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Overview

The "Mendocino War" was a violent conflict from July 1859 to January 18,1860 between white settlers and local natives (mainly Yuki tribes) in Mendocino County, California. It was caused by settler intrusion on native lands and subsequent native retaliation, resulting in the deaths of hundreds of natives.In 1859, a band of locally sponsored rangers led by Walter S. Jarboe, called the Eel River Rangers, raided the countryside in an effort to remove natives from settler territory and move them onto the Nome Cult Farm, an area near the Mendocino Indian Reservation. By the time the Eel River Rangers were disbanded in 1860, Jarboe and his men had killed 283 warriors, captured 292, killed countless women and children, and only suffered 5 casualties themselves in just 23 engagements. The bill to the state for the rangers’ services amounted to $11,143.43. Scholars, however, claim that the damage to the area and natives in particular was even higher than reported, especially given the vast number of raiding parties formed outside of the Eel River Rangers. Frustrated with the inadequacy of federal protection, settlers formed their own raiding parties against the natives, joining Jarboe in his mission to rid Round Valley of its native population. Those that survived were moved to the Nome Cult Farm, where they experienced hardships typical of the reservation system of the day. After the conflict, contemporaries claimed that the conflict was more of a slaughter than a war, and later historians have labeled it a genocide.

Background

Round Valley, located in northeastern Mendocino County in Northern California, was home to various Native American tribes. The most populous of these local tribes were the Yuki, whose territory was roughly 1,100 square miles.^[1] The Yuki were not one political people; rather, they were comprised of several autonomous groups that shared both language and culture, with each community having its own leadership.^[2] In 1853, California started its Indian Reservation System, which was headed by Thomas J. Henley (Superintendent of Indian Affairs), and by 1854 Round Valley was discovered by white settlers.^[3] Frank Asbill, the first white man to see the territory, estimated that there were about 20,000 natives in the area at the time. Scholars now believe this number is a little high, but by 1856, there were 12,000 Native Americans in Round Valley.^[4] Although a few families moved into native territory, many of the settlers were hunters, fugitives, drifters, and the like. In general, they were people who lived off of the land, who traveled to the area for its resources.^[5] In the same year, Thomas Henley sent Simmon Pena Storms to start the Nome Cult Farm.^[6] Originally meant to be a resting point for natives and people traveling to the Mendocino Reservation, the Nome Cult Farm grew to become a reservation of its own, occupying 5,000 acres of northern Round Valley. This division of the 20,000 acre territory left over 15,000 acres for white settlement.^[7]

Members of the Yuki tribe on the Nome Cult Farm (c.1858)

Seeds of Conflict

Despite the amount of land set aside for white settlement, the government had trouble stopping newcomers from settling all over the valley, including on the Nome Cult Farm and Mendocino Reservation.^[8] As settlers moved into what was designated native territory, it became hard for the natives to survive. Those that lived on the Nome Cult Farm lived a life of hardship. In a type of indentured servitude, the natives raised their crops but reaped little of the actual benefits.^[9] Natives were not protected but were subject to brutal treatment that included assaults, rape, murder, theft of their property, disease, and starvation.^[10] Many white settlers who encroached on native territory engaged in kidnapping, stealing Native women and children and subjugating them to servitude or sexual abuse.^[11] Natives at the Nome Cult Farm were overworked, and could even be killed if their work was not up to the standards of the reservation.^[12] White settlers continued to exploit native land, with many families fencing in thousands of acres each.^[13] They removed fences from the Nome Cult Farm and allowed their herds to graze on and through native land, some of which was already filled with crops.^[14] The California Reservation System, which was subject to corruption, fraud and misuse of federal funds, provided little recourse.^[15] As more settlers encroached on native land and resources, native food sources dried up on and around the reservations.

Escalation

Since ranching methods at the time were not very advanced (barbed wire had not been invented), the settlers had trouble keeping their livestock on their land. Many tried to train their animals to stay in a certain area, but this was not always effective. Livestock often wandered, and the local terrain made matters worse. The territory was new, unfamiliar, and full of hazardous cliffs and predators, and many cattle and horses wandered off and died of natural causes.^[16] However, the settlers blamed the natives for any animal that went missing, believing that they were the targets of “Indian Depredations”, holding public meetings to stir up animosity towards the natives.^[17] In retaliation, they continued their assaults on native land and resources. With no police force at hand, the reservation was powerless to stop local theft of native property or abductions of native people.^[18] Locals like Dryden Lacock even stated that settlers, including himself, were engaging in small raiding parties that killed “50-60 Indians a trip”.^[19] Finally, on the brink of starvation and left with almost no options, the natives began to retaliate. In 1857 a Yuki shot a man named William Mantle while trying to cross the Eel River, and in 1858 a white man named John McDaniel was murdered.^[20] Both had been famous for crimes committed against Native Americans, and reports from the U.S. Army claim that the natives were provoked in both instances.^[21]

State and Federal Involvement

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Seal of the natives of Round Valley

As tensions rose and natives began retaliating for crimes committed against them, the settlers petitioned the U.S. Army for aid. In 1859 the 6th U.S. infantry led by Major Edward Johnson was called to Round Valley.^[22] Major Johnson sent Lieutenant Edward Dillon ahead with 17 men to scout the area and assess the situation. Lieutenant Dillon reported back that the settlers misrepresented the situation. Instead of settlers falling prey to natives, the settlers had in fact already killed hundreds of natives, whose hostile actions had been taken out of revenge or in an effort to survive. The problem, he reported, went all the way up the chain to Supt. Henley, who had been involved in organizing many of these raiding parties.^[23] In fact, Supt. Henley was in league with Judge Serranus C. Hastings (a former Iowa Supreme Court Justice), who helped him design plans for the removal of natives from the local territory. As part of their plan, they launched raiding parties and held town-hall style public gatherings where settlers aired their grievances, leading to increased racial prejudice and hatred towards the natives.^[24] Judge Hastings was also involved in real estate and livestock trade, and in one instance, the natives stole Judge Hastings’s $2,000 stallion in retaliation for the beatings they received at the hands of Judge Hastings’s ranch manager, H.L. Hall.^[25] Hall had been involved in many brutal assaults on natives. He complained to Lieutenant Dillon that the natives were stealing white supplies. Dillon urged Hall to let him handle the situation, but Hall ignored the command and took his own men raiding. By March 23, 1859, Hall and his men had killed about 240 natives.^[26] Dillon reported that Hall did not distinguish between guilty natives or innocent ones, and that his murders of even women and children were unprovoked.^[27] In fact, later on when Hall asked for soldiers at his property to protect his livestock, the soldiers refused to do anything to help him, since they were only ordered to defend a native onslaught, and they did not believe what was happening resembled a native attack.^[28] The natives faced a choice of either starving to death on the reservations that provided them with no food, or venturing off into the mountainous regions of Mendocino County and risk slaughter by local settlers.

