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== 06:41, 22 December 2024 review of submission by MonkeyBanjo007 == |
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{{Lafc|username=MonkeyBanjo007|ts=06:41, 22 December 2024|draft=Conor McLeod}} |
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To clarify, I tried creating a page but if I had to guess I don't have enough information at the moment. I will try to add to it I just want to create a page so I can add to it. Conor is an Actor for several roles and also a Voice Actor of A video game. |
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The article was rejected because "This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject". But I have included 2 links to independent sources (from Stanford university and Oxford university) and they both have a good amount of information on the subject. The subject is somewhat new so there isn't a lot of discussion of it in the public sphere. It is still mostly in academia, but I believe it will become more well known in the future. I also intend to add more information to it over time as I myself discover more. But I wanted to get it out there in case others had things to contribute (which will be good for me also.) |
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I was wondering of how I can add a portrait image, you know by the side of all these people usually there is an image to acompany the person. |
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[[User:DeepestTurtle|DeepestTurtle]] ([[User talk:DeepestTurtle|talk]]) 00:59, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|DeepestTurtle}} Most reviewers look for three or more independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage. The fact that you say that this subject is new, and you say it will be more well known in the future, likely means it is [[WP:TOOSOON|too soon for an article]] about it. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 01:23, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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::{{ping|DeepestTurtle}} I too have misgivings about the draft. However, in addition to the entry in the ''[[Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy]]'', a peer reviewed journal has published a dedicated issue on the topic of computer modeling in philosophy, which falls within the definition of computational philosophy. On the strength of those sources I've accepted the stub. If it doesn't survive in article space, you'll have to wait until the field has gained greater acceptance and people routinely use the term "computational philosophy" instead of long winded descriptions like "applications of logical and computational techniques to the development of synchronic and diachronic models of individual and collective cognition." --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 03:26, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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I was also wondering how you add images in general like of possibly the different characters he acts/ voice acts but I can't find a way to implement images or files. |
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== 12:43:27, 18 February 2021 review of draft by Catxx == |
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{{Lafc|username=Catxx|ts=12:43:27, 18 February 2021|draft=Draft:Rabbit_Welfare_Association_and_Fund}} |
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Thanks- [[User:MonkeyBanjo007|MonkeyBanjo007]] ([[User talk:MonkeyBanjo007|talk]]) 06:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:MonkeyBanjo007|MonkeyBanjo007]] see [[Help:Pictures]] for a tutorial on how do insert them. Note that the amount of images does not increase a draft's odds of acceptance, while multiple [[WP:IS|independent]] [[WP:RS|reliable]] sources that [[WP:N|notability]] do. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:14, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:43, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0 == |
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I'm not sure what more I can get for the Wikipedia gods on this subject. I've pulled in 15 references for a relatively small article including national press. What is it you want?! They're a welfare raising charity that deserve the recognition. Unfortunately it looks like they'll end up being yet another "not good enough" charity for the Wikipedia gods. |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|ts=06:43, 22 December 2024|draft=He Is Younger Businessman}} |
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You Should Agree This Draft [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0|talk]]) 06:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Link to the draft: [[Draft:Shubham X Rameshwar]] --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 07:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I agree with the draft's rejection. There is nothing that shows they are [[WP:N|notable]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Previously answered [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_7#12:14,_7_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_Bollysocialmedia|here]] (question posted by blocked user [[User:Bollysocialmedia]]) and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_7#11:37,_7_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_Royaloaksschoolking|here]] (by [[User:Royaloaksschoolking]]) and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/Archives/2024_December_10#02:00,_10_December_2024_review_of_submission_by_2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0|here]]. |
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:See also: [[Draft:Shubham Rameshwar Kakde]] about the same person (protected against creation after multiple re-creations and rejections), and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2024 August 9#14:43, 9 August 2024 review of submission by 2402:8100:3106:E5B8:47DC:DA3A:BF3A:D9DA|this question]] as well as the two sections after that one, posted by blocked account [[User:Shubhamxrameshwar564]]. Please stop creating these drafts, and stop spamming the help boards about them. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 08:52, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:54, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Batoenonghistoryador == |
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[[User:Catxx|Catxx]] ([[User talk:Catxx|talk]]) 12:43, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Batoenonghistoryador|ts=10:54, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Howard_Calleja_et.al_v._Anti-Terrorism_Council}} |
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:{{ping|Catxx}} Though I understand your frustration, what article creators need to demonstrate is (as indicated at the top of the draft) that the subject has received significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. So which of those references are all three: reliable published sources, that speak about the Rabbit Welfare Association and Fund in deep detail, and that are independent of the subject. Looking at the first six references, I don't see anything that clearly meets these three criteria. I see their own website cited twice. I see a passing mention in the Guardian, I see a passing mention from the BBC, and I'm not sure the others would qualify as reliable. That's the threshold you need to be demonstrating is met. Regards, [[User:Cyphoidbomb|Cyphoidbomb]] ([[User talk:Cyphoidbomb|talk]]) 23:48, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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Hello, |
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I would like to ask for your help regarding the draft title of an article I am currently writing. If possible, could you change the title to "Atty. Howard Calleja et al. v. Executive Secretary et al."? |
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::Might as well delete them then. There aren't going to be sources talking about them in particular, rather referring to their campaigns that they have started and they champion. Where you may see a "passing mention", I see a campaign that they have launched. That's the thing they want talking about. Not themselves. Such is the problem of representing charities on Wikipedia and why I've seen a few deleted now. --[[User:Catxx|Catxx]] ([[User talk:Catxx|talk]]) 11:56, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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Additionally, I have a few questions: |
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== 12:44:16, 18 February 2021 review of draft by Medha tiwari == |
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{{Lafc|username=Medha tiwari|ts=12:44:16, 18 February 2021|draft=User:Medha_tiwari/sandbox}} |
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1. How should I cite sources that are in PDF format? |
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2. In writing the article, is it permissible to list all the issues, given that they are material to the whole article? I am concerned that it might be flagged as a directory. Should I make it concise and risk omitting the core of the issues to shorten it? |
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Thank you so much for your guidance! |
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[[User:Medha tiwari|Medha tiwari]] ([[User talk:Medha tiwari|talk]]) 12:44, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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[[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]] ([[User talk:Batoenonghistoryador|talk]]) 10:54, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{re|Medha tiwari}} नमस्कार मेधा तिवारी और अंग्रेजी भाषा विकिपीडिया पर आपका स्वागत है। यह अच्छा है कि आपने इसमें एक लेख जोड़ने का फैसला किया है। दुर्भाग्य से, मुझे आपको यह बताना होगा कि हम केवल अंग्रेजी में लेख स्वीकार कर सकते हैं। कृपया लेख को अंग्रेजी में अनुवाद करें या अपनी भाषा में [https://www.wikipedia.org Wikipedia] का उपयोग करें। शुभकामनाएं, [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 13:02, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]]: the title isn't important at this stage, this will be moved to a different title anyway when (if) accepted, and at that point the reviewer will place it at the correct title. |
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== 15:05:54, 18 February 2021 review of draft by 96.255.132.79 == |
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:You can cite online PDFs with the {{tl|cite web}} template. The <code>format=</code> parameter takes PDF as value, but you don't even have to specify that, the template picks it up from the file type automatically. |
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{{Lafc|username=96.255.132.79|ts=15:05:54, 18 February 2021|draft=Draft:Ogom_Josiah_Nsaka}} |
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:Sorry, I don't understand what you mean by your last question (#2), could you elaborate? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I don't fully understand question 2 either, but I suspect that I can answer it by saying that a Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:42|independent reliably published sources]] say about a subject, and very little else. If independent commentators talk about all the issues, then you can list them; if no independent commentator refers to some issue, why should it appear in an encyclopaedia article at all? |
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:As to question 1, DoubleGrazing has answered the technical part, but the question arises of whether these PDFs have been [[WP:RS|reliably published]] or not. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 19:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thank you so much for this informative response. [[User:Batoenonghistoryador|Batoenonghistoryador]] ([[User talk:Batoenonghistoryador|talk]]) 00:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:37, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566 == |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|ts=11:37, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Shubham_X_Rameshwar}} |
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HE IS A BIGGEST YOUNGER BUSINESSMAN [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566|talk]]) 11:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Yeah okay. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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This is a great personality however most details are in printed form do you internet challenges in Africa. |
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[[Special:Contributions/96.255.132.79|96.255.132.79]] ([[User talk:96.255.132.79|talk]]) 15:05, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 16:10, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Njames05 == |
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Hello, thanks for your review. I’m currently located in the US but making serious effort to bring Africa to light. The biggest challenge is that there is little online information and that hinders a lot of African documentation. However we have to start somewhere. The details were from a hard copy book which I am willing to scan and send . Pls feel free to email me at isnsaka@gmail.com |
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{{Lafc|username=Njames05|ts=16:10, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:University_of_Texas_Rugby_Club}} |
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:You might ask for help of Project Members from the Wikiproject Arica [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Africa]] [[User:CommanderWaterford|CommanderWaterford]] ([[User talk:CommanderWaterford|talk]]) 12:54, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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How do I share my page here with two other people so they can help me add content? [[User:Njames05|Nigel D James]] ([[User talk:Njames05|talk]]) 16:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Njames05|Njames05]]: drafts are public, so you just share the URL as you would any other. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:14:35, 18 February 2021 review of submission by 2A02:8084:20E2:AD80:957F:DF01:7A70:8A4B Draft:Samuray Cuba confirmation pending == |
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:You're welcome to invite collaborators on the draft. Thank you for declaring your COI - I have corrected the formatting on your user page so that the declaration actually appears as it should. |
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:One of the first things you and they should do is to cite reliable published sources for all the unsourced material in the draft, and remove it if you can't find sources. You should also edit the text to remove all instances of "we": this is not in any sense the Club's article, but Wikipedia's article about the club, which should be almost entirely based on what people wholly unconnected with the club have chosen to publish about it, not on what the club or its associates say or want to say. |
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:You should also unbold the section headers. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 16:59, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B == |
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{{Lafc|username=2A02:8084:20E2:AD80:957F:DF01:7A70:8A4B|ts=17:14:35, 18 February 2021|link= |
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{{Lafc|username=2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|ts=16:59, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Kinhola_BK}} |
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<!-- [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Thomas]] OR [[Draft:Samuray Kuba]] --> |
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Check now [[Special:Contributions/2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B]] ([[User talk:2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B|talk]]) 16:59, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft was rejected, meaning that it may not be resubmitted. If you have fundamentally changed the draft to address the concerns of reviewers, you should first appeal to the last reviewer directly. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 17:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by LR.127 == |
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To whom it may concern, could anyone support be either give me any sort of feedback regarding the following page: [[Draft:Samuray_Cuba|Draft:Samuray Cuba]] |
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{{Lafc|username=LR.127|ts=17:45, 22 December 2024|draft=Rafael de Miguel González}} |
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Thanks in advance for the help. Thanks a lot, Kind regards[[Special:Contributions/2A02:8084:20E2:AD80:957F:DF01:7A70:8A4B|2A02:8084:20E2:AD80:957F:DF01:7A70:8A4B]] ([[User talk:2A02:8084:20E2:AD80:957F:DF01:7A70:8A4B|talk]]) 17:14, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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This is a comment on an existing Wikipedia article already submitted through AfC - I had declined it previously for doubts on notability, which have faded after a deep discussion [[Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Articles for creation/Archive 58#Draft:Rafael de Miguel Gonz%C3%A1lez declined 5 times.|here]] on the [[Rafael de Miguel González]] page. The article was then accepted. Since then, I feel that loads more unsourced information has been added that question the neutrality of the original draft. |
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I do not intend to send this article to AfD, hence why I merely aim to discuss it here - at worst, the article could be reverted to its revision when accepted, and newer edits could be trimmed or otherwise removed. |
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== 18:56:29, 18 February 2021 review of draft by Drkarenkaiser == |
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{{Lafc|username=Drkarenkaiser|ts=18:56:29, 18 February 2021|draft=User:Drkarenkaiser/sandbox/Emotional_Fitness}} |
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I'm courtesy pinging a few people who contributed to the previous discussion: [[User:Timtrent]], [[User:Joe Roe]], [[User:Benison]], [[User:Mr.choppers]], and [[User:asilvering]]. Cheers. [[User:LR.127|LR.127]] ([[User talk:LR.127|talk]]) 17:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Now that this is an actual article, you should discuss on the article talk page(perhaps as a [[WP:RFC|request for comment]]) or on the [[WP:HD|more general Help Desk]]. This board is only for drafts in the draft process. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:46, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Drkarenkaiser|Drkarenkaiser]] ([[User talk:Drkarenkaiser|talk]]) 18:56, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Drkarenkaiser}}, you might have please a look at [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not a dictionary]] - that sums it up. hope that was of help. [[User:CommanderWaterford|CommanderWaterford]] ([[User talk:CommanderWaterford|talk]]) 12:51, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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::My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, [[Rafael de Miguel González]] reads more like a CV than anything else. <span style="background:#ff0000;font-family:Times New Roman;">[[User:Mr.choppers|<span style="color:#FDEE00;">''' Mr.choppers | '''</span>]][[User talk:Mr.choppers|<span style="color:#FDEE00;">✎ </span>]]</span> 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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My page was rejected and I don't understand why and what I need to change. |
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:::{{tq|Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else.}} Woof. You weren't kidding. Good call on the re-stub. -- [[User:Asilvering|asilvering]] ([[User talk:Asilvering|talk]]) 18:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 18:56:33, 18 February 2021 review of submission by ACSP01 == |
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{{Lafc|username=ACSP01|ts=18:56:33, 18 February 2021|declined=Draft:Artsscommun_Limited}} |
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[[User:ACSP01|ACSP01]] ([[User talk:ACSP01|talk]]) 18:56, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|ACSP01}}, what is your question? [[User:CommanderWaterford|CommanderWaterford]] ([[User talk:CommanderWaterford|talk]]) 12:55, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 19:01:20, 18 February 2021 review of submission by Alex2830 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Alex2830|ts=19:01:20, 18 February 2021|declined=User:Alex2830/sandbox}} |
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I have a question. Why was my draft declined? <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Alex2830|Alex2830]] ([[User talk:Alex2830#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Alex2830|contribs]]) 19:01, 18 February 2021 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:Hi {{U|Alex2830}}. Draft [[User:Alex2830/sandbox]] was declined because it is about a topic on which Wikipedia already has an article, [[desert]]. (Indeed, it's an unattributed 98.8% [[WP:COPYWITHIN|copy]] of the first four paragraphs of that article, and so a copyright violation, although a [[WP:RIA|repairable]] one.) A second article on the same topic will not be published. You are welcome to edit [[desert]] and improve it, although it's already good. You might find it easier to improve a poorer article on a related topic, such as [[desertification]], [[desert greening]], or [[semi-arid climate]]. --[[User:Worldbruce|Worldbruce]] ([[User talk:Worldbruce|talk]]) 03:03, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 22:58:24, 18 February 2021 review of submission by AlikhanNalini == |
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{{Lafc|username=AlikhanNalini|ts=22:58:24, 18 February 2021|page= |
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Draft:Greg_Johnson_(British_Singer/Songwriter) |
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This Wiki page has been created, as fans of this artist were getting confused with another Greg Johnson (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Greg_Johnson_(white_nationalist)). This other Greg Johnson has a Wiki page, however, he is a self-confessed White Nationalist and therefore the total antithesis of the British Singer Songwriter, Greg Johnson. I have read the criteria and Greg Johnson (Musician), meets the following: |
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1. Has been the subject of multiple, non-trivial, published works appearing in sources that are reliable, not self-published, and are independent of the musician or ensemble itself: https://www.dorsetecho.co.uk/news/9904046.bournemouth-schoolboy-wins-over-festivals-20000-crowd/ & https://www.bournemouthecho.co.uk/news/10631354.bournemouth-teenager-takes-top-slot-in-talent-show/ & https://www.bournemouthecho.co.uk/news/10427057.bournemouth-youngsters-set-to-shine-at-teenstar-regional-finals/ & https://www.bournemouthecho.co.uk/news/10337037.talented-teens-reach-regional-finals-of-talent-contest/ |
