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== Salaskan == |
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[[user:Salaskan|Salaskan]] has been repeatedly moving this page to "Hiroshima and Nagasaki genocide". I've protected the page for now. |
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<br/>[[User:Wwoods|—wwoods]] 18:17, 4 June 2007 (UTC) |
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:It's definitely a POV page-move, but it probably would have been best to ask an uninvolved admin to protect the page. In any case, I don't think there's any problem in this particular situation. <font face="georgia"><span style="background:#E0FFFF;color:#007FFF">[[User:Nishkid64|Nishkid64]] ([[User talk:Nishkid64|talk]])</span></font> 18:19, 4 June 2007 (UTC) |
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::Well, I proposed discussing it here repeatedly [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:Atomic_bombings_of_Hiroshima_and_Nagasaki&diff=135832871&oldid=135829658][http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:Atomic_bombings_of_Hiroshima_and_Nagasaki&diff=135837585&oldid=135835389][http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Salaskan&diff=135838825&oldid=135838382], but Wwoods wouldn't accept any resolution. Anyway, let's debate. |
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The page should remain under "Atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki"; Rational [[WP:NC]] "Generally, article naming should prefer what the majority of English speakers would most easily recognize, with a reasonable minimum of ambiguity, while at the same time making linking to those articles easy and second nature." --[[User:Philip Baird Shearer|Philip Baird Shearer]] 20:22, 10 June 2007 (UTC) |
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Let's start the discussion here then. I personally think that we could ''at least'' call this "Massacre of Hiroshima and Nagasaki" (as it wasn't really meant to kill one specific race ([[genocide]]), but it ''was'' a [[massacre]]). The entry on "massacre" says "individual events of deliberate and direct mass killing" (can't be denied, it was clearly no accident, haha), "especially of noncombatant civilians or those without any reasonable means of defense" (that was definitely the case), "these would often qualify as war crimes or atrocities" (is POV, but outside of the US the bombings were considered to be a war crime). Yes, it may be "POV", but so are [[Armenian Genocide]] and [[Holocaust]]. <b>[[User:Salaskan|<span style="color:red">Sala</span>]][[User talk:Salaskan|<span style="color:gold">Skan</span>]]</b> 19:23, 5 June 2007 (UTC) |
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== New reference work for Atomic Bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki == |
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: Do you propose to rename all the articles in {{tl|WWII city bombing}}, or just this one? On what basis would you distinguish them? I don't understand your point about the Armenian Genocide, unless you're saying it should be "Armenian genocide". |
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:[[User:Wwoods|—wwoods]] 15:47, 6 June 2007 (UTC) |
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::Well, these bombings happened within seconds and were nuclear, whilst the others were not (and both sides did regular bombing). And the article title "Armenian genocide" is POV, as not everyone agrees on whether it was a genocide or not (e.g. the Turkish government disagrees), so if a POV (despite it being widely accepted) in the title is strictly prohibited, that title should change too. <b>[[User:Salaskan|<span style="color:red">Sala</span>]][[User talk:Salaskan|<span style="color:gold">Skan</span>]]</b> 10:26, 7 June 2007 (UTC) |
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:::::Have you any idea how fast the RAF and the USAAF could bomber groups syncornise there bombing runs by 1945? For example during the bombing of Dreaden, in the first wave, 243 Lancasters from [[No. 5 Group RAF]] delivered their [[:image:Lancaster I NG128 Dropping Load - Duisburg - Oct 14 - 1944.jpg|bomb loads]] on target within two minutes each one fanning out from a [[Ostragehege|pre-determined point]] in a syncronised fan shaped pattern. --[[User:Philip Baird Shearer|Philip Baird Shearer]] 12:37, 17 June 2007 (UTC) |
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:::Hmm, since the countries were at war, they were not non-combatant civilians, but combatant civilians. Second, since there was air defenses around the cities in question, they were not without a reasonable means of defense, or as stated earlier in these discussions "undefended". Finally, your direct rejection of the validity of any US POV shows that you are not being neutral. These were atomic bombings, and that is a neutral statement. To call it a massacre inserts a POV. So, in my opinion, the title should not change. [[User:CodeCarpenter|CodeCarpenter]] 21:05, 7 June 2007 (UTC) |
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::::Combatant civilians... Interesting. --[[User:Merat|Merat]] 03:25, 12 June 2007 (UTC) |
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::::Calling it a massacre is factually accurate, regardless of whether or not it was justified. I agree that at the same time it could constitute POV, but equally so does dictating that it cannot be allowed to change. Wwoods is right, it is a question of convention, but equally, convention should be applied regardless of the instigator. In other words, the Turkish view of the Armenian genocide should be given an equal weighting to the American one of the Hiroshima bombing. Both were despicable acts, regardless of whether or not they were done for "good" or "necessary" reasons. But to classify the acts as being of different degrees of severity for political reasons is POV. |
