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== Horrible Article == |
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This is perhaps the most biased article I've ever read on Wikipedia. It reads like a sophomoric term paper arguing against clean coal. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/75.187.62.86|75.187.62.86]] ([[User talk:75.187.62.86|talk]]) 20:52, 12 October 2008 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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This page is extremely weak on the very topics that it should cover. The topics it ''does'' cover already have their own pages ([[Clean coal]], [[Environmental effects of coal]], [[Carbon capture and sequestration]], etc etc etc). Where is there a ''technical'' discussion about CCS? Oxy-fired coal combustion technology? Gasification technology, as it pertains to making coal cleaner? Underground coal thermal treatment? Chemical looping combustion with coal? None of these are mentioned, or are mentioned only in passing, and yet these are the topics that should make up the majority of the article's content - ''technologies used to mitigate negative environmental impacts of coal'' (i.e. to make coal "cleaner", whatever that means - and if you want to debate what that means, do it at the [[Clean coal]] page). Clean coal doesn't just mean putting a scrubber on your flue stack - there's a lot more to it, none of which is covered by the article. --[[User:Charlesreid1|Charlesreid1]] ([[User talk:Charlesreid1|talk]]) 05:05, 13 October 2010 (UTC) |
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:Is the article horribly biased or does the article reflect the fact that there is little to no supporting evidence for clean coal? It is funny that the article is constantly being visited and criticized by [[clean coal]] [[fanboy|fanboys]] yet none of them produce any citations or evidence when asked. There are plenty of editors who regularly visit this article and attempt to keep it as neutral as possible. If the article has ample sourced and cited criticisms of the concept of clean coal, and no one is able to produce sourced and cited information of a supportive nature, that would indicate that the article is not biased, but that it reflects the current knowledge of the subject. So I will put the onus on you considering that you think the article is unbalanced. Find more credible sources that support clean coal so that as a team we can all edit this article and make it more accurate and reflect the current understanding of the topic. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 22:48, 17 October 2008 (UTC) |
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=== Suggest Adding Sections: === |
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::After having reviewed all of the posts on this particular article, I must admonish CrimsonSage and other contrarians for their attempts to present an opposing view. You might as well tell a Muslim the Mohammed did not leap into heaven on his horse from a rock in Jerusalem or tell a Christian that Jesus did not rise from his tomb. The entire AGW argument has become a religion to those who believe, and can never be disputed by mere facts. Unfortunately, that religious body has overflowed over into a technical article on coal that is full of opinion, but bereft of fact. |
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1. Pre-combustion Technologies |
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The IPCC has, in its existence, been wrong in every projection of global warming they have made, normally by an order of magnitude. Worse, the only public discussions concerning IPCC findings are based on the politically biased management summary, which in itself is not supported by the underlying technical findings of the IPCC. |
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1a. Pre-combustion coal treatment |
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The invective being leveled at those who are attempting to modify the article into a reasonably unbiased presentation of facts is a reflection of the zealotry of those who wish to shove the AGW theory down everyones throats, at an enormous and unprecedented cost to the industrialized economies. [[User:FarNiente|FarNiente]] ([[User talk:FarNiente|talk]]) 00:08, 6 December 2008 (UTC) |
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1b. Coal combustion additives |
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You're trolling, and trolling against the interests of your entire species. It's a shameful display. |
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== "clean" or not? just semantics == |
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2. Combustion retrofit/alternative(s) technologies |
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"clean coal" is just an expression, and whether or not you or anyone else considers it appropriate, has absolutely no impact on anything, other than your emotions. it refers to things that are more than a name, and i suggest it would be better to debate those, rather than trying to pin a label on it, be it 'clean coal', 'a complete fantasy', or whatever. |
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2a. Oxy-fired coal combustion |
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it seems plain enough that coal 'can never be clean' if by that you mean that it cant be used to produce electricity without any also producting pollutants. on the other hand, i am lead to believe that the most important goal currently is to reduce greenhouse gas emission. apparently, economics aside, 'clean coal' has the potential to extract most (all?) of the CO2 from the smokestack (so to speak), potentially allowing it to be buried indefinitely. while that may not be easy or cheap to achieve, and obviously something that cannot go on forever (not enough holes), it never the less could allow a major reduction in greenhouse gas emission while other more permanant solutions are developed. whether you are comfortable calling that 'clean', or not, is of no consequence. if that is what can be done, it is significant. so if it really bothers you, then think of some other expression and popularise it. |
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2b. Coal gasification (including IGCC, supercritical gasification, plasma gasification, and other subjects related to gasification) |
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as for the expression being an invention of the coal industry, i note that, in australia at least, the Labor Party, including the very green Peter Garrett, seems comfortable using the expression, and has touted it one possible means by which Australia could achieve the Labor Party's stated goal of 60% reduction emissions, below 2000 levels, by 2050. |
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2c. Circulating fluidized bed combustion |
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the larger context is this: you can generate power from either coal, or nuclear, power stations. a tiny contribution can be made from solar collectors, geothermal, wind etc. you are stuck with those two generator types for the foreseeable future whether you like it or not. anything that can be done to reduce the unwarranted by products of them is worth investigating and maybe pursuing, depending as ever on the balance of costs & benefits. |
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2d. Chemical looping combustion |
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[[User:Alexanderstollznow|Alexanderstollznow]] 16:39, 1 June 2007 (UTC) |
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2e. In-situ utilization of coal (underground coal gasification and thermal treatment) |
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* A point of note - there are other sources of power widely used in the world such as hydro-electricity, which provides most of the power to the 3 million+ residents of my province. Also, your note makes no mention of conservation or efficiency. My $0.02, [[User:Hu Gadarn|Hu Gadarn]] 20:00, 10 August 2007 (UTC) |
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I think the majority of the general public and engineering community appreciate that the word "clean" is subjective. As such it is an acceptable description of technologies that profess to generate electrical power from coal in a less polluting manner. If you read the articles it is possible to compare how much "cleaner" power generation can be when using these technologies.--[[User:Chris Dockree|Chris Dockree]] 15:49, 26 June 2007 (UTC) |
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3. Post combustion Technologies |
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The entire article should be edited to remove the word "clean" which is incredibly misleading. The US Supreme Court has ruled that all credible evidence confirms that carbon dioxide is in fact a pollutant. In this case "clean" is misleading and the entire article should be changed to reflect that the coal has been "scrubbed" of extremely toxic substances, but is still a major source of pollution. Beyond that, the entire article reeks of coal and energy industry propaganda and needs a re-write. -- [[User:nitack|nitack]] 17:50, 10 August 2007 (EST) |
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3a. Carbon dioxide capture and sequestration (CCS) |
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:Surely you're joking! The article darn sure needs a rewrite as it is one of the worst hatchet jobs I've seen, very strongly biased against the topic! |
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:As to whether coal usage can someday be made "clean", by current standards for that term the answer is definitely Yes. The pollutants, including carbon dioxide, are all planned for capture and sequestration - you have a "clean" house, don't you, yet the garbage truck picks up from your place once a week. They aren't claiming "Green coal" or zero-waste coal, instead what they're claiming is quite reasonable. |
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:Let me see what I can do with this monstrosity of an article. [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] 00:45, 11 August 2007 (UTC) |
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3b. Mercury capture |
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::Alright, now you've got an article Wikipedia might actually not be ashamed to show people. [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] 01:09, 11 August 2007 (UTC) |
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:::I've reverted the wholesale changes, as they are too far sweeping. Please address them one at a time, or else someone may simply revert you again. You make some good points, and I believe you will achieve consensus on those, so let's walk through this. --[[User:Skyemoor|Skyemoor]] 18:30, 11 August 2007 (UTC) |
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3c. Other Pollutants (SOx, NOx; should include discussion of how these are also affected by pre-combustion technologies and combustion alternatives or retrofit technologies being used) |
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::::Ok, we'll work on this by steps. [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] 18:37, 11 August 2007 (UTC) |
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:::::Sorry Simesa, but there is no such thing as "clean" coal. Your bias is pretty evident, but misinformed. The pollutants that are scrubbed are still present, just in a different form. As for carbon capture, there is no viable method for carbon capture and no method ensures it is actually sequestered. It is not "clean". All <u>credible</U> scientific evidence supports that assertion. There have been a number of studies in favor of coal, however these have been almost entirely financed by energy companies on a "favorable results for pay" basis. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]]15:55, 14 August 2007 (EST) |
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::::::One cannot only claim credible to be that which supports ones own view -- that's not how science works. This article is a smear against clean coal, plain and simple. Even a person biased against clean coal would see that. Let's make it worthy instead of silly.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 15:51, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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The article is also dominated by a POV generated from the United States as though thats' the final word on the debate. Such myopia is wrong."Clean" coal is a international debate. I also note the massive bias in the edits playing up to the coal mining industry. This article cannot be taken seriously. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/122.104.148.20|122.104.148.20]] ([[User talk:122.104.148.20|talk]]) 14:52, 9 May 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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'''NOTE''': The focus of these sections would not be an overview or explanation of the topic, e.g., what chemical looping is, but rather it would emphasize the particular techniques used for chemical looping ''in the context of clean coal technology'', and explain what the technology contributes to the concept of mitigating the negative environmental effects of coal. |
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:"Clean Coal" and "Clean Coal Technology" are commonly enough used expressions to warrant usage by Wikipedia. This shouldn't be a topic for dispute. The term came up during the US presidential race, and was raised (and advocated) by every major candidate of all political parties. However, I just heard on the news that this entire term is a hoax being promoted by special interests - in order to reverse the decrease of coal production which was instituted many decades ago due to the extreme amount of pollution and other environmental problems that coal generates when it is used. Has anyone else come across a citation or recent new item that references the hoax? Thanks in advance. [[User:Victorcoutin|VictorC]] ([[User talk:Victorcoutin|talk]]) 18:58, 17 November 2008 (UTC) |
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Please suggest any additions/merges/removal. |
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== The burning of coal, a fossil fuel, is one of the principal causes of anthropogenic climate change and global warming == |
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--[[User:Charlesreid1|Charlesreid1]] ([[User talk:Charlesreid1|talk]]) 18:17, 13 October 2010 (UTC) |
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This sentence is missing a "believed to be." Man Made Climate Change is still a theory, and is still under (highly politicised) discussion. Wikipedia should be free from bias. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/212.23.24.246|212.23.24.246]] ([[User talk:212.23.24.246|talk]]) 13:17, 15 November 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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== What is a "token amount"?? == |
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Everything is a theory until proven wrong, including evolution, the laws of physics, etc. The evidence overwhelmingly says that climate change, if not completely due to man, is largely contributed to by human activity. I think by stating that it is "one of the principal causes" we do justice to the doubt some people have. Nitack <small>comment added by ([[User Nitack|Nitack]]) 21:21, 7 December 2007 (UTC)</small> |
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From the opening paragraph: |
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:That's right, it is a theory so it should read, "The burning of coal, a fossil fuel, is one of the principle causes of the theory of anthropogenic climate change." Putting global warming at the end is redundant.[[Special:Contributions/98.165.6.225|98.165.6.225]] ([[User talk:98.165.6.225|talk]]) 17:27, 20 May 2008 (UTC) |
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"The expenditure has been unsuccessful to date in that there is not a single commercial scale coal fired power station in the US that captures and stores more than token amounts of CO2.[12]" |
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Politics as Usual on Wiki: |
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This is a very weak article. For starters there should be a reference to the DOE site that has a discussion of the Clean Coal Technology efforts currently underway. http://www.fossil.energy.gov/programs/powersystems/cleancoal/ |
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What is a "token amount"? The reference is for a political (and clearly biased) group, which shouldn't be considered legitimate. |
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* I'm curious as to your definition of the word "politics". Do you mean "beliefs" or "thoughts"? Not clear from your terse sentence. PS - what is DOE? Some of us likely don't live in the country you do and may not be familiar with your local or national acronyms. Thanks, [[User:Hu Gadarn|Hu Gadarn]] ([[User talk:Hu Gadarn|talk]]) 16:09, 21 May 2008 (UTC) |
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[[User:Charlesreid1|Charlesreid1]] ([[User talk:Charlesreid1|talk]]) 04:46, 13 October 2010 (UTC) |
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"Token amount" seems like a weasel word. A more appropriate term would be "nominal amount" indicating that there is indeed some recapture of carbon, but not a meaningful amount. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE|2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE]] ([[User talk:2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE#top|talk]]) 07:46, 22 August 2020 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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It seems that politics has raised its ugly head to obscure the potential for this technology and the progress being made to date. |
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== Horrible Article == |
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Just think what the world could be like if China, India and other countries not covered by the Kyoto Accords were to implement clean coal technologies? |
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This is perhaps the most biased article I've ever read on Wikipedia. It reads like a sophomoric term paper arguing against clean coal. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/75.187.62.86|75.187.62.86]] ([[User talk:75.187.62.86|talk]]) 20:52, 12 October 2008 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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Those condemning this effort appear to have political motives. It is a shame, these folks are like the flat earth people. Mysticdon <small>comment added by ([[User Mysticdon|Mysticdon]]) 19:37, 5 January, 2008 (UTC)</small> |
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:Is the article horribly biased or does the article reflect the fact that there is little to no supporting evidence for clean coal? It is funny that the article is constantly being visited and criticized by [[clean coal]] [[fanboy|fanboys]] yet none of them produce any citations or evidence when asked. There are plenty of editors who regularly visit this article and attempt to keep it as neutral as possible. If the article has ample sourced and cited criticisms of the concept of clean coal, and no one is able to produce sourced and cited information of a supportive nature, that would indicate that the article is not biased, but that it reflects the current knowledge of the subject. So I will put the onus on you considering that you think the article is unbalanced. Find more credible sources that support clean coal so that as a team we can all edit this article and make it more accurate and reflect the current understanding of the topic. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 22:48, 17 October 2008 (UTC) |
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:Those that promote the junk theory of global warming have political motives, international socialism to be exact.[[Special:Contributions/98.165.6.225|98.165.6.225]] ([[User talk:98.165.6.225|talk]]) 17:27, 20 May 2008 (UTC) |
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::After having reviewed all of the posts on this particular article, I must admonish CrimsonSage and other contrarians for their attempts to present an opposing view. You might as well tell a Muslim the Mohammed did not leap into heaven on his horse from a rock in Jerusalem or tell a Christian that Jesus did not rise from his tomb. The entire AGW argument has become a religion to those who believe, and can never be disputed by mere facts. Unfortunately, that religious body has overflowed over into a technical article on coal that is full of opinion, but bereft of fact. |
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This entire article is a terrible example of how the integrity of Wikipedia is undermined. Negative POV, and abusive edits.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 15:53, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::Why would you admonish someone for having and expressing an opposing point of view? Are you saying this is a technical article? Because it isn't (please visit [[Wikipedia:Featured articles#Engineering and technology]] for examples of technical articles). Also, if you're going to admonish someone you should probably sign your comments. [[User:Charlesreid1|Charlesreid1]] ([[User talk:Charlesreid1|talk]]) 05:13, 13 October 2010 (UTC) |
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==Introduction line wording== |
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The IPCC has, in its existence, been wrong in every projection of global warming they have made, normally by an order of magnitude. Worse, the only public discussions concerning IPCC findings are based on the politically biased management summary, which in itself is not supported by the underlying technical findings of the IPCC. |
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The line "This time frame is of concern to environmentalist because of their belief that there is an urgent need to mitigate greenhouse gas emissions and climate change to protect the world economy, according to the Stern report" appears in the introduction. It seems to be suggesting that the only reason all environmentalists care about reducing carbon emissions in a certain time frame is to protect the world economy. It should be clarified to either bring in the full range of concerns or, since that probably isn't possible, be changed to specify the group of environmentalists who think this way. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/74.85.73.117|74.85.73.117]] ([[User talk:74.85.73.117|talk]]) 06:08, 3 March 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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The invective being leveled at those who are attempting to modify the article into a reasonably unbiased presentation of facts is a reflection of the zealotry of those who wish to shove the AGW theory down everyones throats, at an enormous and unprecedented cost to the industrialized economies. [[User:FarNiente|FarNiente]] ([[User talk:FarNiente|talk]]) 00:08, 6 December 2008 (UTC) |
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This article is interesting ... not once does it mention how critical energy is to worldwide growth, and how abundant coal is as a very effective source of that energy. It is more an article about environmentalists than it is about "clean coal" which - as mentioned by others and as listed in the article - is a manalgam of different things (gasification, sequestration, etc), but which does pose just as much of an opportunity as wind, solar, etc. Right now coal is one of our major sources of energy (something like 20%), and the US has coal reserves that rival those of China. The problem facing clean coal then is a different problem than renewables. Clean coal is an attempt to take an existing, abundant fuel source and make it sustainable, where other renewables are trying to take an insignificant but sustainable fuel source and make it significant. This page on clean coal was about the least impressive/informative wiki article I've ever seen. ([[Special:Contributions/76.173.74.126|76.173.74.126]] ([[User talk:76.173.74.126|talk]]) 17:55, 5 May 2008 (UTC)) |
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: Except for the fact that nobody bases their opinion re climate change on IPCC predictions. You don't even need to look at statistics. It's patently obvious to anyone who goes outdoors regularly, and has been alive for more than a couple decades, that temperatures and weather events are becoming more extreme, not marginally but substantially,and the year over year change is very significant. Like I said, anyone who lives in this planet and pays attention to the weather, on any continent, has noticed. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE|2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE]] ([[User talk:2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE#top|talk]]) 08:06, 22 August 2020 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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You're trolling, and trolling against the interests of your entire species. It's a shameful display. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/65.60.200.186|65.60.200.186]] ([[User talk:65.60.200.186|talk]]) 14:17, 6 December 2008 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:::I'm sorry, but was that a factual rebuttal, a snappy repartee, a spirited rejoinder, or and ad hominem attack? As I previously stated, attacking the orthodoxy of a religion is a futile and pointless effort. All we can do, as technologists, is point out the errors often inherent in religious orthodoxies. |
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:::I don't mind you believing in AGW, I just don't want you to destroy the world in an effort to force others to accept your religion. Al Queda is doing a fine job of that all by themselves.[[User:FarNiente|FarNiente]] ([[User talk:FarNiente|talk]]) 22:43, 7 December 2008 (UTC) |