Walter S. Jarboe and the Mendocino War

As the conflict reached a boiling point, Judge Hastings made the executive decision to fire Hall and move all of the remaining natives to the Mendocino Reservation, more to save his property than for the protection of the natives.^[29] In June of 1859 the “Citizens of Nome Cult Valley”, a group of 39 settlers from Round Valley, petitioned the governor of California, Governor John B. Weller, for help in protecting the settlers from native attacks.^[30] This petition, promoted and pushed for by Henley and Judge Hastings, was one of more than a dozen letters and petitions that the white settlers of Round Valley sent to the governor requesting government funding for volunteers who sought to protect white property.^[31] Within these petitions, the settlers stated their intentions to remove the natives from Mendocino through a “war of extermination”.^[32] Weller turned to the Army for advice on the petition, seeking to know whether or not the allegations of the settlers were true, since the petitions alleged that over $40,000 in property damages had occurred and over 70 whites had been slain by natives. The petitions also requested that Walter S. Jarboe, a Mendocino County resident, be assigned captain of this group.^[33] In 1858, Jarboe had been a leader on a raid in the Mendocino Reservation that killed over 60 natives.^[34]Countering the petitioners' claims, Major Johnson and Lieutenant Dillon issued reports telling a different story, claiming that only 2 whites and about 600 native had been killed in the past year.^[35]

In the meantime, Hastings had grown tired of waiting, and created a new company anyway, without federal funding, with Jarboe as captain. The company was often referred to as the Eel River Rangers, and Hastings and Henley promised to provide the funding (they later went back on this promise, forcing the state to pay for Jarboe and his men).^[36] From July 1859 to January 1860, Jarboe and his men ravaged native lands and massacred many natives. Claiming that the natives were guilty of theft and violence, Jarboe and his men engaged in an “ethnic cleansing genocide”.^[37] Trying to justify his actions, Jarboe and his men used carcasses from plundered villages to try and give evidence for native thievery. It was a shoot-first, ask-questions-later approach that gave Jarboe and his men the powers of “judge, jury, and executioner”.^[38] From July through the middle of August, Jarboe and his men had already killed 50 men, women, and children, prompting Major Johnson to write to Governor Weller. The governor wrote to Jarboe several times, sanctioning the raids, but asking Jarboe to leave out women and children and any innocent natives. Jarboe largely ignored these letters.^[39] Through October Jarboe and his men continued to rampage through the countryside, killing and capturing natives. Those natives they captured were sent to the Mendocino Reservation and the Nome Cult Farm.^[40]

The natives were left facing major challenges. Working against them were hunger, unequal weapons, repeated and surprise attacks, their vulnerable position on reservations, and their lack of ability to speak on their own behalf. Jarboe's forces also alienated some white settlers, slaughtering their livestock if they refused to give them food or the necessary supplies.^[41] However, most of the damage was done to the natives and was especially deadly given the timing. With winter around the corner, the natives had spent months preparing and harvesting crops. Now, with raids, the men who farmed and hunted and the women who gathered and made the food were killed, and native stores of winter supplies were plundered and lost.^[42] Jarboe and his men meanwhile continued their raiding and killing through the winter with the goal of removing the natives completely from Round Valley.^[43] Some settlers also decided to assist in this cause, with ranchers leading attacks and raiding parties of their own. In one 22-day period, 40 ranchers killed at least 150 natives.^[44] Finally, on January 3, 1860, Governor Weller disbanded Jarboe's group.^[45] The public swiftly opposed this decision, petitioning Governor Weller to reinstate the Eel River Rangers, but the protest was unsuccessful. ^[46]

Aftermath and Public Reception

On February 18, 1860, Jarboe summarized his record, claiming that in 23 engagements, he and his men killed 283 warriors, captured 292 prisoners, while only sustaining 5 casualties themselves. The bill to the state for their five months of service was $11,143.43.^[47] However, scholars now believe that the number of native casualties was grossly understated, as was the cost to the state. New California Governor John G. Downey now inherited the massive debts incurred by Jarboe and the settlers’ raids, debts that the state could not afford to pay.^[48] Damage done to Yuki and other tribal cultures was incalculable.

The public reception of the conflict was mixed. A newly created Joint Special Committee on the Mendocino Indian War (also called the Select Committee on Indian Affairs) heard testimony from local settlers. The evidence was contradictory, with stories differing from each account, but some things remained consistent. Jarboe claimed that his actions were provoked by citing numbers of whites killed, but Dillon’s reports contradicted those statements. Dillon wrote to his superiors that white settlers were at fault for the entire conflict, and that the locals had funded the slaughter.^[49] Many settlers claimed that the natives began the trouble by stealing cattle, while others testified that natives were allowed to eat the cattle and horses that strayed and died of natural causes.^[50] Nevertheless, a general consensus emerged that the settlers wanted the natives off of their land and used any means necessary to force them out, including blaming natives for stealing livestock. The investigation concluded that no war had actually occurred in Mendocino County, since the slaughter of natives who offered little resistance and launched no counter attacks could not be considered a war. Rather, the conflict could be more correctly labeled as massacre, and later on historians began calling it a genocide. The committee also recommended some laws to help protect California Indians in the future, but none of them were ever put into place.^[51]

Between the time people settled in Mendocino County and the end of the ‘war’ (1856-1860), the population of Indians decreased by 80%. The rest were relegated to the Mendocino Reservation and the Nome Cult Farm.^[52] In the late 1880s, tensions left unresolved from this conflict would lead to the Round Valley War when, in defiance of federal authority, settlers once again began to take over areas of the reservation, ignoring federal policies and settling on Yuki lands. ^[53]

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Comments

Anthony--this looks really good. It would help to add a little more about the settlers--what brought them there, etc. Also, make sure you use the past tense throughout when drafting the article. Are there allegations of genocide regarding this massacre? If so, it would be useful to add that discussion to the aftermath section.Docjay57 (talk) 17:37, 8 March 2013 (UTC)

Hey Anthony,

Sorry for the lateness of this long overdue posting; various complications from my absent minded saving and forgetting to post this, to break taking me out of my rhythm. Regardless I hope the following review is both an emphasis of your articles strong points and a constructive criticism of its less strong points. The comments are ordered by section.

