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'''Important Note:''' The most appropriate image to use at the top of this article has been a highly controversial issue with many valid viewpoints. The current lead image was chosen by [[Special:Diff/1025147250#RfC:_Lead_image|an RfC]] on 5/26/2021. |
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The page in its current form mentions without sources the supposed existence of the Old English word ''wermann''. This word is, unless I'm gravely mistaken, completely unattested (try finding it on Wiktionary, for example) and possibly fabricated. Unless a good source can be found for the existence of ''wermann'' as an OE word (and a cursory internet search reveals only discussions pondering where on earth it supposedly came from), its mention ought to be removed. [[User:AutisticCatnip|AutisticCatnip]] ([[User talk:AutisticCatnip|talk]]) 04:07, 28 March 2024 (UTC) |
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I honestly think we should use an anatomy picture for the lead. It would serve to educate much better than a picture of a nude women or a drawing. I certainly would appreciate finding a good one. [[User:YVNP|YVNP]] ([[User talk:YVNP|talk]]) 00:47, 24 April 2009 (UTC) |
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:Before we continue, note that I'm assuming you're talking about some sort of anatomical diagram or illustration, rather than a photo of a dissected woman, which would be needlessly shocking. For such a diagram or illustration to vary from a drawing of a nude woman, it would have to either display only part of the body, or else display internal anatomy typically hidden by the skin. |
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:That being the case, I disagree. The articles on other physical objects have a lead image which shows an external view of the thing under discussion. Ie., in the article on [[Skyscraper]], one wouldn't expect the lead image to be a floorplan, a fire escape route drawing, or a diagram explaining how a [[tuned mass damper]] works. Those, after all, aren't the most important and immediately obvious visible details of a skyscraper. One would instead expect an exterior photo of a skyscraper, preferably with other objects to provide scale since a defining feature of a skyscraper is its size and height. Similarly with an "object" like a human being, such as a [[Woman]] or [[Man]], the relevant lead image is one of that specific thing, preferably showing it to scale, but also - and this is the important thing for this article - showing its significant or defining features. Since for [[Man]] and [[Woman]] the defining features would be those aspects of the body which display [[sexual dimorphism]], a nude is required in order to be fully informative. The lead image of any article referring to a commonly encountered object should show that object as it may appear if/when encountered. |
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:Now, whether the lead image should be a work of art, a photo, or a photo of a work of art, or even a diagram, is open for debate, and each of these two articles has varied over the past 3-4 years between those types of image, iirc. At one point each article was using the [[Voyager]] probe diagrams of man and woman. But what seems settled is that the lead image for each should display a full body nude. The internal anatomy is important, and does have its image - but internal anatomy is not sufficiently descriptive of the differences between the two most common human sexes, as the reader is likely to encounter them. -[[User:Kasreyn|Kasreyn]] ([[User talk:Kasreyn|talk]]) 18:51, 2 June 2009 (UTC) |
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::Note, however, that the object in question here (woman) is normally NOT nude when encountered in the world. As the reader is likely to encounter "man" and "woman," they are likely to be clothed. Furthermore, I'm curious where it is "settled" that the images need to be fully nude? There are at least as many comments on the talk pages complaining about the nude images as there are supporting them. Is there some other discussion elsewhere where this issue was "settled?" [[User:Dunncon13|Dunncon13]] ([[User talk:Dunncon13|talk]]) 14:55, 12 February 2010 (UTC) |
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:::I think we definitely need a new image. Imagine a school child opening up the "woman" page at school, and then seeing this image. In many places it would be "not safe for work". I'm not arguing for censorship or anything, but at the very least, this picture could be moved down, and a picture of a woman wearing clothes could be added. This is one of the articles where you wouldn't expect to find such an image, especially at the front, and there are many more suitable images. This image doesn't add anything to the article that another might not. Can we get some kind of discussion or consensus on this? If not, I will go ahead and replace it if it's apparently no one cares. [[User:(npcserver)|(npcserver)]] ([[User talk:(npcserver)|talk]]) 05:35, 27 June 2009 (UTC) |
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:You appear to be correct. For those interested, here are some such discussions [https://www.reddit.com/r/AskHistorians/comments/4psymv/in_english_when_was_wereman_replaced_by_man_and/][https://www.reddit.com/r/OldEnglish/comments/sa3n2w/who_invented_the_word_werman/][https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=26574747]. I've gone and made an edit ([[Special:Diff/1216741813]]) which replaces the specious ''wermann'' with ''wer'' (apparently the most common OE word for male/man) and {{wt|ang|wǣpnedmann}}, which is attested occasionally as the analogue to ''wifmann''. I hope this looks acceptable. |
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Why should it be a scientific picture? The idea of "woman" is so much more than a scientific idea. A diagram would be the worst thing I would want to see. [[Special:Contributions/129.67.138.111|129.67.138.111]] ([[User talk:129.67.138.111|talk]]) 16:16, 10 October 2009 (UTC) |
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:I think the Dictionary.com link is rotten, as it no longer contains the information we're citing it for. If anyone has access to the OED or another source which verifies this etymology, please verify this text if possible. –[[User:RoxySaunders|RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️]] ([[User talk:RoxySaunders|💬]] • [[Special:Contributions/RoxySaunders|📝]]) 18:41, 1 April 2024 (UTC) |
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== Why does this page use [[extended confirmed protection]] even though [[Man]] uses semi-protection only? == |
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Could someone find a picture where the genitals aren't shaved? If this is supposed to represent a typical woman (I don't even want to start the race debate) then shouldn't the picture be free of obvious alterations like tattoos, piercings, and obvious shaving? [[User:Pescofish|Pescofish]] ([[User talk:Pescofish|talk]]) 08:02, 18 October 2009 (UTC) |
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::I thought the old image "Birth of Venus 1862 by Eugène Emmanuel Amaury-Duval" was fine. |
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[[User:NewYorkStyledCheesecakes|NewYorkStyledCheesecakes!]] ([[User talk:NewYorkStyledCheesecakes|talk]]) 09:20, 4 November 2009 (UTC) |
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<span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/69.141.25.33|69.141.25.33]] ([[User talk:69.141.25.33|talk]]) 23:24, 25 October 2009 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:::I agree. Shaved genitals? Give me a break![[Special:Contributions/71.134.42.129|71.134.42.129]] ([[User talk:71.134.42.129|talk]]) <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|undated]] comment added 18:35, 21 December 2009 (UTC).</span><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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::::The "frau" image has repeatedly failed to gain consensus on this page. It should not have been added to the article in the absence of that consensus. When was "Birth of Venus" removed? - <span style="font-family: cursive">[[User:Nunh-huh|Nunh-huh]]</span> 19:12, 21 December 2009 (UTC) |
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... [[User:Usersnipedname|Usersnipedname]] ([[User talk:Usersnipedname|talk]]) 08:20, 29 March 2024 (UTC) |
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:GENSEX enforcement vs. generic vandalism. [[User:Dronebogus|Dronebogus]] ([[User talk:Dronebogus|talk]]) 12:55, 12 April 2024 (UTC) |
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We need to get rid of that silly symbol as the lead image. i'm sure the romans found it very obviously to be a women but it's not really very helpful for illustration. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/83.147.147.237|83.147.147.237]] ([[User talk:83.147.147.237|talk]]) 20:51, 29 November 2009 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:Also because trolls and bigots perseverate more on people [[assigned male at birth]] who are either gay/bi/pan or trans. Transwomen are targeted more than transmen and thus this article gets more trolls. Here's an article: [https://www.mprnews.org/story/2013/04/28/gays-vs-lesbians-acceptance] [[User:EvergreenFir|'''<span style="color:#8b00ff;">Eve</span><span style="color:#6528c2;">rgr</span><span style="color:#3f5184;">een</span><span style="color:#197947;">Fir</span>''']] [[User talk:EvergreenFir|(talk)]] 16:03, 12 April 2024 (UTC) |
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:The page has had ECP since July 2023. At that time the article and talk had some targeted vandalism from sockpuppets that had gamed autoconfirmation. –[[User:RoxySaunders|RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️]] ([[User talk:RoxySaunders|💬]] • [[Special:Contributions/RoxySaunders|📝]]) 04:54, 31 July 2024 (UTC) |
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== A new departure required for this article (and others) == |
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:::::I love this picture. This is perfect. Please don't change it. [[User:Gandydancer|Gandydancer]] ([[User talk:Gandydancer|talk]]) 14:31, 13 January 2010 (UTC) |
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Following the Tickle v Giggle judgement should this article be reframed in its entirety? |
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Please, please, please change this image. If a picture of a nude woman is absolutely necessary, make it an image which shows the female body in its natural state. Shaved genitals should be a lead picture on a page about warped body image, not one that supposedly represents Woman. [[User:Auntiecomstock|Auntiecomstock]] ([[User talk:Auntiecomstock|talk]]) 21:50, 20 January 2010 (UTC) |
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[https://www.theguardian.com/society/article/2024/aug/23/roxanne-tickle-v-giggle-for-girls-transgender-woman-wins-discrimination-case-against-women-female-only-app-ntwnfb The Guardian points out:] |
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:Oh! I agree! Thanks so much for your post, Auntie. I'm afraid I did not look closely enough. I thought that they had just used shadow...I should have enlarged the image. I do prefer nude. BTW, I am a 67 year old granny... [[User:Gandydancer|Gandydancer]] ([[User talk:Gandydancer|talk]]) 22:09, 20 January 2010 (UTC) |
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The Australian Human Rights Commission acted as a friend of the court. Barrister Zelie Heger told the court that sex was no longer defined in the Sex Discrimination Act but that “importantly the act recognises that a person’s sex is not limited to [being a man or a woman]”. |
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== Okay to have list of women == |
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This doesn’t just have repercussions in the jurisdiction of the court that made the judgement |
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I find it useful to see a list. [[User:Lois Guardener|Lois Guardener]] ([[User talk:Lois Guardener|talk]]) 18:24, 21 August 2009 (UTC) |
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[https://www.bbc.com/news/articles/c07ev1v7r4po The Beeb draws attention to the significance of this judgement]: |
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Is there also a list of men? |
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“So today’s ruling in favour of Tickle will be significant for all the 189 countries where CEDAW has been ratified - from Brazil to India to South Africa. |
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== What sexism looks like. == |
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When it comes to interpreting international treaties, national courts often look at how other countries have done it. |
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Compare this article word for word with the equivalent article for the word "man." The parts where one gender is trivialized and one gender is normalized... that is where sexism lives. |
