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== X Japan == |
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=Current disputes= |
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{{DRN archive top|reason=There looks like a rough consensus to use "rock" in the very first sentence of the lede. If there is still a dispute over whether or not to include "visual kei" in the infobox, I recommend holding a [[WP:RFC|request for comments]] on the article's talk page. Best regards — <b style="text-shadow:0.15em 0.15em 0.1em #555; color: #194D00; font-style: oblique; font-family: Palatino, Times, serif">[[User:Mr. Stradivarius|<span style="color: #194D00">Mr. Stradivarius</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Mr. Stradivarius|♫]]</sup></b> 08:39, 4 May 2012 (UTC)}} |
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== Dragon Age: The Veilguard == |
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* {{pagelinks|X Japan}} |
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{{DR case status|resolved}} |
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{{drn filing editor|Sariel Xilo|20:06, 5 December 2024 (UTC)}} |
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{{DRN archive top|Closed as possibly resolved. Two of the editors reached agreement on a rewriting of portions of the article and made those edits. The third editor has not edited for two weeks. If the editor returns, and objects to the changes, discuss on the article talk page. If the editor returns, and reverts the changes, discuss on the article talk page, and explain that there is a rough consensus for the changes. If that also fails, starting an RFC is less unpleasant than filing a report at [[WP:ANI]]. In any event, do not edit-war, because they are no winners in edit wars. [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 03:49, 29 December 2024 (UTC)}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> |
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Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> |
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* ''Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?'' |
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We are currently disputing the genre list on the X Japan Wikipedia site. The following genres are listed: heavy metal, speed metal, power metal, progressive metal, symphonic metal, glam metal. The common consensus is to change the genres that X Japan is known for, including Metal (the term “metal” encompasses all of the metal genres listed above), Rock, Visual Rock, Visual Kei. These genre additions have been consistently denied by a user (xfansd), for reason stating that X Japan is considered a metal band in a variety of sources, writing “A genre of a band is determined by what sources label that band's music in general.” The author of the page cites the following source when listing the genres: X Japan: Best Review |
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http://www.asiaarts.ucla.edu/article.asp?parentid=7936. The article lists numerous genres beyond just “metal.” For instance, the headline itself reads, “Reliving the Height of Japan’s Superlative Visual Rock Band.” Later in the article, you will find “…most revered Japanese rock band” and “fleeting genre known to fans as “Visual Kei” (aka “Visual Rock”). Thus, we are asking to acknowledge ALL genres listed in this article if this is what the author will base the genre selection on. In order for the contributions to be accurate, the following genres have to be included: “Visual Rock” “Rock” “Visual Kei”. We are using this article as the main source indicating X Japan’s “genre,” so all genres listed in the article need to be included. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> |
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* {{pagelinks|Dragon Age: The Veilguard}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
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* {{User|Sariel Xilo}} |
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* ''Who is involved in the dispute?'' |
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* {{User|BMWF}} |
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* {{User|Wikibenboy94}} |
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:* {{user|Xfansd}} |
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:* {{user|Mikaxxxxxxxxx}} |
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:* {{user|Leslieulm}} |
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* ''Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)'' |
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Not yet. |
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* <small>'' N.B. To inform the other users you may place the text'' <code><nowiki>{{subst:DRN-notice|thread=</nowiki>X Japan<nowiki>}} --~~~~</nowiki></code> ''in a new section on each user's talk page.''</small> |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Resolving the dispute'''</span> |
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* ''Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?'' |
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Yes, the issue has been raised, and each user has logically made their argument on the talk page. The page has gone through many freezes, no longer allowing contributions. |
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* ''How do you think we can help?'' |
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We need an administrator to monitor this situation and prevent just one person (xfansd) from dictating the terms of the page. Please take note of the general consensus among the users. |
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[[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 04:48, 13 April 2012 (UTC) |
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===X Japan discussion=== |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">''Discussion about the issues listed above take place here. Remember to keep discussions calm, brief, and focused on the issues at hand.''</div> |
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If this is only one user ignoring consensus, this is no longer a content issue but a conduct issue.[[User:Curb Chain|Curb Chain]] ([[User talk:Curb Chain|talk]]) 07:16, 13 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:'''Clerk's Comment'''/{{cue}} Curb Chain, I think there was a reason why ItsZippy [[Talk:X Japan#footer|directed]] this to the dispute resolution noticeboard. Can I have some statements from the involved parties? And perhaps we can work from there and determine whether or not this is conduct or content? Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 21:40, 14 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::Was there any reason to defer the issue here?[[User:Curb Chain|Curb Chain]] ([[User talk:Curb Chain|talk]]) 21:59, 14 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::He doesn't say it explicitly. But, I think ItsZippy knows what he's doing. Besides, you can't just listen to one party and decide that they are right about only one editor not listening to consensus. Curb Chain, feel free to close this thread or give 24-hours notice with this template: <code><nowiki>{{subst:DRN status|<reason for closure>}}</nowiki></code>, if any of the other parties don't respond. Kind regards :) [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 22:40, 14 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::I am in no way saying which party is right or wrong, just pointing out that if one user [[WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT|didn't hear it]], s/he is disrupting the Project.[[User:Curb Chain|Curb Chain]] ([[User talk:Curb Chain|talk]]) 00:06, 15 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::Fair enough. Let's just wait and see what happens with this thread. <s>Give it three days or so,</s> provide 24-hour notice and then close. [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 00:38, 15 April 2012 (UTC) |
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{{od|:::::}} <s><small>If there is no response, this thread will be closed 24 hours after this time: April 15, 2012 at 14:47 (UTC) because abandoned</small> [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 14:47, 15 April 2012 (UTC)</s> |
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I believe the users were recently notified. Can we please extend the deadline for them to respond? Also, if this request is abandoned, can it be raised again? Because if not, xfansd can simply ignore this thread and "win." If you notice on the X Japan talk page, xfansd has removed numerous edits from a variety of users. This is not just one person against another, but one person deciding how to edit this page. Thank you. |
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[[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 20:40, 16 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:Is there any apparent reason why xfansd has removed these edits? And yes, if a thread is closed prematurely, a new thread can be filed. Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 20:51, 16 April 2012 (UTC) |
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Thank you for this information. xfansd removes additions to the genre portion (he is adamant about referring to the band as a "metal" band). This is fine; however, as I argued above, X Japan is known for many different genres outside of metal, and those genres should be included. Please see my post on the talk page. Thank you. |
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[[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 21:35, 16 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:Please don't think [[User:xfansd]] is just going to win. What arguments have you brought forth for justification of your version? What arguments do you have that justifies your position/version? Also, is there discussion on the talk page? Please use the talk page first and if you cannot come to a consensus there you can file a new dispute here.[[User:Curb Chain|Curb Chain]] ([[User talk:Curb Chain|talk]]) 22:46, 16 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::I see a lot of discussion on the talk page and a lot of sources. But which are considered [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] under Wikipedia's policy? In addition, a note to Ladyslime, please don't use CAPS LOCK to express your opinion, see [[WP:CAPSLOCK]]. It is considered disruptive and will not provide any more weight to your argument. How about a [[WP:COMPROMISE|compromise]], such as "X Japan (エックス ジャパン?) is a Japanese rock and heavy metal band formed in 1982 by Yoshiki and Toshi." Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 22:54, 16 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::I was just now notified of this. This is not a case of me ignoring consensus, it is a case of what reliable sources call the band. All the other users involved are new editors who didn't know Wikipedia uses reliable sources. The subject of the article [[Twitter|Tweeted]] that they don't want to be called metal on Wikipedia, and subsequently there was a wave of vandalism where I had to have an admin protect the page. Ladyslime and Mika created accounts simply to make the article reflect what the subject wants, which of course Wikipedia does not cater too. I then had to explain reliable sources to them on the talkpage. The discussion was actually dead, as Mika said they will look for sources to support their claim (which I assume they didn't find). 4 days later Leslieulm restarted the same discussion and ItsZippy suggested to move it here, 2 days after that it was brought here without me knowing. It seemed to me the dispute was already over before being brought here, and now the whole thing is blown out of proportion. [[User:Xfansd|Xfansd]] ([[User talk:Xfansd|talk]]) 00:52, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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The author cites one source as to why it is listed as metal. However, the article also lists "rock", "visual kei rock, "glamour rock", etc. The author selectively chose which to include. We have tried to incorporate more of the genres (I can support with a list of reviews, descriptions, etc. that also list other genres outside of metal), but these changes have been refused by xfansd. We have brought up this on the talk page (please refer to this), and numerous people have been blocked and denied changes, all from one person. I am in no way asking to remove metal (they can be considered a metal band), I just think I have proven the justification in adding more genres. We were directed to bring the dispute here from an administrator since no resolution was reached from just the talk page. Also, I apologize if any if my formatting was against Wikipedia standards. No more caps from my end. |
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[[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 00:58, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:Can we have a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] to support that X Japan is rock? Regardless, according to [[List of rock genres]], "metal" is considered a "rock" genre, so would saying "X Japan is a rock band" work because metal is a sub-genre of rock so it's all inclusive when you say "rock". Sincerely, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 01:04, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::On the talk page I used that same reasoning and we agreed the introduction can say "X Japan is a rock band". Some other editor changed it back. [[User:Xfansd|Xfansd]] ([[User talk:Xfansd|talk]]) 01:17, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::I also want to make it clear that while Leslieulm claims in the 'Dispute overview' that I cited [http://www.asiaarts.ucla.edu/article.asp?parentid=7936 this source] (assuming she means me when she says "author", which I don't understand), I never did. That source has been used since 2007, which is way before I started editing Wikipedia. [[User:Xfansd|Xfansd]] ([[User talk:Xfansd|talk]]) 01:26, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::In that case, it should be reverted back because there was no reason provided by the editor to remove the source and change the text. Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 18:40, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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I did not mean xfansd as the author, i meant the original author who published the genre portion on the right hand of the page. xfansd had done a great job with monitoring this page, and did change the body to "rock." Someone else did change it back. What we would like is to have more genres added to the right hand portion of the page, where it breaks down genre, members, etc. If metal is a subgenre of rock, why can't rock also be included? And when it comes to reliable sources, the source used to list the metal genres 1.) is outdated and 2.) lists other genres. The author (I repeat, NOT xfansd) is being selective on which genres to include. I am citing the same source as the author in my argument, and if he was able to use this, I assume it is in fact a "reliable" source. |
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[[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 19:56, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:I think it's safe to conclude that all mentions of genre should be "rock" because that's what everyone agreed upon according to xfansd: "On the talk page I used that same reasoning and we agreed the introduction can say "X Japan is a rock band". Some other editor changed it back." Whoever that editor is, was working against [[WP:CONSENSUS|consensus]] and [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]. Leslieulm, I didn't say xfansd or anyone was the author of the reliable source, all I said was whoever the ''editor'' that changed the page, X Japan, from "rock" → "metal" was wrong to work against consensus and reliable sources. Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 20:40, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::Again, we are talking about different sections on the wikipedia page. xfansd did change the body to rock band. Sometimes it changes back and forth, but for the most part, it does say rock. We are asking for additions in the genre listing under the background information on the right side. Those changes have been denied repeatedly. I am asking to add to that, not remove or change. |
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[[Special:Contributions/64.183.116.78|64.183.116.78]] ([[User talk:64.183.116.78|talk]]) 20:50, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Yes, that's what I meant by "''all'' mentions of genre should be 'rock'". So rock should be added to the genre list. Please log in. Thanks, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 20:52, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::Great. Logged in. So should I be the one to make the changes? Or should an administrator, to guarantee that they won't be changed back? Thank you. [[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 21:48, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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{{od|::::::}} It doesn't matter if it's done by you or an admin. An admin can just as easily be reverted as you would =) So, the best course of action is to see what the others think. If no one objects within the next 24 hours, I think it's safe to make the necessary changes to include "rock" and/or change to "rock". Best regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 21:53, 17 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:I am against adding rock to the infobox. When I said we agreed, I specifically used "in the introduction" because that is exactly where we agreed upon, not in the infobox (Mika, who is suspiciously not partaking in the discussion here but still knew to change it, changed the intro back already). Some band articles open with "is a rock band" and then have only the more specific genres (heavy metal, etc.) in the infobox. [[Black Sabbath]] is a perfect example as nobody can argue they are anything but a metal band, yet it opens with "are an English rock band". And to be honest I agreed to that simply as a compromise to stop the edit war, '''most''' articles on '''metal''' bands open with "are a metal band". And you are getting ahead anyway, because we still don't have any reliable sources claiming that they play rock music. [[User:Xfansd|Xfansd]] ([[User talk:Xfansd|talk]]) 00:39, 18 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::[[List of rock genres|Metal music is a sub-genre of rock music]]. Saying rock is all-encompassing and includes metal. For that reason, maintaining that X Japan is a rock band in the [[WP:LEDE|lede]] of the article is sufficient. Further explanation in the infobox saying that it's rock is unnecessary because it should explain the sub-genres, which it already does. Let's break down: |
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::{{checkmark}} X Japan (エックス ジャパン?) is a Japanese rock band formed in 1982 by Yoshiki and Toshi.[2] |
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::{{cross}} Genres: Rock, heavy metal, speed metal, power metal, progressive metal, symphonic metal, glam metal[1] |
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::Unless, someone produces a reliable source that says X Japan is a rock band and only plays rock, then it should not be changed. Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 00:52, 18 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::How about we use the same "reliable" source that the author uses to get the "speed metal, "power metal", etc.? Where he also describes the band as "Visual Rock Band" and "Glam Rock" and simply "Rock"? How is this not considered a reliable source if it is the source that lists all the metal? I am using the same source as where the "metal" descriptions come from. Here is the link again: http://www.asiaarts.ucla.edu/article.asp?parentid=7936. |
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[[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 18:28, 18 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::Who is this 'author' you are referring to? An editor (we're known as editors on here) who edited the page? Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 21:10, 18 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::I am just referring to the person who initially listed the genres on the right side and cited source 1 as to why he lists them. I don't know who it is, and I don't think it matters, but if we are using his source, we shouldn't be selective in pulling the genres from the article. [[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 21:55, 18 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:Hi there, I hope you don't mind if I jump in. We've not had a great deal of reliable sources provided by anyone in this dispute, and I think that might be causing problems. We seem to be agreed that the article should reflect the reliable sources that we have, so it might be worth collecting on this page the relevant sources. Secondly, I think we need to decide whether, when dealing with a source which describes the band both as rock and metal, we should use rock or metal. The source that has been mentioned on this page uses both rock and metal - when this happens, do we use metal because it is a subgenre of rock, or rock because it includes metal? [[User:ItsZippy|ItsZippy]] <sup>([[User Talk:ItsZippy|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/ItsZippy|contributions]])</sup> 21:29, 18 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::Thanks for jumping in. I would be happy to provide some links of reviews and other sources about rock band. I think it is fine to include metal, but to just say that the band is metal is extremely limiting. The band is also considered "hard rock," another subgenre of rock but definitely distinct from metal. Please note Slash's page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Slash_(musician) - a band that is considered both metal and hard rock. Here is a Hollywood Reporter article that lists X Japan as Hard Rock, as well as Power Metal: http://www.hollywoodreporter.com/news/x-japan-ready-tackle-north-91449. Here is another article from the Chicago Sun Times referring to them as both as well: http://blogs.suntimes.com/music/2010/08/lollapalooza_x_japan_makes_us.html. [[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 21:55, 18 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Hi ItsZippy, thanks for the note. Leslieulm, please look over this not very long section on reliable sources: [[Wikipedia:RS#Some_types_of_sources]]. And then afterwards, please look at this section on non-reliable sources: [[Wikipedia:RS#Self-published_and_questionable_sources]]. It seems that all three of the sources produced fall under non-reliable sources. Suntimes as a blog. Hollywoodreporter and asiaarts.ucla.edu are unreputable or are not well known. There are of course, limiations to these non-reliable sources, because when used appropriately, they can be a reliable source. I think if the source from asiaarts.ucla.edu lists the sub-genres states, "visual rock" and "glam rock" - those genres should be used instead of the broad genre of "rock". Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 22:05, 18 April 2012 (UTC) |
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Good to know. And I agree completely -- this is what I am arguing for in my original post. Thanks for your input, much appreciated. [[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 22:25, 18 April 2012 (UTC) |
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Another genre listed in that article is "Visual Kei" and if you look at the Visual Kei page on wikipedia, it lists X Japan as a pioneer of this genre. This should also be included: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Visual_kei. Also, the article from UCLA does not cite symphonic metal or power metal. Can we see the source for that? [[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 01:49, 19 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:I was always under the impression that the asiaarts.ucla.edu source was only being used to cite the glam metal claim. As in [[WP:V]] it says "it is only necessary to provide inline citations for quotations and for any information that has been challenged or that is likely to be challenged". And like I said on the talk page, since I've been working on the article, nobody has ever disputed the genres before now. So Leslieulm, are you against having symphonic metal and power metal listed? What I am saying is, if you have no problem with it then we don't have to put a source there. If you are disputing those two, here are some for power [http://www.revolvermag.com/uncategorized/x-japan-embarks-on-their-first-american-tour.html 1], [http://siriusbuzz.com/yoshiki-radio-to-debut-on-sirius-xm.php 2], and about the only one I found for symphonic metal [http://www.thenewstribune.com/2010/10/01/1363860/trendsetters-rock-it-out.html 1]. Also want to point out to Whenaxis that "visual rock" isn't a genre, it has no article, and why put glam rock when glam metal is already used. And while the very badly written and sourced [[visual kei]] article claims "some sources refer to it as a music genre" (personally I cringe at this), if you check every visual kei band's article it is never put in the infobox. X Japan's introduction already makes it clear that they pioneered the movement. [[User:Xfansd|Xfansd]] ([[User talk:Xfansd|talk]]) 17:14, 19 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::I just think it is very limiting to just say that X Japan is a metal band, and only list various types of metal. They have such a diverse range of music, and can be considered hard rock, visual rock (which redirects you to glam rock, not glam metal, so glam rock would definitely be preferable), and others. The following article in the Huffington Post says: "The band went on to pioneer an entire genre in Japan called "visual rock..." (http://www.huffingtonpost.com/huff-wires/20110308/as-music-x-japan/). Also, please note all of the sources listed on the X Japan site - they include loudwire, blabbermouth, jrockrevolution, etc. If we are using these as sources, I can list many that describe x japan as both rock (various types) and metal. Like I stated, I do not want to remove metal. I simply stated that the cited article did not list symphonic metal because all genres being put forth are being questioned. Looking at Sirius Radio, he debuted on The Boneyard, the stations Hard Rock channel. Also, going back to every visual kei band's articles, none of them put it in their info box. However, it is a genre, and X Japan (as the pioneer of it) should have it included in their info box. [[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 20:52, 19 April 2012 (UTC) |
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I see that there is an issue where the words, "rock" and "metal", are being used interchangably throughout the article. I think that one mention of "rock" in the lede is sufficient enough for the reader to know that the sub-genres that are listed as metals are considered rock (as it is already). So, xfansd is right by saying that duplicate genres are not necessary. Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 20:39, 19 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::I agree to some extent, however, many people just go to the info section for a quick overview of the band. To look there, it lists x Japan as purely metal. And there are other sub genres of rock that should be included (glam/visual rock, hard rock, etc.) Also, Visual Kei is a genre and should be included under the genre tab. Again, that section is an overview where people may look initially, so I do think the other sub-genres should be mentioned there. [[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 20:52, 19 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Many people also read the lede. Why "glam rock" when there's already "glam metal"? Why "visual rock" when it just redirects to "glam rock"? Perhaps, just visual kei can be included - to avoid any duplication. Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 20:56, 19 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::Glam rock because it is redirected from Visual rock, which makes it more appropriate than glam metal (if we are saying they are the same anyway.) And adding visual kei would be ideal. Thank you. [[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 21:00, 19 April 2012 (UTC) |
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{{od|:::::::}} No. That's not what I'm saying. Glam metal is a more specific sub-genre than "glam rock", but they are basically the same thing. For that reason, it should be left glam metal because it's a ''specific sub-genre'' of rock. Further since "visual rock" and "glam rock" are clearly the same thing, the same thing applies. So, I only think "visual kei" should be added to the list, with a source of course! Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 21:14, 19 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::Gotcha. Why is glam metal considered more specific than glam rock? Is it because of the ambiguity of rock? Just trying to clarify. And it would be great if Visual Kei could be added. Is Billboard a big enough source? http://www.billboard.biz/bbbiz/industry/global/japanese-artists-band-together-to-help-slash-1005074962.story. If not, I will do some more research, but even the official visual kei website (and wikipedia) discuss X Japan as the pioneer of the genre. Thanks![[User:Leslieulm|Leslieulm]] ([[User talk:Leslieulm|talk]]) 21:42, 19 April 2012 (UTC) |
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{{od|::::::::::}} Metal is a sub-genre of rock. Thus, glam metal is a sub-genre of glam rock, therefore, making it a more ''specific sub-genre'' in my opinion. I think Billboard is good source unless it's written in a press release or biography format. Just to be safe, I'd look for a second source. Regards, [[User talk:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 21:51, 19 April 2012 (UTC) |
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<small>If there is no response, this thread will be closed 24 hours after this time: April 25, 2012 at 23:38 (UTC) because stale or resolved</small> [[User:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>[[User talk:Whenaxis|talk]] ([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 23:38, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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Please dont close this thread i just saw today that this dispute was going on ill find article to prove x japan´s genres ! [[User:Ladyslime|Ladyslime]] ([[User talk:Ladyslime|talk]]) 21:30, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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For now i found this http://www.nytimes.com/1998/06/18/arts/the-pop-life-end-of-a-life-end-of-an-era.html saying X Japan "pioneering its own genre, a Japanese equivalent of glam rock known as ''visual kei.'' " and talk a little more about their style...and well New York Times is a reliable source right? Ill search for more anyway [[User:Ladyslime|Ladyslime]] ([[User talk:Ladyslime|talk]]) 23:46, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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Please do not close the thread. I have just seen this thread now. I was not aware that there was a deadline to submit references. I will look for references so that you could add the word "rock" to X Japan's music genre. Thank you. [[User:Mikaxxxxxxxxx|Mikaxxxxxxxxx]] ([[User talk:Mikaxxxxxxxxx|talk]]) 00:34, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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I am now aware that we all agreed on adding "visual kei," and it's settled. Although it may be too late (again, I did not see this thread until a few hours ago today; thus, I wish a grace period be granted) I still wonder why we cannot add "rock" as well. As we see in discussions above, if, in fact, metal is sub-genre of "rock," doesn't X Japan's music fall under the big genre of "rock" with all those sub-genres described within, such as glam metal? If that is the case, is it wrong to add rock? If the Wikipedia's purpose is to give information to general public as to who/what the subject is, general public will probably recognize the wider genre called "rock" more in addition to those sub-genres being exclusively described in terms of metal? Btw I do completely agree to the fact that "visual kei" was, in fact, added. Thank you. [[User:Mikaxxxxxxxxx|Mikaxxxxxxxxx]] ([[User talk:Mikaxxxxxxxxx|talk]]) 02:02, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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* {{cue}} Hello everyone. I've read through the discussions here, and it looks like there is a rough consensus to use "rock" in the very first sentence of the introduction, so the most important problem seems to be solved. The remaining issue seems to be whether to include "visual kei" in the infobox or not. I can see that there are good arguments both for and against, and I don't think we can say which way it should go just yet. I think that a good way to decide would be to open the discussion to a wider user base to get a broader consensus. How about holding a [[WP:RFC|request for comments]] on the visual kei issue over at the article talk page? Let me know what you all think of this. Best regards — <b style="text-shadow:0.15em 0.15em 0.1em #555; color: #194D00; font-style: oblique; font-family: Palatino, Times, serif">[[User:Mr. Stradivarius|<span style="color: #194D00">Mr. Stradivarius</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Mr. Stradivarius|♫]]</sup></b> 20:35, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> |
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* ''Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?'' |
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1) Disagreement on if [[WP:SYNTH]] is occurring in the topline summary sentences. The arguments for including these sentences is that one sentence in the lead is an accurate summary of the article's reception section & follows [[MOS:INTRO]]/[[Wikipedia:Summary style]] & the second sentence is in a reception section paragraph & follows [[WP:VG/REC]] advice for opening sentences. The argument against is that SYNTH is occurring & these summary sentences should not be included. |
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A question has arisen in regards to how to use references to support a claim. Here is the disputed prose: |
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2) Rewriting a sentence on review bombing to remove context on negative reviews after a November talk page discussion came to consensus. |
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3) Other more minor disagreements about exact prose. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> |
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{{quotation|"[[Income inequality in the United States|Income inequality]], defined as a wealthy [[upper class]] with [[economic stagnation]] or impoverishment for the rest of the population, has increased greatly since the 1960s."}} |
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*Current discussion: [[Talk:Dragon Age: The Veilguard#Prose]] |
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The reference is [http://www.forbes.com/sites/deborahljacobs/2011/11/01/occupy-wall-street-and-the-rhetoric-of-equality/] and the text being used to cite the claims is: |
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*Previous discussion: [[Talk:Dragon Age: The Veilguard#Review bomb context]] |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> |
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{{quotation|''In an article in the second issue of the Occupy Wall Street Journal entitled “What Liberty Square Means: The Progress of Revolutions,” Rebecca Manski joins the debate from Zuccotti Park, renamed Liberty Square. Manski argues:'' |
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An independent review of the prose to ensure it is following policy as it seems the discussion has stalled out & to help us reach a consensus on the main content disagreements. The back and forth has led to the article being under a [[WP:FULL|full lock]] until the dispute is resolved. |
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''Liberty Square is the twenty-first century Liberty Tree. If you want to understand what is happening there, imagine: Under the Liberty Tree that stood in Boston Common, early in the first American Revolution, any and all could come to air their grievances and hammer out solutions collectively, and it was there the promise of American democracy first took root. We are reclaiming a democratic practice in Liberty Square.'' |
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==== Summary of dispute by BMWF ==== |
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''Since 2008, national unemployment rates have remained above 9% with much higher rates for African Americans and youth—16% and 24.6% respectively. An estimated 10.4 million mortgages could default this year. Income inequality, with concentrated wealth at the top and flat incomes or impoverishment for the vast majority of the country’s population, has increased precipitously since the 1960s. The well known facts are worth reciting again: the top one percent of the country owns 34.6% of the wealth in total net worth; the next 19% owns 50.5%; the bottom 80% owns 15%.''}} |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> |
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==== Summary of dispute by Wikibenboy94 ==== |
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The source used is an editorial opinion piece from the Personal Investment section of Forbes. It is disputed that this can be used as fact and is believed it should be attributed as opinion and not used to claim a straight fact. The references for this opinion being used are linked and show different articles from other publications and I think the belief is they are all based on a CBO report (the primary source) to claim the statement. |
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The edits and justifications on the article by BMWF, who appears to have an ardent approach to following certain rules and guidelines, I have found particularly questionable. In my opinion: |
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1. The aforementioned summaries, in both the lead and body, of points in the reception section do not amount to [[WP:SYNTH]], and reception summaries in leads for countless articles would be removed if it did. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
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* ''Who is involved in the dispute?'' |
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2. Including the [[Steam (service)|Steam]] player base numbers is not relevant for the lead, at least not in place of the lack of official sales figures, and where the sales section largely consists of theorising how much ''Dragon Age: Veilguard'' has sold. |
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:* {{user|Becritical}} |
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:* {{user|Equazcion}} |
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:* {{user|The Artist AKA Mr Anonymous}} |
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3. Identifying each platform for the game that was given a Metacritic consensus of "generally favorable" is redundant when the consensuses are the same for all the platforms; they should only be identified if there are differing consensuses, or at most should be written as "for all platforms". |
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* ''Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)'' |
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4. The invoking of [[WP:SAID]] while changing the wording so that a critic of the game "said" instead of "thought" and "referred to" instead of "criticized" I don't find warranted for what was initially written (note there are other instances of the words "thought" and "criticized" still remaining in the section). Similarly, the initial wording of "offensive reviews" I feel is more neutral and less loaded than "abusive reviews". |
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Yes. |
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5. I am less invested in how the review bombing is outlined, though do think some mention should be made on how Steam requires proof that you have played the game first before reviewing it, unlike Metacritic (or vice versa). [[User:Wikibenboy94|Wikibenboy94]] ([[User talk:Wikibenboy94|talk]]) 19:01, 6 December 2024 (UTC) |
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* <small>'' N.B. To inform the other users you may place the text'' <code><nowiki>{{subst:DRN-notice|thread=</nowiki>Occupy Wall Street<nowiki>}} --~~~~</nowiki></code> ''in a new section on each user's talk page.''</small> |
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=== Dragon Age: The Veilguard discussion === |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Resolving the dispute'''</span> |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> |
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* ''Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?'' |
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To expand a bit a on the listing, I believe that at this point both {{reply to|Wikibenboy94|p=}} and I agree that there are no [[WP:SYNTH]] issues in the topline summary sentences removed by {{reply to|BMWF|p=}} in [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dragon_Age%3A_The_Veilguard&diff=1261158242&oldid=1260749090 this edit] and agree on restoring them which BMWF opposes. I also agree with Wikibenboy94 on points 2-4 that they outlined in their summary of the dispute. |
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Lengthy discussion on talk page until an editor expressed frustration and need for Dispute resolution notice board.[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Occupy_Wall_Street#A_Mickey_Mouse_argument.2C_literally] |
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In terms of the review bomb sentence, I think the following compromise version should satisfy the request for clarity on Steam users (bold is the text added by BMWF) while restoring context (underlined) that was in the November consensus on this issue: {{xt|''Veilguard'' was also subject to [[review bombing]] on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "[[woke]]". Some outlets noted that {{underline|while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative,}} the user reviews of ''Veilguard'' on [[Steam (service)|Steam]], '''which requires users to play the game before leaving a review''', have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove {{underline|offensive}} reviews}}. [[User:Sariel Xilo|Sariel Xilo]] ([[User talk:Sariel Xilo|talk]]) 17:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC) |
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* ''How do you think we can help?'' |
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===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== |
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Please advise the best way to handle the claim to be supported by the source per Wikipedia standards. Goal is for criteria that would pass GA review or at improving the article for a better assement. |
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I am ready to act as the moderator if at least two participants want moderated discussion. Please read [[WP:DRN Rule A|DRN Rule A]] and state that you agree to the rules (if you want moderated discussion). The purpose of dispute resolution is to improve the article. So please state concisely what you want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. |
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[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 20:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Quick clarity question on DRN Rule A - my assumption is that the rule is to not edit war over the disputed content but updates/improvements in other sections are fine. This question occurred to me after the fact (I corrected a template in the awards table which is unrelated to the dispute but was a mistake I made). [[User:Sariel Xilo|Sariel Xilo]] ([[User talk:Sariel Xilo|talk]]) 02:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 06:41, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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====Clarification by Moderator (Dragon Age)==== |
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===Occupy Wall Street discussion=== |
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I generally prefer to have the parties avoid editing any part of the article, at least until all of the parties agree on what the area of dispute is. Since the other editors have not yet stated what they think the issues are, I am not relaxing the rule against editing the article, except with regard to the change that [[User:Sariel Xilo]] is asking about, that was already made. In that case, the principle of [[no harm, no foul]] applies to the change that has already been made. Leave the change in. |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">''Discussion about the issues listed above take place here. Remember to keep discussions calm, brief, and focused on the issues at hand.''</div> |
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[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 05:06, 14 December 2024 (UTC) |
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===Zeroth statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== |
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====Opening responses==== |
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I agree to DRN Rule A. As outlined [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia%3ADispute_resolution_noticeboard&diff=1262684740&oldid=1262675251 above], I would like to restore the topline summary sentences in the lead & reception section (ie. the sentences removed [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dragon_Age%3A_The_Veilguard&diff=1262412752&oldid=1262343565 in the lead in this edit] & [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dragon_Age%3A_The_Veilguard&diff=1261158242&oldid=1260749090 in the reception in this edit]), restore other word changes as outlined by Wikibenboy94's in their points 2-4, & I would like use the above proposed compromise version of the review bomb prose. [[User:Sariel Xilo|Sariel Xilo]] ([[User talk:Sariel Xilo|talk]]) 21:04, 12 December 2024 (UTC) |
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===First statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== |
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I can't fully respond to this tonight, but just a few points: the source used is one of several highly reliable sources which can be used to support the claims (or claims with very similar content, each source has different ways of parsing the data such as different start dates). We have this, for example, from the LA Times: |
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Do two editors want moderated discussion? The filing editor has said that they agree to [[WP:DRN Rule A|DRN Rule A]] and has made a statement about what they want to change in the article. Another editor made a statement at the beginning, but has not agreed to [[WP:DRN Rule A|DRN Rule A]]. If they agree to those rules, I will open moderated discussion, and we will try to work on the various differences. If they do not either agree to the rules or make some other statement, I will close this discussion as declined due to lack of response. |
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Are there any other questions? [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 18:20, 16 December 2024 (UTC) |
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''"The year just past was one in which the stagnation of income and wealth for the great majority of Americans continued — indeed, bit so deep that it helped fuel the Occupy movement taking as its constituency the "99%," ... From the late 1940s to the early 1970s, the median American household saw its income double. Since then: a screeching halt, or barely a 5 percent rise in incomes for the less-affluent 90 percent of Americans. But between 1979 and 2007, the top 1 percent saw their incomes soar by 281 percent...A straightforward description of the trend was issued in October by the bipartisan Congressional Budget Office, which determined that for the highest-income 1% of the population, average after-tax household income almost quadrupled from 1979 to 2007, while income for the 60% of Americans in the middle of the scale grew by just over one-third. (Both figures are adjusted for inflation; in 2007, that middle group comprised households with earnings between about $15,000 and $70,000.) As a consequence of this trend, the CBO says, the share of after-tax household income collected by the top 20% of income earners grew to 53% in 2007 from 43% in 1979. Everyone else fell...One message of the Occupy movement is that the trend to deliver wealth to those at the top of the economic pyramid undervalues the contributions made by everyone else. This is not merely an important cause of our economic malaise, but a moral and political failing too.''"[http://articles.latimes.com/2011/dec/31/business/la-fi-hiltzik-20120101] by [[Michael Hiltzik]]. |
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:I've pinged the two other editors in case they only watched this noticeboard for a week & haven't seen that a moderator opened the discussion. [[User:Sariel Xilo|Sariel Xilo]] ([[User talk:Sariel Xilo|talk]]) 18:34, 16 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I have read and agree to DRN Rule A. [[User:Wikibenboy94|Wikibenboy94]] ([[User talk:Wikibenboy94|talk]]) 20:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC) |
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===First statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== |
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The sentence need not use the word "defined," and I offered to remove it. And no one disputes that the sentence is factual (yes, you heard that right, everyone knows/admits it's fully true). These are undisputed facts. Nothing, however, satisfies the critics at the OWS talk page. In an attempt to keep the info out of the article they have edit warred and even made up various additions to policy, such as that we as editors should research the history of authors and decide for ourselves whether they are qualified, regardless of where they are published. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 07:56, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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* As BeCritical points out, with a Forbes source along with the primary source from whence it came (not to mention numerous other statistical refs, though those are claimed to be invalid by our opponents because they don't explicitly say OWS makes use of them), there's no chance of a reasonable challenge coming along. This is a factual statement and not an opinion. Even if the Forbes column could be said to be an "opinion piece," this particular statement is not an opinion, but a fact, and would have been fact checked by the editorial staff. The information is not being challenged and is not in dispute. It is just being held to some unreasonable standard of [[WP:V]]'s "likely to be challenged" clause, and I see it as downright [[Wikipedia:Wikilawyering|lawyering]]. If it could be said that a challenge may come along at some point (as with any data, one can never say it's impossible), this information is not at all '''likely''' to be challenged. '''<font face="Century Gothic" style="text-shadow:1px 1px 3px #999;">[[User:Equazcion|<span style="color:#008;">Equazcion</span>]] <small>[[User talk:Equazcion|<sup>(<span style="color:#007BA7">talk</span>)</sup>]]</small>''' 17:29, 25 Apr 2012 (UTC)</font> |
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* PS. If you have the patience to take a look through [[Talk:Occupy Wall Street]], you can see for yourself some of the ridiculous straw-grasping arguments that have been attempted in order to keep this info out. '''<font face="Century Gothic" style="text-shadow:1px 1px 3px #999;">[[User:Equazcion|<span style="color:#008;">Equazcion</span>]] <small>[[User talk:Equazcion|<sup>(<span style="color:#007BA7">talk</span>)</sup>]]</small>''' 17:58, 25 Apr 2012 (UTC)</font> |
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===Second statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== |
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::There are facts in the staement mixed with opinion and POV terms. It is not really factual.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 20:55, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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It appears that two editors have agreed to moderated discussion, but that they have mostly agreed with each other and disagreed with the third editor, who has not responded on this noticeboard. Their statements of what they want to change in the article are not entirely clear, at least not to me. So what I will do at this point is to ask each editor to prepare draft versions of the sections that they think should be changed. I don't see a discussion in the current text of the article about [[review bombing]], so that we can read a description of the review bombing. |
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I will comment that the article is no longer fully protected. The full protection expired, and the article is now semi-protected. However, I have asked that the editors in this dispute not edit the article while we are discussing its improvement. |
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There is a question here that I've been wanting more opinions about: it would improve the article to be able to go to the CBO report directly for a few statistics. Numerous secondary sources reference the CBO report and relate its data to the complaints of OWS. Do people think it's acceptable to go directly to the report? [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 19:02, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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*[http://www.cbo.gov/sites/default/files/cbofiles/attachments/10-25-HouseholdIncome.pdf The CBO report (PDF)], [http://www.cbo.gov/publication/42729 summary at CBO site], [http://www.economist.com/blogs/dailychart/2011/10/income-inequality-america?page=1Income summary by economist.com]. '''<font face="Century Gothic" style="text-shadow:1px 1px 3px #999;">[[User:Equazcion|<span style="color:#008;">Equazcion</span>]] <small>[[User talk:Equazcion|<sup>(<span style="color:#007BA7">talk</span>)</sup>]]</small>''' 20:23, 25 Apr 2012 (UTC)</font> |