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The best and most authoritative book on this subject has long been Robert Jay Lifton and Greg Mitchell's 1995 classic, "Hiroshima in America: 50 Years of Denial." I am surprised that this work is not listed in the bibliography, nor in Lifton's Wiki entry. |
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::::The internationally accepted naming of the Hiroshima incident is the Hiroshima bomb (and to a lesser extent it's similar for Nagasaki). Therefore, wikipedia naming conventions dictate that the title of the article shouldn't change. However, reference to a massacre probably should be made in the opening paragraph for the reasons I've stated. [[User:BeL1EveR|BeL1EveR]] 20:03, 11 June 2007 (UTC) |
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Good article though. |
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:::::I would also like to add a no vote to the 'massacre' title. Besides being pov we'd also have to add it to just about every large bombing campaign in WW2. Why these two are singled out and called war crimes is beyond me as they were not nearly as bad as much of the conventional bombing carried out by both sides during the war. [[User:Gtadoc|Gtadoc]] 21:56, 26 June 2007 (UTC) |
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Cliff Meneken [[Special:Contributions/2601:1C0:8300:2E11:F598:C309:287B:5331|2601:1C0:8300:2E11:F598:C309:287B:5331]] ([[User talk:2601:1C0:8300:2E11:F598:C309:287B:5331|talk]]) 04:58, 6 December 2023 (UTC) |
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==Prevailing international opinion?== |
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== information about the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki == |
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This statement in the OP is incredibly badly sourced and stands as simple POV without reliable sources: |
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Easy and short information about the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki [[Special:Contributions/185.80.143.114|185.80.143.114]] ([[User talk:185.80.143.114|talk]]) 16:02, 25 January 2024 (UTC) |
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Although it remains a very controversial issue, the prevalent international opinion seems to be that the bombings were war crimes indeed.<ref name="bbc">{{cite web |url=http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/europe/4456043.stm |title=War crimes - have we learned anything? |accessdaymonth=[[10 June]] |accessyear=[[2007]] |authorlink=John Simpson |date=[[20 April]] [[2005]] |publisher=[[BBC News]] |quote= You can't seem to turn the television news on at present without seeing black-and-white pictures of past horrors (...) and Hiroshima and Nagasaki still to come in August.}}</ref><ref name="workers">{{cite web |url=http://www.workers.org/2005/world/hiroshima-0811/ |title=Truman was a war criminal |accessdaymonth=[[10 June]] |accessyear=[[2007]] |authorlink=John Catalinotto |date=[[5 August]] [[2005]] |publisher=[[Workers World]] |quote= They were both war crimes, of course. And they were both based on a Big Lie.}}</ref><ref name="fff">{{cite web |url=http://www.fff.org/freedom/0995g.asp |title= The War Crimes of Hiroshima and Nagasaki |accessdaymonth=[[10 June]] |accessyear=[[2007]] |authorlink=Jacob G. Hornberger |date=[[September 1995]] |publisher=[[Future of Freedom Foundation]] |quote= Actually, the bombings constituted war crimes for which the perpetrators should have been tried and sufficiently punished.}}</ref><ref name="antiwar">{{cite web |url=http://www.antiwar.com/justin/j080801.html |title= Hiroshima Mon Amour - Why Americans are barbarians |accessdaymonth=[[10 June]] |accessyear=[[2007]] |authorlink=Justin Raimondo |date=[[8 August]] [[2001]] |publisher=[[Antiwar.com]] |quote= Justice in wartime is the justice of the victors. This is why the war crimes of the Allies were not allowed to be introduced into evidence at the Nuremberg trials, or the trials of the Japanese leaders.}}</ref> |
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== Soldiers killed in Hiroshima - reference? == |
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As it is, none of the sources provide an international opinion at all. The edit was made on the tenth as "reliable sources", but you couldn't get much worse. One at a time: |
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The United States Strategic Bombing Survey estimated that only 6,789 soldiers, out of 24,158 in Hiroshima, were killed or missing because of the bombing. In the infobox and the article body it claims that in Hiroshima there was an upper figure of 20,000 soldiers killed. The cited source in the article body was Wellerstein 2020, but I cannot find that upper figure of 20,000 in the linked article - perhaps someone else can find it, else the figure needs to be removed. [[Special:Contributions/182.239.146.143|182.239.146.143]] ([[User talk:182.239.146.143|talk]]) 05:37, 4 March 2024 (UTC) |
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* The first source links to a BBC article talking about war crimes in general. There is only one passing reference to Hiroshima in the introduction, but it is not even discussed at all, let alone described as a war crime. |
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* The second source is an opinion piece. Furthermore, it is so clearly biased and lacking in any kind of reference that it fails as a reliable Wikipedia source. It also only discusses the author's opinion and the opinions of two other '''Americans''' and does not support the argument that the '''international''' opinion agrees with them. |
