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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Montanabw^(talk) 05:18, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Debra Marquart

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... that Debra Marquart, a poet from Napoleon, North Dakota, left to tour with rock bands and returned to teach writers' workshops in Bakken oil field communities most affected by hydraulic fracking?

Created by Wuerzele (talk). Self-nominated at 07:54, 19 May 2016 (UTC).

New enough, long enough, well referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. Hook refs verified and cited inline. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. I'm wondering what you think about shortening the hook? The part about being a poet kind of detracts from the impact. I suggest:
ALT1: ... that Debra Marquart left Napoleon, North Dakota, to tour with rock bands and returned to teach writers' workshops in Bakken oil field communities most affected by hydraulic fracking? Yoninah (talk) 21:26, 28 May 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for reviewing AND suggesting improvements. it never occurred to me that "poet" would distract! seeing your alternative I feel you are completely right; agree with your proposal. what do I need to do next now- strike the original proposal? I havent done this DYK by myself before.--Wuerzele (talk) 13:38, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes, we'll strike the hook. Since I just tweaked the original, I'll go ahead and approve ALT1. Yoninah (talk) 14:36, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

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+*<s> ... that '''[[Debra Marquart]]''', a poet from [[Napoleon, North Dakota]], left to tour with rock bands and returned to teach writers' workshops in [[Bakken oil field]] communities most affected by [[Hydraulic fracturing|hydraulic fracking]]?</s>
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 :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, well referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. Hook refs verified and cited inline. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. I'm wondering what you think about shortening the hook? The part about being a poet kind of detracts from the impact. I suggest:
 :*'''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Debra Marquart]]''' left [[Napoleon, North Dakota]], to tour with rock bands and returned to teach writers' workshops in [[Bakken oil field]] communities most affected by [[hydraulic fracking]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:26, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 :::Thank [[User:Yoninah| you]] for reviewing AND suggesting improvements. it never occurred to me that "poet" would distract! seeing your alternative I feel you are completely right; agree with your proposal. what do I need to do next now- strike the original proposal? I havent done this DYK by myself before.--[[User:Wuerzele|Wuerzele]] ([[User talk:Wuerzele|talk]]) 13:38, 30 May 2016 (UTC)
-:::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Yes, we'll strike the hook. Since I just tweaked the original, I'll go ahead and approve ALT1. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 14:36, 30 May 2016 (UTC)
+:::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Yes, we'll strike the hook. Since I just tweaked the original, I'll go ahead and approve ALT1. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 14:36, 30 May 2016 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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