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No mention of the TALOS?

Hey, I wondered, why no mention of the TALOS? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/TALOS_%28uniform%29 81.201.144.88 (talk) 16:18, 21 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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Pneumatic Muscle; poor/awkward composition, no citations

This section just seems to stick out, as though it were written by someone unfamiliar with English, and the formatting is inconsistent with the rest of the article. I suggest a rewrite, and citations for the claim of being better than a pneumatic actuator.

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Introduction

I recommend removing paragraphs four and five in the introduction, or move that information to the main text. That should make the intro a better size. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dave Seagraves (talk • contribs) 05:18, 24 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Raison d'être

This article is starting out all wrong. What is the reason for its existence? It says in the beginning that it's for endurance and blablabla. What about bullet protection, invisibility, fall protection, underwater, space suit, situational awareness in helmet AR, etc? — Preceding unsigned comment added by B0ef (talk • contribs) 14:51, 20 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Go ahead and add those things. That's how Wikipedia works. Billyshiverstick (talk) 02:59, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Should have an In Popular Culture section

Just seems like something that’s in so many sci-fi things (Halo, Fallout, Metroid) DemonDays64 (talk) 01:36, 23 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

If it doesn't have a section like that or similar be sure to check the article history, because some overzealous people think such sections are no different from trivia and might have deleted it again[1] -- 109.76.195.210 (talk) 18:23, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Copyedit/update July 2019

Hi, I went through the article to update and streamline it as best I could. I am not an expert so please forgive any technical errors. This is a fast-moving field with considerable commercial relevance and the original article had many unsubstantiated claims of one technology being better than another. There was also extensive, unsubstantiated discussion of design problems that seem specialized to a particular type of exoskeleton, which i have mostly removed. Any comments or improvements would be very welcome. Thank you. Logophile59 (talk) 01:36, 8 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

For reference, the section you removed on those design problems is not specific to any one design, but is common to basically all powered exoskeletons. It might have been too technical, but the risks it detailed are significant and have hampered past efforts like Hardiman for example. Khitrir (talk) 04:34, 9 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comment, Khitrir. If you're talking about "Pinching and joint fouling" it wasn't so much that it was technical as that it was completely unreferenced, and I was unable to find any references after a fairly determined search. If you have a reference in mind that meets WP standards please feel free to reinstate the section. I was also slightly influenced by the feeling that much of the recent action (or at least the obvious recent action) seems to be in flexible exoskeletons, which I assume are less affected by this issue, so it seemed reasonable to give these problems less prominence. But again, I'm not remotely an expert so please forgive and amend my errors! By the way, if you ping me next time you leave a comment I'll be more likely to reply quickly. Logophile59 (talk) 02:59, 2 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Removing the fictional depiction list

Is the removal of the list of depictions not a violation of Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Powered exoskeletons in fiction? Has there been a new vote or something? --Luka1184 (talk) 11:54, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I don't get it either. Someone just removed two wiki commons pictures I put in about fictional suits. Man I hate it when people plain revert my stuff. Billyshiverstick (talk) 02:55, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Abandoned user draft for Industry section

Please would an interested editor assess the material at User:Ilariapacifico/sandbox, incorporate what is useful, blank the remainder of that page as WP:COPYARTICLE, and leave a note here when done? – Fayenatic London 15:47, 15 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Do Not Revert!

Somebody just reverted my additions of pictures of fictional exoskeleton suits. When you revert stuff, you drive people away from Wikipedia editing. Why did you do it? God only knows. It's not like you had the grace to discuss it on the talk page, or ask me. Billyshiverstick (talk) 02:58, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Billyshiverstick, it was reverted by a bot that deletes non-free images that do not have a use rationale for this specific page. As it's written on the pages File:Iron Man Mark III armor from Iron Man (2008 film).jpg and File:Tales of Suspense 39.jpg, there are notes detailing the articles these pictures can be used on. They can't be used here unless there is a reason such copyrighted work can't be substituted by any other image of a powered exoskeleton. Recon rabbit 18:36, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]