Talk:Segway: Difference between revisions

Content deleted Content added

Inline

Latest revision as of 19:58, 6 May 2024

This is the talk page for discussing improvements to the Segway article.
This is not a forum for general discussion of the article's subject.

Put new text under old text. Click here to start a new topic.
New to Wikipedia? Welcome! Learn to edit; get help.

Article policies

Find sources: Google (books · news · scholar · free images · WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL

Archives: 1, 2

Technology

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Technology, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of technology on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.TechnologyWikipedia:WikiProject TechnologyTemplate:WikiProject TechnologyTechnology

Disability

Segway is within the scope of WikiProject Disability. For more information, visit the project page, where you can join the project and/or contribute to the discussion.DisabilityWikipedia:WikiProject DisabilityTemplate:WikiProject DisabilityDisability

Environment: Green vehicle

	Environment portal This environment-related article is part of the WikiProject Environment to improve Wikipedia's coverage of the environment. The aim is to write neutral and well-referenced articles on environment-related topics, as well as to ensure that environment articles are properly categorized. Read Wikipedia:Contributing FAQ and leave any messages at the project talk page.EnvironmentWikipedia:WikiProject EnvironmentTemplate:WikiProject EnvironmentEnvironment
???	This article has not yet received a rating on the project's importance scale.
	This article is supported by the Green vehicle task force.

Archives

Archive 1

Archive 2

Balanced Point of View

The external link providing a token amount of balance was removed. It provided some mild criticism and history surrounding Segway's somewhat difficult beginnings, compiled by the Wall Street Journal: Segway's Timeline If there are no objections, or if nobody wishes to create a small section to highlight useful information from the article, I'll add it back to the external links. It would probably be best if a new section to the Segway article was made, as mentioned on this talk page. Thanks. --Dulcimerist (talk) 23:55, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

When looking at the external link you've provided, I noticed that the article mentions the pre-release hype but neglects the disappointing sales and famous Segway-related accidents. I also found the article too technical and slightly biased. While including a "Criticism" section might make the article imbalanced, stating the critical responses of Segway (views of advocates of Segway and opponents to Segway) should make the article more objective. The external link given may be a good start, but more is needed. 183.178.192.88 (talk) 02:55, 26 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your input. I also see that the article I linked to no longer has valid links to its source articles, which were key to it being useful. Would using it as an external link still be useful? I like your suggestion of stating critical responses in the existing sections, rather than creating a specific section for all criticisms. I wouldn't consider the differing views of to be described as advocates and opponents of Segway, but rather as the successes and shortcomings of Segway. It would be good to see a section with sales information over the years, even if it's just the sales figures with no additional comment. This article might be able to borrow some ideas from the Edsel article. --Dulcimerist (talk) 06:46, 28 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Wikicensored, Promotional Article

Nothing about the company's bankruptcy, sale, and the death of the guy who bought it. He ran his Segway off a cliff on his estate. But Wikipedia mentions none of it, because Wikipedia is censored, especially when corporate promotion is involved. 71.227.188.49 (talk) 21:00, 1 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about the vehicle itself, nothing at all to do with the company. If you want to read and learn about the company, see Segway Inc.. Steve Lux, Jr. (talk) 21:59, 1 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Perhaps the death by Segway could be added because it was a notable death? http://www.nbcnews.com/id/39377851/ns/world_news-europe/t/segway-company-owner-rides-scooter-cliff-dies/ and listed on Wikipedia here: Deaths_in_September_2010#26. The articles for car, motorcycle, skateboarding mention "deaths", bicycle only mentions accident and injury not deaths, skateboard, roller skates, inline skates do not mention deaths. Additionally, several of those have Safety sections, so that could be added as well (e.g. https://www.cnn.com/2018/10/30/tech/segway-history/index.html mentions Segway safety). Looks like a judgment call. Tantek (talk) 20:42, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done 7&6=thirteen (☎) 15:35, 3 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Similar to devices

Does anyone know what is the general term for this item that is similar to Segway PT but smaller and lighter and without its pole and its accompanying handle bars? Should that be called self-balancing portable eletric dicycle? If yes, is it possible to have an article about that item in Wikipedia? Here is a picture of it. [1] Luigi.a.cruz (talk) 18:06, 23 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The article is at Self-balancing scooter, but is currently a stub in need of expansion. --LiveRail 16:43, 26 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

External links modified

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just added archive links to 2 external links on Segway PT. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add {{cbignore}} after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add {{nobots|deny=InternetArchiveBot}} to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true to let others know.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers. —^{cyberbot II}_{Talk to my owner:Online} 16:52, 27 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

External links modified

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just added archive links to one external link on Segway PT. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add {{cbignore}} after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add {{nobots|deny=InternetArchiveBot}} to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:

Added archive http://web.archive.org/web/20120301125349/http://www.segway.com.pt/valor.php?noticia=135 to http://www.segway.com.pt/valor.php?noticia=135