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Australia’s interpretation of the law in a case that got this level of media attention is likely to have global repercussions. |
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Then rewrite it. A man probably wrote both articles. |
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If over time a growing number of courts rule in favour of gender identity claims - it is more likely that other countries will follow suit.” |
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== Karyotype == |
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Is the term ‘Woman’ as has been widely understood and as reflected in this article (possibly even as a distinct definition) becoming anachronistic? |
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The Kayotype picture mentions the XX-pattern to be formed in the 23rd week of gestation. |
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As far as I know it is there at the conception, or isn't it? |
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[[User:Lukewarmbeer|Lukewarmbeer]] ([[User talk:Lukewarmbeer|talk]]) 08:52, 24 August 2024 (UTC) |
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:The judgment is from a single Australian court and legal definitions don't necessarily override biological, social, or historical understandings of womanhood. The article currently presents multiple viewpoints, including both traditional and evolving definitions of womanhood. Legal definitions serve specific purposes and may not encompass the full complexity of biological, social, and cultural understandings of womanhood. The concept of woman has deep cultural, historical, and biological roots that extend beyond legal definitions. |
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== Blanked talk page (with archives?) == |
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:Wikipedia should aim to present mainstream knowledge and established facts. A single court case does not warrant an immediate overhaul of a fundamental concept. The article should reflect various perspectives, including traditional definitions alongside emerging views. Drastically changing the article based on one legal decision is overreactive. |
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:Major changes should be based on broad scholarly and societal consensus, not single events. The current article already includes information on gender identity and the evolving understanding of sex and gender in the opening section. Adding information about this court case and its implications could be done without completely reframing the entire article. The implications of this ruling might be better covered in a separate article or section, rather than reframing the entire concept of woman. [[User:ViolanteMD|ViolanteMD]] ([[User talk:ViolanteMD|talk]]) 01:57, 26 August 2024 (UTC) |
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::That's a great response. Thanks for taking the time. I'm broadly very with you but I think, given the 'lean' that what we consider to be RS have it's a discussion we need to have. |
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::Let's see if any other editors have a view. [[User:Lukewarmbeer|Lukewarmbeer]] ([[User talk:Lukewarmbeer|talk]]) 08:24, 26 August 2024 (UTC) |
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:::It's not even clear what would need to be changed, but regardless, I agree with ViolanteMD that it is not warranted to reframe anything at this time. The content in the article is based on reliable sources on the topic, of which there are extremely many; a court case isn't going to impact that much. <span style="font-family:Palatino">[[User:Crossroads|'''Crossroads''']]</span> <sup>[[User talk:Crossroads|-talk-]]</sup> 22:33, 26 August 2024 (UTC) |
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:::It's not exactly a revolutionary position either. For many legal purposes, gender/sex is defined as something that can be reassigned, rather than what you were born as. [[User:Anywikiuser|Anywikiuser]] ([[User talk:Anywikiuser|talk]]) 13:51, 28 August 2024 (UTC) |
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== Usage of phrasing from the article of trans woman in this article == |
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In December of 2009, someone blanked this talk page which removed all the links to the archives. How is this supposed to be correctly restored? The last page with links to archives is: [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:Woman&oldid=329259167 Revision 329259167]. [[User:Jeff Carr|Jeff Carr]] ([[User talk:Jeff Carr|talk]]) 17:55, 21 January 2010 (UTC) |
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@[[User:Crossroads|Crossroads]] |
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:I reinserted <nowiki>{{talkheader}}</nowiki>. -- [[User:Basilicofresco|<span style="font-variant:small-caps; font-family:Verdana; font-size:1em; color:green">Basilicofresco</span>]] ([[User talk:Basilicofresco|msg]]) 12:13, 2 March 2010 (UTC) |
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The phrasing of {{xt|[[Transgender women]] are women who were [[sex assignment|assigned male at birth]] and have a female [[gender identity]]}} is the phrasing used on the article for [[trans woman]] and is the result of a longstanding consensus and discussion. Attempts to that definition should be made on the article [[trans woman]], not this article. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 03:41, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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==Getting ridiculous== |
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Is Wikipedia looking for attention or what the hell are these new nude photos for? And don't give me crap about not censored.. No need to censor but cmon.. Children use this site! Imagine your kid going to Wikipedia from school and his/her teacher showing up.. Way to get Wikipedia banned! --[[Special:Contributions/79.13.175.167|79.13.175.167]] ([[User talk:79.13.175.167|talk]]) 19:24, 10 February 2010 (UTC) |
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:There's no rule that says we have to copy the exact wording from another article. The point to be made in this paragraph is that gender assignment doesn't necessarily align with gender identity. "[[Trans women]] have a [[gender identity]] that does not align with their [[sex assignment]]" is true, verifiable, concise, and relevant to the specific point. If the point of the paragraph were to insist that trans women really are True™ women, despite the contrary POV held by some people, then we might want to reconsider that, but I think this is enough for the actual point of the paragraph. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 03:56, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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"cmon" is such good logic. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/71.231.28.185|71.231.28.185]] ([[User talk:71.231.28.185|talk]]) 00:29, 12 February 2010 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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::Given the multiple 200KB RfCs related to this phrase (newcomers, see [[Talk:Trans woman/Archive 4]], [[Talk:Trans woman/Archive 10]], [[Talk:Trans woman/Definitions]] and bring a snack) it seems prudent for this article to reflect the consensus—rather, the status-quo in the absence of consensus—at [[Trans woman]]. The validity of trans womanhood within Wikivoice is, if not a shut case, then something I'm very tired of reading centralized discussions about. –[[User:RoxySaunders|RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️]] ([[User talk:RoxySaunders|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/RoxySaunders|stalk]]) 04:24, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::An RFC about what to say in the [[MOS:FIRST]] sentence of a different article has no bearing on what to say elsewhere in a different article. |
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:::Your comment has reminded me of a discussion earlier this year (probably related to [[WP:LOCALCON]]) about whether editors have an RFC on one page and then assert that the decision at Article A applies to all articles. I was skeptical that editors actually tried that, but you have just proven that they do. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 05:03, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::::This sentence is [[WP:SUMMARY|summarizing]] a sub-topic, (and could be [[WP:SYNC]]ed using an [[Template:Excerpt|Excerpt]]) if we weren't also pluralizing and combining it with a definition of Intersex), I think the phrasing at the target article is definitely relevant (if not binding). I think those past discussions are relevant here, if not binding. –[[User:RoxySaunders|RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️]] ([[User talk:RoxySaunders|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/RoxySaunders|stalk]]) 14:02, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::This (half) sentence in the lead connects to (most of) a single paragraph in the body, which does not really feel like a [[WP:SUMMARY]] situation to me. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 21:44, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::@[[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] That's true that there's no rule for it having to do that, however I see no reason for it '''not''' to mirror the phrasing from its own article. |
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::The thing with that sentence is that it doesn't establish the relationship to the topic, and can leave readers confused about the relation to the article. Establishing the relationship to the article of a category of woman is far more clear than the current version. |
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::Additionally, I don't see much underlying reasoning for removing it other than the belief that they AREN'T. Which, {{xt|The relative prominence of each viewpoint among Wikipedia editors or the general public is irrelevant and should not be considered.}} (from WP:UNDUE). The point of the paragraph is to highlight the existence of two specific types of women and provide a definition for them. |
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::Your sentence proposal of "Trans women have a gender identity that does not align with their sex assignment" doesn't work as a definition, because the definition form would therefore be "(someone) who has a gender identity that doesn't align with their sex assignment" which is too broad. |
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::Also for RoxySaunders' reasoning that it 'makes it semantically clear that we are defining a term, not merely making an observation.'. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 10:11, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::I don't think this article needs to define trans women. I think it needs to provide information about trans women. |
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:::BTW, what you have called "my sentence proposal" is what the article said before your recent efforts to change it. 10 years ago, trans women were barely name-checked in the lead as an example of women who could not give birth. Five years ago, this article said "Some women are [[Trans women|trans]] (those who have a male [[sex assignment]] that does not align with their [[gender identity]]), or [[intersex]] (those born with sexual characteristics that do not fit typical notions of male or female)." For a while, it said "Trans women are those who...". The "have" language appeared soon after that. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 22:08, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::::@[[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] Well there's not much point in providing information about trans women to the readers if we dont even say what trans women are, definitionally speaking. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 23:49, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:I prefer the explicit {{xt|[Trans/intersex] women are women who...}} forms. Given the apparent challenge these identities present toward more simplistic models of sex and gender, their respective womanhood does bear repeating. The perceived redundancy in {{xt|[[Transgender women]] are women who...}} makes it semantically clear that we are defining a term, not merely making an observation. This is helpful for orienting lay readers who may initially misunderstand "transgender women" as "AFAB transgender people". –[[User:RoxySaunders|RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️]] ([[User talk:RoxySaunders|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/RoxySaunders|stalk]]) 04:31, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:I stand by what I said in my edit summary, which is that {{tq|"women are women" is redundant/poor writing}}. The lead sentence of [[trans woman]] and the sentences here on trans women serve different purposes; one defines the topic of that article, while the other describes a subset of the people described in this article. It is already established in this article that women are being talked about. |