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11. Has been placed in rotation nationally by a major radio or music television network. |
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12. Has been a featured subject of a substantial broadcast segment across a national radio or television network. |
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Greg has been featured on BBC Radio 2 and Wave 105Fm, the South's biggest variety of hits. https://gregjmusic.wixsite.com/website/bio & https://www.facebook.com/watch/?ref=saved&v=10151561078806394 |
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[[User:AlikhanNalini|AlikhanNalini]] ([[User talk:AlikhanNalini|talk]]) 22:58, 18 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 12:00:25, 19 February 2021 review of submission by Harsh Chadha == |
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{{Lafc|username=Harsh Chadha|ts=12:00:25, 19 February 2021|declined=Draft:Harsh_Chadha}} |
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[[User:Harsh Chadha|Harsh Chadha]] ([[User talk:Harsh Chadha|talk]]) 12:00, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Harsh Chadha}}, what is your question? [[User:CommanderWaterford|CommanderWaterford]] ([[User talk:CommanderWaterford|talk]]) 12:49, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 14:18:40, 19 February 2021 review of submission by VictoriaKira == |
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{{Lafc|username=VictoriaKira|ts=14:18:40, 19 February 2021|page= |
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KiRA MAZUR |
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Hello! I was really curious that my KiRA MAZUR article was rejected. Kira Mazur is a famous Ukrainian singer who already had an article on the Ukrainian Wikipedia. She writes music all over the world, so many people would like to know more about her. I wrote an article in English to make it more accessible. I am the Head manager of Kira Mazur and I have all the rights to the content and photos. I would be very grateful if you can show my mistakes and point out how to make them perfect for Wikipedia. Thank you in advance! |
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[[User:VictoriaKira|VictoriaKira]] ([[User talk:VictoriaKira|talk]]) 14:18, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|VictoriaKira}} Please read about [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]] and [[WP:PAID|paid editing]] for information on required formal disclosures you must make. |
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:Your draft was blatant promotion and was deleted. Please read [[WP:YFA|Your first article]] and the Wikipedia definition of [[WP:BAND|a notable musician]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 15:15, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 20:17:40, 19 February 2021 review of submission by TEAMTR33 == |
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{{Lafc|username=TEAMTR33|ts=20:17:40, 19 February 2021|declined=Draft:V1_MoDzZz}} |
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Hey guys I've did some changes and fixed my mistakes and I want you guys to review it again. |
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I'll appreciate if you review it again. |
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Thanks... |
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[[User:TEAMTR33|TEAMTR33]] ([[User talk:TEAMTR33|talk]]) 20:17, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:The draft was rejected, meaning it will not be considered further. The draft is completely unsourced. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:43, 19 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 00:36:42, 20 February 2021 review of submission by Atayibabs == |
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{{Lafc|username=Atayibabs|ts=00:36:42, 20 February 2021|declined=User:Atayibabs/sandbox}} |
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[[User:Atayibabs|Atayibabs]] ([[User talk:Atayibabs|talk]]) 00:36, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Atayibabs}} You don't ask a question, but your draft is a completely unsourced essay, not an encyclopedia article with citations to independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]. Please learn more about Wikipedia by using the [[WP:ADVENTURE |new user tutorial]] and reading [[WP:YFA|Your First Article]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 00:40, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 01:53:59, 20 February 2021 review of draft by 45Boomer == |
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{{Lafc|username=45Boomer|ts=01:53:59, 20 February 2021|draft=Draft:Boomer_Mays}} |
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I am trying to figure out what needs to be changed on my draft. It is not clear what the issue is I have the correct format with all the references. |
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[[User:45Boomer|45Boomer]] ([[User talk:45Boomer|talk]]) 01:53, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:Your references are bare URLs and should be formatted properly to display full bibliographic details. Please read [[WP:REFBEGIN]]. Most of your sources are primary sources or unreliable sources. Far better to have five solid references than dozens of poor quality references that are worthless for establishing notability. If you are claiming that this person is notable as an athlete, then you need to show that he meets the notability guideline that you can find at [[WP:NGRIDIRON]]. It does not appear that he does. [[User:Cullen328|<b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328</sup>]] [[User talk:Cullen328|<span style="color:#00F">''Let's discuss it''</span>]] 02:10, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 06:22:56, 20 February 2021 review of draft by 174.1.62.129 == |
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{{Lafc|username=174.1.62.129|ts=06:22:56, 20 February 2021|draft=Draft:Bahram_Rad}} |
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I need help to edit my article |
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THanks for your hep |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Bahram_Rad |
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[[Special:Contributions/174.1.62.129|174.1.62.129]] ([[User talk:174.1.62.129|talk]]) 06:22, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:Noone of the sources currently cited are [[WP:RS|reliable]]. The "Biography" and "Music Career" sections desperately need better sources, because [[WP:BLP|Wikipedia is not interested]] in a rerun of [[Wikipedia Seigenthaler biography incident|the Seigenthaler incident]]. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 06:27, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 08:00:07, 20 February 2021 review of submission by Zacharyb366 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Zacharyb366|ts=08:00:07, 20 February 2021|page= |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Zach_Broom_(Pastor) |
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[[User:Zacharyb366|Zacharyb366]] ([[User talk:Zacharyb366|talk]]) 08:00, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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Hello, I am trying to figure out why my submission was declined. Thank you! |
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[[Draft:Zach Broom (Pastor)]] |
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:{{u|Zacharyb366}} The reason for the decline is given at the top of your draft, in short, you have not demonstrated that (I assume) you merit a Wikipedia article. None of the sources you offer are significant coverage of you in independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]], showing how you meet the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:BIO|a notable person]]. Please see [[WP:YFA|Your First Article]] for more information. |
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:Please also be advised of the [[WP:AUTO|autobiography policy]]; while not forbidden, autobiographies are highly discouraged, in part because people naturally write favorably about themselves. In order to succeed at an autobiography(which is rare, but technically possible), you in essence need to forget everything you know about yourself, and only write based on what independent reliable sources say about you. Most people have great difficulty doing that. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:57, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 12:48:40, 20 February 2021 review of draft by Deppman == |
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{{Lafc|username=Deppman|ts=12:48:40, 20 February 2021|draft=Draft:Thermofractals}} |
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The Draft Thermofractal we rejected because an older version is still active. I would like to delete the older version, but I don't know how to do it. |
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[[User:Deppman|Deppman]] ([[User talk:Deppman|talk]]) 12:48, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Deppman}}, done. I removed the older copy. [[User:CommanderWaterford|CommanderWaterford]] ([[User talk:CommanderWaterford|talk]]) 13:13, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 16:38:20, 20 February 2021 review of submission by Mathematicalinstitutes == |
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{{Lafc|username=Mathematicalinstitutes|ts=16:38:20, 20 February 2021|declined=Draft:Syed_Faizan_Azeem}} |
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[[User:Mathematicalinstitutes|Mathematicalinstitutes]] ([[User talk:Mathematicalinstitutes|talk]]) 16:38, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:You don't ask a question, but your draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 16:43, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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::It has zero [[WP:RS|reliable independent sources]] and Google searches are not sources.[[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 16:45, 20 February 2021 (UTC) |
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= February 21 = |
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== 00:58:54, 21 February 2021 review of submission by MirachBeta == |
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{{Lafc|username=MirachBeta|ts=00:58:54, 21 February 2021|accepted=Carl_A._Rouse}} |
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Hello, |
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I'm a new editor who recently had the page [[Carl A. Rouse]] accepted. However, it seems as though it was originally rejected for not having sources from when the subject was living, among other issues. While I appreciate the fact my article was accepted, could someone clarify to me why it was accepted? |
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Best, |
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MirachBeta |
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[[User:MirachBeta|MirachBeta]] ([[User talk:MirachBeta|talk]]) 00:58, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|MirachBeta}} Would you rather it not have been accepted? ;) You may wish to ask the reviewer directly. but reviewers accept drafts as long as it seems that the draft would survive an Articles for Deletion discussion. Usually that means there are adequate sources to establish notability and sustain the article's content(usually a minimum of three sources). [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 01:01, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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::{{u|331dot}} Oh no, I'm glad it was accepted! Just wanted clarification for future reference. Thank you for your help!<!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:MirachBeta|MirachBeta]] ([[User talk:MirachBeta#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/MirachBeta|contribs]]) </span> |
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== 04:11:38, 21 February 2021 review of submission by 125.161.183.180 == |
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{{Lafc|username=125.161.183.180|ts=04:11:38, 21 February 2021|page= |
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[[Special:Contributions/125.161.183.180|125.161.183.180]] ([[User talk:125.161.183.180|talk]]) 04:11, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:This is your only edit from this IP, could you please [[H:LINK|link]] to the draft? Also, it would be nice for the respondees here if you would specify what speficially is your question/problem, or what you need help with. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 07:59, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 08:14:09, 21 February 2021 review of submission by Akarniel == |
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{{Lafc|username=Akarniel|ts=08:14:09, 21 February 2021|page= |
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Draft:Shlomo_Laufer |
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Hello, |
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== 18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1 == |
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I understand the reason for the decline of my Draft "Draft:Shlomo Laufer" - the existence of Hebrew in the text. |
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{{Lafc|username=Bentasyt.1|ts=18:45, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Lanksti_linija,_UAB}} |
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I will translate the titles into the publication list. |
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what can i improve this article that it would be on wikipedia [[User:Bentasyt.1|Bentasyt.1]] ([[User talk:Bentasyt.1|talk]]) 18:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Also, I will add links to some of the texts that were already translated. |
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:Please see the message left by the reviewer, as well as the policies linked to therein. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I have two questions: |
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:Hello, @[[User:Bentasyt.1|Bentasyt.1]]. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:Very brief summary of writing an article: |
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:# Find several sources which are reliably published, wholly independent of the subject of the article, and contain significant coverage of the subject. See [[WP:42]] |
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:# If you can't find at least three such sources, give up and do something else. |
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:# If you can find them, forget anything you may know about the subject, and write a summary of what those sources say about it. |
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:[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:35, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Sophisticatedevening == |
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1. Is it ok to discuss a book that is being translated, but was not published yet? |
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{{Lafc|username=Sophisticatedevening|ts=19:35, 22 December 2024|draft=Draft:Emma_Howell_Knight}} |
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I added an infobox to the draft, however it is much too large, and I am unsure how to shrink it, and none of the parameters in the template seem to fix it. [[User:Sophisticatedevening|<span style="color:purple;">'''Sophisticatedevening'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Sophisticatedevening|talk]]) 19:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Fixed up for you [[User:Sophisticatedevening|Sophisticatedevening]]. Cheers [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 19:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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2. When I add a reference to a Hebrew source (unfortunately most of my references, not all of them though), the text in the reference section is automatically adding Hebrew descriptions, which I can't change/translate. Is this approved? or should I remove all of the Hebrew sites references? I am afraid that without them the references will not be sufficient to allow you to verify it. |
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::Thanks! [[User:Sophisticatedevening|<span style="color:purple;">'''Sophisticatedevening'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Sophisticatedevening|talk]]) 19:39, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Note that most of these references have been verified by the Wikipedia Hebrew team and are part of the Hebrew article about Shlomo Laufer. |
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== 20:03, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Mariah Hopkins == |
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Awaiting your response, |
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{{Lafc|username=Mariah Hopkins|ts=20:03, 22 December 2024|draft=Kokoa Amor}} |
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Best regards, |
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Why was the article declined [[User:Mariah Hopkins|Mariah Hopkins]] ([[User talk:Mariah Hopkins|talk]]) 20:03, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Amihai Karniel. |
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:{{courtesy link|User:Mariah Hopkins/sandbox}} [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:16, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:It was declined because it doesn't have enough independent reliable citations to establish that she meets Wikipedia's criteria for [[WP:notability|notability]] - see [[WP:42]]. Of the three out of 15 citations that even might meet those criteria (actually 2, because 2 of them are the same source), the Lambo piece does not have [[WP:significant coverage|significant coverage]] of her, so the TempoStub is the only one that even might be an acceptable source - though I suspect it is based on an interview or press release, so is not truly independent). Even if it is, one source is not enough to establish reliability, and most of the draft is not cited. |
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:{{HD/WINI}} |
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:Resubmitting the draft without making any changes is not recommended, and may be regarded as [[WP:disruptive editing|disruptive editing]]. |
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:My comments to another editor [[#18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1|above]] are equally applicable to your case. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:28, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 23 = |
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[[User:Akarniel|Akarniel]] ([[User talk:Akarniel|talk]]) 08:14, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 06:08, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Sonshiv == |
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{{Lafc|username=Sonshiv|ts=06:08, 23 December 2024|draft=User:Sonshiv/sandbox}} |
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{{anchor|08:43:59, 21 February 2021 review of submission by Mondayudowong}} |
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please upload my wikipedia |
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{{Lafc|username=Mondayudowong|ts=08:43:59, 21 February 2021|declinedtalk=Draft:Dremo}} |
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[[User:Sonshiv|Sonshiv]] ([[User talk:Sonshiv|talk]]) 06:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Pure advertising. Deleted and blocked. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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My draft was declined by a reviewer and the reason left by the author was, "Undefined". They was no reason for the decline. They believe I created a new account in order to recreate articles which were once deleted in the past. This is not true. |
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Can someone please look into this? |
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Before submitting my draft, I reviewed other similar topics and I made sure mine followed the same pattern. Thanks in advance. |
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== 06:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE == |
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<!-- End of message -->[[User:Mondayudowong|Mondayudowong]] ([[User talk:Mondayudowong|talk]]) 08:43, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|ts=06:56, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Julian_Buladaco}} |
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:I think the "undefined" simply means that the reviewer did not input the reason into the template. Pinging the reviewer, {{u|Celestina007}}. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:59, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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i want this article for my popular world to see my information please help me [[Special:Contributions/2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE]] ([[User talk:2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE|talk]]) 06:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::{{Reply to|331dot}}, the issue seem to be far more grave, looks like the reviewer is suspecting a Sockpuppet, have a look over here {{Diff|diff=1007997647}}. [[User:CommanderWaterford|CommanderWaterford]] ([[User talk:CommanderWaterford|talk]]) 14:07, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:::@{{u|331dot}}, thanks for pinging me, I probably should have left a reason for the decline so as to avoid scenario's such as this. '''[[User:Celestina007|Celestina007]]''' ([[User talk:Celestina007|talk]]) 16:09, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:Assuming you're {{u|Manasi32}}, please log into your account when editing. |
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Hi, {{u|Celestina007}}. |
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:There is no content in this draft, only an infobox. An infobox with unreferenced personal details of someone (maybe you, maybe someone else). For privacy reasons, I've deleted it, as well as the same information hosted on Manasi32's user page. Please do not publish (anyone's) personal details unnecessarily and without supporting them with reliable published sources. |
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My account is not a Sock Puppet account. Is there a way I can prove this in order to get my draft approved? |
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:Oh, and this draft was rejected already, therefore it wouldn't have been considered any further anyway. |
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:Last but not least, assuming you were attempting to write about yourself, please see [[WP:AUTOBIO]] for why you shouldn't. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 07:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Thanvi 032 == |
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[[User:Mondayudowong|Mondayudowong]] ([[User talk:Mondayudowong|talk]]) 17:34, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Thanvi 032|ts=07:47, 23 December 2024|draft=Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi}} |