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* The third source has the same problem as the second source and is also written by an American in the context of one American's perspective. |
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* The fourth link has the same problem as the last two - terribly biased, only discussed his own opinion, and he's an American. |
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== Semi-protected edit request on 22 March 2024 == |
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So I'm striking the sentences discussing the prevailing opinions from the introduction of the article until sources that can actually address the content of the sentence can be added. I'm also taking out an earlier sentence suggesting that the prevailing Japanese opinion is against the bombing because the sole source provided is only a book and not a passage from the book to support that the book actually said it. The same is true of a sentence discussing the American reaction. Furthermore, since this article already has a very lengthy section discussing the reaction to the bombings that *does* source reliable sources that discuss both American and international opinion, there's no reason to be so redundant. |
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I only wrote so much because I predict a silly revert war taking place and I wanted this ready when it begins. [[User:Rebochan|Rebochan]] 20:58, 14 June 2007 (UTC) |
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Change "60,000 and 80,000 people in Nagasaki" to "60,000 to 80,000 people in Nagasaki" [[User:Saiashishdas|Saiashishdas]] ([[User talk:Saiashishdas|talk]]) 14:58, 22 March 2024 (UTC) |
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:I provided four American sources stating that the bombings were war crimes. Give me four Japanese sources stating that the bombings were justified, and we'll delete it. <b>[[User:Salaskan|<span style="color:red">Sala</span>]][[User talk:Salaskan|<span style="color:gold">Skan</span>]]</b> 17:20, 15 June 2007 (UTC) |
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:They were four sources that did not invoke any kind of international standard, and one of them didn't even talk about Hiroshima at all. Also, all four sources were editorials, which are by their nature not impartial sources. I have a very hard time believing there hasn't been an official opinion poll somewhere that actually consults people outside of America on this issue. Furthermore, going into debate in the introduction is not very constructive considering there is a whole section later in the article dealing with it and that section uses impartial sources and quotes. |
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:{{done}} Changed as suggested. [[User:Hawkeye7|<span style="color:#800082">Hawkeye7</span>]] [[User_talk:Hawkeye7|<span style="font-size:80%">(discuss)</span>]] 18:43, 22 March 2024 (UTC) |
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I hate to say it, but I question your motive for editing the article based on your past history of edits. Please try to look at this as not a place to promote your personal opinions and as a place to impartially document a historical event of grave consequence. |
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== Add link to Daniel A. McGovern == |
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Finally, I took the Japanese and American sentences out again because you still haven't proven that either of them are documenting a '''consensus''' of opinion. There are sources later in the article that do this in the proper section.[[User:Rebochan|Rebochan]] 17:38, 15 June 2007 (UTC) |
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:Thanks for properly motivating your revert. All I have to say about the Japanese/American sentences is that I did not add or edit them, so I have no idea whether they are appropriate in the lead sentence. <b>[[User:Salaskan|<span style="color:red">Sala</span>]][[User talk:Salaskan|<span style="color:gold">Skan</span>]]</b> 20:00, 21 June 2007 (UTC) |
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Correct the error. |
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"A member of the U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey, Lieutenant Daniel McGovern, used a film crew to document the effects of the bombings in early 1946." |
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== Aftermath of the bombings== |
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I have heard that there are 5 known photographs to appear from the day of the bombing. Does anyone have a link to a website for that, or, better yet, post some of them here? |
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<small>—The preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment was added by [[User:67.181.226.186|67.181.226.186]] ([[User talk:67.181.226.186|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/67.181.226.186|contribs]]) 17:15, 24 June 2007 (UTC{{{3|}}})</small> |
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Beginning in September 1945, just a week after the [[surrender of Japan]], [[Lieutenant colonel (United States)|Lieutenant colonel]] [[Daniel A. McGovern]], a member of the [[U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey]], led a film crew to document the effects of the bombings.<ref name="BBC">{{cite news|url=https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-northern-ireland-68656372|title=Oppenheimer: Monaghan man who captured nuclear devastation|website=BBC News|date=31 March 2024}}</ref> [[Special:Contributions/147.147.221.228|147.147.221.228]] ([[User talk:147.147.221.228|talk]]) 14:18, 31 March 2024 (UTC) |
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==Radiation== |