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:I suspect a reason that this article is considered POV on both sides, as well as being generally of poor quality, is that it is based on a term that is both an umbrella term and a public relations term. If there is any good content it should be shifted to various pages (e.g. Carbon Capture and Storage, Combined Cycle etc.), and this page should be replaced with a disambiguation page. It is bizarre to see 'support' and 'criticism' for a phrase that is so vague and has many different meanings. Most of this article is meaningless, and hardly counts as encyclopedic content. [[User:Woood|Woood]] ([[User talk:Woood|talk]]) 11:07, 24 December 2008 (UTC) |
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::First of all, coal is a "supposed" fossil fuel. The very concept that such fuels are "fossil" based is just a weak theory which has been losing ground each and every year among scientists. This article is no where near balanced! In your opinion it is a flawed concept; put it in the critisism section -- it does not belong in a neutral POV article.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 15:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::Can you show some reliable sources for that claim? If not, it is your opinion or [[wp:NOR|Original research]] and has no place in Wikipedia. If you can show some sort of academic or reputable source then we can certainly edit the article to reflect the changes in human understanding of coal. Until then, coal remains a fossil fuel ;-).[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 20:46, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::There are plenty of reliable sources which have made the case for both abiotic oil (which is rapidly gaining acceptance)and (more recently) abiotic coal. The theories of abiotic coal stem from certain processes of abiotic oil formation along with evidence of anomalies in the way carbon itself exists in the various coals. But, that's a secondary issue here and I don't want to make that a distraction; before we go there we have plenty more to do just to get the article anywhere near a neutral POV. Note, btw, that you are doing the exact thing that 'has no place in Wikipedia' -- you are adding your biased POV to the article.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 21:06, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::::Still waiting on citations here. You can claim that coal is not a fossil fuel all you want and make statement about abiotic this and abiotic that, but unless you are actually going to cite reputable sources it will not substantiate any changes to the article.[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 12:36, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::::First and foremost, I didn't make any claims of the sort. It would work in your favor to actually read what I've written, rather than just ignore it and think you know everything. As I noted above, the theory of abiotic oil/coal is a secondary issue here and I don't want to make it a distraction; before we go there we have PLENTY more to do just to get the article anywhere near a neutral POV. However, if you are personally interested in learning about it I can provide you some sources.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 15:49, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::::::Your the one that kept adding "supposed" in front of "fossil fuel" and then claimed that it is not a fossil fuel when called on it. Your exact words were "we should not exclude the fact that coal is only assumed to be a fossil fuel." You say "assumed", and by adding "supposed" before fossil fuel, seems to indicate that you are trying to cast doubt on the fact that coal is a fossil fuel. I'm repeatedly asking you to provide sources for what you want to change so that we can restore your good faith edits (perhaps rephrased so that there are no "words to avoid") but you seem quite hesitant to produce supporting evidence. Should the editors who contribute to this article just take your word for it?[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 19:35, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::::::I didn't make the claim that coal isn't a fossil fuel. I said that coal is only assumed to be a fossil fuel, which is much different than claiming that it isn't. As I've mentioned repeatedly, let's get the rest of this article fixed first and then we can address this further.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 23:25, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:: I concur to a point here. I agree with your point re: the public relations term by and large - I'm not sure that it needs to be specifically in the opening paragraph, but it does need to be given appropriate weight. I'm not sure that the phrase is really that vague in terms of common parlance - it describes, essentially, a broad spectrum of technologies that are being developed and utilised to reduce discharged toxins produced in coal-fired electricity plants. The term is vague because it is broad and, whether we like it or not, it is the term that is most commonly used in public discussions about potential future coal plants. |
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==Garbage article== |
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::I also agree that the article is in a pretty appalling state at the moment and in need of a major rewrite (which I am hoping to contribute to), but I think deletion is a bit defeatist. I think we should bear in mind that a lot of people will potentially use this article as a first port of call if they want to find out more about what somebody on TV has been referring to as 'clean coal'. |
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This article is a disgrace to wikipedia. It is the most POV, badly written, piece of garbage in the entire wiki catalogue. It needs to be re written from the ground up. [[User:I Wake Up Screaming|I Wake Up Screaming]] ([[User talk:I Wake Up Screaming|talk]]) 04:54, 4 June 2008 (UTC) |
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::My two pence on the public relations term (as someone who works in public relations, although not for coal companies...), is that although NPOV's link details a zinger of a 'clean coal' PR campaign it still doesn't really show that 'clean coal' is a PR term per se, rather than just an emotionally charged term that is also used in PR campaigns. A such it still has a whiff of POV to me. That said, these concerns do need to be clearly addressed and the bits I wrote about them are currently rather buried in the third para. While I wouldn't decribe my initial rewrite as perfect by any stretch, the subsequent edits seem to be a little heavy-handed (if broadly well intentioned). [[User:SupernautRemix|SupernautRemix]] ([[User talk:SupernautRemix|talk]]) 17:03, 5 January 2009 (UTC) |
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Wake Up Screaming, you are entitled to your opinions, however you need to use the talk page before making the PoV changes that you have in this article. Removing quotations from notable individuals, specifically about this topic, because you do not agree, is not appropriate. please use the talk page prior to editing the article to fit your PoV. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 06:05, 8 June 2008 (UTC) |
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:::Good word, Woood. The descriptive "Clean" is too subjective...like Clean and Dirty, Good and Bad. Some peoples' Dirty is Good, while some peoples' Clean is Bad. In that train, "Clean Coal" is an accurate description of the best practice in cleaning up the waste stream of coal, but it does not address the CO2 issue. From my point of view, which is that AGW is not proven or even indicated, the CO2 issue is a non-starter. <small><span class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:FarNiente|FarNiente]] ([[User talk:FarNiente|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/FarNiente|contribs]]) 02:43, 3 January 2009 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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I agree that this is a poorly done article. This is a hot topic issue, and it seems whoever wrote this is very anti-coal and anti-clean coal. I was very surprised when I saw a "Criticisms" section, because the entire article was a critique. How do you call Bias into question so that people know on the main page? |
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[[User:Rocetmal|Rocetmal]] ([[User talk:Rocetmal|talk]]) 19:30, 6 August 2008 (UTC) |
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::::FarNiente - I see your points here (although I don't personally agree with your views on AGW). However... as a lot of the criticism of 'clean coal' refers to CO2 emissions, which have been identified as a major sticking point (correctly in my view or incorrectly in your view) due to alleged global warming/climate change issues the point of view needs to be detailed, no? It is still a major issue no matter how people might feel about it's accuracy. Perhaps the CO2 issues should be detailed in a seperate section from other pollutant issues? Maybe separating it out into something like 'conventional pollutants' and 'carbon emissions'? [[User:SupernautRemix|SupernautRemix]] ([[User talk:SupernautRemix|talk]]) 17:03, 5 January 2009 (UTC) |
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:Unfortunately "clean coal" is a '''garbage concept'''. The article presents both sides of the issue with out being an industry fluff piece. To obfuscate the glaring shortcomings in the concept would only serve to make this a propaganda page for the coal and power industries. Find credible and '''objective''' sources that support the viability of the concept and we can work on re-writing the article as a community. For now you only have industry insiders who have re-branded the same dirty old coal with the word "clean" in front of it. Until they actually show it can be done it is just a marketing ploy that some have chosen to buy into hook, line and sinker. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 18:10, 8 August 2008 (UTC) |
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::::Regardless of points of view on global warming, the purpose of clean coal technologies is to address these environmental concerns (be they real or imaginary). The article ends up using clean coal technology as a soapbox on which to discuss issues that aren't directly relevant. I think the focus of the article needs to change substantially, and include more information about actual technologies. Anything else belongs on the [[Clean coal]] page. [[User:Charlesreid1|Charlesreid1]] ([[User talk:Charlesreid1|talk]]) 05:37, 13 October 2010 (UTC) |
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This article needs an almost complete rewrite. It violates nearly every Wikipedia policy with regards to POV. Certainly, it is one of the most biased articles in all of Wikipedia. An editor cannot hold a page hostage and revisions must be taken in good faith by the wikipedia policy. Undoing revisions is a violation of Wikipedia terms.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 15:43, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:Rampant adding of weasel wording in order to cast doubt because you don't agree with the people is in violation of the Wikipedia terms. [[WP:WEASEL]] [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 17:43, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::You do not 'own' the article. As others have told you, Wikipedia supports a neutral POV. This article does not meet that, in fact, the whole article is a 'weasel article.' We can easily be explicit, and then you will lose all POV, as any negative statement will need to be moved to a critisism section.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 23:08, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::: That's because clean coal is widely ridiculed as a facetious concept... It's hard to write on the topic from an informed position and not come out sounding one sided -- because there is effectively only the opposition side that's raising sound arguments. If you think this is off work, go read an article supporting clean coal and see what a blatant plug it is. In fact I don't think any such articles easiest that aren't paid promotional articles or industry websites. But if you are on a crusade to defend lost causes, why not go disparage the Flat Earth article or something? I gotta assume that you or an immediate family member works in the petrochemical or extraction industries, otherwise I can't fathom why you would jump in on the side of "clean coal". And that's coming from someone who's pro fracking lmao <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE|2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE]] ([[User talk:2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE#top|talk]]) 07:52, 22 August 2020 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:::I just read the article again, and as it is now it's pretty decent. Leans slightly toward the environmentalist side, but not really significantly. Again, if you strongly disagree, the next step is [[WP:RfC]] (although we now seem to have a fair number of editors working on this). [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] ([[User talk:Simesa|talk]]) 12:28, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::With all due respect Simesa (and I do appreciate your civil tone as compared to some on here), I really don't think it 'leans slightly,' I think it is greatly, greatly biased. It should be a neutral POV, but all the current editors, including yourself, cannot see that neutral POV becuase they are too used to seeing 'this' very biased view. With that said, I don't think it reflects an 'environmentalist' view; I am an environmentalist and it certainly does not reflect my views - in fact, it's embarrasing. It may reflect a radical, delusional, extreme activist viewpoint like the people who torch SUVs and such. But, that kind of POV just makes for a garbage article. This article makes conjecture and assumptions that are anything but fact, and I think you have been listening to all this for so long that it's sucked you in as well. Anthropogenic global warming has no credible evidence, as yet - it is put forth here as fact, and there are no arguments in this article to the contrary -- that is the very definition of POV. Anthopogenic global warming has now become a religion; something that is based on faith and bad faith at that. Since when do we posture as fact something with little to no evidence? It's bad, bad, bad.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 22:34, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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I agree this article is a place where two opposing views are using disinformation through googeling political sources i.e. non-scientific to push their view. For example someone quoted a source that says scrubbers are used to remove particulate. Scubbers remove SO2, SO3, Hg(2+), etc to less than ppm levels ESPs are used to remove particulate[[User:Jdavidab|Jdavidab]] ([[User talk:Jdavidab|talk]]) 23:29, 4 December 2008 (UTC) |
I agree this article is a place where two opposing views are using disinformation through googeling political sources i.e. non-scientific to push their view. For example someone quoted a source that says scrubbers are used to remove particulate. Scubbers remove SO2, SO3, Hg(2+), etc to less than ppm levels ESPs are used to remove particulate[[User:Jdavidab|Jdavidab]] ([[User talk:Jdavidab|talk]]) 23:29, 4 December 2008 (UTC) |
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=="Umbrella term" vs. "Public relations" term== |
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There's a debate on whether the first sentence of the Intro should refer to "Clean coal" as an [[umbrella term]] or a [[public relations]] term. I believe that it quite clearly fits the description of an umbrella term, as technologies such as [[gasification]], [[IGCC]] and [[carbon capture and storage]] are in intense development and not just public relations-figments, so I'm reverting the sentence back to as I had it. However, I think we should ask if there's some kind of consensus on this - which do you think we should use? [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] ([[User talk:Simesa|talk]]) 20:07, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:Of the two sources used as references for "clean coal" being a public relations term, one [http://www.sourcewatch.org/index.php?title=Clean_coal] is the home page of a wiki which doesn't support the conclusion and in fact has several "clean coal" articles itself (and a wiki can't meet [[WP:RS]] anyway), and the other [http://www.desmogblog.com/americans-for-balanced-energy-choices-pennsylvania-clean-coal-campaign-revealed] is a blog. [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] ([[User talk:Simesa|talk]]) 20:36, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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The result of the proposal was '''no consensus'''. [[User:JPG-GR|JPG-GR]] ([[User talk:JPG-GR|talk]]) 02:42, 17 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::It can and probably is, both an “Umbrella term" and a "Public relations term”. I would have said “advertising term” but – though also true – it may sound a bit negative. I think it is ok the way it is now (with my last edit). (But don’t try to tell me it is a “generic term”.) In industry when they talk about what is being done to eliminate or deal with waste products, they talk about specifics. “Clean coal” is always intended to evoke an emotional reaction. Can anyone show me one instance where the term is used otherwise?--[[User:Another-sailor|Another-sailor]] ([[User talk:Another-sailor|talk]]) 14:55, 13 September 2008 (UTC) |
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It seams that the title would be more appropriate as "Clean Coal" rather than the "Clean coal technology" we now see. The article discusses the concept of clean coal and does not go into any detail about the "technology" involved. The concept is widely known by the name "Clean Coal" with out the added "technology" at the end. Perhaps a different article for the actually technology involved might be appropriate? [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 17:23, 18 July 2008 (UTC) |
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:Yes, I agree... <span style="font-weight: bold; color:#104E8B">[[User:Splette|Splette]] :)</span> <sup>[[User_talk:Splette|<font style="color:#104E8B">How's my driving?</font>]]</sup> 13:52, 30 July 2008 (UTC) |
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::How do we go about getting that changed?[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 14:32, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::: In many cases, you just discuss it and click the [[WP:MOVE|''move'']] button next to the ''edit'' button. There is in this case, however, a non-trivial history at the target page left over from someone improperly moving the page from there to here back in 2006 (possibly this was before move functionality was implemented, I do not recall). This requires sysop buttons, so I left a request at [[WP:RM|Requested moves]]. Moving admin - [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Clean_coal&diff=75407817&oldid=74050822 here is the copy] and [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Clean_coal_technology&diff=next&oldid=49998365 here the paste]; there are a couple edits futzing with redirects after/before those two edits, but essentially the article histories do not overlap. - [[User talk:Eldereft|Eldereft]] <small>([[Special:Contributions/Eldereft|cont.]])</small> 16:44, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::Because "clean coal" is both a vague term and a term that promotes a particular point of view, I would describe it as a [[weasel word]]. Wikipedia's policy is to avoid weasel words, so describing "clean coal" in the introduction as an "umbrella term" without mentioning that it is a "public relations term" or a "weasel word" is inappropriate. See [[Wikipedia:Avoid weasel words]].[[User:Woood|Woood]] ([[User talk:Woood|talk]]) 09:48, 27 September 2008 (UTC) |
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**'''Comment''' coal has been "cleaned" for centuries, by creating "coke" in the ''coking process'' to use in blast furnaces, to create steel and pig iron. Most regular coal is too dirty for use in making steel. [[Special:Contributions/70.51.9.124|70.51.9.124]] ([[User talk:70.51.9.124|talk]]) 04:46, 13 September 2008 (UTC) |
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**:Interesting - that makes it all the more important to keep the name at clean coal technology, as the article is clearly not about that type of "cleaned coal". [[Special:Contributions/199.125.109.126|199.125.109.126]] ([[User talk:199.125.109.126|talk]]) 16:58, 14 September 2008 (UTC) |
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* '''Support'''. Per [[WP:COMMONNAME]]. Sure, coal is not clean. But the common name for the subject of this article is "clean coal". [[Special:Contributions/87.112.19.175|87.112.19.175]] ([[User talk:87.112.19.175|talk]]) 07:53, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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*'''Oppose''' could refer to ''coke'', ''low sulphur coal'', or ''anthracite'' [[Special:Contributions/70.55.89.214|70.55.89.214]] ([[User talk:70.55.89.214|talk]]) 10:32, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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*'''Support''' per Nitack. Clean Coal is really an umbrella term for a set of technologies already discussed in Wikipedia ([[IGCC]], [[carbon capture and storage]], etc.), so I favor changing the title. Also, if the article is just about "technology", why include economics and pros/cons here? [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] ([[User talk:Simesa|talk]]) 12:29, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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*:Economics are always important to any technology. It would be misleading to have an article named "clean coal", as that is not what the subject is about. As pointed out, anthracite would fall under the heading clean coal. "Clean coal" is at this point just a proposal - no one has done it yet, so that makes it doubly important to include economics and pros and cons. [[Special:Contributions/199.125.109.124|199.125.109.124]] ([[User talk:199.125.109.124|talk]]) 22:15, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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*'''Oppose'''. It refers to the technology/process, not to the coal itself. --[[User:Asterion|<span style="color:#0000FF;font-weight:bold;">'''Asterion'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Asterion|<span style="color:#00EF00;">'''talk'''</span>]]</sup> 14:49, 14 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:I was just listening to an NPR discussion on clean coal technology. I have also read many articles in the news/science magazines/ online content and blogs. My opinion is that "Clean coal technology" has become a widely accepted term to simply mean "use of technology to minimize environmental impact while producing energy from coal". Therefore calling it a "Public relations term" is incorrect. It would be a "Public relations term" if it was a term used exclusively by a small group with vested interest (corporations, politicians). "Clean coal" can be considered an umbrella term just like the "green technology". I would strongly support removing the "Public relations term" description. [[User:V j|V j]] ([[User talk:V j|talk]]) 20:59, 5 December 2008 (UTC) |
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== Flannery Misquoted? == |
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I believe Tim Flannery may have been misquoted in the following line: |
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The 2007 Australian of the Year, paleontologist and environmental activist Tim Flannery made the assertion that "Coal can't be clean".[3] |
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I looked at the referenced article which indeed has the title "Coal can't be clean - Flannery". However that quote is never presented in the article itself. Quite on the contrary, Flannery indicates that it is doubtful that co2 sequestering would work in Australia due to geological concerns, but that it would probably work in other places: |
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"Globally there has got to be some areas where clean coal will work out, so I think there will always be a coal export industry (for Australia)," he said. |
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Log one in for keeping both terms on the page. Although I understand that this term has been industry jargon since the 1970's or so, most people's exposure to it is as a public relations term used heavily over the past few years. This article needs to strike a balance of opposing views with factual information to back it up. Info needs citations, and then it has to be correctly presented. Take the line, "Currently, the fleet of coal fired electric generating plants burn 70% cleaner than they did in 1970." I'm happy to see that it is cited, or else I'd take it right out; there is no single definition of 'cleaner'. Going back to the source, I can see the qualifications made on this claim, and make them clear in the article.--[[User:Fbfree|Fbfree]] ([[User talk:Fbfree|talk]]) 08:41, 30 December 2008 (UTC) |
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"Locally in Australia because of particular geological issues and because of the competition from cleaner and cheaper energy alternatives, I'm not 100 per cent sure clean coal is going to work out for our domestic market." |
