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**I'll be blunt: this reads like promotional gloss, has a very heavy "marketing" tone. Could we move it away from that? And for what it's worth, if I could afford this bike in the K1200S guise, it would be in my garage. --[[User:Sirimiri|Sirimiri]] 03:31, 11 September 2006 (UTC) |
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**A very nice article about a very nice bike... thats all I would say, the tone is correct as BMW has boken their image of being conservative and jumped into the competition |
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- All the info in this article that I have created can be verified from the external links on the main page --Matchless 21:17, 16 April 2006 (UTC)
- I'll be blunt: this reads like promotional gloss, has a very heavy "marketing" tone. Could we move it away from that? And for what it's worth, if I could afford this bike in the K1200S guise, it would be in my garage. --Sirimiri 03:31, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
- A very nice article about a very nice bike... thats all I would say, the tone is correct as BMW has boken their image of being conservative and jumped into the competition