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: {{done}} No error: he was a lieutenant at the time and not promoted to lieutenant colonel until after the war. Added link to new article. [[User:Hawkeye7|<span style="color:#800082">Hawkeye7</span>]] [[User_talk:Hawkeye7|<span style="font-size:80%">(discuss)</span>]] 18:03, 31 March 2024 (UTC) |
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I removed a comment in the intro about a large number of people dying from radiation. This is actually a common misconception. The latest BEIR report places the total combined number of deaths from radiation as ~260 acute deaths from leukemia and about 600 later deaths from solid tumors above the normal background for the population. The actual explosion is what the argument should be about, as comparitively the radiation effects were rather small. [[User:Gtadoc|Gtadoc]] 22:06, 26 June 2007 (UTC) |
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::Done? You haven't done anything! The sentence is still inaccurate: "used a film crew to document the effects of the bombings in early 1946." He might have used a film crew in 1946 but he arrived just one week after the surrender of Japan = 9 Sept 1945. He is credited with being the first person from the Allied side to document the aftermath of bombings. Mcgovern made copies of the films he made because he was worried that the US Government would censor them. Oppenheimer watched them. They did lose the originals, his copies were revealed in 1967. Likewise, the term U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey is not even linked to its own article [[U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey]]. There is zero interest on this site to give people (ie the reader) information. It's always about which team controls the article narrative. [[Special:Contributions/147.147.221.228|147.147.221.228]] ([[User talk:147.147.221.228|talk]]) 12:24, 1 April 2024 (UTC) |
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:::The U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey ''is'' linked. [[User:Hawkeye7|<span style="color:#800082">Hawkeye7</span>]] [[User_talk:Hawkeye7|<span style="font-size:80%">(discuss)</span>]] 17:42, 1 April 2024 (UTC) |
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== Commanders == |
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What exactly is the problem with having commanders in the infobox? What's the point even discussing this? [[User:MylowattsIAm|MylowattsIAm]] ([[User talk:MylowattsIAm|talk]]) 17:10, 28 May 2024 (UTC) |
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:It's a stable infobox compromise that reduces the military (glorification) side of what many people see as (in part) a massacre of civilians. [[User:EddieHugh|EddieHugh]] ([[User talk:EddieHugh|talk]]) 10:14, 8 June 2024 (UTC) |
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::It doesn't, in any way, glorify The event by listing who commanded the operation. This argument is nonsense. And "stable infobox" doesn't mean it's perfect, flawless and cannot ever be changed or improved. [[User:MylowattsIAm|MylowattsIAm]] ([[User talk:MylowattsIAm|talk]]) 15:58, 8 June 2024 (UTC) |
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:::It's disappointing that you've reverted to your additions on this page yet again (four times now). I ask you (again) to undo the additions and seek a talk page consensus. Disagreeing with an established consensus and opposition to your proposed changes doesn't mean you should make those changes unilaterally yet again. [[User:EddieHugh|EddieHugh]] ([[User talk:EddieHugh|talk]]) 15:52, 15 June 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Seeking a talk page consensus is ridiculous when everyone ignores the discussion. There is nothing wrong with listing who commanded the operation. These are just people who commanded it and that is all. It is always better to name the commanders anyway as it only adds to the article and saying it glorifies the event is even more ridiculous. Might as well remove the names of those who perpetrated other actual and deliberate crimes against people from the infoboxes of the articles about those events because by this logic, that also glorifies those events. This event is not any more special than those. [[Special:Contributions/86.50.70.58|86.50.70.58]] ([[User talk:86.50.70.58|talk]]) 11:48, 12 November 2024 (UTC) |
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== Semi-protected edit request on 24 July 2024 == |
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== McArthur Statement == |
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The article claims Douglas McArthur was against the bombing of Japan. Can someone please supply me a reference for the sake of an argument I had? |
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In paragraph 3 of the introduction, please change "On 6 August a Little Boy was dropped on Hiroshima. Three days later a Fat Man was was dropped on Nagasaki." to "On 6 August Little Boy was dropped on Hiroshima. Three days later Fat Man was dropped on Nagasaki." [[User:ColdPear5289|ColdPear5289]] ([[User talk:ColdPear5289|talk]]) 06:45, 24 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:[[File:Red information icon with gradient background.svg|20px|link=|alt=]] '''Not done:'''<!-- Template:ESp --> Little Boy and Fat Man were ''types'' of bombs, not names of individual bombs. This is discussed in the second paragraph. [[User:Jamedeus|Jamedeus]] ([[User talk:Jamedeus|talk]]) 07:08, 24 July 2024 (UTC) |
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== Inconsistency in numbers of dead == |
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: [[Stanley Weintraub|Weintraub, Stanley]] (1995). ''The Last, Great Victory: The End of World War II''. p. 436 |