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:It is not the case that {{tq|it doesn't establish the relationship to the topic}}; the term 'trans women' contains the word 'women' already. Nor will readers possibly be confused by thinking of AFAB transgender people, as it immediately defines the term with {{tq|Transgender women were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity}}. |
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:My [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Woman&diff=1245603585&oldid=1245455891 edit] also slimmed down "intersex women are women who...", for the same reason. <span style="font-family:Palatino">[[User:Crossroads|'''Crossroads''']]</span> <sup>[[User talk:Crossroads|-talk-]]</sup> 22:03, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::@[[User:Crossroads|Crossroads]] How is it poor writing? |
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::And the purpose is to define a type of subset of woman. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 23:51, 13 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::I see where Crossroads is coming from, because it does feel a bit redundant. <small>"The department of redundancy department is the department that..."</small> I would usually agree that it's subpar writing. But I think I'm this case an exception is warranted given the context. I'm sure I've explained this train of thought before, and probably more eloquently, but I think there is actually a fair bit of semantic confusion around the term "trans woman" or "trans man" that doesn't occur with say the phrase "black woman." This is hardly scientific, but my observation has been that a lot of folks think trans woman means trans man and vice versa. So I think making the somewhat ungrammatical choice is actually the superior choice. [[User:CaptainEek|<b style="color:#6a1f7f">CaptainEek</b>]] <sup>[[User talk:CaptainEek|<i style="font-size:82%; color:#a479e5">Edits Ho Cap'n!</i>]]</sup>[[Special:Contributions/CaptainEek|⚓]] 00:18, 14 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::::TLDR: keep it the way it was :) [[User:CaptainEek|<b style="color:#6a1f7f">CaptainEek</b>]] <sup>[[User talk:CaptainEek|<i style="font-size:82%; color:#a479e5">Edits Ho Cap'n!</i>]]</sup>[[Special:Contributions/CaptainEek|⚓]] 00:20, 14 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::@[[User:CaptainEek|CaptainEek]], I think you will have to specify when "the way it was". Until a few weeks ago, the lead said: |
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:::::"[[Trans women]] have a [[gender identity]] that does not align with their male [[sex assignment]] at birth, while [[intersex]] women may have sex characteristics that do not fit typical notions of female biology." |
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:::::A couple of years before that, it said: |
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:::::"[[Trans women]] have a male [[sex assignment]] at birth that does not align with their [[gender identity]], while [[intersex]] women may have sex characteristics that do not fit typical notions of female biology." |
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:::::If we go back five years, it said: |
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:::::"Some women are [[Trans women|trans]] (those who have a male [[sex assignment]] that does not align with their [[gender identity]]), or [[intersex]] (those born with sexual characteristics that do not fit typical notions of male or female)." |
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:::::The "women are women" language was [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Woman&diff=prev&oldid=1245408917 introduced] recently by A Socialist Trans Girl, and it was removed less than three hours later. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 00:38, 14 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::Hmmm, I guess I misread the edits then. I'd have to go back and see what I said in the previous discussions. [[User:CaptainEek|<b style="color:#6a1f7f">CaptainEek</b>]] <sup>[[User talk:CaptainEek|<i style="font-size:82%; color:#a479e5">Edits Ho Cap'n!</i>]]</sup>[[Special:Contributions/CaptainEek|⚓]] 01:00, 14 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:As I'm sure most of us remember, and as {{u|A Socialist Trans Girl}} and others have alluded to above, this same question has been debated [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Trans_woman/Archive_4#RfC_on_introduction extensively] over at [[Trans woman]]. The longstanding consensus attained there resulted in the following wording: {{tq|Transgender women (often shortened to trans women) are women who were assigned male at birth}}. There is of course no requirement that different articles describe a term in the same way, but I think we would be wise to observe the previously-attained consensus. It is, as far as I can tell, ''exactly the same question'' being asked here as was there -- contrary to some assertions made by others here, I don't see any meaningful difference between the two articles that would invalidate the consensus achieved by the community there. |
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:I agree, the concept of "woman" is larger than "the woman body". There are better images than [[:File:Frau-2.jpg|Frau-2.jpg]] to represent it. Please insert your thought in [[Talk:Woman/sandbox]]. -- [[User:Basilicofresco|<span style="font-variant:small-caps; font-family:Verdana; font-size:1em; color:green">Basilicofresco</span>]] ([[User talk:Basilicofresco|msg]]) 11:59, 2 March 2010 (UTC) |
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:To lay things out explicitly, the only argument raised against inclusion of {{tq|trans women are women who...}} seems to be that it's redundant. I think we're missing something, though -- in my reading, there are two important semantic differences between the following two sentences. |
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== Missing language == |
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::'''A:''' {{tq|Trans women were assigned male at birth...}} |
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::'''B:''' {{tq|Trans women '''are women who''' were assigned male at birth...}} |
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:Sentence '''A''' states only that trans women were assigned male at birth. Sentence '''B''' states three things: |
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I request editing in order to add the Haitian creole equivalent to the list of languages in the left-side column. [[User:Rajkiandris|Rajkiandris]][[User:Rajkiandris|Rajkiandris]] ([[User talk:Rajkiandris|talk]]) 06:26, 19 February 2010 (UTC) |
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::1. Trans women were assigned male are birth. |
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::2. ''(new)'' Women who were assigned male at birth are trans women. |
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::3. ''(new)'' Trans women are women. |
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:I think the second item is most important here: consider the difference between "{{tq|Mome raths sleep at night}}" and "{{tq|Mome raths are raths that sleep at night}}". The first merely tells us a fact about [[Jabberwocky|mome raths]], while the second tells us that the category of mome raths [[Iff|is ''defined'' by]] the practice of sleeping at night. If you wanted a sentence that expressed items 1 and 2 but not 3 (as some did at the RfC), you could say {{!tq|trans women are people who were assigned male at birth...}} (to be clear, I would oppose this wording, because the tiptoeing around item 3 communicates to readers that it's false, which runs counter to what our {{wli|reliable sources}} say). I anticipate that some will argue that item 3 above is tautological -- ''"of course trans women are women, it's in the name!"''. To those people, I would point you to the previous RfC, where, while the community did rightly conclude that it was proper to describe trans women as women, many editors hotly debated this categorization. (Of course, we write for our readers, not our editors, but I think the RfC is illustrative that many people out there are confused about this fact). |
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:[http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Woman&diff=345366555&oldid=344135076 Present]. -- [[User:Basilicofresco|<span style="font-variant:small-caps; font-family:Verdana; font-size:1em; color:green">Basilicofresco</span>]] ([[User talk:Basilicofresco|msg]]) 12:13, 2 March 2010 (UTC) |
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:Now, the good news for us is that, backed by the [[Trans woman]] RfC, it seems we all agree that statements 1, 2 and 3 are supported by proportional usage in reliable sources. We have some slight disagreement about whether item 3 needs to be explicitly stated, or if it can be implied, but we're already on track for a nice consensus. So the question just becomes how best to express them. As I've said above, I think {{diff2|1245603585|the current state of the article}} fails. I think there's a few good ways we could do this, though. I think {{u|A Socialist Trans Girl|ASTG}}'s suggestion is a good one -- that would probably be my first choice. I also have no major issue with the previous state of this article as {{u|CaptainEek}} points to: {{tq|Some women are [[Trans women|trans]] (those who have a male [[sex assignment]] that does not align with their [[gender identity]]), or [[intersex]] (those born with sexual characteristics that do not fit typical notions of male or female)}} (though perhaps it's more accurate to put the sex assignment bit in past tense). [[User:SreySros|<span style="color:#2B6EC4">Sr</span><span style="color:#EA3699">ey</span> <span style="color:#EA3699">Sr</span><span style="color:#2B6EC4">os</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:SreySros|talk]]</sup> 00:02, 4 November 2024 (UTC) |
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== Overweight Woman == |
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::The "Some women are [[Trans women|trans]]" language wasn't something CaptainEek mentioned, and I don't know whether they prefer it. That's just what the article said five years ago. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 01:16, 4 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:::That's correct - I don't know if Eek likes it or not either, but I credit them with pointing to it nonetheless. [[User:SreySros|<span style="color:#2B6EC4">Sr</span><span style="color:#EA3699">ey</span> <span style="color:#EA3699">Sr</span><span style="color:#2B6EC4">os</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:SreySros|talk]]</sup> 01:44, 4 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::The [[Talk:Trans_woman/Archive_4#RfC_on_introduction|RfC you linked to]] says: {{tq|On the whole, there is consensus that both option 1 and option 2 are superior to other presented options. There is no consensus as to whether option 1 or option 2 is preferable. In the absence of affirmative consensus, the status quo (which appears to be option 1) holds.}}; that RfC was from 6 years ago. The [[Talk:Trans_woman/Archive_10#RfC_on_first_sentence|RfC from a year ago]] says {{tq|There is no consensus between proposal 1 and proposal 2.}} So there really isn't a solid, {{blue|"longstanding consensus attained"}}, just no consensus defaulting to the status quo in both RfCs, which is the ''A trans woman is a woman'' wording at the Trans woman article. {{pb}} Anyway, that aside, I'm fine with how the trans women sentence is currently worded on this article, but my preferred phrasing would be something along the lines of: {{tq|Women who are transgender have a male sex assignment that does not align with their female gender identity...}} or {{tq|Women who are transgender were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity...}} [[User:Some1|Some1]] ([[User talk:Some1|talk]]) 23:41, 4 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:::In this version we'd be linking [[Transgender]] instead of [[Trans woman]] (less specific), unless we blue the whole phrase {{xt|[[trans woman|women who are transgender]]}}. I like the intent but this strikes my ear as an overextension of [[person-first language]]. Anyone remember the [https://www.bbc.com/news/world-europe-64436973 "people with Frenchness"] debacle? –[[User:RoxySaunders|RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️]] ([[User talk:RoxySaunders|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/RoxySaunders|stalk]]) 16:36, 28 November 2024 (UTC) |