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true to let others know.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—^{cyberbot II}_{Talk to my owner:Online} 14:30, 27 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Max speed typo/error fix maybe mistaken

I just found that the max speed conversion template had been messed up; it read "conver20.205. I assume it had said "convert|20.205" before and someone had accidentally deleted two characters, but I'm not positive. I changed it back, assuming that "20.205mph" was correct, but I have no idea if it actually is, or why they felt they had to add the ".205", since the speed really varies a great deal based on passenger weight and battery charge, etc.AnnaGoFast (talk) 21:21, 5 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AnnaGoFast, I fixed the speed issue. Thanks for notifying! Steve Lux, Jr. (talk) 13:18, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

United States Formatting

The formatting in the United States section seems really messed up like someone didn't really know how to do citations but wanted to add a run-down on the history of Segways use in America. Someone might want to clean that up. –Jumper4677 (talk) 22:23, 28 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed. I have done a cleanup pass of the section. It was indeed in a mess. PeterEastern (talk) 20:11, 11 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Copyright problem removed

Prior content in this article duplicated one or more previously published sources. The material was copied from: http://www.genovasegway.it/eng/normativa.html. Copied or closely paraphrased material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.)

For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or published material; such additions will be deleted. Contributors may use copyrighted publications as a source of information, and, if allowed under fair use, may copy sentences and phrases, provided they are included in quotation marks and referenced properly. The material may also be rewritten, providing it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Therefore, such paraphrased portions must provide their source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with these policies. Thank you. /wiae /tlk 00:35, 18 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Trimming back bulk from article

Just to note that I am in the process of trimming back some of the bulk which to my mind risks obscuring the more notable content. Happy to talk about it here is you think I am being too harsh or not harsh enough. PeterEastern (talk) 20:03, 11 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Proposal to reduce scope of 'Use and regulation by country' section

Would it be appropriate to trim out the usage information from this section and limit it to the legality of using the device? If so, then would it also be appropriate to merge most of the content into the regulatory section of the personal transporter article (which is broader class of vehicles into which the Segway PT fits for a regulatory perspective). Thoughts? I will leave 7 days at least before acting on this proposal for any discussion. PeterEastern (talk) 20:08, 11 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Do it. It seems that this section has grown too much within this article anyway. Steve Lux, Jr. (talk) 20:54, 11 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the prompt response. Appreciated. (but will still wait for 7 days+ for other comments) PeterEastern (talk) 21:34, 11 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I have now completed this trim and move into the regulatory section of the personal transporter article . PeterEastern (talk) 07:30, 22 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

External links modified

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 18 external links on Segway PT. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 18:58, 26 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

No mention of Jimi Heselden?

This section was originally titled 'That Peter Eastern guy removed all traces of Jimi Heselden from the article. He probably works for Segway or something.'

It's stupid that there is absolutely no mention of Jimi Heselden or his death on the main Segway page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.7.48.10 (talk) 14:47, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Err... I don't work for Segway and never have and don't know anyone who does or ever has done. Jimi Heselden is still mentioned in the history section of the article Segway Inc. which is about the company but is not mentioned here because he isn't notable in relation to the device itself in my view. (I am removed the potentially libellous heading from this talk section but recorded it within the body. I am happy with that.) PeterEastern (talk) 14:45, 8 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed 7&6=thirteen (☎) 15:37, 3 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 4 January 2019

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the move request was: Moved per consensus below. (non-admin closure) –Ammarpad (talk) 09:02, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Segway PT → Segway – WP:COMMONNAME, WP:TWODABS, WP:PRIMARYTOPIC – As far as I know, practically no one calls it a "Segway PT", and the target name has redirected to this topic for more than four years. —BarrelProof (talk) 06:07, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Well I don't even think we need the DAB page since all the other titles (intitle:Segway) refer to these topics and the manufacturer is mentioned at the top of the PT article anyway. As far as I can see the company's website title (and most other sources, example) appear indeed to call it just "Segway" but do also say "Segway PT" and "Segway Personal Transport". However its difficult to tell if these are referring to the company of transporter. Crouch, Swale (talk) 07:13, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Blatant WP:COMMONNAME Zarcadia (talk) 21:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support obvious common name. Randy Kryn (talk) 21:42, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support per nom. --В²C ☎ 21:21, 8 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
WP:PRIMARYREDIRECT working well here. But if we're making the title ambiguous and removing PT, then we'll need a hatnote for Segway Inc. In ictu oculi (talk) 08:44, 9 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- PRIMARYREDIRECT is not working well here. Redirecting the COMMONNAME to an obscure title almost nobody uses is not "working". Just in case there is any question, the device dominates the company in page views [2] --В²C ☎ 18:04, 9 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.

Attribution

Text and references copied from Segway and Jimi Heselden to Segway and Segway, Inc., See former article's history for a list of contributors. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 15:09, 3 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Entered the UTV market?

Which is… what? 2001:8003:303D:BC00:7587:77B5:9E94:8990 (talk) 09:21, 1 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]