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This statement is very different from "Coal can't be clean". This quote should be reviewed and changed to indicate what was actually quoted in the article. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Emeldebug|Emeldebug]] ([[User talk:Emeldebug|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Emeldebug|contribs]]) 21:32, 5 September 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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This article is overwhelmingly a POV against clean coal technology. There are very few citations that support clean coal, but editors are quick to cite criticisms and expand these areas of the clean coal article. Therefore I am going to seek to expand the pro side to balance this article out. So many people claim neutrality and use POV under the guise to protect their own POV cloaked as the "truth of the matter" when this is hardly the case. |
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Therefore, until we can come to consensus, I request that that neutrality dispute be left alone. |
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I would say that we should not only correct the quote, but move the quote to the critisism section or just remove it altogether. One person's opinion should not be included in a NPOV article without quotes from the opposing opinion.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 15:46, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:That Article does not at any point say "Coal can't be clean". Good catch. Who would like to remove it or move it to another section? He does present an interesting idea though that is missing in the article, the concept is not even a viable concept in every location because of geological concerns. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 17:46, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:The article is very well cited and just because you don't agree with the information cited does not make it unbalanced. The fact that you are actively looking for "pro clean coal" information is an example of your own inability to be objective. Find legitimate (academic, government, scientific) sources for new information to be added and no one will object to including them in the article. Removing information that you don't like simply because you don't like it is unacceptable. Please read [[WP:NPOV]] because you don't seem to understand it. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 17:47, 30 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::Let's just start by moving it to the critisism section - we can work on the exact quote later. Now, for the 'concept' itself not to be 'viable,' we would have to know all the technologies that could comprise the 'concept' which we most certainly do not. That would be akin to saying we can't get to the moon becuase we don't know about the rocket. We can say something to the effect that there are 'some concerns of viability in specific geographic locations given the current level of technology,' but only if we can identify those geological barriers and be VERY specific as to WHAT exactly those barriers are and WHY our current technology is not there yet.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 20:32, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::I disagree. Citing Discover Magazine, The London Guardian, and several obviously biased web sites does not constitute a well-cited article. References like this only show what direction political winds are moving in, and say nothing technically significant. More scientific and peer-reviewed sources of information, such as the MIT "Future of Coal" report, are needed before you can characterize the article as well-cited. [[User:Charlesreid1|Charlesreid1]] ([[User talk:Charlesreid1|talk]]) 04:54, 13 October 2010 (UTC) |
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:::The Quote was moved by some one else, but was still incorrect, I went into the article and pulled a direct quote from him that is more representative of what he actually said. Nit [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 13:02, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::The objective is not to show any particular subject as having balanced pros and cons, but to simply reflect the reality of the current knowledge. Simply because Clean Coal still has significant cons does not mean that we have to somehow balance them with an equal number of significant pros. We simply have to list them as they are reported. --[[User:Skyemoor|Skyemoor]] ([[User talk:Skyemoor|talk]]) 18:26, 30 September 2008 (UTC) |
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Might I suggest that the problem with the article is not just its POV, but rather that it covers too much in a short article. The article would be much better if it only covered clean coal technology and move the other issues to references at the bottom of the article. This includes global warming, carbon capture, and other environmental issues that are not specific to the burning of coal. These extraneous issues only confuse things and seem to be the source of the unbalanced POV. Environmental issues should be discussed elsewhere. However, the article does not include sufficient information about pollution that results from burning coal and how various clean coal technologies would eliminate these. In short, the article should remove the opinions and other subjects, and replace them with facts about the burning of coal. Wikipedia articles should be about facts, not be opinion pieces. [[User:Tyrerj|Tyrerj]] ([[User talk:Tyrerj|talk]]) 04:36, 16 October 2008 (UTC) |
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== Neutral POV == |
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:Look up two headings... expanding on the "technologies" was suggested. As for the environmental issues, I strongly disagree. The concept of clean coal was the industry response to environmental concerns about coal burning and CO<sub>2</sub>. Additionally, with an unproven concept, that has a very specific goal of making coal more environmentally acceptable, both support and criticism of the concept are absolutely appropriate, just as if this were a viable technology we would see sections for both the strengths and shortcomings. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 22:31, 17 October 2008 (UTC) |
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This article is in disregard to the Wikipedia policy regarding neutral POV. An obvious and strong bias against clean coal does not mean that an editor can "own" the page. |
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::After having read this article, I actually felt that it was fairly decent at describing what the technologies do. In fact, I was thinking that the neutrality argument was claiming that it was too pro-clean coal until I read the comments. While it is true that the article can use some more statistics based on cost and pollution in relation to other energy sources, I felt that it more or less described exactly what the term has been coined to mean: an ongoing series of technologies designed to address public concern about the environmental impact of coal fired power plants. Just my 2 cents worth. --[[User:JKBodylski|JKBodylski]] ([[User talk:JKBodylski|talk]]) 09:41, 27 February 2009 (UTC) |
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Several good faith edits have been removed and accused of "weasel" words and such. I have noticed that other editors have faced similar "comments" from biased editors. In fact, this article is loaded with bias against clean coal and is nowhere near a neutral POV. |
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The very language of this article is not befitting of a neutral point of view to the subject at hand. This ought to be obvious to anyone with a background in English equivalent to a high schooler. I found this article by searching for this topic on google and was so disgusted with the method of presentation, and childish antics of those defending this articles horrible use of language towards neutrality, that I felt compelled to come here and throw in my complaint. Have fun ruining wikipedia with your weighted language and then trying to pass it as scholarly material... And just for the record, I could not give a damn either way about this technology. I was merely curious. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/24.170.233.95|24.170.233.95]] ([[User talk:24.170.233.95|talk]]) 22:42, 13 December 2008 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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As per Wikipedia policy, article additions should be considered in good faith. This means that a strong impetus must exist to show that such edits were not conforming to Wikipedia policy or were simply incorrect. |
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The lead doesnot clearly summarize the scientific consensus, which is critical of "clean coal tech". Current lead is biased in favour of clean coal.[[User:SummerWithMorons|Sum]] ([[User talk:SummerWithMorons|talk]]) 07:25, 20 October 2009 (UTC) |
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First, clean coal is not just a "public relations" term. It is both a generic and industry term and is used all the time when discussing methods of using coal in a fashion that is considered environmentaly friendly. Certainly not all environmentalists are opposed to clean coal technologies and this article is biased to persuade people to believe such. In fact, it goes so far as to even quote an "environmentalists" opinion about "clean coal" and treat that as some sort of authority on the entire issue. The fact is, the technology is an ongoing source of research, and this article is about the technology -- politics of this technology and/or critiques should be in their own section. |
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== oxymoronic == |
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Second, the article treats the UN study on "anthopogenic" global warming as "gospel." Anthopogenic global warming is not a universally accepted concept. In fact, it is regarded as ridiculous by many in the scientific community. Even the idea of global warming itself (man-made or not) has strong arguments on both sides. It is against Wikipedia policy to bias articles with political and/or ideological agendas -- they are supposed to retain neutral POV. There is no reason why there cannot be sections that describe the controversy, etc., similar to the support and critisism sections in the document. However, to include such biased and non-neutral information in the article introduction as if it is some sort of accepted fact is wrong. Wikipedia must fight against this to keep its integrity. |
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"clean" coal is [[oxymoronic]], in a similar way to "surgical warfare". |
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We need to insure a neutral POV and explain what clean coal is, period. And biases in the articles MUST be noted as such in their proper sections.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 15:33, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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I'm inclined to agree. The opposition has failed to describe in detail how a high percentage of the pollutants can be kept out of our environment, even if we concede that it is ok for clean coal technology to cost several times the cost of dirty coal technology.[[User:Ccpoodle|Ccpoodle]] ([[User talk:Ccpoodle|talk]]) 00:30, 6 December 2008 (UTC) |
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:Yes it is. So far this is only mentioned in the article as a quote. Would be nice to find a good reference for it and add it more prominently... <span style="font-weight: bold; color:#104E8B">[[User:Splette|Splette]] :)</span> <sup>[[User_talk:Splette|<span style="color:#104E8B">How's my driving?</span>]]</sup> 03:53, 8 December 2008 (UTC) |
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::As I've said above, this article isn't the place to debate whether clean coal is an oxymoron or not - that discussion belongs on the [[Clean coal]] page. This is the [[Clean coal technology]] (empahsis on ''technology'') page, meaning it should address technologies used to mitigate the negative environmental effects of coal, regardless of whether that makes coal objectively judged as "clean".[[User:Charlesreid1|Charlesreid1]] ([[User talk:Charlesreid1|talk]]) 05:25, 13 October 2010 (UTC) |
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:CrimsonSage, Your edits are adding weasel wording and are adding in your POV. You are also grossly uneducated on the subject and should not be making changes willy nilly just because you don't like what it says. Your talk page is full of warnings for edit waring. If you are not willing to '''talk''' about changes you want first we will just get the admins. |
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:1. Coal is not "supposedly" a fossil fuel as you keep entering into the article. Forget the fact that "supposedly" is pure weaselwording, by definition coal is a fossil fuel. Have you read what a fossil fuel is? Even the coal industry does not contend that coal is anything other than a fossil fuel. |
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:2. Adding in the word "claimed" in the following sentence. That is more weasel wording. |
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:3. Adding the wording "so-called" is more weasel wording. We sensing a theme here? Did you even read " [[anthropogenic]]"? |
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:4. Removing "[[climate change]] and [[global warming]]" in order to bring ambiguity by changing it to "such issues" does nothing to help the article. |
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:5. Represents/misrepresents, I can see some bias in this wording, how about we change it to "presents"? |
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:6. "they claim" is more weasel wording. Beyond the weasel wording, the sentence is already structured so that it is clearly presenting their view point. Your edit only serves to try and bias against them. |
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:7. "Who believe" more weasel wording to try to cast doubt based on your POV. |
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:8. Not even the coal industry claims that coal combustion is free of hazardous byproducts. This is the whole point of the effort to come up with "clean" coal. Although you are right, that section needs some work, we should probably link to [[Black_lung_disease]] and [[Environmental_effects_of_coal]] |
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== Concerns == |
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:Your edits have added nothing to the article and only attempted to add weasel wording in at every spot you wanted to cast doubt on something you don't agree with. I have acknowledged the one spot you had a reasonable edit and will change it. If you have a problem with any particular sentence or section LETS TALK ABOUT IT. However if you persist in adding weasel wording and bias to the article we will just get an admin to take a look and see if your edit warring is harming the article. |
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:[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 17:21, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::Nitack, first, don't be insulting here. I am quite educated on the subject and I can say with almost 100% certainty that I am far more educated on this than yourself. Now, I don't make changes 'willy nilly' and the reason that I made the changes is that the article is 'outrageously' biased from a position nowhere near a neutral POV. I have added no 'weasel words' as you put it; you are making that assessment becuase you don't like the neutral POV. However, the article is full of actual weasel words and phrases that really do need to be removed. I'll cover your notes |
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::1. I am really not concerned if the 'coal industry' currently says it is a fossil fuel or not. Although this is not the major point of contention (although it is certainly one point of contention), we should not exclude the fact that coal is only assumed to be a fossil fuel. As a scientist, I can tell you that the theory of coal being a fossil fuel has been slowly but gradually weakening, and the theory of oil being a fossil fuel (save some amazing new proof) is almost dead. Part of the impetus that coal may in fact have both biotic and abiotic origins is in part due to the rapidly growing acceptance of this abiotic origin of oil; along with evidence from cell carbonization of certain plant material that does not support carbon either sequestered from the atmosphere or native to the plant itself. |
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::2. "Claimed" is the correct, neutral POV word here. There is nothing weasel about that. It is not a fact, and it is claimed by some. |
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::3. The term "so-called" is used in the standard fashion as is specifically the case with terms coined terms such as this. There is nothing odd here nor 'weasel' about it. |
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::4. Removing the additional and redundant climate change and global warming does in fact help the article. First, specifically repeating these terms simply to underscore a non-neutral POV damages the integrity of the article. Moreover, there are other, more important environmental issues with regards to the advantages of clean coal technology -- more important than the generally junk science regarding so-called anthopogenic climate change. |
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::5. Honestly, can you only see 'some bias' in the term 'misrepresents'? It doesn't get much more biased that that. |
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::6. Are you talking about the Greanpeace claims here? In the article the existing POV is not at all neutral; it takes the POV that Greenpeace is somehow correct about the assertion of 'moving the pollution', etc. They may indeed make that 'claim,' but it's a claim. That is NOT a weasel word, that is simply accuracy. A weasel word/phrase is the one now (back) in the article, which tries to make the reader believe that their claim is 'truth,' which it is not. |
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::7. The term "who believe" is again accurate and a very neutral POV. To state these assertions as universally accepted fact is not true, it's a biased POV, and nowhere near a neutral POV. |
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::8. Even your statement '...Not even the coal industry claims that coal combustion is free of hazardous byproducts.' is unbelievably full of bias. They would likely be the first ones to note that coal may be hazardous and have the best handle on what those hazards might be. The article makes claims that hazards 'will exist' irrespective of the methods, which simply cannot be predicted given the advances in technology. Thus, this article cannot make those claims. |
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::Ultimately, this article is ridiculously biased. It simply tries to make the claim that clean coal cannot be clean, without taking a neutral perspective whatsoever. It is a propaganda article with little-to-no factual basis, and technically goes way beyond Wikipeidia guidlines for neutral POV. |
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::Please note that 'you' are the one edit warring and I'll explain why (and the admins will tell you the same thing). My additions were made in good faith and were reasonable additions to the article that restored a relatively neutral POV. In actuality, the article remained WAY biased against clean coal technolgy. I made some fairly minimal edits just on the negative POV that were beyond over-the-top biases. You REVERTED my edits. That's generally a no-no. Instead, you should have worked with the language in the article. You see, you don't 'own' the article. I am free to change it as I see fit, as are others, and you are supposed to take those changes in good faith - not revert them. They don't need to clear it with 'you.' Several others have been the victim of you doing the same thing to them, and you'll need to stop becuase that's the very thing that hurts Wikipedia's integrity. |
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::Now, I am going out of my way here to work with you, but I am just as happy to bring in the admins. If we do that, I can assure you that this article will lose all of your negative biases.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 20:13, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::: You really need to read the [[WP:Weasel]] article dude. It speaks exactly to the kind of words you are trying to introduce. Those same words that I quoted from above are all mentioned in the [[WP:Words_to_avoid]] article specifically for the exact reasons I am citing. |
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'''Claim''' |
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By itself, the word "claim" does not carry POV. However, it has a high potential for abuse because it can often suggest or imply that a speaker is not being truthful. In general, it is best to avoid using "claim" to describe a statement from a person about his or her own mindset. Since it is impossible to get inside the person's head and know what he or she is thinking, and therefore it is impossible to prove or disprove such a statement, editors may resort to using "claim" as a way to encourage readers to doubt the speaker's sincerity. In general, do not juxtapose a statement of objective fact with a person's subjective "claim" regarding that fact. |
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'''So-called, soi-disant, supposed, purported, alleged''' |
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These all share the theme of explicitly making it clear that a given statement is not necessarily factual. This connotation introduces unnecessary bias into the writing; Wikipedia maintains a neutral point of view, and in general, there will be someone out there who will view a given statement as highly probable—at the very least the person who said it! Where doubt does exist, it should be mentioned explicitly, along with who is doing the doubting, rather than relying on murky implications. |
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:::You may be the most intelligent person to ever edit this article, but you are not following the Wikipedia guidelines. You have tried to introduce [[WP:NOR|Original Research]], [[WP:Weasel|Weasel Wording]], and engaged in [[Wikipedia:Edit_war|edit warring]]. I don't care if you are a geological chemist who works with coal all the live long day, you need to cite your sources for wild claims, such as that coal is not a fossil fuel, and you need to leave out weasel wording. If you can find reliable sources for any of your claims, then we can edit, but otherwise your opinions and you just knowing is not enough. I have a clear view on the topic, but I value a truly objective article more. I have edited out obvious biased from the greenies and I will continue to remove your weasel wording and unverified claims.[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 20:34, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::The term 'claim,' in this context, is used well within Wikipedia guidlines - it is not being juxtaposed with a statement of objective fact, rather, it is being used exactly as it should be. We can be more explicit in the article, if you'd like, but I don't think you'll like it, becuase it will remove all of your POV biases. And, the same goes for 'so-called.' By the way, as far as that term is concerned - yes, we do use it all the time to connotate that a concept is not well entrentched or objectively factual, but that's exactly true in this case, so the term is correctly used. But like I said before, we can be quite explicit here as well. Now, I would argue that you are obviously introducing weasel wording, edit warring and such. And, as far as original reseach goes, I have NOT done that, but you have that through your flawed and biased view of the subject matter. I have made zero 'wild' claims, and have not even stated my position on whether I 'personally' think coal as a fossil fuel or not. I am talking about the current scientific thinking and trends from that perspective. But, I will say that your biased POV and opinions have absolutely no place in this article. And, I will continue to remove such biases and correct statements towards the facts and a neutral POV as appropriate.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 22:33, 8 September 2008 (UTC) |
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I am somewhat concerned that an article about a potentially major trend in global energy production (for better or for worse) is being mangled by POV ideologues on both sides. I would remind both pro- and anti- 'clean coal technology' editors that putting your points across in an amateurish fashion undermines your arguments rather than supports them. I also note that as everyone from the IEA and the EU to Greenpeace and anti-coal commentators refer openly to clean coal as a concept, it is quite clearly an umbrella term. While this may indeed be a misnomer, attempts to classify 'clean coal technology' as a public relations term are facile; the term, rightly or wrongly, is now common parlance. I will attempt to edit this article into something genuinely NPOV over the next couple of weeks. In the meantime, if I could remind all editors that a Wikipedia article is not a place to stand on your soapbox, however 'right' you opinions may be. [[User:SupernautRemix|SupernautRemix]] ([[User talk:SupernautRemix|talk]]) 15:16, 16 December 2008 (UTC) |
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I looked at CrimsonSage's revisions and almost reverted them myself. The article does somewhat lean towards the environmentalist viewpoint, but it's all well-cited and it does seem to be a fairly balanced presentation. CrimsonSage's edits OTOH were clearly POV. The article is better this way; if someone wants to continue to object, the [[WP:RfC]] route seems appropriate. [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] ([[User talk:Simesa|talk]]) 02:15, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:I agree. A week ago the article was way to the left, now it is way to the right. The article ought to cover multiple points of view. If nothing else, then there should be sections for "proponents" and "opponents". [[User:Mikiemike|Mikiemike]] ([[User talk:Mikiemike|talk]]) 04:11, 18 December 2008 (UTC) |