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Why has the submission been rejected? Please accept it. [[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]] ([[User talk:Thanvi 032|talk]]) 07:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]]: your draft [[Draft:Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi]] has not been rejected, which would mean it cannot be resubmitted; only declined, which means it can, once you have addressed the decline reasons. Which you have not done. Each decline notice told you to cite your sources inline, not in a big heap at the bottom, so that we can see where each piece of information has come from and how much of the content remains unsupported. That is the reason this has been (repeatedly) declined. HTH, -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:01:57, 21 February 2021 review of submission by 2A00:23C7:5A9C:3F01:8184:CA53:61E1:2C38 == |
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::{{u|Thanvi 032}}, your draft is very poorly referenced. Vast swathes are unreferenced in violation of [[WP:V|Verifiability]], a core content policy. Please read and study [[WP:RS|Reliable sources]] and [[WP:REFBEGIN|Referencing for beginners]]. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 07:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=2A00:23C7:5A9C:3F01:8184:CA53:61E1:2C38|ts=17:01:57, 21 February 2021|declined=Draft:Paper.io}} |
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::We have resolved the reasons for the shortage. And sources are also cited. Draft: Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi Please watch it again. And if something is missing, tell me. thank you. [[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]] ([[User talk:Thanvi 032|talk]]) 08:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Thanvi 032|Thanvi 032]]: no changes have been made since the last review (yesterday). When you ''have'' made changes, hopefully addressing the decline reason, you may then resubmit this draft for another review; we don't provide on-demand reviews here at the help desk. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:15, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 08:31, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Tropical Appreciater10001-400 == |
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Paper.io doesn't have that much notability. That explains why there isn't a lot of references. However it is relatively popular. Note I play this game so these are in my words. This reads like an advertisement, though I wanted to seperate everything so it would be easy to understand more. |
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{{Lafc|username=Tropical Appreciater10001-400|ts=08:31, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Palame_State}} |
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Regarding the decline of making the draft a article. After careful review of wikipedias policy, My understanding is that Fictional works do not have to cite sources. I may be wrong, so correct me if you please. which is what i am regarding. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:31, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:You are wrong see [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 08:34, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]]: not so; every article has to cite its sources. |
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:In reviewing Wikipedia policies, you appear to have missed the one about not publishing hoaxes and fictitious things of assorted types. If you wish to tell the world about your idea, you need to find some other platform to do that; perhaps one of the many blogging sites out there. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thank you for your feedback. I understand the concern regarding the use of fictional works on Wikipedia. However, I wanted to clarify that Palame is a fictional setting created for a Roblox game, and it exists in that context. While it is indeed fictional, it is a component of a larger creative project that others might find interesting. If this is not appropriate for Wikipedia, I would be happy to explore other ways to share this concept, but I thought it was worth explaining the context. |
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::Thank you for your time and consideration. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Yeah, wherever you heard that, your understanding is incorrect. Perhaps you are referring to plot summaries of films and books(which don't need to be cited as they can be verified by reading the book/watching the film). Wikipedia is not a host of fictional content. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. [[User:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|Tropical Appreciater10001-400]] ([[User talk:Tropical Appreciater10001-400|talk]]) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::[[WP:USERGEN|User-generated content]], such as social media videos, cannot establish notability unless they are published by a reputable source. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 09:01, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:43, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 14.194.64.70 == |
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[[Special:Contributions/2A00:23C7:5A9C:3F01:8184:CA53:61E1:2C38|2A00:23C7:5A9C:3F01:8184:CA53:61E1:2C38]] ([[User talk:2A00:23C7:5A9C:3F01:8184:CA53:61E1:2C38|talk]]) 17:01, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=14.194.64.70|ts=10:43, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:A_Step-By-Step_Guide_on_Choosing_the_Perfect_Property_in_Chennai}} |
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this is page information please live it. [[Special:Contributions/14.194.64.70|14.194.64.70]] ([[User talk:14.194.64.70|talk]]) 10:43, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:This is Wikipedia, not Wikihow. We do not host guides on buying real estate. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 10:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 12:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Pr.nutrition == |
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{{Lafc|username=Pr.nutrition|ts=12:47, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Vladimir_Dadali}} |
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{{anchor|18:53:14, 21 February 2021 review of submission by Fahdaltaf}} |
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I have been trying to get my article to get my article approved for 6 months already and it is always rejected. Could you please point on specific sentences I should change and tell me what is wrong with them? I have already deleted all the content that didnt have references and still I cannot get approval. [[User:Pr.nutrition|Pr.nutrition]] ([[User talk:Pr.nutrition|talk]]) 12:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Fahdaltaf|ts=18:53:14, 21 February 2021|declinedtalk=User:Fahdaltaf/sandbox/Al_Haaj_Bundoo_Khan_Restaurant}} |
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:@[[User:Pr.nutrition|Pr.nutrition]] Prior to anyone answering your question you need to visit your user talk page and respond to the question about whether you are a paid editor that I have just placed there. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 13:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Hi, i want to add Al Haaj Bundoo Khan Restaurant in wikipedia, because its very old and famous Restaurant in pakistan. Al Haaj bundoo khan started his journey from a cart in 1948 and now its the Pakistan best BBQ Restaurant. Al Haaj Bundoo Khan is the one who inteoduce the dish Chicken Tikka and now famous in Al our the world, also he introduced the concept of roll paratha in terms of his famous kabab partha (behari kabab and paratha). |
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I have no clear idea how to present the information which is according to wiki guideline, if some one helps me to publish this article i will be thankful. |
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Secondly i tried ro add the external links of blogger reviews, local news blogs which are famous in local countries pakistan and united arab emirates. |
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And i also added the Gulf News article about Al Haaj bundoo khan. National geographic Abu dhabi also cover Alhaaj bundoo khan in one of his documentry but i didn't find the video link, i have one image from that documentary. |
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== 16:39, 23 December 2024 review of submission by FelixKerscher == |
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{{Lafc|username=FelixKerscher|ts=16:39, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Clinical Versus Statistical Prediction}} |
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Why was my submission declined? [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 16:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] Please read the rationale in the big box that now resides at the head of the draft. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 18:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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If some one is setup all these things in proper manner so the article will approved on wiki pedia i will be very thankfull to him. Whatever helping material is required i will provide him |
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::It says that my sources should be: in-depth, reliable, secondary and independent. My sources definitely fulfil the first two requirements. All bar one of my sources are peer-reviewed journal articles. Some which have thousands of citations (not a perfect proxy for reliability, but it’s as good as it’s gonna get). I didn’t take the information in the big box seriously because I thought it was auto generated. [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:You could also ask the reviewer {{u|CSMention269}} if they have any more input on what is lacking from the sources to show notability. [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 18:42, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? [[User:FelixKerscher|FelixKerscher]] ([[User talk:FelixKerscher|talk]]) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::{{ping|FelixKerscher}} By commenting on [[User talk:CSMention269|their user talk page]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 18:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:05, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Zraffarz == |
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{{Lafc|username=Zraffarz|ts=19:05, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Surmesur}} |
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Hello, hope I am writing at the right place. I have made a first submission a couple of days ago, and my article was declined because of the tone wasn't right / neutral at certain places. At first I wasn't in agreement with the reviewer, but after careful re-reading I must agree that I had to make some changes. I have since then edited the article to fix those passages and resubmitted the article. I was wondering if I could get a feedback on the article as well as having it accepted ? |
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I feel like I have put in the work, and that I also found many reliable articles to support it, but I am open to comments. |
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== Article supported with reliable references including zaman newspaper and many others == |
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Regards. [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:05, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 21:52:02, 21 February 2021 review of submission by Ameermarkolmaza == |
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:Your draft is laughably promotional, do you work for the company by any chance? "Surmesur combines traditional tailoring with technology offering clients personalized experiences through digital fitting tools and diverse customization options." is straight from the marketing department. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 19:16, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Ameermarkolmaza|ts=21:52:02, 21 February 2021|declined=Draft:Alishamraan}} |
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::I don't work for Surmesur no. I am not paid either for writing this article. I am French speaking though, so maybe what you see as being laughably promotional is simply that some things you see offensive I read them as being neutral. Are there other sections that are not fitting ? Like I said, I want to put in the work. |
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::Regards [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:24, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Hello. I did work on the draft, and removed passages like the one you mentioned. I also removed any content that could be misinterpreted (like the awards section i felt could be interesting, but removed it as I am trying to find the difference between content and promotional content). Would you be willing to give it another pass ? [[Draft:Surmesur]] |
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:::Much appreciated [[User:Zraffarz|Zraffarz]] ([[User talk:Zraffarz|talk]]) 19:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 23:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09 == |
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[[User:Ameermarkolmaza|Ameermarkolmaza]] ([[User talk:Ameermarkolmaza|talk]]) 21:52, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|ts=23:56, 23 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sentinai}} |
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:{{u|Ameermarkolmaza}}, what is your question? [[User:CommanderWaterford|CommanderWaterford]] ([[User talk:CommanderWaterford|talk]]) 22:07, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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hey what exactly was wrong [[Special:Contributions/2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09]] ([[User talk:2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09|talk]]) 23:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft has been deleted as "unambiguous advertising or promotion". A Wikipedia article, whatever its subject, should be a summary of what ''independent'' reliable sources say about a subject. What the subject, or their associates, say or want to say is of almost no relevance. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 00:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 23:01:57, 21 February 2021 review of submission by Daunicornengineer == |
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{{Lafc|username=Daunicornengineer|ts=23:01:57, 21 February 2021|declined=Draft:Shaundra_Daily}} |
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As a part of a project with the African American History Museum, we are working to ensure that notable African Americans in STEM are included in Wikipedia. Numerous sources have been provided in order for this article to be a verifiable source. |
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[[User:Daunicornengineer|Daunicornengineer]] ([[User talk:Daunicornengineer|talk]]) 23:01, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Daunicornengineer}} The draft has been rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 23:16, 21 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 00:17, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Nycrest == |
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{{Lafc|username=Nycrest|ts=00:17, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Venhue}} |
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Hello - I added the appropriate sources (NBC, PIX11, etc.) and cleaned up the article to be neutral based on the rules (no promotion) [[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] ([[User talk:Nycrest|talk]]) 00:17, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] "no promotion"? I don't see how {{tq|unorthodox approach to fine dining}}, {{tq|theatrical presentations}}, and {{tq|playful irreverence towards traditional fine dining conventions}} is neutral. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:37, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I am quoting the videos that are sourced. Is there another way of doing quotes? Is there an article you can reference for how to handle quotes from journalists? |
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::I am unsure how unorthodox and irreverence towards fine dining is good thing? Wouldn't promotion equal something of value? There is nothing on Wikipedia that says something is unorthodox.. as unorthodox is a promotional word? I cannot seem to phrase this in a non-promotion way based on what is considered neutral, the page is already pretty bare bones. I will attempt again to make edits and will see how it works out; Thanks for your time. [[User:Nycrest|Nycrest]] ([[User talk:Nycrest|talk]]) 14:45, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::I'm not seeing how this establishment meets [[WP:ORG]]- you just summarize the offerings of the establishment. If the establishment is "unorthodox" you need to go into detail as to what sources say is unorthodox about it beyond just a statement that its business practices are unorthodox. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:49, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 02:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Hedax212 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Hedax212|ts=02:27, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Signatures, INC.}} |
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{{anchor|00:12:12, 22 February 2021 review of submission by 38.132.215.49}} |
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I want this company to get some recognition, I have no relation to either founder and have never written a wikipedia article before but there is nothing online about them. I purchased one of their ornaments as new old stock on ebay and wanted to find out more about it and was even able to track down one of the founders Micheal Leban and was able to have a small interview with him where the majority of this information comes from. They essentially pioneered a niche automotive accesory field at a time where hood ornaments were going out of fashion. I made a rough draft and don't know what I need to do now to have it published. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=38.132.215.49|ts=00:12:12, 22 February 2021|declinedtalk=Draft:Operation_Odessa_(film)}} |
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:@[[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] to submit the draft you need to click the big blue button near the top. However note that with the only source being {{tq|US patent number US4988065A}}, it is unlikely to be accepted. Please see [[Help:Your first article]] first. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Unfortunately that means they are likely not [[WP:NORG|notable]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. [[User:Hedax212|Hedax212]] ([[User talk:Hedax212|talk]]) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::Articles require ''significant coverage'' in ''reliable sources'' that are ''independent'' of the topic. Without these things, there can't be an article. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 05:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 02:55, 24 December 2024 review of submission by MarkDiBelloBiographer == |
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The film Operation Odessa is currently playing on Netflix. I tried to look it up and got redirected to some Manga site - not cool. |
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Is it possible to delete a photo? I know I can replace one, but if I insert a photo box, it seems I can never remove it. I would hate to add a photo which I can never remove. [[User:MarkDiBelloBiographer|MarkDiBelloBiographer]] ([[User talk:MarkDiBelloBiographer|talk]]) 02:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:[[Draft:Mark Anthony DiBello]] [[User:Knitsey|<span style="color:DarkMagenta">Knitsey</span>]] ([[User talk:Knitsey|<span style="color: maroon">talk</span>]]) 03:01, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I made a start on fixing it. Wouldn't take much more to get a basic page up. Maybe someone could fix it? |
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:@[[User:MarkDiBelloBiographer|MarkDiBelloBiographer]]: I don't know what a 'photo box' is, or why you wouldn't be able to remove one if you can insert one; I can only assume you're talking about something to do with the visual editor, of which I've very little experience. In the source editing mode, you can certainly remove any trace of an earlier image. |
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I've done my bit to try and set it right and am done. |
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:Having said all that, your draft looks like some sort of personal tribute page or similar, not least because of the excessive use of family/personal photographs. These are quite inappropriate for an encyclopaedia, in my opinion at least. |
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:On a separate point, your user name clearly suggests some sort of connection with the subject. This has been queried on your talk page, but I don't see that you've responded to the query. Could you do that now, please. If you are being paid or otherwise rewarded for your edits, you must make a paid-editing-disclosure. Even if you're not, but otherwise have an external relationship with the subject, you must make a general conflict-of-interest (COI) disclosure. Please attend to this matter promptly. Thank you. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Muhammedramees18|ts=06:57, 24 December 2024|draft=User:Muhammedramees18/sandbox}} |
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:While it is always possible, I doubt any other editor will pick your draft up. It's a positive start but requires referencing. If you wish to go back to it please ask for the help you need [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 16:34, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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Why My edit is declined? [[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammed Ramees E P]] ([[User talk:Muhammedramees18|talk]]) 06:57, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]: your draft was not just declined, it was actually rejected (meaning, the end of the road), because it offers no evidence of [[WP:notability|notability]], not to mention that it is entirely promotional and written purely from the subject's point of view. |
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== 06:44:15, 22 February 2021 review of submission by Lkcitycliff == |
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:What is your relationship with this school? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Lkcitycliff|ts=06:44:15, 22 February 2021|page= |
