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What tour?
What tour?
*Clarified '''[[User:YellowMonkey|<font color="GoldenRod">YellowMonkey</font>]]''' (''[[User_talk:YellowMonkey#Straw_poll_for_selecting_photos_of_cyclists_at_the_2009_Tour_Down_Under|<font color="#FA8605">click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!</font>]]'') 01:43, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
*Clarified '''[[User:YellowMonkey|<span style="color:GoldenRod;">YellowMonkey</span>]]''' (''[[User_talk:YellowMonkey#Straw_poll_for_selecting_photos_of_cyclists_at_the_2009_Tour_Down_Under|<span style="color:#FA8605;">click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!</span>]]'') 01:43, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
''Australia dropped Brown, who had scored 73 runs at 24.33 in three innings...''
''Australia dropped Brown, who had scored 73 runs at 24.33 in three innings...''


"at 24.33" what? Per inning, or over, or what?
"at 24.33" what? Per inning, or over, or what?
*Linked to the batting average. '''[[User:YellowMonkey|<font color="GoldenRod">YellowMonkey</font>]]''' (''[[User_talk:YellowMonkey#Straw_poll_for_selecting_photos_of_cyclists_at_the_2009_Tour_Down_Under|<font color="#FA8605">click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!</font>]]'') 01:43, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
*Linked to the batting average. '''[[User:YellowMonkey|<span style="color:GoldenRod;">YellowMonkey</span>]]''' (''[[User_talk:YellowMonkey#Straw_poll_for_selecting_photos_of_cyclists_at_the_2009_Tour_Down_Under|<span style="color:#FA8605;">click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!</span>]]'') 01:43, 23 February 2009 (UTC)


''The match started amid clear weather, a far cry from the previous Ashes Test at the ground in 1938, which was abandoned without a ball being bowled. The outfield was also smooth and green, a far cry from the Second World War when it was cratered from Germany bombing raids.''
''The match started amid clear weather, a far cry from the previous Ashes Test at the ground in 1938, which was abandoned without a ball being bowled. The outfield was also smooth and green, a far cry from the Second World War when it was cratered from Germany bombing raids.''


Two "a far cry"s don't sound very good.
Two "a far cry"s don't sound very good.
*done '''[[User:YellowMonkey|<font color="GoldenRod">YellowMonkey</font>]]''' (''[[User_talk:YellowMonkey#Straw_poll_for_selecting_photos_of_cyclists_at_the_2009_Tour_Down_Under|<font color="#FA8605">click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!</font>]]'') 01:43, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
*done '''[[User:YellowMonkey|<span style="color:GoldenRod;">YellowMonkey</span>]]''' (''[[User_talk:YellowMonkey#Straw_poll_for_selecting_photos_of_cyclists_at_the_2009_Tour_Down_Under|<span style="color:#FA8605;">click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!</span>]]'') 01:43, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
''Lindwall then struck Edrich on the hand with a short ball, provoking angry heckling from spectators who compared him to Harold Larwood.''
''Lindwall then struck Edrich on the hand with a short ball, provoking angry heckling from spectators who compared him to Harold Larwood.''


Why did they compare him to Larwood?
Why did they compare him to Larwood?
*Explained '''[[User:YellowMonkey|<font color="GoldenRod">YellowMonkey</font>]]''' (''[[User_talk:YellowMonkey#Straw_poll_for_selecting_photos_of_cyclists_at_the_2009_Tour_Down_Under|<font color="#FA8605">click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!</font>]]'') 01:43, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
*Explained '''[[User:YellowMonkey|<span style="color:GoldenRod;">YellowMonkey</span>]]''' (''[[User_talk:YellowMonkey#Straw_poll_for_selecting_photos_of_cyclists_at_the_2009_Tour_Down_Under|<span style="color:#FA8605;">click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!</span>]]'') 01:43, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
''After the day's play, Washbrook shouted Hassett a drink.''
''After the day's play, Washbrook shouted Hassett a drink.''


"shouted Hassett a drink"?
"shouted Hassett a drink"?
* "Shouted" means buying something for a mate, usually food/drink at a restaurant/pub or tickets to a movie and whatnot. '''[[User:YellowMonkey|<font color="GoldenRod">YellowMonkey</font>]]''' (''[[User_talk:YellowMonkey#Straw_poll_for_selecting_photos_of_cyclists_at_the_2009_Tour_Down_Under|<font color="#FA8605">click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!</font>]]'') 01:43, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
* "Shouted" means buying something for a mate, usually food/drink at a restaurant/pub or tickets to a movie and whatnot. '''[[User:YellowMonkey|<span style="color:GoldenRod;">YellowMonkey</span>]]''' (''[[User_talk:YellowMonkey#Straw_poll_for_selecting_photos_of_cyclists_at_the_2009_Tour_Down_Under|<span style="color:#FA8605;">click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!</span>]]'') 01:43, 23 February 2009 (UTC)


[[User:Noble Story|Noble Story]] ([[User talk:Noble Story|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Noble Story|contributions]]) 11:02, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
[[User:Noble Story|Noble Story]] ([[User talk:Noble Story|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Noble Story|contributions]]) 11:02, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
:Well, looks like this passes GA, then. [[User:Noble Story|Noble Story]] ([[User talk:Noble Story|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Noble Story|contributions]]) 11:02, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

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Australia had proceeded through the first two months of the tour undefeated.

What tour?

Australia dropped Brown, who had scored 73 runs at 24.33 in three innings...

"at 24.33" what? Per inning, or over, or what?

The match started amid clear weather, a far cry from the previous Ashes Test at the ground in 1938, which was abandoned without a ball being bowled. The outfield was also smooth and green, a far cry from the Second World War when it was cratered from Germany bombing raids.

Two "a far cry"s don't sound very good.

Lindwall then struck Edrich on the hand with a short ball, provoking angry heckling from spectators who compared him to Harold Larwood.

Why did they compare him to Larwood?

After the day's play, Washbrook shouted Hassett a drink.

"shouted Hassett a drink"?

Noble Story (talkcontributions) 11:02, 21 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Well, looks like this passes GA, then. Noble Story (talkcontributions) 11:02, 23 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]