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::I note that Neutralpov has reverted the changes removing 'public relations term' from the initial paragraph, citing prior concensus. Having gone through the talk archive, I cannot see any consensus for keeping 'public relations term' in the article (quite the reverse, in fact), although I do appreciate that there are a number of sensible concerns about it being an inappropriate term. I do not wish to set off an editing war on this particular point and I appreciate that there is some strong feeling over this - so could someone please supply a valid reference for clean coal being a term that has been specifically contrived for use in public relations. [[User:SupernautRemix|SupernautRemix]] ([[User talk:SupernautRemix|talk]]) 12:12, 23 December 2008 (UTC) |
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:: Seconded; or thirded, after e/c. NPOV is actually a pretty well-written policy. It indicates that we must neither trash nor laud any subject; it does not, however, say that we should give [[WP:VALID|equal validity]] to fringe theories. There are plenty of legitimate arguments against the concept or practice of ''clean coal'' without bringing in global warming denialism or the existence of fossil fuels. At the very least, the style guidelines [[WP:WEASEL|Weasel words]] and [[WP:WTA|Words to avoid]] should be respected. - [[User talk:Eldereft|Eldereft]] <small>([[Special:Contributions/Eldereft|cont.]])</small> 13:34, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::This is NUTS! You three above are telling me that the neutral POV edits that I added are somehow not neutral(?) and that this article(as is) is fairly well-balanced?! This is like the twilight zone. This article is NOWHERE NEAR a neutral POV, period and is actually quite apalling. Using the terms 'claim' and 'who believe' is NOT adding any biased POV in this context, because it is not applied to an objective fact. In fact, just the opposite is true! Saying that the negative claims made in this article are 'objective fact' is a radically biased POV. You guys are saying that a Wikipedia article can present, as objective fact, activist and Greenpeace opinions and the concept of anthopogenic global warming!? And specifically to Eldereft, 'global warming denialism?' is this like 'world is flat denialism?' or 'earth is center of the universe denialism?' Anthopogenic global warming has become a 'religion' by those who don't understand 'science.' This article is claiming that global warming is 'fact,' and moreover that the concept of 'anthopogenic global warming' is also 'fact.' Anthopogenic global warming has little-to-no credible evidence whatsoever. That aside, I agree that we should NOT give equal validity to fringe theories. IF you looked at my edits you would see that my actual edits did not make such claims. WE NEED TO SEPARATE OBJECTIVE FACT FROM OPINIONS THAT ARE PRESENTED AS OBJECTIVE FACT!! This article does NOT do that. And Eldereft, if you read ANY of my discussion postings, you would find that the idea of abiotic oil/coal is something that I did 'NOT' want it to become a distraction here with reagards to NPOV; there is FAR, FAR much more that needs to be done here and abiotic oil is a completely secondary concept which has little bearing on the problems with this article. BUT, FYI, the concept of abiotic oil is rapidly becoming the accpeted theory in the scientific community, and has led to the more recent theories (of which are unproven) of abiotic coal. Whether the latter will turn out to be correct is too early to tell, but again that is NOT the critical aspect of this discussion. What IS critical is that this article wrongly presents, as objective fact, opinions from activists and extremists without expressly noting that these are NOT objective facts but mere opinions and viewpoints. This article has been hijacked by a group of activists who would rather behave along a dogmatic agenda then 'actually' better the world and/or learn something; this type of behavior is becoming one of the largest problems in our society and you're feeding right into it.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 15:34, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::Perhaps you need to re-read what you tried to put into the article Crimson. Your edits were pretty systematically picked apart and the ways in which it violated the Wikipedia guidelines were referenced. You keep making claims that are not sourced. Everything you object to in this article has been correctly sourced and cited. It says that greenpeace has objected for what ever reason, and you want to put a "supposedly", "supposed", "claimed", or "so-called" in front of everything that you don't agree with. You also refuse to substantiate anything you want changed with sources or actual Wikipedia guidelines. You keep citing NPOV, but you seem to be confusing YOUR point of view with the NEUTRAL point of view. Another Wikipedia policy is that disagreements be discussed and consensus reached by editors. The consensus seems to be that your edits are incorrect. Your recourse is to request admin attention, but I don't think you will find them any more receptive to the adding of "so-called", "purported", "believed", or "supposed" in front of everything you disagree with.[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 19:21, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::::I fully disagree with you. As I've stated several times now (but you don't pay attention) I haven't made any 'claims.' Second, it is patently FALSE that everything I object to in the article has been correctly sourced and cited becuase what I am objecting to is the non-neutral POV, which cannot be sourced nor cited. I have not refused anything with regards to substantiation, and the one thing requested is not pertinent to this discussion. I'll say it again, you do not 'own' the article. No one needs to clear anything through you, which you seem to think they do. Yet, constant refusal to contribute in a non-POV fashion is the bane of Wikipedia and what is causing it to be a joke. I have read the comments of three(3) people, and you can review my reply above. It is you and your 'friends' disagreeing with something that is causing the non-neutral POV, not my earlier edits. No matter, I am going to address each part of the article step by step.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 21:28, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::::Yes, all my "friends", even though if you had read this page you would see that Simese and I have repeatedly battled it out on this page. Now that multiple people have disagreed with you it has to be a conspiracy...[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 22:30, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::::::Again, you are insulting. Don't be stupid. You know what you tried to do with this article. It's obvious that you're not at all interested in making the article better or learning something - you are only interested in discrediting clean coal. To be clear, when I said 'You and your friends...' I'm not specifically referring to the three(3) people who commented on my edits. I'm referring to those people who, like you, want to push a particular POV in deference to the facts.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 23:12, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::::::: Again... waiting on sources and citations, conspiracy theories do nothing to help this article. I suppose I am part of some vast ''green'' wing conspiracy =D [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 12:49, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::::::::The only one expounding conspiricy theories is you.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) <span class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|undated]] comment was added at 22:11, 10 September 2008 (UTC).</span><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:::Note to all. I have drafted a new opening paragraph which I believe balances the different views on this subject that I intend to upload after Christmas. As this would be a major change, I would like to give a few details about the citations I have used so that people will be prepared for it (and so hopefully avoiding a full reversion to the current version). I have referenced the MIT 'Future of Coal' report for general information and setting out the stall for supporting clean coal. For specific criticisms I have referenced The Guardian, Greenpeace, Edinburgh University, the Discovery Channel and NBC. I should note that the reason for using one 'supportive' reference and five 'critical' references is purely that the MIT report is fairly comprehensive in its scope, while the anti references focus more on specifics. While I appreciate that these sources are not necessarily unbiased, I believe that they are reputable, at least in line with Wikipedia policies. If this rewrite is broadly accepted (subject to the usual tweaking), I will attempt to tidy up the rest of the article. [[User:SupernautRemix|SupernautRemix]] ([[User talk:SupernautRemix|talk]]) 14:15, 23 December 2008 (UTC) |
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== FutureGen == |
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I have added the FutureGen plant into the article under its own section. It was mentioned already, but this is the first real commercial test (in the US) if the concept is viable and deserved some focus in the article. Now it needs to be refined. Any volunteers? [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 14:29, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::OK guys. Looks like things are progressing nicely - thanks to all who have and are continuing to contribute. I am a little concerned that we're attempting to cram a bit too much into the opening section and it's starting to become a bit unwieldly again. I was thinking of trying to summarise some of the new content and shifting the more detailed stuff into the appropriate section further down the page to keep the opening section accessible. Any thoughts? [[User:SupernautRemix|SupernautRemix]] ([[User talk:SupernautRemix|talk]]) 16:04, 5 January 2009 (UTC) |
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:Did anyone notice that the [[FutureGen]] article says that the key features are now intended to be placed directly into operating plants, without a "pilot plant" (which FutureGen was intended to be)? It looks like Clean Coal is still very much alive. [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] ([[User talk:Simesa|talk]]) 12:32, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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== Very disappointing entry... == |
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== Support by both US presidential candidates == |
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i got to this link from a very one-sided discussion at current.com. the basic tone there was a repeat of "clean coal is an oxymoron." |
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Is it worth noting that both remaining US presidential candidates cum senators support clean coal (Obama - [http://blogs.physicstoday.org/politics08/2008/01/where_do_you_stand_on_energy_p_4.html], [http://www.sciencedebate2008.com/www/index.php?id=40]; McCain - [http://blogs.physicstoday.org/politics08/2008/01/john_mccain_on_energy_policy.html])? I would dearly love to leave this article out of the current political unpleasantness (and a little {{tl|globalize}} would not hurt), but such high-level unanimity could be deemed relevant. On the other hand, the sociopolitical perceptions and ramifications are only tangentially relevant to ''technology''. - [[User talk:Eldereft|Eldereft]] <small>([[Special:Contributions/Eldereft|cont.]])</small> 17:15, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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my expectations upon clicking the wikipedia link were to find a definitional discussion with explanations of what "clean coal" means and how it may be achieved, rather than an ongoing diatribe of how clean coal is impossible and forty-three ways that coal mining and coal-driven power generation can be nothing but pure evil to people and the earth's environment. |
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There is some question about this. Even FactCheck.org doesn't seem to have it exact. The issue is the same as with this article: just exactly what is clean coal technology? Specifically, does clean coal include "carbon capture and storage". If so, then Obama supports clean coal and McCain's add is wrong. [http://www.barackobama.com/pdf/factsheet_energy_speech_080308.pdf] |
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OTOH, if the correct definition does not includ "carbon capture and storage" then Obama does not support clean coal. Common usage has been that clean coal is about new ways to burn coal that avoid the serious pollution that normally results from burning coal. The most advanced of these is IGCC. It does not include the reduction of carbon dioxide emissions [[User:Tyrerj|Tyrerj]] ([[User talk:Tyrerj|talk]]) 04:20, 16 October 2008 (UTC) |
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as such, i'm extremely disappointed with the content, tone and language of this entry. |
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== Clean Coal is not just a 'Public Relations' Term == |
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i would strongly suggest that the pros and cons be linked FROM this page to TWO separate entries: one on the possible positive effects of coal "if used in a clean way" and the obvious counterpoint of why coal can't be clean under any circumstances. |
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The term clean coal is not just a 'public relations' term. This is highly misleading and is a way of injecting POV. The term clean coal is a catch-all term that is used to indicate existing, planned, and/or theoretical concepts and/or technologies that employ the use of coal as a power source while reducing or eliminating various byproducts of its use, some of which may be harmful. This article needs to be changed to reflect that. Simply removing the words 'public relations' would suffice.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 18:26, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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as it stands, this appears to me to be a one-sided opinion piece against "clean coal", whatever "that" is. i'm tempted to google the term to see if ANY objective descriptions [which i expected to find here] exist anywhere on the web. i would have expected SOME representatives from the electric power industry to have offered definitions or examples of processes which could explain what "clean coal" means or could achieve. |
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: [http://www.netl.doe.gov/technologies/coalpower/cctc/ NETL] uses it, which is good enough for me. Someone else already fixed it. Thank you, [[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]], for discussing specific proposals here. - [[User talk:Eldereft|Eldereft]] <small>([[Special:Contributions/Eldereft|cont.]])</small> 18:50, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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i would like to suggest that the entry start with an overview of "what the term means" followed by implementations and processes which could/would/might achieve that goal or "standard" before taking the deep dive into how it's impossible. |
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DISAGREE: It is a public relations term deployed by neutrally documented public relations campaigns. The fact that single examples of the term can be observed on the Department of Energy's website does not negate its neutral documentation as a public relations construction, especially when the use of public relations services by government agencies themselves has resulted in well-documented controversies (e.g. The Department of Homeland Security press conferences). |
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[[User:Plusaf|Plusaf]] ([[User talk:Plusaf|talk]]) 21:47, 25 January 2009 (UTC) |
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Furthermore, "clean" is a qualitative peacock term that is dubious under Wikipedia's own policies. Any article on "clean coal" must therefore meet a burden of proof to explain the unusal phenomenon of a peacock word being part of a Wikipedia article. The fact that it is part of a neutrally-documented public relations campaign meets this burden of proof. <span class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/204.153.192.245|204.153.192.245]] ([[User talk:204.153.192.245|talk]]) 19:06, 11 September 2008 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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: I understand wikipedia practice is to have For and Against for controversial topics on one page. It might be useful to have a link to the actual technology of Carbon capture and storage at the top of this page. That is the page to have the technology article. [[User:Phanly|dinghy]] ([[User talk:Phanly|talk]]) 05:27, 27 January 2009 (UTC) |
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::Part of the issue here is that clean coal technology isn't just about carbon capture, but also relates to the removal of other pollutants. Plusaf, you are right that this is a biased article. There are a lot of people who seem to want to sand on their soapboxes on this issue; to be honest, I reckon that sensible edits to this article are something of a losing battle.[[User:SupernautRemix|SupernautRemix]] ([[User talk:SupernautRemix|talk]]) 23:22, 28 January 2009 (UTC) |
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::I would be willing to edit this entry to add the engineering perspective, which is likely to be more conceptually objective, but I'm not sure any edits made to this article will be spared the political knife. Environmentally friendly coal is a difficult project, but plants have the advantage of being stationary emissions producers. Unfortunately most environmental activists and firms focus on the carbon content of coal as inherently evil. Intelligent discussions are being bogged down here by unfair bias and reactionary bias. We need an admin moderated editing process to fix this political warfield.[[Special:Contributions/98.185.212.44|98.185.212.44]] ([[User talk:98.185.212.44|talk]]) 07:48, 27 February 2009 (UTC) |
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==Removed links== |
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I could not find this article: |
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*{{cite web|url=http://www.swisspolitics.org/en/news/index.php?section=int&page=news_inhalt&news_id=5972230|title="Beyond Kyoto" Initiative|accessdate=2009-03-29}} [[User:Ikip|Ikip]] ([[User talk:Ikip|talk]]) 18:45, 29 March 2009 (UTC) |
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*{{cite web|url=http://www.uic.com.au/nip83.htm|title=Uranium Information Centre paper on "Clean Coal" Technologies|accessdate=2009-03-29}} |
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[[User:Ikip|Ikip]] ([[User talk:Ikip|talk]]) 18:49, 29 March 2009 (UTC) |
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==Merger== |
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== Anthopogenic climate change is not proven; IPCC has not 'shown' anything == |
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This article should be merged with Clean coal. The difference is not substantive, helpful, or indeed coherent |
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[[User:Ashwinr|Ashwinr]] ([[User talk:Ashwinr|talk]]) 08:28, 12 April 2009 (UTC) |
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:I would be willing to go either direction for this article. The major problem is that this article is (or moreso, ''was'') related to clean coal in general. The article should be restricted to describing the technologies involved in the production/use of clean coal. If the information available on this specific subject is small, then the content can be a section of the [[clean coal]] article. If there is a lot that can be discussed, then per [[WP:SIZE]] [[WP:SPINOUT]] [[WP:SS]] (take your pick) it is perfectly acceptable to to leave it a separate page. |
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:I suspect most of the actual technologies related to clean coal are worthy of their own articles, and this this article (or subsection) would become a rather brief summary of the technologies, with appropriate wikilinks allowing the reader to learn more as desired. Thus, this article would be short, and appropriate as a subsection. of the parent article. -[[User:Verdatum|Verdatum]] ([[User talk:Verdatum|talk]]) 21:20, 15 April 2009 (UTC) |
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::Agreed [[User:Verdatum]], while the articles are not worthy of being separate as they stand, there is a very important distinction to be made. The [[Clean coal]] page is a place to explain/discuss what the term "clean coal" means (that being, ways of mitigating negative environmental effects of coal), whereas the [[Clean coal technology]] page is a place to discuss what specific technologies have been, or can be, used to mitigate these negative effects. <small><span class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Charlesreid1|Charlesreid1]] ([[User talk:Charlesreid1|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Charlesreid1|contribs]]) 05:31, 13 October 2010 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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== Economics == |
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In the article introduction, there is a sentence that reads... |
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''The coal industry has responded by running advertising touting clean coal in an effort to counter negative perceptions, as well as by putting more than $50 billion towards the development and deployment of clean coal technologies, including carbon capture and storage.[11] The expenditure has been unsuccessful to date in that there is not a single commercial scale coal fired power station in the US that captures and stores more than token amounts of CO2.'' is odd. The reason tehre are no successful plants is because it is uneconomic. It is obviously uneconomic: given that there are no costs to emitting CO2, a plant that spends money stopping CO2 emissions can't compete with one that doesn't, unless it is subsidised [[User:William M. Connolley|William M. Connolley]] ([[User talk:William M. Connolley|talk]]) 17:58, 28 June 2010 (UTC) |
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"The burning of coal, a fossil fuel, has been shown to be one of the principal causes of anthropogenic climate change and global warming, according to the United Nations Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change. (See the UN IPCC Fourth Assessment Report.)" |
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Oh, and I think the $50 bn is very misleading if the context is CCS. Most of that cost will have gone on "conventional" emissions - particulates etc [[User:William M. Connolley|William M. Connolley]] ([[User talk:William M. Connolley|talk]]) 18:00, 28 June 2010 (UTC) |
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This is a serious violation of non-neutral POV. |
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== Needs discussion of supercritical (IGCC) burning techniques == |
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:1) EVEN if the wording is changed, this should probably be in a different section entirely, such as a 'background' or 'motivation' section, but not in the introduction. |
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:2) The IPCC has not 'shown' anything. They have put forth a 'claim' and a 'theory.' To 'show' something, as indicated in the statement above, means that they have demonstrated such as fact, which couldn't be further from the truth. The proper terms here are 'claimed' (regardless of the supposed 'weasel' status). Also acceptable is 'argued.' But the term 'shown' is a non-neutral POV and unacceptable. |
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:3) The statement is structured with a non-neutral POV. It also elevates the UN to the 'authority' on the matter. Neither are true nor acceptable. The above statment (regardless of the actual truth or accuracy of the content), must be re-structured to something like... |
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Needs discussion of supercritical burning techniques. [[Integrated gasification combined cycle]] |
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:'According to a study done by the UN IPCC, the burning of coal is argued to be one of the principle causes of....' |
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[[User:Ocdnctx|Ocdnctx]] ([[User talk:Ocdnctx|talk]]) 19:25, 8 January 2012 (UTC) |
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:You see the difference in POV; now that truth it is an opinion of a particular group is clearer. BUT, it's still NOT neutral, and still has a POV that is against clean coal technology. However, by writing it the way it is originally written, the reader is led to believe that the burning of coal IS contributing to climate change - but that is NOT a fact, NOT a neutral POV, and a concept that many scientists consider completely absurd. |