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<small>(sorry for the late comment! i've jsut been a bit busy :<)</small>@[[user:some1]] @[[user:SreySros]] @[[user:WhatamIdoing]] @[[user:CaptainEek]] @[[user:Crossrpads]] @[[user:RoxySaunders]] It ''appears'' we have a consesnus against the current wording, so should we change it? WP:CON states taht consensus involves an efofrt to address editors legitimate concerns, and I think that has been done? |
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The woman whose picture is used appears overweight. If a picture of a nude woman is going to be used, why should that picture be overweight? The nude picture of a man in the "man" Wikipedia article does not appear overweight. A picture of an overweight woman is misleading as an aspect of an encyclopedic article on women, because it presents an image of a woman in an unhealthy state and a state that doctors advise one to avoid. [[Special:Contributions/66.171.226.69|66.171.226.69]] ([[User talk:66.171.226.69|talk]]) <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|undated]] comment added 00:15, 4 March 2010 (UTC).</span><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:I don't want to use the language from [[Trans woman]] in the lead, but perhaps somewhere in the body. I prefer "a transgender woman is {{tq|an adult who was assigned male at birth but whose gender identity is female}}", as in Dictionary.com.[https://www.dictionary.com/browse/trans-woman] @[[user:Crossroads]] may not agree with the proposed change either. [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 18:30, 28 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:I disagree. You're probably just not used to seeing a ''real woman'' - and that's not your fault; The fashion industry is obsessed with portraying women as emaciated, skinny little boys. And celebrities with their addiction to plastic surgery, don't make the picture any prettier. Reality is often vastly different than the fantasy that you see all around you, and this photograph is a good representative sample of what a woman looks like. And, I think she looks great. [[User:Viriditas|Viriditas]] ([[User talk:Viriditas|talk]]) 03:26, 4 March 2010 (UTC) |
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::I agree that she is a good representative of the "average" woman. However, unfortunately, the average woman in the United States (as well as some European countries) is overweight. For the reasons previously stated, I don't believe that having a picture of an overweight woman is appropriate for an encyclopedic article. I am not making a judgment on her attractiveness or lack thereof. I am simply stating facts and that I do not believe that a condition recognized as unhealthy should be represented in the main picture for this article. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/66.171.226.69|66.171.226.69]] ([[User talk:66.171.226.69|talk]]) 04:15, 4 March 2010 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:@[[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]], do you think the purpose here is to provide a definition of ''trans woman'', or to provide information about how certain parts of this subject relate to the whole? |
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:To use a different subject matter as an example, are we trying to say: |
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:* Cats are animals. Domestic cats can live with people, and big cats are wild animals. |
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:* Cats are animals. Some cats are domestic cats, and other cats are big cats. |
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:* Cats are animals. Big cats are cats that are defined by the structure of their vocal cords. |
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:[[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 18:48, 28 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::Please share your answer to your question if you would like a response. [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 19:30, 28 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:::My inclination, as I have said several times above, is to not provide a definition. I would rank these 'cats' options 2-1-3 myself, but I think that either of the first two are preferable to the third option. And you? [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 20:02, 28 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::::It's probably better to not provide a definition of trans woman, especially since the definition at [[Trans woman]] doesn't have much consensus. I guess I agree with your first comment in this talk page section. [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 20:27, 28 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::::I would be fine with "Some women are transgender..."; it's a slight improvement over the current wording considering the paragraph starts off with "Most women are cisgender". I went ahead and made the edit. [[User:Some1|Some1]] ([[User talk:Some1|talk]]) 20:44, 29 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::@[[User:Some1|Some1]] Honestly, I completely agree with this. |
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:::::It 1. Clearly establishes relation to the topic |
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:::::2. It has good readability |
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:::::3. I believe it effectively addresses the concerns of editors, as is needed for consensus. |
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:::::I'd like to see what @[[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] and @[[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] think of this proposal, and hopefully we can form a consensus. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 06:12, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::I tweaked the sentences a bit to reduce redundancy. Feel free to revert if those edits I've made (e.g., {{tq|Some women are transgender, meaning they were assigned male at birth}}) are not improvements over the prior version ({{tq|Transgender women were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity}}). [[User:Some1|Some1]] ([[User talk:Some1|talk]]) 15:01, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] wait whats your reasoning for not wanting to use the current definition, or [[Merriam-Webster|MW]]'s definition of "a woman who was identified (assigned) as male at birth"?[https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/trans%20woman ] :3 [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 06:08, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::Because the phrase "trans women are women" is redundant, and because it is highly controversial it would require a strong consensus finding it meets NPOV. What's your reasoning for wanting to use this language? [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 07:46, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::: We've [[Talk:Trans woman/Archive 10#"A trans woman is a woman" is not redundant.|gone through this before]], and whatever else it may be, the phrase "trans women are women" is '''not redundant'''. [[User:Mathglot|Mathglot]] ([[User talk:Mathglot|talk]]) 09:33, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Tautological then? [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 10:10, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::@[[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] a tautology is definitionally redundant. Which we just established it isn't. The phrasing of "[Adjective] [noun] is a [noun]..." is commonly used on wikipedia. |
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:::::For an example to make this more clear, the article [[moon rock]] says that moon rock is rock originating from earths moon. And while it could be changed to say 'Moon rock originates from earth's moon' in order to account for the POV of people who think the moon is made of cheese or something, there's no need to do that because 1. it's not supported by any RS, and 2. even if some obscure or some old RS says that, it doesn't matter. |
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:::::Not saying you want to account for the view of moon-cheeseists in the article for moon rock or anything, rather the opposite; it's using the fact that you (presumably and hopefully at least) don't think we should do so to demonstrate how it's the same for this article. |
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:::::<small> i probably couldve written the last too paragraphs in less words, sorry</small> [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 12:25, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::::I can see how it's redundant: |
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:::::> Trans women are women who were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity. |
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:::::> Trans women are adult female humans who were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity. |
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:::::> [[Female]]: "In humans, the word female can also be used to refer to gender in the social sense of gender role or gender identity." |
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:::::> Trans women are adult humans with a female gender identity who were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity. |
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::::[[User:Some1|Some1]] ([[User talk:Some1|talk]]) 12:54, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::@[[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] well it's not really controversial at all, as Wikipedia only considers RS. |
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::Personally I merely prefer that phrasing to must saying 'Trans woman were...' as that just seems like it's listing a random fact without establishing the relation to the article. I quite like the phrasing of "Some women are transgender, meaning they...", what do you think it? |
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::Additionally, for it to be found to violate NPOV, first there actually has to be RS cited which opposes it. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 12:07, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:::The RFC at [[Trans woman]] over this language was indeed controversial. It is a tautology, because "woman" has two different meanings. If we just look at ''Merriam-Webster'', we can interpret the word to be defined as {{tq|an adult ... person ... of ... the sex that typically has the capacity to bear young or produce eggs}} and {{tq|an adult ... person ... having a gender identity that is the opposite of male}}.[https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/woman][https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/female] If we say "trans women are women", it is not clear whether we are saying that trans women are both women and men, or trans women are just adults with a female gender identity, so we should not say that unless the sources clarify that for us. [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 15:52, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Perhaps "circular" is a more accurate descriptor than tautological. [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 18:07, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::::: If you put a period after it: "{{xt|Trans women are women{{hairspace}}<big><big>.</big></big>}}" and that's the end of the sentence, then yes. But I don't believe that anyone is calling for that. If you have a predicate clause after: ("{{xt|Trans women are women '''who''' + <descriptive clause>}}") then it is not circular or tautological, for the same reasons as ''redudant''. Clearly you have some kind of objection to having the word ''women'' in the sentence twice, but other than subscribing to the debunked journalistic trope of [[elegant variation]], I don't see what it is. That said, I lost track of who first suggested no definition is needed here because it is given at the linked article, but I agree. That also solves the issue about whether or not the two articles need to use the same wording (they don't, but why use any wording at all here? This article's topic is not trans women, and no definition is needed, as long as it is linked). [[User:Mathglot|Mathglot]] ([[User talk:Mathglot|talk]]) 03:26, 1 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::@[[User:Mathglot|Mathglot]] well trans women isn't the focus of the article, but is within the scope. And if we weren't to have a definition, wouldn't it just be "[[Trans women]] exist.", or just omitting it infavour of just mentioning them in a see also? Because in the first case, I don't think that's very helpful to the reader, and additionally, in the first and second case, I don't think that WP:DUE weight is being given. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 05:12, 1 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::: Just because a concept is within scope of the artcle is no reason to define it; that's why we have [[Help:Link|wikilinks]], where a definition can be found for those interested. The lead of this article has 277 words and 44 links; if we defined all of them (or even a small percentage of them) the lead would become cluttered and unwieldy. Some of the linked words if the lead lacking any definition include: ''female'', ''human'', ''sex'', ''gender'', ''fertile'', ''puberty'', ''sex differentiation'', ''male'', ''man'', ''sex assignment'', and ''intersex'', and I fail to see any convincing reason why ''trans woman'' requires a definition, when these words (and the other 30 linked words) in the lead do not. [[User:Mathglot|Mathglot]] ([[User talk:Mathglot|talk]]) 21:35, 1 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::@[[User:Mathglot|Mathglot]] That makes sense. Could you please clarify what you would like to replace the existing sentence(s) with? Perhaps just 'Some women are trans women.'? Or something else [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 00:17, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::@[[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] That's not a tautology, nor is it circular. I think that trying to determine based on the definition of woman is [[WP:SYNTH]]; MW's definition for trans woman is clear. |