SECTION:

Overview: • The first sentence says a lot and should be split into two separate sentences after “California,” and before “that.” This adds to the clarity and, much like any good work worthy of the reader’s attention, will be much easier to digest. • The last two lines introduce what sounds like a note to a controversy section: by portraying later historians interpretations of the incident as apposed to consensus, it might cause some issues with Wiki’s strict standards for consensus and unbiased references. • I found no other corrections for this section worth noting. Your introduction and overview are solid and get right to the point, leaving the reader with a good sense of what this war was about. Great work!

Background: • No grammatical corrections of note. Very well done; this section places the reader directly into the moment and context of the location leading up to the war. • My only critique here would be a general absence of knowledge concerning the Yuki peoples and their history. While I recognize a separate wiki page is in place to handle this particular background, it’s insufficient. A knowledge of the Yuki culture, political structure, and even briefly their migratory history would add a lot to the context of the conflict.

Seeds of Conflict: • Maybe a few Better Wording (BW) issues in this part of the article-Example: “Natives at the Nome Cult Farm were overworked, and could even be killed if they did not work well enough.” The working if the italicized section seems a little cumbersome: this is simple nitpicking but I think tightening up any moments such as this will make your already excellent draft even more accessible to the readers. • Also, any dates that can add to the progression of events in this section (if they are available) would help the reader understand context. For example, when did settlers begin to move in? Is there any evidence or research done with respect to when they began to take significant plots of land in Mendocino?

Escalation: • This section is great: The overview of issues of cattle management and the transfer of blame by the settlers to the natives is well done. • Perhaps, similarly to the last section there could be additional dates to add context to this part of the conflict.

State and Federal Involvement: • A moment of BW: “Lieutenant Dillon reported back that the situation was not as the settlers claimed it to be.” • This is a solid section.

Walter S. Jarboe and the Mendochino War • Citation line 36: BW: “named as” changed to “promoted” or “assigned” • Citation line 39-40: Unclear meaning of “Trying to justify his actions, Jarboe and his men tried to give evidence that the natives were thieves, using carcasses from the plundered village.” Not totally sure of what you mean. • First sentence of 3rd paragraph: “Fighting an uphill battle” to “faced major challenges” or something less playful and more clear-cut. • General critiques: watchout for language that distracts the reader from the facts of the event and takes them towards a more argumentative piece. While I fully recognize and agree that the ongoings of the federal troops during this conflict were murderous and controversial at best, occasionally your language can distract from events and arouse suspicion, despite its clear citations. Examples: o “the conflict reached a boiling point” o “Shoot-first, as questions later approach” o “ravaged native lands and massacred many natives” • Statements like these add to the character and feel of the piece but may become trouble as people read the article and want to argue another side. More evidence ad details of the massacre or the ravaged lands could act as a replacement to the statement: numbers of villages burned or innocent people killed could be placed here as a reference and prevent any response that questions your stance on the war as an objective writer. • Were there any prominent native leaders of note in this conflict or in the Yuki community at the time? I understand if none came up in your research, I just want to ask to make sure they weren’t left out or cannot be found in any oral history perhaps. This may be a problem if Yuki descended read this and want to offer their own detailed history of their people to the article.

Aftermath and Public Reception: • Mentions of people “trying to justify” things can lead readers to sense your skepticism of their argument. Just write what their justification was for their actions and let the reader decide whether it actually does the job. • Overall, this part simply needs to be combed through for tyouchy working that may lead folks to doubt your objectivity. • I do not doubt it however and think you did a terrific job with this section and more importantly the entire draft.

5/5: Excellent work. Very thorough draft with few flaws and barely any missing pieces. Major notes: • Watch out for moments of better wording • Watch out for moments where you write more descriptively: it may come across as argumentative or provocative and do more harm than good for the article as a Wikipedia page. • See if you can find more details about the Yuki culture, political-military structure (if it existed), and history. Driscokn (talk) 03:53, 4 April 2013 (UTC)

[1] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 16. ISBN 9780875863641.

[2] Lindsay, Brendan C. (June 2012). Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873. Lincoln: University of Nebraska Press. p. 180. ISBN 9780803240216.

[3] Secrest, William B. (1988). "Jarboe's War". Californians. 6 (6): 16.

[4] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 36. ISBN 9780875863641.

[5] Secrest, William B. (1988). "Jarboe's War". Californians. 6 (6): 16.

[6] Secrest, William B. (1988). "Jarboe's War". Californians. 6 (6): 16.

[7] Secrest, William B. (1988). "Jarboe's War". Californians. 6 (6): 16.

[8] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 49. ISBN 9780875863641.

[9] Secrest, William B. (1988). "Jarboe's War". Californians. 6 (6): 17.

[10] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 61. ISBN 9780875863641.

[11] Lindsay, Brendan C. (June 2012). Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873. Lincoln: University of Nebraska Press. pp. 191–192. ISBN 9780803240216.

[12] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 32. ISBN 9780875863641.

[13] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 29. ISBN 9780875863641.

[14] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 57. ISBN 9780875863641.

[15] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 63. ISBN 9780875863641.

[16] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 58-59. ISBN 9780875863641.

[17] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 57. ISBN 9780875863641.

[18] III, Frank H. Baumgardner (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub. p. 61. ISBN 9780875863641.

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[21] Lindsay, Brendan C. (June 2012). Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873. Lincoln: University of Nebraska Press. p. 192. ISBN 9780803240216.