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:Just to be perfectly clear, IGCC and supercritical gasification are completely separate concepts. It sounds as though you are aliasing the two. That being said, I have already (section [[Talk:Clean_coal_technology#More_sections_needed]] above) given a recommended outline for an improved article that focuses more on clean coal ''technologies'' and less on the controversial topic of "cleanliness;" both IGCC and supercritical gasification would naturally belong in the combustion retrofit technologies section. [[User:Charlesreid1|Charlesreid1]] ([[User talk:Charlesreid1|talk]]) 07:11, 29 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:4) This statement (regardless of sentence structure) assumes, without explanation, that the theory/concept of 'anthopogenic climate change' is also fact, which it most certainly is not. In fact, it is not even good science and does not even have historical pedigree. It should read the 'so-called' theory of 'anthopogenic climate change.' This is typical as to how we refer to a theory that is not borne out yet. However, NOBODY seemed to like that becuase it is a 'weasel' word (which is bunk). But, it now postures a POV that 'anthropogenic climate change' is a fact, but it's not. |
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== Technology image for this article == |
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:5) The causes for global warming, if such indeed exists, are very far from understood. To claim that we can make the assesment that global warming is real and then go even further and claim that, not only is it real, but that the burning of coal or the byproducts released by the buring of coal somehow contribute to this yet unproven theory that we know very, very little about is way beyond any reasonable neutral POV; it's completely outrageous. It means that we are claiming to know far more than we do at this point and claim, as fact, things that are obviously not fact. This is a dangerous and societally irresponsible act. If we encourage this type of behavior, of sticking to a some view because of political or other non-related reasons, we are ignoring what could be a very serious problem with global warming and climate change because we'll be missing the genuine cause. |
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I propose something like this which is a neutral POV... |
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'Anthopogenic climate change comprises a set of controversial theories which postulate that climate change is influenced by human activities. Recently, this has been popularly associated with the more controversial theory of 'anthopogenic global warming' which is less accepted. According to a study done by the UN IPCC, the burning of coal is argued to be one of the principle causes of such anthopogenic climate change and global warming. As the underlying theories themselves have never been proven, this is a widely debated study.' |
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Hello. My name is Robert and I am an official representative of [[Peabody Energy]] here on Wikipedia. I've been hired by Peabody to upload images owned by the company to Wikimedia Commons and seek to add relevant images into Wikipedia articles to offer useful illustration for the site's readers. |
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[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 23:01, 9 September 2008 (UTC) |
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I've now uploaded around 20 images, for which copyright permission has been granted by Peabody. The copyrights for my most recent images are still in the process of being recorded by OTRS but in the meantime, I wanted to reach out here to see about placing one of the fully approved images in this article. |
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:Jesus christ. I could expect that sentence out of someone who doesn't know the meaning of the term "weasel words", but to propose ''that'' as a NPOV sentence must require a level of self-deception and hypocrisy that is just unfathomable. You, sir, have an agenda. [[User:Salvar|Salvar]] ([[User talk:Salvar|talk]]) 05:55, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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One of the images I've uploaded shows carbon capture technology, and I think it would be be a great addition for this article's "[[Clean_coal_technology#Technology|Technology]]" section: |
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::If you want to debate anthropogenic climate change, that's in [[Global warming controversy]]. The sentence as given is correct, the IPCC did say that and they are generally recognized as the expert body. [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] ([[User talk:Simesa|talk]]) 12:38, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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*[[:File:Coal_Carbon_Capture_Technology.png]] |
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My suggested caption is: "Carbon capture technology used at a coal mine in 2014." |
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If anyone is watching this page, will you look into adding this image for me? Thanks for reviewing this request. [[User:Robert PEnergy|Robert PEnergy]] ([[User talk:Robert PEnergy|talk]]) 18:28, 12 December 2014 (UTC) |
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:::I second Salvar and Simesa's notions. The sentence already clearly states that it is the determination of the IPCC. They are the expert body and your weasel wordery has reached new levels of ridiculousness in that sentence. If you wish to change that sentence please, asking once again, '''provide some actual sources and citations to justify the change.''' Your proposed rewrite is quite frankly rubbish. It is one entire compilation of weasel wording that has no purpose but to try to cast doubt on every aspect of who the IPCC is and what they have determined.[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 12:47, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:I don't see any significant conflict of interest here and am wondering if images shouldn't be treated more like self-citation COIs, where the user is allowed to make the edits themselves, unless someone tells them not to. The proposed caption doesn't even include the company's name, which I would also find appropriate if it described the location this equipment is at or its manufacturer. Also, I'm still not clear what I'm looking at. A better caption might be something like "Two _______ devices, which are used in carbon capture..." However that is all very nit-picky. My suggestion would be to post at COIN asking if you can add all 20 images to relevant articles without asking for permission for each one individually. Presuming you use common sense, I imagine it should be fine. [[User:CorporateM|CorporateM]] ([[User_talk:CorporateM|Talk]]) 20:43, 18 January 2015 (UTC) |
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::::This is absoluetly crazy. You guys are completely self-delusional when it comes to what NPOV actually is. To Salvar directly, I have no agenda - there is no hypocricy and I am completely aware of what I've written. In fact, I've explained exactly why my statement is NPOV in my above comment. Its obvious that, to at least the few of you commenting here, that you are unsatisfied unless there is a strong POV that against clean coal; you guys will not be satisfied with an actual NPOV. I'll repeat it again, everything in my statement is factually acturate and has a neutral POV. But, the statement currently in the article is completey biased and has a a very strong negative POV. To Simesa, this means, that in this article, you are going to allow the inclusion of a non-neutral POV that advocates the ridiculous and non-scientific concept of anthopogenic global warming as fact?? Right from the very start, that is already NOT a neutral POV. As this article is not about that topic, how can we choose a POV here that is inconsistent with the ensuing scientific debate?! The IPCC is a NON-neutral political body of a very dubious nature. I gauruntee that if I were to bring either direct sources or experts here who disagreed, you guys would STILL not want to allow them becuase you would AGAIN claim a non-netural POV, etc. And Nitack, I'm tired of your insults - you're being idiotic, and you and I both know that you're trying to push your agenda with your friends. My rewrite is fine, it is NPOV, it is factual, and I've explained the entire basis for each part in the above comment. All of you are failing to see the strongly negative POV of the original wording and the immense bias it has. So, when confronted with a true NPOV, you can only see your view and don't like the fact that it's actually neutral, just becuase it doesn't support your biased viewpoint. This entire article is a 'weasel article' which tries to cast doubt on clean coal, tries to posture anthopogenic global warming as fact, and takes shots at the coal industry while lauding activists and groups like greenpeace. It's complete garbage, it's not NEUTRAL, and the most active editors are so far lodged in their current way of thinking that they argue any statements that are balanced have a POV because they don't agree with them. Talk about self-deception, you guys are the poster children for it. Someday, if you ever open your minds, you might actually read my reasoning above and understand it.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 22:06, 10 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::::Okay, okay. Hold it right there. As I see it there are two possibilities. The first is that you have an agenda to oppose the concept of global warming, motivated by I-don't-know-what (could be a payroll, could be a genuine belief in the "liberal media conspiracy"), and this agenda is driving you to make the most blatantly obvious falsehoods with absolute certainty, in the assumption that as long as you keep saying you're right, you can never be wrong. In such a case I would support you being banned from Wikipedia. The second case is that you honestly believe the words that are coming out of your mouth. The second case is, as I said before, unfathomable. It's almost impossible to believe that your continued reliance on personal attacks whenever you are asked for any sources is not deliberate. But for a moment I will give you the benefit of the doubt, because it's the only option that could possibly lead to your becoming a productive member of Wikipedia. But for that to happen, you need to do one thing. Pause, take a deep breath, and briefly open your mind to the possibility that you could be wrong. Recognize that this is ''always'' a possibility, and it's good advice for anyone, and advice which I use frequently. Now, keeping that in mind, read your last post. Every single word in that post is describing ''your'' behavior. That's the key bit of information here. ''You'' are using weasel words. ''You'' are biased. ''You'' are opposing the article's content simply because you don't agree with it. In fact, the ways in which your criticism applies to ''your'' behavior are so numerous that it's very hard to believe you're not doing it deliberately. So that's what I have to say. Please consider it. On that note... I think there's a third possibility. You could be a troll, who derives entertainment from stirring up controversy. Such perplexing behavior would make sense in this light, because causing genuine confusion would only increase the humor of the situation. |
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:::::That was my main message, but just in case it would help, I'd like to explain to you just what the meaning of "weasel words" is. The help pages are very clear, but maybe I can summarize it in just a few sentences for you. You maintain that your edits are good because they are "factual", and "neutral". This might be technically correct, but that's not enough. The human mind does not operate on the basis of logic. For this reason, it is possible to have a "factual" article which conveys information that is not factual. This is because of errors made by the brain of the reader, while processing the sentence. This doesn't, however, mean that the writer of the article is not responsible for this. These errors come in many well-known forms, and it's Wikipedia policy to guard against them, in order to produce articles which are not only "factual" in a technical sense, but which convey factual information and ideas to the readers. I hope I was clear in my explanation--further information can be found at [[Wikipedia:Avoid weasel words]]. [[User:Salvar|Salvar]] ([[User talk:Salvar|talk]]) 00:57, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::::I re-read my posts. All of them, actually. I respectfully disagree with you and what you've said, and I doubt you will actually follow your own advice -- but please do so, go ahead and consider the possibility that you're wrong. The fact is, this article is demonstrating a strong, biased, and non-neutral POV. You can argue the opposing view all you wan't, but just saying it doesn't make you right. Salvar, can't you see that you are actually doing exactly what you claim I am doing? Which in fact, I am not. If you'll recall, 'you' initiated personal attacks by calling me "self-deceptive" accusing me of "hypocricy," etc., comments which are simply assinine. This article is, quite simply, a biased piece of propaganda that postures and supports an extremist viewpoint. As far as the 'weasel' information, you have made 'MY' point here regarding the vast majority of this aritcle. Please read my section below on examples of opposing viewpoints with NPOV.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 02:10, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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along with the preceeding comments in the article, indicate that CO2 adds to global warming and state this as fact. There is no evidence that such is the case, and it is being presented here as fact. I suggest, at the very, very minimum, removing the 'weasel' phrase that postures to state the CO2 generated from coal contributes to global warming. The phrase would read: |
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Cheers.—[[User:InternetArchiveBot|'''<span style="color:darkgrey;font-family:monospace">InternetArchiveBot</span>''']] <span style="color:green;font-family:Rockwell">([[User talk:InternetArchiveBot|Report bug]])</span> 05:50, 26 November 2016 (UTC) |
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"... fuels easier to pump out of the ground will lead to increased concentrations of CO2 in potential fuel supplies which would have to be burned off during the refining process."[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 00:20, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:This is actually not an example of weasel words. I believe that it has been adequately proven that CO2 in the atmosphere contributes to global warming, but whether that is a fact or not, it's not a "weasel phrase". It's just a piece of information presented as fact.[[User:Salvar|Salvar]] ([[User talk:Salvar|talk]]) 00:59, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::That's exactly my point. It's a peice of information which is NOT fact, presented as fact. That is exactly a 'weasel phrase.' It is done this way specifically to posture a particular, non-neutral viewpoint which is not objective fact, and cast doubt on the opposing view. It is not NPOV. Now, you personally may 'believe' that it has been 'adequately proven' that CO2 in the atmosphere contributes to global warming, but this is anything but true and is just your personal opinion and a particular POV. However, such is not science, such is not a fact, and it has not been shown, nor demonstrated, nor anything else that would remotely convince any reasonable scientist to believe this; in fact, several studies have demonstrated that anthopogenic CO2 is negligible towards greenhouse gas driven geological warming. And yes, I can site references if so desired, but I think we all know that these theories are the subjects of a great debate and in no way accepted science.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 01:27, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::I can say that you are flat wrong in this statement: "It's a peice of information which is NOT fact, presented as fact. That is exactly a 'weasel phrase.'" You misunderstand the term. I very carefully explained the term above, and Wikipedia has a page about it which is quite clear. Now, as for your references: cite them. I won't say anything more, so you'll have no ammo to change the subject. I call--show your cards. [[User:Salvar|Salvar]] ([[User talk:Salvar|talk]]) 03:35, 11 September 2008(UTC) |
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::::You're wrong again. That is the very intent of a 'weasel phrase' as I've clearly explained earlier and as is used in this context. As you stated - 'For this reason, it is possible to have a "factual" article which conveys information that is not factual.' That's right, and that's exactly what numerous sections in this article are doing. In any case, I'm gathering some references so hold on.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 05:21, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:::::What I said was exactly the opposite. Not a flat lie, but rather a technically factual sentence which conveys a meaning that's entirely different. The sentence you pointed out was a "lie" (as you say) being flatly stated as fact. A direct contradiction, not a "weasely" misleading statement. Do you see what I mean? [[User:Salvar|Salvar]] ([[User talk:Salvar|talk]]) 07:02, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::::::Crimson Please for the love of something read [[wp:weasel]]. You are continually displaying a complete lack of understanding of what the actual definition of a weasel word. I would also encourage you to read [[WP:NPOV]] which you are not correctly understanding either.[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 12:52, 12 September 2008 (UTC) |
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The main article has been moved to [[coal pollution mitigation]]; I think it would be good to move this article to [[coal pollution mitigation technology]] or something similar. Thoughts? {{U|JzG}} and {{U|Roberttherambler}} commented there. |
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== An example of an opposing, yet valid and generally neutral POV == |
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[[User:Jdforrester|James F.]] [[User talk:Jdforrester|(talk)]] 01:52, 6 February 2017 (UTC) |
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: Works for me. I don't know whether [[flue-gas desulfurization]] remains a separate topic. <b>[[User Talk:JzG|Guy]]</b> <small>([[User:JzG/help|Help!]])</small> 07:38, 6 February 2017 (UTC) |
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::I have criticized the move to [[coal pollution mitigation]] because it was done without discussion. I think there should be a discussion about the proposed move of this article. [[User:Roberttherambler|Roberttherambler]] ([[User talk:Roberttherambler|talk]]) 11:38, 6 February 2017 (UTC) |
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== Request for comment on proposed move == |
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"Sequestration technology has yet to be used on such a large scale and it may not be safe or even successful, may lead to unexpected geological instability, or may contaminate groundwater supplies" |
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{{Archive top|There is no consensus for the proposed move. [[User:Tazerdadog|Tazerdadog]] ([[User talk:Tazerdadog|talk]]) 23:32, 17 March 2017 (UTC)}} |
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It has been suggested this article be moved from [[Clean coal technology]] to [[Coal pollution mitigation technology]]. Should this move take place? See also [[Talk:Coal pollution mitigation]]. [[User:Roberttherambler|Roberttherambler]] ([[User talk:Roberttherambler|talk]]) 18:26, 7 February 2017 (UTC) |
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* '''No move''' - Between the two, clean coal technology is more the [[WP:COMMONNAME]]. |
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Now, if I were to argue the way that people have been arguing with me (such as the ridicoulous comments made earlier (specifically by Salvar and Nitack), I would say that this statement is obviously a completely NON neutral POV. Why? Becuase it "intends to cast doubt" on sequestration technology, thereby showing a clear POV. |
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:: (1) It is more frequent. A google count shows those words as 60% more commonly used (6.48M hits vs 4M), and as phrases it is even more so ("clean coal" 530K, "clean coal technology" 265K, "coal pollution" 69.6K , "coal pollution mitigation" 555, "coal pollution mitigation technology" '''only 8'''). Also, I particularly note the reference cites use the phrase "Clean coal". |
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:: (2) It has less uses that seem [[WP:OFFTOPIC]]. The phrasing makes technology to clean more narrow than mitigation. The mitigation seems interpretable applicable to post-event or alternative reactions, so a few of the google hits were instead about [http://www.unep.org/climatechange/mitigation/Introduction/tabid/29397/Default.aspx climate change mitigation] doing things unrelated to cleaning emissions of coal, such as increasing the use of buses. |
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:: (3) Lack sufficient motivating reasons. The general preferences for status quo / stability, keeping things simple with the shorter name, and the [[WP:SURPRISE]] principle of least astonishment so if they type the 'clean coal' it leads to something of similar title says it titled 'Clean coal technology'. |
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: Cheers [[User:Markbassett|Markbassett]] ([[User talk:Markbassett|talk]]) 05:54, 17 February 2017 (UTC) |
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* '''No move''' - "clean coal technology" seems much clearer than "coal pollution mitigation technology". The shorter title is also simpler. The move seems unnecessary. --[[User:Nerd1a4i|Nerd1a4i]] ([[User talk:Nerd1a4i|talk]]) 16:26, 18 February 2017 (UTC) |
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*'''Oppose Move''' - Seems like there's a clear [[WP:COMMONNAME]] argument here. Granted "Clean coal technology" isn't actually "Clean", but that is the name by which it's known. [[User:NickCT|NickCT]] ([[User talk:NickCT|talk]]) 10:00, 19 February 2017 (UTC) |
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* '''Support move''', per [[WP:GLOBALIZE]], \or better still, merge. Coal pollution mitigation technology dates back to the 19th Century and the term "clean coal" is predominantly US, and to a lesser extent Australian - some of the biggest efforts are in China and India, and their industry is not trying to greenwash the product, I see no evidence this term is used there. The fact that the Big Coal marketing team call it this does not require us to do their PR for them. We should use a more technically correct term reflecting the length of time people have been trying to fix the problems with coal. <b>[[User Talk:JzG|Guy]]</b> <small>([[User:JzG/help|Help!]])</small> 19:17, 19 February 2017 (UTC) |
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* Quite apart from anything else, "Clean coal technology" violates the "common name" guideline because it isn't one technology, it's half a dozen. "Coal pollution avoidance technologies" or something would be clearer, but I'm not entirely enthused by it. [[User:Jdforrester|James F.]] [[User talk:Jdforrester|(talk)]] 05:12, 21 February 2017 (UTC) |
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:: I thikn mitigation is a more precise term than avoidance, I don't think it can be avoided, but that's just my view. <b>[[User Talk:JzG|Guy]]</b> <small>([[User:JzG/help|Help!]])</small> 08:40, 21 February 2017 (UTC) |
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* '''Support move/merge''' Firstly, "clean coal" is less precise and less general. It is '''''not''''' a question of whether coal is actually clean or dirty, as mentioned above; that is a matter of irrelevant semantics. The "clean coal" title describes only part of the topic; it is not just a common name for the same concept. There is more to dealing constructively with coal than just getting clean coal or getting coal clean, no matter what the popular misconceptions might be. Secondly, if we do move it would in every way be natural and reasonable to reatain the clean coal title in a redir, so that "clean coal" searches direct readers to a proper context, thereby reducing the confusion of users that wind up at a clean coal article and find that only parts of their concerns are discussed, or that find that their clean coal title includes a lot of stuff that they had not bargained for. Those that get redirected to "Coal pollution mitigation technology", or possibly a section inside that article, might be slightly surprised, but only if they had never realised that there was more to the matter than clean coal, and the principle of least surprise does '''''not''''' apply to every instance where a reader learns something that had not occurred to him before; that after all is part of the function of an encyclopaedia. It is a bigger and more harmful surprise to find that the chosen title did not match the content of the article. [[User:JonRichfield|JonRichfield]] ([[User talk:JonRichfield|talk]]) 05:56, 21 February 2017 (UTC) |
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*'''Undecided''' Per many convincing arguments above. I'm leaning towards '''Merge''', but the "Clean Coal" moniker is so popular, that regardless of the fact it is a misnomer, I am thinking the article should stay. [[User:L3X1|L3X1]] [[User talk:L3X1|My Complaint Desk]] 22:52, 25 February 2017 (UTC) |
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:: We should definitely have a redirect and definitely reference it in the lede. But popularity? It's a PR term they have spent a fortune on pushing, but still a relatively new one. It's also very obviously inaccurate. Coal produces environmental damage from the mine to the smokestack. Habitat damage, health effects on miners, water pollution, pollution in transport, acid rain, radiation, CO2 - to say that burying the CO2 makes it "clean" is pretty silly. <b>[[User Talk:JzG|Guy]]</b> <small>([[User:JzG/help|Help!]])</small> 00:07, 27 February 2017 (UTC) |
