kingdom of Hawaii]] in 1833?
+:* '''ALT1''':... that at 18, [[Kamehameha III]] ''(pictured)'', heir to the '''[[House of Kamehameha]]''' named his [[Aikāne relationships in Hawaii|aikāne]] (same sex partner), Kaomi, co-ruler ("engrafted king") of the [[Kingdom of Hawaii]], shocking the Christian church of the time?
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-* ... that... at the age of eighteen, in 1833 after '''[[Kaʻahumanu]]''' died, '''[[Kamehameha III|King Kamehameha III]]''' named his [[Aikāne relationships in Hawaii|aikāne]] (same sex partner), Kaomi, co- ruler of the '''[[Kingdom of Hawaii]]''' as well as naming his sister, '''[[Kīnaʻu]]''' as [[Kuhina Nui]]?
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-:* '''ALT1''':... that...in 1833, at the age of 18, '''[[Kamehameha III|King Kamehameha III]]''' named his [[Aikāne relationships in Hawaii|aikāne]] (same sex partner), Kaomi, co-ruler of the '''[[Kingdom of Hawaii]]''', shocking the Christian church at the time?
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 <small>5x expanded by [[User:Mark Miller|Mark Miller]] ([[User talk:Mark Miller|talk]]). Self nominated at 06:21, 16 July 2014 (UTC)</small>.
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+:* Both hooks are a bit wordy without much flow. How about:
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+::* '''ALT2''': ... that as heir to the '''[[House of Kamehameha]]''', [[Kamehameha III|Kauikeaouli]] ''(pictured)'' named his [[Aikāne relationships in Hawaii|aikāne]] (same sex partner) co-ruler of the [[Kingdom of Hawaii]] in 1833? [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 13:17, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
+*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Unfortunately this article does not qualify for DYK because it has been insufficiently expanded, going from 3156 B on 4th July, before the expansion started, to 11 kB now. It would need to reach 15+ kB to qualify. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 05:28, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
+*[[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] Doesn't meet expansion size requirements. '''[[User:Rcsprinter123|<span style="font-family:futura; font-size:11pt; color:#DF3A01">Rcsprinter<sub>123</sub></span>]]  ''' [[User talk:Rcsprinter123|<span style="font-family:copperplate; font-size:10pt; color:#488AC7">(natter)</span>]] <small>@</small> 17:06, 4 August 2014 (UTC)
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