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:: [August 6, 1945] '... [[Theodore White]] ... interviewing General MacArthur in Manila, ... listened to the general, ... blame the Bomb as likely to end the days of heroic warfare. "Scholars and scientists" had stolen future wars from military professionals and made "men like me" obselete. There would be "no more wars" of the kind he knew, MacArthur mourned.' |
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:[[User:Wwoods|—wwoods]] 06:41, 28 June 2007 (UTC) |
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There appears to be some inconsistency regarding the numbers of dead in this article. |
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==Japanese Defense Chief: Atomic Bombing 'Couldn't Be Helped'== |
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The lead states that an estimated 90,000 to 146,000 people died in Hiroshima and that 60,000 to 80,000 died in Nagasaki by the end of 1945, while the "Post-attack casualties" section says that it was up to 140,000 in Hiroshima. What is the source of this difference of 6,000? |
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'''Defense Minister Fumio Kyuma said the dropping of atomic bombs on Japan by the United States during World War II was an inevitable way to end the war, a news report said Saturday, June 30, 2007.''' |
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Also, the infobox uses an end-of-1945 figure for Nagasaki (which corresponds to the info in the Nagasaki "Events on the ground" section), but uses an unqualified figure (presumably immediate deaths?) for Hiroshima. Those figures of 70,000 and 126,000 don't appear to be sourced anywhere in the article. The Hiroshima "Events on the ground" section doesn't use the source which states 90,000 to 140,000 by year's end, and contradicts itself by using a different source which appears to incorrectly state that the immediate deaths were 80,000 to 140,000. |
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Kyuma, who is from Nagasaki, said the bombing caused great suffering in the city, but he does not resent the U.S. because it prevented the Soviet Union from entering the war with Japan, Kyodo said. |
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This also effects the headline figure of 129,000 to 226,000. The first is presumably from 70,000 + 90,000 (should be 130,000?) and the second presumably from 126,000 + 20,000 soldiers + 80,000. — [[User:Goszei|Goszei]] ([[User_talk:Goszei|talk]]) 23:09, 1 August 2024 (UTC) |
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:A [https://thebulletin.org/2020/08/counting-the-dead-at-hiroshima-and-nagasaki/ 2020 article from the Bulletin of Atomic Scientists] appears to be a solid historiographical account of the varying casualty figures and their sources. It identifies a "low cluster" which is best represented by the 1951 Joint Commission Report, led by U.S. occupation forces: about 70,000 deaths within 3 months in Hiroshima, and 40,000 in the same period in Nagasaki, for a total of 110,000 dead. The article also identifies a "high cluster" best represented by a Japanese-led 1977 symposium which estimated 140,000 deaths in Hiroshima by the end of 1945, and 70,000 deaths in Nagasaki, for a total of 210,000 dead. As the article states, the latter figures are likely superior because they considered three categories of non-residents who were omitted from the American studies: military victims, conscripted Korean workers, and commuting workers. |
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==Questions on POV== |
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:Right now we mainly rely on [https://web.archive.org/web/20070919143939/http://www.rerf.or.jp/general/qa_e/qa1.html this source] from the Radiation Effects Research Foundation (RERF), which has evidently been updated [https://www.rerf.or.jp/en/faq/ here] with a somewhat higher top figure for Hiroshima. This is 90,000–166,000 deaths in Hiroshima and 60,000–80,000 deaths in Nagasaki, for a total range of 150,000–246,000. According to the Bulletin article, the RERF is the organization which has continuity with the Joint Commission, and it appears to have incorporated the 1970s re-evaluations into what it reports on its website today. Although it isn't directly cited, the RERF figures appear to be what is used by the [https://ahf.nuclearmuseum.org/ahf/history/bombings-hiroshima-and-nagasaki-1945/ Atomic Heritage Foundation] in their main page on the bombings. I think the RERF is the best-available source and should be used throughout our article, from lead to infobox to body. — [[User:Goszei|Goszei]] ([[User_talk:Goszei|talk]]) 16:22, 2 August 2024 (UTC) |
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:I think some of the confusion here is stemming from the military dead in Hiroshima. The body says that the 1946 U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey estimated there were 24,000 soldiers in Hiroshima, of which 7,000 died, then cites the 2020 Bulletin source, which mentions that the 1970s re-evaluations added perhaps 10,000 deaths to account for military deaths, which were omitted from most American studies. We then appear to add 7,000 and 10,000 to get ~20,000 military deaths, which I think is an error; the mortality rate isn't this high for any group in estimates. I think both the Bombing Survey and 1970s re-evaluations must be talking about the same 7,000 to 10,000 deaths, not additional ones. — [[User:Goszei|Goszei]] ([[User_talk:Goszei|talk]]) 16:35, 2 August 2024 (UTC) |
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:In an attempt to clear all of this up, I have made [[Special:Diff/1234858164/1238208992|these revisions]] which cite the Bulletin and RERF sources throughout the article and add more detail on the different reports and their conclusions. — [[User:Goszei|Goszei]] ([[User_talk:Goszei|talk]]) 17:37, 2 August 2024 (UTC) |