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I don't understand what the [[WP:SYNTH|synthesis]] issue is, and I don't want to read through the history and previous discussion to determine what the [[WP:SYNTH|synthesis]] issue is. So please state more specifically what the [[WP:SYNTH|synthesis]] issue is if you want it considered, or let me infer it from the rewritten sections, or I might ignore it, which might be what you want. It seems that the two editors who have responded do not see a [[WP:SYNTH|synthesis]] issue, so it can be disregarded if it isn't mentioned and the third editor doesn't describe it. |
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*[[WP:NOT#STATS]]--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 20:50, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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Please provide your rewritten sections. |
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====Further discussion==== |
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Are there any other questions? |
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*The crux of it is "claims with very similar content, each source has different ways of parsing the data ". The source may be a reliable one, however it is an editorial. The dispute is that the reference uses undisputed fact (that OWS has an issue with income inequality), mixed with opinion on on the data using POV terms (Actually the prose missuses "wealth", a simplified meaning for "money" with "wealthy", an opinion of great riches). I believe the source to be an opinion piece and not straight journalism and that the information itself is being phrased as fact. "[I]mpoverishment for the rest of the population" is POV and even the word "wealthy" can be seen as opinion. If we are using just the reference supplied, then the claim should be attributed to the author in the reference as it is written. The very claim (or similar) "Income inequality is an issue with OWS" is the undisputable information, and as such does not require referencing. Can we say it is the top issue? I don't know. We would certainly need to reference that in my opinion. Does the CBO report use the above terms? I don't believe so. The claim needs clean up and a reference that is not an editorial peice used to reference a fact, with a claim in an encyclopedic tone that can be supported by the reference. Using the above reference from a portion not included above I can write a very similar claim as fact: |
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[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 18:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{quotation|"[[Income inequality in the United States|Income inequality]] (unequal distribution of income) in the US has increased over the last three decades."<ref>{{cite news |title= Presidential campaign needs to get real on salvaging middle class|author= |url= http://articles.latimes.com/2011/dec/31/business/la-fi-hiltzik-20120101|newspaper= Los Angeles Times|date= December 31, 2011|accessdate=25 April 2012}}</ref>}} |
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Proposed text: |
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''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' released for [[PlayStation 5]], [[Windows]], and [[Xbox Series X/S]] on October 31, 2024. {{strikethrough|After release ''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' topped Steam charts and broke BioWare's concurrent player record.}} The game received generally positive reviews from critics, '''who praised its cast, representation of [[sexual minority]] characters, graphics, and level design, but were more critical of the story, aspects of the writing, and combat'''. It was nominated for Game of the Year at the [[Golden Joystick Awards]] and Innovation in Accessibility at [[The Game Awards 2024|The Game Awards]]. |
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¶1 ''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' received "generally favorable" reviews from critics {{strikethrough|for its Windows, Xbox Series X/S, and PlayStation 5 versions}} according to the [[review aggregator]] website [[Metacritic]].<ref name="MC XSXS Reviews">{{cite web |url=https://www.metacritic.com/game/dragon-age-the-veilguard/critic-reviews/?platform=xbox-series-x |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard (Xbox Series X Critic Reviews) |website=[[Metacritic]] |access-date=December 4, 2024}}</ref> [[OpenCritic]] determined that 68% of critics recommended the game.<ref name="OC Reviews">{{cite web |url=https://opencritic.com/game/17037/dragon-age-the-veilguard |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Reviews |website=[[OpenCritic]] |access-date=November 12, 2024}}</ref> ''Veilguard'' was subject to [[review bombing]] on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "[[woke]]". '''{{underline|Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative}}''', the user reviews of ''Veilguard'' on [[Steam (service)|Steam]], '''which requires users to play the game before leaving a review''', have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove '''offensive reviews'''.<ref>{{Cite news |date=2024-11-05 |title=Metacritic responds after Dragon Age: The Veilguard review bombing |url=https://www.eurogamer.net/metacritic-responds-after-dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bombing |access-date=2024-11-06 |work=Eurogamer.net |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |date=2024-11-05 |title=Dragon Age The Veilguard is getting review bombed, and now Metacritic has something to say |url=https://www.pcgamesn.com/dragon-age-the-veilguard/metacritic-respond-review-bomb |access-date=2024-11-06 |website=PCGamesN |language=en-US}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Watson |first=Philip |date=2024-11-05 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard's Poor Review Bombing Leads To Metacritic Response |url=https://www.cgmagonline.com/news/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bombing/ |access-date=2024-11-06 |website=[[CGMagazine]] |language=en-CA}}</ref> |
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<sub>This unsigned comment is from [[User:Amadscientist]]</sub> |
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¶2 Hayes Madsen of ''[[Rolling Stone]]'' called ''Veilguard'' a "fresh start for the franchise" with the game "practically a soft reset".<ref name=":2">{{Cite magazine |last=Madsen |first=Hayes |date=2024-10-28 |title='Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Is a Return to Form for a Beloved RPG Franchise |url=https://www.rollingstone.com/culture/rs-gaming/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-1235144960/ |access-date=2024-10-29 |magazine=Rolling Stone |language=en-US}}</ref> Leana Hafer for ''[[IGN]]'' similarly commented that the "story feels like both a send-off and a soft reboot, in a way, which was paradoxically a bit refreshing and disappointing at the same time". She also found it "cool" that the Inquisitor returns as "a fairly important character".<ref name=":1">{{Cite web |last=Hafer |first=Leana |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Review |url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review |access-date=2024-10-29 |website=[[IGN]] |language=en}}</ref> Andy Bickerton of [[NPR]] viewed the game as a "well-executed [[action RPG]]". However, he called the decision to not include prior player narrative choices a "letdown", noting that "it's easy to see how this squandered potential, along with the tonal inconsistencies, could have arisen out of ''Veilguard''{{'}}s near-decade of troubled production".<ref name=":11">{{Cite news |last=Bickerton |first=Andy |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Tonally inconsistent 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' is still BioWare's best action game |url=https://www.npr.org/2024/10/28/nx-s1-5165587/dragon-age-veilguard-review-story-tone |access-date=November 29, 2024 |work=[[NPR]]}}</ref> Lauren Morton of ''PC Gamer'' thought a downside of perceived streamlining and eliminating the "most common RPG frictions" is that it "can feel more action adventure than [[Role-playing video game|RPG]] at moments".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev">{{cite web |last=Morton |first=Lauren |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard review |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review/ |access-date=October 28, 2024 |website=[[PC Gamer]]}}</ref> |
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¶3 '''Critics were mixed on the game's story.''' Matt Purslow from ''IGN'' '''thought that''' ''Veilguard'' was "at war with itself", as he felt that the game was not interested in exploring the franchise's past despite being its first direct sequel, and that the game sidelined major characters such as Solas and Varric.<ref>{{cite web|url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-is-at-war-with-itself|title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Is at War With Itself|first=Matt|last=Purslow|work=[[IGN]]|date=November 9, 2024|accessdate=November 10, 2024}}</ref> Malindy Hetfeld of ''[[The Guardian]]'' '''criticized''' the "surprisingly mediocre" writing in ''Veilguard'', describing the protagonist Rook as more of a witty observer than a "person with opinions".<ref name="Guardian review">{{cite web |last=Hetfeld |first=Malindy |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard review — a good RPG, but an underwhelming Dragon Age game |url=https://www.theguardian.com/games/2024/oct/28/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bioware-electronic-arts |access-date=October 28, 2024 |website=[[The Guardian]]}}</ref> She also found the "comically evil" new villainous gods disappointing compared to the more "compelling" Solas.<ref name="Guardian review" /> Hafer opined that ''Veilguard'' has "weird" pacing, and that the overaching plot "is nothing particularly outstanding in its overall structure", with the only interesting factor being Solas.<ref name=":1" /> Madsen argued that Solas was "a secondary protagonist", with the game focusing on his choices, their impact, "and how your journey as Rook mirrors" his journey.<ref name=":2" /> Ash Parrish of ''[[The Verge]]'' appreciated how Solas' arc subverted her desire to kill him despite longstanding animosity; she praised BioWare for crafting "his story arc in a way that didn't soften his actions as villain backstories typically do, but in a way that I felt compelled to make a different choice".<ref name="Verge full review">{{Cite web |last=Parrish |first=Ash |date=2024-11-28 |title=The hardest part of Dragon Age: The Veilguard is making a choice |url=https://www.theverge.com/24307786/dragon-age-the-veilguard-full-review |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=The Verge |language=en}}</ref> Reviewers were divided over how consequential player choices were to the narrative,<ref name="Verge early review">{{Cite web |last=Parrish |first=Ash |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard starts slow but strong |url=https://www.theverge.com/24281631/dragon-age-the-veilguard-early-review-ps5-xbox-pc |access-date=2024-10-30 |website=The Verge |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":2" /><ref name="Guardian review" /><ref name="PCGUS Morton rev"/><ref name=":3">{{Cite web |last=Hashimoto |first=Kazuma |date=2024-10-28 |title=I Played 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' and Got Myself Stuck in a Gay Love Triangle |url=https://www.them.us/story/dragon-age-the-veilguard-lgbtq-romance-options-essay-lucanis-davrin |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=Them |language=en-US}}</ref> with some finding major decisions "few and far between".<ref name="Guardian review" /><ref name=":2" /> |
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I already responded to this on the talk page, I'll paste my answer here. |
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¶4 Madsen praised ''Veilguard'' for its attention to detail when showcasing the player's iteration of Rook and the game's companions, calling the characters "wonderfully written and well integrated into the plot".<ref name=":2" /> Todd Harper of ''[[Polygon (website)|Polygon]]'' emphasized the companions as the heart of the game, noting that they were "weird and idiosyncratic in the best ways".<ref name=":4">{{Cite web |last=Harper |first=Todd |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the friend group simulator we've been waiting for |url=https://www.polygon.com/review/470712/review-dragon-age-the-veilguard-ps5-xbox-pc |access-date=2024-10-30 |website=Polygon |language=en-US}}</ref> Kazuma Hashimoto of ''[[Them (website)|Them]]'' commented that at a surface level companions feel like "fantasy clichés and tropes", but with earned trust reveal "mundane moments" that make them feel closer to "normal people"; he also praised both the romance and non-romance options for interacting with companions.<ref name=":3"/> Hafer appreciated that companions are each "stars of their own story" with "complex, memorable, likable, distinct personalities", but was disappointed that in combat they felt more like extensions of the player character.<ref name=":1" /> Parrish enjoyed the "fun banter" of companions, and praised the romance options in ''Veilguard'', highlighting that unlike previous ''Dragon Age'' games, it explicitly indicates when the player becomes locked into a romance path.<ref name="Verge full review" /> Conversely, Oliver Brandt of ''[[Sports Illustrated]]'' viewed the choice to make all companions romanceable regardless of player gender expression as "a small step back" from other ''Dragon Age'' games.<ref name=":8">{{Cite web |last=Brandt |first=Oliver |date=2024-10-31 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the first triple-A game to handle gender identity the right way |url=https://www.si.com/videogames/features/dragon-age-the-veilguard-taash-gender-identity |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=[[Sports Illustrated]] |language=en-US}}</ref> Harvey Randall of ''PC Gamer'' highlighted a lack of nuance in Rook's romantic dialogue if a player chooses to discuss Rook's gender identity.<ref name=":9" /> Morton thought companions lacked nuance and individual characterizations,<ref name="PCGUS Morton companions rev" /> noting that "good people don't make great characters".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev" /> She further criticized the lack of a "functional mechanism for disapproval" and interpersonal group conflicts.<ref name="PCGUS Morton companions rev">{{Cite news |last=Morton |first=Lauren |date=2024-11-15 |title=The Veilguard is the first Dragon Age game where my companions don't care enough about anything to argue with me |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/the-veilguard-is-the-first-dragon-age-game-where-my-companions-dont-care-enough-about-anything-to-argue-with-me/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |work=PC Gamer |language=en}}</ref> |
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¶5 '''''Veilguard'' generally received praise for its inclusive [[Character creation|character creator]] and representation of [[transgender]] and [[Non-binary gender|non-binary]] characters.'''<ref name=":8" /><ref name=":14">{{Cite web |last=Mora |first=Alyssa |date=September 19, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Preview: BioWare Finally Nails The Character Creator I've Always Wanted |url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-preview-bioware-finally-nails-the-character-creator-ive-always-wanted |access-date=November 30, 2024 |website=IGN |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":10">{{Cite web |last=Bea |first=Robin |date=2024-11-06 |title='Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Makes Me Feel Seen As a Trans Player, But Still Disappointed |url=https://www.inverse.com/gaming/dragon-age-veilguard-trans-characters |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=Inverse |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":12">{{Cite web |last=Henley |first=Stacey |date=2024-11-06 |title=Why Dragon Age: The Veilguard Uses The Term 'Non-Binary' |url=https://www.thegamer.com/dragon-age-the-veilguard-non-binary-modern-immersion-breaking/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=TheGamer |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Puc |first=Samantha |date=2024-11-03 |title=This 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' companion's story ruined me in the best way |url=https://www.themarysue.com/this-dragon-age-the-veilguard-companions-story-ruined-me-in-the-best-way/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=The Mary Sue}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Marshall |first=Cass |date=2024-11-01 |title=How role-playing a trans or nonbinary Rook works in Dragon Age: The Veilguard |url=https://www.polygon.com/gaming/472513/dragon-age-veilguard-trans-nonbinary-identity-role-play |access-date=2024-11-30 |website=Polygon |language=en-US}}</ref> Alyssa Mora of ''IGN'' emphasized the character creator's "body diversity" where "the options feel almost endless".<ref name=":14" /> Both Robin Bea of ''[[Inverse (website)|Inverse]]'' and Brandt commended Taash's story arc,<ref name=":8" /><ref name=":10" /> with Brandt noting while BioWare has previously "touched on queer stories", ''Vanguard'' "goes one step further, unashamedly and unabashedly calling one of its most compelling characters nonbinary".<ref name=":8" /> Bea acknowledged the "smart writing" in ''Veilguard'' in addressing transgender representation. However, she critiqued the use of a [[coming out]] narrative as "low-hanging fruit", and thought Rook's gender identity was not fully explored beyond Taash's storyline and so did not "always feel like a fully-actualized trans character".<ref name=":10" /> Stacey Henley of ''[[TheGamer]]'' appreciated the deliberate use of modern language in Taash's story in comparison to ''Inquisition''{{'s}} [[Krem (Dragon Age)|Krem]], though noted the language has been contentious with audiences as potentially "immersion breaking".<ref name=":12" /> Randall was more critical, noting how ''Veilguard'' "both failed and succeeded" in the narrative aspects focused on non-binary characters, and that the overall "scattershot, clumsy, and unpolished" writing impacts the "use of queer language in a fantasy context".<ref name=":9">{{Cite news |last=Randall |first=Harvey |date=2024-11-13 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard's leap forward in trans inclusion comes from a heartfelt place, but its problems left me feeling frustrated, angry, and tired |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/dragon-age-the-veilguards-leap-forward-in-trans-inclusion-comes-from-a-heartfelt-place-but-its-problems-left-me-feeling-frustrated-angry-and-tired/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |work=PC Gamer |language=en}}</ref> They found the lack of a fictional [[etymology]] connecting the word to the cultures of Thedas problematic, reflecting wider story issues as the game seems "barely interested in the politics of its own setting".<ref name=":9" /> |
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{{quotation|"[[Income inequality in the United States]], with a wealthy [[upper class]] accruing large profits and [[economic stagnation]] or impoverishment for the rest of the population, has increased greatly since the 1960s."}} |
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¶6 '''Critics enjoyed ''Veilguard''{{'}}s graphics and level design but were divided on the game's combat.''' Bickerton felt that ''Veilguard''{{'}}s strongest feature was its action gameplay, writing "mastering combat and party composition is a thoroughly rewarding experience from start to finish".<ref name=":11" /> He also highlighted the game's "accessibility and difficulty settings" as being welcoming for more casual players.<ref name=":11" /> Hetfeld viewed ''Veilguard''{{'}}s combat as functional but repetitive, without "much room for strategy", and similar to numerous other games.<ref name="Guardian review" /> Hafer called the boss fights the highlight of combat.<ref name=":1" /> Parrish praised the combo system, the new elemental effects on weapons, and the ability for player mages to switch between melee and ranged for a "kinetic, almost chaotic energy". However, she critiqued the length of encounters from the "wave after wave of tanky enemies with multiple health bars".<ref name="Verge full review" /> Harper thought the combat was "hit or miss", and that the combo system was less complex than ''Inquisition'' and the ''Mass Effect'' games.<ref name=":4" /> Hafer stated that the game has "visual splendor",<ref name=":1" /> and Harper called it "graphically gorgeous".<ref name=":4" /> Parrish opined that the "companions and environments are arresting in their design".<ref name="Verge early review" /> Bickerton thought the level design was an improvement on ''Inquisition''{{'}}s "bland open zones", and praised side quests for their depth and the rewarding of exploration with "useful loot and impactful plot points".<ref name=":11" /> Morton viewed each area's "incredible visual design" as a standout feature of ''Veilguard''. She found it was better off for removing ''Inquisition''{{'}}s "giant zones" and having "more constrained maps of coiled corridors and clearings".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev" /> |
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Analysis to see if there is any POV, as opposed to presentation of fact done in a way much like the sources: |
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In the lead and reception ¶1/¶3, I bolded prose which I think should be included & did strikethroughs on what I think should be removed. The lead & reception ¶3 summary sentences were removed for being synth although I disagree with that assessment. It would be helpful to have an outside opinion review them. Additionally, reception ¶1 (in bold & underline) includes the review bomb sentence that was part of the original November consensus that BMWF argued against; when raising synth concerns, they removed it again. I believe it adds important context as news outlets contrasted the two platforms in articles focused on what was occurring at Metacritic (ie. the negative user reviews on Metacritic were very different from the user reviews on Steam). [[User:Sariel Xilo|Sariel Xilo]] ([[User talk:Sariel Xilo|talk]]) 22:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC) |
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'''with a wealthy upper class accruing large profits''' |
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I fully support all the proposed changes Sariel Xilo has outlined above and have no further issues to raise, so a draft version from me will be redundant. [[User:Wikibenboy94|Wikibenboy94]] ([[User talk:Wikibenboy94|talk]]) 20:34, 19 December 2024 (UTC) |
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This is fact: backed up by the best of RS, the CBO report and secondary sources. |
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'''economic stagnation''' |
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The two editors who have responded to my request to provide a draft of changes to the article are in agreement on revised language. The other editor has not commented because they have not edited in the past week. I will suspend the rule against editing the article to allow the edits for which there is a rough local consensus to be made. If there is no objection to the edits within a few days, I will close this case as resolved. If there is any objection, we will resume discussion, but will leave the revised edits in place. |
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Are there any questions? |
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This is also backed up by highly reliable sources, incomes have declined for most of the population on average, with slight gains for the middle class and less income for the poor. |
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[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 04:46, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Thanks for taking a look at the draft. Just to confirm, I should go ahead and implement the above in the article? [[User:Sariel Xilo|Sariel Xilo]] ([[User talk:Sariel Xilo|talk]]) 04:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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That's where this comes in: |
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'''or impoverishment''' |
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Impoverishment is also backed up by fact, as per the Guardian source, about 1/7th of the population— live below the poverty line. |
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So either economic stagnation or impoverishment. This is simple fact. |
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Yes. Make the agreed-on changes. If they are reverted, follow my instructions above. [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 04:54, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Thus, you may be saying that reciting all these indisputable facts together in the same sentence is POV. But since they are facts, since the sources themselves put them all together, and since that is what OWS is upset about, I see nothing POV about it. |
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{{Done}} per above instructions ([https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Dragon_Age%3A_The_Veilguard&diff=1265392493&oldid=1265375456 see edit]). [[User:Sariel Xilo|Sariel Xilo]] ([[User talk:Sariel Xilo|talk]]) 18:23, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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In actuality, the sources would paint a starker picture than the sentence discussed above: I left out that the country's economy has been growing, but that income only went to the top. That also needs to be put in. I don't see the POV in the statement. What I do see is some stark and obvious statistics which when you simply state them together in a neutral way '''sound''' POV because they lead the reader to an obvious conclusion. But giving the reader the facts is not what Wikipedia means by POV. |
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The terms ''[[upper class]]'' and ''[[economic stagnation]]'' are not themselves disputed, they are technical terms and make for better linking. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 20:56, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:We cannot use an opinion peice to attempt a POV definition of the term "Income Inequality". "wealth" has been changed to "wealthy" which is not defined. The reference is being used in a manner that is disputed as being actual fact. Wikilinks do not justify "Upper class", another undefined term and "economic stagnation" again undefined. Be neutral with wording for facts. Use brevity and don't use puffery.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 21:11, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::We as editors get to use our own words, and in this case the definition of "upper class" and "wealthy" meet the data derived from the sources and "economic stagnation" is the same word used in the LA Times source, and means the same thing as "flat incomes." My sentence is a straight rendition of fact, without any POV or puffery, based on highly reliable sources. And just how far are you willing to reach to discredit? An editor can't change the words "wealth at the top" to "wealthy?" Seriously. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 21:50, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::'''Clerk's Comment'''/{{cue}} I thought the dispute was already resolved. Or, was that just the half of it? [[User:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>[[User talk:Whenaxis|talk]] ([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 23:45, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::No, it's an editor problem, not a problem with any particular text. I recently rewrote the section to meet their demands. But all they do is attack it some more based on made-up policy. You can expect us back here regularly till an admin wises up, but given the low level, that may never happen. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 23:51, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::I suggest the [[WP:ANI|administrators' noticeboard for incidents]], in that case. We don't work with conduct issues since we can't give out blocks or warnings, only content disputes. Regards, [[User:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>[[User talk:Whenaxis|talk]] ([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 23:54, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::As I said, it is too low-level for an admin to "get it." Ideally, a neutral admin such as yourself would take the page under his wing and constantly monitor, and take care of conduct issues (like violations of BRD) as they came up and also act as a mediator/third opinion to prevent made-up policy and the like. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 00:13, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::I remember an Admin already telling you an editor cannot violate [[WP:BRD]]. It's not policy.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 18:00, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::Whenaxis actually isn't an admin, but I agree it would be nice if admins were paying to attention to what goes on there. I'd welcome general additional eyes there either way though. '''<font face="Century Gothic" style="text-shadow:1px 1px 3px #999;">[[User:Equazcion|<span style="color:#008;">Equazcion</span>]] <small>[[User talk:Equazcion|<sup>(<span style="color:#007BA7">talk</span>)</sup>]]</small>''' 00:32, 26 Apr 2012 (UTC)</font> |
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:::::::Oh, my bad :P Well actually more of a mediator/3O is needed. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 01:07, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::I wish I were an admin ;) But, I can get an admin to look at this, if you'd like, it's not too low-key if I explain it to them. [[User:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>[[User talk:Whenaxis|talk]] ([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 01:43, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Okay cool, maybe they should talk to [[User:Dreadstar]], an admin who has been trying to deal with [[User:The Artist AKA Mr Anonymous]]. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 02:45, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::I'm sorry, but that was simply incorrect. It is not an editor conduct issue. An editor was warned ('''not me''') for edit warring over this issue and discuss it. He made a thread and Dreadstar made a comment about contiuing to discuss. We did untill Becritical stated his frustrations and wish to seek this at Dr or the RS notice boards. It is unfair to categorize this dispute brought here as a conduct issue as I have no such issue I am not edit warring over this. But I am beginning to take GREAT issue with the grouping of editors. If one looks at the other editors talk pages one might see an organizational attempt by two editors. And it aint me. You are right, This should now be taken to Admin Notice board. Also...If Becritcal is correct and he has changed the prose to suit the concerns of other editors where is that statement from him in the discussion? Made up policy? I have just about had enough of these accusations. The Occupy Wall Street talkpage and article are indeed looked at by several administrators. I personaly have been advised by two seperate Admin that they keep an eye on my edits and talkpage discussions because of concern that I would edit war becuase I have in the past. If I am making up policy, I can assure you Dreadstar, Drmies or a handful of other admin would let me know and they may still wish to advise me in areas I may have been mistaken or incorrect, and I welocme it. Always have and always will. IF this is to be an accusation of me let it be clearly spelled out. If this is an accusation of AKA, he has already been warned and this is part of the process of choice by the edior Becritial. He wanted to take it here so I started the discussion.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 17:45, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::Part of the user conduct issue is that corrections to the understanding of policy are not absorbed. One example is as I said above, you will not absorb a correction to your claim that Wikipedia editors are responsible for judging whether particular authors, as opposed to publications, are qualified: "And of course we research the authors of the references! If we don't know who is making the claim and we're just using any old person who writes an article, then we're not looking into the reference enough to know if it can be used. We need to know if this is a journalist or a academic or if they are posting opinion or stating fact, if they are staing fact and they themselves are not actualy the journalist but a guest writer and has no journalistic background that amounts to an opinion piece or blog, whether he's an English professor or ecomiics expert."[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Occupy_Wall_Street#A_Mickey_Mouse_argument.2C_literally] [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 18:10, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::That's not a conduct issue and we don't discuss those here but at the ANI. Writing an encyclopedia means research dude. The subject, the authors, the context etc...and what's that link supposed to prove?--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 18:15, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::On Wikipedia, [[WP:OR|writing an encyclopedia also means ''not'' doing particular types of research]]. I would like someone besides myself, Equazcion and Littleolive oil to explain this to you. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 18:22, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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Uhm...what does that have to do with researching a subject and being able to justify the use of an author? But it DOES say "To demonstrate that you are not adding OR, you must be able to cite reliable, published sources that are '''directly related to the topic of the article, and directly support the material being presented'''." Anyone owant to take a shot at expalining that to the editor.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 18:32, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Nothing gets through, despite multiple editors trying to explain. That's why I say it's a user conduct issue, but one which we need help on, we can't just take it to AN/I. See the problem? [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 18:43, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::Look, I am an editor that has grown and learned immensely in the 5 years I have been editing. Trust me...things get through. But you are not correct in stating anyone has attempted to correct me on this issue or the policies within. We have been discussing the issue and you seem to be ignoring much and interpreting things in very novel ways. This is done throughout the encyclopedia, but the main point is what is accepted for improvement of the article for a better rating towards Good Article status. I have reviewed and contributed to good articles. I am using these policies and guidelines as set by criteria for assesment of articles. What are you using? I use examples of Good Articles to judge and feature articles when I can to strive towards the interpretations of policy as set by precedence.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 19:08, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::Actually, I do believe you when you say you haven't noticed people trying to correct you on this. I don't think it's malice in any way. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 19:16, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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*'''Drive by comment:''' After reading the contested text and the source (I scanned the rest but ...!) I think the sourcing is not good enough for presenting the statement as factual. It is, at its heart, a reporters view of the situation. I suggest changing the source, or adding something more academic such as [http://www2.ucsc.edu/whorulesamerica/power/wealth.html this one] (which is linked to in the cited article), or, better still, something from a peer reviewed journal. --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 20:07, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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This is the very thing I have been saying. It's all above in the discussion. I have no idea what the editor is claiming. They have been refusing to budge until we got to DR. The staistical information is as with any statistical information. It's a case by case thing and that is part of the discussion. How and when to use the statistics. But the claim in the original prose was weak and did need stronger sourcing.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 21:56, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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**That would be a good solution, except opponent editors ''also'' reject sources for these statements that don't explicitly say OWS makes use of the statistics mentioned. Otherwise this would've been solved a long time ago. '''<font face="Century Gothic" style="text-shadow:1px 1px 3px #999;">[[User:Equazcion|<span style="color:#008;">Equazcion</span>]] <small>[[User talk:Equazcion|<sup>(<span style="color:#007BA7">talk</span>)</sup>]]</small>''' 20:11, 26 Apr 2012 (UTC)</font> |
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***Then I don't see the problem. The connection is well sourced and the the statements are well sourced. Are they arguing that the occupy movement must itself make the connection? --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 20:23, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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****Yes, that's my understanding (for example: [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:Occupy_Wall_Street&diff=488771893&oldid=488771729]). No sources that don't explicitly say this are being accepted to back up this statement, nor other statements like it. '''<font face="Century Gothic" style="text-shadow:1px 1px 3px #999;">[[User:Equazcion|<span style="color:#008;">Equazcion</span>]] <small>[[User talk:Equazcion|<sup>(<span style="color:#007BA7">talk</span>)</sup>]]</small>''' 20:34, 26 Apr 2012 (UTC)</font> |
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:::::I agree that we should be able to use primary sources which our secondary sources point to. But this is the question I asked above. You seem to be saying we can use the primary sources such as the CBO report, if your secondary sources say that the statistics in the primary sources are related to the complaints of OWS. If this is the consensus, it is easy to source everything. But opponents object to doing this. Remember there are multiple secondary sources for the statement, like the LA Times one above. We are '''not''' just discussing this one source. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 20:36, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::The comment at [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:Occupy_Wall_Street&diff=488771893&oldid=488771729] doesn't seem right to me. If reliable sources comment on the linkage between OWS and income equality, and provide stats to back up those statements, and provide sources to back up the stats, then we're in the clear. It would be a problem if either (a) we added the statistics to show income inequality, or (b) we made the link between income inequality and OWS but neither seems to be the issue here. That the statistics ''were not made as part of the protest'' and therefore cannot be included is an invalid argument. We present material from secondary sources and not what the primary source says (unless it is repeated/recognized/elaborated on by a secondary source). --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 20:45, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::I didn't say "That the statistics ''were not made as part of the protest'' and therefore cannot be included". I said "They were not made as part of the protest. They exist seperate from the protests and the detail needs to be in direct context to reliable secondary sources". Part of this argument is being made by an editor in this DR that statistical information needs to be used to show "income inequality". He asks right here on this page. [[User:RegentsPark]] could you discuss the use of the original source which is an editorial and sourcing POV claims from the source and not just the information? Do we use opinion to state fact?--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 21:51, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::While they do exist separate from the protests, and I note that the paper cited in the Forbes article predates the occupy movement, they are being linked with OWS by the secondary source. Are you saying that the editorial itself is an opinion piece and therefore material from it should not be presented as fact? I'm not sure if that's a valid objection either (if that's what you're saying) because the Forbes piece does verifiably cite the statistics. I could explain further but I'm, as yet, unclear as to what your specific objection is. --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 22:04, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::Not exactly. I note in the discussion that there is an undisputable fact that need not be referenced...that OWS has a concern with income inequality. The Forbes piece is being interpreted by a non economics professional using what I see as POV verbage that was repeated in the claim in the article. If we wish to use the the verbage we must attribute it as opionion and possibly quote the author, although I believe Becritical has made the comment that we can use our own words, so it may be possible to just use the prose without a direct quote but still attributing to the opinion if the contentious terms remain. As I said, Forbes as a source is reliable but we still have to distinguish the "Personal finance" section from straight news and be open to the fact that the source page does state the author as an English professor who was a lawyer but has no known economic background, not a expert on the subject. An "editorial" is an opinion peice. I actually believe she was discussing a publication from OWS originally and an argument another author was making. I suggested a rewrite above that closely resembles the statement I disputed with more neutral wording and using a reference becritical supplied.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 23:19, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::I don't believe it's POV verbiage, as explained in detail above (look for the bold). It's a straight rendition of facts. Further, we have many sources which put these particular facts all together as an explanation of what OWS is upset about. It's therefore a statement of fact, not merely something attributed to one opinion piece. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 23:30, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::Yes, I know. I responded and disagreed. Look for the post below yours.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 23:36, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::Specificly the way you combined the term wealthy with upperclass. It's actually redundant. And the term was wealth in the source as in money not wealthy as in "the rich". Upperclass alone as defined in America is a much more broad interpretation, but while it does mean the 1 % it also means anyone above the oother class. Since the majority of the US is at a certain level many are in the upper class above the poor who would see middle class as an upperclass. Contentious in that it is a very broad term. The term isn't even in the source. It refers to "concentrated wealth at the top". Your version has point of view not expressed in the source. --[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 23:48, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::::With "impoverishment" the author gave you an encyclopedic choice with "Flat income", but you took her POV term to use.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 23:55, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::::"[[Economic stagnation]]" is not in the source. You are extrapolating and using a POV term. If you look you will see the term has different defintions. It need not be used at all. It's over stating the information. Just say "Flat growth" that is from the source and is not a copyright issue to use. But this is all still the interpretation of primary source information in an editorial and per policy needs to be attributed and a quote would be best...or just use a better source and write something more neutral as I suggested.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 00:06, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::::::Okay, how ''many'' sources would you need to state something as fact? "Stagnation" is in the other source. Whatever the merits of your arguments above, can you tell me what problems you find with [http://articles.latimes.com/2011/dec/31/business/la-fi-hiltzik-20120101 this source] for example? [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 00:25, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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{{od}} The text is fairly clear and is well sourced. Economic stagnation is another term for flat incomes so that's not a problem and is the term that best describes the statistics. Plus we have the source above provided by bcritical. I'm not sure of impoverishment though. It doesn't have the same meaning as stagnation and is not necessarily supported by the income statistics. --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 00:37, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:Well to be fair, the text is "Income inequality in the United States, with a wealthy upper class accruing large profits and economic stagnation '''or impoverishment''' for the rest of the population, has increased greatly since the 1960s." It's backed up by the Guardian source, which says about 1/7th of the population live below the poverty line which I assume is the same as impoverishment. So that's two sources for that term right there, with the Guardian providing it as a technical definition [http://www.guardian.co.uk/news/datablog/2011/nov/16/occupy-protests-data-video Guardian source is here]. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 01:04, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::I disagree that Economic stagnation is another term for flat incomes. Flat incomes relate to individual financial income and economic stagnation is measured in terms of the GDP growth. It's minucia....but then we are talking microeconomics. I dispute the use of another term when there is an acceptable one from the source but , this all hinges on this being attributed as opinion as well.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 01:50, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::"Flat incomes" would be a perfectly good way of putting it. And just to repost for RegentsPark, [http://www.economist.com/blogs/dailychart/2011/10/income-inequality-america?page=1Income here is another source] for the stats, why I say we're talking about hard cold fact here. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 02:03, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::{{quotation|"[[Income inequality in the United States]], with wealth accruing at the top and flat incomes for the rest of the population, has increased sharply in the last thirty years according to Deborah Mutnick, senior editor of Forbes Magazine."}} |
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::::::::::Would work for me. But, if there is a better source (RS that is not an opinion piece) to use without an attribution we would need different prose (probably). But a fact only needs one RS to be claimed, but just because there are other sources that make similar claims doesn't mean you use the opinion without attribution and then cite the sources that seem to agree, you cite the primary source being referenced then cite the source that is of the higher quality RS from a straight news story or peer reviewed journal that makes the claim.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 02:42, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::So do you consider the LA Times source sufficient for a fact claim without attribution? [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 04:32, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::In a way.... As I stated above the article can be used to state certain facts as it mentions them, but they are not precisely the same but similar. So here is a quote similar to the Forbes one: "The year just past was one in which the stagnation of income and wealth for the great majority of Americans continued— indeed, bit so deep that it helped fuel the Occupy movement taking as its constituency the "99%," those left behind by the continued gravitation of economic bounty toward the top 1% of U.S. taxpayers." And another: "...(where working people can earn enough to raise a family, build a modest savings, own a home, secure their retirement) Those four goals have been undermined since the 1970s by the unequal distribution of the wealth created largely by the American worker's boundless gains in productivity." Hey look...that's part of GDP...can you say "economic stagnation? If you like that phrase here is an RS that uses it. And one more: "There isn't any question that income inequality has increased over the last three decades". Now since what we are proposing so far is completely dropping the opinion piece for the LA Times piece, we need to slightly re-write the prose. How about this: |
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::::::::::::{{quotation|"[[Income inequality in the United States|Income inequality]] has increased over the last three decades with [[economic stagnation]] and unequal distribution of the wealth undermining the goals of working people."<ref>{{cite news |title= Presidential campaign needs to get real on salvaging middle class|author= ael Hiltzik|url= http://articles.latimes.com/2011/dec/31/business/la-fi-hiltzik-20120101|newspaper= Los Angeles Times|date= December 31, 2011|accessdate=25 April 2012}}</ref>}} |
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::::::::::::Would that work? If so It's even formatted to go.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 05:45, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::Thank you, that's precisely what I've (we've?) been trying to get across. '''<font face="Century Gothic" style="text-shadow:1px 1px 3px #999;">[[User:Equazcion|<span style="color:#008;">Equazcion</span>]] <small>[[User talk:Equazcion|<sup>(<span style="color:#007BA7">talk</span>)</sup>]]</small>''' 20:53, 26 Apr 2012 (UTC)</font> |
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::::::::Is this the consensus then? It certainly makes giving factual statements much easier. I myself have a strict interpretation of policy, so accepted that we could not use the primary sources like the CBO report, even though our secondary sources make it clear that they explain what OWS is concerned about. If we can use those sources, then we have easy sourcing for factual claims. Anyone else? [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 21:16, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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In looking at this I see two issue and only one real dispute. The issue with using statistical information is a seperate one and if I have not made myself clear in all the prose and the link I left to the policy etc., then I will state outright, that it is a case by case matter and dependent on context and what statistics and how and where they are used. It is a complicated issue and not cut and dry for a single consensus to any and all use. As for the prose and reference dispute, the admin above did indeed suggest better sourcing.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 23:23, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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=====New version===== |
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{{quotation|"[[Income inequality in the United States|Income inequality]] has increased over the last three decades with [[economic stagnation]] and unequal distribution of the wealth undermining the goals of working people."<ref>{{cite news |title= Presidential campaign needs to get real on salvaging middle class|author= ael Hiltzik|url= http://articles.latimes.com/2011/dec/31/business/la-fi-hiltzik-20120101|newspaper= Los Angeles Times|date= December 31, 2011|accessdate=25 April 2012}}</ref>}} |
