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Reviewer: Ppt91 (talk · contribs) 18:46, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

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@UndercoverClassicist It looks like we're done! Thanks so much for your hard work. The only item that remains is "Duchy of Athens could briefly describe the geographical/political context for unfamiliar readers", which does not stand in the way of GA and just a suggestion which you may consider adding later on. As for my review, this is an excellent article and congratulations on another valuable contribution in your area of expertise! Ppt91^talk 14:28, 2 July 2023 (UTC)

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Very excited to start this review of another valuable contribution by the nominator. From my first impressions, the article is very well written (which is to be expected from this author), makes extensive use of reliable scholarship, and covers the subject in great (but not excessive) detail. The visual material is also really helpful. I don't anticipate major edits, and my comments will likely focus on organization and structure, which I think can be improved somewhat to make the article a bit more accessible to a non-specialist reader. I plan to have the first batch of my comments by tomorrow if not earlier and I am looking forward to working together! Ppt91talk 18:46, 20 June 2023 (UTC) @UndercoverClassicist Checking in, as I know you have been busy with other work. It looks like only a few things left here, but please let me know if you have any questions or if there is anything I can do to facilitate the process. I'll look forward to passing it whenever you're ready. Ppt91talk 18:00, 1 July 2023 (UTC) Thanks for the check-in: I got back last night, and will have some time later on to look at this. Expecting to be able to give a fairly straightforward "yes, done" to all that remains. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 06:39, 2 July 2023 (UTC) General comments Regarding structure of the article, I am wondering whether the nominator would be willing to adjust/edit some of the sections. It might be a good idea to include Date, Inscription, and Construction into one large section titled History with subsections Dating, Construction, and Inscription. That way, the reader will be able to navigate the content more easily while the modern content of Excavation can remain as is. Below is my suggestion for content organization as bullet points. I am open to other ideas, but I would like to see content moved around for more clarity. Description History Dating Construction Inscription Excavation Ppt91talk 16:51, 21 June 2023 (UTC) Hi Ppt91 - thanks for taking this on. It's a thought: the key consideration in section hierarchy is section length, and the consequent effect on readability (from a strict GA point of view, the caveat should be added that the criteria only require a frankly bottom-scraping standard here). The "Date" section is certainly, in my view, too long to be anything other than L2 (as it currently is) given the overall size of the article; the "Construction" section could go either way but is certainly more than long enough to be L2. However, I can see an argument for making "Inscription" (which is probably too short for an L2) a subsection of "Description": so we would have: Description Inscription (since this follows the same logic of describing what can/could always be physically observed on the monument) Date Construction Excavation To me, that structure makes probably the most sense. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 09:32, 22 June 2023 (UTC) ::I've gone ahead and done this: for various reasons (including disambiguating with another inscription mentioned further down), moving "Inscription" in this way seems pretty clear-cut. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 09:35, 22 June 2023 (UTC) Thanks for addressing this! I still would like to suggest a few tweaks. 1. It might be a good idea to change "Inscription" to "Dedicatory inscription" (a term you use in the section and in the image caption) for the sake of clarity and specificity. 2. Are you fundamentally opposed to changing "Date" to "Dating"? Speaking from an art historical standpoint, the term dating (as in chronological dating) is commonly used to describe the process of determining an artifact's date range. I imagine the standard would be the same for archaeology--or is there is a specific reason as to why "Date" would be preferred? I'll start section-by-section feedback as soon as we clarify this. Ppt91talk 14:24, 22 June 2023 (UTC) ::::1 done (good idea, especially as there are other inscriptions mentioned in the article). 2 - yes: as you describe, dating is a process, and this isn't a historical section as to how the date of the monument has been established: its aim is to give, as far as possible, the reader a chance to form a conclusion as to its date. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 15:34, 22 June 2023 (UTC) Lead As is known, I am a stickler for linking, but I do think “fortified gate” deserves a link Done UndercoverClassicist (talk) 19:43, 22 June 2023 (UTC) Link medieval period Done. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 19:43, 22 June 2023 (UTC) Prose suggestion: “during the Ottoman times”; also, I think it would be helpful to give some date ranges or at the very least a starting date for the Ottoman times Date added in the body; not sure it's right for the lead, especially given the Wikilink to "Ottoman Greece". UndercoverClassicist (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2023 (UTC) I’d like to see a few more words of explanation for spolia and entablature Done for spolia. Not ideologically opposed for entablature, but it's difficult to think of a succinct definition (mindful of MOS:LEAD: we should be brief here) that adds value to the cohort of readers who don't know the word: I think it's inferable enough from context that it's a part of the gate. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 19:43, 22 June 2023 (UTC) BCE and CE should be linked I think that would go against MOS:OVERLINK, since those are both commonly-understood terms: it's certainly unusual across Wikipedia (by way of comparison, see Archimedes and Chariot Racing, two randomly-picked Greece FAs: neither does it). UndercoverClassicist (talk) 19:43, 22 June 2023 (UTC) Link choregos in quote; it’s separate from the monument already linked Ppt91talk 15:00, 22 June 2023 (UTC) It's already linked immediately before, so shouldn't be linked twice. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 20:42, 22 June 2023 (UTC) Generally re linking, a few words of explanation. One, I am aware of MOS:OVERLINK, which I think I've mentioned a few times before, including my propensity to link more than generally advised. However, I find that specific guidance to be quite limiting. Its definition of "general terms" is very expansive and has resulted, at least from my GAR experience, in underlinking of phrases that a reader can find very helpful. In particular, the examples listed there to me seem contrary the following guidance A good question to ask yourself is whether reading the article you're about to link to would help someone understand the article you are linking from. On the one hand, we're encouraged to break the rules if it makes en-wiki better, but on the other, everyone seems to be self-policing the linking guidance to a point where it has a detrimental effect on the (particularly unfamiliar) reader. And the evidence used support the rule relies on a single study from 2016 which is hardly a sampling sufficient enough to make a unilateral judgment regarding the ways in which people navigate en-wiki. I think it is perfectly fine to link BCE or CE to further WP's educational mission and I generally think the same for every term I include in this review. Of course, if you're strongly opposed based on your own judgement of the term's potential usefulness, I will be happy to concur, but I would also appreciate it if we could avoid referencing MOS:OVERLINK policy for every link suggestion I make in the review moving forward. I do see your point. There's an accessibility trade-off in adding links: firstly, creating a mosaic effect of black and blue text (or whatever alternative a given user's browser might create) compromises readability, particularly for viewers with certain conditions and visual impairments. There's also a clarity trade-off: we tell readers that we've linked things which will have some level of value to them if they click on them: the lower we make that threshold of value, the less confident they will be that clicking on the link is worth their time, and it becomes harder for them to tell really useful links from those that are less so. As you point out, nobody's under any obligation to follow practically any of the site's guidelines, but it's generally a good udea to respect large-scale community consensus where it exists. Please do point out if you think there are any other cases which would be worth a link. I'm happy to handle them case by case, though I'll be quite open and say that I think WP:OVERLINK is worth following because it's generally good sense, not simply because it's a guideline. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 17:01, 23 June 2023 (UTC) Thank you for your thoughtful response. I guess my worry is with the consensus which in this case seems to me a bit outdated (again, relying on a single study from 2016) and that WP:CCC may be in order. But that's not something we can, unfortunately, address here. In any case, I think we managed found a pretty good middle ground. :) Ppt91talk 21:15, 24 June 2023 (UTC) “Its construction marked the beginning of a new phase in the Acropolis's use, in which it came to be seen more as a potential defensive position than in the religious terms that had marked its use in the Classical period.” Might be a good idea to split into two sentences for clarity Possibly, though the 'obvious' fix - "Its construction marked the beginning of a new phase in the Acropolis's use. In this phase, the Acropolis came to be seen more as a potential defensive position than in the religious terms that had marked its use in the Classical period" - introduces a new problem of being repetitious. Did you have a particular formulation in mind? UndercoverClassicist (talk) 19:43, 22 June 2023 (UTC) I would link “archaeologist” Per MOS:OVERLINK, it's a common occupation, which the MOS tells us not to link. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 19:43, 22 June 2023 (UTC) “though archaeologists and Greek commentators criticised the aggressive means by which Beulé had carried out the excavation” what kind of means? This should be briefly clarified for non-specialist audience This is set out in detail in the body text, of which the lead (per MOS:LEAD) is only meant to be a summary: going into much detail here would break WP:DUEWEIGHT, as the criticism of Beulé's methods is a comparatively minor part of the material in secondary sources on the gate. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2023 (UTC) Responding to all points here. If you'd like to leave entablature as is, that's fine with me! I still believe "aggressive means by which Beulé had carried out the excavation" sounds somewhat vague; perhaps "dangerous and potentially destructive"? You might know an alternative better suited for this context. Ppt91talk 16:31, 23 June 2023 (UTC) On further thought, I agree it can be expanded a little: I've added a short sentence to clarify that we're particularly talking about his use of dynamite. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 17:01, 23 June 2023 (UTC) Description Might consider linking staircase to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stairs#Stairs_in_art_and_architecture WP:OVERLINK would advise against that, as it's a common word. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2023 (UTC) There are several instances of specialized vocabulary in the second half of this section and I wonder if there is a way to be more descriptive; again, I am thinking about non-specialist audience in this case Yes: we've got the problem here that these are specialised words which exist for a reason, namely that there isn't much of a good way of describing what they refer to in everyday English. Open to suggestions, but I think any solution which explains them all fully would end up being rather ridiculously bloated. Looking at one of our few building FAs (Biblioteca Marciana), that also has an "Architecture" section which makes fairly unapologetic use of technical terms, which are (as here) wikilinked to provide an easy means of looking them up. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2023 (UTC) Fine with me! Ppt91talk 19:30, 23 June 2023 (UTC) Could we use an additional adjective for Doric order to immediately distinguish it from the other two canonical column orders? For instance, “non-ornamental” or something similar I think that (or any similar short description) would be an oversimplification: it's simply a different visual idiom to the Ionic and (later) Corinthian. It's not just about columns: the fact that the frieze is made up of metopes and triglyphs rather than a continuous band is itself, for instance, part of the Doric Order. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2023 (UTC) Inscription I’d like to see more on Choregic Monument of Nicias, including date ranges which are mentioned in the lead as well as relevant historical context; the transition here seems a bit abrupt and the reader would benefit from a more detailed historical account The date of construction (which is relevant here) is (now) mentioned; the date of demolition is more controversial and is discussed under the Beulé Gate's construction, to which it's most relevant. In terms of context, is there something particular you had in mind that would be relevant to this monument, rather than the 'original' Choragic one?? UndercoverClassicist (talk) 20:43, 22 June 2023 (UTC) Further to this, I've added a little bit as to what the original monument looked like: it's helpful to be clear that it wasn't a gate, I think. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 17:02, 23 June 2023 (UTC) More to come soon. Ppt91talk 19:33, 23 June 2023 (UTC) Date Great job summarizing all of the scholarship here. I wonder, is it possible to mention current scholarly consensus at the outset? Infobox mentions 3rd to 4th c. I recognize it might be challenging, but I was thinking of a sentence along the lines of "Contemporary scholars generally agree that the gate was originally constructed in..." If not something you're comfortable with or you think it's an oversimplification, no pressure to add. I'm not sure there really is much of one, unfortunately, beyond Graindor's conclusion that it's late Roman: the issue really turns on whether you link the Marcellinus inscription to the gate. To give a scholarly consensus, we'd need a secondary source saying what that consensus was (not simply a preponderance of sources taking one side), and I haven't seen that yet. I think the issue is still a bit too live. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 09:09, 24 June 2023 (UTC) I think you should briefly identify when and where the archaeologists mentioned here lived and worked, "nineteenth-century French..." and so on They all have a brief introduction; the main reason I haven't introduced Beulé more fully is that he gets more biography around the excavation (which is when it really helps the reader to know what he's doing in Athens and who his supporters are), but he does get "the gate's discoverer". I think "The gate's discoverer, the French archaeologist..." would be inelegant and a little excessive at this point: it's only necessary at this point to introduce what he's doing in this story. Generally speaking, it's good for clarity if these introductions keep to around three words or so. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 09:09, 24 June 2023 (UTC) An inscription found on a stone later reused in the Ottoman fortifications of the Acropolis preserves an inscription commemorating Flavius Septimius Marcellinus for having constructed "the gateway to the Acropolis, from his own resources." This sentence is a bit clunky and I think a repetition might have sneaked in. Also, period should be outside of the quotation mark (as much as that irks and confuses me on daily basis), i.e. from his own resources". It goes inside the quotation when the quotation is itself a complete sentence, which is the case here, or outside if it's not: see MOS:LQUOTE for a fuller explanation. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 20:26, 23 June 2023 (UTC) Where is the full sentence? I am only seeing "the gateway to the Acropolis, from his own resources" while the rest is paraphrased. To use an example from MOS: Miller wanted, he said, "to create something timeless". vs. Miller said: "I wanted to create something timeless." Ppt91talk 20:42, 23 June 2023 (UTC) You're quite right; the quotation isn't quite what I thought it was - changed. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 20:47, 23 June 2023 (UTC) Glad we figured it out. Again, I am not a fan of this policy, so sorry if that seemed pesky. Ppt91talk 20:53, 23 June 2023 (UTC) might say a few more words about Panhellenic games? Done: it turns out that it's a little more complicated than I thought, so I've put the key info in body text and added a footnote for the minutiae. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 08:26, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Ppt91talk 20:03, 23 June 2023 (UTC) Images Acropole - L'occupation française à Athènes (16-27 juin 1917) - Athènes - Médiathèque de l'architecture et du patrimoine - APOR104697.jpg does not mention that it is in the public domain; it includes Licence Ouverte 1.0, but I am a bit unclear on the original source (Médiathèque de l'architecture et du patrimoine) because it was uploaded by a private user and not through an official GLAM collaboration with the institution; might be a good idea to include public domain tags It's a French government project: everything on that site is licensed under CC 3.0. As such, anyone can upload it anywhere: it doesn't have to be put here by the institution. The Commons page previously gave the licence as 4.0; I've now corrected it to 3.0. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:40, 24 June 2023 (UTC) all other images look fine repetition in The existence of a lower route to the Propylaia had become clear during the operations to clear and repair the monuments of the Acropolis following the end of the Greek War of Independence in 1829. I'm not seeing the repetition, I'm afraid? UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:40, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Meant in "clear" being used twice, albeit for different reasons. Can we substitute the verb "clear" for another one? Ppt91talk 21:43, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Aha: yes, changed to evident. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:49, 24 June 2023 (UTC) the next sentence sounds a bit clunky; I am also not sure using past perfect and past simple together works so well in this case; maybe In 1846, the French architect and archaeologist Auguste Titeux [fr] began working on revealing the staircase leading up to it from the Beulé Gate, even though archaeologists did not generally acknowledge the existence of a second gateway.; feel free to suggest your own alternative to clarify the original sentence Agreed on the tenses; I've made an edit. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:40, 24 June 2023 (UTC) modern structures are these discussed earlier? I recall medieval, but am having trouble remembering which ones where the modern structures I suppose you could count the Ottoman bastion at the Temple of Athena Nike, but otherwise they haven't, as our account more-or-less stopped in the medieval period. People carried on building on the Acropolis, but not really on the gate. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:40, 24 June 2023 (UTC) what are your thoughts on mentioning that it was Plutarch who claimed Mnesikles was the architect of the Propylaia? Also, is it redundant to mention Mnesikles was an Athenian architect? Again, I am intentionally asking what might seem like simplistic questions imagining myself as an uninformed reader (which is not to say I am a specialist, either, and the seminar I took on classical Greek and Roman art and architecture, while fascinating, was possibly the most challenging one in all of my grad school coursework...) That would seem like adding unnecessary doubt: Plutarch might be the original source, but the name of Mnesikles is pretty universally attached to the monument. He's already introduced as "the architect of the Propylaia": I think "the Athenian architect of the Propylaia" would be clunky and potentially ambiguous (does it imply the existence of a non-Athenian architect of the Propylaia?). UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:40, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Got it! Ppt91talk 21:44, 24 June 2023 (UTC) I think "approval" might sound better than "blessing" unless Pittakis did not have actual authority here? The question of authority is... complicated... in this period. Pittakis probably had more authority than anyone else, but it's a running theme of Greek archaeology into the 20th century that nobody's really sure exactly who has the final say on what can be done, or whose permission needs to be sought before doing something radical. To me, "approval" implies something a bit more formal and bureaucratic than we can reconstruct from the sources, and Pittakis was certainly never one for bureaucracy. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:40, 24 June 2023 (UTC) that nobody's really sure exactly who has the final say on what can be done, or whose permission needs to be sought before doing something radical is this something worth mentioning in the article? Sounds like an interesting aspect of the whole process. Ppt91talk 21:45, 24 June 2023 (UTC) I'd struggle to find it phrased so starkly in a source, unfortunately. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:48, 24 June 2023 (UTC) No worries and certainly not required for GA! Ppt91talk 21:53, 24 June 2023 (UTC) looks like "fortified wall" is only used once so it might be a good idea to link it to "Defensive wall" I'm not sure this is quite what that article is about: it seems to specifically focus on walls around cities or settlements, whereas this was a wall within one. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:40, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Fair! Ppt91talk 21:45, 24 June 2023 (UTC) should the name be mentioned for "Greek Minister for War"? I'm not totally sure who it was, unfortunately! The name isn't mentioned in the source, and the composition of the Greek government in this period is often a bit murky. UndercoverClassicist (talk) can we use a direct quote for of wanting to blow up everything on the Acropolis? Unfortunately not, and it's only attributed in the source to "a newspaper": given that the source is in French and finding Greek newspapers from this period is a tricky business, I wouldn't be confident of tracking down the original. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:40, 24 June 2023 (UTC) should be of archaeology". Quite right; corrected. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:40, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Spot checks next and then I'll think we'll close to being done! :) Ppt91talk 21:06, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Spot checks no issues with Copyright according to Earwig; I have no reason to doubt the accuracy and reliability of used sources based on the consistently high quality of the nominator's work, but I don't have access to scholarly publications used in the article and I'd like to see support for the following in order to satisfy GAR guidelines footnote 15 An inscription found on a stone later reused in the Ottoman fortifications of the Acropolis preserves an inscription commemorating Flavius Septimius Marcellinus for having constructed "the gateway to the Acropolis from his own resources". footnote 29 Hurwit has called the construction of the gate a "turning point" in the Acropolis's history, suggesting that it represented a renewed emphasis on the Acropolis's role as a strategic fortification rather than as a religious sanctuary — making the site now "a fortress with temples". footnote 46 The discovery of the gate prompted scholarly celebration in France, and was reported with enthusiasm in the French press. The French writer and philhellene Jean Baelan has written that his work turned Beulé into "the standard-bearer for national honour in the field of archaeology." Beulé était devenu le porte-drapeau de l'honneur national dans le domaine de l'archéologie UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:52, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Ppt91talk 21:26, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Construction link suggestions: spring, siege, in situ Done for in situ, as it has a specialist meaning in archaeology. I think the others are too everyday - or, put another way, too undifferentiated from the words we're not going to link in the article - to justify a link; the costs outweigh the benefits to me. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 18:07, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Great! Ppt91talk 21:17, 24 June 2023 (UTC) if possible to say more about the geisa, that I think would be quite helpful Do you mean to explain what they are? I think this is an example where the technical term is so specific that explaining it isn't worth the clunkiness: I think it's clear enough in context that we're talking about parts of the building, but glossing as "the parts of the entablature that project out on the top of the frieze" would be about the best I can do, and I think that would simply be explaining the obscure with the obscure. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 08:48, 2 July 2023 (UTC) more political context would also be helpful for Frankish rulers Just added a bit on the Duchy and its rulers: the actual chain of ownership is pretty complicated (it basically goes back and forth between various western European aristocrats, kings and mercenary companies), but I don't think it's particularly important here. any specific reason as to why the nationalities of Tasos Tanoulas and Jeffrey M. Hurwit are excluded? I've put them in; there's no compelling reason to include them either, but it's a bit odd to establish a pattern for introductions and then break it. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 18:07, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Last section coming soon. Ppt91talk 16:49, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Excavation could we add a few more words of explanation to the French School of Athens; looking at the non-referenced article, I see it being one of the seventeen foreign archaeological institutes in the city and the oldest foreign institute in Athens; is that correct? Done. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 10:45, 2 July 2023 (UTC) when did the king and queen visit? After the discovery, but the source isn't specific. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:40, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Got it. Was his rise to fame, so to speak, also bolstered by their visit? Could we say "Following the discovery, the site ..., and Beulé's excavation helped secure his scholarly reputation."? Ppt91talk 21:48, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Not from the source we have, unfortunately. I'll have a look around and see if any other sources explicitly make the connection, and edit that in if so. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 06:40, 2 July 2023 (UTC) overall, I wonder if there is more to be said about the political relationship between France and Greece at that time? It seems that the alliance with the Great Powers might be worth mentioning given the extent of French coverage and scholarly celebration you describe here; curious to hear your thoughts on this I think the bit added on the French school probably now covers this, as it also foreshadows how the French were keen to get a 'win' over the British. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 10:45, 2 July 2023 (UTC) Normally, the idea of doing these spot-checks is to ask for a direct quotation of material summarised or paraphrased: the direct quotations are already there, so I'm not sure what you're asking for with the later two of these. I've put in the French original for Baelan, if that's helpful? UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:52, 24 June 2023 (UTC) @UndercoverClassicist Of course, I was clearly rushing. I had these in a separate document to collect all possible issues with ". (i.e. quotations and periods edits) throughout the article and erroneously copy-pasted them here without double checking. Below are the ones I wanted to ask about. (I will count the French quote from above as one, so only including two more.) footnote 3 According to the Greek archaeologist Tasos Tanoulas, part of the strategic rationale behind the gate's construction was to safeguard the approach leading to the klepsydra, a spring on the Acropolis which provided it with a safe supply of water in case of siege. "Tanoulas sees the fortification of the Klepsydra spring as a key reason to take such concern for the western approach to the Acropolis". UndercoverClassicist (talk) 11:03, 2 July 2023 (UTC) footnote 26 The American archaeologist and philologist Walter Miller suggested in 1893 that the gate may have been built to replace an older, now-lost gateway, which he hypothesised would have been less strongly fortified. Ppt91talk 22:08, 24 June 2023 (UTC) "Beulé's gate is, therefore, a later and probably stronger substitute for a gate that had been there before". UndercoverClassicist (talk) 11:03, 2 July 2023 (UTC) @UndercoverClassicist I think that is it on my end. I'll put the review on hold just to give you time, but happy finalize the process as soon as you're ready. Once I have responses to the last few sections, your reply to the image question, and the selected spot checks, we should be done! Ppt91talk 21:30, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Thanks - I'll be away from tomorrow, I'm afraid, for most of next week. I should be able to get back to it next weekend, if you're happy to forbear for that long. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 21:41, 24 June 2023 (UTC) @UndercoverClassicist Totally happy to wait, but it seems like you've already responded to a lot of my most recent comments, so if you have the energy and time for what remains, I see no issues with finishing up as soon as today. Ppt91talk 21:51, 24 June 2023 (UTC)

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