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==Assessment comment==
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== Side effects ==

The second section (beginning, “[c]ommon side effects include...”) seems odd to me. I’m not educated in what is & isn’t considered a side effect, but I find “[s]erious side effects are rare. They include suicide...” to be strange. I (not a doctor) would not consider suicide as a side effect of a drug just the same as I would not consider a pregnancy a side effect of alcoholic beverages. In my opinion, decisions based on a drug’s effect aren’t side effects in their own right, but suicidal tendencies would be. After all, a chemical can’t make someone have a decision, but it can certainly lead her into acting upon it. I think the section below that mentions the adverse effects puts it better than this section. [[User:Dfcorrea00|Dfcorrea00]] ([[User talk:Dfcorrea00|talk]]) 23:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC) [[User:Dfcorrea00|Dfcorrea00]] ([[User talk:Dfcorrea00|talk]]) 23:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
::Some medications result in higher rates of suicidal thoughts / suicide which is a side effect. And this is how it is generally presented in the medical literature. [[User:Doc James|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Doc James|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Doc James|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Doc James|email]]) 01:32, 1 November 2017 (UTC)

== Source 3 error ==

Source 3 directs to dead link (error 404)
[[Special:Contributions/5.144.208.90|5.144.208.90]] ([[User talk:5.144.208.90|talk]]) 13:12, 5 April 2018 (UTC)
:I can't believe this still hasn't been fixed. I've added the archive link with InternetArchiveBot now, it should work correctly. [[User:MutchyMan112|MutchyMan112]] ([[User talk:MutchyMan112|talk]]) 21:23, 20 August 2018 (UTC)

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The comment(s) below were originally left at Talk:Diazepam/Comments, and are posted here for posterity. Following several discussions in past years, these subpages are now deprecated. The comments may be irrelevant or outdated; if so, please feel free to remove this section.

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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Wim van Dorst (Talk) 21:42, 6 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Side effects

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The second section (beginning, “[c]ommon side effects include...”) seems odd to me. I’m not educated in what is & isn’t considered a side effect, but I find “[s]erious side effects are rare. They include suicide...” to be strange. I (not a doctor) would not consider suicide as a side effect of a drug just the same as I would not consider a pregnancy a side effect of alcoholic beverages. In my opinion, decisions based on a drug’s effect aren’t side effects in their own right, but suicidal tendencies would be. After all, a chemical can’t make someone have a decision, but it can certainly lead her into acting upon it. I think the section below that mentions the adverse effects puts it better than this section. Dfcorrea00 (talk) 23:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC) Dfcorrea00 (talk) 23:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Some medications result in higher rates of suicidal thoughts / suicide which is a side effect. And this is how it is generally presented in the medical literature. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 01:32, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Source 3 error

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Source 3 directs to dead link (error 404) 5.144.208.90 (talk) 13:12, 5 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I can't believe this still hasn't been fixed. I've added the archive link with InternetArchiveBot now, it should work correctly. MutchyMan112 (talk) 21:23, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]