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::I am a Co Founder of this school. [[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammed Ramees E P]] ([[User talk:Muhammedramees18|talk]]) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]: in that case, you have a conflict of interest, and need to make a paid-editing-disclosure. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:Muhammedramees18|Muhammedramees18]]. Writing a new article is '''much''' more difficult than it looks, and editors who try it without first spending a significant amount of time learning how Wikipedia works often have a frustrating and disappointing experience. It is even more difficult when the editors has a [[WP:conflict of interest|conflict of interest]]. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:42|independent reliable sources]] have published about a subject, and very little else. Wikipedia has essentially no interest in what your school says or wants to say about itself, only in what wholly independent commentators have published about it. For many schools, that is little or nothing: if that is the case, then no article on the school is possible. |
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:Note also that if ever Wikipedia has an article about your school, whoever writes it, the article will not belong to you, will not be controlled by you, will not necessarily say what you want it to say, and may be edited by almost anybody in the world ''except'' you and your colleagues. Please see [[WP:an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing|an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 12:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 07:35, 24 December 2024 review of submission by 223.190.86.242 == |
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{{Lafc|username=223.190.86.242|ts=07:35, 24 December 2024|draft=User:Omd-course/sandbox}} |
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how to submit an article, can you give me any solution for update an article [[Special:Contributions/223.190.86.242|223.190.86.242]] ([[User talk:223.190.86.242|talk]]) 07:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:[[WP:NOTGUIDE|Wikipedia is not a guide about universities in India]] and your submission is not appropriate as an encyclopedic article. It has been rejected and will not be considered any further. [[User:Cyberdog958|<span style="color:navy;">''cyberdog''</span><span style="color:orange;">'''958'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Cyberdog958|<span style="color:teal;">Talk</span>]]</sup> 07:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Lkcitycliff|Lkcitycliff]] ([[User talk:Lkcitycliff|talk]]) 06:44, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 08:04, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Sunuraju == |
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I want to create an article from wikipedia editors? I will give the title of the business and want to create a page. I need the help of editors to complete the article. Please write an article for me. |
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{{Lafc|username=Sunuraju|ts=08:04, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hum_Dono_(2024_TV_series)}} |
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:{{re|Lkcitycliff}} Hello Lkcitycliff, I think you are looking for [[WP:Requested articles]]. It has a large backlog Though... If this refers to a specific draft, please provide a link. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 14:38, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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should i seek help for rebelibe or rewrite by another editors for draft? [[User:Sunuraju|Sunuraju]] ([[User talk:Sunuraju|talk]]) 08:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by JustBeenji == |
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I have a question. Can you or i or anyone get editorship? Because making this page better can be good. [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 10:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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because this is for a friend and im ready for review |
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[[User:Finna fly|Finna fly]] ([[User talk:Finna fly|talk]]) 15:46, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Finna fly}}, first, please do not write articles "for a friend". Please see [[WP:COI]]. Second, this draft has been rejected and thus will not be considered further [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 16:20, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]]: you ''are'' an editor. So am I. So is pretty much anyone else who has ever edited any page on Wikipedia. |
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== Request on 15:59:42, 22 February 2021 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by 76.240.112.154 == |
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:But no editor can magic [[WP:notability|notability]] out of thin air, and without evidence of notability, this draft cannot be published. Which is why it has been rejected. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 10:53, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{anchor|15:59:42, 22 February 2021 review of submission by 76.240.112.154}} |
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::So do i have to create a new draft? [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=76.240.112.154|ts=15:59:42, 22 February 2021|declinedtalk=Draft:Alex_Rose_Wiesel}} |
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:::@[[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]]: in a word, no. [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day|Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji [[User:JustBeenji|JustBeenji]] ([[User talk:JustBeenji|talk]]) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::As mentioned above, because you haven't provided a single source that indicates that this is a notable game. It ''could'' be notable, as it does seem to be a popular ''series'' of point-and-click video games, but the draft itself is so sparsely written that it's nearly impossible to even identify who or what Henry Stickmin ''is'', let alone present the case for this being a notable video game series. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:40, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::{{ping|JustBeenji}} Popularity is fleeting, [[WP:N|notability]] is forever. Without sources, you cannot demonstrate the latter. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 18:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:39, 24 December 2024 review of submission by SarahSamuell == |
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i put 2 references and it also got rejected , what else should i do?? [[User:SarahSamuell|SarahSamuell]] ([[User talk:SarahSamuell|talk]]) 11:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:All new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See [[WP:N]]) which in most cases requires significant coverage ([[WP:SIGCOV]]) in multiple independent ([[WP:INDY]]) reliable sources ([[WP:RS]]). Your two sources do not do this, they just show the subject exists. Posts on social media such as pinterest are also not reliable sources in most cases. Also most of your content was unsourced. Also see [[WP:NSCHOOL]] and [[WP:SCHOOLOUTCOMES]]. [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 11:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I added footnotes and don't understand why this is being declined. All proper footnotes were added |
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:Hello, @[[User:SarahSamuell|SarahSamuell]]. Please see my lengthy reply to Muhammedramees18 [[#06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18|above]], most of which applies to you as well. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 12:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:In addition to what has already been said, there are ''serious'' problems with the photographs as you've uploaded them to Commons and credited them as your own work. Naturally, I am skeptical you took these photos personally over an 84-year period. If these are not your photos, you need to make them fully compliant with Wikipedia's non-free content policies, which can be found at [[WP:NFC]]. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:29, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:And please don't resubmit a draft that has already been rejected. If you disagree with the rejection, the way to address this is to take it up with the rejecting reviewer directly. And we have already discussed this on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:09, 24 December 2024 review of submission by WikiBaltimore == |
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{{Lafc|username=WikiBaltimore|ts=14:09, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:Turner_Development}} |
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:{{declined}} I have conducted a further review and left what I hope are helpful comments on your draft [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 16:28, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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Hello. An article I recently submitted "Turner Development" was just declined for "appears to read like an advertisement". Here is the entire submission..... |
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"Turner Development is a real estate development company based in Maryland. Turner Development specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations. Notable projects include Silo Point Condominium in Locust Point, Baltimore, 1211 Light St, McHenry Pointe, Federal Hill Lofts in Federal Hill, Baltimore, Henrietta Square, Holy Cross Condominiums and McHenry Theater." |
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== 16:21:14, 22 February 2021 review of draft by Bbarmadillo == |
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{{Lafc|username=Bbarmadillo|ts=16:21:14, 22 February 2021|draft=Draft:Damien_Echols}} |
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I disagree with the "appears to read like an advertisement" and would like you to please reconsider the submission. None of 3 sentences are subjective or in any way promoting Turner Development, just facts that were backed by the numerous references submitted with the article. What was submitted are just 3 factual sentences to start a wikipedia page for other Wiki community members to contribute as they see fit. |
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Please give your opinion on the page. It is a properly stated [[WP:COI]] contribution, that I fully reworked after the initial decline. Do you see any issues with the page that need to be fixed? Is the existing redirect a problem? --[[User:Bbarmadillo|Bbarmadillo]] ([[User talk:Bbarmadillo|talk]]) 16:21, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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For example, [[Silo Point]] is one of projects mentioned and an outstanding wiki page has grown over the years around the history and facts on the former grain elevators story. The other projects listed in the original submission also have an incredible historical story to tell by the wiki community for their significant impact they have played in Marylands past. |
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[[User:Bbarmadillo|Bbarmadillo]] ([[User talk:Bbarmadillo|talk]]) 16:21, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Bbarmadillo}}, Thank you for submitting it for review. It will now take its place in the pool of drafts for review. A redirect will not present a problem [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 16:49, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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::While awaiting review do, please, continue to enhance the draft. Submission does not freeze the draft [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 16:50, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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Thank you for you reconsideration and insight as to what/how the 3 would need to be reworded to make sure they meet wiki guidelines and a new page is create to help spur greater conversations on the wiki community about the signitical historic locations listed in the original submission. ~ Happy Hollidays. [[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]] ([[User talk:WikiBaltimore|talk]]) 14:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:06:36, 22 February 2021 review of draft by Engblu == |
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{{Lafc|username=Engblu|ts=17:06:36, 22 February 2021|draft=Draft:Steve_Lyon_(recording_engineer)}} |
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:@[[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]]: Wikipedia articles summarise what independent and reliable secondary sources have previously said about a subject and what makes it worthy of note. Your draft, on the other hand, merely states that the subject exists, and gives very much the impression that it is the subject telling the world about itself (which is the definition of promotion, see [[WP:YESPROMO]]), with a dozen sources tagged at the end for [[WP:REFBOMBING]] purposes. |
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:Do you happen to work for, or with, Turner Development, by any chance? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:03, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The references are about the ''projects'' Turner Development has been involved in, not, ''about'' Turner Development, the company, mostly about Silo Point, which does already have an article. And the references are just slapped in a giant bucket at the end rather than supporting factual information with in-line citations. What are the sources for the notability of these other projects besides Silo Point? What is the source for specifically concluding that the company "''specializes'' in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations?" You can't simply infer that from the listed projects as that's [[WP:OR]]. At the end of the day, the article doesn't really even tell us anything about Turner Development. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 15:12, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Well said, thank you for the feedback [[User:WikiBaltimore|WikiBaltimore]] ([[User talk:WikiBaltimore|talk]]) 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:21, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Juanestebanfernandez == |
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Hi, firstly excuse my lack of experience in the procedure for asking for help. |
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{{Lafc|username=Juanestebanfernandez|ts=14:21, 24 December 2024|draft=User:Juanestebanfernandez/sandbox}} |
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I am trying to edit a page that has been reviewed. It states in the review that the "Comment: There are a lot of unsourced statements". I have used links from mainly two sites having seen many other pages on persons who are Music producers or have similar roles. |
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I don't undertstand why my page has been suspended, i was the most parcial i could and y followed all the recomendations you gave me. Please i need help publishing this. [[User:Juanestebanfernandez|Juanestebanfernandez]] ([[User talk:Juanestebanfernandez|talk]]) 14:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I am confused as to why these link sources are not applicable or not valid. The information the sites has been indeed verified by the sites and cross checked with the releases mentioned. This may seem obvious to editors but to myself if i could ask for an explanation and some help then on securing exactly what is required. Not everyone is mentioned in published books as to me that seems to be what is required. If a much simpler page / entry would be acceptable then please let me know. |
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Also I do not know where a replay to this inquiry might "appear" ? maybe on my "talk" page ? |
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Many thanks |
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Engblu. |
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:@[[User:Juanestebanfernandez|Juanestebanfernandez]]: your draft was declined because it doesn't demonstrate that the subject is notable. There is also nothing to indicate where all that information comes from, let alone that it comes from reliable and independent secondary sources. |
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[[User:Engblu|Engblu]] ([[User talk:Engblu|talk]]) 17:06, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:Do you represent Trusted Interpreters or CSA Research in any way? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Engblu}}, The answer appears here. Are you associated professionally or personally with Mr Lyon? if so you must declare it. Please see [[WP:COI]] and/or [[WP:PAID]]. Even if closely associated with, or even being Mr Lyon you are entitled to create and edit the draft on the gentleman. |
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:It's not written in an encyclopedic manner, the text itself is complete unsourced with only some general tangentially related sites listed at the end, it looks like AI was heavily used in creating it, and we already have far superior information of this type at articles like [[Language interpretation]]. Yes, the article focuses on interpretation services in the US rather than generally, but there's almost no actual specific US-related content other than a couple unsourced facts. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:To understand more about references you may find that reading [[WP:42]] and [[WP:THREE]] help. |
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:Your objective is to assert and [[WP:V|verify]] that the gentleman is [[WP:N|notable]] in a Wikipedia sense. |
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:This means that he must not just be [[WP:ROTM|a decent chap doing his job well]], but that there must be an almost indefinable extra element to him. |
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:There's a lot to read here, so please ask again after you've read and digested the advice and started to put it into practice [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span>]] 22:42, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 21:23, 24 December 2024 review of submission by CerebralPathfinder == |
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{{Lafc|username=CerebralPathfinder|ts=21:23, 24 December 2024|draft=Draft:dogAdvisor}} |
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Why has my article been denied? |
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{{Fixed}} |
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I'd like to ask why my content has been declined and what I can do to add it [[User:CerebralPathfinder|CerebralPathfinder]] ([[User talk:CerebralPathfinder|talk]]) 21:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|CerebralPathfinder}} I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. Did you see the message left by the reviewer? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:34, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::ah yes just seen! thank you [[User:CerebralPathfinder|CerebralPathfinder]] ([[User talk:CerebralPathfinder|talk]]) 21:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I see that the draft is sourced entirely to company materials. Instead, it should summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable company]]. |
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:If you work for this company, that must be disclosed, see [[WP:PAID]], as well as [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:38, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 18:30:49, 22 February 2021 review of submission by Monir1975 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Monir1975|ts=18:30:49, 22 February 2021|declined=Draft:Sanjay_Govil}} |
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{{Fixed}} |
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Hi, This article was declined due to not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. I have added further references, are those enough to resubmit for futther review? |
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:{{u|Monir1975}}, it was not only declined, it was also rejected and thus will not be considered further. [[User:CommanderWaterford|CommanderWaterford]] ([[User talk:CommanderWaterford|talk]]) 22:20, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 05:21, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NOMAN ABBASS == |
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[[User:Monir1975|Monir1975]] ([[User talk:Monir1975|talk]]) 18:30, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=NOMAN ABBASS|ts=05:21, 25 December 2024|draft=Above Ground Pool Removal Cost - Average Prices in 2025}} |
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I've made edits , provided sources and references yet my article hasn't been accepted . I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me [[User:NOMAN ABBASS|NOMAN ABBASS]] ([[User talk:NOMAN ABBASS|talk]]) 05:21, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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When you have finished, click the "Publish changes" button or your request will not be posted!!!-->}} |
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:{{ping|NOMAN ABBASS}} [[WP:NOT#HOWTO|We do not accept guides.]] —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 05:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 18:34:26, 22 February 2021 review of submission by Sohil Mandal == |
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{{Lafc|username=Sohil Mandal|ts=18:34:26, 22 February 2021|declined=Draft:Asim_Riaz}} |
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== 06:02, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Anonymous 21710 == |
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[[User:Sohil Mandal|Sohil Mandal]] ([[User talk:Sohil Mandal|talk]]) 18:34, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Anonymous 21710|ts=06:02, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sree_Udhyan_.M}} |
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:{{u|Sohil Mandal}}, what is your question? [[User:CommanderWaterford|CommanderWaterford]] ([[User talk:CommanderWaterford|talk]]) 22:15, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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can you please tell me what are the problems that can occur while publishing this article. |
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[[User:Anonymous 21710|Anonymous 21710]] ([[User talk:Anonymous 21710|talk]]) 06:02, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|Anonymous21710}} Not only is this draft [[WP:SPAM|blatantly promotional]] and [[WP:BLP|entirely unsourced]], the subject is a [[WP:Protecting children's privacy|''minor'']] and we err on not having articles on minors simply because that destroys any chance they have at a private life. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 06:08, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== Request on 19:34:15, 22 February 2021 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Nynewsguy == |