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Give me a while I want to integrate the full section and sources here. Looking good (: [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 13:33, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:At the minimum, I suggest changing 'working people' to 'most Americans'. --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 13:38, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::Agreed. I think the prose is original enough to use that.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 19:57, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::I have made that change to the agreed on prose with wikilinks above as cited in a compromise for my dispute. I feel this is resolved and leave it up to DR/N facilitator as to whether a seperate DR/N should be opened to address Becriticals use of multiple refernces for multiple claims and use of statistical data or if we should simply continue here. I asssumed there was something else with statistics but I didn't assume he meant ALL of the material. If that is his dispute I would recommend a seperate filing. While I saw this as two issues I saw only one dispute from what the original discussion was involving and that was over information another editor reverted. HOWEVER I also gave a window to more discussion here by stupidly thinking this was going to actually be done on a case by case basis...but that can be done here as well. I would rather do it little by little on the talk page where at least one other editor has shown interest in engaging there, but if DR/N is determised to leave this open I will continue here and ask the other editor to join this discussion.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 23:33, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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During the 1990s, economists began to release studies which showed the increasing income inequality in the United States. Although these were cited by liberals and Democrats, this information did not fully penetrate the public sphere till it was used as one of the ideas behind the OWS movement. OWS protests were particularly concerned with wealth and income inequality, in addition to greed and the corrupting power of banks and [[Multinational corporation|multinational corporations]].<ref name="II">[http://topics.nytimes.com/top/reference/timestopics/subjects/i/income/income_inequality/index.html?inline=nyt-classifier Income Inequality] [[The New York Times]] March 22, 2012</ref> Inequality in wealth and income has increased over the last three decades with [[economic stagnation]] and unequal distribution of the wealth undermining the goals of most Americans."<ref name="Hiltzik">{{cite news |title= Presidential campaign needs to get real on salvaging middle class|author= ael Hiltzik|url= http://articles.latimes.com/2011/dec/31/business/la-fi-hiltzik-20120101|newspaper= Los Angeles Times|date= December 31, 2011|accessdate=25 April 2012}}</ref><ref name="ForbesJacobs" /><ref name="db" /> |
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A 2010 poll found that an overwhelming majority of Americans across the political spectrum, including the wealthiest, want more [[Wealth inequality in the United States|equitable distribution of wealth]].<ref name="CBSMorePopular">[http://www.cbsnews.com/8301-503544_162-20120052-503544.html?tag=mncol;lst;1 Occupy Wall Street: More popular than you think] By Brian Montopoli October 13, 2011 "the vast majority [of Americans] seem to share the protesters' sense that the economic deck is stacked"</ref> According to news editor Simon Rogers writing for [[The Guardian]] Data Blog,<!-- This blog is discussed on the WP:Reliable Sources Noticeboard at Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_109#The_Guardian_data_blog --> Americans, including 90% of Republicans, believe that the top 20% of Americans should own as much as 40% of the wealth of the nation, and that the poorest 120 million Americans should own about 10% of the wealth of the nation. However, in reality the top 20% of people in the Unites States own 85% of the wealth, the 120 million poorest own .3% (about 1/333rd or one third of one percent), and the richest 1% own about 33%.<ref name="db">[http://www.guardian.co.uk/news/datablog/2011/nov/16/occupy-protests-data-video Occupy protestors say it is 99% v 1%. Are they right?] [[The Guardian]] Data Blog, by Simon Rogers, Wednesday 16 November </ref><ref>[http://taxprof.typepad.com/files/129tn0251.pdf United in Our Delusion] By [[David Cay Johnston]] October 11, 2010, as cited by [[The Guardian]] [http://www.guardian.co.uk/news/datablog/2011/nov/16/occupy-protests-data-video Data Blog]</ref> According to 2007 statistics, financial inequality (total net worth minus the value of one's home<ref>"Financial wealth" is defined by economists as [http://www2.ucsc.edu/whorulesamerica/power/wealth.html "total net worth minus the value of one's home,"] including investments and other liquid assets.</ref>) is greater than inequality in total wealth, with the top 1% of the population owning 42.7%, the next 19% of Americans owning 50.3%, and the bottom 80% owning 7%.<ref name="ForbesJacobs">[http://www.forbes.com/sites/deborahljacobs/2011/11/01/occupy-wall-street-and-the-rhetoric-of-equality/ Occupy Wall Street And The Rhetoric of Equality] ''Forbes'' November 1, 2011 by Deborah L. Jacobs</ref> |
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However, after the [[Great Recession]] which started in 2007, the share of total wealth owned by the top 1% of the population grew from 34.6% to 37.1%, and that owned by the top 20% of Americans grew from 85% to 87.7%. The Great Recession also caused a drop of 36.1% in median household wealth but a drop of only 11.1% for the top 1%, further widening the gap between the 1% and the 99%.<ref name="ForbesJacobs"/><ref>[http://www.levyinstitute.org/pubs/wp_589.pdf Recent Trends in Household Wealth in the United States: Rising Debt and the Middle-Class Squeeze—an Update to 2007] by Edward N. Wolff, Levy Economics Institute of Bard College, March 2010</ref><ref>[http://sociology.ucsc.edu/whorulesamerica/power/wealth.html Wealth, Income, and Power] by G. William Domhoff of the UC-Santa Barbara Sociology Department</ref> [[Buffett Rule|Tax rates paid by the wealthy are less]] than those paid by Americans making $100,000 to $200,000 per year: incomes of $100,000 to $200,000 are taxed at an effective rate of 25%, but the wealthy, whose income comes mostly from investments, pay less than 20%.<ref name="db" /> Since 1979, federal taxation has become less progressive, shifting away from progressive income taxes and toward payroll taxes.<ref name="Hiltzik" /><ref name="II" /> In the United States, about 15% of households are [[Food insecurity|"food insecure,"]] meaning that they have difficulty buying enough food. About 50 million Americans have no [[Health insurance in the United States|health insurance]] and at least 42 million —about 1/7th of the population— live below the [[Poverty in the United States|poverty line]].<ref name="db" /> [[Executive_pay#United_States|Executive pay in the largest US companies]] has quadrupled since the 1970s, but the average non-supervisory employee is paid 10% less.<ref name="db"/><ref>[http://www.washingtonpost.com/business/economy/cozy-relationships-and-peer-benchmarking-send-ceos-pay-soaring/2011/09/22/gIQAgq8NJL_story.html Cozy relationships and ‘peer benchmarking’ send CEOs’ pay soaring] [[The Washington Post]] with [[Bloomberg]], special report on Breakaway Wealth, By [[Peter Whoriskey]], October 3, 2011</ref><ref>[http://www.washingtonpost.com/business/economy/ratcheting-up-pay-with-peer-comparison/2011/10/03/gIQAKT1FJL_graphic.html Ratcheting up pay with peer comparison] [[The Washington Post]] with [[Bloomberg]], October 3, 2011.</ref><ref name=CNNstats>[http://money.cnn.com/2011/10/20/news/economy/occupy_wall_street_income/index.htm Who are the 1 percent?], CNN, October 29, 2011</ref><ref name="CBPP">[http://www.cbpp.org/cms/index.cfm?fa=view&id=3309 "Tax Data Show Richest 1 Percent Took a Hit in 2008, But Income Remained Highly Concentrated at the Top."] [http://www.cbpp.org Center on Budget and Policy Priorities]. Accessed October 2011.</ref> |
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[[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 03:11, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:Technical comment. It is not the case that the wealthy pay less taxes than those who make $100,000 to $200,000. Rather, they pay (in general) at a lower rate. --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 13:03, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::Corrected. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 21:45, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::This isn't exactly a case by case discussion but now asks to gain consensus on a whole bunch of stuff. I suggest taking this portion back to talk page as my actual dispute has been resolved at this time. I don't dispute that the CBO information cannot be used in some form as detailed on the talkpage (and here) and feel if you wish to dispute the actual exclusion of the above material it should be made as a seperate DR/N. Or we can continue to discuss each case there and not take up sapce on what I see as a resovled dispute. The issue of statistics individually is a different issue. I will participate if you wish to return with your own DR over statistical data but I feel sure that it is better to discuss this on the talk page and see and resolution to this filing.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 21:47, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::No, the dispute is not resolved. There hasn't been any agreement. Seemingly, you see it as resolved because you edited the article and put in your preferred version without discussion [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Occupy_Wall_Street&diff=488752407&oldid=488744875] [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Occupy_Wall_Street&diff=489019337&oldid=489012940] [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Occupy_Wall_Street&diff=489433290&oldid=489419308], along with [[User:The Artist AKA Mr Anonymous]] . But the removal of most of the section is what we're mainly talking about here, not just one sentence. No need for a separate section. Can you give feedback on the above? [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 22:01, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::But if you don't want to engage more here, I don't think another thread here will do anything. What do you think about formal mediation? [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 22:34, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::I will leave this up to the DR/N facilitators to decide if the intitial dispute I brought: ''"A question has arisen in regards to how to use references to support a claim.'' (with a quote of the text) ''It is disputed that this can be used as fact and is believed it should be attributed as opinion and not used to claim a straight fact."'' has been resolved.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 23:35, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::Well, if that was the only problem with the section, then let's restore the former section, or the one above, with your lead sentence. Then we can discuss further edits, such as the draft above on the talk page. But I don't think that's what you want to do. I was under the impression that we were here to get a draft of the section written, since much of the section has been blanked or changed without consensus. Seems silly just to work on one sentence. On the other hand if you're saying to just insert the text above in the article and you don't have a problem with it, then that's fine... we don't need to be here. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 01:56, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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Why use it as fact? Just explain that its an opinion of the author. Like, "according to John Doe" or "writes John Doe" or "in staff writer John Doe's opinion". As long as its phrased so that the opinion is clearly that of the author, not Wikipedia than its fine, though a balance should be maintained. [[User:GabeMc| — GabeMc]] ([[User talk:GabeMc|talk]]) 04:31, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:That is, in fact how the section is right now with a good portion that was from the older version, but is now attributed correctly as opinion to it's source the Guardian UK. It seems that the other editor wishes to use a number of sources that turn out to be opinion including the Guardian, that he had made sure to ask me directly about some time ago and then linked me to the consensus discussion on the issue of the Guardian as a RS. He still used the reference against his own recomendations to me. He has stated that the author means nothing and only the source itself does and believes that we need not distinquish between expertise of the authors themselves in such opinion. The editor wishes Income inequality as the first main section of the article and wishes for us as editors to proclaim that the CBO report is undisputed fact, and that all mention of it be done without having to reference the information to a secondary, published source. |
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:The section was edited a number of times by a number of editors, as has the entire article, but this section has been a question of a number of editors for some time and the issue never really went away. I removed the information, began a detailed explanation of my actions per policy for and gave examples of how to use facts from relliable sources that have direct context to the report, but it appears the other editor is more interested in getting the statistical information included without proper context or secondary referencing for claims. Is the CBO Report undistputed fact? Can its statistical information be used in the artticle in prose without secondary, published referense? I actually think if the other editor wants to encompass all disputes than we should make this the mother of all Occupy DR/Ns. This should be the one where we hash it all out from top to bottom, including the criticism section and how that relates to assessment, the Security and Crime section, the timeline section that was deleted and the split between pages. We can post at every project that the page is under and post something Signpost and the Wiki project Council and the Village Pump. Perhaps we need to take a straw poll and gauge the overall community temperture for a full community wide "Occupy" discussion? There are a lot of different ways we can handle this, not just If not....Becritical...just start with one claim and one refernce and we can deal with it that way...or go back to the talk page and just discuss this. We are only here because you wanted to be here. My dispute is resolved unless you would like to renege on your part. I see no reason for me to renege on mine. I am willing to discuss one case with you further here as I stated clearly "case by case" if this is not satisfactory you have every right to lodge or file and action to any part of the dispute process. We can take it from there sir. Tank you.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 07:37, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::Both versions including the above use appropriate attribution. That is not much of an an issue. If you don't want to discuss any problems you see with the former section, which was removed in a disruptive manner, or with the draft above, I'll ask for formal mediation. I don't just start from a version which is the result of disruptive editing and act as if that is correct: if you do that, then it only encourages disruption, which is bad both for any editors who try not to be disruptive and aggressive, like me, and for Wikipedia as a whole- not to mention the content of the page. As I've said before, there are sufficient sources to state things as fact in some cases. But that is not the main issue. In fact, I'm not sure what the issues were/are which caused the section to be blanked and edit warred into its current state. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 17:12, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::What I percieve, is that you have posted a chunk of an article with several claims and references that were boldly removed with proper summarizing of the policy and guideline, immediately discussed on the talk page...yet are not offering any reasoning, explanation, argument, justification or defense to include and are relying on me to contiunue to denounce the material over and over. I then see you accuse others of the very thing you, yourself are doing...not discussing. Ultimatums like: "If you don't... I'll...?" are too controling for my tastes. Your behavior seems to be very inclined towards directing editors behavior to suit a very narrow interpretation of conduct guidelines and in some cases just essays. This is becoming disruptive in my opinion. Good luck. I'm done. My dispute is resolved. Thanks.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 18:53, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::I'm asking if you see a problem with it. If you don't then I'll use it in the article. As to how you and AKA removed the former material and inserted your preferred version over the reverts and objections of myself and Equaz, and over the policy explanations of how you were wrong by other editors as well, that was disruption. If you want to dismiss our concerns here, and refuse to continue the discussion, then please do ''not'' revert at the article. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 19:28, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::I am asking that you show good faith in the discussion and please explain your position for inclusion. As part of being bold I summarized my action, created a section on the talkpage and explained in full my edit. You have yet to do so. You have argued against policy and guideline but not actually discussed why the claims you are making should be included and I do mean EACH claim and EACH reference.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 06:37, 30 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::There are no problems with the above draft. That is my position. If you disagree, let's hear why. I can't respond to nothing. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 06:41, 30 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::There are problems with the above draft. That is my position. I have disgreed. You have heard it. Is there some reasoning you have that this is acceptable for inclusion?--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 18:26, 30 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::Stonewalling and not giving reasons for your assertions just means we have to have a mediator. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 18:05, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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===A different approach=== |
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We need a different approach. I won't call for closing of the DR when there is still a dispute, regardless that the compromise of my original dispute seems to be working. I won't use "My version" versus "Their version". That is not a discussion as much as it is requesting a vote between versions that differ greatly. I am however, going to be straight forward here as I am in this dispute. |
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====The subject of income inequality==== |
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We know that income inequality is an issue for OWS. It does not require citation as it is considered undisputed fact. How this fact is applied is a matter of consensus. But...there are other issues. What about greed, corruption and the undue influence of corporations on government? Why do we have an entire section with a header entitled "Income inequality"? and not a section with headers entitled with the other issues? IS income inequality so important to the subject that it is due weight to include a seperate section entitled "Income Inequality" and no other sections relating in the same manner each issue with due weight? If we use only a single header, shouldn't that header be more neutral to the subjects of issues and simply use the header "Issues". But then there is the fact that it is a protest and they have goals. It is reasonable to suggest that issues are a part of the protest goals. Why not a section entitled "Issues and Goals"? |
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I see a section entitled as "Income inequality" and being devoted to the subject alone to be wandering into original research. As far as your version. I have stated you should be bold and add it a little at a time and see what happens. You could always add all of it and see what happens, but then you must be able to allow other editors involved to edit it, question it and remove it if they follow proper procedure. Removal of content is acceptable even as stated by essay, [[WP:BRD]]. Having content removed is not a disruption. It happens all the time. You, yourself have removed content. Is there a compromise you might consider? Perhaps drafting out a merging of some content into an issues section along with some additonal content cited to RS about the other issues and the protestor goals?--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 00:14, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:What? Why did you blank the section then instead of editing collaboratively? Why didn't you change the section title? The section title has been changed multiple times because of people's objections to the lack of agreement between the content and the title. At one point, [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Occupy_Wall_Street&diff=487794058&oldid=487793850 this was a section title], [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Occupy_Wall_Street&diff=487776941&oldid=487776835 inserted by me] also [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Occupy_Wall_Street&diff=487871857&oldid=487795371 this], and content could have been merged into that catchall section. But was that done? No, the section was blanked instead. Why would you blank content because you don't like a section title? The above is the third or 4th time I have rewritten the section to please objections which I consider mostly baseless, and which are aggressively or disruptively asserted on the article. I don't trust the process at the article anymore, and feel that only mediation has any chance of gaining a definite enough consensus that future disruptive editing can be resisted. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 18:20, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Yes, on April 16 you did indeed add a similar title to the header as I had suggested on [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Occupy_Wall_Street/Archive_28#Perhaps_.22Goals.22_should_be_.22Issues_and_goals.22... April 10] and got no reaction or discussion from you.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 22:16, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::And blanking a section is not "bold" its disruptive. ([[User:Littleolive oil|olive]] ([[User talk:Littleolive oil|talk]]) 18:30, 1 May 2012 (UTC)) |
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It does seem to me that the terms of the dispute are shifting. We started with a dispute over the wording of a sentence in the text. That dispute seems to have been resolved. Now, the entire section is being disputed? --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 20:28, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Blanking of content is another way of stating "removal of content" and should always be accompanied with a full explanation in the edit summary (which was done) and a discussion with a more detailed explanation of the edits (which was done) but, in and of itself, is a bold edit and alone is not disruptive. Bold editing is encouraged where articles have stalled or discussion only methods of collaboration are not working. But yes, I believe the terms have shifted, but the editor who began the DR/N (me) is being asked to dispute the entirety of a section. I have not disputed a section in this DR, but believe the other editor diputes my removal of content and the discussion that followed.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 20:47, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::No. Blanking content does not only equal removal of content. It strips an article, and in this case a highly contentious article. Sadly, such actions disrespect other editors working on an article, and I consider both stripping an article and that kind of aggressive stepping over other editors to be disruptive especially given the reason. We can of course agree to disagree.([[User:Littleolive oil|olive]] ([[User talk:Littleolive oil|talk]]) 00:54, 2 May 2012 (UTC)) |
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:::::I suppose you can agree to what you feel is true, but I go by what the Five pillars of Wikipedia: "all of your contributions can and will be mercilessly edited and redistributed" and what [[WP:BOLD]] states, which is: "Don't get upset if your bold edits get deleted" and "It is important not to be insulted if your changes are reverted or edited further" as well as ""For if absurdity be the subject of laughter, doubt you not but great boldness is seldom without some absurdity." from Francis Bacon.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 04:25, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::regentspark, I actually thought that a DR/N started after the blanking of a section was about getting the section unblanked. My mistake. I'm always willing to discuss whatever needs to be discussed. I do not recall any real explanation for blanking the section; rather, it seemed MadSci thought it was a kind of punishment for not having discussed to his satisfaction [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Occupy_Wall_Street#Income_inequality] "I feel it is best to remove this section again as the last revert failed to discuss in detail what their reasoning was for returning the information." This seems to me another misunderstanding of how Wikipedia works: detailed explanations in the absence of specific objections are not required. Is there any reason not to request mediation? I've been pretty busy or I would have. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 01:41, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::I assume [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Occupy_Wall_Street&diff=488747230&oldid=488744875 this] is the blanking in question? The section is there in the article now and we've been discussing one sentence from it. Could the two sides (briefly, please!) clarify what the dispute is regarding this section? No need to explain things at length as yet. Let's just get a handle on the problem first. --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 01:50, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::No idea. Can't get him to say. And no [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Occupy_Wall_Street&oldid=490215505#Income_inequality this is the section now] and [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Occupy_Wall_Street&oldid=488899300#Income_inequality this is the section before it was blanked]. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 03:41, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Yes, that is the diff of the edit I made that removed the material with the summary: "OR with no direct support from references for context". That was the original content removed and I edited a good portion back in attributed properly as opinion of the Guardian UK as Becrititcal and I discussed when I tried to address this [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AOccupy_Wall_Street&diff=486697154&oldid=486691641 here], where Becritical states that the general consensus of the community is to use the Gaurdian as an opinion.[http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AOccupy_Wall_Street&diff=486760891&oldid=486758236]. We were collaborating and we made some agreements but they never transpired and even attributing of the Guardian as opinion seemed to also disolve as important to the other editor. I decided to be bold and make an edit that I believed was within the consensus that Becritical and I had agreed on. I then began another discussion [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AOccupy_Wall_Street&diff=488747095&oldid=488746210 here]. ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 04:03, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Amadscientist, on reading your diffs I'm not sure I see what your issues are. Generally, in the diffs, you express the concern that highlighting income inequality as the main issue underlying OWS is not directly supported by reliable sources and therefore either the entire section should be removed or 'income inequality' be moved into a broadly titled 'main issues' section where other issues are also discussed. Is that a fair assessment? --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 12:47, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:"[C]oncern that highlighting income inequality as the main issue underlying OWS is not directly supported by reliable sources" is one concern yes, but not the basis of the entire section being removed. Not quite a fair assemsment only in that, it assumes these are all the arguments I used or concerns i had when i did make the edit that removed content. These are simply some concerns and ways to move the article and section past JUST highlighting ONE portion, which I do not see any source as stating as fact. I have concerns that the highlighting with use of a section gives greater importance to all the information within and makes it a more important issue to collaborate on and discuss if it is the ONLY section dealing with protester concerns. But my main dispute with the content I removed at that point was simply that the other editor was clearly going against his own previous arguments and collaborative effort with me in what I percieved was a punitive removal of content by the editor in the past in an aggressive manner while attributing such behavior to others. (Not to bring a conduct problem here, just mentioning as part of what I percieved)--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 19:21, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::I admit I'm foxed and cannot really see a dispute here. You're saying you blanked the page as a sort of reaction to the behavior of another editor. Not a good idea but let's just put your reaction as well as the behavior that caused that reaction aside and move on from there. I suggest that if highlighting one issue is your principal concern, then perhaps the way out is that you seek sources for other issues and bring them to the attention of editors on the talk page. If there are multiple, equally important, issues, and if the issues as well as their importance are well sourced, then there is no reason why income inequality cannot be included as a subsection of a broader section. As a general rule, proposing specific means of moving forward makes dispute resolution much easier than does expressing general dissatisfaction with content or behavior. --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 20:08, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::For my part I have to admit I held back from discussion feeling a bit manipulated, so it is less about their actual behavior and more about my perception...but then I don't have the dispute about adding content to the section...the other editor does. So far the stall in discussion seems his wanting to have an up or down vote on his version and my wanting to talk about all of the changes as needed. The long term dispute is about the section as Income ineqiality and the inclusion of the material in it. But the short term dipute of content or section header is my argument in collaborating on this section. The section title has gone back and forth as part of the long term dispute of what context to use information and references, statistics and the like. The immediate dispute of the other editor was part of a long term discussion I think needs to continue on the talk page. But, to clarify it was not my reaction to his behavior or any perception I had of his conduct, (that's flying at me a lot too) that inspired me to make the edit, it was the breaching of the agreements and settled consensus he was arguing in the discussion that was in the form of opinion content not attributed to the source he began to place in the section. I didn't understand why he was adding information with references against the very things he was seeking me to agree with (use of the Gaurdian references as attriputed opinion only). The removal of content or "blanking" itself was part of a bold edit to discuss the specific issues I had with content and references at that time.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 21:01, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::I don't pretend to understand all of that, but historically, this editor has not been specific enough in his objections to allow them to be addressed, has made up his own policy, has edited aggressively and has generally made progress difficult. But no need to discuss it here further, I'm planning to ask for mediation. [[User_talk:Becritical|<span style="color:black;">'''B<sup>e</sup>'''—</span><span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—'''C'''<sub>ritical</sub></span>]] 22:12, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::I agree mediation is the best next step. Let's call this one closed and done with. --[[User:RegentsPark|regentspark]] <small>([[User talk:RegentsPark|comment]])</small> 23:56, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::Agreed.--[[User:Amadscientist|Amadscientist]] ([[User talk:Amadscientist|talk]]) 00:07, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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== Autism == |
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== Anglo-Soviet invasion of Iran == |
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* ''Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?'' |
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Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. |
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I updated a paragraph in the article that contained an assertion with a rather unreliable reference that the invasion of Iran was a surprise, and added a reference to the London Gazette publication of General Wavell's Despatch which stated that the Iranian government was warned by a diplomatic note and that there were obvious troop build-ups while acknowledging that the actual attack was a tactical surprise. I also left the original statement about it being a surprise with the reference though I did say that "some have claimed" this. See [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Anglo-Soviet_invasion_of_Iran&diff=489197623&oldid=489191644 Diff]. |
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User Janus949 has been persistently reverting to the original wording numerous times while accusing me of having a POV and that my reference is "not valid" because it is recorded by "war criminals". My original citation had incorrect syntax that caused it not to display but this has been fixed. I have repeatedly asked him to explain his reasons on the Talk page but he does not state what his objections are, unless it is that in his opinion, the London Gazette is not a reliable source. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> |
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* {{pagelinks|Autism}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
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* {{User|Oolong}} |
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* ''Who is involved in the dispute?'' |
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* {{User|Димитрий Улянов Иванов}} |
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* {{User|Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan}} |
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* {{User|HarmonyA8}} |
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* {{User|TempusTacet}} |
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* {{User|WhatamIdoing}} |
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* {{User|FactOrOpinion}} |
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* {{User|2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0}} |
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* {{User|GreenMeansGo}} |
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* {{User|Markworthen}} |
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* {{User|Urselius}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> |
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Autism, in the wider world, is subject to a very deep disagreement about what it is, and what it means for society. |
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:* {{user|Dabbler}} |
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:* {{user|Janus945}} |
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On Wikipedia, this schism (or paradigm shift) is manifesting in an interesting way, because the root of the disagreement is essentially about the degree to which it is correct or helpful to view autism as a medical issue - a disorder - at all. |
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* ''Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)'' |
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Wikipedia has quite detailed guidelines for what to do ''within'' medicine, or ''outside'' of medicine, but it is less clear what to do when the dispute is about ''whether'' something is best thought of as a health issue, and/or something else (for example: a different way of thinking and experiencing the world, a disability, an identity etc.) There are many implications for this distinction, including (to some extent) what we include and (strictly) what counts as a reliable source for any particular piece of information. Many scientists have taken various positions on the issue of neurodiversity, as have autistic and other neurodivergent people, practitioners, family members and writers (all of these overlap greatly). The concept has greatly risen in prominence in recent years. |
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Yes. |
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This underlying dispute manifests in many different ways, across many autism-related articles, often giving rise to tensions, and incredulity on more than one side, when people refuse to accept things that apparently seem obvious to the other side. These go back many years, but have reached a relatively heated pitch in recent weeks, with a number of editors making efforts to change the main autism entry in various ways. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Resolving the dispute'''</span> |
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* ''Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?'' |
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A major point of contention is around systemic bias, relating to what I would call testimonial injustice. Who should be listened to, when it comes to what people should be reading about autism? What exactly should we balancing when we weigh viewpoints "in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources"? |
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I have repeatedly attempted to get a discussion going on the Talk page but apart from accusations that my sources are not reliable because they were "recorded by war criminals" and that I have refined my sources (presumably by fixing the syntax) I have had no response. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> |
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* ''How do you think we can help?'' |
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[[Talk:Autism]] |
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I am not sure, at least some advice on how to proceed to resolve this persistent dispute would be nice. |
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[[Talk:Autism#Autism and disability]] |
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[[Talk:Autism#Too little focus on anthropology and social dynamics; too intense focus on medical genetics.]] |
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[[Talk:Autism#Extent of Scientific Consensus on Terminology & Reconciling Perspectives]] |
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[[Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions]]] |
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Related: [[Wikipedia:Dispute_resolution_noticeboard/Archive_228#Applied_behavior_analysis]] |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> |
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[[User:Dabbler|Dabbler]] ([[User talk:Dabbler|talk]]) 19:17, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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There are tensions and disagreements for which the resolution is not obvious, and neither is the ''route'' to a resolution; much of this has run in circles around what different sources do or do not demonstrate, and which Wikipedia guidelines apply, where, and how. There has also some agressive argumentation and editing which seems unhelpful. Outside input on how to work towards a balanced conclusion - conceivably even something like a consensus - could be helpful. |
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===Anglo-Soviet invasion of Iran discussion=== |
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'''Clerk's Comment'''/{{cue}} The discussion is sproadic, at best, on the talk page and there's a slow-mo edit war on the article page. I don't think there's enough of a "dispute" to pass by the prerequisites for the dispute resolution noticeboard. There is no communication whatsoever. I suggest discussing on the talk page (more than sproadicly) and if the dispute is still not resolved, you can try a [[WP:3O|third opinion]] or you can re-report to this [[WP:DRN|noticeboard]]. Regards, [[User:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>[[User talk:Whenaxis|talk]] ([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 23:49, 25 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:The situation is all the more frustrating because as you say there is no response. The other editor seems to take wikibreaks and leaves the article alone and then comes back and just repeats his accusation and edit. I don't think a third opinion would have any effect on his attitude and actions. I can't discuss with someone who doesn't discuss back and it is sporadic because his actions are sporadic. It has been a monologue on the Talk page because he just ignores the Talk page almost all the time. [[User:Dabbler|Dabbler]] ([[User talk:Dabbler|talk]]) 02:09, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::I think that if this is opened, the other editor won't reply since their edits are sproadic. I think a third opinion ''will'' work because they can just give a decision and you can use that decision as consensus since its you and that third opinion that is now against the other editor, thus forming a consensus. Quick, fast and if the editor edits it later, you can tell them on their talk page that consensus is against them. Regards, [[User:Whenaxis|Whenaxis]] <small>[[User talk:Whenaxis|talk]] ([[Special:Contribs/Whenaxis|contribs]])</small> <sup>[[WP:DRP|DR goes to Wikimania!]]</sup> 18:15, 26 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::OK, I will see if that works, I have also added some more wording which even quotes the same book that is in the original reference, which i believe is being misinterpreted.[[User:Dabbler|Dabbler]] ([[User talk:Dabbler|talk]]) 10:30, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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<small>If there is no response, this thread will be closed 24 hours after this time: May 3, 2012 at 16:06 (UTC) because dispute stale or resolved. — [[User:TransporterMan|<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; color:blue; font-variant:small-caps;">'''TransporterMan'''</span>]] ([[User talk:TransporterMan|<font face="Trebuchet MS" size="1">TALK</font>]]) 16:06, 3 May 2012 (UTC)</small> |
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==== Summary of dispute by Димитрий Улянов Иванов ==== |
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== Circumcision == |
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{{DRN archive top|reason=RFC now pending. — [[User:TransporterMan|<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; color:blue; font-variant:small-caps;">'''TransporterMan'''</span>]] ([[User talk:TransporterMan|<font face="Trebuchet MS" size="1">TALK</font>]]) 12:54, 4 May 2012 (UTC)}} |
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The central tension in the dispute revolves around how autism spectrum disorder (ASD) is characterised and the prominence given to this characterisation. Some editors have argued for either reducing, minimising, or entirely removing references to autism as a neurodevelopmental disorder with symptoms, impairments, and varying levels of severity. |
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This proposed reframing of the article stands in stark contrast to the scientific consensus around the world. As regards the scientific consensus, the validity and relevance of the terminology for ASD has been established by standardised diagnostic criteria (e.g., the World Health Organization's ICD-11 and American Psychological Association's DSM-5), the developers of evidence-based national guidelines (e.g., the UK National Institute for Health & Care Excellence and the European Society for Child & Adolescent Psychiatry), and consensus statements endorsing these guidelines (e.g. IAP Guidelines on Neuro Developmental Disorders). |
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* {{pagelinks|Circumcision}} |
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This is further substantiated by other peer-reviewed, secondary sources such as systematic reviews. For further details, see [[Talk:Autism#c-Димитрий Улянов Иванов-20241126131200-Oolong-20241126104700|list of quoted references]]. |
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Since the article pertains to health where readers may rely on its information to make health-related decisions, restricting these high-quality references can have profound repercussions. Some editors have cited a series of blog posts and advocacy papers as sources supporting the notion that a neurodiversity-only perspective, which decouples ASD from these terms, is more, or at least comparably, appropriate for the article because of its publicity and acceptance amongst a subset of autistic advocates. However, it has been argued that relying on these sources is problematic for several reasons. First, Wikipedia policies and guidelines consider peer-reviewed sources as the most reliable when available; that blog posts are generally discouraged; and that it is the members of a particular scientific discipline who determine what is considered factual or pseudoscience. Second, while some advocacy sources are peer-reviewed, they are usually advocating for a future change that is not currently established. The dispute has since increasingly been over how Wikipedia's policies and guidelines can be correctly interpreted. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> |
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* ''Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?'' |
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In my view, a failure to properly reflect the international scientific classification in this article will contribute to the stigmatisation of ASD and its treatments to millions of people around the world. Your decision may disproportionately mislead the poorest and highest risk of readers due to economic and educational disadvantages. This will increase morbidity, create chaos in families and drive up health care costs. |
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Results from a metanalysis are being grossly misinterpreted and generalized to the entire world population. |
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While considering each reply, I urge reviewers to carefully consider and weigh in the scientific evidence in regards to their recommendations. |
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* ''Who is involved in the dispute?'' |
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==== Summary of dispute by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan ==== |
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:* {{user|Rip-Saw}} |
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:* {{user|Jakew}} |
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:* {{user|Jayjg}} |
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:* {{user|Tftobin}} |
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:* {{user|Erikvcl}} |
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:* {{user|Garycompugeek}} |
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:* {{user|Zad68}} |
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Civility is largely being followed. Involved users are communicating; there is merely a fundamental difference of opinion. |
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Yes, as [[User:Oolong]] says, some of the dispute seems to concern epistemic injustice concerns and how to interpret standards of evidence here. |
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* ''Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)'' |
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There is also definitely a strong debate going on over whether, per established standards of evidence for wikipedia and for medical claims within wikipedia, there is in fact a consensus of reputable sources (especially recent sources) supporting a traditional medical understanding of autism, or whether per such standards of evidence there appears to be a division between traditional medical and neurodiversity-aligned perspectives on autism. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan|Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan]] ([[User talk:Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan|contribs]]) 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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Yes. |
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:I would like to reiterate that any drop in evidential standards could lead to the inclusion of debunked and dangerous practices, particularly as at least one editor has revealed themselves to be sympathetic toward facilitated communication - an anti-autistic practice which is often falsely claimed to be supported from a neurodiversity perspective - the inclusion of which has already been litigated on Wikipedia. The medical model being poor does not automatically lead to the populist online autism movement being good. Autistic people deserve the same standards as everyone else. [[Special:Contributions/2A02:C7C:9B04:EA00:F104:371A:5F87:5238|2A02:C7C:9B04:EA00:F104:371A:5F87:5238]] ([[User talk:2A02:C7C:9B04:EA00:F104:371A:5F87:5238|talk]]) 08:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC) |
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* <small>'' N.B. To inform the other users you may place the text'' <code><nowiki>{{subst:DRN-notice|thread=</nowiki>Circumcision<nowiki>}} --~~~~</nowiki></code> ''in a new section on each user's talk page.''</small> |
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::I don't believe anybody is advocating for reduced evidential standards. The question is about which standards apply to what. |
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::My position on FC is that it is a dubious practice, worryingly open to abuse, but that we need to be wary of over-generalising from the evidence available on it (and that it is worth looking at studies publised since this was last 'litigated on Wikipedia'). [[User:Oolong|Oolong]] ([[User talk:Oolong|talk]]) 11:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC) |
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==== Summary of dispute by HarmonyA8 ==== |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Resolving the dispute'''</span> |
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* ''Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?'' |
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==== Summary of dispute by TempusTacet ==== |
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Significant discussion has occurred on the talk page. I and some feel that content needs to be re-worded to better reflect study findings, and others are hiding behind policy and refuse to discuss the issues with the content. |
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==== Summary of dispute by WhatamIdoing ==== |
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* ''How do you think we can help?'' |
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I think that only the first three editors in this list (Oolong, Димитрий Улянов Иванов, and Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan) are very relevant. However, I'm willing to help (e.g., to provide assistance with the {{tl|MEDRS evaluation}} of sources). [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 23:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Clarity on Wikipedia policy needs to be offered, as well as help on how to summarize research data while keeping context. |
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:@[[User:Oolong|Oolong]], let me expand on Robert's directions below: Please post your desired changes in the [[#First statements by editors (Autism)]] section of this page. It will be clearest if you use the "X to Y" style (as if this were the [[Wikipedia:Edit requests]] process) and show your exact suggested wording. You can use [[Template:Text diff]] if you'd like to contrast your suggestion with the current paragraph. |
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[[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 03:29, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:(I believe that the other editors are recommending no significant change.) [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 18:42, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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==== Summary of dispute by FactOrOpinion ==== |
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===Circumcision discussion=== |
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The conflict seems to be very longstanding, and I've only participated in the discussion during the last week, so my understanding of the conflict is very incomplete. A significant piece of it is that there are contrasting approaches to thinking about autism — a medical model and a neurodiversity perspective — and the article currently emphasizes the first of those, which makes it feel unbalanced to others. There are differences of opinion about which views/content are significant (in the NPOV sense) and therefore should be represented in the article; and among the various groups who might seek out the article (e.g., autistic people, family members, allies, different kinds of professionals), some will not find much content, even though there are reliable sources for it. For example, there's little about the lived experiences of people with autism, and some content that one might expect to be touched on with a link to further info (e.g., autistic meltdowns) are totally absent. Arguably, the text is not as accessible to as broad an array of readers as it should be. Some of the conflict seems linked to the role of scholarship. Everyone recognizes that when scholarly sources are available, they're usually the best sources; however, some may think that if content cannot be sourced to a scholarly source, then it shouldn't be included. I recognize that MEDRS guides sources for biomedical info; but some of the relevant info for the article is not biomedical. [[User:FactOrOpinion|FactOrOpinion]] ([[User talk:FactOrOpinion|talk]]) 04:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC) |