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*'''Oppose move'''. WP policy is to title an article by what its subject is commonly called, not by what it logically ought to be called. [[User:Maproom|Maproom]] ([[User talk:Maproom|talk]]) 08:54, 28 February 2017 (UTC) |
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:: That's not a policy. [[WP:NPOV]] is a policy, the MOS is only guidance. And in this case the term is only most common in the US, whereas much of the activity in the field is in China and India. <b>[[User Talk:JzG|Guy]]</b> <small>([[User:JzG/help|Help!]])</small> 11:13, 28 February 2017 (UTC) |
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Then is my statement NPOV? YES, it is NPOV. In fact, BOTH statements are NPOV. Why is that? Becuase both statements state fact. In the case of the statement regarding 'sequestration technology,' to date no very large scale use has been done, it may turn out not to be safe or successful, and may lead to geological instability or may contaminate groundwater. The statement reaches (far more than my anthopogenic example), but most of that is still fairly OK. |
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My point here is that if I had written the statement regarding 'anthopogenic global warming', everyone would have jumped on it as haveing a non-neutral POV, when in fact, both of these statements are written in the exact same tone, and both are actually NPOV. |
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You people need to think about what you're doing/saying and get outside of your conditioning.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 01:14, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:But this article doesn't say that anthropogenic global warming is happening - it says that the Stern report and the IPCC say it's happening, and it does so because they represent what is pretty much the scientific consensus. Perhaps we might reference [[Global warming controversy]] somewhere, but that's as far as it's reasonable to go. [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] ([[User talk:Simesa|talk]]) 01:24, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::Simesa, that's not true. This article does stongly indicate that anthopogenic global warming is happening based on the way the information is presented. It assumes such is the case all throughout the article. Again, and with all due respect, I don't agree that 'that's as far as it's reasonable to go.' Certainly we should absolutely mention that the theory of anthopogenic global warming is the subject of intense debate, and link to the controversy as you suggest. But, the rest of the article should NOT purport that such theories are fact. Honestly, there are far more important aspects of clean coal than the CO2 aspect, of which is just a hand-hold for the anthopogenic global warming people. Wouldn't you agree that this article will be better when it is actually NPOV? We should talk straight facts. By this example I've give I hope you understand how I have been looking at this from a completely objectively perspective and neutral POV. Right now, this whole atricle is a big propaganda piece, and that's wrong.[[User:CrimsonSage|CrimsonSage]] ([[User talk:CrimsonSage|talk]]) 01:43, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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== This page is really inaccurate == |
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=="Umbrella term" vs. "Public relations" term== |
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There's a debate on whether the first sentence of the Intro should refer to "Clean coal" as an [[umbrella term]] or a [[public relations]] term. I believe that it quite clearly fits the description of an umbrella term, as technologies such as [[gasification]], [[IGCC]] and [[carbon capture and storage]] are in intense development and not just public relations-figments, so I'm reverting the sentence back to as I had it. However, I think we should ask if there's some kind of consensus on this - which do you think we should use? [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] ([[User talk:Simesa|talk]]) 20:07, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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This page is very inaccurate, 'clean coal' is marketing and lobbying term created by the advertising agency [[R&R Partners]] in 2008 to combat potential carbon emission regulations by the [[Federal government of the United States|US Federal government]]. The page currently appears to confuse the marketing term with [[Carbon capture and storage|carbon capture and sequestration]] and [[Scrubber|scrubbers]] technologies. I will work on a new version of this page and transfer relevant information to that page. It also appears this page has quite a lot of COI editing which should be monitored. |
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:Of the two sources used as references for "clean coal" being a public relations term, one [http://www.sourcewatch.org/index.php?title=Clean_coal] is the home page of a wiki which doesn't support the conclusion and in fact has several "clean coal" articles itself (and a wiki can't meet [[WP:RS]] anyway), and the other [http://www.desmogblog.com/americans-for-balanced-energy-choices-pennsylvania-clean-coal-campaign-revealed] is a blog. [[User:Simesa|Simesa]] ([[User talk:Simesa|talk]]) 20:36, 11 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::It can and probably is, both an “Umbrella term" and a "Public relations term”. I would have said “advertising term” but – though also true – it may sound a bit negative. I think it is ok the way it is now (with my last edit). (But don’t try to tell me it is a “generic term”.) In industry when they talk about what is being done to eliminate or deal with waste products, they talk about specifics. “Clean coal” is always intended to evoke an emotional reaction. Can anyone show me one instance where the term is used otherwise?--[[User:Another-sailor|Another-sailor]] ([[User talk:Another-sailor|talk]]) 14:55, 13 September 2008 (UTC) |
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[[User:John Cummings|John Cummings]] ([[User talk:John Cummings|talk]]) 17:04, 11 February 2018 (UTC) |
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:::Because "clean coal" is both a vague term and a term that promotes a particular point of view, I would describe it as a [[weasel word]]. Wikipedia's policy is to avoid weasel words, so describing "clean coal" in the introduction as an "umbrella term" without mentioning that it is a "public relations term" or a "weasel word" is inappropriate. See [[Wikipedia:Avoid weasel words]].[[User:Woood|Woood]] ([[User talk:Woood|talk]]) 09:48, 27 September 2008 (UTC) |
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==Clean coal and the environment== |
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:I was just listening to an NPR discussion on clean coal technology. I have also read many articles in the news/science magazines/ online content and blogs. My opinion is that "Clean coal technology" has become a widely accepted term to simply mean "use of technology to minimize environmental impact while producing energy from coal". Therefore calling it a "Public relations term" is incorrect. It would be a "Public relations term" if it was a term used exclusively by a small group with vested interest (corporations, politicians). "Clean coal" can be considered an umbrella term just like the "green technology". I would strongly support removing the "Public relations term" description. [[User:V j|V j]] ([[User talk:V j|talk]]) 20:59, 5 December 2008 (UTC) |
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I am currently working on a school research project and I am interested in expanding the section on "clean coal and the environment". There are currently a few places that need to be cited, and the sentences that use the word "Supporters" make the section seem like it is showing a one-sided stance rather than explaining the opposing views. If anyone has feedback or suggestions, I would appreciate it. |
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==Technologies== |
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In a discussion that is actually about making this article better, do we have enough fodder for an actual section on the proposed technologies? [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 13:33, 12 September 2008 (UTC) |
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:Bueller... Bueller... Can we actually have sections in the article for things like IGCC, etc. The "technologies" that people are arguing are part of this article.[[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 12:09, 16 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::If we are unable to identify "technologies" to elaborate about in this article, perhaps we should renew discussion about changing the title? [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 16:46, 29 September 2008 (UTC) |
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== N? POV again == |
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[[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 02:23, 2 March 2018 (UTC) |
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Where the paragraph addresses Clean Coal marketing, I added a reference to the term "Clean Coal" being used an example of Greenwashing. I also added a link to the Greenwashing page, and cited the article "Greenwashing Coal". [[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 02:29, 9 March 2018 (UTC) |
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I’m not sure that removing the POV tag was justified. I also don’t think inserting it without any specific discussion here was justified either. Just looking at this section – titled “Clean Coal and the environment” that has only two paragraphs of criticism seems wrong. Maybe the problem is with the article structure. “Clean Coal” could have been called “Environmentally Friendly Coal”. Then “Environmentally Friendly Coal and the environment” is obviously a problem. Why not move all of this section to other sections?--[[User:Another-sailor|Another-sailor]] ([[User talk:Another-sailor|talk]]) 11:07, 29 September 2008 (UTC) |
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I found information regarding how the term "Clean" originated, so I added this information near the beginning of the article, to say that the term "Clean Coal" started off by describing coal that was washed (or cleaned) at the mine; whereas now, the term also encompasses Carbon Capturing and Storage (CCS). I also added a citation for where I found this information: Alan Lockwood's book, "The Silent Epidemic". |
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:I actually disagree. The whole premise of the concept of clean coal is that coal can be used in a more environmentally friendly manner. The environment section sets the premise for why the concept even has a point. Additionally, some of the criticisms in that section deal specifically with environmental factors and issues that would be created by the clean coal process itself, not just through coal use. If anything, I would say what the article needs is for the "Support" and "Criticism" sections broken up to relevant topic specific headings and all of those items currently present assigned accordingly. The criticism for the required mining practices for coal, which are well documented, might be more viable in a section titled "Coal Supply". There is a lot of coal under the ground, but to my knowledge there is no cost effective and still environmentally neutral way to extract it. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 16:37, 29 September 2008 (UTC) |
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[[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 00:33, 13 April 2018 (UTC) |
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==Neutrality Dispute== |
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This article is overwhelmingly a POV against clean coal technology. There are very few citations that support clean coal, but editors are quick to cite criticisms and expand these areas of the clean coal article. Therefore I am going to seek to expand the pro side to balance this article out. So many people claim neutrality and use POV under the guise to protect their own POV cloaked as the "truth of the matter" when this is hardly the case. |
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I started a new section: "Clean Coal and Health". So far, the article addresses coals effects on the environment, but not the effects on human health. I expect that I will expand on this, drawing largely from Alan Lockwood's reserch as outlined in "The Silent Epidemic: Coal and the Hidden Threat to Health". |
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Therefore, until we can come to consensus, I request that that neutrality dispute be left alone. |
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[[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 00:40, 13 April 2018 (UTC) |
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:The article is very well cited and just because you don't agree with the information cited does not make it unbalanced. The fact that you are actively looking for "pro clean coal" information is an example of your own inability to be objective. Find legitimate (academic, government, scientific) sources for new information to be added and no one will object to including them in the article. Removing information that you don't like simply because you don't like it is unacceptable. Please read [[WP:NPOV]] because you don't seem to understand it. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 17:47, 30 September 2008 (UTC) |
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::The objective is not to show any particular subject as having balanced pros and cons, but to simply reflect the reality of the current knowledge. Simply because Clean Coal still has significant cons does not mean that we have to somehow balance them with an equal number of significant pros. We simply have to list them as they are reported. --[[User:Skyemoor|Skyemoor]] ([[User talk:Skyemoor|talk]]) 18:26, 30 September 2008 (UTC) |
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I added another source referencing greenwashing, and I also added another sentence to the Clean Coal and Health section. |
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Might I suggest that the problem with the article is not just its POV, but rather that it covers too much in a short article. The article would be much better if it only covered clean coal technology and move the other issues to references at the bottom of the article. This includes global warming, carbon capture, and other environmental issues that are not specific to the burning of coal. These extraneous issues only confuse things and seem to be the source of the unbalanced POV. Environmental issues should be discussed elsewhere. However, the article does not include sufficient information about pollution that results from burning coal and how various clean coal technologies would eliminate these. In short, the article should remove the opinions and other subjects, and replace them with facts about the burning of coal. Wikipedia articles should be about facts, not be opinion pieces. [[User:Tyrerj|Tyrerj]] ([[User talk:Tyrerj|talk]]) 04:36, 16 October 2008 (UTC) |
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[[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 00:57, 20 April 2018 (UTC) |
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I discovered a pedantic embarrassment, and corrected one of my previous updates where I had misspelled "Sulfur". [[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 23:21, 3 May 2018 (UTC) |
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:Look up two headings... expanding on the "technologies" was suggested. As for the environmental issues, I strongly disagree. The concept of clean coal was the industry response to environmental concerns about coal burning and CO<sub>2</sub>. Additionally, with an unproven concept, that has a very specific goal of making coal more environmentally acceptable, both support and criticism of the concept are absolutely appropriate, just as if this were a viable technology we would see sections for both the strengths and shortcomings. [[User:Nitack|Nitack]] ([[User talk:Nitack|talk]]) 22:31, 17 October 2008 (UTC) |
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Expanded the information in the Clean Coal and the Environment section to include information regarding CO2 hazards. [[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 20:11, 10 May 2018 (UTC) |
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== Which Nation? == |
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I am removing the term "Supporters" because the facts should be presented objectively without introducing bias. Supporters<sup>[''[[wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch#Unsupported attributions|who?]]'']</sup> of clean coal use the Great Plains Synfuels plant to support the technical feasibility of carbon dioxide sequestration. Carbon dioxide from the coal gasification is shipped to Canada where it is injected into the ground to aid in oil recovery. |
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In section "Byproducts" it says |
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[[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 20:16, 10 May 2018 (UTC) |
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I thought that I had figured out how to link to targets within Wikipedia's page on writing better articles, but the link in my prior comment did not work properly. If someone could offer advice, I would appreciate it. [[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 20:21, 10 May 2018 (UTC) |
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I am also still unclear why this Wikipedia article can be edited using Visual Editing, but this Talk page cannot. If anyone on this talk page is able to edit it using Visual Editing, I would love to learn how it works. |
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Which nation is meant with ''nationally''. It's not clear from the context. If it's the US why is it emphasised here? |
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[[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 20:22, 10 May 2018 (UTC) |
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The potential effects of CO2 leakage covered aquifers, but I found a source that also discussed the PH changes hazards to marine life, so I modified the sentence to include both oceans and aquifers. [[User:P.E. Dantic|P.E. Dantic]] ([[User talk:P.E. Dantic|talk]]) 20:29, 10 May 2018 (UTC) |
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== Obviously deeply flawed == |
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==Merge== |
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The first sentence says it all: "Clean coal technology is an oxymoronic..." |
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No serious wikipedia article can start like this because the judgemental character of the word "oxymoronic" is plain. Given the importance of the topic, it is important to replace this article with a well-researched factual description of the term. <small><span class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Martinhenz|Martinhenz]] ([[User talk:Martinhenz|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Martinhenz|contribs]]) 05:36, 13 October 2008 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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Yes. This has been removed. I see nothing wrong with the factual statement that this is a term coined by the coal and/or electric power industry. [[User:Tyrerj|Tyrerj]] ([[User talk:Tyrerj|talk]]) 04:39, 16 October 2008 (UTC) |
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I have removed the “who” labels from the third paragraph. This is the introduction of the article. Although it is true, “coal industry groups” could be better identified and developed in the article, this does not make it a “weasel word” here. Greenpeace is identified.--[[User:Another-sailor|Another-sailor]] ([[User talk:Another-sailor|talk]]) 13:15, 4 November 2008 (UTC) |
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== Dead link in lede regarding timeframe == |
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Can someone find some (better?) sources about the potential timeframe? I searched for the cited quote [http://www.google.com/search?&q=site%3Acrikey.com.au+Brockway on google] and didn't find it, but there has to be something more definitive out there.... —[[User:AySz88|AySz88]][[Special:Contributions/AySz88|\]][[User talk:AySz88|<font color="#FF9966">^</font><font color="#FF6633">-</font><font color="#FF3300">^</font>]] 02:07, 13 November 2008 (UTC) |
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"clean" coal is [[oxymoronic]], in a similar way to "surgical warfare". |
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I'm inclined to agree. The opposition has failed to describe in detail how a high percentage of the pollutants can be kept out of our environment, even if we concede that it is ok for clean coal technology to cost several times the cost of dirty coal technology.[[User:Ccpoodle|Ccpoodle]] ([[User talk:Ccpoodle|talk]]) 00:30, 6 December 2008 (UTC) |
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More sections needed
[edit]This page is extremely weak on the very topics that it should cover. The topics it does cover already have their own pages (Clean coal, Environmental effects of coal, Carbon capture and sequestration, etc etc etc). Where is there a technical discussion about CCS? Oxy-fired coal combustion technology? Gasification technology, as it pertains to making coal cleaner? Underground coal thermal treatment? Chemical looping combustion with coal? None of these are mentioned, or are mentioned only in passing, and yet these are the topics that should make up the majority of the article's content - technologies used to mitigate negative environmental impacts of coal (i.e. to make coal "cleaner", whatever that means - and if you want to debate what that means, do it at the Clean coal page). Clean coal doesn't just mean putting a scrubber on your flue stack - there's a lot more to it, none of which is covered by the article. --Charlesreid1 (talk) 05:05, 13 October 2010 (UTC)
Suggest Adding Sections:
[edit]1. Pre-combustion Technologies
1a. Pre-combustion coal treatment
1b. Coal combustion additives
2. Combustion retrofit/alternative(s) technologies
2a. Oxy-fired coal combustion
2b. Coal gasification (including IGCC, supercritical gasification, plasma gasification, and other subjects related to gasification)
2c. Circulating fluidized bed combustion
2d. Chemical looping combustion
2e. In-situ utilization of coal (underground coal gasification and thermal treatment)
3. Post combustion Technologies
3a. Carbon dioxide capture and sequestration (CCS)
3b. Mercury capture
3c. Other Pollutants (SOx, NOx; should include discussion of how these are also affected by pre-combustion technologies and combustion alternatives or retrofit technologies being used)
NOTE: The focus of these sections would not be an overview or explanation of the topic, e.g., what chemical looping is, but rather it would emphasize the particular techniques used for chemical looping in the context of clean coal technology, and explain what the technology contributes to the concept of mitigating the negative environmental effects of coal.
Please suggest any additions/merges/removal.
--Charlesreid1 (talk) 18:17, 13 October 2010 (UTC)
What is a "token amount"??
[edit]From the opening paragraph:
"The expenditure has been unsuccessful to date in that there is not a single commercial scale coal fired power station in the US that captures and stores more than token amounts of CO2.[12]"
What is a "token amount"? The reference is for a political (and clearly biased) group, which shouldn't be considered legitimate. Charlesreid1 (talk) 04:46, 13 October 2010 (UTC)
"Token amount" seems like a weasel word. A more appropriate term would be "nominal amount" indicating that there is indeed some recapture of carbon, but not a meaningful amount. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE (talk) 07:46, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
Horrible Article
[edit]This is perhaps the most biased article I've ever read on Wikipedia. It reads like a sophomoric term paper arguing against clean coal. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.187.62.86 (talk) 20:52, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Is the article horribly biased or does the article reflect the fact that there is little to no supporting evidence for clean coal? It is funny that the article is constantly being visited and criticized by clean coal fanboys yet none of them produce any citations or evidence when asked. There are plenty of editors who regularly visit this article and attempt to keep it as neutral as possible. If the article has ample sourced and cited criticisms of the concept of clean coal, and no one is able to produce sourced and cited information of a supportive nature, that would indicate that the article is not biased, but that it reflects the current knowledge of the subject. So I will put the onus on you considering that you think the article is unbalanced. Find more credible sources that support clean coal so that as a team we can all edit this article and make it more accurate and reflect the current understanding of the topic. Nitack (talk) 22:48, 17 October 2008 (UTC)
- After having reviewed all of the posts on this particular article, I must admonish CrimsonSage and other contrarians for their attempts to present an opposing view. You might as well tell a Muslim the Mohammed did not leap into heaven on his horse from a rock in Jerusalem or tell a Christian that Jesus did not rise from his tomb. The entire AGW argument has become a religion to those who believe, and can never be disputed by mere facts. Unfortunately, that religious body has overflowed over into a technical article on coal that is full of opinion, but bereft of fact.