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{{anchor|19:34:15, 22 February 2021 review of submission by Nynewsguy}} |
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{{Lafc|username=Nynewsguy|ts=19:34:15, 22 February 2021|declinedtalk=Draft:Len_Tepper}} |
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== 08:29, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NakiwugeFlorence == |
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{{Lafc|username=NakiwugeFlorence|ts=08:29, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Waya_Boy}} |
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I'm requesting assistance with understanding the citations I have which were deemed "unreliable." |
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What article do they need, because they are many but may be jam not choosing the right ones [[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]] ([[User talk:NakiwugeFlorence|talk]]) 08:29, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I've cited CBS News, IMDB and AdWeek among others. |
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:@[[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]]: a musician would need to demonstrate notability via either the general [[WP:GNG]] or the special [[WP:MUSICBIO]] guideline. Carefully study those guidelines, they will tell you exactly what evidence of notability you would need to provide. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I've now noticed that the page in question - [[Draft:Len_Tepper|Len Tepper]] - has now been scraped and copied to wikitia too, presumably "verified" by their "editors." |
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::Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong [[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]] ([[User talk:NakiwugeFlorence|talk]]) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:NakiwugeFlorence|NakiwugeFlorence]]: I have no need to check your sources; an experienced reviewer has done so, and rejected your draft. This means it will not be considered further. If you have sources demonstrating notability which weren't considered at the most recent review, you may appeal directly to the rejecting reviewer. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 13:27, 25 December 2024 review of submission by KimJongUnsBasement == |
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I'm happy to revise as needed. But I need more to go on as to why these sources - that exist as citations on countless other wikipedia pages - are not considered reliable now. |
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{{Lafc|username=KimJongUnsBasement|ts=13:27, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:Pau_Quesada}} |
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It keeps getting rejected. I don’t know what they want me to do now, there isn’t much information on Quesada, and most of his articles are in Spanish. [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 13:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:It wasn't "rejected" until the last time, it was "declined" before that(declined means resubmission is possible) If there isn't much information about them, that is a strong indicator they do not merit a Wikipedia article at this time. Sources do not need to be in English. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 13:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Thank you for any help you can provide. |
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I don’t know what do. I added citations, but still it gets declined. I’ve seen far worst Wikipedia Articles be accepted. Please just accept it and other people can add on to it, it’s not like it’s a protective page, anyone can edit and help me out. I know you’re probably gonna say no, (if you even read in the first place) because of what’s on your user page, but it was worth a try. [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 14:19, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Nynewsguy|Thom Craver]] |
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:@[[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]]: footballers have to demonstrate notability per [[WP:GNG]], which requires 3+ solid sources. This draft cites none. |
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:What is your involvement with this draft? It was created by a blocked user. Are you somehow associated with them? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|KimJonUnsBasement}} Please edit this existing section, instead of creating additional sections for every post you make. This process is usually voluntary; if you wish to disregard what reviewers are telling you, you can move it to the encyclopedia yourself, but you run the risk of it being put up for [[WP:AFD|a deletion discussion]]. |
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:As for other articles, see [[WP:OSE|other stuff exists]]. Not all articles have gone through this process. If you see reviewers accepting "worse" articles, please identify those articles. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Drafts do not need to be complete, but they need to meet the most basic criteria. Your draft does not. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:28, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I was reading about him on TransferMarket and searched him up on Wikipedia until notice he didn’t have an English Wikipedia Page. I have no involvement with the person who created the page [[User:KimJongUnsBasement|KimJongUnsBasement]] ([[User talk:KimJongUnsBasement|talk]]) 14:59, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:00, 25 December 2024 review of submission by 2.190.166.198 == |
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{{Lafc|username=2.190.166.198|ts=14:00, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:SOBI}} |
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{{anchor|21:38:42, 22 February 2021 review of submission by Antiquatuss}} |
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this person is a famous rapper in iran . please recheck my article [[Special:Contributions/2.190.166.198|2.190.166.198]] ([[User talk:2.190.166.198|talk]]) 14:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Antiquatuss|ts=21:38:42, 22 February 2021|declinedtalk=Draft:Fiber_Patch_Placement}} |
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:Hi IP editor, this has been rejected so will not be considered further. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:04, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Dear Wikipeadia Master Minds, please have a look at the "Fiber Patch Placement" draft and corresponding discussions. I understood, regulatories differ, but i tried my best to redesign the article as I understood your rules and I perfectly cannot understand, why this is completely ignored. I really believe, a new additive manufacturing technology should be mentioned. Thank you in advance for your help! [[User:Antiquatuss|Antiquatuss]] ([[User talk:Antiquatuss|talk]]) 21:38, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 14:01, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Amjsso == |
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{{Lafc|username=Amjsso|ts=14:01, 25 December 2024|draft=User:Amjsso/sandbox}} |
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:{{u|Antiquatuss}}, I have added a source from the [[European Space Agency]] that includes a definition of fiber patch placement and passed the review so it is now in mainspace under [[Fiber Patch Placement]]. [[User:Ritchie333|<b style="color:#7F007F">Ritchie333</b>]] [[User talk:Ritchie333|<sup style="color:#7F007F">(talk)</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/Ritchie333|<sup style="color:#7F007F">(cont)</sup>]] 13:54, 23 February 2021 (UTC) |
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I just wanted to create a politician page [[User:Amjsso|Amjsso]] ([[User talk:Amjsso|talk]]) 14:01, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hi @[[User:Amjsso|Amjsso]], have you read the policy at [[WP:VERIFY]]? Everything on Wikipedia ''must'' have reliable, published sources. Your draft is entirely unsourced. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:03, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 23:39:00, 22 February 2021 review of submission by AshleyDBuck == |
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{{Lafc|username=AshleyDBuck|ts=23:39:00, 22 February 2021|declined=Draft:Kate_Green_(producer)}} |
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== 18:44, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Sanjaygowda18 == |
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Removed marketing jargon |
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{{Lafc|username=Sanjaygowda18|ts=18:44, 25 December 2024|draft=Draft:SANJAY_GOWDA_S_G}} |
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Removed KGP Films |
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My page is deleted without any valid reasons retrieve the page [[User:Sanjaygowda18|Sanjaygowda18]] ([[User talk:Sanjaygowda18|talk]]) 18:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Provided additional adequate resources |
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And note there is no financial or connection with the subject. A big fan of her work and Narcoleap. |
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:He is one of the advocat in Bangalore who is helping out the poor people [[User:Sanjaygowda18|Sanjaygowda18]] ([[User talk:Sanjaygowda18|talk]]) 18:47, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Please [[Wikipedia:Spam|don't write spam]] on Wikipedia, which is what your draft was. If you want to learn how to write an encyclopedic article that complies with our policies, please visit [[Help:Your first article]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 18:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 23:20, 25 December 2024 review of submission by AngelicaMonsalud == |
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{{Lafc|username=AngelicaMonsalud|ts=23:20, 25 December 2024|draft=User:AngelicaMonsalud/sandbox}} |
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I would like to know how to improve your tone writing in a formal way? [[User:AngelicaMonsalud|AngelicaMonsalud]] ([[User talk:AngelicaMonsalud|talk]]) 23:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:For starters limit what you write to what is in the sources, currently most of the draft is without a single source. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 23:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 23:46:29, 22 February 2021 review of submission by AshleyDBuck == |
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{{Lafc|username=AshleyDBuck|ts=23:46:29, 22 February 2021|declined=Draft:Kate_Green_(producer)}} |
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== 06:11, 26 December 2024 review of submission by 117.254.37.23 == |
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Revised the page by removing marketing jargon and a second subject. |
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{{Lafc|username=117.254.37.23|ts=06:11, 26 December 2024|draft=Draft:ATMECS_Global}} |
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Please note there is no financial or other connection with the author and subject. Fan of subjects work. |
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My draft article has been rejected multiple times and I am trying to get it approved. I will submit one more edit. I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025. Appreciate the community's help. [[Special:Contributions/117.254.37.23|117.254.37.23]] ([[User talk:117.254.37.23|talk]]) 06:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Firstly, if you're {{u|Ssaisushanth45}}, please log into your account whenever editing. |
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[[User:AshleyDBuck|AshleyDBuck]] ([[User talk:AshleyDBuck|talk]]) 23:46, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:Secondly, bear in mind that as a paid user, you are not allowed to attempt publishing this yourself; you must go through the AfC review system (as you are now doing). |
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:{{u|AshleyDBuck}}, I have tidied up the article a little bit and accepted the submission, though further work is required and a search for sources has been made difficult by the more famous British shadow cabinet minister with the same name. [[User:Ritchie333|<b style="color:#7F007F">Ritchie333</b>]] [[User talk:Ritchie333|<sup style="color:#7F007F">(talk)</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/Ritchie333|<sup style="color:#7F007F">(cont)</sup>]] 23:53, 22 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:I cannot find any multiple rejections or even declines. One version was deleted from the main article space for being purely promotional. Another was moved into the draft space, where it has been declined ones. Or have you created this under other titles and/or other user accounts? |
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:It isn't clear what support you require. Please ask specific questions, if you have any. |
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:We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, ''you'' are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you? |
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:As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us. Wikipedia is not edited to a [[WP:deadline|deadline]]. |
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:Finally, you yourself should read, and more to the point show to you boss, this: [[WP:BOSS]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this |
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::: "We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, ''you'' are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you? |
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::: As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us." |
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::: Other reviewers were kind enough to point out areas in my article which violated certain rules - I was merely requesting more of the same once I submit my edited version for review and noting this is a priority for me. |
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::[[User:Ssaisushanth45|Ssaisushanth45]] ([[User talk:Ssaisushanth45|talk]]) 06:55, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Ssaisushanth45|Ssaisushanth45]]: if all you're requesting is another review (after you resubmit your draft), then that is what you will get anyway; there is no need to request it in advance here at the help desk. ''When'' you get your review is another matter; we have over 1,800 pending drafts in the system, the oldest have been waiting for two months, and therefore we cannot promise this will happen before your deadline. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:47, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Ramakrishnan.babug == |
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May I know the reason for rejecting my article? |
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[[User:Ramakrishnan.babug|Ramakrishnan.babug]] ([[User talk:Ramakrishnan.babug|talk]]) 06:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Ramakrishnan.babug|Ramakrishnan.babug]] Wikipedia is not for [[WP:PROMO|self-promotion]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 06:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 15:22, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Shaurya4455 == |
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regarding to uploading a new page or Article |
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:You don't ask a question. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:30, 23 February 2021 (UTC) |
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i want upload my self article on Wikipedia how can i upload it [[User:Shaurya4455|Shaurya4455]] ([[User talk:Shaurya4455|talk]]) 15:22, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I am not sure why this article was declined. Could you please advise the specific problems that I should make improvement? |
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:Your draft has been rejected there is zero evidence that you pass the criteria at [[WP:GNG]]. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 15:26, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Shaurya4455}} (ec) I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. The short answer to your question is, you don't. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. Please read [[WP:AUTO|the autobiography policy]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 15:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft just tells about the company and appears to be sourced to press releases or announcements of routine business transactions. Wikipedia articles must do more, they must summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable company]]. Press releases, routine announcements of business transactions, staff interviews, or other [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]] do not establish notability. |
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:If you work for this company, please review [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]] and [[WP:PAID|paid editing]] for information on required formal disclosures you must make. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:20, 23 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 19:25, 26 December 2024 review of submission by CorosanD == |
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Would you tell me what is missing or not done right in the latest draft of the article, so to be sure it would be accepted next time when submitted ? Thank you. [[User:CorosanD|CorosanD]] ([[User talk:CorosanD|talk]]) 19:25, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{yo|CorosanD}} That's the purpose of the review – submit the draft if you think it is ready, and the reviewer will evaluate whether anything is missing. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 19:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:CorosanD|CorosanD]]. I'm afraid that what is not done right is exactly what most people do when they try the challenging task of creating a Wikipedia article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works. {{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} |
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:Specifically: large parts of your draft are unreferenced, which suggests that you wrote the draft [[WP:BACKWARDS|BACKWARDS]], starting with what you know, rather than starting with what your sources said. Wikipedia isn't intersted in what you know (or what I know): it is ''only'' interested in what reliable published sources say. |
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:Furthermore, not many of your sources meet the triple criteria of being reliable, independent, and containing significant coverage of Boladjiev - see [[WP:42]]. |
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:Next, external references are almost never permitted within the text of an article, and should be removed. I see that one of them is in fact to an article in another Wikipedia (bg-wiki). You can wikilink to that using the template {{tl|ill}}: so <code>{{tlx|ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}}</code> is displayed as {{ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}} - a redlink because there is no such article in the English Wikipedia, but with the blue "[bg]" link to the Bulgarian article. If ever somebody write the English article, the template will automatically link to it. |
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:The last point is that I believe that all the images you have uploaded are copyright violations, and I have nominated most of them for deletion. (I have left the poster, because I think it is probably below the [[:C:COM:Threshold of originality|COM:Threshold of originality]], and so is in the public domain). |
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:You have claimed that all these images are your own work, which I very much doubt, and you have purported to grant a licence on them: unless you actually do hold the copyright on these images, you do not have the legal power to do so. Please see [[WP:image use policy|image use policy]]. However, the presence or absence of images does not affect whether a draft is accepted, so I suggest you remove the images, and worry about getting properly licensed copies later on. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::User has had a helpful discussion in the IRC Live Chat where we've gone over the copyright issues and source issues. Thanks for your excellent advice too, @[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 20:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Boli12345|Boli12345]] ([[User talk:Boli12345|talk]]) 11:08, 23 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{re|Boli12345}} Please '''do not''' [[WP:CV|copy text from elsewhere onto Wikipedia]]. In my experience, 99% of the texts not written speficially for WIkipedia are also unsiutable for Wikipedia. When writing Wikipedia articles, please make sure that you write ''in your own words'', based on what [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] [[WP:PRIMARY|unconnected with the subject]] have choosen to write about a particuler topic, [[WP:SYNTH|without interpreting or connecting sources]]. [[User:Victor Schmidt|Victor Schmidt]] ([[User talk:Victor Schmidt|talk]]) 12:11, 23 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin == |
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Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved. |
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Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. [[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] ([[User talk:Fuzzpumpkin|talk]]) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Moli1234|Moli1234]] ([[User talk:Moli1234|talk]]) 13:15, 23 February 2021 (UTC) |
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== 08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany == |
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Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]]: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Ok thanks [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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i published an article about someone who had no prior details on Wikipedia. however my article was declined and the page im referred to, as already existing is not accurate! |
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:::{{u|Al Gattany}}, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a [[WP:NPERSON|Notable person]] deserving of a Wikipedia article. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Benarizon|Benarizon]] ([[User talk:Benarizon|talk]]) 16:00, 23 February 2021 (UTC) |
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December 21
[edit]03:00, 21 December 2024 review of submission by MajorbucksYT
[edit]- MajorbucksYT (talk · contribs) (TB)
Are corp.roblox.com, kristolex.com, ginx.tv, dilt.co or Roblox dev forum reliable sources?