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This discussion arose because Rip-Saw added the qualifier "African" to "heterosexual men" in [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Circumcision&diff=prev&oldid=489100796 this edit], asserting that '"Strong evidence" cannot be generalized to the entire world population.'. This appears to be [[WP:NOR|his/her own interpretation]] rather than that of the cited source, which reads "There is strong evidence that medical male circumcision reduces the acquisition of HIV by heterosexual men by between 38% and 66% over 24 months."[http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/19370585]. (S)he has offered multiple lengthy explanations, but these seem to be his/her own analyses rather than that of the sources. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 07:51, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:The sources does not mention African. Is [[User:Rip-Saw]] using [[WP:SYN]] to define the sample as African because the test subjects where from African [[polities]]?[[User:Curb Chain|Curb Chain]] ([[User talk:Curb Chain|talk]]) 10:12, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::The test subjects were from South Africa, Kenya, and Uganda, (the 4th, 10th, and 14th most infected countries by percentage) thereby making the sample men from Africa in high HIV prevalent countries. That is not synthesis of sources, that is interpretation of the study methods, data, and conclusion. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 18:08, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:At this preliminary analysis, I would take out "African".[[User:Curb Chain|Curb Chain]] ([[User talk:Curb Chain|talk]]) 10:14, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::Does it make sense to take a regional study, and extrapolate it to include the entire world? Research shows that the extrapolation is false, and Rip-saw posted this on the talk page. One editor keeps biting the newbies and violating WP:CIVIL, the other uses many obfuscation tactics to make the controversy go away, because the others simply get exhausted. He also has one set of editing rules for himself, and another for the newer editors. If he tweaks something, it is summarizing. If I tweak in the same manner, it's OR. See the near edit war on cervical cancer for exactly what I am talking about, starting at the beginning. Preserving neutrality is not a priority. [[User:Tftobin|Tftobin]] ([[User talk:Tftobin|talk]]) 12:12, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Tftobin is 100% correct. Countless research from the US Navy study on down has failed to reproduce the results from the African HIV studies outside of Africa. Unless the African studies are flawed (this is open for debate), then no other conclusion can be drawn that the conclusion only applies to African men. [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 13:49, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Where does it say in the study that the extrapolation is false? I don't think the link even mentions the word "extrapolation".[[User:Curb Chain|Curb Chain]] ([[User talk:Curb Chain|talk]]) 13:49, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Then you can include both studies and explain the findings of these studies.[[User:Curb Chain|Curb Chain]] ([[User talk:Curb Chain|talk]]) 13:51, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::Hi Curb Chain - I like your suggestion of including both studies and the findings of both studies. Unfortunately, Jakew will not allow it. Many editors have tried adding reliable secondary sources to provide a counterexample and Jakew removes them. [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 13:57, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::The [http://www.dtic.mil/cgi-bin/GetTRDoc?AD=ADA458066 US Navy study] that Erikvcl refers to is a [[WP:PSTS|primary source]]. [[WP:MEDRS]] generally discourages the use of primary sources, preferring the use of secondary sources (such as the Cochrane review cited above) instead. In particular, it says: "Individual primary sources should not be cited or juxtaposed so as to "debunk" or contradict the conclusions of reliable secondary sources, unless the primary source itself directly makes such a claim". Also bear in mind that we have to present studies with [[WP:DUE|due weight]]. Given that the majority of primary sources have found lower risk among circumcised men, then it would seem particularly inappropriate to cite one of the few primary sources that found otherwise. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 14:50, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::This explanation seems holistic to me. [[WP:NPOV]] must be considered so an article does not give extra prominence to under represented view(points).[[User:Curb Chain|Curb Chain]] ([[User talk:Curb Chain|talk]]) 15:08, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::As I was curious, I've just checked the abstracts of the two other published meta-analyses of randomised controlled trial data on this subject (the effect of circumcision on female-to-male transmission of HIV). One concludes: "Male circumcision is an effective strategy for reducing new male HIV infections."[http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18705758] The other: "These results provide unequivocal evidence that circumcision plays a causal role in reducing the risk of HIV infection among men."[http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18800244] Neither say that the results apply only to Africans. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 16:22, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::My apologies: the above is slightly incorrect. I completely forgot that there is one further published meta-analysis, that of Weiss et al. Again, though, their conclusion did not limit the results to African men: "In conclusion, randomized controlled trials have provided final conclusive evidence that male circumcision provides approximately 60% protection against the heterosexual acquisition of HIV in men."[http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18316997] [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 17:17, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::I am not arguing that we should un-link circumcision to reducing HIV infection rates, merely that ''quantifying'' that effectiveness to everyone is is wrong, especially in the lead where there is no room for explanation or context. High-risk populations are mentioned all over the place in many studies. Your first source even states: "...when administered to ''similar populations in a similar fashion'' [emphasis added], circumcision results in an appreciable RR reduction," in the conclusion. I am unable to retrieve the full text of the second article, and I will assume you were not either. It is dangerous to read only the abstract, as I demonstrated in your first article by using the full text to further my own arguments. The abstract rarely has context nor the room to fully describe the results, and often omits key points that should not be ignored. |
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:::::::::The introduction of the Weiss et al. article reads "An estimated 2.5 million people were newly infected with HIV in 2007, of whom two-thirds live in sub-Saharan Africa [1]. ''In the context'' [emphasis added] of the urgent need for intensified and expanded HIV prevention efforts, the conclusive results of three randomized controlled trials (RCT) showing that male circumcision reduces the risk of HIV acquisition by approximately 60% [2–4] are both promising and challenging. Translation of these research findings into public health policy is complex and will be ''context specific'' [emphasis added]." This article's conclusion of 60% is in the context of the fact that 2/3 of all new HIV cases were in sub-Saharan Africa. The authors never directly state their results apply to all countries worldwide, a recurring theme in these meta-analyses. A high-quality article will directly state their conclusions in an unambiguous way. I have never read abstracts that are this vague before. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 17:58, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::I can't really follow your argument here. I think using the phrase "African men" rather than just "men" would be misleading, since it might be read to imply that there is some "racial" / genetic explanation for the 60% drop, which seems unlikely to say the least. The phrase "males in Africa" might be better, but even then it does not apply to "Africa" as a whole, but to the specific populations studied. If you are suggesting that the 60% reduction is somehow linked to specific lifestyles, cultural specific sexual practices or whatever, then we should surely need some evidence that these could have played a part, otherwise there's no reason to believe that African foreskins function in a different way from American foreskins. [[User:Paul Barlow|Paul B]] ([[User talk:Paul Barlow|talk]]) 18:23, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::Africa is a continent, not a race. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 19:08, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::But I can see how people could fail to make the distinction. The problem is that very specific numbers are being generalized to large populations. If you can find a better way to phrase the lead without mentioning African and while also not over generalizing, please do so. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 19:11, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::I believe I was not clear enough: I was not suggesting to use the US Navy study directly. I mentioned it as an example (of many) to show that the African study results have not been duplicated elsewhere. If they have, please link to them! Furthermore, I have linked to many many high quality secondary sources that have found great faults with the African RCTs and the meta-studies. All of these sources have been rejected. Jakew, you mention weight and that primary studies shouldn't be used to contradict primary studies. But what about the secondary sources that debunk other secondary sources? You have rejected all of these claims out of hand even though they are valid. In addition, sources must be weighted based on their validity. Multiple reliable secondary sources have shown that both the RCTs and the WHO (which is also cited) have serious ethical and conflict-of-interest issues. These claims, even though they are valid, have been rejected. In addition, Wikipedia policy clearly states that editors should only make non-controversial edits in the case of conflict of interest. See [[Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest#Non-controversial_edits]].[[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 05:56, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::The last time you asked for evidence from outside of Africa indicating that circumcision reduced the risk of HIV, I provided some examples in [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:Circumcision&diff=487628014&oldid=487626168 this edit]. I am somewhat perplexed by the fact that you're making the same request again. Did you take the trouble to read my previous response? |
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::::::::The sources you've cited have generally been unreliable and/or fringe publications that are unsuitable for inclusion, as I've already explained. It's difficult to give a more specific explanation in the absence of specific examples. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 10:18, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Your sources actually prove my point. The CDC source does not indicate that any study outside of African has shown a correlation between MGM & HIV. Furthermore, the CDC article states "It is possible, but not yet adequately assessed, that male circumcision could reduce male-to-female transmission of HIV, although probably to a lesser extent than female-to-male transmission.". This is a LONG way off from definite "38-66%". Note that the CDC source states "not yet adequately assessed" and that male-female transmission to "lesser extent". We should not be using the 38-66% number. I have mentioned numerous sources that aren't "fringe" or unreliable. I can't make heads or tails of the India study from the summary, but it is funded by the Bill & Melinda Gate Foundation which are pro-circ and have been under a lot of criticism lately for their methods. [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 01:34, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::The CDC source lists several US studies that have found correlations between lack of circumcision and HIV in the section entitled "HIV Infection and Male Circumcision in the United States". I am puzzled that you claim otherwise. Whether you understand the Indian study is beside the point, as is your personal opinion of the funding body. |
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::::::::::The CDC's statement about male-to-female transmission seems a good summary to me. We say something similar in the [[circumcision]] article: "Whether it protects against male-to-female transmission is disputed". Certainly the evidence regarding reduction in risk of male-to-female transmission is much weaker than female-to-male, which the 38-66% figure refers to. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 07:27, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::Does the CDC article say that the 38-66% number applies to US men? No it does not. The article still proves my point in this regard. I'm puzzled why you are arguing with me about this. I'm still waiting for you to show that the 38-66% number has been shown to be true OUTSIDE of Africa. |
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:::::::::::As I'm quickly learning, "reliable" on Wikipedia has nothing to do with accuracy, bias, source conflict of interest, or correctness. The CDC article completely neglects the sensitivity studies that show 20k+ fine-touch nerves in the foreskin shown by many studies. The report characterizes the foreskin as most Americans do -- a worthless flap of skin better off removed. Although I know that this is the viewpoint that many are trying to promote here at Wikipeida -- this isn't justified by science. [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 06:53, 30 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::I've already shown that the cited source (and, for that matter, all of the other published meta-analyses of RCT data) do not limit their conclusions to African men. Clearly, therefore, it would be original research for Wikipedia to add such a qualifier. While off-topic, I've also shown that your claim that studies outside of Africa have failed to find an association is incorrect. If you're waiting for me to prove something else then I'm afraid you'll be waiting forever, because I don't feel that I have anything further to prove. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 07:46, 30 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::I now understand the point that you're making. You're saying that the reliable secondary sources in the African studies are applying their conclusions to all men and this is why it is incorrect to add a qualifier. Is that correct? Conclusions require evidence. The African studies CANNOT extrapolate their results to all men worldwide because they did not study all men worldwide. This is scientific method 101. Evidence is needed to back up claims. Studies (no matter how reliable or secondary they may be) cannot draw valid conclusions without it. |
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:::::::::::::Furthermore, you have NOT shown that results from the African studies are duplicated elsewhere. All you referenced was the CDC study which DID NOT confirm the 38-66% number. Your reference to the India study did not confirm the 38-66% number either. Not only that, but the CDC conclusion said there was a "possibility that circumcision" could have an effect on HIV. This is not a confirmation of the African studies in any way. The 38-66% number is a mis-characterization anyway. According to the study, that number reflects the '''reduction in HIV transmission rate between cut/uncut men'''. The [[Circumcision]] article states that "circumcision reduces the risk of HIV infection in heterosexual men by 38-66%" which is incorrect and not supported by the study or the study's statistics. Please understand the distinction I'm making: there's a big difference between "risk of infection" and "reduction in risk". Whether or not we add the qualifier, the wording here MUST change as it is inaccurate and incorrect as it stands. |
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:::::::::::::Big claims require big proof. Of all the studies done outside of Africa (18 I believe, 10 of which showing LOWER HIV transmission where most men are intact), there has been no statistically significant relationship between penis status and HIV transmission. Then, we have the fact that there have been multiple studies published in journals (a number of which I've linked to) that find significant faults in both the RCTs themselves and the meta-studies. You are the one pushing for the HIV/circ link in the article. You are obligated to back up this claim -- not me. You have not backed up this claim with credible evidence. Without a study that confirms the African studies, we MUST add the qualifier. [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 04:01, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::::I'm afraid you have a fundamental misunderstanding of policy. It is ''not'' our role to prove or disprove statements in sources; it is our role to accurately represent what they say. And whether you or I think their conclusions are "valid" is irrelevant. |
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::::::::::::::Please note that, per [[WP:NOR]], "Even with well-sourced material, if you use it out of context, or to advance a position not '''directly and explicitly''' supported by the source, you are engaging in original research" (emph in original). The question, then, is whether the cited source directly and explicitly limits the scope of the statement to African men. If they do, we can (and should) do so too. If they don't, we can't. By analogy, we can't say in [[Michelson-Morley experiment]] that "Its results are generally considered to be the first strong evidence against the theory of a luminiferous aether ''in Ohio''", even though the experiment was performed in Ohio and an editor might firmly believe (and think (s)he can prove) that its results should not be generalised, because that qualifier isn't employed by secondary sources. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 06:46, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::::Then you should have no problem including statements by the reliable secondary sources that myself, Tftobin, and Gsonnenf have given to offer a counter-argument to the African studies! [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 15:53, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::::::Where it is appropriate, then of course there isn't a problem. For example, I agreed [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Dispute_resolution_noticeboard&diff=489668171&oldid=489667673 here] with citing a source identified by Gsonnenf (which was later [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Circumcision&diff=prev&oldid=489686774 added] to the article). [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 16:06, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::::::It is appropriate to have a source counter the current claim in the lead. The Africa-HIV stuff shouldn't be in the lead at all. Unless I missed something, your agreement with Gsonnenf was not regarding a counterbalancing statement in the lead with regards to the Africa-HIV issue. [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 02:01, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:I am willing to try dispute resolution, but I have no experience with it. I have read the rules introduced by [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] below, as well as [[Wikipedia:DRN Rule A|DRN Rule A]], and I agree to these rules. It's not clear to me when I should move to the ''Zeroeth statements by editors'' section rather than responding here. Once that's clarified, I'll respond to Robert McClenon's questions in the appropriate section. |
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:For the record, I would prefer the lead state: "Strong evidence from Africa indicates that circumcision reduces the risk of HIV infection in heterosexual, high-risk African male populations by 38-66%" or "Strong evidence indicates that circumcision reduces the risk of HIV infection in heterosexual men. <sup>[multiple meta-analyses citations]</sup>" My main issue is with quantifying the results to all populations, since ''none'' of the meta-analyses explicitly do, and the meta-analyses that do not include the African trials were largely inconclusive or found very small effects. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 18:21, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:Important note: I have no expertise in the subject. I ended up at the Autism talk page because an editor who is autistic posted a concern at the Teahouse about the imbalance in the article and felt that their Talk concerns were not being given due weight, and I hoped that I could be a bit helpful on the talk page. Given the breadth of the disagreement and my lack of expertise, it will be hard for me to suggest specific changes in the article, though I can make more general comments (e.g., comments about whether certain content might be introduced in order to address the needs of diverse readers who'd come to the article seeking information, whether the text is likely to be accessible to such readers, whether I think a given WP:PAG is being correctly interpreted). My guess is that I will not be as active in the discussion as the editors with subject matter knowledge / editors who have a longer history in the dispute, and it may be that my comments will simply be too general to be helpful and that I should therefore bow out. [[User:FactOrOpinion|FactOrOpinion]] ([[User talk:FactOrOpinion|talk]]) 16:30, 21 December 2024 (UTC) |
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==== Summary of dispute by 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0 ==== |
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::The phrase "evidence from Africa" already implies that ''Africans'' were studied. The repeat of "African" later implies that this study specifically ''differentiates'' African men from other men, which does not seem to be the case. It is comparable to saying "study of Disease X indicates that Italian men can be cured by Xanprophanol." [[User:Paul Barlow|Paul B]] ([[User talk:Paul Barlow|talk]]) 18:28, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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<div style="font-size:smaller"> (Pardon. My mobile IP keeps changing). I completely agree to the viewpoints supported by user @Oolong. I also want the people to know that there is no such division between "pathological symptom" and "non-pathological symptom". They are same features of a communication and socialization "disorder" where more than one neurotype is involved. It is the same, impairing symptom that can be credited to either neurotype, but unfortunately attributed to the cognitive minority solely. Although the article covers some aspects of neurodiversity perspective, still its language is too much negative and pathological, which isn't very helpful or uplifting for Autistic individuals. Too much importance given in biological causes and "epidemiology", while the more useful sress should have been on accommodation, accessibility, and AAC (Alternative Augmentative Communication). Trying to conceal the harmful effects of ABA therapies is misleading and un-encyclopedic. [[Special:Contributions/2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0|2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0]] ([[User talk:2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0|talk]]) 18:07, 25 December 2024 (UTC) </div> |
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:::The researchers do not differentiate (in the abstract), but neither do they congregate (in the whole body text). [[Xorphanol]] is an opioid that reduces pain, and there's very little reason to suspect it would work differently on some races from my understanding of how opium work. But the question I bring up is not a question of race, but a question of culture. Condom use in the studies were at 40%. Also, the use of drugs to suppress AIDS is relatively low. These cultural factors could have very real effects on the transmission rates of HIV. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 18:51, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::just to clarify matters - "Xanprophanol" was a joke; a made up drug. [[User:Paul Barlow|Paul B]] ([[User talk:Paul Barlow|talk]]) 07:37, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Basically, it's a matter of judgement: one ''could'' say that a study of Italians provides evidence that a drug resolves a certain symptom, or one ''could'' say that the same study provides evidence that a drug resolves a certain symptom ''in Italian men''. In such cases, we don't make the judgement ourselves. Rather, we rely upon the assessment of secondary sources, and report their conclusions. In this case, as noted above, none of the four meta-analysis papers conclude that the benefit is only to African men. They don't explicitly state that it applies to men across the globe, but they don't include a geographical qualifier either. So the appropriate thing to do is the same. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 20:15, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::Jakew, wikipedia states that it would prefer high quality primary research, over lower quality secondary research. I don't think you can call the US Navy study lower quality, whether it is primary research or secondary research. To include it would not violate wikipedia policy. [[User:Tftobin|Tftobin]] ([[User talk:Tftobin|talk]]) 21:02, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::: Part of the problem may be that the terminology should clarify whether the strong evidence comes from a "study" or a "manipulative experiment" re African people. [[User:AvocadosTheorem|AvocadosTheorem]] ([[User talk:AvocadosTheorem|talk]]) 21:12, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::Would you mind quoting the part of policy you're thinking of, Tom? As for the overall quality, from [[WP:MEDASSESS]]: "The best evidence comes primarily from meta-analyses of randomized controlled trials (RCTs).[2] Systematic reviews of bodies of literature of overall good quality and consistency addressing the specific recommendation have less reliability when they include non-randomized studies.[3] Narrative reviews can help establish the context of evidence quality. Roughly in descending order of quality, lower-quality evidence in medical research comes from individual RCTs; other controlled studies; quasi-experimental studies; non-experimental studies such as comparative, correlation, and case control studies; and non-evidence-based expert opinion or clinical experience." So the US Navy study, being a case-control study, is second to last in terms of quality. The meta-analyses of RCTs are considered the highest quality. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 21:23, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::"In this case, as noted above, none of the four meta-analysis papers conclude that the benefit is only to African men." That is not the way science works. Based on the research, would you recommend Catholic priests or Buddhist monks get circumcised to prevent themselves from getting HIV? [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 23:07, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::There is no medical association of any country which has endorsed Dr. Brian Morris' view that "in contrast, Morris regards circumcision as "mandated", citing reduced risk of balanitis among other benefits. Most doctors would recommend diaper (nappy) cream with zinc oxide. Yet, Dr. Morris managed to get peer reviewed, and written up, to become part of a secondary resource. All the while, embracing the most fringe of fringe views possible. Morris also said, in an ironically titled, "Infant male circumcision: An evidence-based policy statement", that "MC provides strong protection against: urinary tract infections and, in infancy, renal parenchymal disease; phimosis; paraphimosis; balanoposthitis; foreskin tearing; some heterosexually transmitted infections including HPV, HSV-2, trichomonas, HIV, and genital ulcer disease; thrush; inferior hygiene; penile cancer and possibly prostate cancer." No medical society of any country will back this up. "The ethics of infant MC and childhood vaccination are comparable.". The Swedish Paediatric society calls it "child abuse" and "assault". Yet, somehow, the Morris paper magically appears as a secondary resource. The circumcision article cites this document as "In 2012, Morris et al. reported that there is some evidence, albeit mixed, that circumcision may protect against prostate cancer; they called for more extensive research into the matter." This passes for science? The reference Morris cited, was "Case number and the financial impact of circumcision in reducing prostate cancer. British Journal of Urology International, 100, 5-6. ", co-authored by Jakew and Brian Morris. Is this making a better encyclopedia? [[User:Tftobin|Tftobin]] ([[User talk:Tftobin|talk]]) 01:04, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::Again, Tftobin is correct. Lots of bogus studies and meta-studies get published in reputable journals. Consider the bogus vaccine-autism study that was published -- and later retracted -- in a major, reputable journal. Another good point that Tftobin makes is that of Morris. {{rpa}}. His should never be used as a source in any Wikipedia article and {{rpa}} [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 05:56, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::For one, "African men" is not race-bound but geographically-bound. The article does say the evidence is ''from Africa'', doesn't it?. [[image:smile.png]] Also, these secondary sources '''do''' make the distinction that this benefit of up for 66% HIV reduction was realized in men ''particularly'' in high-risk areas, as outlined before and in Rip-Saw's comments dated 18:08, 27 April 2012 (UTC) and 17:58, 27 April 2012 (UTC). I can't even believe we are arguing this. [[User:Therewillbefact|FactoidDroid]] ([[User talk:Therewillbefact|talk]]) 07:06, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Rip-Saw, the issue we're discussing is whether circumcision reduces the risk of HIV, not whether it should be recommended for that purpose. The latter question would surely involve weighing all the risks and benefits, and is a difficult question to resolve anywhere. It's certainly impossible to answer without performing [[WP:NOR|original research]]. However, I think the point you're trying to make is that, depending on context, the [[absolute risk reduction]] can vary tremendously. I absolutely agree, but I can't quite see the relevance as the statements in the sources and our article are about ''relative'' risk reductions. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 07:36, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::Jakew, I can't find the place in wikipedia which states that a high quality primary resource is preferable to a poor quality secondary one. I will keep looking, when I have more time. I will say, why should circumcision fall under [[WP:MEDASSESS]], when the vast majority are not done for medical reasons, they are done for religious reasons, and social reasons. If it was medical, why does the CDC not track it's surgical effectiveness, unintended consequences, or death rates, as they do for what they consider medical procedures? [[User:Tftobin|Tftobin]] ([[User talk:Tftobin|talk]]) 12:48, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::Jakew, can you please address the prostate cancer article issue up above? [[User:Tftobin|Tftobin]] ([[User talk:Tftobin|talk]]) 12:48, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::Please do keep looking, Tom. To answer your question, MEDASSESS applies because you're asking us to compare the quality of two medical studies, relating to an article about a surgical procedure. It is difficult to think of a situation in which MEDASSESS is more applicable. The prostate cancer issue is off-topic for this thread, which (per the "Dispute overview" above) is about "Results from a metanalysis are being grossly misinterpreted and generalized to the entire world population.". In any case, I've already addressed it at [[Talk:Circumcision]], as you know. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 14:31, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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==== Summary of dispute by GreenMeansGo ==== |
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The American Urological Association states: "the results of studies in African nations may not necessarily be extrapolated to men in the United States at risk for HIV infection" [http://www.auanet.org/content/guidelines-and-quality-care/policy-statements/c/circumcision.cfm|source]. The "strong evidence" lead sentence has been disputed by a great deal of authors. I suggest we move it out of the lead and attribute it to the author instead of saying it in Wikipedias voice.[[User:Gsonnenf|Gsonnenf]] ([[User talk:Gsonnenf|talk]]) 18:54, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> |
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:It would be rather US-centric to specifically refer to the US in the lead, but I wouldn't have a problem with citing this in the body of the article. As for removing the sentence from the lead, that has been proposed multiple times, and each time it has failed to gain consensus, since reliable sources about circumcision generally give a great deal of weight to HIV, which is held to be an important aspect. Remember that, per [[WP:LEAD]], "The lead should be able to stand alone as a concise overview. [...] explain why the topic is interesting or notable, and summarize the most important points". [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 19:14, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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{{hat|Comment in your own section. [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 03:13, 25 December 2024 (UTC)}} |
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::If we are to keep this in the lead, there is a good deal of merit to attributing the Cochrane review to the group that this claim. This would carry a much fairer narrative. As it is now, this sentence suggests that most primary studies looking at the evidence have found a significant (up to 66%) reduction in HIV transmission, which is not the case; putting these three RCTs aside, the evidence regarding HIV transmission is actually conflicting, especially when observing studies conducted in developed nations. We are placing too much of an emphasis on the findings of three RCTs, and the fact that we are using them to suggest a universal decrease in circumcision is very misleading, especially when region-specific distinctions are made on several occasions, in our own sources!. Additionally, the statement that circumcision might not carry the same HIV reduction benefits in other countries is not only made by the AUA. PMID 21973253 for instance, reflects the same opinions with respect to implementing a circumcision program in Australia. [[User:Therewillbefact|FactoidDroid]] ([[User talk:Therewillbefact|talk]]) 21:18, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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''Note: Editor is "[[User_talk:GreenMeansGo#c-GreenMeansGo-20241221132000-Oolong-20241220161300|done with the discussion]]" and will not be participating.'' --[[User:Oolong|Oolong]] ([[User talk:Oolong|talk]]) 09:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::It's extremely unconventional to attribute a statement that enjoys scientific consensus, and doing so can give undue weight to those at the fringes. For example, we do not say "according to such-and-such, HIV is the cause of AIDS". We simply assert it. |
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:::It is in fact the case that most primary sources have found significant reductions, and this is also true of observational studies predating the RCTs. See, for example, systematic reviews [http://www.cirp.org/library/disease/HIV/cochrane2003/ this] or [http://journals.lww.com/aidsonline/fulltext/2000/10200/male_circumcision_and_risk_of_hiv_infection_in.18.aspx this]. The latter provides some numbers: "Twenty-seven studies were included. Of these, 21 showed a reduced risk of HIV among circumcised men". Nevertheless, since the publication of the RCTs, secondary sources have largely focused on those, often exclusively. It is only appropriate that we should do the same. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 21:40, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::And what of the six that didn't show any reduction? If the rate were really 30-60% universally, statistical significance would appear in very small studies. I'd like a more realistic lower bound in the lead, one done for low-risk populations. Then the lead could say something like "Researchers indicate that circumcision reduces the risk of HIV infection in various heterosexual male populations by 20-60%." We need the citations to back the statements up, and the correct lower bound, of course. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 22:37, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::There is a huge difference between 30% and 60%. Jakew, what are the statistics for circumcision and HIV in the UK? [[User:Tftobin|Tftobin]] ([[User talk:Tftobin|talk]]) 00:25, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::Jakew, regarding your claim that "most primary sources have found significant reductions, and this is also true of observational studies predating the RCTs", please see PMID 10215123, or PMID 10726934. These sources do seem to support the stance that the results have been conflicting. |
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::::::It is also worth noting that in PMID 12917962, which you just cited to support your stance Jakew, the reviewer's conclusions actually states that "existing observational studies show a strong epidemiological association between male circumcision and prevention of HIV, ''especially among high-risk groups''" (emphasis mine). The other source you cited, PMID 11089625, actually makes makes a stronger qualifier: "Male circumcision is associated with a significantly reduced risk of HIV infection ''among men in sub-Saharan Africa, particularly those at high risk of HIV''" (emphasis mine). [[User:Therewillbefact|FactoidDroid]] ([[User talk:Therewillbefact|talk]]) 00:53, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::Those are really old sources. As far as the African data goes, the newer studies yield little doubt as to the effaciacy of circumcision in high-risk populations. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 06:56, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::To remind you, Therewillbefact, you stated: "this sentence suggests that most primary studies looking at the evidence have found a significant (up to 66%) reduction in HIV transmission, which is not the case". That statement is wrong; the sources I cited demonstrated that. Of the sources you cited in response, one directly contradicts your statement (that I just quoted), saying "Most case-control and cohort studies from Africa have shown an association between a lack of circumcision and an increased risk of HIV infection in men."[http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/10726934] The other does not comment regarding what most primary sources found; instead it offers a "meta-analysis" (I'm including quotes as there is consensus in the literature that that study used an improper technique that didn't qualify as a meta-analysis) of the papers. Interestingly, that study was the subject of chapter 33 of "Introduction to Meta-Analysis" by Borenstein et al (Wiley, 2011). The chapter is about a problem ([[Simpson's paradox]]) that can occur when incorrect methods are used to combine studies; Van Howe's paper and various published criticisms of it are used as an detailed illustration. |
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:::::::Rip-Saw is correct, though, that these (and the ones I cited) are old sources. The only reason why I cited them is that they include relatively large numbers of observational studies (more recent systematic reviews and meta-analyses generally ignore the observational studies in favour of RCTs), and hence provide a good overview of the findings of primary sources. Since I think it is now proved that your "which is not the case" statement is erroneous, I think it's probably time to drop this issue. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 09:56, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::Rip-Saw, this is getting a bit off-topic, but I'll try to respond briefly. Observational studies in particular are susceptible to [[confounding]], which to put it bluntly means that they don't always find the right results. So if the actual underlying risk reduction were, say, 50%, one wouldn't realistically expect every study to find that. All things being equal, one would expect results to obey a statistical distribution, with an average reduction of 50%, but some finding less and some more (and a few would probably find an increase). Current estimates, based on the best evidence currently available, are 38-66% (interestingly Weiss et al [Male circumcision for HIV prevention: from evidence to action? AIDS 2008;22:567-74] note that meta-analysis results of the RCTs are "identical to that found in the observational studies"). |
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:::::Regarding the "lower bound", I'm not sure what sources you could cite or indeed how it and other sources could be cited without violating [[WP:SYNTH]]. However, if you'd like to make a concrete proposal that avoids such potential problems, I'd be keen to see whether it can be used. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 09:37, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::I am well-educated in the differences between observational & case studies, and their measures of correlative and causal effects, verses experimental design studies. That is why I know we cannot put a number on low-risk groups. I just read through [http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/15766651 HIV and male circumcision—a systematic review with assessment of the quality of studies] written by the same people who did the meta-analysis referenced in the lead, and came across two interesting graphs. The authors wrote this paper right before the RCTs were finished, and it represents the best knowledge at the time. All of the studies favored circumcision in the high-risk groups; the efficacy can easily be seen by looking at the graph. The benefit is very large, and the African trials eventually put a number on the benefit. In the low-risk group, the efficacy is not so clear, and it is obviously quite lower, possibly nonexistent. Since no random controlled trials have been done for low-risk populations, and observational studies are simply not enough, a realistic efficacy may not even be possible to place on low-risk groups. If data can be found linking the 60% efficacy to low-risk populations in general, then that data could go into the lead. As it is, we can only summarize findings for African populations. The more I look into this, the more I realize that the entire HIV section needs a major assessment. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 22:19, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::I'd suggest proposing non-trivial changes at the talk page first. And, to remind you, we can't include our own analyses or interpretations of data; all statements must be explicitly made by reliable sources. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 07:46, 30 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::: We have reliable sources saying that this study should not be generalized to other populations. The study should refer to males from regions of Africa. Jakew's personal interpretation, extrapolating to general populations, is incorrect.[[User:Gsonnenf|Gsonnenf]] ([[User talk:Gsonnenf|talk]]) 06:08, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::It seems more than a little disingenuous, Gsonnenf, to describe the conclusions of all published meta-analyses as my "personal interpretation". [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 06:46, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::Disingenuousness aside, there is a point there. The studies were not meant to be extrapolated to cover all males of planet Earth. If they were mean to be extrapolated to all, how would we explain the low rate of circumcision, and the low rate of HIV infection, of places such as Finland, Japan, New Zealand, Bulgaria, China, Sweden, etc. [[User:Tftobin|Tftobin]] ([[User talk:Tftobin|talk]]) 16:38, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::Your question doesn't make any sense, but since it's an example of debating the subject rather than the sources, it hardly matters. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 17:05, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::I am not interpreting simply the data, but using the data and research methods to interpret what the authors said. Having read other works by the same authors, which concentrate heavily on the AIDS epidemic in Africa, I am more confident than before that the authors intended their results only apply to the populations they tested. This debate has gone on long enough. The lead needs to reflect the actual findings of the authors, not misinterpreted abstracts. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 20:07, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::: Its JakeW's personal interpretation that the Africa results should be extrapolated to a generalized group rather than sub-Sahara group. We have sources (as apposed to contributor opinion), such as the one from the URA and studies from the Navy (which we may used to complement secondary sources), that say you shouldn't do this. In addition, Erikvcl has added a host of other [[WP:RS]] that scrutinize the African studies. I advise we pull this statement from the lead as its becoming more and more apparent its inappropriate.[[User:Gsonnenf|Gsonnenf]] ([[User talk:Gsonnenf|talk]]) 20:17, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::::Please don't try to guess my personal views, Gsonnenf. They're not relevant. The only issue that is relevant is what the sources actually say, and whether they explicitly support the "African" qualifier. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 20:27, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::::I think Tftobin, Rip-Saw & Gsonnenf make great points here. I see three options: |
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:::::::::::::::* Add a counter-balancing statement using a reliable secondary source in the same paragraph to balance the current claim [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 02:01, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::::::None of these are appropriate, as explained above at length. Adding the qualifier would violate [[WP:NOR]] and removing the HIV material would violate [[WP:LEAD]]. "Counterbalancing" (if I understand your intended meaning) would violate [[WP:UNDUE]] given the strong scientific consensus that exists on the subject of female-to-male HIV transmission. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 07:25, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::::::[[WP:LEAD]] requires consensus. Four editors object to the HIV-Africa stuff in the lead. One editor wants it there. Per [[WP:LEAD]], it should be removed. There is NO scientific consensus on this subject. On that, you are incorrect. In fact, we are giving way too much weight to the small number of Africa-HIV sources; see [[Wikipedia:Balance]]. [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 14:44, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::::::::I read [[WP:LEAD]] and I do not see anything there that says the lead specifically requires consensus any more or less than anywhere else. The only two sentences in [[WP:LEAD]] I see that mention "consensus" are: "The necessity for citations in a lead should be determined on a case-by-case basis by editorial consensus" (and everybody agrees that the in-line citation in the lead should be there), and "The following are examples of names that may be included parenthetically, although inclusion should reflect consensus" (and nobody is arguing about the name used in the lead). Saying something should be removed "per [[WP:LEAD]]" and then giving an argument based on something that is not in [[WP:LEAD]] holds no weight. If the concern is really "per [[WP:CONSENSUS]]", I am concerned when Erikvcl gives a headcount of 4 to 1 editors and points to an argument based on "consensus." [[WP:CONSENSUS]] states specifically that consensus is not the result of a vote. (Also, the "vote" count is not correct, in addition to Jake, I also feel the case for putting in an "African men" qualifier has not been made, and as of their last edits in this thread, Curb Chain and Paul Barlow agreed as well.) There are also items listed at [[Wikipedia:Consensus#Consensus-building_pitfalls_and_errors]] that I think apply here. At this time, I do not believe we are going to resolve this content dispute either at [[Talk:Circumcision]] or here, and it is time to move to another venue. Let's consider [[WP:MEDCOM]] formal mediation. Given the history of the argument so far, I do not think informal mediation will 'stick.' Thoughts? [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 15:09, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::::::::I am not in favor of entirely removing the HIV section from the lead, because that is the biggest thing, medically, circumcision has going for it. Reducing HIV in Africa is very important and certainly lead worthy. This may have to move on to other forms of dispute resolution, because it's not going anywhere right now. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 23:47, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::::::::I stand corrected. [[WP:CONSENSUS]] has been my concern from day 1 about this article. As indicated by Jayg's chart, it seems that most of us want change. I don't think you need to be concerned about my headcount: I listed the folks specified in the top of this section as it stood the other day plus myself. I see that this list has been updated in the mean-time. I know we're not supposed to "vote" persay, but can you suggest a better way? [[User:Erikvcl|Erikvcl]] ([[User talk:Erikvcl|talk]]) 04:13, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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I think that briefly describes the participants and their views on this topic. [[User:Jayjg|Jayjg ]]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">[[User_talk:Jayjg|(talk)]]</font></small></sup> 00:13, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:Are you serious? [[Ad_hominem|Argumentum ad hominem]]? [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 02:22, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::I don't see an argument there; I've just summarized who the participants are and their what their views are on this topic. Have I missed something, or gotten the views wrong? [[User:Jayjg|Jayjg ]]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">[[User_talk:Jayjg|(talk)]]</font></small></sup> 02:43, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::You seem to be confused, please see the triangle at right for an example of how to argue effectively. [[Image:Graham's Hierarchy of Disagreement1.svg|thumb|right|375px|You seem to have fallen off the pyramid and landed in the orange section. Please climb your way back up to at least the blue section.]] I suggest you familiarize yourself with [[Wikipedia:No_personal_attacks|WP: No Personal Attacks]], especially with how it relates to [[Wikipedia:NEWBIES|WP: Please do not bite the newcomers]], as well as [[Wikipedia:Advice_for_new_administrators#How_to_act|this general advice for administrators]]; admins are [[Wikipedia:NOTPERFECT#Administrator_conduct|supposed to lead by example]]. Furthermore, it would be unwise of you to degrade this dispute via the merits of those involved in the dispute. If I were to drag my actual credentials into this dispute, you would find yourself so hopelessly buried by my own [[Galaxy_filament|massive intellect]] that your mind would become dominated by the [[Degenerate_matter|Pauli exclusion principle]]. Let's agree to [[Wikipedia:Please_be_a_giant_dick,_so_we_can_ban_you|not go there,]] and keep discussing [[Wikipedia:NOTFORUM#FORUM|content]], not [[Wikipedia:Contribute|contributors]]! ;) [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 03:34, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::There are editors in circumcision whose violations of WP:Etiquette are so egregious, they would literally have to murder someone to be removed. Filing complaints tamps them down for a few minutes, but nothing ever happens beyond that. Which is why they survive, to bite the newbies and violate WP:Etiquette some more. As a self-policing entity, wikipedia has a long, long, way to go. The blatant one person rule in circumcision is obvious as well. When was the last time you saw a posting that editor did not personally approve of? Which is what leads us here to dispute resolution of circumcision, which, after many years, people know how to maneouver quite well. [[User:Tftobin|Tftobin]] ([[User talk:Tftobin|talk]]) 12:03, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::What an extraordinarily indignant response to a simple table! It seems to me that, since the number of editors arguing for each position has been raised as an issue (by Erikvcl, 14:44, 2 May 2012), then it is perfectly reasonable to look at the level of experience of those editors. In that respect, Jayjg's table serves as a useful summary. The real problem here, per [[WP:CONSENSUS]] and [[WP:NOTDEMOCRACY]], is that the headcount ''doesn't really matter''. The number of editors supporting a position is essentially immaterial (which is why "me too" responses tend to be given no weight). What matters is whether arguments have a sound basis in sources and policy; strong arguments are likely to convince experienced editors and thus lead, eventually, to consensus. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 12:34, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::Wow. It smells like a typical power play to me, a not-so-subtle reminder of who the real controllers of the article are, and the typical 'you are a rookie, we are the seasoned editors who know what we are doing' attitude so prevalent in talk:circumcision. [[User:Tftobin|Tftobin]] ([[User talk:Tftobin|talk]]) 16:23, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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What an astonishing amount of vitriol! No wonder it's so hard to reach agreement. [[User:Jayjg|Jayjg ]]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">[[User_talk:Jayjg|(talk)]]</font></small></sup> 23:08, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::How quickly one can forget one's own level of vitriol. The level which resulted in complaints, over and over. [[User:Tftobin|Tftobin]] ([[User talk:Tftobin|talk]]) 01:31, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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I said it once, I will say it again, let's agree to discuss content, not contributors. Numbers, whether they be votes, edit counts, or IQ points, are completely independent of the content of [[circumcision]]. That little triangle I keep posting is there for a reason. If someone says something, you address what they said directly and prove them wrong. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 02:04, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Autism)=== |