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:::::Sorry what? If we say "trans women are women who..." then it's completely clear what we're saying, that being saying that 'trans women are a category of women, who....'. I don't understand your point with that. |
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:::::The sources DO clarify that, MW's definition of trans woman says that they're 'women who...'. I don't understand how those two implications could be derived from 'trans women are women who...' [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 05:07, 1 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::Replying to you and Mathglot, saying {{tq|Trans women are women who...}} is unclear because the meaning of ''women'' is difficult and unclear. {{tq|A moon rock is a rock}}, and the other examples in Mathglot's list are not analogous because it is obvious what ''rock'', etc., mean. {{tq|Trans women are women who...}} just leads to the question of what is a woman, so we should get as clear as we can. But of course there's still the question of this language being DUE and NPOV. [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 05:41, 1 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::This is a variation of the oft argued issue. Everyone agrees that a woman is a woman. Some people think that biological sex is the defining factor in deciding which people are women and which aren't. Some don't. So soon we will (hopefully) have a definitive legal view and can put this one to bed. |
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:::::::[https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/articles/clyvdd671e6o Judges at the Supreme Court are considering how exactly women are defined in law] [[User:Lukewarmbeer|Lukewarmbeer]] ([[User talk:Lukewarmbeer|talk]]) 14:31, 1 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::Last I checked, the UK who has a history of [[21st-century anti-trans movement in the United Kingdom]] does not define this for the world. [[User:Raladic|Raladic]] ([[User talk:Raladic|talk]]) 16:52, 1 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::All kinds of despicable and wrong things have been enshrined as law at one time or another. UK courts are reliable sources for laws in the UK. Even without the context of the incredible and pervasive transphobia in Anglo/Scottish culture, I don't see why their opinion would be "definitive" for the text of this or any article. –[[User:RoxySaunders|RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️]] ([[User talk:RoxySaunders|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/RoxySaunders|stalk]]) 22:59, 1 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::@[[User:Lukewarmbeer|Lukewarmbeer]] 1. Law doesn't matter for this, as it's a social construct, not a legal concept. |
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::::::::2. other countries exist! [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 00:19, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::@[[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] so then you can start a new talk page section about the article answering that question. However RS says that trans women are indeed women (duh), so for the paragraph in question I think it's irrelevant. Plus, determining if they are based on what the article defines women as would be [[WP:SYNTH]], it just matters what RS says. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 00:27, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::You're not responding to something I said. [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 00:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::::@[[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] I am! You said "saying Trans women are women who... is unclear because the meaning of women is difficult and unclear" and ""Trans women are women who..". just leads to the question of what is a woman, so we should get as clear as we can.". Or am I misreading? [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 01:08, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::::As I attempted to say, your response was not responding to a correct interpretation of my words. [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 01:10, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::@[[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] Apologies, could you rephrase what you said so I can understand the intended meaning? [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 02:17, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::Writing in this article that {{tq|Trans women are women who...}} is confusing for our readers because the meaning of women is not simple for them to understand. {{tq|Trans women are women who...}} just leads them to ask the question of what is a woman, so we should be as clear as we can. [[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] ([[User talk:Kolya Butternut|talk]]) 07:38, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::@[[User:Kolya Butternut|Kolya Butternut]] so.. are you saying the article should further answer that question? If so, then thats a different discussion. |
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:::::::::::::Plus, that's kinda how people get to know what words mean. One can point to different types of chairs and go "chair", and then someone who doesn't speak the language can get more of an understanding of what a chair is. |
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:::::::::::::Regardless, RS says it, and I think you're probably underestimating readers. If they're confused, they can just click the blue link and then understand what ''trans woman'' means, and there's no confusion. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 00:36, 3 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::::Unless someone actively objects to the current version, I don't think that it's necessary to continue debating/explaining/talking past each other. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 00:42, 3 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::::@[[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] I think thats for the best to be honest. I don't think any progress towards consensus is being made in this line of discussion with kolya [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 00:48, 3 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:This is the current version: |
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:"Some women are [[Transgender women|transgender]], meaning they were [[Sex assignment|assigned male at birth]], while some women are [[intersex]], meaning they have sex characteristics that do not fit typical notions of female biology." |
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:Does anyone really hate this version? Or is this something we can all live with for the next few months/years? [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 02:01, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::@[[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] I don't hate it, I actually like it. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 02:17, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::it seems like a good compromise, for consensus. [[User:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#246BCE;">A Socialist</span>]] [[User talk:A Socialist Trans Girl|<span style="font-family:default;color:#FF1493;">Trans Girl</span>]] 02:18, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::As I noted earlier I don't like piping from [[transgender]] to [[Trans woman]] ([[MOS:EASTEREGG]]) but this isn't an enormous problem. I'm fine with this. –[[User:RoxySaunders|RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️]] ([[User talk:RoxySaunders|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/RoxySaunders|stalk]]) 18:21, 2 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== Transphobic initial sentence == |
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The first sentence, "A woman is an adult female human." is inherently transphobic and feeds the transphobic rhetoric that only females can be women. It should be more inclusive from the get go and less bigoted. [[User:TheZelos|TheZelos]] ([[User talk:TheZelos|talk]]) 13:29, 16 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The footnote shows that "female" can refer to gender as well, and in any case, this definition is what is used in reliable sources. <span style="font-family:Palatino">[[User:Crossroads|'''Crossroads''']]</span> <sup>[[User talk:Crossroads|-talk-]]</sup> 23:05, 16 December 2024 (UTC) |
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On "wermann"
The page in its current form mentions without sources the supposed existence of the Old English word wermann. This word is, unless I'm gravely mistaken, completely unattested (try finding it on Wiktionary, for example) and possibly fabricated. Unless a good source can be found for the existence of wermann as an OE word (and a cursory internet search reveals only discussions pondering where on earth it supposedly came from), its mention ought to be removed. AutisticCatnip (talk) 04:07, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
- You appear to be correct. For those interested, here are some such discussions [1][2][3]. I've gone and made an edit (Special:Diff/1216741813) which replaces the specious wermann with wer (apparently the most common OE word for male/man) and wǣpnedmann, which is attested occasionally as the analogue to wifmann. I hope this looks acceptable.
- I think the Dictionary.com link is rotten, as it no longer contains the information we're citing it for. If anyone has access to the OED or another source which verifies this etymology, please verify this text if possible. –RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️ (💬 • 📝) 18:41, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
Why does this page use extended confirmed protection even though Man uses semi-protection only?
... Usersnipedname (talk) 08:20, 29 March 2024 (UTC)
- GENSEX enforcement vs. generic vandalism. Dronebogus (talk) 12:55, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
- Also because trolls and bigots perseverate more on people assigned male at birth who are either gay/bi/pan or trans. Transwomen are targeted more than transmen and thus this article gets more trolls. Here's an article: [4] EvergreenFir (talk) 16:03, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
- The page has had ECP since July 2023. At that time the article and talk had some targeted vandalism from sockpuppets that had gamed autoconfirmation. –RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️ (💬 • 📝) 04:54, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
A new departure required for this article (and others)
Following the Tickle v Giggle judgement should this article be reframed in its entirety?
The Australian Human Rights Commission acted as a friend of the court. Barrister Zelie Heger told the court that sex was no longer defined in the Sex Discrimination Act but that “importantly the act recognises that a person’s sex is not limited to [being a man or a woman]”.
This doesn’t just have repercussions in the jurisdiction of the court that made the judgement
The Beeb draws attention to the significance of this judgement:
“So today’s ruling in favour of Tickle will be significant for all the 189 countries where CEDAW has been ratified - from Brazil to India to South Africa.
When it comes to interpreting international treaties, national courts often look at how other countries have done it.
Australia’s interpretation of the law in a case that got this level of media attention is likely to have global repercussions.
If over time a growing number of courts rule in favour of gender identity claims - it is more likely that other countries will follow suit.”
Is the term ‘Woman’ as has been widely understood and as reflected in this article (possibly even as a distinct definition) becoming anachronistic?