Roblox dev forum only allows a select amount of people post, not everyone.
MajorbucksYT (talk) 03:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MajorbucksYT: How many people are allowed to post is irrelevant. What matters is if they have an editorial staff that fact-checks, issues retractions, etc. And by default BBSes do not have those. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 09:02, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
08:46, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Vishalarya1
[edit]Please reload page Vishalarya1 (talk) 08:46, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia is not social media for people to tell about themselves or post their resume. Please use actual social media to do that. Writing about yourself is highly discouraged, please see the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 09:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
09:09, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Spworld2
[edit]I have been requesting to move this article to the main space for many months and have not received a proper result from the admins. The article is developed based on the available information and the sources are notable Spworld2 (talk) 09:09, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Reviewers are not just admins. The draft has been rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. Wikipedia is not a place to post essays. 331dot (talk) 09:11, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
15:25, 21 December 2024 review of submission by JaredWEngland
[edit]- JaredWEngland (talk · contribs) (TB)
Greetings. I'm trying to establish a new page, but am unsure how to adequately address the comments provided to my first draft. I added several additional references, but am not sure that will be adequate. In short, I'm trying address some confusion with the hierarchy of existing Wikipedia articles. There are articles about Air Station Elizabeth City and the Elizabeth City Regional Airport. However, these are just two of several Base Elizabeth City tenants. My goal is to create a Base page to clarify the structure, better communicate what's at the campus, and provide a framework that will enable better information moving forward. Without a Base page, there isn't a location for this information to be built. Contributing to the challenge, the general pubic is largely unclear of the differing functions on the Base, so external references I can cite often have embedded in them the very confusion that I'm trying to address with this article. I know I cannot cite myself, but I'm a career Coast Guard officer who has worked on the Base at high levels. I'm seeking to address a problem I've seen both in the community here, and to a lesser degree within the Coast Guard itself. Especially for new members transferring to Elizabeth City, it is difficult to understand the makeup of the location. My hope is that this new page can become a repository for useful information to address these concerns, but it must exist first. Thanks for any help or guidance you can provide. JaredWEngland (talk) 15:25, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- The purposes you outline above are no doubt very laudable, but they are not what we do at Wikipedia. A Wikipedia article is a summary of what reliable indpendent sources say about a notable topic, and very little else. "A base page to clarify the structure" doesn't sound like that - it sounds more like original research, which is not permitted in Wikipedia articles. ColinFine (talk) 18:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Perhaps I'm expressing myself poorly, but this isn't original research. I'm just trying to create a page for an actual location where about 3,000 people work everyday and generates ~50% of the GDP for northeastern North Carolina. I want to create the page as a "skeleton" that can be built on to flesh out the details of this place by myself and others in the future. My reference to structure was that, to establish how the place is organized, so that there is a place for the details to subsequently be filled in. Other Coast Guard Bases, much smaller and less significant in mission, personnel, and reach, have a page. Why not this one? Coast Guard Base KodiakCoast Guard Base KetchikanCoast Guard Base BostonCoast Guard IslandCoast Guard Base Cape Cod JaredWEngland (talk) 17:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JaredWEngland: All but the articles on Ketchikan and Cape Cod predate the drafting process entirely, and those two predate drafting being made all-but mandatory. They did not go thru the same process as your draft has to. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:40, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- (ec) Beware of the other stuff exists argument. Those other articles could themselves be inappropriate and just not addressed yet by volunteers.
- A draft article does not need to be complete, but it does need to summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the base. If you have a source for the claim that it generates 50% of the GDP for part of North Carolina, that's a start. 331dot (talk) 18:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I've edited again and resubmitted. Unfortunately, many of the sources for information I have aren't available on the internet, so citing them isn't possible. The most recent adds & references what I was able to find in existing sources.
- Taking a step back, I understand the need for a draft/review process but this feels excessive. I've put a fair amount of time into this (creating a page and learning all the rules/software/formatting/ect has a steep learning curve) for what still may be 100% waste effort. I'm afraid that most people will give up much quicker, and Wikipedia will devolve to the major mainstream dated info model that the now defunct encyclopedias of yore used. In the balance between the unconstrained free for all of the early wiki days and absolute odious control of a rigorous academic reference, this feels too much like the latter. However, I'm an infrequent Wikipedia contributor and light financial backer, so my opinion is likely of low value. Volunteers are the magic of Wikipedia, and that's mostly you. Even though this has been frustrating, thanks for what you do! JaredWEngland (talk) 20:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JaredWEngland: You can still cite - and we can still accept - offline sources, as long as they are cited properly. If we disallowed offline sources, we'd basically have to decimate every article on historical events and figures that we have. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:14, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello again @JaredWEngland. Neither the number of people who work there nor the revenue it generates is necessarily indicative of meeting Wikipedia's criteria for notability. Meeting those criteria is the absolute first stage of creating an article, because otherwise the article is not going to get accepted. ColinFine (talk) 19:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've added a bunch more references to substantiate my opinion that it does meet the notability guidelines. However, to me that criteria reads with a fair amount of subjectivity, and other opinions may differ. If I'm again told it doesn't meet them, then I'll still disagree, but appreciate the clarity and will drop the subject. JaredWEngland (talk) 20:53, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Sources do not need to be online, they only need to be publicly available; books/magazines in a library are fine.. 331dot (talk) 22:20, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've added a bunch more references to substantiate my opinion that it does meet the notability guidelines. However, to me that criteria reads with a fair amount of subjectivity, and other opinions may differ. If I'm again told it doesn't meet them, then I'll still disagree, but appreciate the clarity and will drop the subject. JaredWEngland (talk) 20:53, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Perhaps I'm expressing myself poorly, but this isn't original research. I'm just trying to create a page for an actual location where about 3,000 people work everyday and generates ~50% of the GDP for northeastern North Carolina. I want to create the page as a "skeleton" that can be built on to flesh out the details of this place by myself and others in the future. My reference to structure was that, to establish how the place is organized, so that there is a place for the details to subsequently be filled in. Other Coast Guard Bases, much smaller and less significant in mission, personnel, and reach, have a page. Why not this one? Coast Guard Base KodiakCoast Guard Base KetchikanCoast Guard Base BostonCoast Guard IslandCoast Guard Base Cape Cod JaredWEngland (talk) 17:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
15:41, 21 December 2024 review of submission by ProofandTrust
[edit]- ProofandTrust (talk · contribs) (TB)
Dear Reviewer,
Thank you for your feedback on my submission. I’ve carefully reviewed your explanation but still find it unclear why my article was not accepted. I noticed that Wikipedia currently lacks a dedicated definition of Vendor Risk Assessment, a fundamental concept in information security. My goal is to provide an encyclopedic explanation of this widely used term to inform readers about its importance and relevance. Your feedback mentioned that the article resembles an essay. However, I intended it to be a neutral, fact-based description aligned with Wikipedia’s standards. If there are specific sections or phrases that need revision to make it more suitable, I’d appreciate detailed guidance. I’m committed to improving the article to meet Wikipedia's guidelines and would greatly value further clarification to ensure it aligns with community standards.
Thank you for your time and assistance. ProofandTrust (talk) 15:41, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @ProofandTrust. Your draft is a blog-post style essay/how to guide/critique. That's not what an encyclopaedic entry on Wikipedia about a subject should look like. Instead, you should be paraphrasing reliable published sources (not blog posts, which most of your sources are) in a dry, factual manner using the Wikipedia Voice. I am afraid you will have to completely re-write your draft from scratch and find new sources for there to be any chance of it being accepted. qcne (talk) 16:36, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
17:07, 21 December 2024 review of submission by Wilfred Day
[edit]- Wilfred Day (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am surprised this is not in place. It is highly relevant since the government will fall on the next confidence vote. What is wikipedia waiting for? Wilfred Day (talk) 17:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia, being an encyclopaedia and not a news organ, is waiting until there is substantial independent coverage of the subject in reliable sources. I suspect that by the time there are adequate sources for such an article, the election will already have taken place, so there will be no need for this article. But I know nothing of Canadian politics.
- See also there is no deadline. ColinFine (talk) 18:10, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- There are no certainties in life. We don't assume something might happen, no matter how likely it is. 331dot (talk) 23:24, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
December 22
[edit]06:41, 22 December 2024 review of submission by MonkeyBanjo007
[edit]To clarify, I tried creating a page but if I had to guess I don't have enough information at the moment. I will try to add to it I just want to create a page so I can add to it. Conor is an Actor for several roles and also a Voice Actor of A video game.
I was wondering of how I can add a portrait image, you know by the side of all these people usually there is an image to acompany the person.
I was also wondering how you add images in general like of possibly the different characters he acts/ voice acts but I can't find a way to implement images or files.
Thanks- MonkeyBanjo007 (talk) 06:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MonkeyBanjo007 see Help:Pictures for a tutorial on how do insert them. Note that the amount of images does not increase a draft's odds of acceptance, while multiple independent reliable sources that notability do. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 07:14, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
06:43, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0
[edit]You Should Agree This Draft 2409:40C2:8002:E055:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 06:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Link to the draft: Draft:Shubham X Rameshwar --bonadea contributions talk 07:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with the draft's rejection. There is nothing that shows they are notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 07:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Previously answered here (question posted by blocked user User:Bollysocialmedia) and here (by User:Royaloaksschoolking) and here.
- See also: Draft:Shubham Rameshwar Kakde about the same person (protected against creation after multiple re-creations and rejections), and this question as well as the two sections after that one, posted by blocked account User:Shubhamxrameshwar564. Please stop creating these drafts, and stop spamming the help boards about them. --bonadea contributions talk 08:52, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
10:54, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Batoenonghistoryador
[edit]- Batoenonghistoryador (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello,
I would like to ask for your help regarding the draft title of an article I am currently writing. If possible, could you change the title to "Atty. Howard Calleja et al. v. Executive Secretary et al."?
Additionally, I have a few questions:
1. How should I cite sources that are in PDF format? 2. In writing the article, is it permissible to list all the issues, given that they are material to the whole article? I am concerned that it might be flagged as a directory. Should I make it concise and risk omitting the core of the issues to shorten it?
Thank you so much for your guidance!
Batoenonghistoryador (talk) 10:54, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Batoenonghistoryador: the title isn't important at this stage, this will be moved to a different title anyway when (if) accepted, and at that point the reviewer will place it at the correct title.
- You can cite online PDFs with the {{cite web}} template. The
format=
parameter takes PDF as value, but you don't even have to specify that, the template picks it up from the file type automatically. - Sorry, I don't understand what you mean by your last question (#2), could you elaborate? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't fully understand question 2 either, but I suspect that I can answer it by saying that a Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent reliably published sources say about a subject, and very little else. If independent commentators talk about all the issues, then you can list them; if no independent commentator refers to some issue, why should it appear in an encyclopaedia article at all?
- As to question 1, DoubleGrazing has answered the technical part, but the question arises of whether these PDFs have been reliably published or not. ColinFine (talk) 19:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you so much for this informative response. Batoenonghistoryador (talk) 00:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
11:37, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566
[edit]HE IS A BIGGEST YOUNGER BUSINESSMAN 2409:40C2:8002:E055:1D7E:DFE2:FBA4:B566 (talk) 11:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah okay. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
16:10, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Njames05
[edit]How do I share my page here with two other people so they can help me add content? Nigel D James (talk) 16:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Njames05: drafts are public, so you just share the URL as you would any other. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- You're welcome to invite collaborators on the draft. Thank you for declaring your COI - I have corrected the formatting on your user page so that the declaration actually appears as it should.
- One of the first things you and they should do is to cite reliable published sources for all the unsourced material in the draft, and remove it if you can't find sources. You should also edit the text to remove all instances of "we": this is not in any sense the Club's article, but Wikipedia's article about the club, which should be almost entirely based on what people wholly unconnected with the club have chosen to publish about it, not on what the club or its associates say or want to say.
- You should also unbold the section headers. ColinFine (talk) 20:10, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
16:59, 22 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B
[edit]Check now 2409:40C2:8041:CA12:8029:E983:E715:C93B (talk) 16:59, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- The draft was rejected, meaning that it may not be resubmitted. If you have fundamentally changed the draft to address the concerns of reviewers, you should first appeal to the last reviewer directly. 331dot (talk) 17:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
17:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by LR.127
[edit]This is a comment on an existing Wikipedia article already submitted through AfC - I had declined it previously for doubts on notability, which have faded after a deep discussion here on the Rafael de Miguel González page. The article was then accepted. Since then, I feel that loads more unsourced information has been added that question the neutrality of the original draft.
I do not intend to send this article to AfD, hence why I merely aim to discuss it here - at worst, the article could be reverted to its revision when accepted, and newer edits could be trimmed or otherwise removed.
I'm courtesy pinging a few people who contributed to the previous discussion: User:Timtrent, User:Joe Roe, User:Benison, User:Mr.choppers, and User:asilvering. Cheers. LR.127 (talk) 17:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Now that this is an actual article, you should discuss on the article talk page(perhaps as a request for comment) or on the more general Help Desk. This board is only for drafts in the draft process. 331dot (talk) 18:46, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else. Mr.choppers | ✎ 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else.