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 == Overview ==
+[[File:Map of California highlighting Mendocino County.svg|thumbnail|right|Mendocino County, California highlighted in red]]
-A violent conflict between native settlers and local natives (especially with various [[Yuki people]]) in [[Mendocino County, California]], that was caused by settler intrusion on native lands and subsequent native retaliation, resulting in the deaths of hundreds of natives. In 1859, a band of locally sponsored rangers led by Walter S. Jarboe, called the Eel River Rangers, raided the countryside in an effort to remove natives from settler territory and move them onto the Nome Cult Farm, an area near the [[Mendocino Indian Reservation]]. By the time the Eel River Rangers were disbanded in 1860, Jarboe and his men killed 283 warriors, captured 292, killed countless women and children, and only suffered 5 casualties themselves in just 23 engagements. The bill to the state for the rangers’ services amounted to $11,143.43. Scholars, however, claim that the damage to the area and natives in particular was even higher than reported, especially given the vast number of raiding parties formed outside of the Eel River Rangers. Settlers, frustrated with the lack and inadequacy of federal protection, formed their own raiding parties against the natives, joining Jarboe in his mission to rid Round Valley of its native population. In a span of four years (1856-1860), the Indian population in Mendocino County fell by 70-80%. Those that survived were moved to the Nome Cult Farm, where they experienced hardships typical of the reservation system of the day.
+The "Mendocino War" was a violent conflict from July 1859 to January 18,1860 between white settlers and local natives (mainly [[Yuki people|Yuki tribes]]) in [[Mendocino County, California]]. It was caused by settler intrusion on native lands and subsequent native retaliation, resulting in the deaths of hundreds of natives.In 1859, a band of locally sponsored rangers led by Walter S. Jarboe, called the Eel River Rangers, raided the countryside in an effort to remove natives from settler territory and move them onto the Nome Cult Farm, an area near the [[Mendocino Indian Reservation]]. By the time the Eel River Rangers were disbanded in 1860, Jarboe and his men had killed 283 warriors, captured 292, killed countless women and children, and only suffered 5 casualties themselves in just 23 engagements. The bill to the state for the rangers’ services amounted to $11,143.43. Scholars, however, claim that the damage to the area and natives in particular was even higher than reported, especially given the vast number of raiding parties formed outside of the Eel River Rangers. Frustrated with the inadequacy of federal protection, settlers formed their own raiding parties against the natives, joining Jarboe in his mission to rid Round Valley of its native population. Those that survived were moved to the Nome Cult Farm, where they experienced hardships typical of the reservation system of the day. After the conflict, contemporaries claimed that the conflict was more of a slaughter than a war, and later historians have labeled it a genocide.
 == Background ==
+[[File:Mendocino Indian Reservation.jpg|thumbnail|right|A map of the Mendocino Indian Reservation (made in 1869)]]
-Round Valley, located in northeastern Mendocino County in Northern California, was home to various Native American tribes. The most populous of these local tribes were the Yuki, whose territory was roughly 1,100 square miles.<ref name="Killing for Land in Early California">{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner,|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=16}}</ref> The Yuki were not one political people; rather, they were comprised of several autonomous groups that shared both language and culture, with each community having its own leadership.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=180}}</ref>  In 1853, California started its Indian Reservation System, which was headed by [[Thomas J. Henley]] (Superintendent of Indian Affairs), and by 1854 Round Valley was discovered by white settlers.<ref name="Jarboe's War">{{cite journal|last=Secrest`|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=The Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=16|pages=16-22}}</ref> Frank Asbill, the first white man to see the territory, estimated that there were about 20,000 natives in the area at the time. Scholars now believe this number is a little high, but by 1856, there were 12,000 Native Americans in Round Valley.<ref name="Killing for Land in Early California">{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner,|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=36}}</ref> Although a few families moved into native territory, many of the settlers were hunters, fugitives, drifters, and the like. In general, they were people who lived off of the land, who traveled to the area for its resources.<ref name="Jarboe's War">{{cite journal|last=Secrest`|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=The Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=16|pages=16-22}}</ref> In the same year, Thomas Henley sent Simmon Pena Storms to start the Nome Cult Farm. <ref name="Jarboe's War">{{cite journal|last=Secrest`|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=The Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=16|pages=16-22}}</ref> Originally meant to be a resting point for natives and people traveling to the Mendocino Reservation, the Nome Cult Farm grew to become a reservation of its own, occupying 5,000 acres of northern Round Valley. This division of the 20,000 acre territory left over 15,000 acres for white settlement.<ref name="Jarboe's War">{{cite journal|last=Secrest`|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=The Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=16|pages=16-22}}</ref>
+Round Valley, located in northeastern Mendocino County in Northern California, was home to various Native American tribes. The most populous of these local tribes were the Yuki, whose territory was roughly 1,100 square miles.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=16}}</ref> The Yuki were not one political people; rather, they were comprised of several autonomous groups that shared both language and culture, with each community having its own leadership.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=180}}</ref> In 1853, California started its Indian Reservation System, which was headed by [[Thomas J. Henley]] (Superintendent of Indian Affairs), and by 1854 Round Valley was discovered by white settlers.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=16}}</ref> Frank Asbill, the first white man to see the territory, estimated that there were about 20,000 natives in the area at the time. Scholars now believe this number is a little high, but by 1856, there were 12,000 Native Americans in Round Valley.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=36}}</ref> Although a few families moved into native territory, many of the settlers were hunters, fugitives, drifters, and the like. In general, they were people who lived off of the land, who traveled to the area for its resources.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=16}}</ref> In the same year, Thomas Henley sent Simmon Pena Storms to start the Nome Cult Farm.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=16}}</ref> Originally meant to be a resting point for natives and people traveling to the Mendocino Reservation, the Nome Cult Farm grew to become a reservation of its own, occupying 5,000 acres of northern Round Valley. This division of the 20,000 acre territory left over 15,000 acres for white settlement.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=16}}</ref>
+[[File:YukiTribe.jpg|thumbnail|left|Members of the Yuki tribe on the Nome Cult Farm (c.1858)]]
+=== Seeds of Conflict ===
-== Bibliography ==