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====''Procedural question--How does this get 'closed' here?''==== |
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I am ready to assess whether moderated discussion will be useful to improve the article on [[Autism]] and to resolve any content disputes. If we do use moderated discussion, this is likely to be a long mediation, and I will probably have to develop a new set of rules. I know that the rules will include; |
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It seems at this point the exact same discussion we were having at [[Talk:Circumcision]] is now happening here instead of there, and without being any closer to resolution. While here, it picked up four new editors: AvocadosTheorem, who asked a follow up question, but provided no opinion; Curb Chain, who agreed with keeping the qualifier "African men" out; Paul Barlow, who agreed with keeping the qualifier "African men" out; and Therewillbefact, who suggested qualifying the lead statement with "Cochrane review" and pointed to another study that uses an "African men" qualifier. I observe none of these four new editors is an Admin (not that it's necessary, but just observing), and the last post by any of them was about a day and a half ago, by Therewillbefact. How does a decision get made, and how does this discussion move to a close here? Or is it time to bring this discussion to another venue? [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 13:12, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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*Be [[WP:CIVIL|civil]]. Civility is required everywhere in Wikipedia, and is essential to resolving content disputes. |
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:I agree with much of what you've said, Zad68, but just as a small correction, [http://toolserver.org/~snottywong/cgi-bin/usersearch.cgi?name=Therewillbefact&page=Talk%3ACircumcision&server=enwiki&max=100 Therewillbefact] has been heavily involved in discussions at [[Talk:Circumcision]]. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 14:19, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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*Be concise. Long statements may make the poster feel better, but they do not always convey useful information. Remember that an editor who sees a [[WP:WALLOFTEXT|wall of text]] is likely to ignore it. |
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::Whoops, sorry Jake! Yes you are right. When I did my analysis, I compared the list of editors contributing here against the "Users involved" listed at the top of this DRN notice, and Therewillbefact wasn't listed up there, so that is why he appeared as a "new editor" here. Considering Therewillbefact as a "previously-involved editor," that brings the number of new editors here down to only three, and of those, Paul Barlow was the last one to post, at 07:37, 28 April 2012 (UTC), now over 4 1/2 days ago. Resolution happening here is even less likely. [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 14:35, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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*Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. The moderator will ask the questions. (I will be the moderator.) Address your answers to the moderator and to the community. |
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:::Hmm. Probably my fault for not adding Therewillbefact when I added some of the names that were missing from the "Users involved" list... [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 15:26, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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*Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so discuss the article or proposed changes to the article. |
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::::No problem, fixed. [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 15:29, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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*Do not make any reports to conduct forums while moderated discussion is in progress. One objective of moderated discussion is to avoid discussions of conduct and to resolve content issues first, because often the conduct issues resolve themselves when the content dispute is resolved. |
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'''Clerk's note:''' Like everything else at Wikipedia, DRN is operated by volunteers and I'm afraid that we're at a low ebb on the number of volunteers here at DRN at the moment. To further complicate the issue, every volunteer gets to choose what kind of disputes he or she wants to become involved with and there are fewer who want to be involved with complex, wall-o-text disputes like this one than with ones which can be quickly and easily addressed. Let me offer some suggestions about what to do next. There are only four more-or-less ''final'' ways to resolve content disputes at WP: |
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*1. Come to consensus about it. |
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*2. ''Fail'' to come to consensus by agreement, in which case [[WP:CONS#No consensus|this section of the consensus policy]] says that the last version of the article which had consensus, either positive or by silence, "wins" and those who wanted to change it "lose". (I realize that those terms are not Wiki-politically-correct, but that's the result at the end of the day.) |
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*3. Fight over it until everyone but the supporters of one position give up or get blocked or banned. |
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*4. Do a [[WP:RFC|request for comments]] to bring in enough uninvolved editors to ''come'' to consensus about it. |
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All that mediation through [[WP:MEDCAB|Mediation Cabal]] or [[WP:MEDCOM|Mediation Committee]] can do is to help keep your dispute orderly, civil, and perhaps offer some compromises which you haven't already thought of yourselves, with an ultimate objective of still achieving resolution method 1. Doing that will ''only'' work if you all honestly believe that with that kind of help that there is still a possibility that you can come to a compromise agreement over this dispute ''and'' you are willing to take days to weeks to get to that compromise. If you, or any one of you, do not think that's possible, then mediation is simply going to end up with resolution method 2, 3, or 4 and my very strong suggestion would be to either (a) mutually drop the stick and live with method 2 or (b) jump directly to an RFC so that you can end up at method 1 or 2 more quickly. I'm sorry that DRN has not been helpful, but unless a volunteer steps up to the plate here at DRN (and, to tell the truth, we cannot do any more here at DRN than what can be done in mediation), I see those as your options at this point. Regards, [[User:TransporterMan|<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; color:blue; font-variant:small-caps;">'''TransporterMan'''</span>]] ([[User talk:TransporterMan|<font face="Trebuchet MS" size="1">TALK</font>]]) 16:09, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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In the meantime, my first question for each editor is whether you would like to try moderated discussion (mediation) in order to resolve content disputes. If you answer yes, I have a two-part question and another question. The purpose of moderated discussion, or of any dispute resolution, is to improve an article. I will split my usual introductory question into two parts. First, please state what changes, if any, you want to make to the [[WP:LEDE|lede section]] of the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. We can go into more detail about those changes later. Third, please provide links to any previous discussions of content or conduct issues about the topic that have not been resolved. I just want a list of all of the previous discussions. Do not comment on them, because I am trying to focus the discussion by asking my usual introductory question (in a two-part form). |
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<small>Since this discussion has devolved into incivility, I intend to close this 24 hours after 18:29, 3 May 2012 (UTC) unless either a DRN volunteer comes along who wants to work on it. See my comments immediately above about what other alternatives you may have. — [[User:TransporterMan|<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; color:blue; font-variant:small-caps;">'''TransporterMan'''</span>]] ([[User talk:TransporterMan|<font face="Trebuchet MS" size="1">TALK</font>]]) 18:29, 3 May 2012 (UTC)</small> |
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I don't yet know whether [[WP:DRN|DRN]] is the right forum to resolve disputes about [[autism]], but I will try to make that assessment based on the answers to the above questions. |
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:<small>I forgot to say ''Thank you'' TransporterMan for your good work volunteering here, and for the "straight poop" regarding the outcomes that can be expected here or elsewhere. Good info. [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 18:39, 3 May 2012 (UTC)</small> |
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[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 03:21, 21 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Yes, I would like to try moderated discussion. Are you looking for responses as replies here, or in the section below (or...)? |
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I guess the next step is informal mediation then. [[User:Rip-Saw|Rip-Saw]] ([[User talk:Rip-Saw|talk]]) 02:10, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:I've never participated in a dispute resolution procedure here (aside from the one linked above which was closed because I didn't get a notification, and didn't know to refresh the page daily, and which I didn't know how to reopen). Also, like many of the parties to this dispute, I am autistic. Explicit instructions will therefore be welcome! Thank you. |
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:Rip-Saw, I was thinking mediation as well. But then I re-read what TransporterMan wrote above at 16:09, 2 May 2012. Without any real hope of a hint of a compromise acceptable to both "sides" so far, despite probably 50k+ worth of text typed, it does not appear mediation will help either. We have largely had a civil discussion, and mediation seems to be targeted to helping an uncivil discussion be civil. Mediation won't decide anything for us, and I think you (like me) wanted to find an adjudicator who would read the evidence and come back with a judgment that we would all be bound to agree to. Mediation doesn't do that. Review the mediation cases, plenty of the close as unresolved. In fact I looked at about 10 cases, and NONE of them was closed with a status that looked like "Consensus reached," most of them closed as stale without resolution. Even [[Wikipedia:Arbitration]] won't do it for us, they explicitly say they do not make "content decisions." It appears the best and only thing we can do is keep talking. Tom opened an RFC at [[Talk:Circumcision]], that's probably the best next thing to try. [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 02:49, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:Answering your other questions will be complicated, because what really needs to happen involves rather extensive changes. Even small changes have persistently been blocked by parties taking one particular position on this, so moving on to questions around the bigger changes required has repeatedly been stymied. |
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:I feel that I should flag up two essays that I've written, provoked by past discussions around all of this, to clarify my position - I hope you agree that this is appropriate here. The first is [https://oolong.medium.com/autism-and-scientism-b7fd4c9e08a6 Autism and Scientism] (published in the [https://www.middletownautism.com/social-media/research-journal-12-2023 ''Middletown Centre for Autism Research Journal'']) and [[User:Oolong/injustice|Autism, Wikipedia and Epistemic Injustice]], posted here and [https://thinkingautismguide.com/2024/11/how-wikipedia-systematically-misleads-people-about-autism.html published in Thinking Person's Guide to Autism]. You are under no obligation to read these or take them into consideration, but they might help you to understand some of the issues at stake if you do so. [[User:Oolong|Oolong]] ([[User talk:Oolong|talk]]) 11:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC) |
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===First statement by possible moderator (Autism)=== |
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====RfC now open==== |
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I asked for specific statements of how the [[WP:LEDE|lede section]] should be revised, and what changes should be made to the body of the article. So far, the statements have not been specific. Please read [[WP:Be Specific at DRN|Be Specific at DRN]]. I understand that one of the main issues is that the current article, beginning with the lede section, is focused on the medical model of autism, and that there is at least one other perspective on autism that is not medical. If sources that meet the ordinary standard of [[WP:RS|reliability]] describe other perspectives and provide evidence that these perspectives are supported by scholarly non-medical sources, then the [[WP:LEDE|lede section]] should describe all perspectives. Discussion of the non-medical perspectives should be supported by [[WP:RS|reliable sources]], and discussion of the medical perspective and any aspects of the medical perspective should be supported by [[WP:MEDRS|medically reliable sources]]. That is, discussion of non-medical perspectives is not required to meet the [[WP:MEDRS|medically reliable]] standard of sourcing, but the sources must meet the ordinary [[WP:RS|standard of reliable sourcing]]. |
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An [[Talk:Circumcision#RFC|RfC]] has now been opened on this issue. Since there is little point in operating two dispute resolutions mechanisms simultaneously, I'd be grateful if someone would close this thread. [[User:Jakew|Jakew]] ([[User talk:Jakew|talk]]) 11:23, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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{{DRN archive bottom}} |
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If an editor thinks that the article should be revised to reflect multiple viewpoints, I will ask that they provide a revised draft of the [[WP:LEDE|lede section]]. We can wait to work on the sections of the body of the article until we have settled on the [[WP:LEDE|lede section]], and then the body of the article should follow the lede. We need to start with something specific, in this case, a revised [[WP:LEDE|lede section]]. I will also repeat my request that each editor provide links to all of the previous discussions of how to revise this article, so as to provide a better overview of the issues. |
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== Health effects of high-fructose corn syrup == |
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I would prefer that statements go in the sections for the purpose, such as '''First statements by editors (Autism)''', because that is what they are for. However, I will not enforce rules about where to make statements, as long as basic [[WP:TPG|talk page guidelines]] are met. |
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After I see at least one specific proposed revision to the article, preferably a draft rewrite of the [[WP:LEDE|lede section]], I will know better whether [[WP:DRN|DRN]] is a place to discuss the issues. Are there any other questions? [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 18:05, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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* {{pagelinks|Health effects of high-fructose corn syrup}} |
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:Thanks @[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]]! That helps clarify matters, including the question of evidence required for non-medical perspectives, which has been a source of much contention over the years. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> |
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:@[[User:Димитрий Улянов Иванов|Димитрий Улянов Иванов]] has [[Talk:Autism#c-Димитрий Улянов Иванов-20241223155700-FactOrOpinion-20241223155100|has said that he won't "have the time to consistently respond within 48 hours. Hopefully that is not a strict requirement"]] - perhaps it would be helpful if you could address the implied question there? |
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* ''Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?'' |
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:I will see if I can draft more detailed proposals tomorrow in the appropriate section; as I said earlier, part of the problem has been that the clash of viewpoints (with a supporting clash of readings of Wikipedia guidelines) has caused so much friction that it has been difficult to move on to the details of the rather large (and very overdue) project of rewriting and restructuring most of the page! I do at least have some fairly solid ideas about the lead, but of course, ideally the lead should reflect the rest of the article... [[User:Oolong|Oolong]] ([[User talk:Oolong|talk]]) 19:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::@[[User:Oolong|Oolong]]@[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample): |
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:::::: " Autism, Autism spectrum condition (ASC), Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or Autism Spectrum (AS) is a set of neurodevelopmental conditions, which have been described variously as a disorder, a condition, a valid human neurotype, and a socio-cultural misfit. No two Autistic persons are same, differing in their abilities and inabilities in multiple dimensions, and usually show a spikey or highly uneven cognitive profile. Many Autistics are capable of reading, writing, speaking clearly, or taking part in logical arguments, while having unnoticed deficits in working memory, information filtering, gross or fine motor skills issues, executive functions, sensory issues, trouble making eye contact or reading facial expressions etc. On the other hand, in some Autistics the deficits or differences can be immediately visible. In such cases the strengths might be unnoticed or ignored. Although an Autistic person may fall somewhere in between- and described better through a multidimensional approach than a unidirectional or linear "mild" vs "severe" categorization. Autistics often use repeatitive behaviour as a means of coping mechanism, and often requires structure and predictability to cope up. Autism is sometimes classified as a hidden disability or an invisible disability, as its features could be not immediately noticeable, and in some cases highly masked or camoufledged. Autistics may differ in the amount and nature of support they need in order to thrive and excell. Autism has close overlaps with specific learning disabilities (Such as dyslexia or dyscalculia), Personality disorders (Schizoid personality disorder, Pathological Demand avoidance), etc. that makes it often hard to differentiate from other psychological diagnoses. Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments. " |
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::[[Special:Contributions/2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0|2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0]] ([[User talk:2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0|talk]]) 01:41, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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===First statements by editors (Autism)=== |
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I have been threatened with banning and told that my post violates MEDRS, WEIGHT, and NPOV rules. I disagree vehemently, and would like to see some version of my last entry included in the opening paragraph on the page. |
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==== 1. what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same ==== |
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The overall framing of the lead is very much within the medical model of autism, taking for granted various things which are hotly contested in the wider world - particularly among autistic people, but also among researchers in this field. |
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Several page watchers are of the opinion that: General scientific consensus regarding high-fructose corn syrup is that it is likely not significantly more detrimental to health then common sugar. |
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Let's take the opening paragraph. |
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I believe this is not an accurate portrayal of the current state of affairs and desire to add lines that read: |
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{{bq|Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or simply autism, is a ''neurodevelopmental disorder'' characterized by ''repetitive, restricted, and inflexible'' patterns of behavior, interests, and activities; ''deficits'' in social communication and social interaction; and the presence of high or low sensory sensitivity. A formal diagnosis requires that ''symptoms'' cause significant ''impairment'' in multiple functional domains, in addition to being atypical or excessive for the person's age and sociocultural context.}} |
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The consensus is based on a 2008 review of available scientific research by the AMA which suggested at the time: "it appears unlikely that HFCS contributes more to obesity or other conditions than sucrose, but {we} welcome further independent research on the subject." However, since 2008 numerous additional studies including testing on rats as well as peer reviewed clinical and epidemiological studies have found: “There is experimental and clinical evidence suggesting a progressive association between HFCS consumption, obesity, and other injury processes” and “to our knowledge, this is the first study to show that HFCS is more likely to cause acute adverse effects than sucrose.” |
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I've highlighted the particularly contentious terms! Essentially, this paragraph takes the mainstream psychiatric perspective on all of these things for granted. |
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using the following sources: |
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Here's one alternative version, which I contributed to in 2022, with instances of more neutral terms highlighted: |
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http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0091305710000614 |
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{{bq|The autism spectrum, often referred to as just autism or in the context of a professional diagnosis autism spectrum disorder (ASD) or autism spectrum condition (ASC), is a neurodevelopmental ''condition'' (or conditions) characterized by ''difficulties'' in social interaction, verbal and nonverbal communication, and the ''presence'' of repetitive behavior and restricted interests. Other common ''signs'' include unusual responses to sensory stimuli. }} |
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http://www.springerlink.com/content/x916738m64212141/ |
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Note that for the most part these terms convey the same information, without assuming a particular interpretation is the correct one. ''Condition'' is often thought to be a slightly less value-laden equivalent of ''disorder'',<ref>{{cite journal |doi=10.1177/1362361315588200 |url=https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/26134030/}}</ref> although arguably the difference is marginal. The hypothesis that autistic people have inherent ''deficits'' in social communication and interaction has been disproven quite convincingly (see [[double empathy problem]]); the ''difficulties'', however, certainly remain in many contexts, and are in practice all that diagnosticians can go by on this front. There are all sorts of issues with applying the term ''symptom'' to the ways that autism manifests, starting with the assumption that they're problems, as opposed to e.g. coping strategies or objectively neutral characteristics. |
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http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/22152650 |
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I recently [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Autism&oldid=1265036302 edited the ''third'' paragraph] simply to accurately reflect views associated with neurodiversity, correcting text based on blatant misunderstandings; variations on these edits have now been reverted at least four times, including after they have been restored by other editors. These reversions have not been accompanied by sensible edit summaries, instead claiming for example that they are ideologically motivated, and that my references (an academic textbook and a peer-reviewed paper researching community views) are somehow inadequate. I am aware that these reversions are starting to suggest that [[administrators' noticeboard for incidents]] may be a more appropriate venue for resolving these issues. |
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It is the opinion of the moderator that I am violating the MEDRS, WEIGHT, and NPOV rules because saying that High Fructose Corn Syrup (HFCS) is unlike sucrose and causes an increase in obesity is a "tiny minority opinion" uses a primary source for reference and includes another reference not from a peer reviewed medical source. I argue that the possibility that HFCS is NOT like sucrose and MAY be harmful is NOT a "tiny minority opinion", that the primary citd source is trustworthy and the topic of such a portentous nature and the research exactly what the AMA asked for but was missing at the time that the entry meets the MEDRS guidline which says "Reliable primary sources may occasionally be used with care . . ." and therefore my entry is a more accurate and current NPOV and deserves inclusion in the opening paragraph. |
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The final paragraph of the lead is dubious, and largely reads like an advertisement for [[applied behavior analysis]] |
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For the record the latest primary research I quoted is: |
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<small>Above entered by {{noping|Oolong}}</small> |
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'''Effects of high-fructose corn syrup and sucrose on the pharmacokinetics of fructose and acute metabolic and hemodynamic responses in healthy subjects.''' Le MT, Frye RF, Rivard CJ, Cheng J, McFann KK, Segal MS, Johnson RJ, Johnson JA. Department of Pharmacotherapy and Translational Research, University of Florida, Gainesville, FL 32610, USA. |
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====Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. ==== |
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''Classification'' goes into enormous technical detail, and seems to overlap heavily with both |
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and the findings were: |
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''diagnosis'' and ''signs and symptoms''. |
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We need to cover common aspects of autistic experience somewhere (see [[Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions]] for some of these; there are many more) and it is not clear if they can fit in the above section, although they may be at least as important, just because they are not adequately covered by the current editions of diagnostic manuals. |
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"In conclusion, our findings suggest that there are differences in various acute metabolic and hemodynamic responses between HFCS and sucrose." and and “to our knowledge, this is the first study to show that HFCS is more likely to cause acute adverse effects than sucrose.” |
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''Possible causes'' should obviously be no more than 2-3 paragraphs at most, in line with summary style. Likewise ''epidemiology''. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
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* ''Who is involved in the dispute?'' |
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''Management'' is an awful framing; autism is a fundamental difference in a person, not an illness to be managed. I note that this heading is absent from the [[gender dysphoria]] entry. Perhaps it would be constructive to replace this section with something around ''access'': access to healthcare, education, workplaces and so on. |
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''Prognosis'' probably doesn't warrant a section at all: it's lifelong. If it's going to be there, it needs to be completely rewritten. |
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:* {{user|Sunvox}} |
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:* {{user|Sciencewatcher}} |
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:* {{user|Anthonyhcole}} |
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''History'' and especially ''society and culture'' probably deserve to be significantly higher up in the article. |
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* ''Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)'' |
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Yes. |
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Re your third question, I provided various links in my original submission - are those specific enough? |
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* <small>'' N.B. To inform the other users you may place the text'' <code><nowiki>{{subst:DRN-notice|thread=</nowiki>Health effects of high-fructose corn syrup<nowiki>}} --~~~~</nowiki></code> ''in a new section on each user's talk page.''</small> |
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--[[User:Oolong|Oolong]] ([[User talk:Oolong|talk]]) 17:40, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Resolving the dispute'''</span> |
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* ''Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?'' |
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===Second statement by moderator (Autism)=== |
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My explanation about [[WP:RS|source reliability]] is my own interpretation, based on the principle to [[WP:UCS|use common sense]]. Other editors may disagree, but it is the rule that will be in place while I am moderating this discussion. |
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The unregistered editor is strongly advised to [[WP:REGISTER|register an account]] if they wish to take part in this mediation. Their IPv6 address has changed between the time that this discussion was created and the time of this post. It is both difficult to remember IPv6 addresses and difficult to communicate with shifting IPv6 (or IPv4) addresses. |
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The requested rewrite has no references. It also includes a statement of opinion that is not a summary of existing knowledge and is therefore not encyclopedic. On the other hand, the first sentence of the proposed rewrite is, in my opinion, a good starting point for a rewrite of the [[WP:LEDE|lede]]. The later sentences about differences between different autistic persons are, in my opinion, a good idea to be included somewhere in the article, but not necessarily in the [[WP:LEDE|lede paragraph]]. |
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* ''How do you think we can help?'' |
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I hope independent reviews will convince the parties involved to find wording that keeps the tenor of my entry. HFCS was believed to be the same as table sugar because of a lack of evidence, but the latest research indicates HFCS may not be the same as table sugar and may be more harmful than table sugar when used as a food sweetner. |
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In the above paragraph, I am taking a more active role in trying to lead this discussion than I usually take. If the participants agree with my taking an active role, I will write a new set of rules providing for a semi-active role by the moderator. If the participants would prefer that I be less active, I will step back somewhat, and will implement [[WP:DRN Rule A|DRN Rule A]]. |
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My first entries on the page were poor and angered participants for that I apologize, but I would like honest third party evaluations of my last entry and of my logic as to why my entry does not violate Wikipedia policy even though I cite a primary source and a non-medical source. I, of course, will gladly accept the independent wisdom of the board. |
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Are there any other questions? |
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[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 05:19, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:So I have issues with the proposed lede change, with interpreting the scientific consensus classification as a "medical model", among other issues. I'd like to clarify these per my involvement here, but I need time to formulate a reply. I saw an article stating that editors must reply within 48 hours but I cannot consistently do this with my time constraints. May I ask if this will be a significant issue and if it's a requirement can it not be so strict under the circumstances? Thanks. [[User:Димитрий Улянов Иванов|Димитрий Улянов Иванов]] ([[User talk:Димитрий Улянов Иванов|talk]]) 16:32, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Sunvox|Sunvox]] ([[User talk:Sunvox|talk]]) 17:11, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::The provision about responding within 48 hours is in [[WP:DRN Rule A|DRN Rule A]], which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::72 hours should be fine in general. I plan to respond quicker than that if I can of course, my only concern is that I occasionally am not free to reply within 72 hours as sometimes I won't be able to until the weekend. Apologies if this is causing some issues. I'm much more free now with Christmas over so I think it'll mainly become an issue if our discussions extend much into January. [[User:Димитрий Улянов Иванов|Димитрий Улянов Иванов]] ([[User talk:Димитрий Улянов Иванов|talk]]) 18:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:"The requested rewrite ... includes a statement of opinion." - Which part is a statement of opinion? I am not disputing your assessment; rather, I want to make sure I understand your point correctly. Thanks! - <span style="font-family: Papyrus; font-size: 14px;">[[User:Markworthen|Mark D Worthen PsyD]] [[User talk:Markworthen|(talk)]]</span> <span style="font-family: Papyrus; font-size: 11px;">[he/him]</span> 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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===Health effects of high-fructose corn syrup discussion=== |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">''Discussion about the issues listed above take place here. Remember to keep discussions calm, brief, and focused on the issues at hand.''</div> |
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===Second statements by editors (Autism)=== |
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Primary studies that have received little or no coverage in secondary sources should not be given extensive, if any, coverage in Wikipedia articles. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 17:59, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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So who has the burden of proof here. Do you know how much secondary coverage the primary source has? And more to the point even if it has recieved zero secondary coverage, do the rules of Wikipedia not allow for exceptions, and does this topic and source not meet the requirements for an expception given the accumulation of data from different sources and the portentous nature of the topic? [[User:Sunvox|Sunvox]] ([[User talk:Sunvox|talk]]) 18:06, 27 April 2012 (UTC) Joe |
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===Third statement by moderator (Autism)=== |
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Wikipedia can't be the leader or itself be the accumulator of (previously un-accumulated) primary sources, but can only follow others. That is, we have to wait for other researchers to verify/validate/etc and then publish further. Unfortunately, especially due to the controversial (maybe even politicized?) nature of the topic, we have to be especially careful not to jump the gun (there's no deadline because WP is never "done" and I don't see any urgency inherent in the content). If a new study really is groundbreaking or is the "first" to find something important, others will surely follow and report further on it. DMacks (talk) 18:14, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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Please read [[WP:DRN Rule G|DRN Rule G]]. This is the new set of rules for this mediation. |
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Please sign all of your posts. It is more important to sign your posts than to put them in the correct sections, although both are a good idea. If you forget to sign your post, the rest of us may not know who posted it. |
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I am a regular mediator/clerk here at DRN. The problem that you are facing is that Wikipedia's policies generally define when material ''may'' be added to an article. They do not generally ever say that material which ''may'' be added to an article ''must'' be added to an article. Said in a different way, Wikipedia policy may ''prohibit'' certain material from being added to an article but rarely, if ever, ''requires'' it to be added. The arguments which are being made against you are arguments which can prohibit your material from being added to the article, but even if they prove to be inapplicable (and on a quick glance it does not appear to me to be that they are ''necessarily'' inapplicable; they are generally correct that scientific papers are in most cases not usable as reliable sources in Wikipedia, but perhaps there is a reason to make an exception in this case), then that still will not allow you to add the material to the article over those editor's objections ''unless'' there is community [[WP:CONS|consensus]] to add it. Right now it's just you arguing against those other editors so, if anything, either consensus is against adding it or, more likely, we're in a "no consensus" situation, but per the [[WP:CONS#No consensus|no consensus policy]] the material cannot be added to the article unless there is positive consensus in favor of adding it. What you must do is either change the minds of the editors who oppose you or draw in additional editors who feel the way you do. It is improper under Wikipedia's [[WP:CANVASS|no canvassing rule]] to simply invite other editors to the discussion who are likely to opine in your favor, but it is proper to generally invite ''all'' editors who might care to join the discussion to do so. You do that by making a [[WP:RFC|request for comments]] on the article talk page. Unless you believe that it might be possible to change the minds of the editors who have objected to the introduction of your material, then that would seem to be the most practical route for you to take. Regards, [[User:TransporterMan|<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; color:blue; font-variant:small-caps;">'''TransporterMan'''</span>]] ([[User talk:TransporterMan|<font face="Trebuchet MS" size="1">TALK</font>]]) 18:15, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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In the proposed [[WP:LEDE|lede]] by the unregistered editor, the last sentence reads: {{tqb|Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments.}} That is true but not encyclopedic, because it does not summarize existing knowledge. It states a moral principle that governs development of the encyclopedia, and should also apply in the larger society. It is also not in a form that is [[WP:V|verifiable]] because it is not attributed to anyone but in wikivoice. |
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Let me also add that with the opinions of TFD and DMacks, above, it appears to me that we may well have moved from a "no consensus" situation to a consensus against the material being added to the article. That does not mean that you cannot proceed with an RFC if you should care to try that. Regards, [[User:TransporterMan|<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; color:blue; font-variant:small-caps;">'''TransporterMan'''</span>]] ([[User talk:TransporterMan|<font face="Trebuchet MS" size="1">TALK</font>]]) 18:39, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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I would still like a list from each editor of links to all the previous discussions about the issues that are being discussed here. I know that some of the discussions have been mentioned in various statements, but I would like each editor to provide a list, in one place, without commenting on the discussions, and without concerning about whether another editor is also listing the same discussions. I just want this for background material. |
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Are there any other questions at this time? |
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O.K. so forgive me if this is overly simplistic, but as I now see it, "consensus against" is determined by those actively participating in the page, and coming here does not bring new independent votes to the consensus building, and I can not ask anyone directly to read and vote on the issue other than to bring up a dispute, and hope for the newcomers to take my side. So for the moment the issue is finished unless some other voice joins mine. |
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[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) |
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===Third statements by editors (Autism)=== |
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Additionally can I infer that based on your comments (TransporterMan), you believe that my material "may be" admissible and "may" not be in violation of WP rules. |
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I am making a rather late entry into this process and am not sure if putting this here is correct. There are a number of aspects that I would like to comment on. I think that anyone with any knowledge of autism will have noticed that autism is not merely, or even primarily, a medical condition, even though it is diagnosable by clinicians and has diagnostic criteria. It has sociological, disability, cultural and identity dimensions. I have had two brain-involving medical conditions, autism and stroke. I have an identity as an autistic person, but no identity as a stroke survivor. Both are medical conditions, diagnosable by clinicians, but only autism has the additional, extra-clinical, dimensions I have described. The Wikipedia article has suffered, in my opinion, from too great an emphasis on the medical aspects of autism, to the extent that some editors have excluded the other aspects of autism from prominent parts of the article, such as the lead, or treated them as though they were unsupported by reputable references, or were 'fringe' in nature. Furthermore, too literal use of pathologising phraseology, gleaned uncritically from diagnostic manuals, introduces wording to the article which is unnecessarily offensive to autistic people, when less offensive wording, while retaining the original meaning, could have been employed. Efforts to moderate the offensive wording have been repeatedly reverted. |
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I have noticed that deafness, a condition which, like autism has cultural, communication, disability and identity dimensions, is treated in a way within Wikipedia ([[Deafness]]) that gives equal treatment to the purely medical and the sociological aspects. Though the deafness article is very much shorter than the one on autism, it struck me that the treatment of the subject might act as a useful paradigm. [[User:Urselius|Urselius]] ([[User talk:Urselius|talk]]) 13:59, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Does anyone have an example of when primary source material was permitted in an article? [[Special:Contributions/108.41.128.155|108.41.128.155]] ([[User talk:108.41.128.155|talk]]) 19:25, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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====List of discussions from WhatamIdoing==== |
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I'd also like to add that the heart of my dispute hinges upon individuals taking the time to read the available research and form their own opinion as to the importance of an exception. Clearly the preference is against exceptions, and it is quite easy to argue "the rules say no so no". [[User:Sunvox|Sunvox]] ([[User talk:Sunvox|talk]]) 19:37, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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I think the present dispute started about two months ago: |
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:We (WP editors) are not in a position to judge the an individual primary-research study as "important", especially one that is not obviously within mainstream/existing thinking on the subject--that's the whole point here IMO. [[User:DMacks|DMacks]] ([[User talk:DMacks|talk]]) 14:05, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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* [[Talk:Autism/Archive 7#Should autism continue to be described as a neurodevelopmental disorder characterised by symptoms, impairment and severity?]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism/Archive 7#Risk?]] |
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* [[Wikipedia:Categories for discussion/Log/2024 November 14#Identity-first language for autistic people categories]] |
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* [[Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Medicine-related articles#Disability terms]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Remove "Disorder" and add "Coocuring Conditions "]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Autism, Wikipedia and epistemic injustice]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Signs and symptoms --> Common characteristics]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Brevity]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Extent of Scientific Consensus on Terminology & Reconciling Perspectives]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Too little focus on anthropology and social dynamics; too intense focus on medical genetics.]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Autism as a Neurodevelopmental Disorder - Response to RIT RAJARSHI et al.]] <small>(Note: one tangent in here was due to some people not being familiar with the Latin phrase ''[[et al.]]'', which means "and others" [i.e., other people]. It is a common way to refer to multiple authors in scientific journals, especially in journals using [[Vancouver style]] [the {{tl|vcite}} citation templates on wiki].)</small> |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Wanting a very particular source]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Autism and disability]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Response to "Impairments" by Oolong]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Dispute Resolution Request]] |
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* [[Talk:Autism#Issues in recent editing by Oolong]] |
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As far as I know, most of the disputed edits and discussions are at this one article. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 07:22, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::FWIW I've rewritten much of the page, which was a collection of cherry-picked primary sources and misrepresented secondary sources. The scientific consensus seems to be HFCS is as bad for you as any other sugar, though more research is needed. Way too many "in rats" and "with a sample of 30 people" studies were cited. [[User:WLU|WLU]] <small>[[User talk:WLU|(t)]] [[Special:Contributions/WLU|(c)]] Wikipedia's rules:</small>[[WP:SIMPLE|<sup><span style='color:#FFA500'>simple</span></sup>]]/[[WP:POL|<sub><span style='color:#008080'>complex</span></sub>]] 15:34, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> |
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* {{pagelinks|Wiley protocol}} |
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* {{pagelinks|T. S. Wiley}} |
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Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> |
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* ''Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?'' |
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For over five years, there has been only one editor for these two papers. I am the subject's husband and, as COI, I do not edit the document, but make suggestions in the talk page. The editor WLU is so irretrievably biased about this subject that I need another editor to look this over. The entries in the article are extremely damaging to the subject, and have been for years. The article is slanted and arguments to the contrary, including sworn testimony to the US Senate, are dismissed. In the most recent conversation, WLU dismissed the topic as a fringe theory on a fringe theory. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> |
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* {{pagelinks|Sri Lankan Vellalar}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
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* {{User|Kautilyapundit}} |
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* ''Who is involved in the dispute?'' |
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* {{User|Luigi Boy}} |
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:* {{user|WLU}} |
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:* {{user|Nraden}} |
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Here are some comments from just the past few days short paragraphs from the talk page that illustrate his bias: |