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== No mention of the black rain == |
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I'm not against mentioning that this may be considered a war crime if it were done today (although if we were in war to the scale of WWII qualifications might change). I'm also not against mentioning that civilians were massacred (although one could argue this on semantics, because in massacres the point generally is the killing of civilians because of a conflict with the civilian population, while in other cases they're casualties of total war, same as other city bombings), I'm also not against mentioning that as an incident of war, the most human beings died in that incident than in any other in history. But the statement "To this date, the United States has been the country to kill the most number of human beings during war in a single day" is silly and out of place because its trying to get political props, as if countries are competing in some Guinness Book of World Records, and it matters to assert a statement in an encyclopedia asserting which country wins the honor for the most deaths in one day. How its worded is completely political, as if whoever wrote it is trying to take attention away from other countries war crimes, by creating a Hall of Shame and putting the US at the top. Mentioning a massacre may or may not be POV, but the way this statement is worded is definitely POV and political. That it was a US action is redundant (and explained in the article), the wording just underscores a political point. |
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I don't really have time to be doing extensive editing right now, but I noticed that this article doesn't seem to mention the radioactive black rain that fell on parts of Hiroshima shortly after the bombing. This rain apparently contributed substantially to the radiation doses that some victims received (e.g. [https://link.springer.com/article/10.1186/s41021-019-0141-8 this article ]). I think this is something that should be mentioned. [[User:TornadoLGS|TornadoLGS]] ([[User talk:TornadoLGS|talk]]) 20:41, 15 October 2024 (UTC) |
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I'm that knowledgeable about what happened in Armenian massacres but if there's an alternative name I would use it for the article, and create a separate article titled Armenian genocide which redirect to the main article which has sections on it as a political issue about genocide. I don't think there needs to be a similar second topic for the Hiroshima and Nagasaki bombings, because the political issue is a lot less moot, people everywhere agree what happened, the only thing left is whether its worded to be POV, and wording should be neutral.<small>—The preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment was added by [[User:68.123.251.35|68.123.251.35]] ([[User talk:68.123.251.35|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/68.123.251.35|contribs]]) 02:24, 2 July 2007 (UTC{{{3|}}})</small> |
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: It may be silly but it's the truth and the truth must be stated in the first paragraph. It's a genuine fact that the United States of Americans killed the most number of human beings in a day and must be put in context. It's not Point Of View. It's a FACT. Unless you can prove me wrong.<small>—The preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment was added by [[User:Icedevil14|Icedevil14]] ([[User talk:Icedevil14|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Icedevil14|contribs]]) 14:59, July 2, 2007 (UTC{{{3|}}})</small> |
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::I agree regarding the record for most deaths in one day. It is neither a record nor a necessary comment. Especially in the opening paragraph. [[User:CodeCarpenter|CodeCarpenter]] 13:42, 2 July 2007 (UTC) |
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::: Also agree to removing the sentence, its not factually accurate as convetional bombings from both sides were often much worse (for an example of an allied one:Dresden). Agree about the political motivation. [[User:Gtadoc|Gtadoc]] 19:16, 2 July 2007 (UTC) |
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::::[[User:Icedevil14]], your objectivity is doubtful, based on your vandalism on the page [[United States]], stating "This is because the country doesn't have a proper name, thus it uses the name of two continents to refer to the people of thier nation.". Your grasp on reality is doubtful, based on your comment on [[Image_talk:Buzz_salutes_the_U.S._Flag.jpg]] "== God == God never wanted that flag to be on the moon. And rightfully, he took it off.". Your grasp of objective knowledge is doubtful, based on your comment on [[Barry Bonds]], "'''Barry Lamar Bonds''' (born [[July 24]] [[1964]] in [[Riverside, California]]) is a [[Major League Baseball]] [[designated hitter]] with the [[San Francisco Giants]]." For the record, The United States of America has a proper name, the American flag is still on the moon, and Barry Bonds plays in the National League, which does not have a designated hitter. Your talk page is littered with vandalism warnings, so I am not the first to notice. See [[User_talk:Icedevil14]] for details. This is an encyclopedia, not a place to trash America for the fun of it.[[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] |
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New reference work for Atomic Bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki
[edit]The best and most authoritative book on this subject has long been Robert Jay Lifton and Greg Mitchell's 1995 classic, "Hiroshima in America: 50 Years of Denial." I am surprised that this work is not listed in the bibliography, nor in Lifton's Wiki entry.