+Despite the amount of land set aside for white settlement, the government had trouble stopping newcomers from settling all over the valley, including on the Nome Cult Farm and Mendocino Reservation.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=49}}</ref> As settlers moved into what was designated native territory, it became hard for the natives to survive. Those that lived on the Nome Cult Farm lived a life of hardship. In a type of indentured servitude, the natives raised their crops but reaped little of the actual benefits.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=17}}</ref>  Natives were not protected but were subject to brutal treatment that included assaults, rape, murder, theft of their property, disease, and starvation.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=61}}</ref> Many white settlers who encroached on native territory engaged in kidnapping, stealing Native women and children and subjugating them to servitude or sexual abuse.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=191–192}}</ref> Natives at the Nome Cult Farm were overworked, and could even be killed if their work was not up to the standards of the reservation.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=32}}</ref> White settlers continued to exploit native land, with many families fencing in thousands of acres each.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=29}}</ref> They removed fences from the Nome Cult Farm and allowed their herds to graze on and through native land, some of which was already filled with crops.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=57}}</ref> The California Reservation System, which was subject to corruption, fraud and misuse of federal funds, provided little recourse.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=63}}</ref> As more settlers encroached on native land and resources, native food sources dried up on and around the reservations.
-{{reflist}}
+=== Escalation ===
+Since ranching methods at the time were not very advanced (barbed wire had not been invented), the settlers had trouble keeping their livestock on their land. Many tried to train their animals to stay in a certain area, but this was not always effective. Livestock often wandered, and the local terrain made matters worse. The territory was new, unfamiliar, and full of hazardous cliffs and predators, and many cattle and horses wandered off and died of natural causes.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=58-59}}</ref> However, the settlers blamed the natives for any animal that went missing, believing that they were the targets of “Indian Depredations”, holding public meetings to stir up animosity towards the natives.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=57}}</ref> In retaliation, they continued their assaults on native land and resources. With no police force at hand, the reservation was powerless to stop local theft of native property or abductions of native people.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=61}}</ref> Locals like Dryden Lacock even stated that settlers, including himself, were engaging in small raiding parties that killed “50-60 Indians a trip”.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=17}}</ref>  Finally, on the brink of starvation and left with almost no options, the natives began to retaliate. In 1857 a Yuki shot a man named William Mantle while trying to cross the Eel River, and in 1858 a white man named John McDaniel was murdered.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=17}}</ref> Both had been famous for crimes committed against Native Americans, and reports from the U.S. Army claim that the natives were provoked in both instances.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=192}}</ref>
+==== State and Federal Involvement ====
+[[File:Round Valley Seal.jpg|thumbnail|right|Seal of the natives of Round Valley]] As tensions rose and natives began retaliating for crimes committed against them, the settlers petitioned the U.S. Army for aid. In 1859 the 6th U.S. infantry led by Major Edward Johnson was called to Round Valley.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=17}}</ref> Major Johnson sent Lieutenant Edward Dillon ahead with 17 men to scout the area and assess the situation. Lieutenant Dillon reported back that the settlers misrepresented the situation. Instead of settlers falling prey to natives, the settlers had in fact already killed hundreds of natives, whose hostile actions had been taken out of revenge or in an effort to survive. The problem, he reported, went all the way up the chain to Supt. Henley, who had been involved in organizing many of these raiding parties.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=18}}</ref> In fact, Supt. Henley was in league with [[Serranus Clinton Hastings|Judge Serranus C. Hastings]] (a former Iowa Supreme Court Justice), who helped him design plans for the removal of natives from the local territory. As part of their plan, they launched raiding parties and held town-hall style public gatherings where settlers aired their grievances, leading to increased racial prejudice and hatred towards the natives.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=71}}</ref> Judge Hastings was also involved in real estate and livestock trade, and in one instance, the natives stole Judge Hastings’s $2,000 stallion in retaliation for the beatings they received at the hands of Judge Hastings’s ranch manager, H.L. Hall.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=90-92}}</ref> Hall had been involved in many brutal assaults on natives. He complained to Lieutenant Dillon that the natives were stealing white supplies. Dillon urged Hall to let him handle the situation, but Hall ignored the command and took his own men raiding. By March 23, 1859, Hall and his men had killed about 240 natives.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=18}}</ref> Dillon reported that Hall did not distinguish between guilty natives or innocent ones, and that his murders of even women and children were unprovoked.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=194}}</ref> In fact, later on when Hall asked for soldiers at his property to protect his livestock, the soldiers refused to do anything to help him, since they were only ordered to defend a native onslaught, and they did not believe what was happening resembled a native attack.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=196}}</ref> The natives faced a choice of either starving to death on the reservations that provided them with no food, or venturing off into the mountainous regions of Mendocino County and risk slaughter by local settlers.
+== Walter S. Jarboe and the Mendocino War ==
+[[File:John B Weller by William F Cogswell, 1879.jpg|thumbnail|left|Governor John B. Weller]] As the conflict reached a boiling point, Judge Hastings made the executive decision to fire Hall and move all of the remaining natives to the Mendocino Reservation, more to save his property than for the protection of the natives.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=93}}</ref> In June of 1859 the “Citizens of Nome Cult Valley”, a group of 39 settlers from Round Valley, petitioned the governor of California, [[John B. Weller|Governor John B. Weller]], for help in protecting the settlers from native attacks.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=94}}</ref> This petition, promoted and pushed for by Henley and Judge Hastings, was one of more than a dozen letters and petitions that the white settlers of Round Valley sent to the governor requesting government funding for volunteers who sought to protect white property.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=195–196}}</ref> Within these petitions, the settlers stated their intentions to remove the natives from Mendocino through a “war of extermination”.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=198}}</ref> Weller turned to the Army for advice on the petition, seeking to know whether or not the allegations of the settlers were true, since the petitions alleged that over $40,000 in property damages had occurred and over 70 whites had been slain by natives. The petitions also requested that Walter S. Jarboe, a Mendocino County resident, be assigned captain of this group.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=95-96}}</ref> In 1858, Jarboe had been a leader on a raid in the Mendocino Reservation that killed over 60 natives.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=18}}</ref>Countering the petitioners' claims, Major Johnson and Lieutenant Dillon issued reports telling a different story, claiming that only 2 whites and about 600 native had been killed in the past year.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=18}}</ref>