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:Here is the reference to the rebuttal of Rosenthal in the journal Menopause - [http://journals.lww.com/menopausejournal/Citation/2009/16010/To_the_Editor.36.aspx] Thanks for making the changes so far. Neil Raden (talk) 14:39, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:The worst part of the article is this phrase "potential financial conflicts of interest regarding financial incentives." No sources. There are no conflicts of interest, that is a criticism from ten years ago. Today, Wiley provides only packaging material (syringes, bags, labels and packet inserts) to the compounding pharmacies (about 100 at present). This is no royalty or kickback. The vast amount of revenue from the Wiley Protocol goes to pharmacies and physicians. Pharmacies purchase the other materials from sources specified in their contracts, and there is no financial activity between those suppliers and Wiley. It's a squeaky clean operation. Unless you can source something to the contrary, I would suggest you remove this right away. The entire relationship between Wiley, doctors and pharmacies is clear and above board. Neil Raden (talk) 14:48, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:Is T.S. Wiley's SWORN TESTIMONY to the US Senate not a reliable source? It seems to me that her sworn testimony, where she is articulate about her approach and quite critical of mainstream medicine, more compelling than some doctor with no credentials in this field (Erika Schwartz) who uses her husband's connection to the NYT to trade on Suzanne Somers' notoriety and get published in the newspaper. Seems like a real lack of balance to me. Neil Raden (talk) 15:17, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:Here;s an example. Much of the criticism of the WP is based on the conclusions of the Women's Health Initiative (which has itself come under attack.) Wiley states in her testimony, "The failure of the WHI trial is partially due to the lack of understanding of the biology of the reproductive and menopausal state as well as, the indiscriminant choice of study subjects without well defined entry criteria, such as on the average enrolling subjects 12 to 15 years into menopause, creates unfathomable noise for the outcome." Is this not equivalent to Rosenthal's ethical concerns? A published criticism of a trial? Neil Raden (talk) 15:32, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::A letter to the editor is a reliable source only for the opinion of the letter's author. Wiley's sworn testimony is similarly just reliable as a source about her own opinion. In the case of actual experts, those opinions can be worth including, but given Wiley's lack of actual quantification and expertise in a relevant area (a degree in anthropology and three scientific papers), it's a dubious inclusion. Wiley giving sworn testimony doesn't make her right, and it doesn't make her an expert - nor does being articulate. Wiley giving testimony before congress is not the same thing as appearing in a peer reviewed journal, and if I saw Wiley's opinion on the WHI page, I would remove it as a fringe expert not worth including. The Wiley protocol is a fringe theory of a fringe theory that is regarded as dubious by the medical establishment. That's where the due weight should fall, irrespective the failings of Erika Schwartz's page. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 17:37, 28 April 2012 (UTC) |
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Yes, I have been patient with WLU for years, on the Talk page only, but the prominence of Wikipedia in searches is harming Wiley as the article reflects the negative opinion of WLU and no one else. He has stated very clearly in the past that he is very much opposed to the subject matter, whihc makes him a poor choice of editor, especially as sole editor. Here is my question: If someone defames you in a reliable source, how are you to defend yourself on Wikipedia if everything you say is "original research?" Even a letter to the editor of a respected medical journal, WRITTEN BY A THIRD PARTY M.D. is dismissed. If there is controversy, why isn't the whole controversy aired, not just one side? |
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* ''Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)'' |
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Not yet. |
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* <small>'' N.B. To inform the other users you may place the text'' <code><nowiki>{{subst:DRN-notice|thread=</nowiki>Wiley Protocol, T. S. Wiley<nowiki>}} --~~~~</nowiki></code> ''in a new section on each user's talk page.''</small> |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Resolving the dispute'''</span> |
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* ''Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?'' |
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I would like WLU to be asked to recuse himself from these two article and ask for some help finding some editors who can moderate this objectively. |
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* ''How do you think we can help?'' |
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I'm not sure, but if we can't get some other eyes on this, it would be better to remove both articles as they border libelous and Wiley is pretty fed up |
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[[User:Nraden|Neil Raden]] ([[User talk:Nraden|talk]]) 15:35, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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===Wiley Protocol, T. S. Wiley discussion=== |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">''Discussion about the issues listed above take place here. Remember to keep discussions calm, brief, and focused on the issues at hand.''</div> |
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The [[Wiley protocol]] is a subset of [[bioidentical hormone replacement therapy]], which has no mainstream credibility - a [[WP:FRINGE|fringe theory]]. Accordingly, [[WP:UNDUE|due weight]] requires the page reflect the mainstream opinion and not give the impression this is a well-founded, well-substantiated scientific and medical approach, and should include what criticisms are available. Neil doesn't like this, but we are [[WP:SOAP|not a place to promote unfounded ideas]]. I have no issue with another editor editing the page in compliance with the [[WP:P&G|P&G]]. |
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Neil has been admirable in restricting his edits to the page in question, as one of the few regular contributors I am by default the person he is likely to talk to about this - but the page is adequate as is as far as I'm concerned. I have seen no new sources that I think should be integrated. [[User:WLU|WLU]] <small>[[User talk:WLU|(t)]] [[Special:Contributions/WLU|(c)]] Wikipedia's rules:</small>[[WP:SIMPLE|<sup><span style='color:#FFA500'>simple</span></sup>]]/[[WP:POL|<sub><span style='color:#008080'>complex</span></sub>]] 16:54, 29 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:WLU has not been admirable, he poses as a fair editor but wields a heavy pen against ideas he doesn't like. Have a look at his work on the Bioidentical Hormone Replacement Therapy page. He should be banned. Please see my many suggestions ignored on the talk page. |
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:WLU contradicts himself - if the Wiley Protocol is a fringe theory of a fringe theory, why is it notable to Wikipedia? The controversy? That's been over for 5-6 years. Wiley has trained doctors around the world and thousands of people follow the protocol. If Wiley and the Wiley Protocol are notable enough to warrant Wikipedia pages, why not actually DESCRIBE the Wiley Protocol. There are three words of criticism and controversy to every word that describes the subject. Another contradiction is that WLU excoriates Dr. Erika Schwarz but uses her unfounded opinion freely to denigrate Wiley's work. Pick a foot and stand on it. WLU's statements in the Talk page border on libelous. And I would be willing to bet he is completely uninformed abut the subject. All I ask is to have an editor who is not openly hostile to hormone therapy to judge all of this on its merits. |
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:WLU uses a couple of sources to shoot down Wiley, which are full of errors, but allows no defense, even a published rebuttal in the same journal where the paper was published. There are dozens of testimonials about the WP on Youtube, including 6 or 8 by doctors. Dr Erika Schwartz on Page 6 of the New York Post, a gossip page with pinups? That's a reliable source? The same Dr Erika in the National Enquirer? C'mon. If someone defames you on Wikipedia, what are you supposed to do, wait for a stranger to defend you in a "reliable source?" My suggestion is that WLU step aside (as I have in editing the articles) and that we restructure the articles to a pro/con format instead of this 6 years long ad hominem. It is materially affecting Wiley's ability to pursue her work because Wikipedia is a powerful source of information. [[User:Nraden|Neil Raden]] ([[User talk:Nraden|talk]]) 01:13, 30 April 2012 (UTC) |
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::I am a regular mediator/clerk here at this noticeboard. ''First,'' let me note that making legal claims or threats, or anything that even resembles them, is one of the fastest and easiest ways of becoming blocked from editing, see [[WP:LEGAL]]. If you feel that you need to make legal claims, please contact the Wikimedia Foundation via their [http://wikimediafoundation.org/wiki/Contact_us contact page], but otherwise entirely refrain from making or alluding to such claims ''and I would strongly suggest that you also go back through the material that you have posted here (and elsewhere) and remove all references to libel''. If you feel an assertion about a living person in an article or in a discussion is not supported by [[WP:SOURCES|reliable sources]], as defined by Wikipedia policy, please follow the instructions in the [[WP:BLP|biographies of legal persons (BLP) policy]] by immediately removing the material. If it is restored, then report the issue to the [[WP:BLPN|biographies of living persons noticeboard]], but remember that while issues of libel may underlie the BLP policy, discussing or making claims or threats about libel will still probably get you blocked. ''Second,'' this noticeboard and other dispute resolution processes here at Wikipedia generally do not work very well on open-ended claims about bias about entire articles. If you have specific assertions in the article which you feel are not reliably sourced, then please point them out. Otherwise, you may not get much response here. ''Third,'' I've not looked at the article or the talk page, but if the example you give above (the one following "Here are some comments from just the past few days short paragraphs from the talk page that illustrate his bias:") is typical, I see no bias at all in his response given there. Sworn testimony and letters to the editor are, indeed, not generally considered to be reliable sources at Wikipedia and I fail to see what it is that you might consider to be biased in that response. ''Fourth,'' I see from [[Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons/Noticeboard/Archive34#Wiley_Protocol_and_T._S._Wiley_.28closed.29|this discussion]] that you have expressed surprise and disagreement with Wikipedia's sourcing policy as much as five years ago, but seem to still be struggling with its ramifications. Could it be that what you are identifying as bias in WLU is actually nothing more than the effect of Wikipedia's [[WP:V|verifiability policy]], where all that can be reported here is what is reported in [[WP:SOURCES|reliable sources]], as defined by Wikipedia? As noted in that 2007 discussion, it sometimes happens that all a matter is notable for, based on Wikipedia standards, is the negative things about it, and positive things have not been reported in a way that allows them to be reported here, with the result that the Wikipedia article appears to be biased when in fact it is merely limited. If the negative things are, indeed, reliably sourced (again, as defined by Wikipedia), then it is unlikely that the article will be removed. Regards, [[User:TransporterMan|<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; color:blue; font-variant:small-caps;">'''TransporterMan'''</span>]] ([[User talk:TransporterMan|<font face="Trebuchet MS" size="1">TALK</font>]]) 21:21, 30 April 2012 (UTC) |
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:::I did not make a threat of legal action. What I said was that some things the editor said about Wiley in talk pages verged on libelous. There was no threat real or implied. But I'm not satisfied with your answer because when a third party makes damaging claims about you that are not factual in a so-called reliable source, you have no recourse on Wikipedia, and these statements are damaging in a very real way. I found it extremely frustrating that a third party rebutted these claims in the very same journal, but the editor refused to acknowledge them. His application of Wikipedia policy is very selective and I would appreciate it if you would consider this more closely. [[User:Nraden|Neil Raden]] ([[User talk:Nraden|talk]]) 16:03, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Word to the wise: I strongly advise that you follow the advice TransporterMan gave you instead of denying that you did it. Then once you have purged your posts (including the one above) of words like "libelous", we will be free to examine your claims of bias. --[[User:Guy Macon|Guy Macon]] ([[User talk:Guy Macon|talk]]) 01:27, 5 May 2012 (UTC) |
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== Second Amendment to the United States Constitution == |
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* {{pagelinks|Second Amendment to the United States Constitution}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> |
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* ''Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?'' |
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A user repeatedly adds misleading edits to the caste article. In the section on mythological origins, they introduced misleading edits. If the source states "A," they modify it to say "B" to support their narrative. This constitutes WP:OR and WP:SYNTH. The sources should specifically discuss the origin of the Sri Lankan Vellalar, but they fail to do so, instead recounting tales of other caste groups. There are other sources discussing the mythological origin of Vellalars, but he dismisses them and continues adding misleading edits with synthesized sources. |
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User repeatedly blocks edits of an addition that meets Wikipedia guidelines based on false characterizations of the edit. Does not respond to my explanation of how the statement is relevant, and does not respond to another proposed remedy. Addition reads smoothly and is directly related to material already present in the paragraph in question. http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Second_Amendment_to_the_United_States_Constitution&diff=489959318&oldid=489954813 |
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Additionally, the user seems to be using AI to counter my responses. They don't fully understand my points and keep repeating the same arguments in different contexts. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
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* ''Who is involved in the dispute?'' |
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We also sought a third opinion, but that editor doesn't appear to be active on the talk page. He has no idea on south asian group articles and its complex editing rules. |
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:* {{user|North8000}} |
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:* {{user|Inijones}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> |
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* ''Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)'' |
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[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Sri_Lankan_Vellalar#Misleading%20narrative Talk:Sri_Lankan_Vellalar] |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> |
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* <small>'' N.B. To inform the other users you may place the text'' <code><nowiki>{{subst:DRN-notice|thread=</nowiki>Second Amendment to the United States Constitution<nowiki>}} --~~~~</nowiki></code> ''in a new section on each user's talk page.''</small> |
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This noticeboard might have more professional editors who are knowledgeable about South Asian groups and communities. I believe they can resolve the dispute by cross-verifying our points. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Resolving the dispute'''</span> |
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* ''Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?'' |
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==== Summary of dispute by Luigi Boy ==== |
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Yes. Discussed the matter on the talk page here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Second_Amendment_to_the_United_States_Constitution#Note_on_Precedent |
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First and foremost, I would like to thank user Kautilyapundit for initiating this dispute. This discussion will undoubtedly help clarify and resolve the concerns at hand. From my perspective, there are two distinct issues that need to be addressed: |
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- Terminology differences |
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* ''How do you think we can help?'' |
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- The inclusion of the mythology section |
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Outside opinion assessing the validity of my argument, an assessment of whether the proposed addition does in fact meet Wikipedia guidelines, and whether one of my other proposed remedies would be more appropriate. |
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'''Terminology Differences''' |
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[[User:Inijones|Inijones]] ([[User talk:Inijones|talk]]) 15:18, 30 April 2012 (UTC) |
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The root of the terminology issue stems from my [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Sri%20Lankan%20Vellalar&diff=1231063698&oldid=1229320827 edit], where I restored information that had been removed without adequate justification or proof that the cited sources were [[WP:FRINGE]]. |
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===Second Amendment to the United States Constitution discussion=== |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">''Discussion about the issues listed above take place here. Remember to keep discussions calm, brief, and focused on the issues at hand.''</div> |
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To provide clarity, I included a sentence explaining the transliteration of the term Vellalar. Specifically: |
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I am a regular mediator/clerk here at DRN. The problem that you are facing is that Wikipedia's policies generally define when material ''may'' be added to an article. They do not generally ever say that material which ''may'' be added to an article ''must'' be added to an article. Said in a different way, Wikipedia policy may ''prohibit'' certain material from being added to an article but rarely, if ever, ''requires'' it to be added. The arguments which are being made against you are arguments which can prohibit your material from being added to the article, but even if they prove to be inapplicable then that still will not allow you to add the material to the article over those editor's objections ''unless'' there is community [[WP:CONS|consensus]] to add it. Right now it's just you arguing against those other editors so, if anything, either consensus is against adding it or, more likely, we're in a "no consensus" situation, but per the [[WP:CONS#No consensus|no consensus policy]] the material cannot be added to the article unless there is positive consensus in favor of adding it. What you must do is either change the minds of the editors who oppose you or draw in additional editors who feel the way you do. It is improper under Wikipedia's [[WP:CANVASS|no canvassing rule]] to simply invite other editors to the discussion who are likely to opine in your favor, but it is proper to generally invite ''all'' editors who might care to join the discussion to do so. You do that by making a [[WP:RFC|request for comments]] on the article talk page. Unless you believe that it might be possible to change the minds of the editors who have objected to the introduction of your material, then that would seem to be the most practical route for you to take. |
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- {{Langx|ta|வேளாளர்|Vēḷāḷar}} refers to the context found in ancient Tamil literature like the [[Akananuru]]. |
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Subject to that problem, in regard to whether their objections are valid, it seems to me that the New York Times article does not support the proposition that "These 21st Century decisions represent a departure from established precedent." Part of the disagreement between the majority and minority in Heller was whether Miller was, indeed, precedent and whether the lower courts had misinterpreted Miller as being precedential. To say that Heller was a departure from precedent, much less ''established'' precedent, says in effect that Miller was precedent and that Heller overturned it, when in fact the majority and minority disagreed over that very point. As for the lower court cases ''themselves'', the degree to which they were or were not precedential is a complex issue which can best be summed up being that ''if'' they were precedential ''at all'' they were, as lower court cases, only precedential for some purposes and not others and that they were never precedential in a way that would restrict the Supreme Court. To say that "[t]hese 21st Century decisions represent a departure from established precedent" in reference to the lower court cases, therefore, would be so overbroad as to be misleading. |
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- {{Langx|ta|வெள்ளாளர்|Veḷḷāḷar}} represents the caste name in contemporary usage. |
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While I think that the statement, "and were the first major rulings on the 2nd Amendment since the Supreme Court held that a sawed-off shotgun did not qualify as a militia weapon" is relatively accurate and harmless, I do have to say that neither the NYT article or the quoted selection from the Wills book quite says that. The NYT article does not say that the court ruled that "a sawed-off shotgun did not qualify as a militia weapon" and the Wills book (which was published in 1999 and these rulings were until 2008 and later) does not say that these were "the first major rulings on the 2nd Amendment since" Miller. It would be prohibited [[WP:OR|synthesis]] to combine the sources to come to that conclusion and so those sources are also inadequate and the assertion is inappropriate, even if accurate and true. |
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This distinction adds context about the societies mentioned in classical Tamil texts and the evolution of terminology over time. The confusion arises mainly because the parent caste [[Vellalar]] often uses this term {{Langx|ta|வேளாளர்|Vēḷāḷar}}, whereas modern usage differentiates the two terms. |
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'''Inclusion of the Mythology Section''' |
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''However, the foregoing analysis of the sources is mostly irrelevant'' since there is no consensus to include the edit in the article, adequate sources or not, for the reasons discussed above. Regards, [[User:TransporterMan|<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; color:blue; font-variant:small-caps;">'''TransporterMan'''</span>]] ([[User talk:TransporterMan|<font face="Trebuchet MS" size="1">TALK</font>]]) 18:15, 27 April 2012 (UTC) |
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The second issue is the inclusion (or exclusion) of the mythology section. The claim that I oppose adding more mythology is a misrepresentation of my stance. I've never dismissed other mythological references. If additional, well-sourced myths exist, I encourage to include those as well. |
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:Don't want to get in too deep here because the other folks at the article (including an already-involved person, plus others who haven't even seen it yet in this very-rushed process...this whole thing just started ''yesterday'') don't even know about this. Biggest emphasis is on the issues involved. I tend not to hang my hat on just lack of consensus, but think that the lack of consensus is based on those reasons. One is of the content itself, for the reasons analyzed by TransporterMan, plus that said opinion is stated as fact in the voice of Wikipedia. The third issue not discussed above is location; the multiple attempted insertions of that opinion were all in the lead. Sincerely, <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> ([[User talk:North8000#top|talk]]) 20:56, 30 April 2012 (UTC) |
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The argument for removing the existing mythology section hinges on the fact that the parent article does not discuss this topic. However, this overlooks the fact that the mythology in question is specific to Sri Lankan Vellalars and does not pertain to the parent caste. Removing the section entirely would erase relevant, sourced context unique to this sub-caste. |
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::Since the consensus seems opposed to my inclusion of text about "precedent" I made a change that makes no such mention. |
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'''Third-Party Opinion''' |
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::http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Second_Amendment_to_the_United_States_Constitution&diff=490128328&oldid=490126109 |
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Fortunately, user AirshipJungleman29 has provided a third opinion on this matter. They rightly suggested that if the sources in question are deemed [[WP:FRINGE]] or not [[WP:RS]], the concerned user should raise the issue on [[WP:RSN]]. To date, no such dispute has been initiated, leaving the claim unsubstantiated. |
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::The change was reverted on the grounds that "the sentence about Miller which was added to the lead does not make sense in the lead and does not belong in the lead" |
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I hope this explanation addresses the concerns raised by Kautilyapundit and provides clarity on the rationale behind my edits. I am open to further discussions and look forward to collaborative resolutions to improve the article. |
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::If the 21st century rulings make sense in the lead, why not also mention a significant 20th century ruling that still stands? |
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=== Sri Lankan Vellalar discussion === |
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::If the 20th century ruling does not belong in the lead, perhaps the 21st century rulings don't either. |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> |
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===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Sri Lankan Vellalar)=== |
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::Perhaps, since there is already a section on Heller, the text in the lead should be moved there. |
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I am ready to act as the moderator if the participants want moderated discussion and if this does not involve a question about the [[WP:RS|reliability of sources]]. Please read [[WP:DRN Rule D|DRN Rule D]] and the [[WP:CASTE|general sanctions concerning South Asian social groups]]. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article. I am asking each editor to state, first, whether they agree to [[WP:DRN Rule D|DRN Rule D]] and that discussions of South Asian social groupings are subject to special rules. Each editor is then asked, second, what changes they want to make to the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Each editor is asked, third, whether there are issues about the [[WP:RS|reliability of sources]]. If I determine that there are issues about the [[WP:RS|reliability of sources]], or if an editor states that there are such issues, I will close this discussion until that question is resolved at [[WP:RSN|the Reliable Source Noticeboard]]. |
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::[[User:Inijones|Inijones]] ([[User talk:Inijones|talk]]) 15:52, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Are there any other questions? |
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:::I moved the existing text from the lead to the appropriate sections on the same grounds for which my modified text was excluded, a proposal which I had made repeatedly, and to which nobody objected. My change was reverted unilaterally, without discussion. |
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[[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 05:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::If Heller can appear in the lead, why not Miller? <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Inijones|Inijones]] ([[User talk:Inijones|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Inijones|contribs]]) 17:54, 1 May 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:Thank you for your time, Robert. I greatly appreciate it. Let me summarize my points simply and clearly. I value your time. |
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::::By moving the text in question to the ''District of Columbia v. Heller'' heading you caused ''McDonald v. Chicago'' to appear as part of the introduction. This didn’t make sense so I reverted. I think a consensus is needed before making these changes.[[User:Grahamboat|Grahamboat]] ([[User talk:Grahamboat|talk]]) 21:06, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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: 1. <big>Mythological Origin and Its Sources in the Sri Lankan Vellalar Article |
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:=== Mythological origin === (sri lankan vellalar) |
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:According to myth, the [[Sri Lankan Vellalar|Vellalar]] and Pallar are descendants of two farmer brothers.<ref>{{Cite book |last=Vincentnathan |first=Lynn |title=Harijan Subculture and Self-esteem Management in a South Indian Community |date=1987 |publisher=University of Wisconsin--Madison |pages=385 |language=en}}</ref> The property of the younger brother Pallan was destroyed by a storm. The older brother Vellalan gave Pallan shelter.<ref name=":23">{{Cite book |last1=Manogaran |first1=Chelvadurai |title=The Sri Lankan Tamils: ethnicity and identity |last2=Pfaffenberger |first2=Bryan |date=1994 |publisher=Westview Press |isbn=9780813388458 |pages=35, 43, 147, 149 |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":12">{{Cite book |last=David |first=Kenneth |title=The New Wind: Changing Identities in South Asia |date=1977-01-01 |publisher=Walter de Gruyter |isbn=9783110807752 |pages=189, 190, 204 |language=en}}</ref> After the death of Vellalan, his wife became the owner of the property and forced Pallan and his family to become agricultural laborers for her.<ref>{{Cite book |title=Contributions to Indian Sociology |date=1993 |publisher=Mouton |location=University of Oxford |pages=69 |language=en}}</ref> |
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:The provided Source 1 (Vincentnathan, p. 385) states: |
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:"myth for the Pallars of Sri Lanka , another Tamil Harijan caste ranked higher than Paraiyar , in which two farmer brothers became ancestors of the Pallar and Vellalar castes : The elder brother's land , tools , cattle , and crops were ..." |
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:This line is from David Kenneth's The New Wind: Changing Identities in South Asia (p. 189). |
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:"5.9: PALLAR [AGRICULTURAL LABORER] ORIGIN MYTH: Pallan and Vellälan, both farmers, were annan and tampi [older and youngerbrother]. Pallan had many children; Vellälan had four children.There was a horrible thunderstorm and a cyclone which destroyedPallan s land, tools, cattle, and crop but left Vellälan s possessionsintact. Pallan had no food and had to ask his younger brother for something to eat." <ref name="o961">{{cite book | last=David | first=K. | title=The New Wind: Changing Identities in South Asia | publisher=De Gruyter | series=World Anthropology | year=2011 | isbn=978-3-11-080775-2 | url=https://books.google.com/books?id=Vp_la9QMGIQC&pg=PA189 | access-date=2024-12-29 | page=189}}</ref> |
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:The same book discusses the myth of the Vellalar. (p. 185) |
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:"5.2:VELLALAR [LANDOWNER] ORIGIN MYTH: Although many Vellälar, the dominant landowning caste, were asked to relate their origin myth, I was unable to elicit anything more explicit than the myth recorded by Arunachalam (1964): |
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:A branch of Vellälas the old ruling caste of Tamil land claimed to have received grain and instruction on its cultivation from the Earth Goddess Parvathi hence Velläjas were called pillais [children of Parvathi]; kings also drove the plow. Vellälars would elaborate by saying that they were both the creators of life (in that they created food) and the rulers of the land." |
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:The provided source 2 (The Sri Lankan Tamils: ethnicity and identity, p. 149) |
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:"From the Vellalar point of view, the stigma of Nalavar and Pallar rank, coupled with the history of these castes as recent immigrants from south India, denies that they have any real claim to membership in the Tamil community. In the early 1970s, some Vellalars expressly denied that Nalavars and Pallars were Tamils; and in tum, members of these two castes in the early 1970's still sometimes referred to Vellalars as "Tamils," thus driving home the social and cultural gulf that divided them from Vellalars. The Nalavars' and Pallars' recent historical origins in Dutch-sponsored immigrations from south India, and their putativelydarl<er skin, also seive to deepen the Vellalar sense that the Minority Tamils are a people apart from the mainstream Tamil community. |
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:It should be noted that Minority Tamils do not always accept the view that they are non-Tamilians. The Pallars of Jaffna expressly conceive themselves to be descended from one of two Vellalar brothers; after the older brother's death, the widow--a "bad woman," according to the tale-made the younger one into a landless slave." |
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:Hence it is the tale of pallars. |
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:<big>2. Contradictions Between the Mythological Origin and the Real Origin of the Sri Lankan Pallars</big> |
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:=== Mythological origin === (Sri Lankan Pallar) |
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:The Pallars of Jaffna expressly conceive themselves to be descended from one of two Vellalar brothers.<ref>{{Cite book|title=Harijan Subculture and Self-esteem Management in a South Indian Community|last=Vincentnathan|first=Lynn|date=1987|publisher=University of Wisconsin--Madison|pages=385|language=en}}</ref> The property of the younger brother Pallan was destroyed by a storm. The older brother Vellalan gave Pallan shelter.<ref name=":2">{{Cite book|title=The Sri Lankan Tamils: ethnicity and identity|last1=Manogaran|first1=Chelvadurai|last2=Pfaffenberger|first2=Bryan|date=1994|publisher=Westview Press|isbn=9780813388458|pages=35, 43, 147, 149|language=en}}</ref><ref name=":1">{{Cite book|title=The New Wind: Changing Identities in South Asia|last=David|first=Kenneth|date=1977-01-01|publisher=Walter de Gruyter|isbn=9783110807752|pages=189, 190, 204|language=en}}</ref> After the death of Vellalan, his wife became the owner of the property and forced Pallan and his family to become agricultural laborers for her.<ref>{{Cite book|title=Contributions to Indian Sociology|date=1993|publisher=Mouton|location=University of Oxford|pages=69|language=en}}</ref> |
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:=== Early period === |
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:The Sri Lankan Pallar and the [[Pallar]]s of [[Tamil Nadu]] share a common origin. The Pallars traditionally inhabited the fertile [[Sangam landscape]] known as ''Marutham''. They were earlier known as ''Kadaisiyar'', [[tenant farmer]]s on the land of the ''Uzhavar'' or ''Kalamar''.<ref>{{Cite book|title=Historical Dictionary of the Tamils|last=University|first=Vijaya Ramaswamy, Jawaharlal Nehru|date=2017-08-25|publisher=Rowman & Littlefield|isbn=978-1-5381-0686-0|pages=371|language=en}}</ref> The women of this community were noted in [[Sangam literature]] for their expertise in [[Paddy field|paddy]] transplantation.<ref>{{Cite book|title=History of People and Their Environs: Essays in Honour of Prof. B.S. Chandrababu|date=2011|publisher=Bharathi Puthakalayam|isbn=978-93-80325-91-0|location=Indian Universities Press|pages=320|language=en}}</ref> |
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:=== Medieval period === |
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:The Pallars migrated to [[Sri Lanka]] as [[Serfdom|serfs]] accompanied by their chiefs, on whose land they toiled.<ref>{{Cite book|title=Ceylon and the Dutch, 1600-1800: External Influences and Internal Change in Early Modern Sri Lanka|last=Arasaratnam|first=Sinnappah|date=1996-01-01|publisher=n Variorum|isbn=978-0-86078-579-8|pages=381|language=en}}</ref> They migrated in large numbers mainly from [[Chola dynasty|Chola]] country in search of fertile land. Pallars settling in the [[Jaffna Peninsula]], which was rich in [[Palmyra palm]], joined others there involved in [[Toddy Tapping|toddy tapping]].<ref name=":3">{{Cite book|title=Tamil culture in Ceylon: a general introduction|last=Raghavan|first=M. D.|date=1971|publisher=Kalai Nilayam|pages=104, 184, 193|language=en}}</ref> Some Pallars were involved in other occupations, such as fishers, servants in forts, and harvesters of [[Indigo plant]] roots, contributing to the famous [[dye]] industry of [[Jaffna Kingdom]]. |
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:These are copied from the articles. Upon reading and verification, it is evident that the Pallars originated from the Pallar of Tamil Nadu. The same applies to the Vellalar. Both groups migrated to Sri Lanka from Tamil Nadu and are distinct. |
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:<big>3. Conclusion</big> |
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:The user made a preferred edit to suit their narrative. Additionally, they misinterpreted the source, which falls under WP:OR. The myth of the Pallars cannot be attributed to the Vellalars, especially when the same source specifically discusses the Vellalars. The mythological origin section is clearly outdated and invalid, as it contradicts well-documented reality. I refer to [[WP:RSUW]]. |
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:If anyone wants to add the mythological origin to the "Sri Lankan Vellalar" article, it should specifically address the Vellalars. As per WP:RSUW, the section is unnecessary. |
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:</br> [[User:Kautilyapundit|Kautilyapundit]] ([[User talk:Kautilyapundit|talk]]) 05:53, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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===Zeroth statements by editors (Sri Lankan Vellalar)=== |
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== Old Government House, Parramatta == |
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:::::I fixed that here http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Second_Amendment_to_the_United_States_Constitution&oldid=490145010#McDonald_v._Chicago BEFORE you reverted my edit. |
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:::::But you're still not addressing the issue of why my compromise position was also rejected. I removed the offending material about the dissenting position. I included an unambiguous statement of fact regarding Miller. http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Second_Amendment_to_the_United_States_Constitution&oldid=490126109 The entire second paragraph is about Supreme Court Cases. |
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{{drn filing editor|Itchycoocoo|06:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)}} |
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:::::If Heller and McDonald can appear in the lead, why not Miller? [[User:Inijones|Inijones]] ([[User talk:Inijones|talk]]) 14:54, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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{{DRN archive top|Closed for two reasons. First, the other editor hasn't replied. Second, it's unclear what the dispute even is; it appears to me that it is about large portion of the article being copied from a compatibly licensed source. As long as the appropriate attribution is given, it is legal. The guidelines that the filing editor has mentioned, which disallow copying large portions, are talking about copyrighted material where we don't have explicit permission to use them so we rely on [[fair use]]. However, this isn't the case here, as the material is CC-BY licensed. I am not aware of any guideline that forbids articles from being primarily copied from a compatibly licensed source, instead, [[Wikipedia:Plagiarism#Where_to_place_attribution]] mentions: {{tqq|For sections or whole articles, add a section-wide or article-wide attribution template}}, so I believe there is no issue here. If there is any other issue, follow [[WP:BRD]]. Thanks. [[User:Kovcszaln6|Kovcszaln6]] ([[User talk:Kovcszaln6|talk]]) 12:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> |
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::::::Re: "''If Heller and McDonald can appear in the lead, why not Miller?''", this has been asked and answered at [[Talk:Second Amendment to the United States Constitution]] three times already. I see no point in answering your question a fourth time when other editors have already answered it multiple times. The problem is that you don't accept the answers. Asking again will not change that. |
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::::::So I have a question for you; after many arguments posted here and at [[Talk:Second Amendment to the United States Constitution]], have you been able to convince a single Wikipedia editor to [[WP:CONSENSUS|support the changes you want to make]] to this article? --[[User:Guy Macon|Guy Macon]] ([[User talk:Guy Macon|talk]]) 01:09, 5 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. |
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== Holocaust denial == |
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* {{pagelinks|Holocaust denial}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> |
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* {{pagelinks|Old Government House, Parramatta}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
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* {{User|Itchycoocoo}} |
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* {{User|The Drover's Wife}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> |
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> |
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* ''Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?'' |
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Is a dispute regarding using non-copyright material used within the article [[Old Government House, Parramatta]] that extends to >90% of material from another website. |
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This article starts with the following sentence. 'Holocaust denial is the act of denying the genocide of Jews during World War II, usually referred to as the Holocaust'. The Holocaust is also used, within wikipedia, e.g. at the page The Holocaust to refer to the Nazi genocide of other groups. Therefore it is entirely approriate that any reference to the Holocaust refer to those other groups. The argument against this is that this article is about Holocaust denial, which specifically denies the genocide of Jews. Holocaust deniers don't really care about denying the genocide of other groups. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
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* ''Who is involved in the dispute?'' |
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The User who posted much of this material contends that "The material is CC-BY licensed, as stated in the edit summary and correctly attributed, which is, and has always been, usable on Wikipedia, and was added as part of a massive project by a number of Australian editors to import quality CC-BY content from a number of heritage sources." |
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* ''Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)'' |
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Yes. |
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I think that this material should be placed subject under WP:EL/ External Links, and follow the clearly defined rules of WP:COPYPASTE/ Copying text from other sources, WP:Plagiarism & WP:PARAPHRASE guidelines. |
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* <small>'' N.B. To inform the other users you may place the text'' <code><nowiki>{{subst:DRN-notice|thread=</nowiki>Holocaust denial<nowiki>}} --~~~~</nowiki></code> ''in a new section on each user's talk page.''</small> |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Resolving the dispute'''</span> |
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* ''Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?'' |
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Ignoring the numerous uncivil issues appearing on the Talkpage, the view is using material like this is legalistically quite correct regarding use of non-copyright material, but in my opinion, it exceed any 'fair use' of material in which it is almost completely paraphrased and could even be considered as plagiarism. |
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I have proposed two possible solutions. 1 We include a reference in the introduction of this article to the fact that there are two definitions of the Holocaust, one of which includes all victims of the Nazis, and not just Jewish victims. 2 That we reword the first sentence to be 'Holocaust denial is the act of denying the genocide of Jews during World War II' That would ensure that no single definition is used. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> |
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* ''How do you think we can help?'' |
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[[Talk:Old Government House, Parramatta#This is a mess]] |
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It may be possible to get one of my suggestions above, or another suitable solution agreed. I think that there is a misunderstanding about what I am proposing. I am not trying to change the definition of Holocaust denial to include all victims, but I would like consistency about the use of the word Holocaust throughout wikipedia. It should refer to both accepted definitions wherever it is used, or to neither. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> |
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[[User:Dalai lama ding dong|Dalai lama ding dong]] ([[User talk:Dalai lama ding dong|talk]]) 18:07, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Could someone clarify and advise how and to what extent such external material can be used in Wikipedia pages? |
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===Holocaust denial discussion=== |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">''Discussion about the issues listed above take place here. Remember to keep discussions calm, brief, and focused on the issues at hand.''</div> |
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What reliable sources can be brought that specifically apply the term "Holocaust denial" to the denial of the genocide of groups other than Jews during WWII? In all my reading on the subject I've never seen the term "Holocaust denial" applied to anything other than the denial of the extermination of Jews, not to the denial of the extermination of other groups, making the term "Holocaust denial" a specifically anti-Semitic term. [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 18:42, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:This is what we've been asking for DLDD all along. He's been able to come up with examples of writers criticizing Holocaust denial themselves defining the Holocaust as including others than Jews, but not with examples of either HD being defined as denying other victims of the Holocaust or other writers saying that HD involves denying such other victims. --[[User:Jpgordon|jpgordon]]<sup><small>[[User talk:Jpgordon|::==( o )]]</small></sup> 19:32, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::neither of these comments relate to the definition of the Holocaust which is the subject of the dispute.[[User:Dalai lama ding dong|Dalai lama ding dong]] ([[User talk:Dalai lama ding dong|talk]]) 19:35, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::That's your problem in the first place; you fail to recognize that the article is about Holocaust denial, which deals only with Jews; readers are eminently capable of clicking on the Holocaust article if they want more details about the Holocaust and its broader interpretation (which is not the intepretation Holocaust deniers are concerned with.) --[[User:Jpgordon|jpgordon]]<sup><small>[[User talk:Jpgordon|::==( o )]]</small></sup> 19:44, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::that is simply not correct. I have clearly stated that I accept the same definition of HD as you have just given. The dispute is as to why one definition of the Holocaust is used here when it would be so simple to give both, or neither. Wikipedia, having accepted that there are two definitions should be consistent throughout. It should not be left to the reader to check that for themselves. [[User:Dalai lama ding dong|Dalai lama ding dong]] ([[User talk:Dalai lama ding dong|talk]]) 20:02, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::Dalai lama ding dong, you are asking "why [is] one definition of the Holocaust is used here"? And here is the answer: Because that's the definition the reliable sources use. If the reliable sources don't talk about "Holocaust denial" referring to denial of the genocide of groups of people other than Jews, I can't see what Wikipedia policy-based reason there would be for putting it in the article. [[Holocaust]] mentions that there is a minority use of the term "Holocaust" as referring to groups other than Jews, and it is backed up to a source. What source can you bring that uses "Holocaust denial" in reference to other groups? If we don't have one, then until we can find one, I don't see a reason for putting it in the article. [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 20:26, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Knowing this would be able to improve the page and remove some of the text it doesn't seem relevant. |
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This is pointless. DLDD simply refuses to accept reality. I'm quite sympathetic to attempts to correct Holocaust coverage to include the Roma, who as one of two nations targeted for complete extermination suffered just as badly as the Jews but are generally ignored today. But Holocaust denial is not motivated by antiziganism (or by homophobia, or by able-ism, or whatever), but by antisemitism. This is much like arguments that "antisemitism" includes hatred of Arabs, because Arabs speak a Semitic language, when the term was explicitly coined as a synonym for "Jew hatred". He fails to understand that terms have meanings, and that "Holocaust denial", like "antisemitism", is a term with a meaning. |
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==== Summary of dispute by The Drover's Wife ==== |
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'''If''' DLDD can find sources for this, it could be included per WEIGHT, which would almost certainly mean we wouldn't give it more than a passing mention. But it's up to DLDD to find those sources. — [[User:Kwamikagami|kwami]] ([[User talk:Kwamikagami|talk]]) 20:11, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> |
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=== Old Government House, Parramatta discussion === |
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:again, this dispute is not about the definition of HD. That is not disputed. My RS for their being more than one definition of the Holocaust is the Holocaust article in wikipedia. I have made this very clear. So far no one has addressed my point. The analogy to the meaning of anti semitism completely misses the point, and is irrelevant. The motivation for HD is completely irrelevant. I do not have to find any sources, they are already in wikipedia. Can we please discuss why this article does not reflect the wikipedia article on the Holocaust, which gives two definitions of tha Holocaust?[[User:Dalai lama ding dong|Dalai lama ding dong]] ([[User talk:Dalai lama ding dong|talk]]) 20:26, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> |
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=== Zeroth statement by moderator (Old Government House) === |
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:: here is the wikipeda article on the Holocaust. The Holocaust (from the Greek ὁλόκαυστος holókaustos: hólos, "whole" and kaustós, "burnt"),[2] also known as the Shoah (Hebrew: השואה, HaShoah, "catastrophe"; Yiddish: חורבן, Churben or Hurban,[3] from the Hebrew for "destruction"), was the genocide of approximately six million European Jews during World War II, a programme of systematic state-sponsored murder by Nazi Germany, led by Adolf Hitler, throughout Nazi-occupied territory.[4] Of the nine million Jews who had resided in Europe before the Holocaust, approximately two-thirds perished.[5] In particular, over one million Jewish children were killed in the Holocaust, as were approximately two million Jewish women and three million Jewish men.[6][7] |
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I am ready to act as the moderator in this dispute. Firstly, I would like to ask the editors to read [[Wikipedia:DRN Rule B]] and state their acceptance of it. This ruleset allows back-and-forth discussion, however, I would like to remind you to stay civil. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article; we won't be discussing conduct issues. |