Lukewarmbeer (talk) 08:52, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- The judgment is from a single Australian court and legal definitions don't necessarily override biological, social, or historical understandings of womanhood. The article currently presents multiple viewpoints, including both traditional and evolving definitions of womanhood. Legal definitions serve specific purposes and may not encompass the full complexity of biological, social, and cultural understandings of womanhood. The concept of woman has deep cultural, historical, and biological roots that extend beyond legal definitions.
- Wikipedia should aim to present mainstream knowledge and established facts. A single court case does not warrant an immediate overhaul of a fundamental concept. The article should reflect various perspectives, including traditional definitions alongside emerging views. Drastically changing the article based on one legal decision is overreactive.
- Major changes should be based on broad scholarly and societal consensus, not single events. The current article already includes information on gender identity and the evolving understanding of sex and gender in the opening section. Adding information about this court case and its implications could be done without completely reframing the entire article. The implications of this ruling might be better covered in a separate article or section, rather than reframing the entire concept of woman. ViolanteMD (talk) 01:57, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- That's a great response. Thanks for taking the time. I'm broadly very with you but I think, given the 'lean' that what we consider to be RS have it's a discussion we need to have.
- Let's see if any other editors have a view. Lukewarmbeer (talk) 08:24, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- It's not even clear what would need to be changed, but regardless, I agree with ViolanteMD that it is not warranted to reframe anything at this time. The content in the article is based on reliable sources on the topic, of which there are extremely many; a court case isn't going to impact that much. Crossroads -talk- 22:33, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- It's not exactly a revolutionary position either. For many legal purposes, gender/sex is defined as something that can be reassigned, rather than what you were born as. Anywikiuser (talk) 13:51, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Usage of phrasing from the article of trans woman in this article
The phrasing of Transgender women are women who were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity is the phrasing used on the article for trans woman and is the result of a longstanding consensus and discussion. Attempts to that definition should be made on the article trans woman, not this article. A Socialist Trans Girl 03:41, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- There's no rule that says we have to copy the exact wording from another article. The point to be made in this paragraph is that gender assignment doesn't necessarily align with gender identity. "Trans women have a gender identity that does not align with their sex assignment" is true, verifiable, concise, and relevant to the specific point. If the point of the paragraph were to insist that trans women really are True™ women, despite the contrary POV held by some people, then we might want to reconsider that, but I think this is enough for the actual point of the paragraph. WhatamIdoing (talk) 03:56, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- Given the multiple 200KB RfCs related to this phrase (newcomers, see Talk:Trans woman/Archive 4, Talk:Trans woman/Archive 10, Talk:Trans woman/Definitions and bring a snack) it seems prudent for this article to reflect the consensus—rather, the status-quo in the absence of consensus—at Trans woman. The validity of trans womanhood within Wikivoice is, if not a shut case, then something I'm very tired of reading centralized discussions about. –RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️ (talk • stalk) 04:24, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- An RFC about what to say in the MOS:FIRST sentence of a different article has no bearing on what to say elsewhere in a different article.
- Your comment has reminded me of a discussion earlier this year (probably related to WP:LOCALCON) about whether editors have an RFC on one page and then assert that the decision at Article A applies to all articles. I was skeptical that editors actually tried that, but you have just proven that they do. WhatamIdoing (talk) 05:03, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- This sentence is summarizing a sub-topic, (and could be WP:SYNCed using an Excerpt) if we weren't also pluralizing and combining it with a definition of Intersex), I think the phrasing at the target article is definitely relevant (if not binding). I think those past discussions are relevant here, if not binding. –RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️ (talk • stalk) 14:02, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- This (half) sentence in the lead connects to (most of) a single paragraph in the body, which does not really feel like a WP:SUMMARY situation to me. WhatamIdoing (talk) 21:44, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- This sentence is summarizing a sub-topic, (and could be WP:SYNCed using an Excerpt) if we weren't also pluralizing and combining it with a definition of Intersex), I think the phrasing at the target article is definitely relevant (if not binding). I think those past discussions are relevant here, if not binding. –RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️ (talk • stalk) 14:02, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- @WhatamIdoing That's true that there's no rule for it having to do that, however I see no reason for it not to mirror the phrasing from its own article.
- The thing with that sentence is that it doesn't establish the relationship to the topic, and can leave readers confused about the relation to the article. Establishing the relationship to the article of a category of woman is far more clear than the current version.
- Additionally, I don't see much underlying reasoning for removing it other than the belief that they AREN'T. Which, The relative prominence of each viewpoint among Wikipedia editors or the general public is irrelevant and should not be considered. (from WP:UNDUE). The point of the paragraph is to highlight the existence of two specific types of women and provide a definition for them.
- Your sentence proposal of "Trans women have a gender identity that does not align with their sex assignment" doesn't work as a definition, because the definition form would therefore be "(someone) who has a gender identity that doesn't align with their sex assignment" which is too broad.
- Also for RoxySaunders' reasoning that it 'makes it semantically clear that we are defining a term, not merely making an observation.'. A Socialist Trans Girl 10:11, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- I don't think this article needs to define trans women. I think it needs to provide information about trans women.
- BTW, what you have called "my sentence proposal" is what the article said before your recent efforts to change it. 10 years ago, trans women were barely name-checked in the lead as an example of women who could not give birth. Five years ago, this article said "Some women are trans (those who have a male sex assignment that does not align with their gender identity), or intersex (those born with sexual characteristics that do not fit typical notions of male or female)." For a while, it said "Trans women are those who...". The "have" language appeared soon after that. WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:08, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- @WhatamIdoing Well there's not much point in providing information about trans women to the readers if we dont even say what trans women are, definitionally speaking. A Socialist Trans Girl 23:49, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- Given the multiple 200KB RfCs related to this phrase (newcomers, see Talk:Trans woman/Archive 4, Talk:Trans woman/Archive 10, Talk:Trans woman/Definitions and bring a snack) it seems prudent for this article to reflect the consensus—rather, the status-quo in the absence of consensus—at Trans woman. The validity of trans womanhood within Wikivoice is, if not a shut case, then something I'm very tired of reading centralized discussions about. –RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️ (talk • stalk) 04:24, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- I prefer the explicit [Trans/intersex] women are women who... forms. Given the apparent challenge these identities present toward more simplistic models of sex and gender, their respective womanhood does bear repeating. The perceived redundancy in Transgender women are women who... makes it semantically clear that we are defining a term, not merely making an observation. This is helpful for orienting lay readers who may initially misunderstand "transgender women" as "AFAB transgender people". –RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️ (talk • stalk) 04:31, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- I stand by what I said in my edit summary, which is that
"women are women" is redundant/poor writing
. The lead sentence of trans woman and the sentences here on trans women serve different purposes; one defines the topic of that article, while the other describes a subset of the people described in this article. It is already established in this article that women are being talked about. - It is not the case that
it doesn't establish the relationship to the topic
; the term 'trans women' contains the word 'women' already. Nor will readers possibly be confused by thinking of AFAB transgender people, as it immediately defines the term withTransgender women were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity
. - My edit also slimmed down "intersex women are women who...", for the same reason. Crossroads -talk- 22:03, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Crossroads How is it poor writing?
- And the purpose is to define a type of subset of woman. A Socialist Trans Girl 23:51, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- I see where Crossroads is coming from, because it does feel a bit redundant. "The department of redundancy department is the department that..." I would usually agree that it's subpar writing. But I think I'm this case an exception is warranted given the context. I'm sure I've explained this train of thought before, and probably more eloquently, but I think there is actually a fair bit of semantic confusion around the term "trans woman" or "trans man" that doesn't occur with say the phrase "black woman." This is hardly scientific, but my observation has been that a lot of folks think trans woman means trans man and vice versa. So I think making the somewhat ungrammatical choice is actually the superior choice. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 00:18, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- TLDR: keep it the way it was :) CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 00:20, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- @CaptainEek, I think you will have to specify when "the way it was". Until a few weeks ago, the lead said:
- "Trans women have a gender identity that does not align with their male sex assignment at birth, while intersex women may have sex characteristics that do not fit typical notions of female biology."
- A couple of years before that, it said:
- "Trans women have a male sex assignment at birth that does not align with their gender identity, while intersex women may have sex characteristics that do not fit typical notions of female biology."
- If we go back five years, it said:
- "Some women are trans (those who have a male sex assignment that does not align with their gender identity), or intersex (those born with sexual characteristics that do not fit typical notions of male or female)."
- The "women are women" language was introduced recently by A Socialist Trans Girl, and it was removed less than three hours later. WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:38, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hmmm, I guess I misread the edits then. I'd have to go back and see what I said in the previous discussions. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 01:00, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- TLDR: keep it the way it was :) CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 00:20, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- I see where Crossroads is coming from, because it does feel a bit redundant. "The department of redundancy department is the department that..." I would usually agree that it's subpar writing. But I think I'm this case an exception is warranted given the context. I'm sure I've explained this train of thought before, and probably more eloquently, but I think there is actually a fair bit of semantic confusion around the term "trans woman" or "trans man" that doesn't occur with say the phrase "black woman." This is hardly scientific, but my observation has been that a lot of folks think trans woman means trans man and vice versa. So I think making the somewhat ungrammatical choice is actually the superior choice. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 00:18, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- As I'm sure most of us remember, and as A Socialist Trans Girl and others have alluded to above, this same question has been debated extensively over at Trans woman. The longstanding consensus attained there resulted in the following wording:
Transgender women (often shortened to trans women) are women who were assigned male at birth
. There is of course no requirement that different articles describe a term in the same way, but I think we would be wise to observe the previously-attained consensus. It is, as far as I can tell, exactly the same question being asked here as was there -- contrary to some assertions made by others here, I don't see any meaningful difference between the two articles that would invalidate the consensus achieved by the community there.