Woof. You weren't kidding. Good call on the re-stub. -- asilvering (talk) 18:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- My original comments were more of a frustration with the AFC process. I agree that after its recent revisions, Rafael de Miguel González reads more like a CV than anything else. Mr.choppers | ✎ 18:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
18:45, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Bentasyt.1
[edit]- Bentasyt.1 (talk · contribs) (TB)
what can i improve this article that it would be on wikipedia Bentasyt.1 (talk) 18:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please see the message left by the reviewer, as well as the policies linked to therein. 331dot (talk) 18:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Bentasyt.1. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- Very brief summary of writing an article:
- Find several sources which are reliably published, wholly independent of the subject of the article, and contain significant coverage of the subject. See WP:42
- If you can't find at least three such sources, give up and do something else.
- If you can find them, forget anything you may know about the subject, and write a summary of what those sources say about it.
- ColinFine (talk) 20:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
19:35, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Sophisticatedevening
[edit]- Sophisticatedevening (talk · contribs) (TB)
I added an infobox to the draft, however it is much too large, and I am unsure how to shrink it, and none of the parameters in the template seem to fix it. Sophisticatedevening (talk) 19:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed up for you Sophisticatedevening. Cheers KylieTastic (talk) 19:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
20:03, 22 December 2024 review of submission by Mariah Hopkins
[edit]Why was the article declined Mariah Hopkins (talk) 20:03, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Courtesy link: User:Mariah Hopkins/sandbox ColinFine (talk) 20:16, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- It was declined because it doesn't have enough independent reliable citations to establish that she meets Wikipedia's criteria for notability - see WP:42. Of the three out of 15 citations that even might meet those criteria (actually 2, because 2 of them are the same source), the Lambo piece does not have significant coverage of her, so the TempoStub is the only one that even might be an acceptable source - though I suspect it is based on an interview or press release, so is not truly independent). Even if it is, one source is not enough to establish reliability, and most of the draft is not cited.
- Wikipedia has little interest in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is almost entirely interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in reliable sources. If enough material is cited from independent sources to establish notability, a limited amount of uncontroversial factual information may be added from non-independent sources.
- Resubmitting the draft without making any changes is not recommended, and may be regarded as disruptive editing.
- My comments to another editor above are equally applicable to your case. ColinFine (talk) 20:28, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
December 23
[edit]06:08, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Sonshiv
[edit]please upload my wikipedia
Sonshiv (talk) 06:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Pure advertising. Deleted and blocked. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
06:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE
[edit]i want this article for my popular world to see my information please help me 2001:4456:CEB:9B00:4434:7181:6BD4:ACBE (talk) 06:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Assuming you're Manasi32, please log into your account when editing.
- There is no content in this draft, only an infobox. An infobox with unreferenced personal details of someone (maybe you, maybe someone else). For privacy reasons, I've deleted it, as well as the same information hosted on Manasi32's user page. Please do not publish (anyone's) personal details unnecessarily and without supporting them with reliable published sources.
- Oh, and this draft was rejected already, therefore it wouldn't have been considered any further anyway.
- Last but not least, assuming you were attempting to write about yourself, please see WP:AUTOBIO for why you shouldn't. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
07:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Thanvi 032
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Why has the submission been rejected? Please accept it. Thanvi 032 (talk) 07:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Thanvi 032: your draft Draft:Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi has not been rejected, which would mean it cannot be resubmitted; only declined, which means it can, once you have addressed the decline reasons. Which you have not done. Each decline notice told you to cite your sources inline, not in a big heap at the bottom, so that we can see where each piece of information has come from and how much of the content remains unsupported. That is the reason this has been (repeatedly) declined. HTH, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanvi 032, your draft is very poorly referenced. Vast swathes are unreferenced in violation of Verifiability, a core content policy. Please read and study Reliable sources and Referencing for beginners. Cullen328 (talk) 07:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- We have resolved the reasons for the shortage. And sources are also cited. Draft: Molana Inamur Rahman Inam Thanvi Please watch it again. And if something is missing, tell me. thank you. Thanvi 032 (talk) 08:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Thanvi 032: no changes have been made since the last review (yesterday). When you have made changes, hopefully addressing the decline reason, you may then resubmit this draft for another review; we don't provide on-demand reviews here at the help desk. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:15, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
08:31, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Tropical Appreciater10001-400
[edit]Regarding the decline of making the draft a article. After careful review of wikipedias policy, My understanding is that Fictional works do not have to cite sources. I may be wrong, so correct me if you please. which is what i am regarding. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:31, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- You are wrong see Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. Theroadislong (talk) 08:34, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Tropical Appreciater10001-400: not so; every article has to cite its sources.
- In reviewing Wikipedia policies, you appear to have missed the one about not publishing hoaxes and fictitious things of assorted types. If you wish to tell the world about your idea, you need to find some other platform to do that; perhaps one of the many blogging sites out there. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your feedback. I understand the concern regarding the use of fictional works on Wikipedia. However, I wanted to clarify that Palame is a fictional setting created for a Roblox game, and it exists in that context. While it is indeed fictional, it is a component of a larger creative project that others might find interesting. If this is not appropriate for Wikipedia, I would be happy to explore other ways to share this concept, but I thought it was worth explaining the context.
- Thank you for your time and consideration. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, wherever you heard that, your understanding is incorrect. Perhaps you are referring to plot summaries of films and books(which don't need to be cited as they can be verified by reading the book/watching the film). Wikipedia is not a host of fictional content. 331dot (talk) 08:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- User-generated content, such as social media videos, cannot establish notability unless they are published by a reputable source. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 09:01, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I believe i understand now. for a draft/document to be accepted it must have media and/or publicity, or any outwards sources. such as a videos on social media of the creation. and/or if the game was published, and is avalible for the public on the platform (Roblox) to clarify, yes it is published on Roblox, but is not widely played or known, if you do say i can provide with you with a link if needed. but i do think i understand. Tropical Appreciater10001-400 (talk) 08:54, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
10:43, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 14.194.64.70
[edit]- 14.194.64.70 (talk · contribs) (TB)
this is page information please live it. 14.194.64.70 (talk) 10:43, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- This is Wikipedia, not Wikihow. We do not host guides on buying real estate. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 10:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
12:47, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Pr.nutrition
[edit]- Pr.nutrition (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have been trying to get my article to get my article approved for 6 months already and it is always rejected. Could you please point on specific sentences I should change and tell me what is wrong with them? I have already deleted all the content that didnt have references and still I cannot get approval. Pr.nutrition (talk) 12:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pr.nutrition Prior to anyone answering your question you need to visit your user talk page and respond to the question about whether you are a paid editor that I have just placed there. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
16:39, 23 December 2024 review of submission by FelixKerscher
[edit]- FelixKerscher (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why was my submission declined? FelixKerscher (talk) 16:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @FelixKerscher Please read the rationale in the big box that now resides at the head of the draft. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 18:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- It says that my sources should be: in-depth, reliable, secondary and independent. My sources definitely fulfil the first two requirements. All bar one of my sources are peer-reviewed journal articles. Some which have thousands of citations (not a perfect proxy for reliability, but it’s as good as it’s gonna get). I didn’t take the information in the big box seriously because I thought it was auto generated. FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- You could also ask the reviewer CSMention269 if they have any more input on what is lacking from the sources to show notability. KylieTastic (talk) 18:42, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @FelixKerscher: By commenting on their user talk page. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- How do I go about doing that? Do I just try tag them here? FelixKerscher (talk) 22:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
19:05, 23 December 2024 review of submission by Zraffarz
[edit]Hello, hope I am writing at the right place. I have made a first submission a couple of days ago, and my article was declined because of the tone wasn't right / neutral at certain places. At first I wasn't in agreement with the reviewer, but after careful re-reading I must agree that I had to make some changes. I have since then edited the article to fix those passages and resubmitted the article. I was wondering if I could get a feedback on the article as well as having it accepted ?
I feel like I have put in the work, and that I also found many reliable articles to support it, but I am open to comments.
Regards. Zraffarz (talk) 19:05, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Your draft is laughably promotional, do you work for the company by any chance? "Surmesur combines traditional tailoring with technology offering clients personalized experiences through digital fitting tools and diverse customization options." is straight from the marketing department. Theroadislong (talk) 19:16, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't work for Surmesur no. I am not paid either for writing this article. I am French speaking though, so maybe what you see as being laughably promotional is simply that some things you see offensive I read them as being neutral. Are there other sections that are not fitting ? Like I said, I want to put in the work.
- Regards Zraffarz (talk) 19:24, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello. I did work on the draft, and removed passages like the one you mentioned. I also removed any content that could be misinterpreted (like the awards section i felt could be interesting, but removed it as I am trying to find the difference between content and promotional content). Would you be willing to give it another pass ? Draft:Surmesur
- Much appreciated Zraffarz (talk) 19:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
23:56, 23 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09
[edit]hey what exactly was wrong 2600:1700:78E8:9500:8CCE:C49F:4109:DA09 (talk) 23:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- The draft has been deleted as "unambiguous advertising or promotion". A Wikipedia article, whatever its subject, should be a summary of what independent reliable sources say about a subject. What the subject, or their associates, say or want to say is of almost no relevance. ColinFine (talk) 00:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
December 24
[edit]00:17, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Nycrest
[edit]Hello - I added the appropriate sources (NBC, PIX11, etc.) and cleaned up the article to be neutral based on the rules (no promotion) Nycrest (talk) 00:17, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Nycrest "no promotion"? I don't see how
unorthodox approach to fine dining
,theatrical presentations
, andplayful irreverence towards traditional fine dining conventions
is neutral. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:37, 24 December 2024 (UTC)- I am quoting the videos that are sourced. Is there another way of doing quotes? Is there an article you can reference for how to handle quotes from journalists?
- I am unsure how unorthodox and irreverence towards fine dining is good thing? Wouldn't promotion equal something of value? There is nothing on Wikipedia that says something is unorthodox.. as unorthodox is a promotional word? I cannot seem to phrase this in a non-promotion way based on what is considered neutral, the page is already pretty bare bones. I will attempt again to make edits and will see how it works out; Thanks for your time. Nycrest (talk) 14:45, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not seeing how this establishment meets WP:ORG- you just summarize the offerings of the establishment. If the establishment is "unorthodox" you need to go into detail as to what sources say is unorthodox about it beyond just a statement that its business practices are unorthodox. 331dot (talk) 14:49, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
02:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Hedax212
[edit]I want this company to get some recognition, I have no relation to either founder and have never written a wikipedia article before but there is nothing online about them. I purchased one of their ornaments as new old stock on ebay and wanted to find out more about it and was even able to track down one of the founders Micheal Leban and was able to have a small interview with him where the majority of this information comes from. They essentially pioneered a niche automotive accesory field at a time where hood ornaments were going out of fashion. I made a rough draft and don't know what I need to do now to have it published. Hedax212 (talk) 02:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Hedax212 to submit the draft you need to click the big blue button near the top. However note that with the only source being
US patent number US4988065A
, it is unlikely to be accepted. Please see Help:Your first article first. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC)- There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. Hedax212 (talk) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unfortunately that means they are likely not notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. Hedax212 (talk) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Articles require significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the topic. Without these things, there can't be an article. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 05:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Possibly, my personal feelings on the matter are that they quite literally pioneered a niche field. To my knowledge they were the first company to make aftermarket hood ornaments. Hedax212 (talk) 02:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unfortunately that means they are likely not notable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- There is next to no information publically available on the company, I only know most of this from the packaging of a unit I purchased and a brief conversation with one of the previous owners. Hedax212 (talk) 02:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
02:55, 24 December 2024 review of submission by MarkDiBelloBiographer
[edit]- MarkDiBelloBiographer (talk · contribs) (TB)
Is it possible to delete a photo? I know I can replace one, but if I insert a photo box, it seems I can never remove it. I would hate to add a photo which I can never remove. MarkDiBelloBiographer (talk) 02:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Draft:Mark Anthony DiBello Knitsey (talk) 03:01, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @MarkDiBelloBiographer: I don't know what a 'photo box' is, or why you wouldn't be able to remove one if you can insert one; I can only assume you're talking about something to do with the visual editor, of which I've very little experience. In the source editing mode, you can certainly remove any trace of an earlier image.
- Having said all that, your draft looks like some sort of personal tribute page or similar, not least because of the excessive use of family/personal photographs. These are quite inappropriate for an encyclopaedia, in my opinion at least.
- On a separate point, your user name clearly suggests some sort of connection with the subject. This has been queried on your talk page, but I don't see that you've responded to the query. Could you do that now, please. If you are being paid or otherwise rewarded for your edits, you must make a paid-editing-disclosure. Even if you're not, but otherwise have an external relationship with the subject, you must make a general conflict-of-interest (COI) disclosure. Please attend to this matter promptly. Thank you. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:02, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
06:57, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Muhammedramees18
[edit]- Muhammedramees18 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why My edit is declined? Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 06:57, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Muhammedramees18: your draft was not just declined, it was actually rejected (meaning, the end of the road), because it offers no evidence of notability, not to mention that it is entirely promotional and written purely from the subject's point of view.
- What is your relationship with this school? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am a Co Founder of this school. Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Muhammedramees18: in that case, you have a conflict of interest, and need to make a paid-editing-disclosure. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am a Co Founder of this school. Muhammed Ramees E P (talk) 07:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Muhammedramees18. Writing a new article is much more difficult than it looks, and editors who try it without first spending a significant amount of time learning how Wikipedia works often have a frustrating and disappointing experience. It is even more difficult when the editors has a conflict of interest. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent reliable sources have published about a subject, and very little else. Wikipedia has essentially no interest in what your school says or wants to say about itself, only in what wholly independent commentators have published about it. For many schools, that is little or nothing: if that is the case, then no article on the school is possible.
- Note also that if ever Wikipedia has an article about your school, whoever writes it, the article will not belong to you, will not be controlled by you, will not necessarily say what you want it to say, and may be edited by almost anybody in the world except you and your colleagues. Please see an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing. ColinFine (talk) 12:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
07:35, 24 December 2024 review of submission by 223.190.86.242
[edit]- 223.190.86.242 (talk · contribs) (TB)
how to submit an article, can you give me any solution for update an article 223.190.86.242 (talk) 07:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia is not a guide about universities in India and your submission is not appropriate as an encyclopedic article. It has been rejected and will not be considered any further. cyberdog958Talk 07:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
08:04, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Sunuraju
[edit]should i seek help for rebelibe or rewrite by another editors for draft? Sunuraju (talk) 08:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
10:27, 24 December 2024 review of submission by JustBeenji
[edit]- JustBeenji (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have a question. Can you or i or anyone get editorship? Because making this page better can be good. JustBeenji (talk) 10:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: you are an editor. So am I. So is pretty much anyone else who has ever edited any page on Wikipedia.