+In the meantime, Hastings had grown tired of waiting, and created a new company anyway, without federal funding, with Jarboe as captain. The company was often referred to as the Eel River Rangers, and Hastings and Henley promised to provide the funding (they later went back on this promise, forcing the state to pay for Jarboe and his men).<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=201}}</ref> From July 1859 to January 1860, Jarboe and his men ravaged native lands and massacred many natives. Claiming that the natives were guilty of theft and violence, Jarboe and his men engaged in an “ethnic cleansing genocide”.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=99-101}}</ref> Trying to justify his actions, Jarboe and his men used carcasses from plundered villages to try and give evidence for native thievery. It was a shoot-first, ask-questions-later approach that gave Jarboe and his men the powers of “judge, jury, and executioner”.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=205}}</ref> From July through the middle of August, Jarboe and his men had already killed 50 men, women, and children, prompting Major Johnson to write to Governor Weller. The governor wrote to Jarboe several times, sanctioning the raids, but asking Jarboe to leave out women and children and any innocent natives. Jarboe largely ignored these letters.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=101}}</ref> Through October Jarboe and his men continued to rampage through the countryside, killing and capturing natives. Those natives they captured were sent to the Mendocino Reservation and the Nome Cult Farm.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=20}}</ref>
-OUTLINE
-== Overview ==
-A violent conflict that happened between native settlers and the Yuki tribe that was caused by settler intrusion on native lands and subsequent native retaliation, resulting in the deaths of hundreds of natives. A band of locally sponsored rangers, led by Walter Jarboe, raids the countryside in an effort to remove natives from settler property and move them into the Nome Cult Farm, a section of the Mendocino Reservation. Settlers also sponsored their own raiding parties against the natives. In all 23 engagements, Jarboe and his men killed 283 warriors, captured 292, killed countless women and children, and only suffered 5 casualties themselves. The bill to the state for their services amounted to $11,143.43. In a span of four years (1856-1860), the Indian population in Mendocino County fell by 70-80%. Those that survived were moved to the Nome Cult Farm.
+The natives were left facing major challenges. Working against them were hunger, unequal weapons, repeated and surprise attacks, their vulnerable position on reservations, and their lack of ability to speak on their own behalf.  Jarboe's forces also alienated some white settlers, slaughtering their livestock if they refused to give them food or the necessary supplies.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=201}}</ref> However, most of the damage was done to the natives and was especially deadly given the timing. With winter around the corner, the natives had spent months preparing and harvesting crops. Now, with raids, the men who farmed and hunted and the women who gathered and made the food were killed, and native stores of winter supplies were plundered and lost.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=204}}</ref> Jarboe and his men meanwhile continued their raiding and killing through the winter with the goal of removing the natives completely from Round Valley.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=102}}</ref> Some settlers also decided to assist in this cause, with ranchers leading attacks and raiding parties of their own. In one 22-day period, 40 ranchers killed at least 150 natives.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=20}}</ref> Finally, on January 3, 1860, Governor Weller disbanded Jarboe's group.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=207}}</ref> The public swiftly opposed this decision, petitioning Governor Weller to reinstate the Eel River Rangers, but the protest was unsuccessful. <ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=208}}</ref>
-=== Background/Seeds of Conflict ===
-* Round Valley in northeastern Mendocino County
+== Aftermath and Public Reception ==
-* Yukis local tribe
+On February 18, 1860, Jarboe summarized his record, claiming that in 23 engagements, he and his men killed 283 warriors, captured 292 prisoners, while only sustaining 5 casualties themselves. The bill to the state for their five months of service was $11,143.43.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=21}}</ref> However, scholars now believe that the number of native casualties was grossly understated, as was the cost to the state. New California [[John G. Downey|Governor John G. Downey]] now inherited the massive debts incurred by Jarboe and the settlers’ raids, debts that the state could not afford to pay.<ref>{{cite book|last=III|first=Frank H. Baumgardner|title=Killing for Land in Early California: Indian Blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm|year=2006|publisher=Algora Pub.|location=New York|isbn=9780875863641|page=102}}</ref> Damage done to Yuki and other tribal cultures was incalculable.
+The public reception of the conflict was mixed. A newly created Joint Special Committee on the Mendocino Indian War (also called the Select Committee on Indian Affairs) heard testimony from local settlers. The evidence was contradictory, with stories differing from each account, but some things remained consistent. Jarboe claimed that his actions were provoked by citing numbers of whites killed, but Dillon’s reports contradicted those statements. Dillon wrote to his superiors that white settlers were at fault for the entire conflict, and that the locals had funded the slaughter.<ref>{{cite book|last=Lindsay|first=Brendan C.|title=Murder State California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873|date=June 2012 |publisher=University of Nebraska Press|location=Lincoln|isbn=9780803240216|pages=209}}</ref> Many settlers claimed that the natives began the trouble by stealing cattle, while others testified that natives were allowed to eat the cattle and horses that strayed and died of natural causes.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=21}}</ref> Nevertheless, a general consensus emerged that the settlers wanted the natives off of their land and used any means necessary to force them out, including blaming natives for stealing livestock. The investigation concluded that no war had actually occurred in Mendocino County, since the slaughter of natives who offered little resistance and launched no counter attacks could not be considered a war. Rather, the conflict could be more correctly labeled as massacre, and later on historians began calling it a genocide. The committee also recommended some laws to help protect California Indians in the future, but none of them were ever put into place.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=21}}</ref>
-* 1853 is the start of California’s Indian Reservation System, led by Thomas Henley (Superintendent of Indian Affairs)