- Why would you admonish someone for having and expressing an opposing point of view? Are you saying this is a technical article? Because it isn't (please visit Wikipedia:Featured articles#Engineering and technology for examples of technical articles). Also, if you're going to admonish someone you should probably sign your comments. Charlesreid1 (talk) 05:13, 13 October 2010 (UTC)
The IPCC has, in its existence, been wrong in every projection of global warming they have made, normally by an order of magnitude. Worse, the only public discussions concerning IPCC findings are based on the politically biased management summary, which in itself is not supported by the underlying technical findings of the IPCC.
The invective being leveled at those who are attempting to modify the article into a reasonably unbiased presentation of facts is a reflection of the zealotry of those who wish to shove the AGW theory down everyones throats, at an enormous and unprecedented cost to the industrialized economies. FarNiente (talk) 00:08, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
- Except for the fact that nobody bases their opinion re climate change on IPCC predictions. You don't even need to look at statistics. It's patently obvious to anyone who goes outdoors regularly, and has been alive for more than a couple decades, that temperatures and weather events are becoming more extreme, not marginally but substantially,and the year over year change is very significant. Like I said, anyone who lives in this planet and pays attention to the weather, on any continent, has noticed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE (talk) 08:06, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
You're trolling, and trolling against the interests of your entire species. It's a shameful display. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.60.200.186 (talk) 14:17, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, but was that a factual rebuttal, a snappy repartee, a spirited rejoinder, or and ad hominem attack? As I previously stated, attacking the orthodoxy of a religion is a futile and pointless effort. All we can do, as technologists, is point out the errors often inherent in religious orthodoxies.
- I don't mind you believing in AGW, I just don't want you to destroy the world in an effort to force others to accept your religion. Al Queda is doing a fine job of that all by themselves.FarNiente (talk) 22:43, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
- I suspect a reason that this article is considered POV on both sides, as well as being generally of poor quality, is that it is based on a term that is both an umbrella term and a public relations term. If there is any good content it should be shifted to various pages (e.g. Carbon Capture and Storage, Combined Cycle etc.), and this page should be replaced with a disambiguation page. It is bizarre to see 'support' and 'criticism' for a phrase that is so vague and has many different meanings. Most of this article is meaningless, and hardly counts as encyclopedic content. Woood (talk) 11:07, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
- I concur to a point here. I agree with your point re: the public relations term by and large - I'm not sure that it needs to be specifically in the opening paragraph, but it does need to be given appropriate weight. I'm not sure that the phrase is really that vague in terms of common parlance - it describes, essentially, a broad spectrum of technologies that are being developed and utilised to reduce discharged toxins produced in coal-fired electricity plants. The term is vague because it is broad and, whether we like it or not, it is the term that is most commonly used in public discussions about potential future coal plants.
- I also agree that the article is in a pretty appalling state at the moment and in need of a major rewrite (which I am hoping to contribute to), but I think deletion is a bit defeatist. I think we should bear in mind that a lot of people will potentially use this article as a first port of call if they want to find out more about what somebody on TV has been referring to as 'clean coal'.
- My two pence on the public relations term (as someone who works in public relations, although not for coal companies...), is that although NPOV's link details a zinger of a 'clean coal' PR campaign it still doesn't really show that 'clean coal' is a PR term per se, rather than just an emotionally charged term that is also used in PR campaigns. A such it still has a whiff of POV to me. That said, these concerns do need to be clearly addressed and the bits I wrote about them are currently rather buried in the third para. While I wouldn't decribe my initial rewrite as perfect by any stretch, the subsequent edits seem to be a little heavy-handed (if broadly well intentioned). SupernautRemix (talk) 17:03, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
- Good word, Woood. The descriptive "Clean" is too subjective...like Clean and Dirty, Good and Bad. Some peoples' Dirty is Good, while some peoples' Clean is Bad. In that train, "Clean Coal" is an accurate description of the best practice in cleaning up the waste stream of coal, but it does not address the CO2 issue. From my point of view, which is that AGW is not proven or even indicated, the CO2 issue is a non-starter. —Preceding unsigned comment added by FarNiente (talk • contribs) 02:43, 3 January 2009 (UTC)
- FarNiente - I see your points here (although I don't personally agree with your views on AGW). However... as a lot of the criticism of 'clean coal' refers to CO2 emissions, which have been identified as a major sticking point (correctly in my view or incorrectly in your view) due to alleged global warming/climate change issues the point of view needs to be detailed, no? It is still a major issue no matter how people might feel about it's accuracy. Perhaps the CO2 issues should be detailed in a seperate section from other pollutant issues? Maybe separating it out into something like 'conventional pollutants' and 'carbon emissions'? SupernautRemix (talk) 17:03, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
- Regardless of points of view on global warming, the purpose of clean coal technologies is to address these environmental concerns (be they real or imaginary). The article ends up using clean coal technology as a soapbox on which to discuss issues that aren't directly relevant. I think the focus of the article needs to change substantially, and include more information about actual technologies. Anything else belongs on the Clean coal page. Charlesreid1 (talk) 05:37, 13 October 2010 (UTC)
- That's because clean coal is widely ridiculed as a facetious concept... It's hard to write on the topic from an informed position and not come out sounding one sided -- because there is effectively only the opposition side that's raising sound arguments. If you think this is off work, go read an article supporting clean coal and see what a blatant plug it is. In fact I don't think any such articles easiest that aren't paid promotional articles or industry websites. But if you are on a crusade to defend lost causes, why not go disparage the Flat Earth article or something? I gotta assume that you or an immediate family member works in the petrochemical or extraction industries, otherwise I can't fathom why you would jump in on the side of "clean coal". And that's coming from someone who's pro fracking lmao — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1010:B065:730A:B111:B256:1E8B:B6DE (talk) 07:52, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
Advertising
[edit]It’s no wonder that it seems so difficult to get this page to be NPV. The term “Clean coal technology” is an advertising phrase. If you search with Google the results come back for coal-industry sites and to sites objecting to the implication of the term. Wouldn’t it be better to include the content from this page on pages dealing with methods of using coal and methods of dealing with coal byproducts? Other parts obviously belong on a page on Global warming. I’m not so interested in this subject to get involved in “what goes where” but it just seems silly to be trying to twist this advertising phrase into a NPV page.--Another-sailor (talk) 14:51, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
- It is the name that was coined by the mining industry. It is also a complete misnomer given the inherent flaws in the concept. However, it has become the common name for attempts to make coal a more environmentally friendly product. I sincerely don't like the misleading nature of the name, but think that it needs to remain the same given that it is the widely used term for this concept.Nitack (talk) 20:20, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
- It is an industry term. Some people think there are flaws in the current implementations or proposals, others don't -- that's POV. Since we do not know all the ways to use coal, it is unrealistic to make a blanket statement and say there are inherent flaws in the concept. Especially since environmental impact is completely subjective.CrimsonSage (talk) 15:38, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
- Whether there are flaws in the concept or not, it is still an advertising or public relations term only used by coal industry promoters (including a current rash of politicians). Environmental impact is studied and has been verified. It is not “subjective”. And, why did you try to suggest there is question that coal is a fossil fuel? Are you confusing it with the attempts to get us to think that oil is not a remnant of organic material?--Another-sailor (talk) 16:03, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
- You are totally wrong. First it is NOT only used by coal industry promotees. Second, environmental impact is completely subjective and nowhere near agreed on by most scientists; to date, there is little to no science in the supposed claims which are largely politically motivated. Third, the idea that coal is a fossil fuel is a theory which has been falling out of favor with scientists for some time. You reverted my edits so that you could keep a negative POV (against Wikipedia policy). This article, as it stands, is a propaganda effort against clean coal. There is nothing neutral about this article, and your revert of my additions is against Wikipedia policy. If you have a problem with clean coal, you will need to put in in the critisims section.CrimsonSage (talk) 16:28, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
- CrimsonSage, You are apparently very confused about quite a number of things. To say that coal is not a fossil fuel is quite simply ignorant. Please see both the coal page and the fossil fuel page. Now if you have some source for your claims that coal is not a fossil fuel that is credible I am sure we would love to see it. However, with out a source this would be considered WP:Original Research and has no place in an article. You seem very fond of quoting Wikipedia policy on POV but are not very familiar with all the policies of Wikipedia. May I suggest you read them? I would also suggest you actually read and understand the terms you talk about before you make changes. That coal is a fossil fuel is an undisputed fact. Environmental impact is also not disputed by any reputable source. Even the coal industry recognizes the need to clean up their product... hence they put together this whole "clean coal" campaign. After all, why would we need to clean anything up if it were not dirty/hazardous in the first place? Nitack (talk) 18:57, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
- Nitack. No, I am not confused at all, actually. As I've explained earlier, the natrual coal synthesis process is a distraction from the idea of NPOV of this article and we can discuss all that later. And, that has nothing to do with my personal views or opinions. As mentioned, abiotic oil is rapidly becoming the accepted theory and abiotic coal processes have more recently been discussed and been put forth as theory. That is not the major part of contention in this article, however, and can be adressed at some future time (after the POV is restored to neutral tone). And please, don't be condecending. I've obviously read the Wikipedia policies and we all know 'exactly' what YOU are doing with this biased article against clean coal technology. By the way, there you go again with the phrase 'any reputable source' - in your view, any source that disagrees with your highly biased view must be 'non-reputable.' Again, you say 'even the coal industry' ... 'their product' ... etc. Just look at the way you talk, it's amazing. The fact is, many people, including those in the 'coal industry' (as you put it) believe that there are certain disadvantages to using coal in the way it is generally used today. But the hazards that you're concentrating on with coal, namely so-called anthopogenic climate change and global warming (and related junk science) are not the principle hazards. Many of the reasons why certain aspects of the combustion are even being discussed (like the idea of CO2 capture) are not because of good science and/or true hazards, but rather scientific ignorance and very bad, very totalitarian policy.CrimsonSage (talk) 23:03, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
- CrimsonSage, You are apparently very confused about quite a number of things. To say that coal is not a fossil fuel is quite simply ignorant. Please see both the coal page and the fossil fuel page. Now if you have some source for your claims that coal is not a fossil fuel that is credible I am sure we would love to see it. However, with out a source this would be considered WP:Original Research and has no place in an article. You seem very fond of quoting Wikipedia policy on POV but are not very familiar with all the policies of Wikipedia. May I suggest you read them? I would also suggest you actually read and understand the terms you talk about before you make changes. That coal is a fossil fuel is an undisputed fact. Environmental impact is also not disputed by any reputable source. Even the coal industry recognizes the need to clean up their product... hence they put together this whole "clean coal" campaign. After all, why would we need to clean anything up if it were not dirty/hazardous in the first place? Nitack (talk) 18:57, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
- You are totally wrong. First it is NOT only used by coal industry promotees. Second, environmental impact is completely subjective and nowhere near agreed on by most scientists; to date, there is little to no science in the supposed claims which are largely politically motivated. Third, the idea that coal is a fossil fuel is a theory which has been falling out of favor with scientists for some time. You reverted my edits so that you could keep a negative POV (against Wikipedia policy). This article, as it stands, is a propaganda effort against clean coal. There is nothing neutral about this article, and your revert of my additions is against Wikipedia policy. If you have a problem with clean coal, you will need to put in in the critisims section.CrimsonSage (talk) 16:28, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
- Whether there are flaws in the concept or not, it is still an advertising or public relations term only used by coal industry promoters (including a current rash of politicians). Environmental impact is studied and has been verified. It is not “subjective”. And, why did you try to suggest there is question that coal is a fossil fuel? Are you confusing it with the attempts to get us to think that oil is not a remnant of organic material?--Another-sailor (talk) 16:03, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
- It is an industry term. Some people think there are flaws in the current implementations or proposals, others don't -- that's POV. Since we do not know all the ways to use coal, it is unrealistic to make a blanket statement and say there are inherent flaws in the concept. Especially since environmental impact is completely subjective.CrimsonSage (talk) 15:38, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
I agree this article is a place where two opposing views are using disinformation through googeling political sources i.e. non-scientific to push their view. For example someone quoted a source that says scrubbers are used to remove particulate. Scubbers remove SO2, SO3, Hg(2+), etc to less than ppm levels ESPs are used to remove particulateJdavidab (talk) 23:29, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
"Umbrella term" vs. "Public relations" term
[edit]There's a debate on whether the first sentence of the Intro should refer to "Clean coal" as an umbrella term or a public relations term. I believe that it quite clearly fits the description of an umbrella term, as technologies such as gasification, IGCC and carbon capture and storage are in intense development and not just public relations-figments, so I'm reverting the sentence back to as I had it. However, I think we should ask if there's some kind of consensus on this - which do you think we should use? Simesa (talk) 20:07, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
- Of the two sources used as references for "clean coal" being a public relations term, one [1] is the home page of a wiki which doesn't support the conclusion and in fact has several "clean coal" articles itself (and a wiki can't meet WP:RS anyway), and the other [2] is a blog. Simesa (talk) 20:36, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
- It can and probably is, both an “Umbrella term" and a "Public relations term”. I would have said “advertising term” but – though also true – it may sound a bit negative. I think it is ok the way it is now (with my last edit). (But don’t try to tell me it is a “generic term”.) In industry when they talk about what is being done to eliminate or deal with waste products, they talk about specifics. “Clean coal” is always intended to evoke an emotional reaction. Can anyone show me one instance where the term is used otherwise?--Another-sailor (talk) 14:55, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
- Because "clean coal" is both a vague term and a term that promotes a particular point of view, I would describe it as a weasel word. Wikipedia's policy is to avoid weasel words, so describing "clean coal" in the introduction as an "umbrella term" without mentioning that it is a "public relations term" or a "weasel word" is inappropriate. See Wikipedia:Avoid weasel words.Woood (talk) 09:48, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
- I was just listening to an NPR discussion on clean coal technology. I have also read many articles in the news/science magazines/ online content and blogs. My opinion is that "Clean coal technology" has become a widely accepted term to simply mean "use of technology to minimize environmental impact while producing energy from coal". Therefore calling it a "Public relations term" is incorrect. It would be a "Public relations term" if it was a term used exclusively by a small group with vested interest (corporations, politicians). "Clean coal" can be considered an umbrella term just like the "green technology". I would strongly support removing the "Public relations term" description. V j (talk) 20:59, 5 December 2008 (UTC)
Log one in for keeping both terms on the page. Although I understand that this term has been industry jargon since the 1970's or so, most people's exposure to it is as a public relations term used heavily over the past few years. This article needs to strike a balance of opposing views with factual information to back it up. Info needs citations, and then it has to be correctly presented. Take the line, "Currently, the fleet of coal fired electric generating plants burn 70% cleaner than they did in 1970." I'm happy to see that it is cited, or else I'd take it right out; there is no single definition of 'cleaner'. Going back to the source, I can see the qualifications made on this claim, and make them clear in the article.--Fbfree (talk) 08:41, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
Neutrality Dispute
[edit]This article is overwhelmingly a POV against clean coal technology. There are very few citations that support clean coal, but editors are quick to cite criticisms and expand these areas of the clean coal article. Therefore I am going to seek to expand the pro side to balance this article out. So many people claim neutrality and use POV under the guise to protect their own POV cloaked as the "truth of the matter" when this is hardly the case.