- To lay things out explicitly, the only argument raised against inclusion of
trans women are women who...
seems to be that it's redundant. I think we're missing something, though -- in my reading, there are two important semantic differences between the following two sentences.- A:
Trans women were assigned male at birth...
- B:
Trans women are women who were assigned male at birth...
- A:
- Sentence A states only that trans women were assigned male at birth. Sentence B states three things:
- 1. Trans women were assigned male are birth.
- 2. (new) Women who were assigned male at birth are trans women.
- 3. (new) Trans women are women.
- I think the second item is most important here: consider the difference between "
Mome raths sleep at night
" and "Mome raths are raths that sleep at night
". The first merely tells us a fact about mome raths, while the second tells us that the category of mome raths is defined by the practice of sleeping at night. If you wanted a sentence that expressed items 1 and 2 but not 3 (as some did at the RfC), you could say trans women are people who were assigned male at birth... (to be clear, I would oppose this wording, because the tiptoeing around item 3 communicates to readers that it's false, which runs counter to what our reliable sources say). I anticipate that some will argue that item 3 above is tautological -- "of course trans women are women, it's in the name!". To those people, I would point you to the previous RfC, where, while the community did rightly conclude that it was proper to describe trans women as women, many editors hotly debated this categorization. (Of course, we write for our readers, not our editors, but I think the RfC is illustrative that many people out there are confused about this fact).
- Now, the good news for us is that, backed by the Trans woman RfC, it seems we all agree that statements 1, 2 and 3 are supported by proportional usage in reliable sources. We have some slight disagreement about whether item 3 needs to be explicitly stated, or if it can be implied, but we're already on track for a nice consensus. So the question just becomes how best to express them. As I've said above, I think the current state of the article fails. I think there's a few good ways we could do this, though. I think ASTG's suggestion is a good one -- that would probably be my first choice. I also have no major issue with the previous state of this article as CaptainEek points to:
Some women are trans (those who have a male sex assignment that does not align with their gender identity), or intersex (those born with sexual characteristics that do not fit typical notions of male or female)
(though perhaps it's more accurate to put the sex assignment bit in past tense). Srey Srostalk 00:02, 4 November 2024 (UTC)- The "Some women are trans" language wasn't something CaptainEek mentioned, and I don't know whether they prefer it. That's just what the article said five years ago. WhatamIdoing (talk) 01:16, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
- That's correct - I don't know if Eek likes it or not either, but I credit them with pointing to it nonetheless. Srey Srostalk 01:44, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
- The RfC you linked to says:
On the whole, there is consensus that both option 1 and option 2 are superior to other presented options. There is no consensus as to whether option 1 or option 2 is preferable. In the absence of affirmative consensus, the status quo (which appears to be option 1) holds.
; that RfC was from 6 years ago. The RfC from a year ago saysThere is no consensus between proposal 1 and proposal 2.
So there really isn't a solid, "longstanding consensus attained", just no consensus defaulting to the status quo in both RfCs, which is the A trans woman is a woman wording at the Trans woman article. Anyway, that aside, I'm fine with how the trans women sentence is currently worded on this article, but my preferred phrasing would be something along the lines of:Women who are transgender have a male sex assignment that does not align with their female gender identity...
orWomen who are transgender were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity...
Some1 (talk) 23:41, 4 November 2024 (UTC)- In this version we'd be linking Transgender instead of Trans woman (less specific), unless we blue the whole phrase women who are transgender. I like the intent but this strikes my ear as an overextension of person-first language. Anyone remember the "people with Frenchness" debacle? –RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️ (talk • stalk) 16:36, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- The "Some women are trans" language wasn't something CaptainEek mentioned, and I don't know whether they prefer it. That's just what the article said five years ago. WhatamIdoing (talk) 01:16, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
(sorry for the late comment! i've jsut been a bit busy :<)@user:some1 @user:SreySros @user:WhatamIdoing @user:CaptainEek @user:Crossrpads @user:RoxySaunders It appears we have a consesnus against the current wording, so should we change it? WP:CON states taht consensus involves an efofrt to address editors legitimate concerns, and I think that has been done?
- I don't want to use the language from Trans woman in the lead, but perhaps somewhere in the body. I prefer "a transgender woman is
an adult who was assigned male at birth but whose gender identity is female
", as in Dictionary.com.[5] @user:Crossroads may not agree with the proposed change either. Kolya Butternut (talk) 18:30, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Kolya Butternut, do you think the purpose here is to provide a definition of trans woman, or to provide information about how certain parts of this subject relate to the whole?
- To use a different subject matter as an example, are we trying to say:
- Cats are animals. Domestic cats can live with people, and big cats are wild animals.
- Cats are animals. Some cats are domestic cats, and other cats are big cats.
- Cats are animals. Big cats are cats that are defined by the structure of their vocal cords.
- WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:48, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Please share your answer to your question if you would like a response. Kolya Butternut (talk) 19:30, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- My inclination, as I have said several times above, is to not provide a definition. I would rank these 'cats' options 2-1-3 myself, but I think that either of the first two are preferable to the third option. And you? WhatamIdoing (talk) 20:02, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- It's probably better to not provide a definition of trans woman, especially since the definition at Trans woman doesn't have much consensus. I guess I agree with your first comment in this talk page section. Kolya Butternut (talk) 20:27, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- I would be fine with "Some women are transgender..."; it's a slight improvement over the current wording considering the paragraph starts off with "Most women are cisgender". I went ahead and made the edit. Some1 (talk) 20:44, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Some1 Honestly, I completely agree with this.
- It 1. Clearly establishes relation to the topic
- 2. It has good readability
- 3. I believe it effectively addresses the concerns of editors, as is needed for consensus.
- I'd like to see what @WhatamIdoing and @Kolya Butternut think of this proposal, and hopefully we can form a consensus. A Socialist Trans Girl 06:12, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- I tweaked the sentences a bit to reduce redundancy. Feel free to revert if those edits I've made (e.g.,
Some women are transgender, meaning they were assigned male at birth
) are not improvements over the prior version (Transgender women were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity
). Some1 (talk) 15:01, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- I tweaked the sentences a bit to reduce redundancy. Feel free to revert if those edits I've made (e.g.,
- My inclination, as I have said several times above, is to not provide a definition. I would rank these 'cats' options 2-1-3 myself, but I think that either of the first two are preferable to the third option. And you? WhatamIdoing (talk) 20:02, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Please share your answer to your question if you would like a response. Kolya Butternut (talk) 19:30, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Kolya Butternut wait whats your reasoning for not wanting to use the current definition, or MW's definition of "a woman who was identified (assigned) as male at birth"?[6] :3 A Socialist Trans Girl 06:08, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- Because the phrase "trans women are women" is redundant, and because it is highly controversial it would require a strong consensus finding it meets NPOV. What's your reasoning for wanting to use this language? Kolya Butternut (talk) 07:46, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- We've gone through this before, and whatever else it may be, the phrase "trans women are women" is not redundant. Mathglot (talk) 09:33, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- Tautological then? Kolya Butternut (talk) 10:10, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Kolya Butternut a tautology is definitionally redundant. Which we just established it isn't. The phrasing of "[Adjective] [noun] is a [noun]..." is commonly used on wikipedia.
- For an example to make this more clear, the article moon rock says that moon rock is rock originating from earths moon. And while it could be changed to say 'Moon rock originates from earth's moon' in order to account for the POV of people who think the moon is made of cheese or something, there's no need to do that because 1. it's not supported by any RS, and 2. even if some obscure or some old RS says that, it doesn't matter.
- Not saying you want to account for the view of moon-cheeseists in the article for moon rock or anything, rather the opposite; it's using the fact that you (presumably and hopefully at least) don't think we should do so to demonstrate how it's the same for this article.
- i probably couldve written the last too paragraphs in less words, sorry A Socialist Trans Girl 12:25, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- I can see how it's redundant:
- > Trans women are women who were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity.
- > Trans women are adult female humans who were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity.
- > Female: "In humans, the word female can also be used to refer to gender in the social sense of gender role or gender identity."
- > Trans women are adult humans with a female gender identity who were assigned male at birth and have a female gender identity.
- Some1 (talk) 12:54, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- Tautological then? Kolya Butternut (talk) 10:10, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- We've gone through this before, and whatever else it may be, the phrase "trans women are women" is not redundant. Mathglot (talk) 09:33, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Kolya Butternut well it's not really controversial at all, as Wikipedia only considers RS.
- Personally I merely prefer that phrasing to must saying 'Trans woman were...' as that just seems like it's listing a random fact without establishing the relation to the article. I quite like the phrasing of "Some women are transgender, meaning they...", what do you think it?