Good article though.
Cliff Meneken 2601:1C0:8300:2E11:F598:C309:287B:5331 (talk) 04:58, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
information about the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki
[edit]Easy and short information about the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki 185.80.143.114 (talk) 16:02, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
Soldiers killed in Hiroshima - reference?
[edit]The United States Strategic Bombing Survey estimated that only 6,789 soldiers, out of 24,158 in Hiroshima, were killed or missing because of the bombing. In the infobox and the article body it claims that in Hiroshima there was an upper figure of 20,000 soldiers killed. The cited source in the article body was Wellerstein 2020, but I cannot find that upper figure of 20,000 in the linked article - perhaps someone else can find it, else the figure needs to be removed. 182.239.146.143 (talk) 05:37, 4 March 2024 (UTC)
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Change "60,000 and 80,000 people in Nagasaki" to "60,000 to 80,000 people in Nagasaki" Saiashishdas (talk) 14:58, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
- Done Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 18:43, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Add link to Daniel A. McGovern
[edit]Correct the error.
"A member of the U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey, Lieutenant Daniel McGovern, used a film crew to document the effects of the bombings in early 1946."
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Beginning in September 1945, just a week after the surrender of Japan, Lieutenant colonel Daniel A. McGovern, a member of the U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey, led a film crew to document the effects of the bombings.[1] 147.147.221.228 (talk) 14:18, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- Done No error: he was a lieutenant at the time and not promoted to lieutenant colonel until after the war. Added link to new article. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 18:03, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- Done? You haven't done anything! The sentence is still inaccurate: "used a film crew to document the effects of the bombings in early 1946." He might have used a film crew in 1946 but he arrived just one week after the surrender of Japan = 9 Sept 1945. He is credited with being the first person from the Allied side to document the aftermath of bombings. Mcgovern made copies of the films he made because he was worried that the US Government would censor them. Oppenheimer watched them. They did lose the originals, his copies were revealed in 1967. Likewise, the term U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey is not even linked to its own article U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey. There is zero interest on this site to give people (ie the reader) information. It's always about which team controls the article narrative. 147.147.221.228 (talk) 12:24, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
- The U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey is linked. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 17:42, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
- Done? You haven't done anything! The sentence is still inaccurate: "used a film crew to document the effects of the bombings in early 1946." He might have used a film crew in 1946 but he arrived just one week after the surrender of Japan = 9 Sept 1945. He is credited with being the first person from the Allied side to document the aftermath of bombings. Mcgovern made copies of the films he made because he was worried that the US Government would censor them. Oppenheimer watched them. They did lose the originals, his copies were revealed in 1967. Likewise, the term U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey is not even linked to its own article U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey. There is zero interest on this site to give people (ie the reader) information. It's always about which team controls the article narrative. 147.147.221.228 (talk) 12:24, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ "Oppenheimer: Monaghan man who captured nuclear devastation". BBC News. 31 March 2024.
Commanders
[edit]What exactly is the problem with having commanders in the infobox? What's the point even discussing this? MylowattsIAm (talk) 17:10, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- It's a stable infobox compromise that reduces the military (glorification) side of what many people see as (in part) a massacre of civilians. EddieHugh (talk) 10:14, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn't, in any way, glorify The event by listing who commanded the operation. This argument is nonsense. And "stable infobox" doesn't mean it's perfect, flawless and cannot ever be changed or improved. MylowattsIAm (talk) 15:58, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- It's disappointing that you've reverted to your additions on this page yet again (four times now). I ask you (again) to undo the additions and seek a talk page consensus. Disagreeing with an established consensus and opposition to your proposed changes doesn't mean you should make those changes unilaterally yet again. EddieHugh (talk) 15:52, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- Seeking a talk page consensus is ridiculous when everyone ignores the discussion. There is nothing wrong with listing who commanded the operation. These are just people who commanded it and that is all. It is always better to name the commanders anyway as it only adds to the article and saying it glorifies the event is even more ridiculous. Might as well remove the names of those who perpetrated other actual and deliberate crimes against people from the infoboxes of the articles about those events because by this logic, that also glorifies those events. This event is not any more special than those. 86.50.70.58 (talk) 11:48, 12 November 2024 (UTC)
- It's disappointing that you've reverted to your additions on this page yet again (four times now). I ask you (again) to undo the additions and seek a talk page consensus. Disagreeing with an established consensus and opposition to your proposed changes doesn't mean you should make those changes unilaterally yet again. EddieHugh (talk) 15:52, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn't, in any way, glorify The event by listing who commanded the operation. This argument is nonsense. And "stable infobox" doesn't mean it's perfect, flawless and cannot ever be changed or improved. MylowattsIAm (talk) 15:58, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
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In paragraph 3 of the introduction, please change "On 6 August a Little Boy was dropped on Hiroshima. Three days later a Fat Man was was dropped on Nagasaki." to "On 6 August Little Boy was dropped on Hiroshima. Three days later Fat Man was dropped on Nagasaki." ColdPear5289 (talk) 06:45, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
- Not done: Little Boy and Fat Man were types of bombs, not names of individual bombs. This is discussed in the second paragraph. Jamedeus (talk) 07:08, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
Inconsistency in numbers of dead
[edit]There appears to be some inconsistency regarding the numbers of dead in this article.