+Between the time people settled in Mendocino County and the end of the ‘war’ (1856-1860), the population of Indians decreased by 80%. The rest were relegated to the Mendocino Reservation and the Nome Cult Farm.<ref>{{cite journal|last=Secrest|first=William B.|title=Jarboe's War|journal=Californians|year=1988|volume=6|issue=6|page=22}}</ref> In the late 1880s, tensions left unresolved from this conflict would lead to the Round Valley War when, in defiance of federal authority, settlers once again began to take over areas of the reservation, ignoring federal policies and settling on Yuki lands. <ref>{{cite journal|title="Washington is a Long Way Off": The "Round Valley War" and the Limits of Federal Power on a California Indian Reservation|journal=Pacific Historical Review|date=01|year=2011|month=November|volume=80|issue=4|page=557, 562, 565|pages=557–596|doi=10.1525/phr.2011.80.4.557 |last1=Adams |first1=Kevin |last2=Schneider |first2=Khal }}</ref>
-* Area discovered by settlers in 1854, and within 3 years there are 19 families living on the area
-** Other types of migrants to the area arrive, in the form of people who live off the land
+== Bibliography ==
-* 1856: Henley sends “subagent” Simmon Pena Storms to start the “Nome Cult Indian Farm”
+{{reflist}}
-** New territory would occupy 5,000 acres of the northern Round Valley, which means that 15,000 acres are now available for whites
-** Natives that work the land are in a type of indentured servitude, raising the crops but reaping little of the actual benefits; no food!!!
-* More settlers = less game; their animals eat up native’s food supply
-** Settlers treat the natives very harshly, stealing Yuki women and forcing more onerous labor on the natives
-=== Escalation ===
-* A lack of food coupled with persistent offenses by settlers forces natives to get creative with finding food…they have negotiated with settlers to be able to eat livestock (cattle and horses) that wander off the settlement and die a natural death…
-* Local residents, such as Dryden Lacock, believe that these tensions boiled over in the form of small raiding parties by settlers that killed 50 to 60 Indians on every trip
-* First two notable white casualties
-** 1857: William Mantle shot by Yuki crossing the Eel river
-** 1858 John McDaniel murdered
-** Official Army reports claim that the Indians were provoked
-=== Federal Involvement ===
-* As conflict brews, in 1858, settlers petition the U.S. army for aid. The 6th U.S. infantry journeys out to Round Valley under the command of Major Johnson.
-** With bad weather hampering the army’s progress, Johnson sends Lietenant Edward Dillon and 17 other men ahead to scout and assess the situation
-** They report back that the settlers had misconstrued the situation, and that what was happening on the ground was the exact opposite of what they reported
-* Ragged bands of settlers ravaged Indian populations, and any action by the Indians involving the stealing of horses was either out of revenge or to stay alive
-* Within the report, Dillon claims that the problem starts all the way at the top with Henley, who has even been involved in organizing some of these raiding parties
-* By 1858 it becomes too hard to ignore the deep-seated feelings of hatred the settlers had for natives
-** Judge Hastings makes an effort to help the settlers, his foreman H.L. Hall complains to Dillon that Natives are raiding and stealing supplies. Dillon tells Hall he will handle it, but Hall ignores the command and takes his own men raiding, where they search and kill natives.
-** By March 23, 1859, Hall and his men slaughtered as many as 240 natives
-*  The Indians were now caught in a catch-22. They could either starve to death and suffer on the reservations that provided them with no food, or they could venture off into the mountainous regions of Mendocino County and risk slaughter by local settlers.
+==Comments==
-=== Walter S. Jarboe and the Mendocino War ===
-*  As the conflict reaches a boiling point, Judge Hastings makes the executive decision to fire Hall and move all of the remaining natives to the Mendocino Reservation. He also wrote to Governor Weller, complaining about the loss of property to the natives, and proposed the creation of a group of volunteer settlers, who were paid and outfitted by the government, whose sole mission was to rid the area of Indians.
-** In this proposal, they claimed that at least 20 whites had already been killed, and that an estimated $40,000 worth of livestock and property had been stolen or damaged by natives. It also claimed that the natives were attacking whites upon first sight. Finally, it proposed Walter S. Jarboe as the leader of this new group of raiders.
-** Jarboe’s background…one of the leaders that killed roughly 60 Indians in 1858 at the Cape Mendocino reservation
-* After Hastings and Henley issue their proposal, on May 9, 1859, Major Johnson and Lieutenant Dillon issue a report of their on, claiming that only 2 whites had been killed, whereas roughly 600 Yuki people had been slaughtered in the past year. The allegations of whites being attacked the second they saw Indians was not true.
-* Hastings and Henley’s proposal is rejected by the governor, so they must outfit the expedition out of their own pockets, and the raiding band is launched.
-* By the middle of August, Jarboe and his men had already killed 50 men, women, and children, using horse and cattle carcasses as evidence to Major Johnson that the natives were in fact stealing livestock.
-** This draws ire from Major Johnson, who takes the complaint all the way up to Governor Weller, who responds by sanctioning the raids, but asking Jarboe to leave women and children out.
-* The rampage continues through October, as Jarboe and his men kill and capture dozens of Indians. However, retaliation finally takes place against one of Jarboe’s men.
-** John Bland kidnapped a young Yuki girl. Several escape attempts later, Bland went out looking for her, and stumbled upon a native tribe of Wailakis, who killed him.
-* Jarboe uses this as an excuse to ask for military help, but Lieutenant Dillon rejects this request. Jarboe attacks the Wailakis and sends the captives to the Mendocino reservation.
-* Despite the presence of a harsh winter, Jarboe’s killings persist through November and December, until Governor Weller finally writes of his distress, citing that he wanted only those who were guilty of stealing to be punished, not every member of the Yuki and other tribes. Jarboe replies that the he has good intentions, and that the natives have been extremely hostile to him, and he sees no other way out of this conflict than to pursue the same course.
-* By this time, other settlers have joined the fray, launching attacks in small companies and slaughtering natives. Native resistance, meanwhile, has been very small, and the resistance that Jarboe and the settlers meet they put down with ease. Finally, Governor Weller disbanded the party of rangers in January 1860.
+Anthony--this looks really good. It would help to add a little more about the settlers--what brought them there, etc.  Also, make sure you use the past tense throughout when drafting the article. Are there allegations of genocide regarding this massacre?  If so, it would be useful to add that discussion to the aftermath section.[[User:Docjay57|Docjay57]] ([[User talk:Docjay57|talk]]) 17:37, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
-=== Aftermath ===
-* On February 18, 1860, Jarboe sumed up  his escapades:
-** 23 Engagements
-** 283 dead warriors
-** 292 prisoners
-** Bill to the state for 5 month service: $11,143.43
-** Only 5 rangers were casualties!
+Hey Anthony,
-=== Public Reception ===
-* The public reception of this conflict was mixed.
-* A newly created Joint Special Committee on the Mendocino Indian War heard testimony from local settlers. The evidence was contradictory, with stories differing from each account, but some things remained consistent:
-** Basically, there was a general consensus that the settlers wanted the natives out of their land, and used any means necessary to force them out, including blaming natives for stealing livestock when in fact the animals had just died on their own of natural causes. All subsequent native raids were out of revenge or for survival.
-* The investigation concluded that no war actually occurred in Mendocino County, since the slaughter of natives that offered little resistance, and launched no counter attacks could not be considered a war. The committee also recommended some laws to help protect California Indians in the future.