- Additionally, for it to be found to violate NPOV, first there actually has to be RS cited which opposes it. A Socialist Trans Girl 12:07, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- The RFC at Trans woman over this language was indeed controversial. It is a tautology, because "woman" has two different meanings. If we just look at Merriam-Webster, we can interpret the word to be defined as
an adult ... person ... of ... the sex that typically has the capacity to bear young or produce eggs
andan adult ... person ... having a gender identity that is the opposite of male
.[7][8] If we say "trans women are women", it is not clear whether we are saying that trans women are both women and men, or trans women are just adults with a female gender identity, so we should not say that unless the sources clarify that for us. Kolya Butternut (talk) 15:52, 30 November 2024 (UTC)- Perhaps "circular" is a more accurate descriptor than tautological. Kolya Butternut (talk) 18:07, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- If you put a period after it: "Trans women are women ." and that's the end of the sentence, then yes. But I don't believe that anyone is calling for that. If you have a predicate clause after: ("Trans women are women who + <descriptive clause>") then it is not circular or tautological, for the same reasons as redudant. Clearly you have some kind of objection to having the word women in the sentence twice, but other than subscribing to the debunked journalistic trope of elegant variation, I don't see what it is. That said, I lost track of who first suggested no definition is needed here because it is given at the linked article, but I agree. That also solves the issue about whether or not the two articles need to use the same wording (they don't, but why use any wording at all here? This article's topic is not trans women, and no definition is needed, as long as it is linked). Mathglot (talk) 03:26, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Mathglot well trans women isn't the focus of the article, but is within the scope. And if we weren't to have a definition, wouldn't it just be "Trans women exist.", or just omitting it infavour of just mentioning them in a see also? Because in the first case, I don't think that's very helpful to the reader, and additionally, in the first and second case, I don't think that WP:DUE weight is being given. A Socialist Trans Girl 05:12, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- Just because a concept is within scope of the artcle is no reason to define it; that's why we have wikilinks, where a definition can be found for those interested. The lead of this article has 277 words and 44 links; if we defined all of them (or even a small percentage of them) the lead would become cluttered and unwieldy. Some of the linked words if the lead lacking any definition include: female, human, sex, gender, fertile, puberty, sex differentiation, male, man, sex assignment, and intersex, and I fail to see any convincing reason why trans woman requires a definition, when these words (and the other 30 linked words) in the lead do not. Mathglot (talk) 21:35, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Mathglot That makes sense. Could you please clarify what you would like to replace the existing sentence(s) with? Perhaps just 'Some women are trans women.'? Or something else A Socialist Trans Girl 00:17, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Just because a concept is within scope of the artcle is no reason to define it; that's why we have wikilinks, where a definition can be found for those interested. The lead of this article has 277 words and 44 links; if we defined all of them (or even a small percentage of them) the lead would become cluttered and unwieldy. Some of the linked words if the lead lacking any definition include: female, human, sex, gender, fertile, puberty, sex differentiation, male, man, sex assignment, and intersex, and I fail to see any convincing reason why trans woman requires a definition, when these words (and the other 30 linked words) in the lead do not. Mathglot (talk) 21:35, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Mathglot well trans women isn't the focus of the article, but is within the scope. And if we weren't to have a definition, wouldn't it just be "Trans women exist.", or just omitting it infavour of just mentioning them in a see also? Because in the first case, I don't think that's very helpful to the reader, and additionally, in the first and second case, I don't think that WP:DUE weight is being given. A Socialist Trans Girl 05:12, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Kolya Butternut That's not a tautology, nor is it circular. I think that trying to determine based on the definition of woman is WP:SYNTH; MW's definition for trans woman is clear.
- Sorry what? If we say "trans women are women who..." then it's completely clear what we're saying, that being saying that 'trans women are a category of women, who....'. I don't understand your point with that.
- The sources DO clarify that, MW's definition of trans woman says that they're 'women who...'. I don't understand how those two implications could be derived from 'trans women are women who...' A Socialist Trans Girl 05:07, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- Replying to you and Mathglot, saying
Trans women are women who...
is unclear because the meaning of women is difficult and unclear.A moon rock is a rock
, and the other examples in Mathglot's list are not analogous because it is obvious what rock, etc., mean.Trans women are women who...
just leads to the question of what is a woman, so we should get as clear as we can. But of course there's still the question of this language being DUE and NPOV. Kolya Butternut (talk) 05:41, 1 December 2024 (UTC)- This is a variation of the oft argued issue. Everyone agrees that a woman is a woman. Some people think that biological sex is the defining factor in deciding which people are women and which aren't. Some don't. So soon we will (hopefully) have a definitive legal view and can put this one to bed.
- Judges at the Supreme Court are considering how exactly women are defined in law Lukewarmbeer (talk) 14:31, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- Last I checked, the UK who has a history of 21st-century anti-trans movement in the United Kingdom does not define this for the world. Raladic (talk) 16:52, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- All kinds of despicable and wrong things have been enshrined as law at one time or another. UK courts are reliable sources for laws in the UK. Even without the context of the incredible and pervasive transphobia in Anglo/Scottish culture, I don't see why their opinion would be "definitive" for the text of this or any article. –RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️ (talk • stalk) 22:59, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Lukewarmbeer 1. Law doesn't matter for this, as it's a social construct, not a legal concept.
- 2. other countries exist! A Socialist Trans Girl 00:19, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Kolya Butternut so then you can start a new talk page section about the article answering that question. However RS says that trans women are indeed women (duh), so for the paragraph in question I think it's irrelevant. Plus, determining if they are based on what the article defines women as would be WP:SYNTH, it just matters what RS says. A Socialist Trans Girl 00:27, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- You're not responding to something I said. Kolya Butternut (talk) 00:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Kolya Butternut I am! You said "saying Trans women are women who... is unclear because the meaning of women is difficult and unclear" and ""Trans women are women who..". just leads to the question of what is a woman, so we should get as clear as we can.". Or am I misreading? A Socialist Trans Girl 01:08, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- As I attempted to say, your response was not responding to a correct interpretation of my words. Kolya Butternut (talk) 01:10, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Kolya Butternut Apologies, could you rephrase what you said so I can understand the intended meaning? A Socialist Trans Girl 02:17, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Writing in this article that
Trans women are women who...
is confusing for our readers because the meaning of women is not simple for them to understand.Trans women are women who...
just leads them to ask the question of what is a woman, so we should be as clear as we can. Kolya Butternut (talk) 07:38, 2 December 2024 (UTC)- @Kolya Butternut so.. are you saying the article should further answer that question? If so, then thats a different discussion.
- Plus, that's kinda how people get to know what words mean. One can point to different types of chairs and go "chair", and then someone who doesn't speak the language can get more of an understanding of what a chair is.
- Regardless, RS says it, and I think you're probably underestimating readers. If they're confused, they can just click the blue link and then understand what trans woman means, and there's no confusion. A Socialist Trans Girl 00:36, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unless someone actively objects to the current version, I don't think that it's necessary to continue debating/explaining/talking past each other. WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:42, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- @WhatamIdoing I think thats for the best to be honest. I don't think any progress towards consensus is being made in this line of discussion with kolya A Socialist Trans Girl 00:48, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unless someone actively objects to the current version, I don't think that it's necessary to continue debating/explaining/talking past each other. WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:42, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Writing in this article that
- @Kolya Butternut Apologies, could you rephrase what you said so I can understand the intended meaning? A Socialist Trans Girl 02:17, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- As I attempted to say, your response was not responding to a correct interpretation of my words. Kolya Butternut (talk) 01:10, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Kolya Butternut I am! You said "saying Trans women are women who... is unclear because the meaning of women is difficult and unclear" and ""Trans women are women who..". just leads to the question of what is a woman, so we should get as clear as we can.". Or am I misreading? A Socialist Trans Girl 01:08, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- You're not responding to something I said. Kolya Butternut (talk) 00:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Replying to you and Mathglot, saying
- If you put a period after it: "Trans women are women ." and that's the end of the sentence, then yes. But I don't believe that anyone is calling for that. If you have a predicate clause after: ("Trans women are women who + <descriptive clause>") then it is not circular or tautological, for the same reasons as redudant. Clearly you have some kind of objection to having the word women in the sentence twice, but other than subscribing to the debunked journalistic trope of elegant variation, I don't see what it is. That said, I lost track of who first suggested no definition is needed here because it is given at the linked article, but I agree. That also solves the issue about whether or not the two articles need to use the same wording (they don't, but why use any wording at all here? This article's topic is not trans women, and no definition is needed, as long as it is linked). Mathglot (talk) 03:26, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- Perhaps "circular" is a more accurate descriptor than tautological. Kolya Butternut (talk) 18:07, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- The RFC at Trans woman over this language was indeed controversial. It is a tautology, because "woman" has two different meanings. If we just look at Merriam-Webster, we can interpret the word to be defined as
- Because the phrase "trans women are women" is redundant, and because it is highly controversial it would require a strong consensus finding it meets NPOV. What's your reasoning for wanting to use this language? Kolya Butternut (talk) 07:46, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- This is the current version:
- "Some women are transgender, meaning they were assigned male at birth, while some women are intersex, meaning they have sex characteristics that do not fit typical notions of female biology."
- Does anyone really hate this version? Or is this something we can all live with for the next few months/years? WhatamIdoing (talk) 02:01, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- @WhatamIdoing I don't hate it, I actually like it. A Socialist Trans Girl 02:17, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- it seems like a good compromise, for consensus. A Socialist Trans Girl 02:18, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- As I noted earlier I don't like piping from transgender to Trans woman (MOS:EASTEREGG) but this isn't an enormous problem. I'm fine with this. –RoxySaunders 🏳️⚧️ (talk • stalk) 18:21, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- @WhatamIdoing I don't hate it, I actually like it. A Socialist Trans Girl 02:17, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
Transphobic initial sentence
The first sentence, "A woman is an adult female human." is inherently transphobic and feeds the transphobic rhetoric that only females can be women. It should be more inclusive from the get go and less bigoted. TheZelos (talk) 13:29, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- The footnote shows that "female" can refer to gender as well, and in any case, this definition is what is used in reliable sources. Crossroads -talk- 23:05, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
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