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Some scholars maintain that the definition of the Holocaust should also include the Nazis' genocide of millions of people in other groups, including Romani, Soviet prisoners of war, Polish and Soviet civilians, homosexuals, people with disabilities, Jehovah's Witnesses and other political and religious opponents, which occurred regardless of whether they were of German or non-German ethnic origin.[8] Using this definition, the total number of Holocaust victims is between 11 million and 17 million people.[9].[[User:Dalai lama ding dong|Dalai lama ding dong]] ([[User talk:Dalai lama ding dong|talk]]) 20:33, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::: Response back to you is still [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Dispute_resolution_noticeboard&diff=490184376&oldid=490183067 here], you haven't addressed it or brought a source that talks about "Holocaust denial", despite your edit summary. [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 20:42, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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It is my understanding that {{u|The Drover's Wife}} wants the current state of the article to remain. Is this correct? I would like to ask {{u|Itchycoocoo}} what changes do you want [[Wikipedia:Be specific at DRN|exactly]] and why? [[User:Kovcszaln6|Kovcszaln6]] ([[User talk:Kovcszaln6|talk]]) 11:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::He simply doesn't understand how words are used. If he hasn't understood by now, I doubt he's going to get it from this discussion. |
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::::DLDD, your time would be better spent on the Holocaust article, which I see has now degenerated. (The killing of Soviet POWs was not genocide. The targeted 'final solution' of the Roma was. I don't know how we can equate the two, as we now do in the lead, without feeling ill.) — [[User:Kwamikagami|kwami]] ([[User talk:Kwamikagami|talk]]) 21:09, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:I don't really see what "dispute" exist here – this user hasn't even attempted to edit the article other than slapping a copyvio tag on it, and no one has tried to stop them from editing. I have even [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AOld_Government_House%2C_Parramatta&diff=1263343871&oldid=1263335425 explicitly invited] the user to [[WP:BOLD|be bold]] and edit the article, which they haven't done. Itchycoocoo seems to believe the article is a copyright violation and/or plagiarism, despite three users (myself, The Drover's Wife, and Wizardman) explaining that [[Help:Adding open-license text to Wikipedia|it is fine to add open-licence text to Wikipedia]]. The editor is welcome to take their issue to a different noticeboard such as [[Wikipedia:Copyright problems]] but they will get the same answer. Otherwise, again, they are free to make whatever edits they want to the article. <span style=white-space:nowrap;>[[User:ITBF|<span style="background-color:wheat;padding:2px 5px;border-radius:5px;font-family:Arial black"><span style=color:olivedrab>I</span> <span style=color:indianred>T</span> <span style=color:darkgoldenrod>B</span> <span style=color:darksalmon>F</span></span>]] <span style="background-color:mistyrose;padding:2px 5px;border-radius:5px;font-family:Arial black">[[User talk:ITBF|📢]]</span></span> 02:36, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::: still no one can address the point. Why not include both accepted definitions, or neither? Only including one is POV. No one is wiling to discuss this point. No one has referred to my two suggested resolutions above.[[User:Dalai lama ding dong|Dalai lama ding dong]] ([[User talk:Dalai lama ding dong|talk]]) 21:21, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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=== Zeroth statements by editors (Old Government House) === |
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Zad68. All RS..All refute that there is only definition of the Holocaust. |
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Firstly, thank you for taking this issue up. |
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http://www.macmillandictionary.com/dictionary/british/the-Holocaust |
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http://www.holocaust-education.dk/holocaust/hvadhvemhvor.asp |
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I do accept '''Wikipedia DRN Rule B''', and will avoid unnecessary interaction with the other editor. |
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You state "It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain." I don't think that is the case, and as others are pointed out, there are many irrelevant statements relating to the subject, which can be used elsewhere or in other pages. |
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http://library.thinkquest.org/12663/summary/what.html |
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http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/the-holocaust |
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I will be very happy to do such culling. |
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http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/holocaust |
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But the issue is about using non-copyright text 'free use' to such an extent that it is place there near its entirety. It appears that any material that is deemed free use without copyright under CC – BY licenses can be used within Wikipedia pages. This is acknowledged. |
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http://www.chgs.umn.edu/educational/edResource/definition.html |
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However, elsewhere under paraphrase, copypaste, and plagiarism, it suggests that the amount of text using whole webpages should not extensively used by Wikipedia editors. e.g. According to [[WP:Copypaste]] "''With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Wikipedia. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism.''" |
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http://www.chegg.com/homework-help/definitions/the-holocaust-45. [[User:Dalai lama ding dong|Dalai lama ding dong]] ([[User talk:Dalai lama ding dong|talk]]) 21:35, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:Nobody is disagreeing with the definition of "the Holocaust". We are disagreeing about the relevance of the extended definition of "Holocaust" to the subject of "Holocaust denial", of which there appears to be none. --[[User:Jpgordon|jpgordon]]<sup><small>[[User talk:Jpgordon|::==( o )]]</small></sup> 22:24, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::Dalai lama ding dong, this distinction was pointed out to you many times on the Holocaust denial talk page and you acknowledged this point several times. You explicitly [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:Holocaust_denial&diff=prev&oldid=489358007 stated], "''Please show me where I claiming that all definitions of the Nazi holocaust apply to Holocaust denial? I certainly do not intend to claim that.''" Isn't this a fair description of what you are currently seeking to do? When an editor informed you that, "Holocaust Denial is not about the Holocaust, but about Jews", you [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AHolocaust_denial&diff=489431347&oldid=489393319 responded], "''agreed. I have never disputed this''". Your above assertion belies your various responses on the talk page, and I request that you explain this apparent inconsistency, and the revisiting of a problem that I thought had been resolved.<br />Best Wishes <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 4px 1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User:AnkhMorpork|<b><font color="#990000">Ankh</font></b>]]'''.'''[[User talk:AnkhMorpork|<font color="#000099">Morpork</font>]]'''</small> 23:20, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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I think the issue is a grey area. Using portions of an external webpage, whether a copyright or not, should be adopted sparingly and not cart blanch as example by this article. |
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Dalai, your whole complaint is based on nothing but a straw man. The phrase in question, "..the genocide of Jews during World War II, usually referred to as the Holocaust" is not a "definition of the holocaust". It is stupid to say that it is. [[User:Zargulon|Zargulon]] ([[User talk:Zargulon|talk]]) 23:36, 1 May 2012 (UTC) |
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In my opinion, the entire adopt the text should be scrapped, and should be written by a Wikipedia editor, but still extracting some of the CC – BY material either in quotes, as suggested in [[WP:CLOP|Close paraphrasing]] "''With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Wikipedia. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism.''" |
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:Please try and remain civil. If it is not a definition, then why not remove it as I suggested? Thank you for being the first person to recognise the dispute. [[User:Dalai lama ding dong|Dalai lama ding dong]] ([[User talk:Dalai lama ding dong|talk]]) 07:07, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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'''Q: My question to resolve this dispute is how much of CC – BY license usage of another site can be used in a Wikipedia page? Is 100% acceptable, say 50%, 20%, or maybe just 5%?''' |
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Why do you think that something should be removed because you think that it is "not a definition"? [[User:Zargulon|Zargulon]] ([[User talk:Zargulon|talk]]) 07:31, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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If it is 100% acceptable, then the pasting of all of this material is acceptable to Wikipedia standards. However, looking at the other Wikipedia policies, it seems to me that significant section taken from any website is needed, really should be placed in quotation marks, and used to support statements made in secondary sources written by Users. |
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I am a regular mediator/clerk here at this noticeboard. Rather than let this discussion drag on any longer, I have to note that I'm not seeing ''any'' support for the edit (or any similar edit) proposed by [[User talk:Dalai lama ding dong|Dalai lama ding dong]]. It appears to me that DLDD has made the argument for the edit to the best of his/her ability and is not being misunderstood. While several opponents have objected to the edit on the basis of inadequate sourcing and have indicated a willingness to consider the edit if reliable sources were to be provided for it, they have not accepted the sources which DLDD has provided to this point. It must be borne in mind that even if the proposed edit were supported by unassailable reliable sources and was indisputably relevant to the topic of this article that nothing can be included in a Wikipedia article unless there is [[WP:CONS|consensus]] for its inclusion. Under the current circumstances it appears that there is an clear consensus against the inclusion of this edit and that, unless several of the opponents indicate that they are still on the fence on this issue, further discussion of it will be, at the very least, inappropriate and disruptive. ''For that reason, I will close this discussion as resolved 24 hours after the time stamp on this message unless in the meantime a substantial number of the opponents to the edit indicate that they wish for it to be continued.'' If this discussion is so closed, I would also suggest that DDLD should consider his only option for further pursuit of this issue to be the filing of a [[WP:RFC|request for comments]] at the article talk page, as any further advocacy for it elsewhere might be considered [[WP:DE|disruptive editing]]. Regards, [[User:TransporterMan|<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; color:blue; font-variant:small-caps;">'''TransporterMan'''</span>]] ([[User talk:TransporterMan|<font face="Trebuchet MS" size="1">TALK</font>]]) 14:01, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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The alternative is to just place it as a simple external link, for readers who want to read the more extensive knowledge in more detail. |
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:It is quite simply [[wp:or|original research]] to say that [[Holocaust denial]], the title of the article being discussed, applies to non-Jews, in the absence of a source. All material must be sourced. All material added must be verifiable. There is no source in support of the implication that DLDD wishes to put into the article: that "holocaust denial" encompasses denial of the tragedy of death and destruction to befall non-Jews in mid twentieth century Europe. The reason for this is that there is no "denial" of the death and destruction that befell non-Jews in mid twentieth century Europe. Holocaust denial is not just for the purpose of contradiction. Another aim of holocaust denial is the infliction of mental anguish. Holocaust denial is a present day manifestation of antisemitism. Holocaust denial is an expression of antisemitism because it requires a response. The response can be psychologically painful but such responses must be delivered in order to counter the falsehood of such claims, thus "holocaust deniers" accomplish a purpose, an antisemitic purpose, even if their arguments are effectively responded to. Antisemitism thus serves as the motivation for "holocaust denial" and of course this is a motivation confined to Jews. Thus there is a bifurcation between the scope of the term "holocaust" and the scope of the term "holocaust denial". [[User:Bus stop|Bus stop]] ([[User talk:Bus stop|talk]]) 17:12, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Based on the discussion and debate, if I do do this, I fear that it will simply be reverted to the original text in the alternate website. I would also like to add some new information that is occurred in the last year or two, has there been significant developments in the building and its grounds. Using the non-copyright source means it will have to be modified fairly severely and still read as if it were encyclopaedic. |
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::First, I generally support DLDD's complaints insofar as the article on holocaust denial implies a narrow definition of the holocaust. Almost all secondary sources (e.g., historians, sociologists, etc.) almost take for granted by now that the Nazis systematically murdered many groups and that we refer to this systematic murder as the holocaust. There are many questions still about the holocaust, when exactly it began, who was targeted, and so on. The article on the holocaust is clear here but certainly does not as some people have suggested consign broader definitions of the holocaust to minority usage. DLDD is asking - and myself - to have the (implied) definition of the holocaust given in the article on holocaust denial brought in line with the broader definition given in the article on the holocaust. Second, I completely disagree with anyone who says that holocaust denial has only ever been anti-semetic. This seems to be a fundamental misunderstanding of holocaust denial. Has anyone here besides DLDD actually read or heard David Irving, who is in my mind the most sophisticated holocaust denier on the planet today? Irving certainly is an anti-semite, but he is many other things too... and the crux of his message is that the Nazis did not embark in any way whatsoever on a course of killing their opponents. I suppose that, given Wikipedia's preference for secondary sources, Irving can't be considered a proper source. OK, I'll just have to find someone now who discusses Irving and points to the many places in which he does deny the holocaust broadly speaking. Cheers. [[User:Mfhiller|Mfhiller]] ([[User talk:Mfhiller|talk]]) 01:13, 3 May 2012 (UTC)mfhiller |
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:::The issue here is not your definition of the Holocaust, nor your understanding of David Irving's statements, but rather what [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] state about [[Holocaust denial]]. They define it as an activity directed against Jews, and more specifically as an [[antisemitism|antisemitic]] [[conspiracy theory]]. There's a reason that Holocaust denial books have names like ''[[Did Six Million Really Die?]]'', not ''Did Eleven Million Really Die?''. As Kenneth Stern wrote in 2006, "Holocaust Denial is not about the Holocaust, but about Jews" (''Antisemitism Today'', p. 79). [[User:Jayjg|Jayjg ]]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">[[User_talk:Jayjg|(talk)]]</font></small></sup> 01:41, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Mfhiller says, ''the article on holocaust denial implies a narrow definition of the holocaust.'' Yes, it does, because our reliable sources show us that holocaust denial is about a narrow definition of the Holocaust. --[[User:Jpgordon|jpgordon]]<sup><small>[[User talk:Jpgordon|::==( o )]]</small></sup> 02:53, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::I'll accept the points about holocaust denial being an "antisemitic conspiracy theory"/ holocaust denial about a "narrow definition of the holocaust". The article on holocaust denial, however, mentions none of this and I think this has been part of the dispute all along. Something of this sort should be included - discussion of terms. The aim after all is just to make the article better, right? [[User:Mfhiller|Mfhiller]] ([[User talk:Mfhiller|talk]]) 03:30, 3 May 2012 (UTC)mfhiller |
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I withdraw the closing notice which I gave above, as the consensus against inclusion was not quite so clear as I thought it was. ''However,'' I would again note that under [[WP:CONS#No consensus|this provision of the consensus policy]] that once an edit has been challenged that a positive consensus for its inclusion must be established or it cannot be included and there is nothing close to that here, nor any indication that this discussion might be moving in the direction of the formation of such a consensus. I would suggest to DLDD and Mfhiller that if they wish their desired edit to be included in the article, the best opportunity to obtain a consensus in their favor without improper [[WP:CANVASS|canvassing]] would be to file a [[WP:RFC|request for comment]] at the article page. Regards, [[User:TransporterMan|<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; color:blue; font-variant:small-caps;">'''TransporterMan'''</span>]] ([[User talk:TransporterMan|<font face="Trebuchet MS" size="1">TALK</font>]]) 13:57, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:The article on Holocaust denial is not "about a narrow definition of the Holocaust", it is about Holocaust denial. Phrases often don't mean what their constituent words may or may not superficially suggest, and it is not necessary to belabour this fact in the lead of the article, which currently defines "holocaust denial" accurately and concisely. [[User:Zargulon|Zargulon]] ([[User talk:Zargulon|talk]]) 23:05, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Perhaps the other editor in this dispute may have some useful suggestions on improving this article with these thoughts in mind. They are clearly an experienced editor, so any ideas would be welcome. |
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== 2012 Midi-Pyrénées shootings == |
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Thanks. |
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== Imran Khan == |
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* ''Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?'' |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> |
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1) The lead states that Merah wished to "avenge the deaths of Palestinian children killed by Israeli forces in Gaza and the West Bank", and is based on [http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/europe/france/9161159/What-are-the-real-lessons-to-be-learned-from-the-Toulouse-killings.html this] opinion piece. Other sources quote Merah's exact words, "The Jews have killed our brothers and sisters in Palestine" and report this aspect of his motivation differently, without ascribing the actions of "the Jews" to the "Israeli forces", or limiting the deaths of Palestinian children to specific regions. I would prefer the lead to reflect how Merah's comments were widely reported. See [http://www.israelhayom.com/site/newsletter_article.php?id=3603 1][http://www.eitb.com/fr/infos/societe/detail/854031/fusillades-operation-policiere-toulouse/ 2][http://www.huffingtonpost.co.uk/2012/03/21/mohammed-merah-suspect-toulouse-shooting_n_1369067.html 3][http://www.timesofisrael.com/jewish-leader-toulouse-suspect-readied-new-attack/ 4][http://www.france24.com/en/20120321-toulouse-gunman-calls-france-24-before-pre-dawn-raid 5][http://szdaily.sznews.com/html/2012-03/23/content_1974996.htm 6][http://www.mirror.co.uk/news/world-news/france-shootings-suspect-was-preparing-to-kill-767687 7] |
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Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. |
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2) Based on [http://www.ynetnews.com/articles/0,7340,L-4205107,00.html this] source I [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=2012_Midi-Pyr%C3%A9n%C3%A9es_shootings&diff=489835633&oldid=489824600 added] to Sarkozy's other thoughts on these attacks, that he noted an antisemitic motive. This was improved upon with [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=2012_Midi-Pyr%C3%A9n%C3%A9es_shootings&diff=489866323&oldid=489835633 this] edit by Vice regent. Since I have been repeatedly accused of "misrepresenting the source", but no suggestions of improvement have been offered, can you advise me how to accurately present this information. Vice regent, contrary to his previous [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=2012_Midi-Pyr%C3%A9n%C3%A9es_shootings&diff=489866323&oldid=489835633 edit], is now entirely opposed to its inclusion, and I am concerned at the apparent tag-teaming, which has previously been [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Bwilkins&diff=prev&oldid=486906855 commented] on by an admin. My suggestions have twice been stymied with a "Let's wait and see what the other editor has to say".[http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:2012_Midi-Pyr%C3%A9n%C3%A9es_shootings&diff=prev&oldid=489942096 1][http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Talk:2012_Midi-Pyr%C3%A9n%C3%A9es_shootings&diff=prev&oldid=490028058 2] |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> |
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* {{pagelinks|Imran Khan}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> |
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* {{User|SheriffIsInTown}} |
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* ''Who is involved in the dispute?'' |
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* {{User|WikiEnthusiast1001}} |
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* {{User|Veldsenk}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> |
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The content removed in this [https://en.m.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Imran_Khan&diff=prev&oldid=1264927684&diffonly=1 diff] had been part of the article for over six years. It was initially removed by an editor citing [[WP:BLPGOSSIP]] and [[WP:GRAPEVINE]]. Although I restored it, another editor subsequently removed it again. For context, [[Reham Khan]] is a former wife of the subject. After their marriage ended, she authored an autobiography titled [[Reham Khan (memoir)]], published by [[HarperCollins]]. The author, the book, and the publisher are all notable, with HarperCollins being recognised as “one of the ‘Big Five’ English-language publishers,” as noted in its Wikipedia article. The removed content was also supported by five other secondary sources. Given the notability of the author, the book, and the publisher, as well as the reliable reporting, the content merits inclusion in the article. The removal occurred without consensus, despite the content being part of the article for years. The material only reported Reham Khan’s allegations, including claims that Imran Khan shared certain details with her. As Wikipedia editors, we are not arbiters of truth but rely on reliable sources. Additionally, [[WP:NOTCENSORED|Wikipedia is not censored]]. |
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:* {{user|Vice regent}} |
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:* {{user|Somedifferentstuff}} |
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:* {{user|AnkhMorpork}} |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> |
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* ''Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)'' |
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[[Talk:Imran Khan#Reham Khan]] |
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Yes |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> |
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* <small>'' N.B. To inform the other users you may place the text'' <code><nowiki>{{subst:DRN-notice|thread=</nowiki>2012 Midi-Pyrénées shootings<nowiki>}} --~~~~</nowiki></code> ''in a new section on each user's talk page.''</small> |
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I am seeking the restoration of the removed content, along with some expansion to include her allegations regarding Imran Khan’s drug use and same-sex tendencies, all of which are supported by her book and other secondary sources. |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Resolving the dispute'''</span> |
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* ''Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?'' |
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==== Summary of dispute by WikiEnthusiast1001 ==== |
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Discussed on [[Talk:2012 Midi-Pyrénées shootings|talk page]] |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> |
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Violates several key Wikipedia policies especially [[Wikipedia:BLP]], which states '''"Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid: it is not Wikipedia's job to be sensationalist, or to be the primary vehicle for the spread of titillating claims about people's lives."''' |
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While the book was published by a reputable publisher, [[Reham Khan]]'s credibility is highly questionable—she has been sued for libel and defamation by one of her former husband's aides. As a result, [https://www.geo.tv/latest/375879-reham-khan-loses-defamation-case-to-zulfi-bukhari-to-pay-50000 she lost the case] and publicly apologized. This clearly casts doubt on the reliability of her claims. Also, the book was released just 13 days before the 2018 Pakistani general election,<ref>{{cite web|url=https://www.thenews.com.pk/latest/340843|title=Reham Khan's book 'available in paperback in UK'|publisher=[[The News (Pakistan)]]|date=12 July 2018|quote=Reham's book, published online today, has triggered debate on social media with many saying that she is doing all this on the behest of Pakistan Muslim League Nawaz to tarnish the image of Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf Chairman Imran Khan just before the July 25 polls.}}</ref> suggesting a potential motive for bias. |
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* ''How do you think we can help?'' |
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The allegations have only been repeated by other sources after she brought them up, and no independent or credible evidence has ever corroborated them. This fails Wikipedia's reliable sources policy, which requires independently verifiable claims, not merely echoes of the original source. It also violates NPOV and undue weight policies by giving excessive prominence to a single, uncorroborated perspective. [[User:WikiEnthusiast1001|WikiEnthusiast1001]] ([[User talk:WikiEnthusiast1001|talk]]) 10:09, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Assess the merits of my statement, and suggest a rewording that would reflect Merah's implication of the "the Jews", and would make note of the antisemitic motive. |
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<br />Best Wishes <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 4px 1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User:AnkhMorpork|<b><font color="#990000">Ankh</font></b>]]'''.'''[[User talk:AnkhMorpork|<font color="#000099">Morpork</font>]]'''</small> 16:15, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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==== Summary of dispute by Veldsenk ==== |
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===2012 Midi-Pyrénées shootings discussion=== |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> |
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1) Reading the Grant article, it's clear that his goal is not to accurately define the motives of the shooter, but to caution against drawing conclusions about motive too quickly. His opinion is more along the lines of "The shooter was quickly (and incorrectly) presumed to be a member of one group, so we must condem that group. But in reality he was a member of some other group, and already people are condemning ''that'' group. Let's all stop rushing to judgement." His statement that "The Jewish children were killed to avenge the deaths of Palestinian children killed by Israeli forces in Gaza and the West Bank." is not ''his'' opinion, he's just stating what the collective press/governmental/man-on-the-street opinion is ''at that moment''. In fact, later in the article, he states the true message of his writing: "The point here should be clear: it is far too easy to shift responsibility away from the man and onto the environment in which he operates, and to advance a given political agenda accordingly." As such, I don't think using this article to source a statement that Merah's motivation was to "avenge the deaths of Palestinian children killed by Israeli forces in Gaza and the West Bank" is accurate interpretation of the source. In any case, any time you can quote the direct words of the person, it's better. |
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=== Imran Khan discussion === |
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2) Sarkozy clearly said it, it was quoted in a reliable source, so I see no issue with including it. It's especially relevant because Sarkozy did ''not'' attribute the act to any specific group, but simply commented on the motive. I think the [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=2012_Midi-Pyr%C3%A9n%C3%A9es_shootings&diff=489866323&oldid=489835633 edit by Vice regent] clearly and accurately summarizes the quote and puts it in the right context. |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> |
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*'''Volunteer Note''' - Is this dispute at least partly about [[WP:RS|the reliability of sources]]? If so, the source reliability issue should be addressed at [[WP:RSN|the Reliable Source Noticeboard]] first, before any other content issues are discussed. [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 03:53, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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*'''Volunteer Note''' - Is this dispute about the appropriateness of material in a [[Wp:BLP|biography of a living person]]? If so, it might be answered more quickly at [[WP:BLPN|the biographies of living persons noticeboard]]. [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 03:53, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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*:The matter concerns a BLP, but I’ve observed requests on that noticeboard being archived without a response. Since we are already on this noticeboard, with a request filed and another editor having responded, it seems more practical to build on that progress and resolve the issue here, rather than moving to multiple noticeboards. [[User:SheriffIsInTown|<b style="color: blue;">Sh</b><b style="color: red;">eri</b><b style="color: blue;">ff</b>]] | [[User talk:SheriffIsInTown|<b style="color: black;">☎ 911</b>]] | 04:24, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I don’t think anyone is disputing the reliability of the sources. [[User:SheriffIsInTown|<b style="color: blue;">Sh</b><b style="color: red;">eri</b><b style="color: blue;">ff</b>]] | [[User talk:SheriffIsInTown|<b style="color: black;">☎ 911</b>]] | 04:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Those are my 2 cents, anyway. I would encourage you three to continue to work together on this, as you're all clearly motivated to get the article ''right''. This is a massively good thing. Waiting for commentary by the third person in a three-way dispute can be frustrating, but is in the end the best policy to prevent protracted edit warring. Good luck! [[User:Livitup|<span style="color:#006">Liv</span><span style="color:#06F">it</span><span style="color:#006">'''⇑'''</span>]][[User talk:Livitup|<sup>Eh?</sup>]]/[[Special:Contributions/Livitup|<sub>What?</sub>]] 19:39, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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== 2025 Bangladesh Premier League == |
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My observations: |
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# Although The Telegraph is a WP:RS, Grant is writing his column as an opinion piece and not as a reporter. If something from his column were to be used in the article, it'd have to be attributed to him, "George Grant says that..." However, given the seven good, reliable sources that Ankh.Morpork provides with a direct quote from Merah himself, there's absolutely no reason (no Wikipedia policy-based reason, anyway) to try to base this statement in the article, written in Wikipedia's voice, on a Grant opinion column. Use the direct quote from Merah, in quotation marks, attributed to Merah. |
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# I actually prefer Ankh's version over VC's, but I do not like Ankh's "noted" because that indicates (in Wikipedia's voice) that there are anti-Semitic motives when there may not be. I would go a step further to use a direct quote from Sarkozy, because we have one. I would write, |
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:::French President [[Nicolas Sarkozy]] said that "the anti-Semitic motivation appears obvious," and also said "The Islamic faith has nothing to do with the insane motivations of this man." |
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::He didn't say those two things together, according to the sources, so the article should not say "adding." Both thoughts needs to be attributed to Sarkozy, in the contexts he said them. I also would avoid "though" because that makes it seem (however slightly) that it would be natural to assume that something anti-Semitic would naturally be in accord with Islam. [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 20:33, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Would "Sarkozy said that "the anti-Semitic motivation appears obvious" and later added/said that "the Islamic faith has nothing to do with the insane motivations of this man" be appropriate?<br />Best Wishes <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 4px 1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User:AnkhMorpork|<b><font color="#990000">Ankh</font></b>]]'''.'''[[User talk:AnkhMorpork|<font color="#000099">Morpork</font>]]'''</small> 20:48, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::If the sources indicate that's the order in which he made his comments, yes. [[User:Zad68|Zad68]] ([[User talk:Zad68|talk]]) 21:01, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::I find Zad68's analysis compelling; if there are already seven good, reliable sources providing a direct quote from Merah, then why would the article rely on an opinion piece by George Grant? And since we have Sarkozy's statement, the article should simply quote it. [[User:Jayjg|Jayjg ]]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">[[User_talk:Jayjg|(talk)]]</font></small></sup> 23:31, 2 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Agree with much of what is above but, given the politicised nature of the response to the murders, the article should generally avoid using quotes from politicians to narrate facts. So, a quote from Sarkozy will be fine in the context of a section about responses, but not in the context of material trying to pin down a motive for the crimes. [[User:FormerIP|Formerip]] ([[User talk:FormerIP|talk]]) 01:10, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:1. Can someone, perhaps AnkhMorpork, propose how the direct quote would be used? My primary objection to that has been the [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=2012_Midi-Pyr%C3%A9n%C3%A9es_shootings&diff=490297826&oldid=490128175 redundancy] of the material. That's fine in the body, but in the lede saying the same thing twice gives it undue weight. |
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{{DRN archive top|Closed as not an issue for which DRN can be helpful. My advice is similar to that given by [[User:Doniago]] in declining your [[WP:3O|Third Opinion]] request. Third Opinion and DRN are both for good-faith disagreements between editors who discuss their disagreements. The problem here is an unregistered editor who reverts and does not discuss. My advice concerning unregistered editors (IP addresses) who do not discuss normally is to request [[WP:SEMI|semi-protection]] at [[WP:RFPP|Requests for Page Protection]], and this is such a case. After the article is semi-protected, you can make your edits, and the article will be read-only for the unregistered editor. This may be an unregistered mobile user who never uses talk pages because they don't know about talk pages and don't know that they have a talk page. This is a problem that we sometimes encounter with mobile users, both registered and unregistered. In any case, I suggest requesting [[WP:SEMI|semi-protection]]. In your request, state that the IP editor reverts but does not discuss. [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 04:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC)}} |
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::Might I propose the following: '''Merah said his actions were to "avenge Palestinian children".''' Many reliable sources, not opinion pieces, report this ([http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-europe-17462604 BBC] [http://news.sky.com/home/world-news/article/16192930 Sky News] [http://www.alarabiya.net/articles/2012/03/21/202205.html Al-Arabiya] etc.). |
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:2. Sarkozy [http://www.ynetnews.com/articles/0,7340,L-4205107,00.html cited antisemitism] as a motivation at a time the French authorities believed this attack to be that of a neo-Nazi (please read the source) and not Merah. So while, we can include Sarkozy's remarks, it would be misleading to say that Sarkozy said this about Merah. |
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::Its best to add Sarkozy's remarks on antisemitism in the 2nd paragraph of the lede, which talks about events preceding the Merah's identification as the perpetrator. The remarks on Islam should go in the 3r/4th paragraph. |
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:'''[[User:Vice regent|VR]]''' <sub>[[User talk:Vice regent|'''<font color="Black">talk</font>''']]</sub> 03:00, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::Apparently what Merah said was "The Jews have killed our brothers and sisters in Palestine". The word "Jew" keeps disappearing from the quotes being offered - it's almost as if the fact that the children he deliberately shot and killed were Jews had nothing to do with Merah killing them. [[User:Jayjg|Jayjg ]]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">[[User_talk:Jayjg|(talk)]]</font></small></sup> 03:11, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::So how exactly would you phrase it? How about: '''Merah said he attacked the Jewish school to avenge Palestinian children''' [http://www.alarabiya.net/articles/2012/03/21/202205.html source1][http://articles.latimes.com/2012/mar/21/world/la-fg-france-shootings-20120322 source2].'''[[User:Vice regent|VR]]''' <sub>[[User talk:Vice regent|'''<font color="Black">talk</font>''']]</sub> 06:29, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::Since your primary objection has been "redundancy of material", do you agree to using Merah's exact words as recommended by Livitup, Zad68, Jayjg and FormerIP, and stating: ''Merah said he attacked the Jewish school because, "The Jews have killed our brothers and sisters in Palestine"''. Your last two suggestions have failed to address my concern, reiterated with Jayjg's comment, "The word "Jew" keeps disappearing from the quotes being offered".<br />Best Wishes <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 4px 1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User:AnkhMorpork|<b><font color="#990000">Ankh</font></b>]]'''.'''[[User talk:AnkhMorpork|<font color="#000099">Morpork</font>]]'''</small> 10:48, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::::I do agree to using Merah's exact words, and "avenge Palestinian children" has been cited by [http://news.sky.com/home/world-news/article/16192930 reliable] [http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-europe-17462604 sources] as Merah's exact words. My above suggestion does use the word "Jewish". What is it that the word "Jew" conveys, that the word "Jewish" does not? |
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::::::In any case, I'm willing to compromise on this minor difference if it means faster dispute resolution.'''[[User:Vice regent|VR]]''' <sub>[[User talk:Vice regent|'''<font color="Black">talk</font>''']]</sub> 13:40, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::::You above suggestion contracted Merah's statement and I shall accentuate what was omitted. Merah said he attacked the Jewish school because, "'''The Jews have''' killed our brothers and sisters in Palestine". You are conflating the description of the school as "Jewish", with what "the Jews" did in Palestine, which should both be specified when describing Merah's motivation. Are you agreeable to this change?<br />Best Wishes <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 4px 1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User:AnkhMorpork|<b><font color="#990000">Ankh</font></b>]]'''.'''[[User talk:AnkhMorpork|<font color="#000099">Morpork</font>]]'''</small> 14:05, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. |
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Information from some of the sources that were posted above: |
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Source '''2''' above states, "says he wanted to avenge Palestinian children, according to his remarks through the door to the police who urged him to surrender" |
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Source '''3''' states, "French interior minister Claude Gueant said Merah had said he was fighting to 'avenge Palestinian children.'" |
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Source '''6''' states, "to have killed the Jewish children out of vengeance for the suffering of Palestinian children" |
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Source '''7''' states, "the killings were to avenge the deaths of Palestinian children" |
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*In other words, we shouldn't solely rely on Merah's quote when describing this. |
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*Also, if you look at sources 4 and 5, the quote is in the present tense, not past: "The Jews kill our brothers and sisters in Palestine." [[User:Somedifferentstuff|Somedifferentstuff]] ([[User talk:Somedifferentstuff|talk]]) 09:53, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::A shared characteristic is that all these sources see fit to report Merah's exact comments regarding this issue. Considering other editors' comments, and your stated objection is "we shouldn't '''solely''' rely on Merah's quote", are you agreeable to reporting Merah's exact words?<br />Best Wishes <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 4px 1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User:AnkhMorpork|<b><font color="#990000">Ankh</font></b>]]'''.'''[[User talk:AnkhMorpork|<font color="#000099">Morpork</font>]]'''</small> 10:09, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::This quote is already in the article (See Motivation section). If we decide to put it in the lead as well, then the context needs to be presented. From Source '''#5''' above: "Asked why he had killed four Jewish people – including three children – at a school in Toulouse on March 19, he said: 'The Jews kill our brothers and sisters in Palestine.'" --- I will comment on the stuff regarding Sarkozy later. [[User:Somedifferentstuff|Somedifferentstuff]] ([[User talk:Somedifferentstuff|talk]]) 11:20, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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::::How would you like the context of this exact quote to be presented? I had previously suggested, "Merah said he attacked the Jewish school because, "The Jews have killed our brothers and sisters in Palestine". You seem to prefer the present tense of "kill" used in source 5. This is fine with me; do you consent to, ""Merah said he attacked the Jewish school because, "The Jews kill our brothers and sisters in Palestine"?<br />Best Wishes <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 4px 1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User:AnkhMorpork|<b><font color="#990000">Ankh</font></b>]]'''.'''[[User talk:AnkhMorpork|<font color="#000099">Morpork</font>]]'''</small> 11:55, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:::::So I think there are multiple things Merah said. He said "The Jews have killed our brothers and sisters in Palestine". He also said he attacked the school to "avenge Palestinian children". So, we have two proposals. |
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:::::*Merah said he attacked the Jewish school because "The Jews have killed our brothers and sisters in Palestine." |
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:::::*Merah said he attacked the Jewish school to "avenge Palestinian children". |
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:::::Both mention the Jewishness of Merah's targets, although the first one mentions it twice. I prefer the second. Like I said, I'd be willing to compromise because the difference is relatively minor, and there are more significant issues with the article.'''[[User:Vice regent|VR]]''' <sub>[[User talk:Vice regent|'''<font color="Black">talk</font>''']]</sub> 12:53, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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You correctly state that both mention the Jewishness of Merah's targets. However it is not the case that the first one does so twice, the second mention refers to why Merah did it, a completely different aspect. Thank you for your compromise and I now await for Somedifferentstuff's response to see if he is similarly agreeable.<br />Best Wishes <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 4px 1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">'''[[User:AnkhMorpork|<b><font color="#990000">Ankh</font></b>]]'''.'''[[User talk:AnkhMorpork|<font color="#000099">Morpork</font>]]'''</small> 14:52, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:Putting it in the context of the article: |
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:'''"Merah's motivation for killing the French soldiers was to attack the French Army for its involvement in the war in Afghanistan; his motivation for killing the Jewish civilians was to avenge Palestinian children, having stated, "The Jews kill our brothers and sisters in Palestine."''' |
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:This ties in with the description in the first paragraph ("French soldiers and Jewish civilians") and the Ozar Hatorah school is mentioned in the second paragraph. [[User:Somedifferentstuff|Somedifferentstuff]] ([[User talk:Somedifferentstuff|talk]]) 18:42, 4 May 2012 (UTC) |
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* ''Can you give us a quick explanation of what is going on? What is the issue you are bringing here?'' |
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I’ve been trying to add factual, sourced information to the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League article, but my edits are being reverted without explanation by another editor who hasn’t engaged in discussion despite multiple attempts. I’d like neutral input to resolve whether this edit complies with Wikipedia’s policies. |
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One user keeps deleting the minimum Taliban casualty estimate, linking to a BBC article says no reliable estimate exists. However, the page [[List of Taliban fatality reports in Afghanistan]] lists reliably sourced reports of Taliban casualties. If we add them up, we get a reliable minimum. Multiple users have tried explaining this on the article's talk page and in the edit summaries. However, the user continues to delete it. |
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Should it be deleted, or is it permissible to combine the reports with math to get a minimum? |
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I have tried to resolve the dispute by initiating discussions at the following locations: |
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:* {{user|X Nilloc X}} |
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:* {{user|Nick-D}} |
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[[Talk:2025 Bangladesh Premier League]] |
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* ''Have you informed all the editors mentioned above that you have posted this dispute? (If not, once you have informed them come back and replace the text "Not yet" with "Yes".)'' |
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[[User talk:103.59.179.16]] |
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Despite these efforts, the other editor has not engaged in meaningful dialogue. |
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Yes. |
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I would appreciate input from neutral editors to determine whether my edit complies with Wikipedia's policies on verifiability, reliable sources, and relevance. A third-party perspective can help decide whether the reverted information should remain in the article or if adjustments are necessary to address any concerns. Additionally, guidance on how to handle the lack of engagement from the other editor would be helpful. |
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==== Summary of dispute by 103.59.179.16 ==== |
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Resolving the dispute'''</span> |
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<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> |
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* ''Have you tried to resolve this dispute already? If so, what steps have you taken?'' |
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The editor 103.59.179.16 has reverted my edits to the article multiple times without providing an explanation for the reversions. Despite my attempts to engage in discussions on their user talk page and the article talk page, they have not responded. The disputed content includes factual information about the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League, which is supported by a reliable, verifiable source. The other editor has not presented any concerns regarding the reliability or relevance of the information, nor have they participated in the discussion to clarify their reasons for the reverts. |
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=== 2025 Bangladesh Premier League discussion === |
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Talk page discussion. Its going nowhere - NickD just reasserts his position. |
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* ''How do you think we can help?'' |
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Tell us who is right. Should it be done away with, or can the reports be added up? |
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[[User:X Nilloc X|X Nilloc X]] ([[User talk:X Nilloc X|talk]]) 02:51, 5 May 2012 (UTC) |
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===Http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/War_in_Afghanistan_%282001%E2%80%93present%29, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Taliban_fatality_reports_in_Afghanistan discussion=== |
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Autism
[edit]Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
- Oolong (talk · contribs)
- Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk · contribs)
- Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan (talk · contribs)
- HarmonyA8 (talk · contribs)
- TempusTacet (talk · contribs)
- WhatamIdoing (talk · contribs)
- FactOrOpinion (talk · contribs)
- 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0 (talk · contribs)
- GreenMeansGo (talk · contribs)
- Markworthen (talk · contribs)
- Urselius (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
Autism, in the wider world, is subject to a very deep disagreement about what it is, and what it means for society.
On Wikipedia, this schism (or paradigm shift) is manifesting in an interesting way, because the root of the disagreement is essentially about the degree to which it is correct or helpful to view autism as a medical issue - a disorder - at all.
Wikipedia has quite detailed guidelines for what to do within medicine, or outside of medicine, but it is less clear what to do when the dispute is about whether something is best thought of as a health issue, and/or something else (for example: a different way of thinking and experiencing the world, a disability, an identity etc.) There are many implications for this distinction, including (to some extent) what we include and (strictly) what counts as a reliable source for any particular piece of information. Many scientists have taken various positions on the issue of neurodiversity, as have autistic and other neurodivergent people, practitioners, family members and writers (all of these overlap greatly). The concept has greatly risen in prominence in recent years.