-* Between the time people settled in Mendocino County and the end of the ‘war’ (1856-1860), the population of Indians decreased by 80%.
-* In the late 1880s→Round Valley War!
-** Tensions partially caused by and enhanced by this conflict would eventually boil over into the Round Valley War
-** Defiance of federal authority settlers began taking over the area of the reservation
+Sorry for the lateness of this long overdue posting; various complications from my absent minded saving and forgetting to post this, to break taking me out of my rhythm. Regardless I hope the following review is both an emphasis of your articles strong points and a constructive criticism of its less strong points. The comments are ordered by section.
-=== Afterword of the main players ===
-* Thomas Henley: becomes a large-scale, prosperous rancher
-* Judge Hastings: dies a millionaire philanthropist
-* Lieutenant Dillon and Major Johnson fought in Civil War as Confederate officers, and retired after the war
-* Walter Jarboe: remains in Mendocino county: controversial figure! married Cynthia Winchester from Napa County
-** Justice of the peace in Ukiah in Ukiah (1862-1863)
-*** Spent time ranching, but was constantly in and out of trouble
-** Various lawsuits against him over money owed and property
-** Died unexpectedly of unknown causes in March 1865
-*** Survived by widow and 3 children
-*** Owned an estate, valued at $1700 with cattle, hops, furniture, and indentured Indians (whom Mrs. Jarboe freed after his death)
+SECTION:
-== Articles Consulted for this Outline ==
-Adams, Kevin; Schneider, Khal (1 November 2011). ""Washington is a Long Way Off": The "Round Valley War" and the Limits of Federal Power on a California Indian Reservation". Pacific Historical Review 80 (4): 557–596. doi:10.1525/phr.2011.80.4.557. Retrieved 25 February 2013.
+Overview:
-III, Frank H. Baumgardner, (2006). Killing for Land in Early California: Indian blood at Round Valley: Founding the Nome Cult Indian Farm. New York: Algora Pub.. ISBN 9780875863641.
+•	The first sentence says a lot and should be split into two separate sentences after “California,” and before “that.” This adds to the clarity and, much like any good work worthy of the reader’s attention, will be much easier to digest.
+•	The last two lines introduce what sounds like a note to a controversy section: by portraying later historians interpretations of the incident as apposed to consensus, it might cause some issues with Wiki’s strict standards for consensus and unbiased references.
+•	I found no other corrections for this section worth noting. Your introduction and overview are solid and get right to the point, leaving the reader with a good sense of what this war was about.  Great work!
+Background:
-Lindsay, Brendan C. Murder State: California's Native American Genocide, 1846-1873. Lincoln: University of Nebraska Press. pp. 2012. ISBN 9780803240216.
+•	No grammatical corrections of note. Very well done; this section places the reader directly into the moment and context of the location leading up to the war.
+•	My only critique here would be a general absence of knowledge concerning the Yuki peoples and their history. While I recognize a separate wiki page is in place to handle this particular background, it’s insufficient. A knowledge of the Yuki culture, political structure, and even briefly their migratory history would add a lot to the context of the conflict.
+Seeds of Conflict:
-Secrest, William B. (2003). When the Great Spirit Died: The Destruction of the California Indians, 1850 - 1860 (2. pr. ed.). Sanger, CA: Word Dancer Press. ISBN 9781884995408.
+•	Maybe a few Better Wording (BW) issues in this part of the article-Example: “Natives at the Nome Cult Farm were overworked, and could even be killed if they did not work well enough.” The working if the italicized section seems a little cumbersome: this is simple nitpicking but I think tightening up any moments such as this will make your already excellent draft even more accessible to the readers.
+•	Also, any dates that can add to the progression of events in this section (if they are available) would help the reader understand context. For example, when did settlers begin to move in? Is there any evidence or research done with respect to when they began to take significant plots of land in Mendocino?
+Escalation:
-Secrest, William B. (1988). "Jarboe's War". Californians 6 (6): 16-22.
+•	This section is great: The overview of issues of cattle management and the transfer of blame by the settlers to the natives is well done.
+•	Perhaps, similarly to the last section there could be additional dates to add context to this part of the conflict.
+State and Federal Involvement:
-==Comments==
+•	A moment of BW: “Lieutenant Dillon reported back that the situation was not as the settlers claimed it to be.”
+•	This is a solid section.
+Walter S. Jarboe and the Mendochino War
-Anthony--this looks really good. It would help to add a little more about the settlers--what brought them there, etc.  Also, make sure you use the past tense throughout when drafting the article. Are there allegations of genocide regarding this massacre?  If so, it would be useful to add that discussion to the aftermath section.[[User:Docjay57|Docjay57]] ([[User talk:Docjay57|talk]]) 17:37, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
+•	Citation line 36: BW: “named as” changed to “promoted” or “assigned”
+•	Citation line 39-40: Unclear meaning of “Trying to justify his actions, Jarboe and his men tried to give evidence that the natives were thieves, using carcasses from the plundered village.” Not totally sure of what you mean.
+•	First sentence of 3rd paragraph: “Fighting an uphill battle” to “faced major challenges” or something less playful and more clear-cut.
+•	General critiques: watchout for language that distracts the reader from the facts of the event and takes them towards a more argumentative piece. While I fully recognize and agree that the ongoings of the federal troops during this conflict were murderous and controversial at best, occasionally your language can distract from events and arouse suspicion, despite its clear citations. Examples:
+o	“the conflict reached a boiling point”
+o	“Shoot-first, as questions later approach”
+o	“ravaged native lands and massacred many natives”
+•	Statements like these add to the character and feel of the piece but may become trouble as people read the article and want to argue another side. More evidence ad details of the massacre or the ravaged lands could act as a replacement to the statement: numbers of villages burned or innocent people killed could be placed here as a reference and prevent any response that questions your stance on the war as an objective writer.
+•	Were there any prominent native leaders of note in this conflict or in the Yuki community at the time? I understand if none came up in your research, I just want to ask to make sure they weren’t left out or cannot be found in any oral history perhaps. This may be a problem if Yuki descended read this and want to offer their own detailed history of their people to the article.
+Aftermath and Public Reception:
+•	Mentions of people “trying to justify” things can lead readers to sense your skepticism of their argument. Just write what their justification was for their actions and let the reader decide whether it actually does the job.
+•	Overall, this part simply needs to be combed through for tyouchy working that may lead folks to doubt your objectivity.
+•	I do not doubt it however and think you did a terrific job with this section and more importantly the entire draft.
+/5:
+Excellent work. Very thorough draft with few flaws and barely any missing pieces. Major notes:
+•	Watch out for moments of better wording
+•	Watch out for moments where you write more descriptively: it may come across as argumentative or provocative and do more harm than good for the article as a Wikipedia page.
+•	See if you can find more details about the Yuki culture, political-military structure (if it existed), and history.
+[[User:Driscokn|Driscokn]] ([[User talk:Driscokn|talk]]) 03:53, 4 April 2013 (UTC)