Therefore, until we can come to consensus, I request that that neutrality dispute be left alone. (talk)
- The article is very well cited and just because you don't agree with the information cited does not make it unbalanced. The fact that you are actively looking for "pro clean coal" information is an example of your own inability to be objective. Find legitimate (academic, government, scientific) sources for new information to be added and no one will object to including them in the article. Removing information that you don't like simply because you don't like it is unacceptable. Please read WP:NPOV because you don't seem to understand it. Nitack (talk) 17:47, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
- I disagree. Citing Discover Magazine, The London Guardian, and several obviously biased web sites does not constitute a well-cited article. References like this only show what direction political winds are moving in, and say nothing technically significant. More scientific and peer-reviewed sources of information, such as the MIT "Future of Coal" report, are needed before you can characterize the article as well-cited. Charlesreid1 (talk) 04:54, 13 October 2010 (UTC)
- The objective is not to show any particular subject as having balanced pros and cons, but to simply reflect the reality of the current knowledge. Simply because Clean Coal still has significant cons does not mean that we have to somehow balance them with an equal number of significant pros. We simply have to list them as they are reported. --Skyemoor (talk) 18:26, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
Might I suggest that the problem with the article is not just its POV, but rather that it covers too much in a short article. The article would be much better if it only covered clean coal technology and move the other issues to references at the bottom of the article. This includes global warming, carbon capture, and other environmental issues that are not specific to the burning of coal. These extraneous issues only confuse things and seem to be the source of the unbalanced POV. Environmental issues should be discussed elsewhere. However, the article does not include sufficient information about pollution that results from burning coal and how various clean coal technologies would eliminate these. In short, the article should remove the opinions and other subjects, and replace them with facts about the burning of coal. Wikipedia articles should be about facts, not be opinion pieces. Tyrerj (talk) 04:36, 16 October 2008 (UTC)
- Look up two headings... expanding on the "technologies" was suggested. As for the environmental issues, I strongly disagree. The concept of clean coal was the industry response to environmental concerns about coal burning and CO2. Additionally, with an unproven concept, that has a very specific goal of making coal more environmentally acceptable, both support and criticism of the concept are absolutely appropriate, just as if this were a viable technology we would see sections for both the strengths and shortcomings. Nitack (talk) 22:31, 17 October 2008 (UTC)
- After having read this article, I actually felt that it was fairly decent at describing what the technologies do. In fact, I was thinking that the neutrality argument was claiming that it was too pro-clean coal until I read the comments. While it is true that the article can use some more statistics based on cost and pollution in relation to other energy sources, I felt that it more or less described exactly what the term has been coined to mean: an ongoing series of technologies designed to address public concern about the environmental impact of coal fired power plants. Just my 2 cents worth. --JKBodylski (talk) 09:41, 27 February 2009 (UTC)
The very language of this article is not befitting of a neutral point of view to the subject at hand. This ought to be obvious to anyone with a background in English equivalent to a high schooler. I found this article by searching for this topic on google and was so disgusted with the method of presentation, and childish antics of those defending this articles horrible use of language towards neutrality, that I felt compelled to come here and throw in my complaint. Have fun ruining wikipedia with your weighted language and then trying to pass it as scholarly material... And just for the record, I could not give a damn either way about this technology. I was merely curious. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.170.233.95 (talk) 22:42, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
The lead doesnot clearly summarize the scientific consensus, which is critical of "clean coal tech". Current lead is biased in favour of clean coal.Sum (talk) 07:25, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
oxymoronic
[edit]"clean" coal is oxymoronic, in a similar way to "surgical warfare". I'm inclined to agree. The opposition has failed to describe in detail how a high percentage of the pollutants can be kept out of our environment, even if we concede that it is ok for clean coal technology to cost several times the cost of dirty coal technology.Ccpoodle (talk) 00:30, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
- Yes it is. So far this is only mentioned in the article as a quote. Would be nice to find a good reference for it and add it more prominently... Splette :) How's my driving? 03:53, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
- As I've said above, this article isn't the place to debate whether clean coal is an oxymoron or not - that discussion belongs on the Clean coal page. This is the Clean coal technology (empahsis on technology) page, meaning it should address technologies used to mitigate the negative environmental effects of coal, regardless of whether that makes coal objectively judged as "clean".Charlesreid1 (talk) 05:25, 13 October 2010 (UTC)
Concerns
[edit]I am somewhat concerned that an article about a potentially major trend in global energy production (for better or for worse) is being mangled by POV ideologues on both sides. I would remind both pro- and anti- 'clean coal technology' editors that putting your points across in an amateurish fashion undermines your arguments rather than supports them. I also note that as everyone from the IEA and the EU to Greenpeace and anti-coal commentators refer openly to clean coal as a concept, it is quite clearly an umbrella term. While this may indeed be a misnomer, attempts to classify 'clean coal technology' as a public relations term are facile; the term, rightly or wrongly, is now common parlance. I will attempt to edit this article into something genuinely NPOV over the next couple of weeks. In the meantime, if I could remind all editors that a Wikipedia article is not a place to stand on your soapbox, however 'right' you opinions may be. SupernautRemix (talk) 15:16, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
- I agree. A week ago the article was way to the left, now it is way to the right. The article ought to cover multiple points of view. If nothing else, then there should be sections for "proponents" and "opponents". Mikiemike (talk) 04:11, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
- I note that Neutralpov has reverted the changes removing 'public relations term' from the initial paragraph, citing prior concensus. Having gone through the talk archive, I cannot see any consensus for keeping 'public relations term' in the article (quite the reverse, in fact), although I do appreciate that there are a number of sensible concerns about it being an inappropriate term. I do not wish to set off an editing war on this particular point and I appreciate that there is some strong feeling over this - so could someone please supply a valid reference for clean coal being a term that has been specifically contrived for use in public relations. SupernautRemix (talk) 12:12, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
- Note to all. I have drafted a new opening paragraph which I believe balances the different views on this subject that I intend to upload after Christmas. As this would be a major change, I would like to give a few details about the citations I have used so that people will be prepared for it (and so hopefully avoiding a full reversion to the current version). I have referenced the MIT 'Future of Coal' report for general information and setting out the stall for supporting clean coal. For specific criticisms I have referenced The Guardian, Greenpeace, Edinburgh University, the Discovery Channel and NBC. I should note that the reason for using one 'supportive' reference and five 'critical' references is purely that the MIT report is fairly comprehensive in its scope, while the anti references focus more on specifics. While I appreciate that these sources are not necessarily unbiased, I believe that they are reputable, at least in line with Wikipedia policies. If this rewrite is broadly accepted (subject to the usual tweaking), I will attempt to tidy up the rest of the article. SupernautRemix (talk) 14:15, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
- OK guys. Looks like things are progressing nicely - thanks to all who have and are continuing to contribute. I am a little concerned that we're attempting to cram a bit too much into the opening section and it's starting to become a bit unwieldly again. I was thinking of trying to summarise some of the new content and shifting the more detailed stuff into the appropriate section further down the page to keep the opening section accessible. Any thoughts? SupernautRemix (talk) 16:04, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
Very disappointing entry...
[edit]i got to this link from a very one-sided discussion at current.com. the basic tone there was a repeat of "clean coal is an oxymoron."
my expectations upon clicking the wikipedia link were to find a definitional discussion with explanations of what "clean coal" means and how it may be achieved, rather than an ongoing diatribe of how clean coal is impossible and forty-three ways that coal mining and coal-driven power generation can be nothing but pure evil to people and the earth's environment.
as such, i'm extremely disappointed with the content, tone and language of this entry.
i would strongly suggest that the pros and cons be linked FROM this page to TWO separate entries: one on the possible positive effects of coal "if used in a clean way" and the obvious counterpoint of why coal can't be clean under any circumstances.
as it stands, this appears to me to be a one-sided opinion piece against "clean coal", whatever "that" is. i'm tempted to google the term to see if ANY objective descriptions [which i expected to find here] exist anywhere on the web. i would have expected SOME representatives from the electric power industry to have offered definitions or examples of processes which could explain what "clean coal" means or could achieve.
i would like to suggest that the entry start with an overview of "what the term means" followed by implementations and processes which could/would/might achieve that goal or "standard" before taking the deep dive into how it's impossible.
Plusaf (talk) 21:47, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
- I understand wikipedia practice is to have For and Against for controversial topics on one page. It might be useful to have a link to the actual technology of Carbon capture and storage at the top of this page. That is the page to have the technology article. dinghy (talk) 05:27, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
- Part of the issue here is that clean coal technology isn't just about carbon capture, but also relates to the removal of other pollutants. Plusaf, you are right that this is a biased article. There are a lot of people who seem to want to sand on their soapboxes on this issue; to be honest, I reckon that sensible edits to this article are something of a losing battle.SupernautRemix (talk) 23:22, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- I would be willing to edit this entry to add the engineering perspective, which is likely to be more conceptually objective, but I'm not sure any edits made to this article will be spared the political knife. Environmentally friendly coal is a difficult project, but plants have the advantage of being stationary emissions producers. Unfortunately most environmental activists and firms focus on the carbon content of coal as inherently evil. Intelligent discussions are being bogged down here by unfair bias and reactionary bias. We need an admin moderated editing process to fix this political warfield.98.185.212.44 (talk) 07:48, 27 February 2009 (UTC)
Removed links
[edit]I could not find this article:
- ""Beyond Kyoto" Initiative". Retrieved 2009-03-29. Ikip (talk) 18:45, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
This site closed:
- "Uranium Information Centre paper on "Clean Coal" Technologies". Retrieved 2009-03-29.
Ikip (talk) 18:49, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
Merger
[edit]This article should be merged with Clean coal. The difference is not substantive, helpful, or indeed coherent Ashwinr (talk) 08:28, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
- (Moved section to bottom to maintain chronological order)
- I would be willing to go either direction for this article. The major problem is that this article is (or moreso, was) related to clean coal in general. The article should be restricted to describing the technologies involved in the production/use of clean coal. If the information available on this specific subject is small, then the content can be a section of the clean coal article. If there is a lot that can be discussed, then per WP:SIZE WP:SPINOUT WP:SS (take your pick) it is perfectly acceptable to to leave it a separate page.
- I suspect most of the actual technologies related to clean coal are worthy of their own articles, and this this article (or subsection) would become a rather brief summary of the technologies, with appropriate wikilinks allowing the reader to learn more as desired. Thus, this article would be short, and appropriate as a subsection. of the parent article. -Verdatum (talk) 21:20, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
- Agreed User:Verdatum, while the articles are not worthy of being separate as they stand, there is a very important distinction to be made. The Clean coal page is a place to explain/discuss what the term "clean coal" means (that being, ways of mitigating negative environmental effects of coal), whereas the Clean coal technology page is a place to discuss what specific technologies have been, or can be, used to mitigate these negative effects. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Charlesreid1 (talk • contribs) 05:31, 13 October 2010 (UTC)
Economics
[edit]The coal industry has responded by running advertising touting clean coal in an effort to counter negative perceptions, as well as by putting more than $50 billion towards the development and deployment of clean coal technologies, including carbon capture and storage.[11] The expenditure has been unsuccessful to date in that there is not a single commercial scale coal fired power station in the US that captures and stores more than token amounts of CO2. is odd. The reason tehre are no successful plants is because it is uneconomic. It is obviously uneconomic: given that there are no costs to emitting CO2, a plant that spends money stopping CO2 emissions can't compete with one that doesn't, unless it is subsidised William M. Connolley (talk) 17:58, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
Oh, and I think the $50 bn is very misleading if the context is CCS. Most of that cost will have gone on "conventional" emissions - particulates etc William M. Connolley (talk) 18:00, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
Needs discussion of supercritical (IGCC) burning techniques
[edit]Needs discussion of supercritical burning techniques. Integrated gasification combined cycle
Ocdnctx (talk) 19:25, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Just to be perfectly clear, IGCC and supercritical gasification are completely separate concepts. It sounds as though you are aliasing the two. That being said, I have already (section Talk:Clean_coal_technology#More_sections_needed above) given a recommended outline for an improved article that focuses more on clean coal technologies and less on the controversial topic of "cleanliness;" both IGCC and supercritical gasification would naturally belong in the combustion retrofit technologies section. Charlesreid1 (talk) 07:11, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
Technology image for this article
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Hello. My name is Robert and I am an official representative of Peabody Energy here on Wikipedia. I've been hired by Peabody to upload images owned by the company to Wikimedia Commons and seek to add relevant images into Wikipedia articles to offer useful illustration for the site's readers.
I've now uploaded around 20 images, for which copyright permission has been granted by Peabody. The copyrights for my most recent images are still in the process of being recorded by OTRS but in the meantime, I wanted to reach out here to see about placing one of the fully approved images in this article.
One of the images I've uploaded shows carbon capture technology, and I think it would be be a great addition for this article's "Technology" section:
My suggested caption is: "Carbon capture technology used at a coal mine in 2014."
If anyone is watching this page, will you look into adding this image for me? Thanks for reviewing this request. Robert PEnergy (talk) 18:28, 12 December 2014 (UTC)
- I don't see any significant conflict of interest here and am wondering if images shouldn't be treated more like self-citation COIs, where the user is allowed to make the edits themselves, unless someone tells them not to. The proposed caption doesn't even include the company's name, which I would also find appropriate if it described the location this equipment is at or its manufacturer. Also, I'm still not clear what I'm looking at. A better caption might be something like "Two _______ devices, which are used in carbon capture..." However that is all very nit-picky. My suggestion would be to post at COIN asking if you can add all 20 images to relevant articles without asking for permission for each one individually. Presuming you use common sense, I imagine it should be fine. CorporateM (Talk) 20:43, 18 January 2015 (UTC)
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Re-title?
[edit]The main article has been moved to coal pollution mitigation; I think it would be good to move this article to coal pollution mitigation technology or something similar. Thoughts? JzG and Roberttherambler commented there.
James F. (talk) 01:52, 6 February 2017 (UTC)
- Works for me. I don't know whether flue-gas desulfurization remains a separate topic. Guy (Help!) 07:38, 6 February 2017 (UTC)
- I have criticized the move to coal pollution mitigation because it was done without discussion. I think there should be a discussion about the proposed move of this article. Roberttherambler (talk) 11:38, 6 February 2017 (UTC)
Request for comment on proposed move
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It has been suggested this article be moved from Clean coal technology to Coal pollution mitigation technology. Should this move take place? See also Talk:Coal pollution mitigation. Roberttherambler (talk) 18:26, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
- No move - Between the two, clean coal technology is more the WP:COMMONNAME.
- (1) It is more frequent. A google count shows those words as 60% more commonly used (6.48M hits vs 4M), and as phrases it is even more so ("clean coal" 530K, "clean coal technology" 265K, "coal pollution" 69.6K , "coal pollution mitigation" 555, "coal pollution mitigation technology" only 8). Also, I particularly note the reference cites use the phrase "Clean coal".
- (2) It has less uses that seem WP:OFFTOPIC. The phrasing makes technology to clean more narrow than mitigation. The mitigation seems interpretable applicable to post-event or alternative reactions, so a few of the google hits were instead about climate change mitigation doing things unrelated to cleaning emissions of coal, such as increasing the use of buses.
- (3) Lack sufficient motivating reasons. The general preferences for status quo / stability, keeping things simple with the shorter name, and the WP:SURPRISE principle of least astonishment so if they type the 'clean coal' it leads to something of similar title says it titled 'Clean coal technology'.
- Cheers Markbassett (talk) 05:54, 17 February 2017 (UTC)
- No move - "clean coal technology" seems much clearer than "coal pollution mitigation technology". The shorter title is also simpler. The move seems unnecessary. --Nerd1a4i (talk) 16:26, 18 February 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose Move - Seems like there's a clear WP:COMMONNAME argument here. Granted "Clean coal technology" isn't actually "Clean", but that is the name by which it's known. NickCT (talk) 10:00, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
- Support move, per WP:GLOBALIZE, \or better still, merge. Coal pollution mitigation technology dates back to the 19th Century and the term "clean coal" is predominantly US, and to a lesser extent Australian - some of the biggest efforts are in China and India, and their industry is not trying to greenwash the product, I see no evidence this term is used there. The fact that the Big Coal marketing team call it this does not require us to do their PR for them. We should use a more technically correct term reflecting the length of time people have been trying to fix the problems with coal. Guy (Help!) 19:17, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
- Quite apart from anything else, "Clean coal technology" violates the "common name" guideline because it isn't one technology, it's half a dozen. "Coal pollution avoidance technologies" or something would be clearer, but I'm not entirely enthused by it. James F. (talk) 05:12, 21 February 2017 (UTC)
- I thikn mitigation is a more precise term than avoidance, I don't think it can be avoided, but that's just my view. Guy (Help!) 08:40, 21 February 2017 (UTC)
- Support move/merge Firstly, "clean coal" is less precise and less general. It is not a question of whether coal is actually clean or dirty, as mentioned above; that is a matter of irrelevant semantics. The "clean coal" title describes only part of the topic; it is not just a common name for the same concept. There is more to dealing constructively with coal than just getting clean coal or getting coal clean, no matter what the popular misconceptions might be. Secondly, if we do move it would in every way be natural and reasonable to reatain the clean coal title in a redir, so that "clean coal" searches direct readers to a proper context, thereby reducing the confusion of users that wind up at a clean coal article and find that only parts of their concerns are discussed, or that find that their clean coal title includes a lot of stuff that they had not bargained for. Those that get redirected to "Coal pollution mitigation technology", or possibly a section inside that article, might be slightly surprised, but only if they had never realised that there was more to the matter than clean coal, and the principle of least surprise does not apply to every instance where a reader learns something that had not occurred to him before; that after all is part of the function of an encyclopaedia. It is a bigger and more harmful surprise to find that the chosen title did not match the content of the article. JonRichfield (talk) 05:56, 21 February 2017 (UTC)
- Undecided Per many convincing arguments above. I'm leaning towards Merge, but the "Clean Coal" moniker is so popular, that regardless of the fact it is a misnomer, I am thinking the article should stay. L3X1 My Complaint Desk 22:52, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- We should definitely have a redirect and definitely reference it in the lede. But popularity? It's a PR term they have spent a fortune on pushing, but still a relatively new one. It's also very obviously inaccurate. Coal produces environmental damage from the mine to the smokestack. Habitat damage, health effects on miners, water pollution, pollution in transport, acid rain, radiation, CO2 - to say that burying the CO2 makes it "clean" is pretty silly. Guy (Help!) 00:07, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose move. WP policy is to title an article by what its subject is commonly called, not by what it logically ought to be called. Maproom (talk) 08:54, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
- That's not a policy. WP:NPOV is a policy, the MOS is only guidance. And in this case the term is only most common in the US, whereas much of the activity in the field is in China and India. Guy (Help!) 11:13, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
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This page is really inaccurate
[edit]Hi
This page is very inaccurate, 'clean coal' is marketing and lobbying term created by the advertising agency R&R Partners in 2008 to combat potential carbon emission regulations by the US Federal government. The page currently appears to confuse the marketing term with carbon capture and sequestration and scrubbers technologies. I will work on a new version of this page and transfer relevant information to that page. It also appears this page has quite a lot of COI editing which should be monitored.
Thanks
John Cummings (talk) 17:04, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
Clean coal and the environment
[edit]Hello,
I am currently working on a school research project and I am interested in expanding the section on "clean coal and the environment". There are currently a few places that need to be cited, and the sentences that use the word "Supporters" make the section seem like it is showing a one-sided stance rather than explaining the opposing views. If anyone has feedback or suggestions, I would appreciate it.
Thanks, P.E. Dantic (talk) 02:23, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
Where the paragraph addresses Clean Coal marketing, I added a reference to the term "Clean Coal" being used an example of Greenwashing. I also added a link to the Greenwashing page, and cited the article "Greenwashing Coal". P.E. Dantic (talk) 02:29, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
I found information regarding how the term "Clean" originated, so I added this information near the beginning of the article, to say that the term "Clean Coal" started off by describing coal that was washed (or cleaned) at the mine; whereas now, the term also encompasses Carbon Capturing and Storage (CCS). I also added a citation for where I found this information: Alan Lockwood's book, "The Silent Epidemic".
P.E. Dantic (talk) 00:33, 13 April 2018 (UTC)
I started a new section: "Clean Coal and Health". So far, the article addresses coals effects on the environment, but not the effects on human health. I expect that I will expand on this, drawing largely from Alan Lockwood's reserch as outlined in "The Silent Epidemic: Coal and the Hidden Threat to Health". P.E. Dantic (talk) 00:40, 13 April 2018 (UTC)
I added another source referencing greenwashing, and I also added another sentence to the Clean Coal and Health section. P.E. Dantic (talk) 00:57, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
I discovered a pedantic embarrassment, and corrected one of my previous updates where I had misspelled "Sulfur". P.E. Dantic (talk) 23:21, 3 May 2018 (UTC)
Expanded the information in the Clean Coal and the Environment section to include information regarding CO2 hazards. P.E. Dantic (talk) 20:11, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
I am removing the term "Supporters" because the facts should be presented objectively without introducing bias. Supporters[who?] of clean coal use the Great Plains Synfuels plant to support the technical feasibility of carbon dioxide sequestration. Carbon dioxide from the coal gasification is shipped to Canada where it is injected into the ground to aid in oil recovery. WP:WEASELTERMS P.E. Dantic (talk) 20:16, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
I thought that I had figured out how to link to targets within Wikipedia's page on writing better articles, but the link in my prior comment did not work properly. If someone could offer advice, I would appreciate it. P.E. Dantic (talk) 20:21, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
I am also still unclear why this Wikipedia article can be edited using Visual Editing, but this Talk page cannot. If anyone on this talk page is able to edit it using Visual Editing, I would love to learn how it works. Thanks, P.E. Dantic (talk) 20:22, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
The potential effects of CO2 leakage covered aquifers, but I found a source that also discussed the PH changes hazards to marine life, so I modified the sentence to include both oceans and aquifers. P.E. Dantic (talk) 20:29, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
Merge
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