This underlying dispute manifests in many different ways, across many autism-related articles, often giving rise to tensions, and incredulity on more than one side, when people refuse to accept things that apparently seem obvious to the other side. These go back many years, but have reached a relatively heated pitch in recent weeks, with a number of editors making efforts to change the main autism entry in various ways.
A major point of contention is around systemic bias, relating to what I would call testimonial injustice. Who should be listened to, when it comes to what people should be reading about autism? What exactly should we balancing when we weigh viewpoints "in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources"?
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
Talk:Autism Talk:Autism#Autism and disability Talk:Autism#Too little focus on anthropology and social dynamics; too intense focus on medical genetics. Talk:Autism#Extent of Scientific Consensus on Terminology & Reconciling Perspectives Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions] Related: Wikipedia:Dispute_resolution_noticeboard/Archive_228#Applied_behavior_analysis
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
There are tensions and disagreements for which the resolution is not obvious, and neither is the route to a resolution; much of this has run in circles around what different sources do or do not demonstrate, and which Wikipedia guidelines apply, where, and how. There has also some agressive argumentation and editing which seems unhelpful. Outside input on how to work towards a balanced conclusion - conceivably even something like a consensus - could be helpful.
Summary of dispute by Димитрий Улянов Иванов
[edit]The central tension in the dispute revolves around how autism spectrum disorder (ASD) is characterised and the prominence given to this characterisation. Some editors have argued for either reducing, minimising, or entirely removing references to autism as a neurodevelopmental disorder with symptoms, impairments, and varying levels of severity.
This proposed reframing of the article stands in stark contrast to the scientific consensus around the world. As regards the scientific consensus, the validity and relevance of the terminology for ASD has been established by standardised diagnostic criteria (e.g., the World Health Organization's ICD-11 and American Psychological Association's DSM-5), the developers of evidence-based national guidelines (e.g., the UK National Institute for Health & Care Excellence and the European Society for Child & Adolescent Psychiatry), and consensus statements endorsing these guidelines (e.g. IAP Guidelines on Neuro Developmental Disorders). This is further substantiated by other peer-reviewed, secondary sources such as systematic reviews. For further details, see list of quoted references.
Since the article pertains to health where readers may rely on its information to make health-related decisions, restricting these high-quality references can have profound repercussions. Some editors have cited a series of blog posts and advocacy papers as sources supporting the notion that a neurodiversity-only perspective, which decouples ASD from these terms, is more, or at least comparably, appropriate for the article because of its publicity and acceptance amongst a subset of autistic advocates. However, it has been argued that relying on these sources is problematic for several reasons. First, Wikipedia policies and guidelines consider peer-reviewed sources as the most reliable when available; that blog posts are generally discouraged; and that it is the members of a particular scientific discipline who determine what is considered factual or pseudoscience. Second, while some advocacy sources are peer-reviewed, they are usually advocating for a future change that is not currently established. The dispute has since increasingly been over how Wikipedia's policies and guidelines can be correctly interpreted.
In my view, a failure to properly reflect the international scientific classification in this article will contribute to the stigmatisation of ASD and its treatments to millions of people around the world. Your decision may disproportionately mislead the poorest and highest risk of readers due to economic and educational disadvantages. This will increase morbidity, create chaos in families and drive up health care costs.
While considering each reply, I urge reviewers to carefully consider and weigh in the scientific evidence in regards to their recommendations.
Summary of dispute by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan
[edit]Yes, as User:Oolong says, some of the dispute seems to concern epistemic injustice concerns and how to interpret standards of evidence here.
There is also definitely a strong debate going on over whether, per established standards of evidence for wikipedia and for medical claims within wikipedia, there is in fact a consensus of reputable sources (especially recent sources) supporting a traditional medical understanding of autism, or whether per such standards of evidence there appears to be a division between traditional medical and neurodiversity-aligned perspectives on autism. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan (talk • contribs) 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- I would like to reiterate that any drop in evidential standards could lead to the inclusion of debunked and dangerous practices, particularly as at least one editor has revealed themselves to be sympathetic toward facilitated communication - an anti-autistic practice which is often falsely claimed to be supported from a neurodiversity perspective - the inclusion of which has already been litigated on Wikipedia. The medical model being poor does not automatically lead to the populist online autism movement being good. Autistic people deserve the same standards as everyone else. 2A02:C7C:9B04:EA00:F104:371A:5F87:5238 (talk) 08:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't believe anybody is advocating for reduced evidential standards. The question is about which standards apply to what.
- My position on FC is that it is a dubious practice, worryingly open to abuse, but that we need to be wary of over-generalising from the evidence available on it (and that it is worth looking at studies publised since this was last 'litigated on Wikipedia'). Oolong (talk) 11:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by HarmonyA8
[edit]Summary of dispute by TempusTacet
[edit]Summary of dispute by WhatamIdoing
[edit]I think that only the first three editors in this list (Oolong, Димитрий Улянов Иванов, and Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan) are very relevant. However, I'm willing to help (e.g., to provide assistance with the {{MEDRS evaluation}} of sources). WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Oolong, let me expand on Robert's directions below: Please post your desired changes in the #First statements by editors (Autism) section of this page. It will be clearest if you use the "X to Y" style (as if this were the Wikipedia:Edit requests process) and show your exact suggested wording. You can use Template:Text diff if you'd like to contrast your suggestion with the current paragraph.
- (I believe that the other editors are recommending no significant change.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:42, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by FactOrOpinion
[edit]The conflict seems to be very longstanding, and I've only participated in the discussion during the last week, so my understanding of the conflict is very incomplete. A significant piece of it is that there are contrasting approaches to thinking about autism — a medical model and a neurodiversity perspective — and the article currently emphasizes the first of those, which makes it feel unbalanced to others. There are differences of opinion about which views/content are significant (in the NPOV sense) and therefore should be represented in the article; and among the various groups who might seek out the article (e.g., autistic people, family members, allies, different kinds of professionals), some will not find much content, even though there are reliable sources for it. For example, there's little about the lived experiences of people with autism, and some content that one might expect to be touched on with a link to further info (e.g., autistic meltdowns) are totally absent. Arguably, the text is not as accessible to as broad an array of readers as it should be. Some of the conflict seems linked to the role of scholarship. Everyone recognizes that when scholarly sources are available, they're usually the best sources; however, some may think that if content cannot be sourced to a scholarly source, then it shouldn't be included. I recognize that MEDRS guides sources for biomedical info; but some of the relevant info for the article is not biomedical. FactOrOpinion (talk) 04:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am willing to try dispute resolution, but I have no experience with it. I have read the rules introduced by Robert McClenon below, as well as DRN Rule A, and I agree to these rules. It's not clear to me when I should move to the Zeroeth statements by editors section rather than responding here. Once that's clarified, I'll respond to Robert McClenon's questions in the appropriate section.
- Important note: I have no expertise in the subject. I ended up at the Autism talk page because an editor who is autistic posted a concern at the Teahouse about the imbalance in the article and felt that their Talk concerns were not being given due weight, and I hoped that I could be a bit helpful on the talk page. Given the breadth of the disagreement and my lack of expertise, it will be hard for me to suggest specific changes in the article, though I can make more general comments (e.g., comments about whether certain content might be introduced in order to address the needs of diverse readers who'd come to the article seeking information, whether the text is likely to be accessible to such readers, whether I think a given WP:PAG is being correctly interpreted). My guess is that I will not be as active in the discussion as the editors with subject matter knowledge / editors who have a longer history in the dispute, and it may be that my comments will simply be too general to be helpful and that I should therefore bow out. FactOrOpinion (talk) 16:30, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0
[edit]Summary of dispute by GreenMeansGo
[edit]Comment in your own section. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:13, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it. |
Note: Editor is "done with the discussion" and will not be participating. --Oolong (talk) 09:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
Autism discussion
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Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Autism)
[edit]I am ready to assess whether moderated discussion will be useful to improve the article on Autism and to resolve any content disputes. If we do use moderated discussion, this is likely to be a long mediation, and I will probably have to develop a new set of rules. I know that the rules will include;
- Be civil. Civility is required everywhere in Wikipedia, and is essential to resolving content disputes.
- Be concise. Long statements may make the poster feel better, but they do not always convey useful information. Remember that an editor who sees a wall of text is likely to ignore it.
- Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. The moderator will ask the questions. (I will be the moderator.) Address your answers to the moderator and to the community.
- Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so discuss the article or proposed changes to the article.
- Do not make any reports to conduct forums while moderated discussion is in progress. One objective of moderated discussion is to avoid discussions of conduct and to resolve content issues first, because often the conduct issues resolve themselves when the content dispute is resolved.
In the meantime, my first question for each editor is whether you would like to try moderated discussion (mediation) in order to resolve content disputes. If you answer yes, I have a two-part question and another question. The purpose of moderated discussion, or of any dispute resolution, is to improve an article. I will split my usual introductory question into two parts. First, please state what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. We can go into more detail about those changes later. Third, please provide links to any previous discussions of content or conduct issues about the topic that have not been resolved. I just want a list of all of the previous discussions. Do not comment on them, because I am trying to focus the discussion by asking my usual introductory question (in a two-part form).
I don't yet know whether DRN is the right forum to resolve disputes about autism, but I will try to make that assessment based on the answers to the above questions. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:21, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, I would like to try moderated discussion. Are you looking for responses as replies here, or in the section below (or...)?
- I've never participated in a dispute resolution procedure here (aside from the one linked above which was closed because I didn't get a notification, and didn't know to refresh the page daily, and which I didn't know how to reopen). Also, like many of the parties to this dispute, I am autistic. Explicit instructions will therefore be welcome! Thank you.
- Answering your other questions will be complicated, because what really needs to happen involves rather extensive changes. Even small changes have persistently been blocked by parties taking one particular position on this, so moving on to questions around the bigger changes required has repeatedly been stymied.
- I feel that I should flag up two essays that I've written, provoked by past discussions around all of this, to clarify my position - I hope you agree that this is appropriate here. The first is Autism and Scientism (published in the Middletown Centre for Autism Research Journal) and Autism, Wikipedia and Epistemic Injustice, posted here and published in Thinking Person's Guide to Autism. You are under no obligation to read these or take them into consideration, but they might help you to understand some of the issues at stake if you do so. Oolong (talk) 11:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
First statement by possible moderator (Autism)
[edit]I asked for specific statements of how the lede section should be revised, and what changes should be made to the body of the article. So far, the statements have not been specific. Please read Be Specific at DRN. I understand that one of the main issues is that the current article, beginning with the lede section, is focused on the medical model of autism, and that there is at least one other perspective on autism that is not medical. If sources that meet the ordinary standard of reliability describe other perspectives and provide evidence that these perspectives are supported by scholarly non-medical sources, then the lede section should describe all perspectives. Discussion of the non-medical perspectives should be supported by reliable sources, and discussion of the medical perspective and any aspects of the medical perspective should be supported by medically reliable sources. That is, discussion of non-medical perspectives is not required to meet the medically reliable standard of sourcing, but the sources must meet the ordinary standard of reliable sourcing.
If an editor thinks that the article should be revised to reflect multiple viewpoints, I will ask that they provide a revised draft of the lede section. We can wait to work on the sections of the body of the article until we have settled on the lede section, and then the body of the article should follow the lede. We need to start with something specific, in this case, a revised lede section. I will also repeat my request that each editor provide links to all of the previous discussions of how to revise this article, so as to provide a better overview of the issues.
I would prefer that statements go in the sections for the purpose, such as First statements by editors (Autism), because that is what they are for. However, I will not enforce rules about where to make statements, as long as basic talk page guidelines are met.
After I see at least one specific proposed revision to the article, preferably a draft rewrite of the lede section, I will know better whether DRN is a place to discuss the issues. Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:05, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Robert McClenon! That helps clarify matters, including the question of evidence required for non-medical perspectives, which has been a source of much contention over the years.
- @Димитрий Улянов Иванов has has said that he won't "have the time to consistently respond within 48 hours. Hopefully that is not a strict requirement" - perhaps it would be helpful if you could address the implied question there?
- I will see if I can draft more detailed proposals tomorrow in the appropriate section; as I said earlier, part of the problem has been that the clash of viewpoints (with a supporting clash of readings of Wikipedia guidelines) has caused so much friction that it has been difficult to move on to the details of the rather large (and very overdue) project of rewriting and restructuring most of the page! I do at least have some fairly solid ideas about the lead, but of course, ideally the lead should reflect the rest of the article... Oolong (talk) 19:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Oolong@Robert McClenon I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample):
- " Autism, Autism spectrum condition (ASC), Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or Autism Spectrum (AS) is a set of neurodevelopmental conditions, which have been described variously as a disorder, a condition, a valid human neurotype, and a socio-cultural misfit. No two Autistic persons are same, differing in their abilities and inabilities in multiple dimensions, and usually show a spikey or highly uneven cognitive profile. Many Autistics are capable of reading, writing, speaking clearly, or taking part in logical arguments, while having unnoticed deficits in working memory, information filtering, gross or fine motor skills issues, executive functions, sensory issues, trouble making eye contact or reading facial expressions etc. On the other hand, in some Autistics the deficits or differences can be immediately visible. In such cases the strengths might be unnoticed or ignored. Although an Autistic person may fall somewhere in between- and described better through a multidimensional approach than a unidirectional or linear "mild" vs "severe" categorization. Autistics often use repeatitive behaviour as a means of coping mechanism, and often requires structure and predictability to cope up. Autism is sometimes classified as a hidden disability or an invisible disability, as its features could be not immediately noticeable, and in some cases highly masked or camoufledged. Autistics may differ in the amount and nature of support they need in order to thrive and excell. Autism has close overlaps with specific learning disabilities (Such as dyslexia or dyscalculia), Personality disorders (Schizoid personality disorder, Pathological Demand avoidance), etc. that makes it often hard to differentiate from other psychological diagnoses. Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments. "
- @Oolong@Robert McClenon I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample):
- 2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 01:41, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
First statements by editors (Autism)
[edit]1. what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same
[edit]The overall framing of the lead is very much within the medical model of autism, taking for granted various things which are hotly contested in the wider world - particularly among autistic people, but also among researchers in this field.
Let's take the opening paragraph.
Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or simply autism, is a neurodevelopmental disorder characterized by repetitive, restricted, and inflexible patterns of behavior, interests, and activities; deficits in social communication and social interaction; and the presence of high or low sensory sensitivity. A formal diagnosis requires that symptoms cause significant impairment in multiple functional domains, in addition to being atypical or excessive for the person's age and sociocultural context.
I've highlighted the particularly contentious terms! Essentially, this paragraph takes the mainstream psychiatric perspective on all of these things for granted.
Here's one alternative version, which I contributed to in 2022, with instances of more neutral terms highlighted:
The autism spectrum, often referred to as just autism or in the context of a professional diagnosis autism spectrum disorder (ASD) or autism spectrum condition (ASC), is a neurodevelopmental condition (or conditions) characterized by difficulties in social interaction, verbal and nonverbal communication, and the presence of repetitive behavior and restricted interests. Other common signs include unusual responses to sensory stimuli.
Note that for the most part these terms convey the same information, without assuming a particular interpretation is the correct one. Condition is often thought to be a slightly less value-laden equivalent of disorder,[1] although arguably the difference is marginal. The hypothesis that autistic people have inherent deficits in social communication and interaction has been disproven quite convincingly (see double empathy problem); the difficulties, however, certainly remain in many contexts, and are in practice all that diagnosticians can go by on this front. There are all sorts of issues with applying the term symptom to the ways that autism manifests, starting with the assumption that they're problems, as opposed to e.g. coping strategies or objectively neutral characteristics.
I recently edited the third paragraph simply to accurately reflect views associated with neurodiversity, correcting text based on blatant misunderstandings; variations on these edits have now been reverted at least four times, including after they have been restored by other editors. These reversions have not been accompanied by sensible edit summaries, instead claiming for example that they are ideologically motivated, and that my references (an academic textbook and a peer-reviewed paper researching community views) are somehow inadequate. I am aware that these reversions are starting to suggest that administrators' noticeboard for incidents may be a more appropriate venue for resolving these issues.
The final paragraph of the lead is dubious, and largely reads like an advertisement for applied behavior analysis
Above entered by Oolong
Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change.
[edit]Classification goes into enormous technical detail, and seems to overlap heavily with both diagnosis and signs and symptoms.
We need to cover common aspects of autistic experience somewhere (see Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions for some of these; there are many more) and it is not clear if they can fit in the above section, although they may be at least as important, just because they are not adequately covered by the current editions of diagnostic manuals.
Possible causes should obviously be no more than 2-3 paragraphs at most, in line with summary style. Likewise epidemiology.
Management is an awful framing; autism is a fundamental difference in a person, not an illness to be managed. I note that this heading is absent from the gender dysphoria entry. Perhaps it would be constructive to replace this section with something around access: access to healthcare, education, workplaces and so on.
Prognosis probably doesn't warrant a section at all: it's lifelong. If it's going to be there, it needs to be completely rewritten.
History and especially society and culture probably deserve to be significantly higher up in the article.
Re your third question, I provided various links in my original submission - are those specific enough?
--Oolong (talk) 17:40, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
Second statement by moderator (Autism)
[edit]My explanation about source reliability is my own interpretation, based on the principle to use common sense. Other editors may disagree, but it is the rule that will be in place while I am moderating this discussion.
The unregistered editor is strongly advised to register an account if they wish to take part in this mediation. Their IPv6 address has changed between the time that this discussion was created and the time of this post. It is both difficult to remember IPv6 addresses and difficult to communicate with shifting IPv6 (or IPv4) addresses.
The requested rewrite has no references. It also includes a statement of opinion that is not a summary of existing knowledge and is therefore not encyclopedic. On the other hand, the first sentence of the proposed rewrite is, in my opinion, a good starting point for a rewrite of the lede. The later sentences about differences between different autistic persons are, in my opinion, a good idea to be included somewhere in the article, but not necessarily in the lede paragraph.
In the above paragraph, I am taking a more active role in trying to lead this discussion than I usually take. If the participants agree with my taking an active role, I will write a new set of rules providing for a semi-active role by the moderator. If the participants would prefer that I be less active, I will step back somewhat, and will implement DRN Rule A.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 05:19, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- So I have issues with the proposed lede change, with interpreting the scientific consensus classification as a "medical model", among other issues. I'd like to clarify these per my involvement here, but I need time to formulate a reply. I saw an article stating that editors must reply within 48 hours but I cannot consistently do this with my time constraints. May I ask if this will be a significant issue and if it's a requirement can it not be so strict under the circumstances? Thanks. Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk) 16:32, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- The provision about responding within 48 hours is in DRN Rule A, which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? Robert McClenon (talk) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- 72 hours should be fine in general. I plan to respond quicker than that if I can of course, my only concern is that I occasionally am not free to reply within 72 hours as sometimes I won't be able to until the weekend. Apologies if this is causing some issues. I'm much more free now with Christmas over so I think it'll mainly become an issue if our discussions extend much into January. Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk) 18:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- The provision about responding within 48 hours is in DRN Rule A, which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? Robert McClenon (talk) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- "The requested rewrite ... includes a statement of opinion." - Which part is a statement of opinion? I am not disputing your assessment; rather, I want to make sure I understand your point correctly. Thanks! - Mark D Worthen PsyD (talk) [he/him] 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
Second statements by editors (Autism)
[edit]Third statement by moderator (Autism)
[edit]Please read DRN Rule G. This is the new set of rules for this mediation.
Please sign all of your posts. It is more important to sign your posts than to put them in the correct sections, although both are a good idea. If you forget to sign your post, the rest of us may not know who posted it.
In the proposed lede by the unregistered editor, the last sentence reads:
Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments.
That is true but not encyclopedic, because it does not summarize existing knowledge. It states a moral principle that governs development of the encyclopedia, and should also apply in the larger society. It is also not in a form that is verifiable because it is not attributed to anyone but in wikivoice.
I would still like a list from each editor of links to all the previous discussions about the issues that are being discussed here. I know that some of the discussions have been mentioned in various statements, but I would like each editor to provide a list, in one place, without commenting on the discussions, and without concerning about whether another editor is also listing the same discussions. I just want this for background material.
Are there any other questions at this time? Robert McClenon (talk)
Third statements by editors (Autism)
[edit]I am making a rather late entry into this process and am not sure if putting this here is correct. There are a number of aspects that I would like to comment on. I think that anyone with any knowledge of autism will have noticed that autism is not merely, or even primarily, a medical condition, even though it is diagnosable by clinicians and has diagnostic criteria. It has sociological, disability, cultural and identity dimensions. I have had two brain-involving medical conditions, autism and stroke. I have an identity as an autistic person, but no identity as a stroke survivor. Both are medical conditions, diagnosable by clinicians, but only autism has the additional, extra-clinical, dimensions I have described. The Wikipedia article has suffered, in my opinion, from too great an emphasis on the medical aspects of autism, to the extent that some editors have excluded the other aspects of autism from prominent parts of the article, such as the lead, or treated them as though they were unsupported by reputable references, or were 'fringe' in nature. Furthermore, too literal use of pathologising phraseology, gleaned uncritically from diagnostic manuals, introduces wording to the article which is unnecessarily offensive to autistic people, when less offensive wording, while retaining the original meaning, could have been employed. Efforts to moderate the offensive wording have been repeatedly reverted.
I have noticed that deafness, a condition which, like autism has cultural, communication, disability and identity dimensions, is treated in a way within Wikipedia (Deafness) that gives equal treatment to the purely medical and the sociological aspects. Though the deafness article is very much shorter than the one on autism, it struck me that the treatment of the subject might act as a useful paradigm. Urselius (talk) 13:59, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
List of discussions from WhatamIdoing
[edit]I think the present dispute started about two months ago:
- Talk:Autism/Archive 7#Should autism continue to be described as a neurodevelopmental disorder characterised by symptoms, impairment and severity?
- Talk:Autism/Archive 7#Risk?
- Wikipedia:Categories for discussion/Log/2024 November 14#Identity-first language for autistic people categories
- Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Medicine-related articles#Disability terms
- Talk:Autism#Remove "Disorder" and add "Coocuring Conditions "
- Talk:Autism#Autism, Wikipedia and epistemic injustice
- Talk:Autism#Signs and symptoms --> Common characteristics
- Talk:Autism#Brevity
- Talk:Autism#Extent of Scientific Consensus on Terminology & Reconciling Perspectives
- Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions
- Talk:Autism#Too little focus on anthropology and social dynamics; too intense focus on medical genetics.
- Talk:Autism#Autism as a Neurodevelopmental Disorder - Response to RIT RAJARSHI et al. (Note: one tangent in here was due to some people not being familiar with the Latin phrase et al., which means "and others" [i.e., other people]. It is a common way to refer to multiple authors in scientific journals, especially in journals using Vancouver style [the {{vcite}} citation templates on wiki].)
- Talk:Autism#Wanting a very particular source
- Talk:Autism#Autism and disability
- Talk:Autism#Response to "Impairments" by Oolong
- Talk:Autism#Dispute Resolution Request
- Talk:Autism#Issues in recent editing by Oolong
As far as I know, most of the disputed edits and discussions are at this one article. WhatamIdoing (talk) 07:22, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
Sri Lankan Vellalar
[edit]Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
Dispute overview
A user repeatedly adds misleading edits to the caste article. In the section on mythological origins, they introduced misleading edits. If the source states "A," they modify it to say "B" to support their narrative. This constitutes WP:OR and WP:SYNTH. The sources should specifically discuss the origin of the Sri Lankan Vellalar, but they fail to do so, instead recounting tales of other caste groups. There are other sources discussing the mythological origin of Vellalars, but he dismisses them and continues adding misleading edits with synthesized sources.
Additionally, the user seems to be using AI to counter my responses. They don't fully understand my points and keep repeating the same arguments in different contexts.
We also sought a third opinion, but that editor doesn't appear to be active on the talk page. He has no idea on south asian group articles and its complex editing rules.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
Talk:Sri_Lankan_Vellalar
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
This noticeboard might have more professional editors who are knowledgeable about South Asian groups and communities. I believe they can resolve the dispute by cross-verifying our points.
Summary of dispute by Luigi Boy
[edit]First and foremost, I would like to thank user Kautilyapundit for initiating this dispute. This discussion will undoubtedly help clarify and resolve the concerns at hand. From my perspective, there are two distinct issues that need to be addressed:
- Terminology differences
- The inclusion of the mythology section
Terminology Differences
The root of the terminology issue stems from my edit, where I restored information that had been removed without adequate justification or proof that the cited sources were WP:FRINGE.
To provide clarity, I included a sentence explaining the transliteration of the term Vellalar. Specifically:
- Tamil: வேளாளர், romanized: Vēḷāḷar refers to the context found in ancient Tamil literature like the Akananuru.
- Tamil: வெள்ளாளர், romanized: Veḷḷāḷar represents the caste name in contemporary usage. This distinction adds context about the societies mentioned in classical Tamil texts and the evolution of terminology over time. The confusion arises mainly because the parent caste Vellalar often uses this term Tamil: வேளாளர், romanized: Vēḷāḷar, whereas modern usage differentiates the two terms.
Inclusion of the Mythology Section
The second issue is the inclusion (or exclusion) of the mythology section. The claim that I oppose adding more mythology is a misrepresentation of my stance. I've never dismissed other mythological references. If additional, well-sourced myths exist, I encourage to include those as well.
The argument for removing the existing mythology section hinges on the fact that the parent article does not discuss this topic. However, this overlooks the fact that the mythology in question is specific to Sri Lankan Vellalars and does not pertain to the parent caste. Removing the section entirely would erase relevant, sourced context unique to this sub-caste.
Third-Party Opinion
Fortunately, user AirshipJungleman29 has provided a third opinion on this matter. They rightly suggested that if the sources in question are deemed WP:FRINGE or not WP:RS, the concerned user should raise the issue on WP:RSN. To date, no such dispute has been initiated, leaving the claim unsubstantiated.
I hope this explanation addresses the concerns raised by Kautilyapundit and provides clarity on the rationale behind my edits. I am open to further discussions and look forward to collaborative resolutions to improve the article.
Sri Lankan Vellalar discussion
[edit]Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Sri Lankan Vellalar)
[edit]I am ready to act as the moderator if the participants want moderated discussion and if this does not involve a question about the reliability of sources. Please read DRN Rule D and the general sanctions concerning South Asian social groups. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article. I am asking each editor to state, first, whether they agree to DRN Rule D and that discussions of South Asian social groupings are subject to special rules. Each editor is then asked, second, what changes they want to make to the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Each editor is asked, third, whether there are issues about the reliability of sources. If I determine that there are issues about the reliability of sources, or if an editor states that there are such issues, I will close this discussion until that question is resolved at the Reliable Source Noticeboard.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 05:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your time, Robert. I greatly appreciate it. Let me summarize my points simply and clearly. I value your time.
- 1. Mythological Origin and Its Sources in the Sri Lankan Vellalar Article
- === Mythological origin === (sri lankan vellalar)
- According to myth, the Vellalar and Pallar are descendants of two farmer brothers.[2] The property of the younger brother Pallan was destroyed by a storm. The older brother Vellalan gave Pallan shelter.[3][4] After the death of Vellalan, his wife became the owner of the property and forced Pallan and his family to become agricultural laborers for her.[5]
- The provided Source 1 (Vincentnathan, p. 385) states:
- "myth for the Pallars of Sri Lanka , another Tamil Harijan caste ranked higher than Paraiyar , in which two farmer brothers became ancestors of the Pallar and Vellalar castes : The elder brother's land , tools , cattle , and crops were ..."
- This line is from David Kenneth's The New Wind: Changing Identities in South Asia (p. 189).
- "5.9: PALLAR [AGRICULTURAL LABORER] ORIGIN MYTH: Pallan and Vellälan, both farmers, were annan and tampi [older and youngerbrother]. Pallan had many children; Vellälan had four children.There was a horrible thunderstorm and a cyclone which destroyedPallan s land, tools, cattle, and crop but left Vellälan s possessionsintact. Pallan had no food and had to ask his younger brother for something to eat." [6]
- The same book discusses the myth of the Vellalar. (p. 185)
- "5.2:VELLALAR [LANDOWNER] ORIGIN MYTH: Although many Vellälar, the dominant landowning caste, were asked to relate their origin myth, I was unable to elicit anything more explicit than the myth recorded by Arunachalam (1964):
- A branch of Vellälas the old ruling caste of Tamil land claimed to have received grain and instruction on its cultivation from the Earth Goddess Parvathi hence Velläjas were called pillais [children of Parvathi]; kings also drove the plow. Vellälars would elaborate by saying that they were both the creators of life (in that they created food) and the rulers of the land."
- The provided source 2 (The Sri Lankan Tamils: ethnicity and identity, p. 149)
- "From the Vellalar point of view, the stigma of Nalavar and Pallar rank, coupled with the history of these castes as recent immigrants from south India, denies that they have any real claim to membership in the Tamil community. In the early 1970s, some Vellalars expressly denied that Nalavars and Pallars were Tamils; and in tum, members of these two castes in the early 1970's still sometimes referred to Vellalars as "Tamils," thus driving home the social and cultural gulf that divided them from Vellalars. The Nalavars' and Pallars' recent historical origins in Dutch-sponsored immigrations from south India, and their putativelydarl<er skin, also seive to deepen the Vellalar sense that the Minority Tamils are a people apart from the mainstream Tamil community.
- It should be noted that Minority Tamils do not always accept the view that they are non-Tamilians. The Pallars of Jaffna expressly conceive themselves to be descended from one of two Vellalar brothers; after the older brother's death, the widow--a "bad woman," according to the tale-made the younger one into a landless slave."
- Hence it is the tale of pallars.
- 2. Contradictions Between the Mythological Origin and the Real Origin of the Sri Lankan Pallars
- === Mythological origin === (Sri Lankan Pallar)
- The Pallars of Jaffna expressly conceive themselves to be descended from one of two Vellalar brothers.[7] The property of the younger brother Pallan was destroyed by a storm. The older brother Vellalan gave Pallan shelter.[8][9] After the death of Vellalan, his wife became the owner of the property and forced Pallan and his family to become agricultural laborers for her.[10]
- === Early period ===
- The Sri Lankan Pallar and the Pallars of Tamil Nadu share a common origin. The Pallars traditionally inhabited the fertile Sangam landscape known as Marutham. They were earlier known as Kadaisiyar, tenant farmers on the land of the Uzhavar or Kalamar.[11] The women of this community were noted in Sangam literature for their expertise in paddy transplantation.[12]
- === Medieval period ===
- The Pallars migrated to Sri Lanka as serfs accompanied by their chiefs, on whose land they toiled.[13] They migrated in large numbers mainly from Chola country in search of fertile land. Pallars settling in the Jaffna Peninsula, which was rich in Palmyra palm, joined others there involved in toddy tapping.[14] Some Pallars were involved in other occupations, such as fishers, servants in forts, and harvesters of Indigo plant roots, contributing to the famous dye industry of Jaffna Kingdom.
- These are copied from the articles. Upon reading and verification, it is evident that the Pallars originated from the Pallar of Tamil Nadu. The same applies to the Vellalar. Both groups migrated to Sri Lanka from Tamil Nadu and are distinct.
- 3. Conclusion
- The user made a preferred edit to suit their narrative. Additionally, they misinterpreted the source, which falls under WP:OR. The myth of the Pallars cannot be attributed to the Vellalars, especially when the same source specifically discusses the Vellalars. The mythological origin section is clearly outdated and invalid, as it contradicts well-documented reality. I refer to WP:RSUW.
- If anyone wants to add the mythological origin to the "Sri Lankan Vellalar" article, it should specifically address the Vellalars. As per WP:RSUW, the section is unnecessary.
Kautilyapundit (talk) 05:53, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statements by editors (Sri Lankan Vellalar)
[edit]Old Government House, Parramatta
[edit]Closed for two reasons. First, the other editor hasn't replied. Second, it's unclear what the dispute even is; it appears to me that it is about large portion of the article being copied from a compatibly licensed source. As long as the appropriate attribution is given, it is legal. The guidelines that the filing editor has mentioned, which disallow copying large portions, are talking about copyrighted material where we don't have explicit permission to use them so we rely on fair use. However, this isn't the case here, as the material is CC-BY licensed. I am not aware of any guideline that forbids articles from being primarily copied from a compatibly licensed source, instead, Wikipedia:Plagiarism#Where_to_place_attribution mentions: For sections or whole articles, add a section-wide or article-wide attribution template, so I believe there is no issue here. If there is any other issue, follow WP:BRD. Thanks. Kovcszaln6 (talk) 12:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Imran Khan
[edit]Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
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- SheriffIsInTown (talk · contribs)
- WikiEnthusiast1001 (talk · contribs)
- Veldsenk (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
The content removed in this diff had been part of the article for over six years. It was initially removed by an editor citing WP:BLPGOSSIP and WP:GRAPEVINE. Although I restored it, another editor subsequently removed it again. For context, Reham Khan is a former wife of the subject. After their marriage ended, she authored an autobiography titled Reham Khan (memoir), published by HarperCollins. The author, the book, and the publisher are all notable, with HarperCollins being recognised as “one of the ‘Big Five’ English-language publishers,” as noted in its Wikipedia article. The removed content was also supported by five other secondary sources. Given the notability of the author, the book, and the publisher, as well as the reliable reporting, the content merits inclusion in the article. The removal occurred without consensus, despite the content being part of the article for years. The material only reported Reham Khan’s allegations, including claims that Imran Khan shared certain details with her. As Wikipedia editors, we are not arbiters of truth but rely on reliable sources. Additionally, Wikipedia is not censored.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
I am seeking the restoration of the removed content, along with some expansion to include her allegations regarding Imran Khan’s drug use and same-sex tendencies, all of which are supported by her book and other secondary sources.
Summary of dispute by WikiEnthusiast1001
[edit]Violates several key Wikipedia policies especially Wikipedia:BLP, which states "Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid: it is not Wikipedia's job to be sensationalist, or to be the primary vehicle for the spread of titillating claims about people's lives."
While the book was published by a reputable publisher, Reham Khan's credibility is highly questionable—she has been sued for libel and defamation by one of her former husband's aides. As a result, she lost the case and publicly apologized. This clearly casts doubt on the reliability of her claims. Also, the book was released just 13 days before the 2018 Pakistani general election,[15] suggesting a potential motive for bias.
The allegations have only been repeated by other sources after she brought them up, and no independent or credible evidence has ever corroborated them. This fails Wikipedia's reliable sources policy, which requires independently verifiable claims, not merely echoes of the original source. It also violates NPOV and undue weight policies by giving excessive prominence to a single, uncorroborated perspective. WikiEnthusiast1001 (talk) 10:09, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by Veldsenk
[edit]Imran Khan discussion
[edit]- Volunteer Note - Is this dispute at least partly about the reliability of sources? If so, the source reliability issue should be addressed at the Reliable Source Noticeboard first, before any other content issues are discussed. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:53, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Volunteer Note - Is this dispute about the appropriateness of material in a biography of a living person? If so, it might be answered more quickly at the biographies of living persons noticeboard. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:53, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The matter concerns a BLP, but I’ve observed requests on that noticeboard being archived without a response. Since we are already on this noticeboard, with a request filed and another editor having responded, it seems more practical to build on that progress and resolve the issue here, rather than moving to multiple noticeboards. Sheriff | ☎ 911 | 04:24, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don’t think anyone is disputing the reliability of the sources. Sheriff | ☎ 911 | 04:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
2025 Bangladesh Premier League
[edit]Closed as not an issue for which DRN can be helpful. My advice is similar to that given by User:Doniago in declining your Third Opinion request. Third Opinion and DRN are both for good-faith disagreements between editors who discuss their disagreements. The problem here is an unregistered editor who reverts and does not discuss. My advice concerning unregistered editors (IP addresses) who do not discuss normally is to request semi-protection at Requests for Page Protection, and this is such a case. After the article is semi-protected, you can make your edits, and the article will be read-only for the unregistered editor. This may be an unregistered mobile user who never uses talk pages because they don't know about talk pages and don't know that they have a talk page. This is a problem that we sometimes encounter with mobile users, both registered and unregistered. In any case, I suggest requesting semi-protection. In your request, state that the IP editor reverts but does not discuss. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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(help) - ^ Vincentnathan, Lynn (1987). Harijan Subculture and Self-esteem Management in a South Indian Community. University of Wisconsin--Madison. p. 385.
- ^ Manogaran, Chelvadurai; Pfaffenberger, Bryan (1994). The Sri Lankan Tamils: ethnicity and identity. Westview Press. pp. 35, 43, 147, 149. ISBN 9780813388458.
- ^ David, Kenneth (1977-01-01). The New Wind: Changing Identities in South Asia. Walter de Gruyter. pp. 189, 190, 204. ISBN 9783110807752.
- ^ Contributions to Indian Sociology. University of Oxford: Mouton. 1993. p. 69.
- ^ David, K. (2011). The New Wind: Changing Identities in South Asia. World Anthropology. De Gruyter. p. 189. ISBN 978-3-11-080775-2. Retrieved 2024-12-29.
- ^ Vincentnathan, Lynn (1987). Harijan Subculture and Self-esteem Management in a South Indian Community. University of Wisconsin--Madison. p. 385.
- ^ Manogaran, Chelvadurai; Pfaffenberger, Bryan (1994). The Sri Lankan Tamils: ethnicity and identity. Westview Press. pp. 35, 43, 147, 149. ISBN 9780813388458.
- ^ David, Kenneth (1977-01-01). The New Wind: Changing Identities in South Asia. Walter de Gruyter. pp. 189, 190, 204. ISBN 9783110807752.
- ^ Contributions to Indian Sociology. University of Oxford: Mouton. 1993. p. 69.
- ^ University, Vijaya Ramaswamy, Jawaharlal Nehru (2017-08-25). Historical Dictionary of the Tamils. Rowman & Littlefield. p. 371. ISBN 978-1-5381-0686-0.
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- ^ Arasaratnam, Sinnappah (1996-01-01). Ceylon and the Dutch, 1600-1800: External Influences and Internal Change in Early Modern Sri Lanka. n Variorum. p. 381. ISBN 978-0-86078-579-8.
- ^ Raghavan, M. D. (1971). Tamil culture in Ceylon: a general introduction. Kalai Nilayam. pp. 104, 184, 193.
- ^ "Reham Khan's book 'available in paperback in UK'". The News (Pakistan). 12 July 2018.
Reham's book, published online today, has triggered debate on social media with many saying that she is doing all this on the behest of Pakistan Muslim League Nawaz to tarnish the image of Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf Chairman Imran Khan just before the July 25 polls.