The lead states that an estimated 90,000 to 146,000 people died in Hiroshima and that 60,000 to 80,000 died in Nagasaki by the end of 1945, while the "Post-attack casualties" section says that it was up to 140,000 in Hiroshima. What is the source of this difference of 6,000?
Also, the infobox uses an end-of-1945 figure for Nagasaki (which corresponds to the info in the Nagasaki "Events on the ground" section), but uses an unqualified figure (presumably immediate deaths?) for Hiroshima. Those figures of 70,000 and 126,000 don't appear to be sourced anywhere in the article. The Hiroshima "Events on the ground" section doesn't use the source which states 90,000 to 140,000 by year's end, and contradicts itself by using a different source which appears to incorrectly state that the immediate deaths were 80,000 to 140,000.
This also effects the headline figure of 129,000 to 226,000. The first is presumably from 70,000 + 90,000 (should be 130,000?) and the second presumably from 126,000 + 20,000 soldiers + 80,000. — Goszei (talk) 23:09, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
- A 2020 article from the Bulletin of Atomic Scientists appears to be a solid historiographical account of the varying casualty figures and their sources. It identifies a "low cluster" which is best represented by the 1951 Joint Commission Report, led by U.S. occupation forces: about 70,000 deaths within 3 months in Hiroshima, and 40,000 in the same period in Nagasaki, for a total of 110,000 dead. The article also identifies a "high cluster" best represented by a Japanese-led 1977 symposium which estimated 140,000 deaths in Hiroshima by the end of 1945, and 70,000 deaths in Nagasaki, for a total of 210,000 dead. As the article states, the latter figures are likely superior because they considered three categories of non-residents who were omitted from the American studies: military victims, conscripted Korean workers, and commuting workers.
- Right now we mainly rely on this source from the Radiation Effects Research Foundation (RERF), which has evidently been updated here with a somewhat higher top figure for Hiroshima. This is 90,000–166,000 deaths in Hiroshima and 60,000–80,000 deaths in Nagasaki, for a total range of 150,000–246,000. According to the Bulletin article, the RERF is the organization which has continuity with the Joint Commission, and it appears to have incorporated the 1970s re-evaluations into what it reports on its website today. Although it isn't directly cited, the RERF figures appear to be what is used by the Atomic Heritage Foundation in their main page on the bombings. I think the RERF is the best-available source and should be used throughout our article, from lead to infobox to body. — Goszei (talk) 16:22, 2 August 2024 (UTC)
- I think some of the confusion here is stemming from the military dead in Hiroshima. The body says that the 1946 U.S. Strategic Bombing Survey estimated there were 24,000 soldiers in Hiroshima, of which 7,000 died, then cites the 2020 Bulletin source, which mentions that the 1970s re-evaluations added perhaps 10,000 deaths to account for military deaths, which were omitted from most American studies. We then appear to add 7,000 and 10,000 to get ~20,000 military deaths, which I think is an error; the mortality rate isn't this high for any group in estimates. I think both the Bombing Survey and 1970s re-evaluations must be talking about the same 7,000 to 10,000 deaths, not additional ones. — Goszei (talk) 16:35, 2 August 2024 (UTC)
- In an attempt to clear all of this up, I have made these revisions which cite the Bulletin and RERF sources throughout the article and add more detail on the different reports and their conclusions. — Goszei (talk) 17:37, 2 August 2024 (UTC)
No mention of the black rain
[edit]I don't really have time to be doing extensive editing right now, but I noticed that this article doesn't seem to mention the radioactive black rain that fell on parts of Hiroshima shortly after the bombing. This rain apparently contributed substantially to the radiation doses that some victims received (e.g. this article ). I think this is something that should be mentioned. TornadoLGS (talk) 20:41, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
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