- But no editor can magic notability out of thin air, and without evidence of notability, this draft cannot be published. Which is why it has been rejected. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:53, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- So do i have to create a new draft? JustBeenji (talk) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: in a word, no. Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji JustBeenji (talk) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- As mentioned above, because you haven't provided a single source that indicates that this is a notable game. It could be notable, as it does seem to be a popular series of point-and-click video games, but the draft itself is so sparsely written that it's nearly impossible to even identify who or what Henry Stickmin is, let alone present the case for this being a notable video game series. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:40, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: Popularity is fleeting, notability is forever. Without sources, you cannot demonstrate the latter. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- But Henry Stickmin is popular! Why not? -- JustBeenji JustBeenji (talk) 12:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JustBeenji: in a word, no. Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. There is absolutely nothing in this draft that would suggest the subject is even remotely notable, and therefore no matter how many drafts you create on it, none of them would be accepted. (You would, however, almost certainly get yourself blocked, eventually.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- So do i have to create a new draft? JustBeenji (talk) 11:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
11:39, 24 December 2024 review of submission by SarahSamuell
[edit]- SarahSamuell (talk · contribs) (TB)
i put 2 references and it also got rejected , what else should i do?? SarahSamuell (talk) 11:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- All new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See WP:N) which in most cases requires significant coverage (WP:SIGCOV) in multiple independent (WP:INDY) reliable sources (WP:RS). Your two sources do not do this, they just show the subject exists. Posts on social media such as pinterest are also not reliable sources in most cases. Also most of your content was unsourced. Also see WP:NSCHOOL and WP:SCHOOLOUTCOMES. KylieTastic (talk) 11:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @SarahSamuell. Please see my lengthy reply to Muhammedramees18 above, most of which applies to you as well. ColinFine (talk) 12:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- In addition to what has already been said, there are serious problems with the photographs as you've uploaded them to Commons and credited them as your own work. Naturally, I am skeptical you took these photos personally over an 84-year period. If these are not your photos, you need to make them fully compliant with Wikipedia's non-free content policies, which can be found at WP:NFC. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:29, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- And please don't resubmit a draft that has already been rejected. If you disagree with the rejection, the way to address this is to take it up with the rejecting reviewer directly. And we have already discussed this on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
14:09, 24 December 2024 review of submission by WikiBaltimore
[edit]- WikiBaltimore (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello. An article I recently submitted "Turner Development" was just declined for "appears to read like an advertisement". Here is the entire submission.....
"Turner Development is a real estate development company based in Maryland. Turner Development specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations. Notable projects include Silo Point Condominium in Locust Point, Baltimore, 1211 Light St, McHenry Pointe, Federal Hill Lofts in Federal Hill, Baltimore, Henrietta Square, Holy Cross Condominiums and McHenry Theater."
I disagree with the "appears to read like an advertisement" and would like you to please reconsider the submission. None of 3 sentences are subjective or in any way promoting Turner Development, just facts that were backed by the numerous references submitted with the article. What was submitted are just 3 factual sentences to start a wikipedia page for other Wiki community members to contribute as they see fit.
For example, Silo Point is one of projects mentioned and an outstanding wiki page has grown over the years around the history and facts on the former grain elevators story. The other projects listed in the original submission also have an incredible historical story to tell by the wiki community for their significant impact they have played in Marylands past.
Thank you for you reconsideration and insight as to what/how the 3 would need to be reworded to make sure they meet wiki guidelines and a new page is create to help spur greater conversations on the wiki community about the signitical historic locations listed in the original submission. ~ Happy Hollidays. WikiBaltimore (talk) 14:09, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiBaltimore: Wikipedia articles summarise what independent and reliable secondary sources have previously said about a subject and what makes it worthy of note. Your draft, on the other hand, merely states that the subject exists, and gives very much the impression that it is the subject telling the world about itself (which is the definition of promotion, see WP:YESPROMO), with a dozen sources tagged at the end for WP:REFBOMBING purposes.
- Do you happen to work for, or with, Turner Development, by any chance? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:03, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- The references are about the projects Turner Development has been involved in, not, about Turner Development, the company, mostly about Silo Point, which does already have an article. And the references are just slapped in a giant bucket at the end rather than supporting factual information with in-line citations. What are the sources for the notability of these other projects besides Silo Point? What is the source for specifically concluding that the company "specializes in ground up and Adaptive reuse renovations?" You can't simply infer that from the listed projects as that's WP:OR. At the end of the day, the article doesn't really even tell us anything about Turner Development. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 15:12, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Well said, thank you for the feedback WikiBaltimore (talk) 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
14:21, 24 December 2024 review of submission by Juanestebanfernandez
[edit]- Juanestebanfernandez (talk · contribs) (TB)
I don't undertstand why my page has been suspended, i was the most parcial i could and y followed all the recomendations you gave me. Please i need help publishing this. Juanestebanfernandez (talk) 14:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Juanestebanfernandez: your draft was declined because it doesn't demonstrate that the subject is notable. There is also nothing to indicate where all that information comes from, let alone that it comes from reliable and independent secondary sources.
- Do you represent Trusted Interpreters or CSA Research in any way? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- It's not written in an encyclopedic manner, the text itself is complete unsourced with only some general tangentially related sites listed at the end, it looks like AI was heavily used in creating it, and we already have far superior information of this type at articles like Language interpretation. Yes, the article focuses on interpretation services in the US rather than generally, but there's almost no actual specific US-related content other than a couple unsourced facts. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 14:58, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
21:23, 24 December 2024 review of submission by CerebralPathfinder
[edit]- CerebralPathfinder (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why has my article been denied? I'd like to ask why my content has been declined and what I can do to add it CerebralPathfinder (talk) 21:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- CerebralPathfinder I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. Did you see the message left by the reviewer? 331dot (talk) 21:34, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- ah yes just seen! thank you CerebralPathfinder (talk) 21:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- I see that the draft is sourced entirely to company materials. Instead, it should summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable company.
- If you work for this company, that must be disclosed, see WP:PAID, as well as conflict of interest. 331dot (talk) 21:38, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
December 25
[edit]05:21, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NOMAN ABBASS
[edit]- NOMAN ABBASS (talk · contribs) (TB)
I've made edits , provided sources and references yet my article hasn't been accepted . I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me NOMAN ABBASS (talk) 05:21, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NOMAN ABBASS: We do not accept guides. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 05:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
06:02, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Anonymous 21710
[edit]- Anonymous 21710 (talk · contribs) (TB)
can you please tell me what are the problems that can occur while publishing this article.
Anonymous 21710 (talk) 06:02, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Anonymous21710: Not only is this draft blatantly promotional and entirely unsourced, the subject is a minor and we err on not having articles on minors simply because that destroys any chance they have at a private life. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 06:08, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
08:29, 25 December 2024 review of submission by NakiwugeFlorence
[edit]- NakiwugeFlorence (talk · contribs) (TB)
What article do they need, because they are many but may be jam not choosing the right ones NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:29, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NakiwugeFlorence: a musician would need to demonstrate notability via either the general WP:GNG or the special WP:MUSICBIO guideline. Carefully study those guidelines, they will tell you exactly what evidence of notability you would need to provide. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @NakiwugeFlorence: I have no need to check your sources; an experienced reviewer has done so, and rejected your draft. This means it will not be considered further. If you have sources demonstrating notability which weren't considered at the most recent review, you may appeal directly to the rejecting reviewer. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Check my sources and help fix where i went wrong NakiwugeFlorence (talk) 08:40, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
13:27, 25 December 2024 review of submission by KimJongUnsBasement
[edit]- KimJongUnsBasement (talk · contribs) (TB)
It keeps getting rejected. I don’t know what they want me to do now, there isn’t much information on Quesada, and most of his articles are in Spanish. KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 13:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- It wasn't "rejected" until the last time, it was "declined" before that(declined means resubmission is possible) If there isn't much information about them, that is a strong indicator they do not merit a Wikipedia article at this time. Sources do not need to be in English. 331dot (talk) 13:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
I don’t know what do. I added citations, but still it gets declined. I’ve seen far worst Wikipedia Articles be accepted. Please just accept it and other people can add on to it, it’s not like it’s a protective page, anyone can edit and help me out. I know you’re probably gonna say no, (if you even read in the first place) because of what’s on your user page, but it was worth a try. KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 14:19, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @KimJongUnsBasement: footballers have to demonstrate notability per WP:GNG, which requires 3+ solid sources. This draft cites none.
- What is your involvement with this draft? It was created by a blocked user. Are you somehow associated with them? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- KimJonUnsBasement Please edit this existing section, instead of creating additional sections for every post you make. This process is usually voluntary; if you wish to disregard what reviewers are telling you, you can move it to the encyclopedia yourself, but you run the risk of it being put up for a deletion discussion.
- As for other articles, see other stuff exists. Not all articles have gone through this process. If you see reviewers accepting "worse" articles, please identify those articles. 331dot (talk) 14:27, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Drafts do not need to be complete, but they need to meet the most basic criteria. Your draft does not. 331dot (talk) 14:28, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- I was reading about him on TransferMarket and searched him up on Wikipedia until notice he didn’t have an English Wikipedia Page. I have no involvement with the person who created the page KimJongUnsBasement (talk) 14:59, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
14:00, 25 December 2024 review of submission by 2.190.166.198
[edit]this person is a famous rapper in iran . please recheck my article 2.190.166.198 (talk) 14:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi IP editor, this has been rejected so will not be considered further. qcne (talk) 14:04, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
14:01, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Amjsso
[edit]I just wanted to create a politician page Amjsso (talk) 14:01, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Amjsso, have you read the policy at WP:VERIFY? Everything on Wikipedia must have reliable, published sources. Your draft is entirely unsourced. qcne (talk) 14:03, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
18:44, 25 December 2024 review of submission by Sanjaygowda18
[edit]- Sanjaygowda18 (talk · contribs) (TB)
My page is deleted without any valid reasons retrieve the page Sanjaygowda18 (talk) 18:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- He is one of the advocat in Bangalore who is helping out the poor people Sanjaygowda18 (talk) 18:47, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please don't write spam on Wikipedia, which is what your draft was. If you want to learn how to write an encyclopedic article that complies with our policies, please visit Help:Your first article. qcne (talk) 18:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
23:20, 25 December 2024 review of submission by AngelicaMonsalud
[edit]- AngelicaMonsalud (talk · contribs) (TB)
I would like to know how to improve your tone writing in a formal way? AngelicaMonsalud (talk) 23:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- For starters limit what you write to what is in the sources, currently most of the draft is without a single source. Theroadislong (talk) 23:37, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
December 26
[edit]06:11, 26 December 2024 review of submission by 117.254.37.23
[edit]- 117.254.37.23 (talk · contribs) (TB)
My draft article has been rejected multiple times and I am trying to get it approved. I will submit one more edit. I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025. Appreciate the community's help. 117.254.37.23 (talk) 06:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Firstly, if you're Ssaisushanth45, please log into your account whenever editing.
- Secondly, bear in mind that as a paid user, you are not allowed to attempt publishing this yourself; you must go through the AfC review system (as you are now doing).
- I cannot find any multiple rejections or even declines. One version was deleted from the main article space for being purely promotional. Another was moved into the draft space, where it has been declined ones. Or have you created this under other titles and/or other user accounts?
- It isn't clear what support you require. Please ask specific questions, if you have any.
- We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
- As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us. Wikipedia is not edited to a deadline.
- Finally, you yourself should read, and more to the point show to you boss, this: WP:BOSS. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
- "We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
- As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us."
- Other reviewers were kind enough to point out areas in my article which violated certain rules - I was merely requesting more of the same once I submit my edited version for review and noting this is a priority for me.
- Ssaisushanth45 (talk) 06:55, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Ssaisushanth45: if all you're requesting is another review (after you resubmit your draft), then that is what you will get anyway; there is no need to request it in advance here at the help desk. When you get your review is another matter; we have over 1,800 pending drafts in the system, the oldest have been waiting for two months, and therefore we cannot promise this will happen before your deadline. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
06:47, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Ramakrishnan.babug
[edit]- Ramakrishnan.babug (talk · contribs) (TB)
May I know the reason for rejecting my article?
Ramakrishnan.babug (talk) 06:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Ramakrishnan.babug Wikipedia is not for self-promotion. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 06:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
15:22, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Shaurya4455
[edit]regarding to uploading a new page or Article i want upload my self article on Wikipedia how can i upload it Shaurya4455 (talk) 15:22, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Your draft has been rejected there is zero evidence that you pass the criteria at WP:GNG. Theroadislong (talk) 15:26, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Shaurya4455 (ec) I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. The short answer to your question is, you don't. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. Please read the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 15:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
19:25, 26 December 2024 review of submission by CorosanD
[edit]Would you tell me what is missing or not done right in the latest draft of the article, so to be sure it would be accepted next time when submitted ? Thank you. CorosanD (talk) 19:25, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @CorosanD: That's the purpose of the review – submit the draft if you think it is ready, and the reviewer will evaluate whether anything is missing. --bonadea contributions talk 19:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @CorosanD. I'm afraid that what is not done right is exactly what most people do when they try the challenging task of creating a Wikipedia article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- Specifically: large parts of your draft are unreferenced, which suggests that you wrote the draft BACKWARDS, starting with what you know, rather than starting with what your sources said. Wikipedia isn't intersted in what you know (or what I know): it is only interested in what reliable published sources say.
- Furthermore, not many of your sources meet the triple criteria of being reliable, independent, and containing significant coverage of Boladjiev - see WP:42.
- Next, external references are almost never permitted within the text of an article, and should be removed. I see that one of them is in fact to an article in another Wikipedia (bg-wiki). You can wikilink to that using the template {{ill}}: so
is displayed as Union of Bulgarian Composers - a redlink because there is no such article in the English Wikipedia, but with the blue "[bg]" link to the Bulgarian article. If ever somebody write the English article, the template will automatically link to it.{{ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}}
- The last point is that I believe that all the images you have uploaded are copyright violations, and I have nominated most of them for deletion. (I have left the poster, because I think it is probably below the COM:Threshold of originality, and so is in the public domain).
- You have claimed that all these images are your own work, which I very much doubt, and you have purported to grant a licence on them: unless you actually do hold the copyright on these images, you do not have the legal power to do so. Please see image use policy. However, the presence or absence of images does not affect whether a draft is accepted, so I suggest you remove the images, and worry about getting properly licensed copies later on. ColinFine (talk) 20:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- User has had a helpful discussion in the IRC Live Chat where we've gone over the copyright issues and source issues. Thanks for your excellent advice too, @ColinFine qcne (talk) 20:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
December 27
[edit]03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin
[edit]- Fuzzpumpkin (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved.
Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. Fuzzpumpkin (talk) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany
[edit]- Al Gattany (talk · contribs) (TB)
Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk Al Gattany (talk) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Al Gattany: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Al Gattany, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a Notable person deserving of a Wikipedia article. Cullen328 (talk) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)