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Major depressive disorder: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Major_depressive_disorder |
Major depressive disorder: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Major_depressive_disorder I choose this article because I want to choose a psychology course in the next semester, so I want to know about it first. |
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''Lead Guiding questions • Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? • Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? • Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? • Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?'' |
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https://www.who.int/news-room/fact-sheets/detail/depression |
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It includes a brief and clear introductory sentence. It mainly introduces the symptoms, causes and some treatment methods. |
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== Peer Review Of Draft == |
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User:Mengyurui |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mengyurui/Major_depressive_disorder |
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Lead has been changed to major depressive disorder. Content is relevant to the topic, however nothing has been changed from the portion of text that was taken out of the original Wikipedia page. The content that was added were only citations and those citations were only directed to give an overview about the diseases talked about in the draft, which helped get a better understanding of the disorder. .No images were added to the draft. All the sources that were added were current, up-to-date, and are present in the draft. All of the citations that were added were not previously added before on the original Wikipedia page. Overall, nothing was changed, no words were taken away or added, the only thing that was changed in the draft for the addition of citations to help get a better grasp on what the disease actually is. |
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[[User:Iceblue458|Iceblue458]] ([[User talk:Iceblue458|talk]]) 00:19, 3 December 2020 (UTC) |
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Latest revision as of 00:19, 3 December 2020
Major depressive disorder: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Major_depressive_disorder I choose this article because I want to choose a psychology course in the next semester, so I want to know about it first. Lead Guiding questions • Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? • Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? • Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? • Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? It includes a brief and clear introductory sentence. It mainly introduces the symptoms, causes and some treatment methods.
Peer Review Of Draft
[edit]User:Mengyurui https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mengyurui/Major_depressive_disorder
Lead has been changed to major depressive disorder. Content is relevant to the topic, however nothing has been changed from the portion of text that was taken out of the original Wikipedia page. The content that was added were only citations and those citations were only directed to give an overview about the diseases talked about in the draft, which helped get a better understanding of the disorder. .No images were added to the draft. All the sources that were added were current, up-to-date, and are present in the draft. All of the citations that were added were not previously added before on the original Wikipedia page. Overall, nothing was changed, no words were taken away or added, the only thing that was changed in the draft for the addition of citations to help get a better grasp on what the disease actually is.